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singer101
08-31-2006, 11:26 PM
hey guys i was wrting this song the other day n i need some ideas sooooo if u have n e plz let me kno!heres wut i have so far:

[Chorus]
Baby I miss you
Everyday and every night
Baby I miss you
I still feel tears fall from my
Eyes
I wish I could give up
And just move on
But I cant
Cuz what we had
It felt so strong

[Verse 1]
Every time I’m alone
And missing you
I can’t help but think bout
All the things that we’ve
Been through
No matter how hard I try
I still get tears in my eyes
I still look at your picture
In my hand
Playing that special song
We had

mileyfreak93
08-31-2006, 11:28 PM
wow thats really good

singer101
08-31-2006, 11:33 PM
wow thats really good
thx i least i got one persons opinion on it!well im not done i want to make it longer but i need some help!

Running_Girl
08-31-2006, 11:40 PM
i like it!
oh and a while back theres a thread calle songwirters! you could post it on there...

singer101
08-31-2006, 11:42 PM
i like it!
oh and a while back theres a thread calle songwirters! you could post it on there...
thx!do u kno wut topic thing it was under??

hannah fan 2006
08-31-2006, 11:44 PM
i think its cool

Sportchick
08-31-2006, 11:46 PM
thatz awesome great job

singer101
08-31-2006, 11:52 PM
thatz awesome great job
thx n thx to u too hannahfan_2006

*~Mileyfan~*
08-31-2006, 11:54 PM
good job

xx_mileyrocks_xx
09-01-2006, 12:00 AM
[chorus]
you dont know me
so why judge me
i dont know you
so why be mean
the truth is
all those things aren't true
I hate all these lies
and rumors too

[Verse 1]
hey, hey
no, no
you dont know wow wow (sounds like whoa)
so stop lying
and stop cheatin
and stop bein
the lier you are
Cuz i dont need you
and i dont know you
and you just need to gooooo

THATS ALL I GOT SO FAR

xx_mileyrocks_xx
09-01-2006, 12:01 AM
i made that up on the spot so i know its not very good

singer101
09-01-2006, 12:01 AM
good job
thx i really appreciate it!:D

singer101
09-01-2006, 12:04 AM
[chorus]
you dont know me
so why judge me
i dont know you
so why be mean
the truth is
all those things aren't true
I hate all these lies
and rumors too

[Verse 1]
hey, hey
no, no
you dont know wow wow (sounds like whoa)
so stop lying
and stop cheatin
and stop bein
the lier you are
Cuz i dont need you
and i dont know you
and you just need to gooooo

THATS ALL I GOT SO FAR
thats really good!

singer101
09-01-2006, 12:53 AM
does n e one have n e ideas for me??

x0x_vanessa_x0x
09-01-2006, 01:04 AM
like anyone wanna hear my song