song, plz comments

[Destiny9910]

Unexpected

You came toward me, it was a twist of fate
Our lips met it was not too late
We began to smile as other cried out
They all wondered, "what was that all about?"
Why can't they understand?
True love will always stand

It was so unexpected as our eyes met
It was so unexpected, but I'll never regret
The feeling that we shared
It showed that we cared
I felt everything we felt as we connected
But it was still, totally unexpected

I walked down the hall singing a song
Before I knew it, you were singing along
We walked hand and hand down the hall'
I felt everything through it all
AS other watched in shock
We sang a song, we did out part

It was so unexpected as our eyes met
It was so unexpected, but I'll never regret
The feeling that we shared
It showed that we cared
I felt everything we felt as we connected
But it was still, totally unexpected

It was out of the blue
It was the kiss from you
I felt the connection
'But it was still unexpected.....

UNEXPECTED
UNEXPECTED

OOH......

[Destiny9910]

i don't know if this is good i wrote it a while ago and dont kno if i should submit for the contest at my school. i need it to perfect. plz comments and tell me what to fix

[MileyLaLa]

whoa thats really good. great job

[Destiny9910]

thanks

[Brainiac_Courtney]

thats cool ;)

x

[mileyrulz]

dude that's really good; awesome job! :)