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cute_princess1114
11-25-2008, 08:56 PM
Heyy everybody,,
Im starting my own fanfiction. Its more of a love fiction than a fan fiction tho. But anyway. This is my first fanfiction. Sorry if its not that good so..yeahh anyway. Ill post it soon. I already have most of it written out, but its just the matter of typing it now. lol. I will post a description in this post as soon as I get it ready. Hope you like the story.

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h74/cute_princess1114/storyheadermmw.png

Description:
This story is about me finding my true love, a guy I've liked for a while now. Read the story and please enjoy!

Characters:
Me (Sabrina)- I play myself in this story because I wrote this about me and another guy that I like but I didnt want to use his name. I am kind of a shy person (sometimes)...you will find me find myself in this story.
Jason- This is the guy I like..Its not his real name so...=] lol..I just used a friends name. lol
My dad
My brother
Mikayla-Jason's ex-gf (CHAPTER 1)
Courtney-My best friend (CHAPTER 2)
David- a friend from camp (CHAPTER 6)

cute_princess1114
11-25-2008, 08:56 PM
Reserved for chapters

Chapters:
Chapter 1 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2481620&postcount=13)
Chapter 2 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2482975&postcount=25)
Chapter 3 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2555304&postcount=37)
Chapter 4 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2576512&postcount=55)
Chapter 5 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2633633&postcount=61)
Chapter 6 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2635588&postcount=69)

new_york_girl
11-26-2008, 02:27 AM
can't wait... start... post!

huskerrich
11-26-2008, 10:22 AM
start please

cute_princess1114
11-27-2008, 12:26 PM
I will start it tuesday cuz the computer at my house now is locked with a password so I will be with my dad tuesday. ill type it then i promise!

destinysmiles!
11-28-2008, 08:36 PM
start

cute_princess1114
11-28-2008, 11:31 PM
start

i cant til tuesday..sry

blovehannah
11-29-2008, 01:11 AM
well im satrting a ff today read it it's name What it's happening on high school musical 4???

cute_princess1114
12-01-2008, 05:09 PM
well im satrting a ff today read it it's name What it's happening on high school musical 4???

I will try. I don't really read fan fictions much anymore.

cute_princess1114
12-02-2008, 05:36 PM
today is the posting day!!!
im going to start typing it soon.
it should be up in about a half hour.

new_york_girl
12-02-2008, 06:07 PM
thanks!! woohoo

cute_princess1114
12-02-2008, 06:14 PM
np (: im typing it right now. i gotta edit it and stuff.

cute_princess1114
12-02-2008, 07:26 PM
Chapter 1: The meet

One day I was so bored, so I decided to get onto the computer. I got on Myspace and I saw that the guy I like was on. His name is Jason. I haven't met him quite yet. He lives about 45 mins away from me. My dad just told me we are leaving and going to the mall that was close to Jason! I decided to message him and tell him to meet me at the mall.

Myspace messages:

Me: Hey. meet me at the mall by you today plz. I'll be waiting for you near the bathrooms by Hot Topic
Jason: ok, what time?
Me: uhh..well im leaving in about 10 mins so about 5:30
Jason: okay ill be there since im not with mikayla anymore
Me: thanks =]

Ten mins later I was in the car on my laptop..no internet though--That stinks! I went into the mall when we got there. I pointed for us to go the way that I needed to go meet Jason there. When we got by the bathrooms, I just randomly said:

Me: I need to go to the bathroom.

All of a sudden my brother said:

My brother: Me too!

Crap! My plan was ruined!!

Sorry its so short. Its the only place that there was a cliff hanger. (:
If i get 3 comments by tomorrow then ill post the 2nd chapter.

huskerrich
12-02-2008, 07:30 PM
true story i will bet, more please

WiLDoNE0457
12-02-2008, 07:34 PM
more

cute_princess1114
12-02-2008, 07:38 PM
true story i will bet, more please
Hmm..Its more like my fantasy than a true story. I want it to happen,,lets just say that..lol

2 more comments.
i cant post anymore of the story tonight..ill be heading to my g-mas here in about 10-15 mins. i can get a wireless connection with my laptop there but i prob wont be on long. plus im not taking the story with.

huskerrich
12-02-2008, 07:44 PM
lol, I was thinking of brother messing up your plans, have fun at grandmas

cute_princess1114
12-02-2008, 09:36 PM
lol, I was thinking of brother messing up your plans, have fun at grandmas

brother messing up my plans?? lol funny thing is i am at my gmas cuz my bro's bday party thingy lol

huskerrich
12-02-2008, 09:42 PM
lol, i rest my case.

cute_princess1114
12-02-2008, 09:48 PM
lol, i rest my case.

haha. 1 more comment and ill post the 2nd chapter tomorrow =]

huskerrich
12-02-2008, 09:50 PM
do I count or have I commented too much.

cute_princess1114
12-02-2008, 10:35 PM
no it has to be from someone else.
sorry lol

new_york_girl
12-03-2008, 01:20 PM
update

cute_princess1114
12-03-2008, 06:01 PM
k ill start putting up chapter 2 now =]

cute_princess1114
12-03-2008, 06:37 PM
Chapter 2: Approval??

I walked side-by-side with my brother. I didn't see Jason there so I walked into the bathroom. As soon as I did, I received a text message from Jason. It said:

Jason: Who was that next to you when you went into the bathroom? ur new bf?

So I decided to text back:

Me: ya, thats my 12 yr old bf..haha jk. thats my bro. wait where r u?
Jason: k. i'm hiding LOL. waiting. =]
Me: aww. has my bro come out yet??
Jason: no.
Me: ok txt me when he does. he's got short hair and a red shirt on.
Jason: ok. i will

2 mins later Jason texted me:
Jason: He just walked out. come out now. i wana c u. I'm in the corner.

I walked out and looked in the corner. There he was. Tall, long hair, just amazing. I walked up to him in a flirty way. I immediately gave him a hug and then a kiss on the cheek. He hugged me more. He suddenly stopped and grabbed my hand and held it. He then started to speak.

Jason: How are you?
Me: Much better now. *I smiled*
Jason: aww *he hugged me as he spoke*
Me: You wana go meet my dad?
Jason: ohhh..well he approve of me?
Me: I don't know. Thats what I want to find out. *I paused for a second* I'm not even supposed to have a boyfriend.
Jason: Oh, Wait are you asking me out?
Me: You could say that *I said in a flirty way with a smile*

Jason stood there with his mouth open.

Me: An answer would help.
Jason: Oh, uhh, sorry. I'm just shocked that this is actually happening.
Me: So,,thats a yes??
Jason: Absolutely. I love you. *After speaking, he gave me a quick kiss.*
Me: Aww. I love you too. Lets go have you meet my dad.
Jason: Okay. I feel better about this now.

We walked out to where my dad and brother were waiting. I walked up to my dad and said:

Me: Hi daddy. Look who I ran into. Its Courtney's cousin.
My dad: Oh, So hows Courtney? *He looked at Jason*
Me: He has no idea what Courtney you are talking about. *lying* He has so many cousins named Courtney.
Jason: Yeah, its unbelieveable. I have like 4 of them. It's kind of confusing at times.
Me: Dad, I need to talk to you for a second. *I pulled my dad away from Jason and my brother.* Jason, you should talk to my brother..you know, get to know him. *I looked at my dad and started to talk* Daddy, I really like Jason. Please just let me go out with him.
My dad: And how does Courtney feel about this?
Me: She's fine with it. She's happy for us.
My dad: And you really like him?
Me: Yes. Please daddy please. Do I have to beg?


3 more comments to see what my dad has to say =]

huskerrich
12-03-2008, 06:44 PM
more please.

cute_princess1114
12-03-2008, 06:46 PM
2 more comments and I might post the 3rd chapter later tonight

new_york_girl
12-03-2008, 06:47 PM
more

WiLDoNE0457
12-03-2008, 06:49 PM
more

cute_princess1114
12-03-2008, 06:52 PM
wow okay. lol.
ill start typing chapter 3 in about 5 mins.
It should be up in..lets see...a half hour tops??
Sorry if it will be longer than a half hour.

cute_princess1114
12-07-2008, 02:00 PM
sry for double post but im posting the 3rd chapter now! (:

EDIT: well,,i cant finish this in time so ill finish it on Tuesday.
when i get it typed then it will be up then

new_york_girl
12-08-2008, 05:46 PM
can't wait for more.

cute_princess1114
12-08-2008, 05:56 PM
Glad you all like it.
More coming tomorrow!

cute_princess1114
12-15-2008, 11:11 PM
Sorry I haven't posted the 3rd chapter--I promise its coming tomorrow.

WiLDoNE0457
01-14-2009, 10:24 PM
more??

cute_princess1114
01-14-2009, 10:28 PM
oh sorry.
i might post more soon.
idk yet. i have a request to put someone in so..i have to fix the 3rd chapter possibly.

cute_princess1114
01-17-2009, 01:55 AM
Okay third chapter!!! Enjoy!

Chapter 3:

My dad: No don't beg. Go ahead. But if I end up not likeing him, then he has to go. Agreed?
Me: I guess..agreed. Thank you daddy! I love you!

We walked back over to Jason and my brother. I grabbed Jason's hand and walked away to talk to him.

Me: My dad approves!
Jason: Really? Oh my gosh!

He hugged me and then gave me a kiss. He then grabbed my hand and we headed back to my dad and brother. We got halfway there and I stopped because I forgot to say something to Jason.

Jason: What's the matter?
Me: I know you haven't started it yet, but can you not curse around my family. If it's just me and you then its fine.
Jason: Anything for you, baby.
Me: Aww thanks. I love you.
Jason: I love you too. Don't ever stop thinking that.
Me: Oh you know I won't. *I smiled*

We finished walking back. I told my dad Jason would be walking around the mall with us. As we walked around, I held Jason's hand. We got done shopping so we decided to eat at the resturant inside the mall. My dad started to talk to Jason. He was asking him a lot of questions. It was actually going good. My dad did start to get a little out of hand with the questions so I decided to stop him. Jason's mom texted him and said that he had to go. He got up and said goodbye to my dad and brother. He grabbed my hand and pulled me outside to meet his mom. She was waiting at the exit in the car. He got in while I stood outside the door. At this point I was still holding his hand. I met his mom and then when they had to go, I gave him a kiss on the cheek and told him to text me later. As soon as I walked right in the door I got a text message from Jason. It said:

ily. NOTHING can stop that!

So I texted him back:

ily 2. I no. (: wow you get the point of text me later. LOL.. well I g2g finish eating..I'll txt ya when I'm on my way home.

In the meantime, I walked back to the resturant where my dad and brother were at. When I got there I realized they were talking about Jason.

Me (to my dad and bro) : Whats up?
My dad: You can keep him.
Me: Really??
My dad: Yeah. He treats you right like you should be treated and I like him. Hold on to him really tight.
Me: Oh my gosh. Thank you!

Right after that I decided to text Jason and tell him the good news.

Me texting: omg my dad says that I can keep you! he said you treat me right like i should be treated and that he likes you. he told me 2 hold on 2 u rele tight! =]
Jason texting: omg! wow thats awesome! I no ill keep you for a while.
Me: aww i wish i could kiss you right now.
Jason: u'd no i'd like that!
Me: haha! im still at the mall so im gunna go. ily soooo much!
Jason: =] ily more..bye

After I got done texting Jason, I finished eating. We finished walking through the mall and then we headed home so I decided to text Jason again.

Me texting: Hey! Thanks for spending time with me today. I got a bunch of new clothes after u left. we gotta have a date soon so u can see how hot i look in them. LOL
Jason texting: Hi! No problem. I hope to see you soon. Maybe we can plan a date thats in the middle of both of us. Or we can hang out at you house 4 a movie or somethin. =]
Me texting: haha. hmm gotta clear that with my dad first. ill get back 2 u. =]
Jason texting: ok whats up?
Me: Not much. im bored and tired. so im gunna go sleep in the car. luv u.
Jason: aww i wish i was there! lol i bet you will go to bed when you get home so txt me tomorrow when you wake up.
Me: ya i no. I will so bye..ily
Jason: haha bye ily 2 babe

I closed my phone and fell asleep. I woke up to realize I was at home, still in the car. We just got home. We took our stuff inside and then I went straight to bed just like Jason assumed.

huskerrich
01-17-2009, 09:21 AM
more please

WiLDoNE0457
01-17-2009, 11:08 AM
more

cute_princess1114
01-17-2009, 01:20 PM
wow lets see, 2 more comments and 4th chap will be posted later today..
and possibly chap 5 will be posted later tonight also if you comment enough.

j-blue-stars
01-18-2009, 02:10 PM
nice:)
keep writing

cute_princess1114
01-18-2009, 02:16 PM
thanks!! (:
1 more comment and 4th chapter goes up.

huskerrich
01-18-2009, 02:18 PM
one more Sabrina, but does it count, pretty please

cute_princess1114
01-18-2009, 02:25 PM
okay well since someone else told me i should post more (they don't wana comment lol), heres chapter 4..ENJOY


Chapter 4:

The next day, I woke up and texted Jason.

Me texting: hey babe. I just woke up.
Jason texting: hi. wana hang today?
Me: sure..my house? 4:30?
Jason: k. i'll be there. ill txt ya when i get close to figure out how to get there.
Me: okay. can't wait to see you!
Jason: cant wait to see you either..god i love you!
Me: i love you too..you should no that by now!
Jason: i do no that! i just love saying it to you. =] lol
Me: haha. im waiting for you =] ill ttyl bye bye

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A few hours later Jason texted me saying he was at the 2nd exit to come here. I told him the directions to get here. 5 mins later he pulled up. I was waiting for him at my front steps so I gave him a hug and kiss right when he got out. I then led him into my house by holding his hand. We went up to my room. I showed him my room and then I turned on a movie that I rented. I sat in my moon chair with Jason on the floor between my legs. Halfway through the movie, I put my chin on his shoulder. He turned his head and looked at me and then kissed me. He grabbed my hand while he was still kissing me. I stood up and pulled him up. He sat down in my moon chair. I sat on his lap and kissed him once again. When the movie was over I got up to turn it off. Jason didn't want to leave yet so I sat on my bed with Jason and we talked for a while. Finally Jason's mom texted him and said she was just down the street. He got off my bed and pulled me off with him. I kissed him for a while then hugged him. I held him so long that we started dancing. Jason then received a text from his mom saying she was there. I hugged and kissed him once again then led him downstairs while holding his hand. I took him outside to where his mom was waiting. I stood back as he drove away. When he pulled away he yelled "I love you!". I went up to my room and texted him and said "I love you too" back to him. Then he texted back and said:

Jason texting: i no! LOL. want me to text you when I get home?
Me texting: Sure. My phone will be on silent and I will prob be in bed so don't worry if I dont reply. night.
Jason: good night. love you.

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I woke up the next morning to a text from Jason saying that he got home safely. So I decided to text him:

Me texting: Hello. I just got up,.
Jason texting: hi. ur a sleepy head.
Me: haha. i no! i thought u would be sleepin still.
Jason: nah i went right to bed when I got home. hbu?
Me: oh. same here lol. well a few mins after we got done texting.
Jason: so what are you doing today?
Me: hmm idk. I just got up. I havent even gone downstairs to see what my family is doing yet. y?
Jason: oh ok. i wana c you. is that ok?
Me: of course its ok! if i didnt love you i would't let you c me. haha. well i would but..LOL. (:
Jason: lol. glad to no u love me cuz u no what
Me: wut?
Jason: ily 2. =]
Me: Good. Lol cuz if you didnt i was gunna have to beat you..haha jk
Jason: oooh. a virtual slap huh?
Me: nah. I'm talkin a real slap. jk LOL
Jason: in that case i'm not comin over =] LOL...jk ily.
Me: So what r we gunna do today?
Jason: hmm idk. What can we do.
Me: hmm we can do a movie at the theatre? What came out today?
Jason: uhhh. I honestly have no idea.
Me: me either! lol
Jason: okay well text me when you no. u can look it up or something.
Me: k i g2g 4 now anyway..
Jason: ok. ily. bye
Me: ily 2..bye

After that I went to the basement and got on the computer and looked up what movies came out. I found one that actually sounded good so I texted Jason.

Me: How does "What Happens In Vegas" sound?
Jason: That sounds good actually.
Me: ok want me 2 come 2 u or u come 2 me?
Jason: ill come 2 u.
Me: are you sure?
Jason: yeah. so what time?
Me: umm they show at 2:45, 4:30, and 7 so u pick.
Jason: umm ok. no way to get to the 2:45 show so how about 4:30?
Me: sounds good. if you want to get here by then you should leave now.
Jason: Yeah good idea.
Me: =] just go to my house and my dad will drive us to the theatre.
Jason: ok good idea. ily
Me: y thank you. lol ily 2 :)
Jason: i cant wait to see you.
Me: me too. its been so long. LOL =]
Jason: omg i no.LOL like 12 hours haha
Me: yeah. well i better get ready.
Jason: why? i bet you look beautiful the way u are.
Me: yeah but i dont think i want to go in my pj's LOL
Jason: haha! well then put some clothes on that you would wear out in public. make sure you look cute and hot in them =]
Me: haha well u will have to decide that.
Jason: well i can do that right no...your beautiful.
Me: wow how do u no? u cant even see me. lol
Jason: I can see you in my mind. your always beautiful.
Me: aww ur such a suck up. =] lol jk
Jason: well then..*slap slap* nahh i wouldnt do that.
Me: aw u think ur funny? lol. but that hurt jk. see you soon. i g2g 4 now. txt me when you are close. ily
Jason: okay ily 2..ttyl

So I went and got dressed and then when I was done Jason texted me:

Jason texting: hey im here. come kiss me.
Me texting: oh u no i will. ill be right out.

I walked out the door a few seconds later. I went up to Jason as he got out of the car and hugged him and then kissed him.

Me: Lets go inside for a while. *I grabbed his hand and led him inside*
Jason: Okay.

So we went inside for a while and went up to my room. We talked to each other for a few mins until my dad yelled up and told us it was time to go. Jason got up off the floor and grabbed my hand and pulled me up. He held my hand as he led me down my stairs. We went outside and got in the car. My dad drove us to the theatre. We got there 5 mins later and went inside. While we bought our tickets, my dad and brother decided they wanted to see a movie they have been waiting to see. So they got our tickets. We went and got our drinks and popcorn. While standing there, Jason was moving his head up and down while looking at me like he was checking me out. He then spoke.

Jason: Oh by the way, you do look beautiful just like I assumed.
Me: Thank you.

I smiled and put my hand around his waist. I said bye to my brother and dad while Jason and I went down the hall into the room with the screen.

huskerrich
01-18-2009, 02:27 PM
more please, I love it.

cute_princess1114
01-18-2009, 02:28 PM
oh dang.
you did not read that already..lol

NancyDrew
01-21-2009, 12:34 PM
Omgosh!!! I love this story. Wow. :O You're amazing!!!

And yes, it took me awhile. I finally found it. :P

cute_princess1114
01-21-2009, 05:10 PM
Omgosh!!! I love this story. Wow. :O You're amazing!!!

And yes, it took me awhile. I finally found it. :P

Yay!! glad you like it kara..(:
more will prob come tomorrow..
i forgot my usb stick and its not on my computer :( lol
my mistake

NancyDrew
01-21-2009, 05:19 PM
Awesome!! You're much better than me at that. I still need to update mine. :P

Anycase, that sucks. Can't wait though!!

cute_princess1114
01-21-2009, 05:22 PM
Awesome!! You're much better than me at that. I still need to update mine. :P

Anycase, that sucks. Can't wait though!!

Haha thank you lol.
I didnt no u had a fan fic!!!!!! *goes to look for karas fan fic*

but yeah it does. ill have it tomorrow lol.

NancyDrew
01-21-2009, 05:28 PM
It's way back there. :P I need to finish the next chapter. :P

That's good though!

cute_princess1114
01-21-2009, 05:32 PM
It's way back there. :P I need to finish the next chapter. :P

That's good though!

haha okay. lol

yeah it is haha xD
i need to work on someones b-day present.

MileyLaLa
01-21-2009, 05:46 PM
i read it all yay me. :P
its getting interesting :O
write more!

cute_princess1114
01-21-2009, 05:52 PM
i read it all yay me. :P
its getting interesting :O
write more!

woah mikey?
you read it??
YAY!!!!!
more coming tomorrow..i forgot my usb stick at my house on the computer desk lol.

cute_princess1114
01-26-2009, 07:49 PM
sorry its a little late but heres the 4th chapter:

Chapter 4:

The next day, I woke up and texted Jason.

Me texting: hey babe. I just woke up.
Jason texting: hi. wana hang today?
Me: sure..my house? 4:30?
Jason: k. i'll be there. ill txt ya when i get close to figure out how to get there.
Me: okay. can't wait to see you!
Jason: cant wait to see you either..god i love you!
Me: i love you too..you should no that by now!
Jason: i do no that! i just love saying it to you. =] lol
Me: haha. im waiting for you =] ill ttyl bye bye

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A few hours later Jason texted me saying he was at the 2nd exit to come here. I told him the directions to get here. 5 mins later he pulled up. I was waiting for him at my front steps so I gave him a hug and kiss right when he got out. I then led him into my house by holding his hand. We went up to my room. I showed him my room and then I turned on a movie that I rented. I sat in my moon chair with Jason on the floor between my legs. Halfway through the movie, I put my chin on his shoulder. He turned his head and looked at me and then kissed me. He grabbed my hand while he was still kissing me. I stood up and pulled him up. He sat down in my moon chair. I sat on his lap and kissed him once again. When the movie was over I got up to turn it off. Jason didn't want to leave yet so I sat on my bed with Jason and we talked for a while. Finally Jason's mom texted him and said she was just down the street. He got off my bed and pulled me off with him. I kissed him for a while then hugged him. I held him so long that we started dancing. Jason then received a text from his mom saying she was there. I hugged and kissed him once again then led him downstairs while holding his hand. I took him outside to where his mom was waiting. I stood back as he drove away. When he pulled away he yelled "I love you!". I went up to my room and texted him and said "I love you too" back to him. Then he texted back and said:

Jason texting: i no! LOL. want me to text you when I get home?
Me texting: Sure. My phone will be on silent and I will prob be in bed so don't worry if I dont reply. night.
Jason: good night. love you.

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I woke up the next morning to a text from Jason saying that he got home safely. So I decided to text him:

Me texting: Hello. I just got up,.
Jason texting: hi. ur a sleepy head.
Me: haha. i no! i thought u would be sleepin still.
Jason: nah i went right to bed when I got home. hbu?
Me: oh. same here lol. well a few mins after we got done texting.
Jason: so what are you doing today?
Me: hmm idk. I just got up. I havent even gone downstairs to see what my family is doing yet. y?
Jason: oh ok. i wana c you. is that ok?
Me: of course its ok! if i didnt love you i would't let you c me. haha. well i would but..LOL. (:
Jason: lol. glad to no u love me cuz u no what
Me: wut?
Jason: ily 2. =]
Me: Good. Lol cuz if you didnt i was gunna have to beat you..haha jk
Jason: oooh. a virtual slap huh?
Me: nah. I'm talkin a real slap. jk LOL
Jason: in that case i'm not comin over =] LOL...jk ily.
Me: So what r we gunna do today?
Jason: hmm idk. What can we do.
Me: hmm we can do a movie at the theatre? What came out today?
Jason: uhhh. I honestly have no idea.
Me: me either! lol
Jason: okay well text me when you no. u can look it up or something.
Me: k i g2g 4 now anyway..
Jason: ok. ily. bye
Me: ily 2..bye

After that I went to the basement and got on the computer and looked up what movies came out. I found one that actually sounded good so I texted Jason.

Me: How does "What Happens In Vegas" sound?
Jason: That sounds good actually.
Me: ok want me 2 come 2 u or u come 2 me?
Jason: ill come 2 u.
Me: are you sure?
Jason: yeah. so what time?
Me: umm they show at 2:45, 4:30, and 7 so u pick.
Jason: umm ok. no way to get to the 2:45 show so how about 4:30?
Me: sounds good. if you want to get here by then you should leave now.
Jason: Yeah good idea.
Me: =] just go to my house and my dad will drive us to the theatre.
Jason: ok good idea. ily
Me: y thank you. lol ily 2 :)
Jason: i cant wait to see you.
Me: me too. its been so long. LOL =]
Jason: omg i no.LOL like 12 hours haha
Me: yeah. well i better get ready.
Jason: why? i bet you look beautiful the way u are.
Me: yeah but i dont think i want to go in my pj's LOL
Jason: haha! well then put some clothes on that you would wear out in public. make sure you look cute and hot in them =]
Me: haha well u will have to decide that.
Jason: well i can do that right no...your beautiful.
Me: wow how do u no? u cant even see me. lol
Jason: I can see you in my mind. your always beautiful.
Me: aww ur such a suck up. =] lol jk
Jason: well then..*slap slap* nahh i wouldnt do that.
Me: aw u think ur funny? lol. but that hurt jk. see you soon. i g2g 4 now. txt me when you are close. ily
Jason: okay ily 2..ttyl

So I went and got dressed and then when I was done Jason texted me:

Jason texting: hey im here. come kiss me.
Me texting: oh u no i will. ill be right out.

I walked out the door a few seconds later. I went up to Jason as he got out of the car and hugged him and then kissed him.

Me: Lets go inside for a while. *I grabbed his hand and led him inside*
Jason: Okay.

So we went inside for a while and went up to my room. We talked to each other for a few mins until my dad yelled up and told us it was time to go. Jason got up off the floor and grabbed my hand and pulled me up. He held my hand as he led me down my stairs. We went outside and got in the car. My dad drove us to the theatre. We got there 5 mins later and went inside. While we bought our tickets, my dad and brother decided they wanted to see a movie they have been waiting to see. So they got our tickets. We went and got our drinks and popcorn. While standing there, Jason was moving his head up and down while looking at me like he was checking me out. He then spoke.

Jason: Oh by the way, you do look beautiful just like I assumed.
Me: Thank you.

I smiled and put my hand around his waist. I said bye to my brother and dad while Jason and I went down the hall into the room with the screen.

WiLDoNE0457
01-26-2009, 08:00 PM
oh, more

huskerrich
01-26-2009, 08:04 PM
more please Sabrina

cute_princess1114
01-26-2009, 10:38 PM
oh dang...2 more comments. :D

NancyDrew
02-04-2009, 07:20 PM
I love it!!!! Awesome job!! :D

cute_princess1114
02-04-2009, 07:25 PM
I love it!!!! Awesome job!! :D

thanks..1 more comment xD

cute_princess1114
02-27-2009, 11:02 PM
okay since no one is commenting, i thought you would like the next chapter.
so heres chapter 5:


Chapter 5:

We sat in the back in the spots by the door. Right when we sat down, I put my head on Jason's shoulder. He looked at me and kissed me on the lips very quickly and then turned his head to watch the movie previews. I then smiled and leaned and kissed him on the cheek. He looked at me for a second and then turned his head and put his hand across my shoulders and held me closer. Soon the movie was over. Jason tood up and I was still sitting down so he grabbed my hand and pulled it to pull me up. He kissed me on the cheek and held my hand. We walked out of the doors of the theatre and into the hallway. We walked around the corner to go play the arcade games while we waited for my dad and brother to come out of their movie they were seeing. Five mins later they came out and we headed to the car. We went home. Jason texted his mom and said that he was going to stay at my house for a while. We sat in my room and talked for a while. During that time, I thought about what was going to happen 2 weeks later--Homecoming!! I thought I should ask Jason if he wanted to go with me so I did..

Me: Hey guess what my school has in 2 weeks.

There was a dead silence for a while then he finally said something.

Jason: What?
Me: Homecoming!
Jason: Oh. Yeah thats right--Cool!
Me: Did you want to go to mine with me?
Jason: I thought you would never ask!
Me: well I guess I need a dress.
Jason: Make that 2.
Me: Why 2?
Jason: Aren't you going to mine with me?
Me: Well yeah. I was waiting for you yo ask me.
Jason: Okay well tell your dad you are going and you need a dress--well 2 dresses
Me: I will later. Couldn't I wear the one I get for mine to yours?
Jason: No--I want you to look hotter at mine around my friends.
Me: Oh so you want to show me off?
Jason: Yeah. *he laughed*
Me: I'm okay with that
*We both laughed*
Jason: Well, I guess I need a tux then.
Me: 2!
Jason: Why 2?
Me: If I gotta wear 2 dresses, then u gotta wear 2 tux's =]
Jason: Okay, I guess that makes snece. you want me to wear the better one to yours?
Me: Yes please. *We laughed again*
Jason: So when do you want to get your stuff?
Me: Uhh..soon. *I laughed*
Jason: Tomorrow sound good?
Me: umm let me go ask my dad.

I went downstairs and asked if I could get my homecoming stuff the next day. My dad said yes and then asked me:

My dad: Whens Jason going home?
Me: I dont know yet.
My dad: He can stay tonight if you want him to but you know the rules..
Me: *Shocked voice* Woah..uhh thanks.
My dad: We are going that way to pick out your stuff anyway. We can take you and him shopping and have his mom pick him up after.
Me: Okay sounds good. Thanks.

I started going up the stairs. When I was halfway up I realized I forgot something.

Me: Oh yeah Daddy, I forgot to mention that I need 2 dresses and Jason needs 2 tux's
My dad: We could possibly arrange that.
Me: Okay cool. I love you daddy.

I walked up to the kitchen and grabbed me and Jason a snack and then went up to my room where Jason was. I put the snacks on my desk.

Jason: *Looked at the snacks and said:* Ohh yummy. Thank you. So what did your dad say?
Me: He said yeah to going tomorrow AND he said you could stay then your mom could pic you up somewhere around where we will be after we are done shopping.
Jason: Oh cool! I'll text my mom right now. Oh what did he say about the 2 dresses and 2 tux's??
Me: He said it could be arranged.
Jason: Cool. My mom said I could stay so she don't have to waste gas. Besides its to late anyway.
Me: yay. So what colors do you want to do for homecoming?
Jason: Well, Whats your favorite color?
Me: purple or pink. haha.
Jason: Well we can do purple for yours because I don't want to do pink.
Me: Okay. So what about yours?
Jason: Umm...I like red or blue.
Me: How about blue?
Jason: Yeah thats good.
Me: So I need a purple dress and a blue dress
Jason: And I need a purple shirt and a blue shirt for under my tux's
*We both laughed*
Me: So what do you want to do tonight?
Jason: Wana watch a movie or something with your dad and brother?
Me: That sounds good.

*I suddenly got this worried look on my face. Jason looked at me and said:*

Jason: Whats wrong?
Me: I got a question for you.
Jason: Okay go ahead.
Me: Do your parents like me?
Jason: Umm. I don't know. I've never asked them..But I don't care. All I know is that I love you and nothing about them matters about me and you being together.
Me: Aww I love you too.
Jason: What about your parents?
Me: My dad obviously likes you. You could tell from the other night.
Jason: Yeah. What about your mom?
Me: umm I don't know honestly. I don't live with her anymore. But I would have to say no. But just like you said, I don't care--They can't come in between us.
Jason: Alrighty. Well lets go watch a movie.

We walked down staris and asked my dad and brother if they wanted to watch a movie. They said yes so we wanted "I am Sam"...I sat by Jason on the small couch and held his hand. My dad and brother were on the big couch. When the movie was over, me and Jason went back up to my room. We sat on my bed and talked for a while. By the time we got bored with talking, it was 11:30 p.m. I was soo tired so I decided I wanted to go to bed. Jason got up off my bed and pulled me off. He gave me a quick kiss and then I grabbed my pj's..I went into my bathroom to change. I came out and went to lay in bed. Jason was standing there looking at me. After a few seconds he leaned down and kissed me. When he released from the kiss, he slowly walked away. I grabbed his arm and pulled him onto my bed. I signaled for him to lay next to me. He layed on my bed and then I wrapped my arms around him and held him. After a while, he moved over to my other bed and we both fell asleep.


4 comments til next chapter is posted.
Also, new character next chapter. (:
All i'm saying is, he's a member on this site.

huskerrich
02-27-2009, 11:51 PM
:15:more please sabrina

cute_princess1114
02-27-2009, 11:51 PM
haha 3 more comments xD

MileyFan077
02-28-2009, 10:19 PM
More.

new_york_girl
02-28-2009, 10:23 PM
update that was good more

cute_princess1114
02-28-2009, 11:31 PM
wow 1 more comment and the 6th chapter will be posted.
once again, new character and he's a member on here. (:

WiLDoNE0457
03-01-2009, 12:15 AM
more

cute_princess1114
03-01-2009, 12:28 AM
wow okay then.
chapter 6 being posted in a few mins then. (:

cute_princess1114
03-01-2009, 12:30 AM
Chapter 6: (new character)

The next day, we woke up at about 11:30 a.m. We decided to get ready to go shopping so we could beat the crowds. We were all ready to go by 12:15. We got in the car and headed to the mall that was about 45 mins away in a different town. We first went to the mall. We went into a few stores looking fo rme first. At one store, I found this really pretty dress. Luckily, it was one of the colors we picked out..blue! They had my size too! I decided to try it on so I could see if I liked it. I put it on and walked out to where Jason and my dad were so I could show the,. Jason stared at me with his eyes widened and mouth open. After a few seconds, he was finally saying something:

Jason: Wow. You look gorgeous...
Me: Thanks. So you like this one?
Jason: I love it.

Jason walked up to me and kissed me on the cheek then spoke.

Jason: You look amazing. I say get this one.
Me: Okay..Lets see. Now I need another dress and you need 2 tux's--a purple one and a blue one.
Jason: Yes, we'll worry about me later. Right now is your time.
Me: Okay. Well I'm going to change back and then we can get this and go somewhere else.
Jason: Alrighty. See you in a few.

A few mins later, I came out in my regular clothes with the dress in my hand. I went up to Jason and put my arm around his waist. We walked up to the reguster with my dad. I put the dress on the counter and the lady at the register scaned the dress. She said a total and then my dad handed her his credit card. She swiped the card and pressed a few buttons and then handed the card back to my dad. Jason has his hand around my waist still. The lady put the dress in a bag and then put the recipt in the bag with the dress. We all walked out of the store and thenwe found another store that had some prety dresses a few stores down. We walked in there and I started looking for a purple homecoming dress. I was looking at one end and Jason was looking at the other. We both worked our way toward each other until we met in the middle with both of our hands on this beautiful purple dress. I looked up at jason and he was staring at me. He nodded his head. I pulled the dress out from the rack and looked at it. The size was perfect for me. I tried it on and it fit. We did the same thing that we did at the other stores. We paid and walked out. We were trying to find a place for Jason's tux's but as we walked around the corner there was a Claires. Jason looked at me and said:

Jason: Do you wan to pick out some jewlery?
Me: Umm..I guess I could. *I smiled*

We walked into Claires and picked out some jewlery that matched my dresses. I found a purple necklace and a blue necklace and some silver earrings that Jason okayed for wearing to both homecomings. We paid and walked out with our stuff. Now it was time to find Jason's stuff. We decided we were hungry first. we got food from Maid-Rite. Me and Jason both got chicken fingers while my dad and my brother got burgers. we ate in the middle of the mall at the tables for the food court people. We ate and soon finished. We threw our stuff away and then started walking to find a store for Jason's stuff. We walked around the corner and found a store with tux's in the window. We walked into the store and started looking for two outfits for Jason. We soon found some suits and Jason tried them on. They fit so my dad bought them for him. We were all set for homecoming. Since we were done shopping, Jason realized he should text his mom now. So he texted his mom and she came and picked him up ten mins later. I gave him a hug goodbye and told him I would text him later on in the day. We got in the car and headed home also. I got home and went up to my room and got on the computer. I realized my friend David from camp from last summer was on AIM. I haven't talked to him since a week before Jason and I started going out. I decided to start talking to him.

Me (to David): Heyy!
David: Oh hi! Wow your finally on.
Me: What have you been up to? Yeah. It's been forever.
David: Nothing really What about you? I know its been like three months I think.
Me: Yeah. Well I have a boyfriend now. I started going out with him about a week after we last talked.
David: Oh thats cool. So whos the lucky guy?
Me: Jason..
David: Oh cool. You both finally got together?
Me: Yeah. I know..bout time right? haha
David: Haha yeah. It is.
Me: Lol. So you find a lucky girl yet?
David: Sadly no..not yet.
Me: Oh I'm sorry.
David: Don't be.
Me: Okay. Haha. Why are you on this late anyways?
David: Its not even late. Its like 11:00 p.m
Me: Okay to me it is. Lol
David: Well then I'm always on this late.
Me: Haha..
David: Well, what did you do today?
Me: Well I went shopping out of town. I got stuff for homecoming with Jason.
David: Oh. He's going with you?
Me: Yup! And I'm going with him to his.
David: Thats cool.
Me: Yeah. He stayed the night at my house last night.
David: Oh.
Me: Don't worry..nothing like that happened. Lol
David: I kinda figured it wouldn't.
Me: Why do you say that?
David: Well because I don't see you as that type of person.
Me: Oh okay. haha.
David: Well..I gotta say i've missed you. I miss seeing you everyday at camp and talking to you everyday since.
Me: Yeah me too. Sorry I haven't been on much. Me and Jason have been hanging out a lot lately.
David: Its okay. I'm glad you two are hanging out a lot.
Me: Me too. It's pretty fun.
David: You should convince him to go to camp with you this summer..that is if your still with him.
Me: Oh thats a great idea. You both could hang out--just don't steal him from me. Haha. Oh and I'm gunna still be with him. :D
David: Yeah we could. Haha. I'm not that type of person..I don't steal guys from girls..LOL. I hope you are. I'm looking forward to meeting him.
Me: Thats cool. So your not at all a bit jelous?
David: Why would I be jelous?
Me: Well because last time I knew, you sorta liked me?
David: Oh that..umm yeah. I'm just a bit jelous..I'll get over it though.
Me: Haha okay.
David: Yeah..
Me: Well, Sorry it was such a short talk, but I'm sooo tired from today. I think I'm going to go to bed now.
David: Okay..good night. Get some sleep. And if I don't talk to you before homecoming, then have fun!
Me: Night..I will have fun..I'm sure I'll talk to you before that..its in 2 weeks.
David: Yeah but you never know. Just have fun and be safe.
Me: Of course I will..you know me. :)
David: Haha. Yes unfortunately I do..lol jk.
Me: Haha very funny. :P
David: Wut I can't help it?
Me: Haha I know you can't. xD
David: Well, I'm tired too. I think I'm gunna go to bed too.
Me: Okay. Dream about mehh. :)
David: Haha. I'm sure I will.
Me: Haha good night.

David then logged off and then so did I..I got off the computer and layed in my bed and fell asleep.


4 more comments til next chapter! (:

huskerrich
03-01-2009, 12:37 AM
more please nice job sabrina

cute_princess1114
03-01-2009, 12:38 AM
3 more comments (:

superliz112
07-04-2009, 05:07 PM
loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it hunni it's amazing

cute_princess1114
07-04-2009, 05:08 PM
wow thanks (:
if anyone actually comments saying they want me to post the next chapter, i will

huskerrich
07-04-2009, 05:11 PM
please with dyl . . . . on top, does that even sound right

cute_princess1114
07-04-2009, 05:22 PM
no it didnt. hehe
and its david on the story :P hehe
ill post more if i get 1 more comment.

cute_princess1114
07-12-2009, 08:32 PM
I was going to edit now, but i just remembered that its on my memory stick.
I put some things from my moms computer when it had a virus to my memory stick.
I dont want to get the virus on my computer...
So sadly, I have to wait until I get a new memory stick and switch everything.
Im soo sorry everyone!
But in the meantime, if you could comment and tell me you like the story so far, then i could add more when i can xDD

cute_princess1114
03-05-2010, 12:29 AM
I don't mean to bump this again
and triple post...
but does anyone want me to continue?

huskerrich
03-05-2010, 10:35 AM
whatever you want to do sabrina, I will read it.

cute_princess1114
03-07-2010, 11:05 PM
i dont know. if i get a few more comments telling me to continue, i might.

NancyDrew
03-09-2010, 05:56 PM
Me! :D

cute_princess1114
03-10-2010, 04:10 PM
one moree?

V-ball Baby 101
03-21-2010, 06:52 PM
wow atlot has happend in these chapters

cute_princess1114
03-21-2010, 08:06 PM
yeahh. do you want me to continue? now that i look back, i dont like it as much as i did at the time.

NancyDrew
03-21-2010, 10:22 PM
I guess if you don't, well, it's really up to you.:)

cute_princess1114
03-22-2010, 12:15 AM
i have no idea how to continue it
so i dont think i'll finish. i might start to make another one soon. idk

V-ball Baby 101
06-14-2010, 05:55 PM
please finish it I like it

cute_princess1114
06-14-2010, 10:39 PM
alright you guys seem to want more
so i'll find the story around in my room and type more up :)

V-ball Baby 101
06-15-2010, 12:50 AM
sweet !I like it it's cute..

cute_princess1114
06-15-2010, 05:15 AM
haha thanks<3
one more comment and i can get some tomorrow hopefully :D

cute_princess1114
06-24-2010, 08:31 PM
alright guys! i found it

ready for the next chapter?
its kinda long.

here it is!

Chapter 7: Some things just don't turn out as planned

I woke up the next morning and texted Jason.

Me texting: Hey babe. How are you this morning?
Jason texting: Hi. I'm good. how about you?
Me: Same. (: but better now. I get to talk to my baby.
Jason: aww. so what did you do last night when you got home?
Me: I got on the computer for a while and talked to my friend David from summer camp from last year and then I went to bed. hbu?
Jason: Ohh thats cool. Umm i watched a movie with my family and then went to bed.
Me: Cool. Did you ask them wheather they like me or not yet?
Jason: Actually I did that last night.
Me: and they said??
Jason: They like you. They think your a really nice and pretty girl and your perfect for me. I have to agree. :D
Me: Aww. Yay. That makes things better. Now we just gotta get my mom to like you haha. xD
Jason: Yeah haha. So what did you and David talk about last night?
Me: Oh just what we have been up to since the last time we talked--it was actually a week before me and you started going out.
Jason: Oh really?
Me: Yup. I've been so busy hanging out with you and stuff that I haven't had time to get on the computer and talk to him..even with my laptop in my room.
Jason: Oh. Wow. That sucks.
Me: Yeah. He told me I should convince you to go to camp with me this summer if we are still together.
Jason: and why is that?
Me: Because I think it would be fun. And he wants to meet you.
Jason: Oh okay. I'll think about it.
Me: Yay. Thank you (:
Jason: Anything for you.
Me: So whats up for you for today?
Jason: No idea..What about you?
Me: Idk. Just got up again lol. I need a shower tho.
Jason: Haha yes you do. I can smell you from here :P
Me: Ha thats funny. Cuz I can barely smell myself. Lol.
Jason: Well go get a shower then and I'll talk to you later.
Me: Okay. Mr demanding :P
Jason: Haha..ttyl
Me: Kk (:

So I got in the shower and eventually got out. After I got out, I texted Jason back.

Me: I'm out of the shower now. Do I smell better? :P
Jason: Yes you do. haha
Me: Ha. So you figure out what your doing today?
Jason: Umm no. Since we both have nothing to do, wana hang out?
Me: Well, I was kinda just gunna stay home and relax. Is that okay?
Jason: Yeah thats fine.
Me: Are you sure? Your not mad?
Jason: I'm sure..and no im not mad.
Me: Okay. I think I'm gunna be on the computer most of the day..catching up on the forums and my graphics and stuff..
Jason: Okay thats fine. I will prob end up being on too. Prob playing games all day.
Me: Okay well get on AIM or something later and we can chat then. ily...
Jason: K i prob will..ily 2
Me: Ok.I'm gunna go now.
Jason: Kk me too. Bye
Me: Byee. (:

I got on the computer and got on the forums. I started getting cought up with my graphics and stuff. I just had to upload them to Photobucket and I would show them to Jason when he got on. I was on AIM and saw that David had popped up as coming online. I started talking to him:

Me (to David) : Hii
David: Long time, no chat.
Me: Haha. I know right?
David: Yeah. So whats up for today?
Me: Nothing. Just chillin out. Jason wanted to hang out but I said I wanted to stay home and relax. I might be on here all day.
David: Ahh okay.
Me: Yeah. So what are you doing today then?
David: Nothing..I might be on here all day too.
Me: Cool..then we can chat all day. (:
David: Yup we could.
Me: I could get on the mic if you want me to..I'm in my room..
David: Sure..If you want. idc
Me: kk

I turned on the mic and started talking to David. He got on his mic. We talked until about 5:30 then I needed to go down to get supper. I told David I would be back in about 15 mins..if that. My family ate at the table so that means I had to stay there, sadly. 15 mins later I went back up and got back on the computer. I told David I was back and then I noticed Jason was on. I started talking to Jason.

Me: Hey babe.
Jason: Hi..
Me: What are you doing?
Jason: Nothing just talking to my baby.
Me: Ahh..Whos that? Oh wait..me!! :D
Jason: Haha. Yup. xD
Me: I just got back from supper.
Jason: Oh I haven't eaten yet.
Me: Oh that sucks..do you know what your having?
Jason: Umm I think chicken..I can smell it so that means its soon.
Me: Okay..cool.
Jason: So what have you been doing all day without me?
Me: Umm..just talking to David..thats about it.
Jason: Oh thats cool. Watcha been talkin about?
Me: Honestly, nothing. Haha. We get into those debates..Hes like "Whats not to like about Selena Gomez" and stuff..haha
Jason: Oh haha.
Me: Yeah its pretty funny.
Jason: Yeah I bet.

I saw that David had been messaging me this whole time I had been talking with Jason so I turned to his screen.

David: Welcome back.
Me: Oh thank you..Sorry it took so long for me to reply. I'm talkin to Jason.
David: Oh cool. U think he would want to join in a convo with all 3 of us?
Me: Idk i can ask.

I flipped over to the screen with mine and Jason's convo..I decided to ask him about the chat session.

Me (to Jason) : Oh David wants to know if you want to join me and him in a convo..We can all chat together
Jason: Sure..idc. Get me in and I'll talk..
Me: Okay one second.

I told David that Jason said yes to the chat and put a 3 person chat on.

Me: Hey guys.
David: hi.
Jason: heyy.
Me: Yay now you 2 can chat together.
David: Yeah. Btw nice to meet you Jason..
Jason: Nice to meet you too.
Me: aww yay this is going good so far (:
David: Why wouldn't it?
Jason: Cuz you like my gf..
Me: Woah..umm awkward?
David: So? It's not like I'm gunna steal her from you. I respect the fact that you 2 are going out. I don't steal ppl from ppl they are dating.
Jason: You better not. She's my girl.
Me: Okay guys chill.
Jason: I'm sorry babe..I just don't want to share you with anyone else.
Me: Your not going to. I'm staying with you as long as I can...thats cuz i love you..
Jason: Okay. I love you too.
David: Oh love fest..great.
Jason: ugg.
Me: Okay you two stop it please. I don't want to lose a friend because my bf doesn't like him.
David: Thank you.
Jason: I didn't say i didnt like him..I just don't like the fact that he's trying to take you from me.
David: ugg.. I said I don't steal ppl from ppl they r dating.
Jason: Stick to your word then.
David: I am..
Jason: Okay whatever.
Me: Okay seriously.

There was no messages for about 2 mins..So I decided I wanted to go lay down for a while.

Me: Okay well I'm going to go lay down for a while..You two can keep talking if you want. Just plz don't fight.
David: Okay..later..Sorry
Me: bye..
Jason: Okay bye babe..ily..I'm sorry too.
Me: ily 2..It's okay. bye


I logged off and then went to lay down in my bed. I started to think..I hate how they fight about me. I love Jason but I hate how he thinks everyone is trying to take me from him..every guy friend I've had him meet or in this case talk to. I got tired of this crap so I decided to take a nap. An hour later I woke up. It was 7:30 p.m. I got back on AIM...Jason was signed on but David wasn't so I was kinda worried. David is always signed on even if he's not at his computer. I was logging into a few forums and then Jason sent me a message.

Jason: I don't want you talking to David ever again.


4 comments and i'll get chapter 8 posted! (:

cute_princess1114
06-24-2010, 08:37 PM
alright guys! i found it

ready for the next chapter?
its kinda long.

here it is!

Chapter 7: Some things just don't turn out as planned

I woke up the next morning and texted Jason.

Me texting: Hey babe. How are you this morning?
Jason texting: Hi. I'm good. how about you?
Me: Same. (: but better now. I get to talk to my baby.
Jason: aww. so what did you do last night when you got home?
Me: I got on the computer for a while and talked to my friend David from summer camp from last year and then I went to bed. hbu?
Jason: Ohh thats cool. Umm i watched a movie with my family and then went to bed.
Me: Cool. Did you ask them whether they like me or not yet?
Jason: Actually I did that last night.
Me: and they said??
Jason: They like you. They think your a really nice and pretty girl and your perfect for me. I have to agree. :D
Me: Aww. Yay. That makes things better. Now we just gotta get my mom to like you haha. xD
Jason: Yeah haha. So what did you and David talk about last night?
Me: Oh just what we have been up to since the last time we talked--it was actually a week before me and you started going out.
Jason: Oh really?
Me: Yup. I've been so busy hanging out with you and stuff that I haven't had time to get on the computer and talk to him..even with my laptop in my room.
Jason: Oh. Wow. That sucks.
Me: Yeah. He told me I should convince you to go to camp with me this summer if we are still together.
Jason: and why is that?
Me: Because I think it would be fun. And he wants to meet you.
Jason: Oh okay. I'll think about it.
Me: Yay. Thank you (:
Jason: Anything for you.
Me: So whats up for you for today?
Jason: No idea..What about you?
Me: Idk. Just got up again lol. I need a shower tho.
Jason: Haha yes you do. I can smell you from here :P
Me: Ha thats funny. Cuz I can barely smell myself. Lol.
Jason: Well go get a shower then and I'll talk to you later.
Me: Okay. Mr demanding :P
Jason: Haha..ttyl
Me: Kk (:

So I got in the shower and eventually got out. After I got out, I texted Jason back.

Me: I'm out of the shower now. Do I smell better? :P
Jason: Yes you do. haha
Me: Ha. So you figure out what your doing today?
Jason: Umm no. Since we both have nothing to do, wanna hang out?
Me: Well, I was kinda just going to stay home and relax. Is that okay?
Jason: Yeah thats fine.
Me: Are you sure? Your not mad?
Jason: I'm sure..and no I'm not mad.
Me: Okay. I think I'm going to be on the computer most of the day..catching up on the forums and my graphics and stuff..
Jason: Okay thats fine. I will prob end up being on too. Prob playing games all day.
Me: Okay well get on AIM or something later and we can chat then. ily...
Jason: K i prob will..ily 2
Me: Ok.I'm gunna go now.
Jason: Kk me too. Bye
Me: Byee. (:

I got on the computer and got on the forums. I started getting caught up with my graphics and stuff. I just had to upload them to Photobucket and I would show them to Jason when he got on. I was on AIM and saw that David had popped up as coming online. I started talking to him:

Me (to David) : Hii
David: Long time, no chat.
Me: Haha. I know right?
David: Yeah. So whats up for today?
Me: Nothing. Just chillin out. Jason wanted to hang out but I said I wanted to stay home and relax. I might be on here all day.
David: Ahh okay.
Me: Yeah. So what are you doing today then?
David: Nothing..I might be on here all day too.
Me: Cool..then we can chat all day. (:
David: Yup we could.
Me: I could get on the mic if you want me to..I'm in my room..
David: Sure..If you want. idc
Me: kk

I turned on the mic and started talking to David. He got on his mic. We talked until about 5:30 then I needed to go down to get supper. I told David I would be back in about 15 mins..if that. My family ate at the table so that means I had to stay there, sadly. 15 mins later I went back up and got back on the computer. I told David I was back and then I noticed Jason was on. I started talking to Jason.

Me: Hey babe.
Jason: Hi..
Me: What are you doing?
Jason: Nothing just talking to my baby.
Me: Ahh..Whos that? Oh wait..me!! :D
Jason: Haha. Yup. xD
Me: I just got back from supper.
Jason: Oh I haven't eaten yet.
Me: Oh that sucks..do you know what your having?
Jason: Umm I think chicken..I can smell it so that means its soon.
Me: Okay..cool.
Jason: So what have you been doing all day without me?
Me: Umm..just talking to David..thats about it.
Jason: Oh thats cool. Watcha been talkin about?
Me: Honestly, nothing. Haha. We get into those debates..Hes like "Whats not to like about Selena Gomez" and stuff..haha
Jason: Oh haha.
Me: Yeah its pretty funny.
Jason: Yeah I bet.

I saw that David had been messaging me this whole time I had been talking with Jason so I turned to his screen.

David: Welcome back.
Me: Oh thank you..Sorry it took so long for me to reply. I'm talkin to Jason.
David: Oh cool. U think he would want to join in a convo with all 3 of us?
Me: Idk i can ask.

I flipped over to the screen with mine and Jason's convo..I decided to ask him about the chat session.

Me (to Jason) : Oh David wants to know if you want to join me and him in a convo..We can all chat together
Jason: Sure..idc. Get me in and I'll talk..
Me: Okay one second.

I told David that Jason said yes to the chat and put a 3 person chat on.

Me: Hey guys.
David: hi.
Jason: heyy.
Me: Yay now you 2 can chat together.
David: Yeah. Btw nice to meet you Jason..
Jason: Nice to meet you too.
Me: aww yay this is going good so far (:
David: Why wouldn't it?
Jason: Cuz you like my gf..
Me: Woah..umm awkward?
David: So? It's not like I'm going to steal her from you. I respect the fact that you 2 are going out. I don't steal people from people they are dating.
Jason: You better not. She's my girl.
Me: Okay guys chill.
Jason: I'm sorry babe..I just don't want to share you with anyone else.
Me: Your not going to. I'm staying with you as long as I can...thats cuz i love you..
Jason: Okay. I love you too.
David: Oh love fest..great.
Jason: ugg.
Me: Okay you two stop it please. I don't want to lose a friend because my bf doesn't like him.
David: Thank you.
Jason: I didn't say i don't like him..I just don't like the fact that he's trying to take you from me.
David: ugg.. I said I don't steal people from people they r dating.
Jason: Stick to your word then.
David: I am..
Jason: Okay whatever.
Me: Okay seriously.

There was no messages for about 2 mins..So I decided I wanted to go lay down for a while.

Me: Okay well I'm going to go lay down for a while..You two can keep talking if you want. Just please don't fight.
David: Okay..later..Sorry
Me: bye..
Jason: Okay bye babe..ily..I'm sorry too.
Me: ily 2..It's okay. bye

I logged off and then went to lay down in my bed. I started to think..I hate how they fight about me. I love Jason but I hate how he thinks everyone is trying to take me from him..every guy friend I've had him meet or in this case talk to. I got tired of this crap so I decided to take a nap. An hour later I woke up. It was 7:30 p.m. I got back on AIM...Jason was signed on but David wasn't so I was kinda worried. David is always signed on even if he's not at his computer. I was logging into a few forums and then Jason sent me a message.

Jason: I don't want you talking to David ever again.

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4 comments and i'll get chapter 8 posted! (:

huskerrich
06-25-2010, 09:46 AM
more please sabrina

WiLDoNE0457
06-26-2010, 02:27 PM
can't wait to read more.

cute_princess1114
06-26-2010, 06:08 PM
two more! :)

V-ball Baby 101
07-29-2010, 07:01 PM
more (:

huskerrich
07-29-2010, 10:59 PM
can I count twice sabrina, pretty please

cute_princess1114
07-29-2010, 11:12 PM
haha i have to find the story and I'll post more soon, but if i get one more comment that'd be great! :)

sila91
07-30-2010, 09:48 PM
Sabrina, you better had find the story because I read everything and now I'm excited about the next chapters,lol!

cute_princess1114
07-30-2010, 10:25 PM
I just found it on my usb stick :D
here you goo

Chapter 8: Love takes a sideturn

Me: Why not?
Jason: Because..he told me he liked you and that he's jealous of me.
Me: So what?
Jason: So what?? Don't you see where this is going?
Me: Obviously not. What you think he's gunna convince me to break up with you?
Jason: Possibly..
Me: Well its not going to happen.
Jason: Thats right..because your not going to talk to him ever again.
Me: Bull crap. He's my friend and I can talk to him..
Jason: Not if your going to be with me..

My mouth hung open as soon as I read that message. I couldn't believe he was doing this. I thought I would say something even if it did mean for us to break up.

Me: Okay fine..break up with me for a stupid reason like that. I can talk to whoever I want..Do you think I would get mad at you for talking to Mikayla?? No..I wouldn't.

A few mins later, Jason replied back.

Jason: I'm sorry. I just got really mad because I know another guy likes you.
Me: Its okay. So you were jealous about that?
Jason: yeah I guess so.
Me: Don't get jealous. Your the only one I like..love actually
Jason: Okay..thats good to hear. I love you.
Me: I love you too.
Jason: Okay well I'm glad we have this cleared up.
Me: me too.
Jason: i am gunna go play a game then i'm goin to bed.
Me: okay thats fine..
Jason: bye..ily
Me: bye ily 2

A few mins after Jason got off, David logged on. I wanted to see if he would say anything so I waited. Two mins later he said something.

David: I'm sorry about ealier,
Me: Its okay. Me and Jason already talked about it.
David: Okay.
Me: So your jealous of him?
David: Well yeah. He's got you.
Me: Aww.
David: I really do like you, but right now all we can be is friends.
Me: Yup. Are you okay with that?
David: For right now, I guess I have to be.
Me: Okay. All I need from you is your support..thats all.
David: and you have my full and complete support.
Me: Thank you. (:
David: Your welcome.
Me: Well, I'm going to go to bed..I'm tired..long day..you know?
David: Yeah..maybe we can hang out sometime.
Me: Maybe. I'll have to make sure Jason is okay with everything between us first..
David: Okay.
Me: You know, ealier he came close to breaking up with me because I said I was going to talk to you when he told me not to.
David: Really? You risked breaking up with him for me?
Me: You could put it that way. Lol.
David: Aww your a great friend.
Me: Thank you. Well I'm going to bed now..night
David: later.

So I went to bed. Homecoming was less than 2 weeks away.


now anything after this chapter, i don't have written. so i'm not sure what i want to do with it. send me some ideas and when i get it written, i'll post :)

huskerrich
07-30-2010, 10:30 PM
more please

cute_princess1114
07-30-2010, 10:34 PM
read the end lol

sila91
07-30-2010, 10:59 PM
you should definitely continue since it's summer

and I would like to read the homecoming thingy plus it would be interesting if you,Jason and David were both there for homecoming

cute_princess1114
07-30-2010, 11:19 PM
Hmm. I think I could make that happen...I'll get writing probably later tonight. I have a lot going on--I just opened a Niley fan site with my friend so i'm busy with that, but i'll try to get some done tonight.
Thanks for the idea!

sila91
07-30-2010, 11:22 PM
You are welcome and looking forward to reading more(:
oh okay good luck with the site

cute_princess1114
07-31-2010, 12:37 AM
haha thanks! :D

WiLDoNE0457
07-31-2010, 01:40 PM
can't wait to read more. =]

cute_princess1114
08-01-2010, 03:56 AM
ill write..well since its a new day, tonight

cute_princess1114
09-10-2010, 12:18 AM
i'm writing now! :D i should have it posted this weekend if it goes right

sila91
09-10-2010, 07:07 PM
woohoo so excitedddd.

V-ball Baby 101
09-10-2010, 08:51 PM
So I'm thinking I want more,yup that's what I'm thinking (:

cute_princess1114
09-10-2010, 09:24 PM
haha i'm writing it now :D
i planned out last night how i wanted it and wrote a few parts, but now i'm going to write it all out :)

sila91
09-10-2010, 10:05 PM
oh,sounds nice,can't wait to see it posted :D

cute_princess1114
09-11-2010, 01:36 AM
Chapter 9:
2 weeks later, I was so pumped. The Friday before homecoming was soooo fun and I had this big rush of energy. We had our pep rally and the football players had a contest. Everyone was cheering and getting ready for the big dance. After the pep rally, they released us and we all went home. I got home and got online to find an offline message from David asking what time homecoming was at tomorrow night. I replied back and told him. No clue why he was asking, but I didn't worry about it too much. He didnt get on the rest of the night. Saturday, I woke up excited. I checked my phone to see if Jason had texted me. He did. He said hes on his way and it was sent about 15 mins before I got up. I texted him back and told him I just got up and I can't wait to see him. I got online for about 10 mins and noticed that nobody was on! How was this possible?! Ugh. So, I just decided to get a shower and start to somewhat pick out a hairstyle and get it prepared. Jason showed up about 5 minutes after I got this done. We went up to my room and chilled out and watched tv together for a while before it was finally close to getting ready for homecoming! Jason took a shower while I got my dress put on and my hair done. After all the other plans for the night, I forgot one thing. What were we going to eat? I had no idea! Jason came out of the shower and looked amazing. I couldn't help but smile and stare at how handsome he looked. As soon as I saw him, my mouth dropped and I ran up to him and kissed him. I decided to ask him about the whole eating thing. "So what are we having to eat?" I asked. "I actually didn't think of that" "Uhh neither did I...which is why I decided I should ask" I said and laughed. We eventually decided we'd just end up ordering a pizza. So we ordered a pizza, ate, and then finally we were ready to go. We went outside to the back yard to take some pictures because thats what my family wanted. As soon as pictures were taken and hugs were given, me and Jason hopped in his car and drove to the high school. I made sure I had tickets and money to have professional pictures done there, because I wanted to be able to remember this night. We parked and Jason got out of his car and walked to my side of the car and opened the door for me. As I got out, he grabbed my hand to help me up and then held it. So I was out, and we were on our way into the gym. We got in and I found all of my friends right away and introduced them personally to Jason, since they hadn't really met him quite yet. They met him and then we started dancing together. Suddenly, I turn my head towards the door and I see someone really familiar in a tux walking in. Was it...No, it couldn't be. He just waved. Ohmygod, it was. David. What was he doing there?! He knew I was going with Jason! I must've been staring a long time, because he asked what I was staring at. He looked over and saw exactly what I did. He let go of my waist and grabbed onto my hand. David started slowly walking closer, making his way though the crowd towards me. He got up to me and looked at me and then saw Jason was with me. "Hi" he said. "Whats this about?" Jason said as he looked at me and then David, like we planned this. "I have no entire clue. What are you doing here anyways, David?" "I wanted to surprise you" "Yeah, this is a BIG surprise" Just then, I could tell Jason was getting mad. He stormed out of the gym and out of the school. I ran after him into the parking lot but before I got out there, he was already in his car driving away. I walked back into the gym to see David standing there waiting for me at the door. "You got what you wanted. Hows it feel?" I asked.

5 comments preferred to go on :D

huskerrich
09-11-2010, 10:18 AM
more please

BieberFever
09-11-2010, 04:41 PM
Woah, I totally just read the whole thing :D YAY ME! More pleaseee.(:

sila91
09-11-2010, 07:08 PM
awwwww:(
please write moreeee.

cute_princess1114
09-12-2010, 03:49 AM
Woah, I totally just read the whole thing :D YAY ME! More pleaseee.(:

omgosh you read my full fan fiction?
aww! thanks :)

more coming if i can get 2 more comments from people who havent already posted preferably

BieberFever
09-12-2010, 02:24 PM
omgosh you read my full fan fiction?
aww! thanks :)

more coming if i can get 2 more comments from people who havent already posted preferably
Haha yep! Np! :D

cute_princess1114
10-11-2010, 03:56 AM
if i can by chance get 2 more comments by later today, ill post more :)
ill go write some now. if i dont get comments, i probably will post eventually but the more comments, the sooner it gets posted :D

V-ball Baby 101
10-11-2010, 02:30 PM
More this is cute. I loved My boyfriend's homecoming :]

cute_princess1114
10-11-2010, 05:37 PM
haha i didnt write last night like i said i was :l
i read my other stories and stuff. ill write more this week though, i promise! i get off early thursday & friday so hopefully ill write and post by then.

huskerrich
10-11-2010, 05:48 PM
okay sabrina:)

cute_princess1114
11-16-2010, 05:16 PM
gunna write more today and hopefully post it! :)

WiLDoNE0457
11-16-2010, 05:19 PM
awesome, can't wait.

cute_princess1114
12-02-2010, 07:12 PM
ughhh sorry guys! i keep forgetting about this. As soon as I find my USB stick, i will most definitely finish writing more :) i keep losing that dang thing

BieberFever
12-03-2010, 02:56 PM
take your time.

cute_princess1114
12-03-2010, 05:08 PM
im gunna look for it this weekend and hopefully find it. if i do, ill write

WiLDoNE0457
12-03-2010, 08:36 PM
im gunna look for it this weekend and hopefully find it. if i do, ill write

well I hope you find it. =)

cute_princess1114
12-03-2010, 11:52 PM
i hope so tooo! haha. ill look tomorrow. right now, i have to watch a movie i haven't seen since i was little :D

huskerrich
12-03-2010, 11:53 PM
have fun sabrina lol, the weather outside is frightful

cute_princess1114
12-04-2010, 12:04 AM
it most definitely is. we went out of town to a bookstore and realized that they had their christmas walk tonight, so we did a bit of that. but for it snowing, its actually not as cold as you'd think. it was really nice, but on the way home we saw a car that slid into a ditch and there was a police care D: scary! thats why im so scared to drive in the snow, but i did a bit of it when i did driving with the teacher..
okaay this was random. why am i saying this on my fan fiction thread? lol kbye

cute_princess1114
12-06-2010, 05:52 PM
my usb stick was on my desk, hidden. oooops. but here you go guys :) not a lot but enough to hold you off until i can get more.

Chapter 10:

Previously: He stormed out of the gym and out of the school. I ran after him into the parking lot but before I got out there, he was already in his car driving away. I walked back into the gym to see David standing there waiting for me at the door. "You got what you wanted. Hows it feel?" I asked furiated.
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"It feels amazing to have you to myself" David said.
"David!" I yelled in disgust.
"Look I'm sorry. I didn't mean to drive him off like that"
"Well honestly, I'd rather be here with you. If I wasn't coming with Jason, I probably would've asked you to come with me anyways" I said.
David looked at me then grabbed my hand and pulled me into a hug then let go.
"How about we go dance?" he asked, realizing that a slow song was on. He held out his hand to lead me to the dance floor.
"Yeah, I'd like that" I said, taking his hand and we walked back into the gym holding hands, not locked in each others, but just enough to give me butterflies. When we got to the dance floor, I put my arms around his neck as he put his around my waist. By the time we got to the floor, the song was about halfway over, so we didn't get to slow dance to the song for as long as I expected. After the song ended, "Just the way you are" by Bruno Mars came on. David looked deeply into my eyes, and his hands were still around my waist, as mine were still around his neck.
"This is my song for you. I heard it the other day and on the way here and immediately thought of you. You're amazing just the way you are, Sabrina" he said, then kissed me.
Woah. I didn't want to cheat on Jason, but this moment just felt RIGHT. I felt like something clicked right then. It magically happened. I just couldn't believe this was all happening. Again.
I hadn't told Jason this because we weren't together then, but something happened that last night at camp. Between me and David. We were just sitting next to each other on a couch alone in the lounge, waiting to be picked up, just talking about the Summer we had spent together. A good Summer at that. No-Great Summer. But as much as it sounds like it wasn't a big deal, it suddenly became one. David grabbed my hand, then leaned in to kiss me. That made my Summer...The way I just layed my head on his shoulder until I was the one to be picked up first. I waved goodbye to him, and until this point, it was the last time I had seen him. I felt like I sort of lead him on and then ditched him, but that was definitely NOT what I was intending on doing. Snap back to reality. I was staring at David.
"What are you looking at?" he asked
"Nothing. Why?"
"You're staring at me"
"Oh, I was? Sorry, I was just thinking"
"About what?"
"Nothing..." I said in that voice that doesn't want him to ask, but yet if he did ask, I'd tell him in a heartbeat.
"Obviously it has to do with me since you were staring at me. Daydreaming?"
"Nope, remembered something"
"What did you remember then?"
"That last day of camp.." I said.
"Oh, I tried not to mention that. I honestly didn't want to ask what happened and why you didn't ask about that afterwords"
"Its because I found Jason right after I came home...we just clicked. Enough for me to totally blur out what happened that day. Until just a few minutes ago, I forgot about it"
"What made you remember it?" he asked with a smile.
"When you kissed me..." I said, biting my lip, trying to avoid smiling too much.
"Oh, you mean like this?" he asked, then kissed me again.
"Yeah, like that." I said and smiled.


hope you liked those unexpected twists i added in there out of a spur of the moment ;)\

huskerrich
12-06-2010, 05:57 PM
more please, you think you are going to hold us off with that,:37:

sila91
12-06-2010, 05:57 PM
wow,sounds interesting. continueee.

cute_princess1114
12-06-2010, 06:00 PM
yes i do think i will hold you off with that (: at least for now haha. ill write more tonight probably

WiLDoNE0457
12-06-2010, 06:00 PM
can't wait for more. =)

cute_princess1114
12-06-2010, 06:17 PM
one-two more comments :)

cute_princess1114
12-16-2011, 05:42 PM
now that i come back to this, i feel like i'm a really good writer...or was back then. maybe i'll continue this?
if i get enough comments to come back i will.
& sorry for bumping!

NancyDrew
01-10-2012, 01:03 PM
OH I love it so you should! hehe ;)

cute_princess1114
01-11-2012, 06:38 PM
i really should? ahh. glad at least SOMEONE likes it