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V-ball Baby 101
11-17-2008, 02:17 PM
Melissa's life is far from perfect
Her parents died when she was in
3nd grade,and due to that her so called friends
called her a orphan she lives with her aunt who doesnt care about her
She also has 2 cousins who are brats gaberilla,megan.
she is truely a loner that is untill she meets and falls in love with a boy named
lucas...
start (yes or no)
Will this fairytale ever work?
or will it crash&burn?
Find out!!!

danadog75
11-17-2008, 07:26 PM
start!

WiLDoNE0457
11-17-2008, 07:40 PM
start

V-ball Baby 101
11-17-2008, 08:45 PM
I will soon

V-ball Baby 101
11-18-2008, 08:59 PM
1st chapter.
Will be soon I promise I have to do history notes,
than I have a ws.I'll try and post later 2nite.
Im sorry

WiLDoNE0457
11-18-2008, 09:33 PM
1st chapter.
Will be soon I promise I have to do history notes,
than I have a ws.I'll try and post later 2nite.
Im sorry


it's ok, post when you can, school should come first

MileyFan077
11-18-2008, 09:56 PM
Start!

V-ball Baby 101
11-18-2008, 10:42 PM
it's ok, post when you can, school should come first
thanks for understanding!!:)

V-ball Baby 101
11-18-2008, 11:12 PM
1st chap.
''Mother,Gabby took my lipgloss''
''I hate that name and you took my jeans I was gonna wear
''They look better on me than they would on you''
''MOTHER!!'' this is what I woke up to too actually this is what I always wake up too
Those two are always fighting about something u took this,I was here 1st,
Blah,blah,. Which has made me add anthor 235 reason why I wish my parents werent died My braty cousins. I finally give up on sleeping get up got dressed and walked downstairs usally I just go out thur the back door grab my skateborad and go
but I left my history book downstairs when I was doing or trying to do my homework while megan throught she should have a makeout session with her boyfriend.It was gross. I got downstairs and looked around perfect there it was on the coffe table
I could grab it and not have to deal with..... ''Oh,hello looking for this?'' Megan who was my age (15) held my history book in her evil little hands. ''look,megan just give me it im running late'' ''Give me 1 reason why I should?'' ''because I''ll tell your little boyfriend that I saw you&max parker kissing in the gym yesterday'' ''psh,'' she give just like I knew she would she always does.I put the book in my bag and was on my way.. when Misey #2 Gaberila came downstairs with a poutry look on her face
''Meg,You...'' (looks at me) she's going to start something ''oh,good morning I love what you did with your makeup Black just like everyday no wonder
all the guys stay away from you'' ''gee,gaberilla I love what you did with your makeup
day,day you are looking more like a sult and hey,maybe Once you've radied all the wal-marts,you can hit target because then maybe you can finally have enough makeup to hit the big Zit oh,wait you cant Because there aint enough makeup in the world for that'' And before they could say a word I was on my borad off to school

V-ball Baby 101
11-20-2008, 08:02 PM
anyone,anyone?
yes,no?

huskerrich
11-20-2008, 08:05 PM
more please

V-ball Baby 101
11-24-2008, 09:13 PM
Ding,Ding there it goes
that dumb bell telling me where to go and how long I had to do it
ive always hated that dumb bell.I went to my locker grabbed my english book
stuffed into my bag and walked to history.I throught my day would go okay
but man,was I wrong.
''watch out gabby, here comes the freak stay away''
oh,great Meagn my bratty cousin just what I need
''Look,megan we could stand here all day and aruge when we all
know that im going to win but,Ive got english and I dont wanna be late so,bye''
''Hold it right there opharn I still gotta get you for that little comment about my makeup'' ''aw,did I hurt your feelings?Im so sorry NOT'' ''You think your so f-...''
''what's going on here?'' oh,no the principal dettetion here I come
Megan&gaberilla are the worlds biggest suck ups ''Mrs.maxwell melissa was being mean to us'' ''I was not she's a lier!'' ''Melissa,lieing will get you no where''
''but,im not...'' ''Dettetion'' I knew it ive been to dettetion so many times
I wouldnt be suprised if they had my own name on a chair ''You,girls get to class''
''Yes,ma'am''.that's it they get itching powder in thier beds tonite.
''and,u meilssa Im not going to hold your hand and walk you down to dettetion so
I expect you to be there when I go check in is that understand?'' ''Yes''
''what was that?'' ''yes,ma'am'' who was she kidding? Mrs.maxwell walked off. Ding,ding there it was the tardy bell now I was the olny one in the hallway
oh so I throught. I saw a cute blond hairhaired blue eyed boy heading my way
''Uh,excuse me miss?'' was this guy talking to me? ''uh,yeah hi wait''! I guess so
''hi,'' I Finally said ''im new here and I cant find room 20 mr.James english where is it?''
''down that hallway and you take a left'' ''Do you think you could show me?'' ''do you have any better pick-up lines?'' ''maybe,I'll think of some while you show me the class'' ''I-...'' I was about to say I was about to say ''I gotta go to dettetion'' but,Mrs. maxwell knew me better than to think that I would actually show up
''So,what's your name?'' ''Melissa, u?'' ''Lucas'' Lucas I like that name I like it alot
''

huskerrich
11-24-2008, 09:24 PM
more please

V-ball Baby 101
11-29-2008, 01:31 AM
Melissa's P.O.V
Could this be it?
Could I at olny 15 be in Love?
Whoa,girl get ahold of yourself
You dont even know him
You just walked lucas to class
Go to dettetion Just go to detteion
and dont think about him.
The bell rang 1st period was over
I could have been in english with lucas
stupid Cousins.
Lucas P.O.V
''hey.lucas how was school?
''It was fine mom I said as I got into mom's car
''Did u meant anyone nice?" I throught about My day
Melissa,melissa,melissa, Then I meet two werid girls that came
up to me Gabby or was it gaberilla?It didnt matter anyway
and megan.all I wanted to do was close my eyes and think about melissa
Megan's P.O.V
''hey,meg rembmber that guy we meet in english?''
''Yeah,he's cute''
''well,dont get any ideas he's mine''
''since when?"
''Since I said so''
''Fine,whatever where's Melissa''?
''I dont know and I couldnt care less''
''Oh,''
''Why''?
''I saw her showing lucas to english''
''Well,she better stay away lucas&I where meant to be

huskerrich
11-29-2008, 09:17 AM
more please

V-ball Baby 101
11-29-2008, 12:43 PM
Melissa's P.O.V
I walked in the house and
I wished that I would have walked in
because there was Megan&Gabberilla
On the couch wanting to start trouble
I knew they would I could see in thier eyes
''Look,Who's home''
''MOTHER,DETTETION GIRL IS HOME''
My aunt chartolle came down
''Well,Well,isnt it little miss trouble maker''
''I dont know what these little liers have been
telling you but,I didnt do anything megan&gabrellia are just really good stuck ups'' Gaberilla's P.O.V
''see.mother that's how she treats us we've been dealing with this all day''
I whinned I knew that would get melissa in more trouble I always get what
I wanted and what I wanted was to get Melissa in trouble. ''well,than I guess somebody will just be in her room all night'' sweet It worked.
Melissa's P.O.V
I wanted to scream at my aunt but,I didnt
I just went up to my room slammend the door
layed down on my bed and did my homework
I throught the rest of my nite was going to be peacefull
it wasnt Gaberilla came in my room ''Have you ever heard of Knocking?''
''Yeah,ive heard of it I just came up here to tell that boy u were with earlier...'' ''yeah,what about him?'' 'He's mine'' ''Oh,please Like he would ever look at you besides dont you have a boyfriend''? ''Yes,but,im breaking up with him and going after lucas so stay away from him'' ''Your not my boss'' ''no,But I could get u in alot more trouble'' ''whatever,bye dont let the door hit you where the good lord spilt you'' ''fine,I''ll go but,you better watch your back you dont know who your messing with'' ''no,no Gabby
You dont know who your messing with''