Hannahfan_eva211
11-20-2008, 07:45 PM
The Power Of Love
Okay so i wrote this for a contest in the Creative Writing club so i have 5 chapters written the first one is below. Enjoy no intro or anything
First ‘chapter’
Power Of Love
I was holding him like I never had before. I didn’t want to let go of him. I loved him too much to do that now. “Jesse I can’t” he stopped me as he put his finger on my mouth “I know but let’s stay focused that we are together now”. I put my head back on his chest. It was like I was in my dreams. This is real more real than it can get. He wrapped his arms around me and kissed my head. “It will all be okay I know we will figure it out” I smiled as I looked up at him with tears in my eyes I didn’t want them to fall. “Katie I love you more than life it’s self. I will have no reason to live without you in my life” He wiped my tears away. I feel so safe when I am with him. Safer then I feel at home when I am with him I know nothing bad will happen. I felt water fall on my head and looked up. It had started to rain “We better get somewhere before we are soaked”. I didn’t want to listen for some reason rain was my luck charm. It only rained when something good was about to happen. “If you want” I said as I grabbed his hands. “Maybe there is a chance you dad will let you be with me” I smiled to his comment. You know my dad if he hates you then there is no chance we can be together. I watch the rain drizzle as we walk in a shed.
I sit quietly down on the mattress set by the window. “Not a bad place” Jesse says being sarcastic. “Oh yeah I would totally live here” I said laughing. Jesse sits next to me as he starts to speak. “Katie” I knew by that moment it was going to be something bad. “You know how much I love you” I nod “Well my mom got a job in California it’s really big for her”. I look down to the floor where a bunch of fishing wire laid. “So you’re moving” I said in a hush tone he nodded that’s all I need to see. I guess the rain failed me this time it gave me bad news. “I guess this means we need to spend as much time as we can together than right?” he nods. I get closer to him as we move up towards the wall. I put my head down slightly as he raises my chin. “It will be okay Kate” Kate was his little nickname for me. “We will find a way” I say laying my head on his shoulder. “I have to go home” he nodded and took me home. I walk into my room as my dad screams at me again about me staying out late. So now I am grounded, but I don’t care because I only care about that night. That night was the best ever and probably the most time I will spend with him. I lay down on my bed. I grab the picture of me and him together. The worst part of today is I won’t be able to see him because I am grounded. He moves tomorrow I don’t know if I am going to be able to see him. People don’t understand it’s not just some silly kid love. We are in love more than I ever thought I would be. I wish people would understand and leave us alone. They all think we are just kids. They don’t want us to grow up.
Okay so i wrote this for a contest in the Creative Writing club so i have 5 chapters written the first one is below. Enjoy no intro or anything
First ‘chapter’
Power Of Love
I was holding him like I never had before. I didn’t want to let go of him. I loved him too much to do that now. “Jesse I can’t” he stopped me as he put his finger on my mouth “I know but let’s stay focused that we are together now”. I put my head back on his chest. It was like I was in my dreams. This is real more real than it can get. He wrapped his arms around me and kissed my head. “It will all be okay I know we will figure it out” I smiled as I looked up at him with tears in my eyes I didn’t want them to fall. “Katie I love you more than life it’s self. I will have no reason to live without you in my life” He wiped my tears away. I feel so safe when I am with him. Safer then I feel at home when I am with him I know nothing bad will happen. I felt water fall on my head and looked up. It had started to rain “We better get somewhere before we are soaked”. I didn’t want to listen for some reason rain was my luck charm. It only rained when something good was about to happen. “If you want” I said as I grabbed his hands. “Maybe there is a chance you dad will let you be with me” I smiled to his comment. You know my dad if he hates you then there is no chance we can be together. I watch the rain drizzle as we walk in a shed.
I sit quietly down on the mattress set by the window. “Not a bad place” Jesse says being sarcastic. “Oh yeah I would totally live here” I said laughing. Jesse sits next to me as he starts to speak. “Katie” I knew by that moment it was going to be something bad. “You know how much I love you” I nod “Well my mom got a job in California it’s really big for her”. I look down to the floor where a bunch of fishing wire laid. “So you’re moving” I said in a hush tone he nodded that’s all I need to see. I guess the rain failed me this time it gave me bad news. “I guess this means we need to spend as much time as we can together than right?” he nods. I get closer to him as we move up towards the wall. I put my head down slightly as he raises my chin. “It will be okay Kate” Kate was his little nickname for me. “We will find a way” I say laying my head on his shoulder. “I have to go home” he nodded and took me home. I walk into my room as my dad screams at me again about me staying out late. So now I am grounded, but I don’t care because I only care about that night. That night was the best ever and probably the most time I will spend with him. I lay down on my bed. I grab the picture of me and him together. The worst part of today is I won’t be able to see him because I am grounded. He moves tomorrow I don’t know if I am going to be able to see him. People don’t understand it’s not just some silly kid love. We are in love more than I ever thought I would be. I wish people would understand and leave us alone. They all think we are just kids. They don’t want us to grow up.