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Hannahfan_eva211
12-09-2008, 08:23 PM
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When I was seven my mom had died. When I was 12 my dad left me saying he would be back. Well you guessed it he never came back. A month later I was in foster care. Lets not get ahead of my story. My name is Malissa Makay. My story takes place when I was seven years old the day of my mothers death.

INTRO:

I ran up to my room because my mom and dad was at it again. Who could bare to hear the're parents fight? I know I can't so once I shut my door i put the Jonas Brothers CD in and blasted it. I flopped on my bed and grabbed my tiger beat mag on my head stand. Of course I know my parents love eachother. My mom told me they have problems every now and then.Which I understand. Once I heard my name in the fight I jumped up and listened. All I could make out was they were worried about me. Something something this won't reflect good for her. Now I was curious what won't reflect good for me. All I heard was silence after that I didn't worry they were probably getting ready for bed. Which I should be doing I go up to go to my closet and get my night clothes. My mom came up the stairs and slowly opened my door. I went over and turned my music down. "Hey hun want to come with me to grandma's?" I looked at her funny "Grandma's? it's a school night mom." "I know hunny but I have to go come with me or stay with daddy" "I'll stay" How didn't I know that was the worst thing I could have said. The next day dad woke me up and sat down with me. He told me she was in a car accident.

mostwanted2233
12-09-2008, 08:41 PM
i love it. do more

Hannahfan_eva211
12-09-2008, 08:50 PM
3 more comments please :D

mostwanted2233
12-09-2008, 08:54 PM
more more more. do more!!!!!!!!!!!

caylee[:
12-09-2008, 08:54 PM
this is good! more!

Hannahfan_eva211
12-09-2008, 08:57 PM
2 more comments please :D

EDIT:: From 2 different people =]

mostwanted2233
12-09-2008, 08:58 PM
more come on i know you want to!!!!!!

V-ball Baby 101
12-10-2008, 10:13 PM
more

Hannahfan_eva211
12-10-2008, 11:22 PM
i'll write some more tomorrow ;)

Hannahfan_eva211
12-11-2008, 08:00 PM
First ‘Chapter’



That day I have been trying my hardest to avoid, and its here. My mothers’ funeral was today. My dad was silent all morning. The only thing he said to me was “Morning”. I tried to listen to music and talk to friends on the computer, but it didn’t help they were just saying “sorry” and stuff. I really appreciate their support, but I just don’t feel like hearing anything about it right now. I missed my mom coming up to my room to say goodnight. I am only seven years old and I feel guilty for her death. Maybe she was mad I didn’t come. I wished that we could start that whole day over I would try to make it right. “Time to get… ready” My dad yelled to me. I walked over to my desk chair and grabbed my dress to put on. Of course it was black I hate that color it makes me depressed. Once we were off to the funeral home my dad was silent until he started talking about this old house we passed. I just felt like telling him to shut up I wasn’t in the mood. I zoned out completely in my head. I was trying to remember the good times when she and I would go to the park, the zoo, the winter carnival. It was all a tradition that we can’t keep. My dad just can’t imagine what a seven year old thinks about this. All I know is my mom was here now she’s gone. Once we arrived I was half way into tears already. My grandma helped me out of the car I could see she had been crying. All of these sad people plus the sadness inside you. It can’t be helped to cry at this time. I was fighting them back as hard as I could. I knew it wouldn’t last long. My voice started to crack I got a lump in my throat. I tried not to talk I knew that would lead to crying right away. After I smiled hi to the relatives the service began. I started crying once the priest started to talk. The sad music started to play. Everyone was in tears; I just looked down the whole time. My dad reached over for my hand, but I didn’t take his. The service ended my dad and I didn’t want to go to the after lunch. So we headed home.

huskerrich
12-11-2008, 08:02 PM
more please kam

Hannahfan_eva211
12-11-2008, 08:04 PM
3 more comments :)

mostwanted2233
12-11-2008, 08:26 PM
more. that was so good

beautiful*soul
12-13-2008, 01:02 AM
more please

Hannahfan_eva211
12-13-2008, 01:04 AM
i'll write some more over the weekend ;)