Malice In Wonderland

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

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Malice In Wonderland

Zibby Morgan has a problem. Where ever she is, she always starts wishing the same things. She wishes to be anywhere else. In her mind she likes to edit things. This person shouldn't be like that, this place should look like this, things like that. She stores them away in her mind. Yeah, Isabella Morgan has a runaway imagination. But one day, yardsale shopping, she comes across a mirror. This mirror, she soon discovers is the entrance way to a new land. And entrance to her dreamland, where she controls everything. This Mirror lets her live in her imagination where everything is perfect.

She soon grows addicted to The Mirror. The vampires that lived in her mind that she didn't even know about come alive. And one vampire, is after her heart. But her best friend Tristan watches. And is horrified to see that The Mirror is consuming Zibby.

Will her killer imagination actually KILL her?

before we begin:
This is my new Fan Fiction. Yeah, I know.
I couldn't live without having one. But it's going to be
hard and a VERY bumpy ride. But hold on please
and don't give up on me! I promise it won't be
that bad! Okay, there are NO famous Disney
people in this one. Yeah, I know bummer.
But please don't ditch it for that! I hope this
Fan Fiction actually lets you guys get to know me
better, the DARKER side to me. I did this as a combination
of the books Twilight , Through The Looking Glass
and Wicked Lovely. They're all very similar. I was going to enter
this story (I am hand-writing this in a journal before I posted it)
as an application for some schools for writing. So I REALLY need
your feed back! Thanks!
-Vicky

Characters:
Isabella (Zibby) Morgan (http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q98/ftlouie12345/MIW/sid1.jpg)
Tristain Raimer (http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q98/ftlouie12345/MIW/11111hessoocute.jpg)
Peyton Terin (http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q98/ftlouie12345/MIW/09.jpg)
Hero Magon (http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q98/ftlouie12345/MIW/002.jpg)
Landon Kisterin (http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q98/ftlouie12345/MIW/nd_02.jpg)
Rian Palice (http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q98/ftlouie12345/MIW/taylorweb02.jpg)

Chapters:
Baby, You Wouldn't Last A Minute On The Creek (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2419075&postcount=8)
Honey, This Mirror Isn't Big Enough For The Two Of Us (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2433215&postcount=54)
Hot N Cold (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2441902&postcount=86)
Strange Magic (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2443749&postcount=93)
Vampires Will Never Hurt You (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2447902&postcount=103)
Fall For You (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2467124&postcount=141)
My Sweet Unvalentine (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2493341&postcount=193)
Our Lady Of Sorrow (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2504298&postcount=202)

Musical Chapters:
Chapter 1-Baby, You Wouldn't Last A Minute On The Creek-Chiodos (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bg1dF4TpI0k)
Chapter 2-Honey, This Mirror Isn't Big Enough For The Two Of Us-My Chemical Romance (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=igHJGdk9WXA)
Chapter 3-Hot N Cold-Katy Perry (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hog638glAro)
Chapter 5-Vampires Will Never Hurt You-My Chemical Romance (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nYmdTtTKU1k)
Chapter 6-Fall For You-Secondhand Serenade (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rA7x2PpZNgg)
Chapter 7-My Sweet Unvalentine-New Years Day (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XBUyQ7fOjHU)

*Couldn't find song for Chap. 5











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[adolphin]

Didnt you give me a form a while back, for me to join
and start!!!!!!!

[Hannahfan_eva211]

Start!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Umm, i dont know bree....i dont think. im not accepting anyone rite now.

[adolphin]

haha
thats ok
lol
rite girl
now
Ill get aggresive
xD
jk

[caylee[:]

this sounds really cool!
i've liked everything you write, so i'm almost certain i'll like this. :D
start.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

:P okay, ill see if i can squeeze in a the prolouge.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Chapter 1
Baby, You Wouldn't Last A Minute On The Creek


I stared at my paper. I was staring so hard, I was amazed holes weren't burning through the test questions.

I could only wish. The class and the day were both almost over, and the only thing I had filled out on my test was name and date.

I grit my teeth. I was starting to get desperate. In my senior year of high school, all the teachers constantly remind you of colleges.

This just makes the pressure of passing even more untangible. Especially for me. I looked immediately at my best friend Tristan Raimer.

He was already done and had his test flipped over on his desk so I couldn't even sneak a peak.

The sunlight that rebounded off of his many piercings, beamed me in the face and danced inside my eyes as purple splotches.

He shot me an apologetic look, than shrugged. I jerked my head to my test, then the clock than clasped my hands in a silent plea.

"No," he mouthed shaking his head.

"Pleeeease?" I moaned. He glanced quickly at the teacher, than back at me. Sighing, he made to flip his test back over.

Right, when he was about to open the test booklet, the bell rang. I slammed my head down on my desk.

I couldn't believe I failed AGAIN. Tristan had gathered his things and was standing over me.

"Tough luck Zibs. How many have you tanked now?" he asked. I glared at him.

"Shut up you goody-two shoes," I snapped. This statement was entirely false. Tristan wasn't a good student, and he wasn't bad.

He was...average. He didn't exactly voluenteer in class, he just sat silent and listened.

Which is more than you can say for me. I don't listen OR pay attention.

"Don't feel bad," he said, wrapping his arm around my waist and tugging me out of the classroom. "I failed too. Guessed every question."

This did help. Either that, or it was because he was holding me.

"So," Tristan said as we headed outside. "Can you come over today?" I sighed and shook my head.

"No, can't I'm going.......yard sale shopping with my mom."

My mom is an avid 50s style decorator. As in, she has a fixation with yard sales, garage sales, and flea markets.

My mom, who also has never met Tristan, would never let me go ANYWHERE alone with him.

I would bet my life.

"BELLA!" my mom screeched from her minivan. I groaned. I hated it when she used that name.

It made me sound like I was 50 instead of 17.

"Bye Tristan," I said dejectedly. He smiled and hurried out of sight of my mom.

[adolphin]

ooo
ur lucky Im ur Best Friend
because I hate the name tristan
xD
more!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

GASP! how could u hate that name?! i named him after this hot emo dude i met on neopets. i dont know what happened to him..........

[adolphin]

This guy in school
I guess he's cute, but I sware he is EVIL

[Hannahfan_eva211]

More!!>??!!?!?!?!?!?

[caylee[:]

more!
this is great!
i love the names you used! [:

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Lol, I love that name Zibby.

[lilxangel]

Ahmazin Cant wait 4 more :D

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

okay, now im debating if i should just drop this FF and start on like a whole different series.......

[Hannahfan_eva211]

hmmm well you can do what you want.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

i dont know....i think im gonna flip a coin.......

[adolphin]

WHAT?!?!?!
You tell me you wana start this SO bad, then you wanna stop it!
rawr
I wont let it happen
xD
jk

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

i didnt want to start it SO bad. but i just wanted something different.....but i dont think that many ppl will read it, and after i went from a post with 700 posts or so, its kinda sad, you know?

[adolphin]

I would read ittt
(:

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

well....im gonna close it. i may start again, but i have a feeling that it wont go far. :(

well, really, im gonna start another series! and yes, i will stick the jbs in there.

[caylee[:]

grr.
this sounded awesome. :|

[adolphin]

well....im gonna close it. i may start again, but i have a feeling that it wont go far. :(

well, really, im gonna start another series! and yes, i will stick the jbs in there.

ok, as long as I can join
xD

[new_york_girl]

ooo i love it update

[Hannahfan_eva211]

and i can join ! :P

[new_york_girl]

yeah can i join to, well when you need people.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

im gonna ask a mod to close it. i guess i should stick with the jbs even though i dont like them all that much.

[MileyFan077]

You're not gonna keep going? I love it!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

bleh maybe i will. i dont know. im going a little insane know. im just cracking under all the strain. being a teenager sucks.

[Hannahfan_eva211]

Your a fantastic writer no matter who you write about. it's your FF do what you please with it:D

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

aww thanx. okay. ill stick wit my policy and never give up a FF. :)

[lilxangel]

So ur sticking with this one =]

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

yep. im gonna see if i can post again.

[caylee[:]

yay!
i like your policy!
can't wait!

[new_york_girl]

awsome!! for some reason i need the jonas brothers in mine. u can put them in there and not call them the jonas brothers just change there names and stuff. or make them have a cameo.

[Curly]

Heeeeyy, you started. It's awesome,
by the way. So don't you dare close it. You'd better
stick with you policy. Or I'll bite you. And just a question;
who did you use for Peyton and Hero? As in which actresses?

[ilygracie]

awww thank god!
i want to read this SO bad!<< as bree saiddddd.
haha
moreness

[heyitswhatever]

oh, could i have a part in this?
i've never had one in any of your ffs [:

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Mandi, it's Ashlee Simpson for Peyton and Emily Browning for Hero. :)

[Curly]

Thank you ;)
Now, write more, please?

[new_york_girl]

so are you going to write more, post the banner?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

lol, yeah i will in a minute. what banner bailey?

[MileyFan077]

YAY!
You're not giving upppp.
Like most FF authors.
YAY!
And again....
......
YAY!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

srry guys, i was working on my project and didnt have time to update. maybe tomorrow. sorry bout all the maybes.

[lilxangel]

Its ok. cant wait 4 the next chapptie. =]

[new_york_girl]

lol, yeah i will in a minute. what banner bailey?

oh.... never mind... wrong ff!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

lol haha!

[new_york_girl]

it was i forgot her name whos doing a spin of on your ffs

[xo_hannah_fan1_xo]

love it :] as i should :] MORRRRRE!!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Breeanna Bailey! adolphin!!!! duh!!! i should work on it, but my creativity is like completely tapped out. i just injured my knee and i cant really walk. :(

[new_york_girl]

oh my goodness. wow, are you okay? get better.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

yeah im fine bailey. im icing rite now :lol:

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

2.
Honey, This Mirror Ain't Big Enough For The Two Of Us

As me and mom trundled down the street in our beat up old white minivan, I tried hard to sound happy.

I just HATED it whenever it was Yard Sale Day. I hated going, but it just made my mom so HAPPY. It killed me.

"So Bells," Mom said excitedly as she steered into the country. "I found two new sales today. Which should we hit first?"

"I don't care," I grumbled. My mom glazed right over my lack of enthusiasm, and just continued gushing about her latest finds.

This was around the time that I started tuning her out. I tried hard to concentrate on something happy.

Anything. Almost immediately, my mind landed on Tristan. I've noticed that whenever I'm around Tristan, I get weird impulses.

Like for instance, whenever he starts taunting me about my mom and her obsessive yard sale shopping.

I always want to SLAP him whenever he starts laughing at my misfortune. I was wrong. It got easier. A LOT easier.

So easy in fact, that whenever I'm around Tris, sometimes I get the impulse to just nip his lip. Right by his lip ring.

"Isabella, c'mon!" Mom said, interrupting my thoughts of kissing my best friend. Which was good.

Because, have you ever felt that your parents could read minds? It's bad enough that my mom doesn't know I have a friend who has a lip ring.

But to have a friend that I fantasize about making out with that has enough metal on his face to set off a metal detector in Cleveland?

Not so good.

My mom immediately scurried off into the midst of the sale to examine some chipped green chairs.

I stood and stared at my Converse. My thoughts just moved together in a silent, meaningless montage.

Then a voice crooned over everything. Almost like a shout, but husky, like a whisper.

"Little girl. Come here. I have something pretty I would like to show you."

I knew I shouldn't turn around. But I did. I spotted an old woman, sitting on an old rocking chair on the porch of an old house.

I was creeped beyond measure. But I walked almost like I was bewitched towards her.

She smiled eerily at me. I felt like my feet were magnetic, following a metal path. Soon, I was right in front of the lady.

Her teeth were a blinding white. Her hair was almost a silver but was really blonde. Her eyes were a vivid orange. Almost a red.

They seemed to stab me. Hard. Right through my own blue eyes.

"Would you like to see my mirror pretty child?" she whispered. Her voice was like a fork scraping on a rusty pan. I screeched in my ears, but didn't hurt.

I nodded in spite of myself. Almost from out of no where, she pulled out a mirror.

It was old. Like liver spots on an old person, brown patches speckled the smooth surface of the mirror.

This mirror was an inanimate old person. The frame was intertwined with vines and leaves, criss-crossing around.

"Pretty, isn't it?" the lady hissed. My mind screamed NO but my head nodded yes. I stared at the mirror. It seemed to hold me transfixed.

Taunting me, glowing.

"BELLA! Bella!"

I was wrenched away from thoughts of the mirror by mother screeching. My mind seemed to return and I seemed to land back on Earth.

"Take the mirror. It's free," the lady said. My mom heard this. Immediately she accepted.

I wasn't listening. I knew it was a bad idea. My mom handed me The Mirror, and dragged me away to the car, shouting thank you's at the lady.

Loading me into the car, she placed the mirror by my feet. It seemed to laugh at me.

"Now you have a mirror for your room!" Mom cried. NO! I shouted in my mind. It was NOT coming to MY room!

But as we were driving back down the street, I turned to catch a glimpse of the mysterious woman.

But when I turned to look back, the house and the woman were gone.

[heyitswhatever]

COOL! gah.
You're such a good writer (:

[devoniscrazyy]

Yard Sales? What a mother. :P
I hope the ice works on your knee. :D

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

lol thanks. i know devon, rite?

[new_york_girl]

more

[MileyFan077]

More!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

more l8r

[lilxangel]

ohmigosh. that was really really AhMazing. Your a awesome writer. Cant wait 4 more :D

[xo_hannah_fan1_xo]

ahh! amazingly amazing chapter!!! MORRRRRRRRRE!!

[new_york_girl]

more pls?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

i get braces tomorrow. AGAIN. ill be too depressed probably to do anything but read. take a gun and shoot me god please. :(

[new_york_girl]

there not that bad...

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

speak for urself. these things hurt like HELL.

[new_york_girl]

i had them... i know what they feel like!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

this is the second time. its KILLING me. i just want to rip these things out of my mouth!!! i probably have more metal on my face than Tristan does!! lol.

well, im gonna update after im done doing my wallpaper for a graphix challenge.

[new_york_girl]

alright.

[xo_hannah_fan1_xo]

cant wait!!! and sorry about the braces :[ i've had my braces on for 2 and a half years. getting them off next month!! you have no idea how excited i am :]

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

lol, 18 months and mine are OFF!

[new_york_girl]

weren't you going to update?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

too much pain

[RandomCrystals]

OOOhhh, I like it.Unique.
tim burton's making a new alice in wonderland.
that's what yours reminds me of, but a way totally different approach.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Thanks! I LOVE tim burton. my dad calls me the female tim burton :P

nitemare b4 christmas rocks.

[sophiecool]

OMFE this is AH-mazing.
you're really good, this is exactly the type of story i like to read.
two of my favorite things: vampires and magic mirrors xP

[sophiecool]

Thanks! I LOVE tim burton. my dad calls me the female tim burton :P

nitemare b4 christmas rocks.

OMG my dad calls me the same thing!!!
and yes it does, i watch that movie every day. :)

[caylee[:]

More!

[RandomCrystals]

oooh can't wait to read moreyah its the best, I have the two disc dvd awesome ohaha for the longest time I thought I was the only burtonite here woohooo

[Curly]

Ehmahgawd. That was amazingly amazing like my new leather jacket. Vicky, you're such an awesome, forktastic female-version of Tim Burton. And now, write more.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

lol. We should make a club! :P

[new_york_girl]

yeah we should. what would you want to call it.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

The Tim Burtonites.

[new_york_girl]

haha. sweet.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

i already sent in a form. im updating shortly.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

3.
Hot N Cold

Grinding my teeth, I stomped up the stairs as my mom grilled my dad and older brother Michael about our latest luck at the "Sales".

I dragged The Mirror up the stairs. Clunk! Clunk! It thudded hard onto the wood of the stairs.

This just made me swear colorfully and start kicking it hard. I was half hoping it would shatter into a million pieces.

I pictured The Mirror bursting into flames and me throwing it at my parents. I imagined it melting in my hands and me giving it to my mom and shrugging.

I pictured a lot of things. None of which came true. Not yet anyway. When I reached my room, I chucked it onto the floor.

It clanged ominously. I glared at it for a bit. It seemed to laugh at me and smile.

"Shut up," I growled and threw a sheet from my bed over it. I then took to looking around my room.

The purple wallpaper with the poka-dots all over it. The black and white tiled floors. The canopy bed that looked like a booth.

My mom had designed it almost exactly like a 50s soda shop. I pictured my room as how I wanted it to be.

Midnight blue walls, each painted with an individual bright white stars. A large white bed with no canopy in sight.

Cushy white plush carpets. Large windows. A HUGE closet. My dream room. And also a room I wasn't ever gonna get.

I then turned around and slid out of my window. I climbed the trellis down and full out ran down the street.

My feet pounded against the asphalt of the street.

Weird looking shadows that wouldn't look out of place on Nightmare Before Christmas (haha) flashed around me.

I tried to keep my head up and not look around at the night. It was a full moon. And we all know WEIRD things happen during the full moon.

I reached the doorstep, sweaty and out of breath and knocked lightly on the door. There was silence.

I waited for about five minutes until I was sure that no one was home. I had turned around to head back home when a shoe hit me on the head.

"Pssst! Zibby! Up here!"

My head whipped upward to stare at the upper story of the house. Tristan grinned down at me, piercings flashing and dark hair falling over his eyes.

"Climb up!" he hissed.

"You sure?" I whispered back, studying the height up to the window. Tristan rolled his eyes.

"My dad's asleep. You gotta come up here or go home."

I sighed and started to climb the fence next to his house. I reached the roof, and nearly collided into the satelite dish that was clipped to the gutter.

"Careful!" Tristan called.

"I know! I know!" I hissed back. When I was surreptitiously tip-toed across the shingles Tristan grabbed my hand and pulled me through the window.

I landed with a very ungraceful thud! on the floor. Tristan laughed. Tristan's laugh sounded technically well.....like a pot giggle.

For those of you who are unfamiliar with drugs (I hope you are, are you?) then a pot giggle is REALLY high-pitched a kinda girly.

I've never really ASKED Tristan if he's smoked pot before, I don't think he does, but it sounds like it.

"Ow," I winced, rubbing my butt, which had just made enormous contact with the floor.

"You okay?" Tristan asked grimacing. I shook my head.

"Ow," I wimpered again. Tristan smiled and pretty much just picked me up and set me down gently on the bed.

"Sorry 'bout that. My dad hates getting woken up."

"Sorry for coming so late," I apologized. He shrugged.

"Nah, don't worry about it. He'll live. He's still asleep anyway."

I pulled Tristan down beside me and snuggled up close to him.

"What are you doing?" Tristan asked raising his eyebrows.

"I like hugs," I whispered. Tristan smiled slyly, but didn't object as I rested my head on his chest.

"It's been a long day Tris," I murmered.

"Yeah," he said and he started randomly braiding my hair. Before I knew it, I had drifted entirely off to sleep.

X X X X

"Zibs, wake up! Zibs, it's 1 in the morning. You gotta go."

I felt pushing, but I didn't move. He was so warm. He was soft. I didn't want to leave him! I loved him!

Oh my god. Did I just THINK that?! My eyes snapped open.

"Thank god, now go! Sorry to do this to you, but it would be bad if my dad found us. Now go!" Tristan said.

I wrapped my arm around his waist in a hasty goodbye, than threw myself out the window.

I missed the roof and pretty much flew and hit with a hard thump on the grass. All the wind was knocked out of me and I just sat there panting.

"ZIBBY! ARE YOU OKAY??!" Tristan shouted. I feebly held up the thumbs up, then, clutching my stomach ran all the way home.

X X X X

I shimmied up the trellis again, half dead and silently thanking God that it was Friday.

I threw myself back into my window and layed on the floor. Something cold nudged my nose while I tried to pass out on the floor.

I opened one eye. It was The Mirror. And something was a little funky about it. It was glowing. Seriously GLOWING.

Intrigued, and slightly-okay IMMENSLY freaked out, I ripped off the sheet. And I was looking into a room with midnight blue walls and white stars.

[lilxangel]

Awesome! This is really good. I am glad u kept with it :D Cant wait 4 more

[RandomCrystals]

ooh hahaha sweet, the tim burtonites<33
i am also a helenaist (helena bonham carter fan, she's tim's fiance)

heheh.

ohh great stuff, eek can't wait to read more WOOHOO!


[hehe hot n cold, i love that song :D]

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

lol, i luv them! i think she did a great job as belatrix in hp! im a harry potter dork too. :P

[crazy_in_a_good_way]

This is really good!.
I like it alot. :D
Keep it up!.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

thanks!

[caylee[:]

more! this is so good!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

4.
Strange Magic

Okay. It was TOO weird to even be able to BRIDGE my level of thinking. I sat and stared at it.

I was definetly looking into my dream room. The dark blue walls were the exact shade, and the stars, just enough amount of brightness in each.

My breath caught as I looked at The Mirror. Tarnished, spotty and old. It looked like if I touched it again, it'd fall apart.

Almost quarrying my thoughts and hostility from the afternoon, I reached out a hand to it.

I expected to feel the cool glass of The Mirror, but instead my hand totally disappeared INTO IT.

I jerked my hand out so fast and held it to my chest, I wondered if I had just imagined it. Did that thing just SWALLOW my hand?!

Like the complete NIT BRAIN that I am, I extended my hand again. True to my word, my hand sank right threw like it was water.

I sat up and scooted closer to it. I stared down. My face wasn't reflected like what normal mirrors SHOULD do. Nope. I was still looking into Dream Room Heaven.

Then, I stuck my foot in. Right through, no problem. Then.....I jumped in.

X X X X


I fell, threw inky and absolute blackness. It was like I was doing the torpedo dive right threw my own closed eyelids.

Then, I hit the plush white carpeting. And I wheezed back to life. All the colors here in The Mirror, were inhanced.

Everything's saturation was way up. And I stood, looking around the room I thought I'd never have in awe.

Because this was my heaven. My bliss. My pure serenity! I gazed longily at the large white bed.

Then jumped onto it. I had my eyes closed. I was breathing deeply. This was EXACTLY how my room was supposed to be.

I knew, from the absolute silence echoing from the familiar (but very altered) house, that my family wasn't there.

I opened my eyes again, feeling strangely Dorthy in Oz-ish. I silently wished for a dog that I could whisper "Toto, we're DEFINETLY not in Jersey anymore."

I climbed out of the-my, bed and cracked open the window. The AIR even smelled sweeter!

I pulled myself through, even though an hour before, I had vowed never to go through a window again.

I was sitting on my roof, admiring my dream land. Everything that I had wanted and had imagined was there. Perfectly.

I was in my imagination.

I was sitting there but than a hiss, like a cat sounded behind me. I jumped and spun around.

A boy, around 18 was looking at me. His skin was the color of milk and his eyes were a bloody red.

Fangs were poking out over his bottom lip, which looked like it was dripping blood.

I knew it wasn't, but in contrast to the whitness of everything else on him,they were horribly vivid.

His blonde hair was slightly curly and he leered at me. I yelped and lost my balance on the shingles.

I felt a sickeningly cold sensation as I felt myself tumble off the roof. The last thing I remeber seeing was the boy's face, then he was gone.

I closed my eyes, ready for the fall. But there was none. Instead, a hand, steady and hard on my back was holding me up.

I breathed, and turned. The boy was behind me, holding my stably to the roof. He righted me and continued to stare.

This boy fit every exact cliche description of a creature. He was a vampire.

His sharp fangs glistened like diamonds that reflected off the moon that hung in the air above us.

"H-hi. Thanks for catching me," I whispered. He nodded. I shifted my weight uncomfortably.

How do you talk to a VAMPIRE? There was no one I knew that was in this situation that I could ask for advice.

"I'm Zibby. Isabella," I said.

"I know," he murmered. His voice rang through me. Filling my veins with a warm sap. I swooned a bit.

"Who are you?" I whispered.

"Landon. Landon Kisterin," he replied. I nodded. And he stared. Then he hissed, and lunged.

[huskerrich]

more please

[heyitswhatever]

oh my freaking goodness.
best. chapter. yet.

more!

[caylee[:]

amazing!
more!!

[lilxangel]

Omg awesome. Cant wait for more :D

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

more soon.

[new_york_girl]

more

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

rite now, im too tired to keep my eyes open. gotta b up early tomorrow too. nitey!

[RandomCrystals]

lol, i luv them! i think she did a great job as belatrix in hp! im a harry potter dork too. :P

mmhm :)
yah, she's so cool, i even bought the bellatrix action figure off amazon, I'm a hp freak too, can't wait for the next movie!

:DD
ahhh, i'm hooked on your fanfic, awesome job.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Thankies. lol, i used to be like an hp breather. everything i did was hp related. i grew out of it but i still go to sleep with harry potter tapes on at night. thats how i know the books back to front :P

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

5.
Vampires Will Never Hurt You

Everything in my body froze. From the blood running in my veins and straight to my feet and cementing them in place.

Not only that, but I could practically SEE the blood running like a little river in neat little streams around my body.

I didn't want those rivers to be drained by a vampire. Man, that's a sentence you don't hear everyday.

Out of instinct, I hit the deck and buried my face (neck included) into my arms. I could hear hissing and snarling, then silence.

I looked up cautiously. Landon was restraining a girl with jet black hair, skin the same color as his, like white marbal and ruby red eyes.

Her lips were like his as well, blood red and lusty. And deadly too. Another vampire was lurking on the edge of the roof.

This one was just staring at me. Her liquid mercury eyes seemed to sweep over me like how cheerleaders give you the once over in the halls.

Except, I'm pretty sure that she wasn't checking out my outfit.

"Peyton! NO!" Landon hissed keeping the girl with the black hair under control. She was hissing and growling, and her eyes were fixed on me.

"But it's fresh.......blood," she murmered. Landon looked at me, his red eyes seemed to shrug at me.

"We are not used to having humans here. They are usually....away from here," he said.

"Tell me about it," Peyton snapped. "Let go of me Landon!" Landon released Peyton and she brushed herself off.

She glared hostily at me but refrained from pouncing and sapping the blood out of me.

The other vampire, who had curly brown hair and dark shadows under her eyes, like the other two, didn't move. She continued to look at me.

Landon turned to face me with his hand still on Peyton's shoulder.

"This is Peyton and Hero," he said in that velvety voice of his. It made me shiver with pleasure until I looked at the two stunningly beautiful vampiresses next to him.

Can you believe how alarmingly inadequate I felt compared to them?

"H-hi," I said coming out of my crouching-tiger-hidden-dragon pose. Peyton glared and Hero didn't say anything.

I've noticed that none of them blinked.

"It's her," Hero breathed. We all turned to look at her.

"Excuse me?" I responded. What does she mean HER? Who's HER?

"You're the one."

Landon stiffened, even though I thought he was already rigid to begin with.

"The one what?" I asked. I was pretty damn confused. I didn't like being accused of being the one ANYTHING by vampires.

"The one that Rian Palice is looking for," she replied. I blinked.

"Rian who?" I asked. Landon turned his gaze back on me with a look in his eyes that seemed exhasperated.

"Palice," he said sternly. "She is the evil that rules that part of the land." He pointed behind him.

The dark blue of the sky was beautiful in the night, but when I turned to follow the direction of his finger I saw something that sent chills across my arms.

A sickly dark purple color was creeping across the sky. It seemed to meet in the middle with the blue. The middle was where we were standing.

There was a horrible looking castle underneath the purple. The walls were black and dirty like the Wicked Witch of The West's castle was.

The trees that lined the forest were dead and twisted like the each had their own individual personalities.

"THAT'S her kingdom," Landon said. I stared at it.

"And she's.....evil?" I guessed.

"Hardly," Peyton breezed flowing around me in a circle like a shark. "She won't hurt us. She actually likes us doesn't she Lan?"

Landon glared at her. Peyton smirked. She ran a cold white hand across my neck. I could feel her hand move up in down in time with my pulse.

"But those with a blood stream......." she hissed. There was not breath coming out of her mouth.

"Peyton," Landon said in a warning tone. Peyton (thankfully) withdrew her hand and shrugged.

"So...she's a vampire too?" I asked. They all stiffened at the word "vampire".

"No," Landon said. "She's just well...dead."

This was the first time I had heard Landon pause. He really for a second there sounded NORMAL instead of a person reading a script.

Or a VAMPIRE reading a script that is.

"Dead?" I repeated.

"She's a zombie okay?" Peyton said rolling her red eyes. "Get over it."

"And she's after ME?" I said.

"You're the only one with as much power as her," Landon said. "She wants you finished."

I felt myself swoon, then I really DID fall off the roof.

[new_york_girl]

more

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

more later!

[heyitswhatever]

ooooh.
: D
coolbeanss.
more?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

ill write more later! please comment!

[huskerrich]

more please

[MileyFan077]

This is good. MOREEEE

[heyitswhatever]

I need moree (:

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

ill write more l8r. i have testing this week! YAY!

[MileyFan077]

Yay!!!!!!!!!

[Curly]

Gah. Darn it, you were supposed to wait for me.
Those were two very awesome chapters, BTW.
And it's Twilightishh much?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

lol yeah i guess! did u read my note on my first post? its kinda a spin off of Lewis Carol (ithink)'s Through the Looking Glass, Melissa Marr's Wicked Lovely and of course Stephanie Meyer's Twilight.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

more soon. everythings getting scrwed up rite now.

[Curly]

No. Wait for me.
Or whatever, just don't do something
too interesting for me to miss.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

lol, maybe tomorrow. i dont think anything earth shattering will happen for a bit. dw mandi

[Curly]

Nahhh, our internet is
gonna be cut off. It'd be mean of me
to make everyone wait one whole week.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

since im off for thanksgiving break, ill write more either tonite, or on wednesday.

[Curly]

Yay. Our interenet's
back sooner than I thought. I'm
anticipating that update Vickyy.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

working on it. its weird. this thing is goin REALLY slowly. i guess not many ppl like it bsides u mandi.

[huskerrich]

i guess I'm notmanyppl

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

lol, well thanks for the ppl that r reading it. u r more than amazing! richard. :P

[huskerrich]

thank you, I thought I would be patient, and wait for a real good story.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

lol. well ill hope i give u 1

[MileyandAshleyfan4ever]

More, I loved it!

[Curly]

Well, who cares?
You're not quitting
this fanfic. And things
will be better. Most of
my fanfics sucked. Badly.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

no they didnt!

[Curly]

They did too!

[new_york_girl]

well at least people read yours... no one reads mine.

[caylee[:]

when ever you get free time try to write!
this is like...addicting. xD

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

shpankies. ill write tonite!

[caylee[:]

dude, alex evans is like shexxy. xD

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

hell yeah! i hope hes straight. cuz that would be just depressing if he wasnt. HAHAHA :lol:

[caylee[:]

haha. :P
yeah, i hope he'll wait for me...to find him. xD
he's bisexual i think.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

sigh. so sad.

[caylee[:]

haha. i know. xD

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

but hes still hot as hell.

[MileyFan077]

Maybe you shall POST ANOTHER CHAPTER!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Gimme an hour Rachel! im still brainstorming!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

6.
Fall For You

So, officially, I met a vampire. THREE for that matter. And I was freaked out. I didn't really know what to do.

After I had plunged off the roof like a gigantic sack of potatoes, Landon had appeared on the ground under me, right when I was about to become scrambled eggs on the grass.

He caught me and held me in his arms as I tried to open my eyes. I was too scared to do anything.

"Go home," he whispered in my ear. "It's not safe here for you."

My eyes slowly opened, and I was gazing onto his perfectly flawless face.

"But....I like it here," I whispered back. I felt a woosh of air and I was back on the roof.

"Liking something can be fatal," he said setting me down gently on the shingles. I stared into his violently red eyes and I saw him smiling in them.

"Loving something can be worse," he said. "You can't love it here. If you do, then you'll die."

Then with a whirl of his black trenchcoat, Landon Kisterin was gone. Along with the two other vampires.

I slid into my room. I was slowly starting to figure out Landon. It was almost like piecing together a million pieced jigsaw puzzle of a blue sky.

He didn't show emotions on his face. You could clearly see them in his eyes. He was expressionless unless you took care to stare hard into his face.

But other than that, he was beautiful. If Michael Angelo's famous statue stood next to Landon, it would crumble to dust.

I stood in my posh room, dimwittingly not knowing what to do. Should I spend the night in THIS room or go back to the real world?

Should I tell Tristan about The Mirror, or should I keep it locked inside as an internal secret?

Seeing as how, I still couldn't decide the second one, I decided to tackle the first. I stood in front of The Mirror and was shocked at its appearance.

It was no longer spotted and tarnished. It was polished and shone a brilliant gold. The glass was clear and looked like water.

The Mirror was like everything else. Completely transformed. I stuck a hand into it, grateful to see I could slide through without any problems again.

Then I dove through.

[new_york_girl]

more

[heyitswhatever]

oh my gahdd.
more! (:

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

i luv ur sig lol.

[MileyandAshleyfan4ever]

More!

[caylee[:]

more! :D
this is like...really cool. :P

[SmileyMileyFan95]

This is really good moooooooooorrrreee!!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

thanks! maybe more tonite!

[heyitswhatever]

yaaay (:

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

<3

[Curly]

That was
awesome. Now
do moree.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

id write more, but im SO tired. and im having writers block.

[Curly]

Pah. Writer's block sucks.
For me and you.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

yeppers

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

buuuuuuump

[heyitswhatever]

duuudeee.

i want - scratch that - need more.

:}

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

maybe wednesday or so? i dunno.

[heyitswhatever]

alright. : )
I'll be pretty occupied anyways,
cleaning my room for Chrismas break
when all of my family is coming over.

[Curly]

Writier's block gone?

[blovehannah]

Heyy go and read my ff. Today i post chapter 2 and it's soo cool!!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

umm, its not really nice to advertise on someones FF u kno.

[heyitswhatever]

Seriously, don't advertise your ff on hers.
It's rude.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

and u kinda never read it anyway....srry.

Anyways, I DONT WANNA GO BACK TO SCHOOL! and my moms work times r changing so its gonna be REALLY hard to have time to post. its not gonna be easy.

[heyitswhatever]

I was gonna add something else to that, but it
would have sounded even ruder.
So I didn't [:

But it's also gonna be hard for me to read :P
I finally start Drivers Ed tomorrow, and I don't get
home til about 6oclock.
Then I have homework.
And drivers ed is 6 weeks long :/

[MileyFan077]

More!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

i dont want my mom home. all she does is bug me. and boss me around. and annoy me. i dont want her home in the afternoons!

[caylee[:]

More! :P
A good way to not get writers block is to never run out of ideas. (:
Make a long list of whats going to happen, which you can always change. (:
Then, you can't really run out of ideas. xD :P

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

its wat i usually do. but mentally. then i forget. :P

[caylee[:]

haha. xD
then...write it down! :D

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Hmmmmm.....im thinking its gonna be a filler chapter next. u kno, when nothing really happens cuz its too soon for the big things? :P

[huskerrich]

lol, start filling

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Now its a matter of whats gonna happen IN the filler.....ooo gotta idea! writing!

[Curly]

I think I use fillers too muchh.
Oh, my sister's like addicted to Ruby Gloom.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

I am too! i have like the last surrvivng ruby gloom shirt! cant write today. im leaving for school in 20 minutes.

[Curly]

Grr. I was hoping for an updatee.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

me 2.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Hey guys. Sorry no updates this week. its been pretty insane. im shooting for maybe friday...or today. i dont kno. depending how fast my parents go to sleep. theyre BOTH on vacation. sorta.

[heyitswhatever]

alright, whenever is best for you (:

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

*sigh* this day sucks.

[caylee[:]

why?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

things going on.

[caylee[:]

oh.
hmm, well, take your time.
don't stress yourself out. (;

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Thanx caylee. Ill be fine. ill write at like in a couple hours i SWEAR!

[Curly]

You took so longg.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

okay, maybe on monday. i wasnt here all day yesterday and today. srry

[huskerrich]

np forkie, how are thing going.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

better. not worse and not great.

[Curly]

Aww, that's okayy.
Hope things keep getting betterr.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

me 2. im not gonna catch a break this christmas huh?

[huskerrich]

we aren't that heartless Forkie, just post on the twenty-sixth.

[Curly]

Yeah, the twenty-sixth. Or seventh. Or eigth.
Or you get it.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

thats doable. ill post in a few minutes if i can actually. things are just SLIGHTLY screwed up.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

7.
My Sweet Unvalentine

I dreamed about everything from magical unicorns to vampires in the hall of mirrors. I slept in state of panic and confusion.

When I awoke, I was unsure if I had just dreamed it all. But when I rolled over and stared at The Mirror, I knew I hadn't dreamt it.

I sat up and rubbed my head. My hair was sitting in uneven tufts along my head and I had a throbbing headache.

I threw on some clothes and brushed my hair in a rush, eager to go see Tristan. I flew down the stairs and almost ran over my younger brother.

Michael was a junior at my school and not as much of a social reject as I was. Michael was in the process of eating toast when I ran into him.

"Gee Izz," he said sarcastically. "I wonder where you're going at 6 'o clock on a Saturday."

I smirked at him. He knew that me and Tristan hung out a lot and he often made fun of, to put it his way "my emo boyfriend".

But Tristan was SO far from being my boyfriend. He's the best friend I've ever had in my life.

"Shut up," I said and hurried out the door. I was running flat out towards Tristan's house, until I collided with him on the sidewalk.

"Tris!" I cried.

"Zibs! Why are we shouting?" he asked. We were both sitting sprawled on the sidewalk from our collision.

"Umm, I don't know," I said awkwardly. "But guess what happened to me last night!"

Tristan smiled slightly while his piercings twinkled in the early morning light. His hair was a bit ruffled, and then I started thinking again.

I was thinking on what it would be like if Tristan really WAS my boyfriend.

If I was the one he held close to him and kissed instead of the other poser girls at our school.

And it was ME he spent the night with every nigh. Us falling asleep together. Him being the last thing I saw at night, and the first thing I saw in the morning.

I then turned my attention to my house. Almost as if I was watching a projector playing a movie, Landon's face loomed around the roof of my house.

His eyes smiling at me, his mouth whispering,

"Go home. It's not safe for you here."

"What?" Tristan asked. When I didn't respond, he waved his hand in my face.

"Zibby? Hello?"

"Wha-" I said, coming back to Earth. Then I was staring back at Tristan. Tristan. My best friend. Not my boyfriend.

"Um, never mind Tris," I said. We sat silently for awhile, until Tristan stood up, brushing his skinny jeans off and held out a hand to me.

I took it and he helped me up.

"Okay, then where we going today?" he asked, putting an arm around my waist and pulling me to him in a hug.

"I don't care," I said. I was a little out of it. Landon's red eyes were still dancing mysteriously behind my lids whenever I blinked.

"Okay," he said again and he steered me along the street. Grandparents were picking up the newspaper in the front lawns around the street.

Little kids were running around the road jumping, laughing and screaming. Then there was us. Two teenagers walking hip to hip.

We must look like a couple. The thought unnerved me, and I tentatively broke away from Tristan.

He didn't seem to mind, and he stopped at the next house to help and old man, who was bending down painfully, pick up his newspaper.

The man shot Tristan a small smile and shuffled away hastily. Tristan chuckled lightly.

"He must think I was gonna rob him or something," he said. But he laughed and we continued down the road.

"Zibby, are you okay?" Tristan asked softly. I jumped slightly.

"Um, yeah. Of course! Why?" I asked. Tristan shot me a quizzical look.

"Because you seem....different," he said. I shrugged.

"I don't know. Just a bit tired I guess."

I turned around while Tristan kept walking and stared at my house and wondered what Landon was doing right now.

[huskerrich]

more please forkie

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

ill write more soon. hopefully.

[heyitswhatever]

Awh :P

that's cute (: more!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

more soon. my computers being funky rite now. im pretty sure mandi commented but its gone......and i gave her a message on her lookup....gone too. and one on the fly on the wall music vid.....gone too. and one here....gone too. hmm. odd.

[Curly]

Yeah, I commented, yesterday. But all yesterday's posts/friend requests/profile messages got deleted.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

why? thats weird.

[Curly]

Who knows?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

apparently they got hacked. OH. that makes sense. ok, well more soon!!! i jacked my dads laptop so now i can plan out!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

8.
Our Lady of Sorrow

"So what's it like? You know.....being a vampire," I asked Landon. We were stretched out on my roof watching the large red sun sink.

Well....I was stretched out on the roof. Landon was sitting stiffly, leaning as far away from the house as possible.

"I don't know really. Normal, I guess," he said. I stared up at him. His eyes were as red as the sinking sun.

I sighed. He leaned back a bit to look at me, but when he did this, he winced. This was the first time I had ever seen emotion on his face.

"What's wrong?" I asked sitting up.

"The...house," he said painfully, scooting as far away as possible from the open window.

"I can't be anywhere near it for some reason without it seriously hurting me. I don't know why though."

I looked at him thoughtfully.

"Well, do you want to leave then?" I asked him. He glanced over at me.

"Are you sure you want to?" he asked. I nodded. He got off the roof in a matter of 0.5 seconds.

"Coming?" he asked. I nodded and tried to slide off the roof. It took three tries to even dangle my legs over the side.

Landon came to my rescue and had scooped me into his arms and started walking at such a fast pace.

He was faster walking then a cheetah was at running full speed. I had to clench my fists into him and bury my face into his cold hard shoulder.

Soon, in a matter of seconds, we were in a dark, slightly bluish section of the land. It was a bit farther into the purplish side of the land.

"Landon, why'd you bring that thing here?"

I jumped and clung onto Landon harder. Peyton immerged from the shadows, arms crossed.

"Peyton," Landon said warningly. He was still holding me steadily.

"What? You really think it's smart bringing her closer to Palice's neck of the woods?" she asked.

I hated how none of them blinked. I was starting to get dizzy.

"Where's Hero?" Landon asked tiredly.

"How should I know?" Peyton asked shrugging. "Now be careful Lany," she said backing slowly into the trees.

"Rian can be anywhere."

[huskerrich]

more please

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

i hope theres more too.

[beautiful*soul]

i love it! its totally different than anything ive ever read!
awesome job vicky! more please =]

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

:) thanx!

[caylee[:]

That's what I've been thinking about.
I've never read anything like this.
You're very different from anything I've read before!
More!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

:) im extremely weird. some people would call that unique. lol

[beautiful*soul]

it is definately unique! lol
but its so awesome too!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

:) lol im glad it is. lol

[beautiful*soul]

when are you posting again?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

when *god allowing* my parents will get off my back and let me. :P

[beautiful*soul]

lol
you know parents. its so hard for me to post my stories on youtube without my mom making me do something around the house. i berely get anything out anymore and people get fiesty

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

lol same here. i post so rarely im amazed this things still on the top of the list. :P

[beautiful*soul]

ur such a good writer people alwats comment on ur fan fics lol
atleast i try to

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

:P u make me smwile. and i needed to smile today. thanks!

[beautiful*soul]

anytime! seriously i love making people happy. if ya need to talk, im always here! =]

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

:60: thanks so much. whats ur name?

[beautiful*soul]

Sara.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

thanx sara!

[beautiful*soul]

no problemo! lol

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

:)

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

me sowwy i havent posted in awhile. been very busy. sowwy but i WILL post sometime soon!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

okay well im closing this. sorry guys im not on that much and no ones reading it