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destinydreamer
10-18-2008, 11:56 PM
PLEASE DON'T GO BACK
a fanfiction by destinydreamer

INTRO
Allison was finally out of juvy. Finally. She'd been in it
for six months. I missed her so badly. Normally I loved
the weekend so much. Besides homework, I have
nothing to do. It's fun to relax and just hang out or
shop or something haha. But Sunday night was finally
here. Allison would be at school on Monday, and I
could finally to talk her again. Finally. I missed her so much.
I went to bed early that night, very eager for tomorrow
to get here. Little did I know what was going to happen.

EXPLANATION
OK, so you might wanna know why Allison went to juvy.
If you are, it wasn't her fault. She got the guilt dumped on
her, and someone created "evidence", so she went to
juvy for it.

If anyone wants me to start writing the rest and such,
I'd like a few comments. (:

best_of_both_worlds16
10-18-2008, 11:59 PM
Hannah, more. NOW!
This sounds good. (:

mileycyrus#1fan14
10-19-2008, 12:04 AM
HANNAH! STARTTT!
it sounds awesometastical
*thats the highest rating you can get from me* :P

destinydreamer
10-19-2008, 12:35 AM
OK, I'll write some of it tonight. It's gonaa take a bit though.

danadog75
10-19-2008, 01:43 AM
this sounds soooooo good! you have to start!

mileyfanforever101
10-19-2008, 01:51 AM
post!

new_york_girl
10-19-2008, 03:04 AM
start!

destinydreamer
10-19-2008, 03:19 AM
Chapter 1


Monday morning arrived.
I woke up a few minutes late, so I had to rush a bit.
but I was just gonna rush anyway, and this way I wasn't early for school.
I caught the bus just in time. If I was five seconds later,
I would'a missed it. My luck, right? Well, my heart was beating fast as I
walked up the front steps to the school. Allison had 2nd and 5th-7th periods
with me, so I had an hour and ten minutes before I could see her.



Six months PLUS an hour and ten minutes


Doesn't that suck? That was the only morning I wanted school to start already.
Finally, the bell rang. I sat there listening to Mrs. Repling give a 10-minute speach
about crickets. Seriously, who gives a crap about crickets? Ok, so it is Science,
but I don't see how crickets are gonna be used in the future.
I guess it's like Dr. Vandert said. You have to know it to pass like he had to
to graduate chiropractic school.
Just like my stupid Hudson Taylor timeline. DON'T CARE.
But gotta do it.
Then we had this really stupid worksheet. We were actually supposed to
have been listening to what she was saying, so I had to go through the textbook
to the section on crickets. I spent the rest of the hour doing that.
Finally, finallly, finally, finally.
Second period started in four minutes.
I swung my bag over my shoulder, and followed everyone else
when Mrs. Repling opened her door. I had three and a half minutes
before class started. I had computer next, whuch just happened to be my favorite
subject. I was excited. My favorite period and Allison.



Wait? Was she in band?


Phew, thank God, no!! I could see her headed to computer.
I half followed her in a way, but I was mostly walking to class too.
Finally, I got in the room. She was already seated on the same row as
me, but Derek just had to be in between us.
Derek had an un-returned crush on me. I just didn't like him.
This would be interesting.

MileyFan_4_Ever
10-19-2008, 03:30 AM
Cool. This Is Quite Interesting Hannah. You Should DEFF Post More :)

new_york_girl
10-19-2008, 04:12 AM
more

mileycyrus#1fan14
10-19-2008, 08:51 AM
More Hannah!
I love it :)

huskerrich
10-19-2008, 09:20 AM
more please

WiLDoNE0457
10-19-2008, 09:34 AM
more

danadog75
10-19-2008, 12:02 PM
more! its reallly good!

destinydreamer
10-19-2008, 01:51 PM
wow, yes, I'll post more! but I gotta write more, and I'm on the phone with Anna, so in about 20-40 minutes. kk?

MileyFan_4_Ever
10-19-2008, 02:05 PM
I Really Hope You Mean Minutes! And Not Hours.
Because 20 Hours Is Just WAY Too Long! lol

destinydreamer
10-19-2008, 02:10 PM
haha, trust me, I really mean it. I MEANT 20 mins. lemme edit that. I said I would write some last night, and I did, right?I'm waiting till about 1:45 to start. I'm not going to write on the phone. too hard.
this is the first time a Fanfic I wrote has interest in people, so of course I will write it. trust me Ashley :)

MileyFan_4_Ever
10-19-2008, 02:25 PM
haha That's Good. I Just Wanted To Know If You Meant 20 Minutes :P

destinydreamer
10-19-2008, 02:39 PM
oooh oooh. I meant 12:40 or around there. Anna said 1:40 and she's in the ET, I'm in CT. So, it'll be sonner that that I start.

huskerrich
10-19-2008, 02:48 PM
I'm in CT, too so you are overdue, hannah, just kidding.

MileyandAshleyfan4ever
10-19-2008, 03:40 PM
more!

hannah#1
10-19-2008, 04:13 PM
you should be an author Hannah :)

destinydreamer
10-19-2008, 04:26 PM
awww thanks you guys! I'm so happy you like it. :D

Chapter 2
took my seat next to Derek's chair. He hadn't arrived yet, and Allison
was sharpening her pencil. I was praying that Allison would get back,
but alas, no. Here comes Derek.
He slid into the seat next tome and gave me that annoying toothy grin.
"Hey, Joy, what's up," he asked me?
"Hey Derek, just getting ready," I said, as I turned my screen on.
"Could you sharpen our pencils for us?" I asked him.
"Totally," he said. He jumped up like I was his mother, and I
threatened to ground him if he didn't. He got up and sharpened our pencils.
Now, Allison was talking to the teacher.
GOODNESS, COULDN'T SHE HURRY UP??
Derek just had to get back before Allison.
"Here you go, Joy," he said. He handed me the pencil. I grabbed it from you
before he could hold onto my hand. He always did that and it was quite
annoying to say the least.
Allison finally sat down a few minutes later after the bell had rang.
My computer teacher smiled at us, and gave us directions. It was a
fairly easy day. I kept glancing at Allison. She took no note of me.
Was it just cuz she hadn't seen me? She was looking straight
ahead when she walked next to me. grrr. I was worried now.
We were both in the first people to see be finished, so I figured
now was my chance.
Tyler had just gotten up to sharpen his pencil. I nervously looked at her.
"Hey Allison," I said to her. I smiled a bit as she looked up at me.
"Heyyy, Joy," she said.
She had an uneasy look on her face like I was annoying her.
"So, um, have you been?" I asked.
I knew I'd asked the wrong thing.
Her face darkened. "What do you expect? I've been miserable.
I was accused of a crim that I did not admit, and I had to take
the consequence for someone else's wrong-doing."
She was almost scowling when she said it. But that wasn't what got me.
She was glaring at me, like I did something. Like I was the reason why
she went back to juvy.
I looked at her, thinking of what to say..

new_york_girl
10-19-2008, 04:35 PM
more

MileyFan_4_Ever
10-19-2008, 04:35 PM
YAY! You Posted. Now Post More! That Would Be Just Amazing!!

MileyandAshleyfan4ever
10-19-2008, 04:36 PM
I loved it! more!

MileyFan077
10-19-2008, 05:01 PM
Mo
re!

Iwantsomeeeemoreeefanfiction.
Please...for me?


>>>I'm hypersssss.<<<<

destinydreamer
10-19-2008, 06:21 PM
ooh yayay, you guys want more!! ok, well I'm really busy with the Meaghan tribute right now, and then I got graphics and I wanna read Twilight, so it's gonna be later tonight or tomorrow. sorry, but I just don't have time atm.

huskerrich
10-19-2008, 06:26 PM
okay hannah, we will let you off.

destinydreamer
10-19-2008, 06:28 PM
ahaha thank you Richard!
i really appreciate it :D

danadog75
10-19-2008, 07:08 PM
okay sounds good...

btw, that was ggrreeaaaaatt

destinydreamer
10-20-2008, 12:42 AM
okkk's, this is gonna be tomorrow. sorry but I gotta get off and read twilight reall soon and I don't have any time to really focus. I promise i shall post more tomorrow :D

best_of_both_worlds16
10-20-2008, 09:59 PM
Han-NA-ah! (Opera really is fun :P) Can not wait for you to post more!

destinydreamer
10-20-2008, 10:47 PM
opera is fun.
esp. behind couch pillows :P
ok, so IDK cuz my dad's making me get off early probably
tonight or tomorrow. I feel bad now, lol, but I have food
poisoning and I can't write not feeling well XD
so I guess I'll post when I feel better. I have the whole plot worked out
I just gotta write it now.

MileyFan077
10-21-2008, 07:06 PM
Ok. Update soon.

munchkingirl822969
10-21-2008, 09:15 PM
wow this is pretty good. more!

destinydreamer
10-21-2008, 09:38 PM
I think this is chapter three. I kinda forget atm..

Chapter 3


"I'm sorry you had to spend time in juvy, and you were falsely accused
of why you had to be there."
"You know, that didn't make sense," Allison said.
I could tell she was trying to be really curt and rude with me,
so I decided to back off, but I saw a grin escape the side of her mouth,
like she could resist an almost-laugh. I wish she had laughed. What had possessed her?
Something was in her that I didn't know, and it was slightly scaring me.
"Joy, Joyyyy." She was saying my name.
"Oh, WHAT???" I said, suddenly jumping it. I nearly smacked Derek in the face.
He was just coming back from sharpening his pencil.
"See," he grinned at me, "it's like perfectly sharpened."
"Very nice, Derek," I said, trying to sound happy for him. Was I going to have
to tell him that I wanted to be left alone. He was starting to drive me crazy.
I decided not to carry out our conversation here. I was better off not
speaking for the rest of the day. Derek would just keep interrupting -like he always did-
until I was rude to him, and then I would feel guilt -forever- for hurting his
feelings. I sighed and turned back to my screen. I played a game of Solitaire
for the rest of the hour. I think Mr. Dreak could tell I was in a bad mood.
I usually enjoyed his class, but not today.

sorry it's so short..

munchkingirl822969
10-21-2008, 09:59 PM
cool cool write more!

new_york_girl
10-22-2008, 02:49 AM
more

huskerrich
10-22-2008, 08:59 AM
more please

destinydreamer
10-22-2008, 02:17 PM
haha ok guys. So, are you reading my bff Anna's FF "In an empty room, you're the one I see </3"?? OK, so she said that she has a lot to do on internet. This is what I've got to do today:

- Jonas Gallery
- Meaghan Tribute
- Keke Fansite
- Jordan Fansite
- Graphics
- SCHOOL BEFORE ANY OF THIS

So, I'm kind of limited on time today. If I post, it's gonna be like 11:30pm XD
So, I'ma post tonight or tomorrow, but not earlier than 11:30. xoxo

MileyFan077
10-22-2008, 06:16 PM
More!

destinydreamer
10-23-2008, 12:45 AM
^tomorrow

destinydreamer
10-25-2008, 12:23 AM
ok, I'm writing more tonight when I hang up with Anna :))

destinydreamer
10-28-2008, 08:55 PM
dangg, three posts in a row :o
I lost the internet in my room, but i'm getting it back tonight/tomorrow.
I swearr as soon as I get it back i'm posting. I've got it written, just not up yet.

destinydreamer
10-29-2008, 05:02 PM
I finally got my internet back up :D

The period finally ended and I went to my next periods.
The rest of the day passed by fairly quickly. I hate school,
so it didn't pass fast enough, but it still passed. Even though I really wanted to,
I decided not to talk to Allison for the rest of the day, cuz I didn't want to bug her.
I was worried about her, so I decided to tell my dad.
My mom wasn't home, and I never talk to my dad about this kind of stuff,
but I was thinking that an adult could help, and my mom wouldn't be back until Friday.
My dad was watching TV, so I did my homework first, and then made dinner.
He couldn't cook to save his life.
"Dad," I began, as we sat down. He looked up at me.
"Yeah Joy?" he asked.
"You remember Allison?"
"Oh yeah, hasn't she been in juvy for six months?" he asked me.
"Yes," I sighed, "and I think it somehow got to her. She was really strange in school,
and she's angry. I think she was taking it out on me."
"Joy," my dad sighed as he liked at me. "That's not too surprising. I mean, she did
just have a very long, unfair punishment for something she didn't even do. Just give her,
time she'll come around."
I sighed. "Dad,"
He looked at me.
I continued, "Do you think there's the possibillity that she won't be my friend anymore?"
He sighed. Uh-oh. He always sighed when things were going to be or could be negative.
"There's always that possiblity," he said, "it can happen to anyone in any circumstance.
I remember..." I stopped listening then. He was going to talk about Mitch. Mitch was his
best friend in high school who just suddenly stopped talking to him. I was so tired of hearing
the story. It was insensitive to him, but you get bored of listening to your best friend talk
about a guy she's crushing on sometimes if she won't shut up about it, right?
Oohhh, I can relate to that. I got up and cleared the table after me and my dad finished eating.
I was tired, but I didn't go to bed for a while. I mean, how could I sleep?
I felt that way many nights in a row. I wasn't talking to Alli, cuz I wanted her to talk to me
when she was ready, but it was killing me. I didn't talk to my mom about it, cuz I was
thinking she would say the same thing as my dad, and that would just make me more
depressed. But nothing else was suffering. Besides Allison, everything else in life was normal,
little did I realize that things weren't going to stay normal.

best_of_both_worlds16
10-29-2008, 10:57 PM
More, Hannah!

Hannahfan_eva211
10-30-2008, 08:51 PM
More ms. Hannah! Get those fingers a typin!

huskerrich
10-30-2008, 08:56 PM
more please hannah

destinydreamer
10-30-2008, 08:59 PM
I had a very long chapter written, and I just lost everything on here :S I had to do system recovery. *rewrites* I'll post it tonight or tomorrow since they'res three comments

gracias!

destinydreamer
10-31-2008, 05:09 PM
next chapter. I lost count lol, but I think it's four or five.

I woke up early and got up and dressed and all.
The weather forecast was cloudy and rainy, but once again the meteorologist must have been wrong.
The day was quite lovely with the sun shining brightly outside. I could hear voice downstairs, so I knew
my dad was leaving for work, and my mom would soon be upstairs making sure I was up. I was in the
bathroom brushing my teeth when she came in. She said she'd be home by 6pm, and asked me to dust
the furniture in the livingroom before I watched TV. I knodded and hugged her, and we both left the
bathroom. She was headed to work, I was headed to school.

School was the same boring thing. Only, today was Friday, so it was better. Plus, we had early release
today. I only had to stay at school till 11:30am. After that, I was going to the mall with Seresha. You know
how when school is shorter the day seems to drag so much longer than usual? Today was one of those days
I almost fell asleep in 2nd period, and I did in 3rd. Thankfully Marcia woke me up before I actually managed to.
Ms. Brink would give me detention after school if I did: I GUARANTEE you.

School finally ended, and me and Seresha and Marcia went to Chick-fil-A, got milkshakes, and then Seresha
and I headed to the mall. Marcia would have gone with us, but she was going out of town for the weekend, and
she had to leave in a few hours. We rode our bikes there after we finished our milkshakes, and looked around for
like an hour...I don't really remember all that we did, since this was two years ago, but we left around five. It was
kind of dark when we did, seeing as it was in December, and we hadn't brought jackets so we were cold.
"Hey Joy!" a voice startled me.
"Whaa? Who's there?" I said, looking around.
Allison and two kids I'd never seen before appeared. They'd been standing on the side, so I was in their view
before they were in mine. "Uh, hi guys," I said. It was kinda wierd Alli was talking to me all of a sudden.
"Where you going?" she asked. She had a look on her face like she was trying to look tough.
"Home," I said, "it's cold out here, and it's getting dark."
"Oh," Allison said, like she was expecting me to say something else. She looked at the other two
kids, realizing me and Seresha were staring at them. "This is Dylan and Mark she said." A girl appeared
around the corner. "And that's Aaryn," she said. "We came here a bit ago, and we're gonna go to a
movie. Do you know what's playing?"
Seresha and I shook our heads and started to turn.
"Wait!"
We turned around.
Allison knodded her like, "come here". "Let's go," Seresha whispered to me.
I shrugged and we followed Allison around the corner.
Little did I know that in about 10 seconds, it would be the worst move I'd ever make..

MileyandAshleyfan4ever
10-31-2008, 05:12 PM
More!

Hannahfan_eva211
10-31-2008, 05:21 PM
Moreeeeee

adolphin
10-31-2008, 09:21 PM
more now girlie!!!
<33333333333333333333

destinydreamer
11-01-2008, 03:46 AM
Thanks for all the sweet comments guys. It means a lot to me :D


I turned around a corner and let out a huge gasp. There was a wall covered in grafitti.
There were very rude words, along with swear words, on the wall, and three police officers
standing there. I was in shock for a second.
"Allison, what happened? Did you do this?" I had a tone of shock, horror, and panic all mixed together
in my voice. The officer looked in my direction when I said that. I felt a chill go down my spine.
Allison gave me a dark look. She turned and smiled at the officer.
"Officer, these are the two girls who did this. Joy Croam and Seresha McTant."
I froze. Allison had brought us back here to put the blame on us for something that...
wait! Had she done this and then framed us? I looked from Allison to Seresha to the officer.
Allison had a stone cold look on her face that I could read, Seresha was trembling. I couldn't
tell if she was nervous, scared, anxious, or all three. The officer had a semi-angry, semi-confident
look on his face. He was the one I was worried about. He could arrest me. That would end my world.
Then it hit me. I looked Allison. I could tell she was fighting to hold her expression. She was
trying not to smile.
"Joy Croam and Seresha McTant," the officer said. He walked up to us. In two minutes time
I was in handcuffs with Seresha and "under arrest". "Officer, we didn't do it," I cried. Tears were
welling up in my eyes. I didn't know what to think. I just blurted out, "I bet Allison did it, she was
just in juvy for six months. Sir, please!" The officer half-smiled at me. "Oh don't worry, miss," he said,
"I don't have proof that you did it. You're simply a suspect. Allison is a suspect too"
Allison froze and made an attempt to run, but the officer caught her. I was still very anxious and worried
and downright scared, but I was happy Allison wasn't getting away.

A thousand thoughts went through my head.
Could Allison have done this and then framed me?
Why would she do that? Does she hate me now?
Does she want me to go through what she went through?
And the main thought that went through my head...
What's going to happen to me?
I was downright scared to me. Five or ten minutes later... I lost track...went by, and I was sitting in the back
of the officer's car, with Allison on my right, and Seresha on the left. I wouldn't look at Allison, but Seresha
and I were staring at each other. I was so scared that I could barely hear the officer say "One Call" to me. I
just knodded and put the numbers in to my mom's phone. I'd never made one call this important before.

adolphin
11-01-2008, 04:26 PM
rite!
plz??!?!?!?!?!?!!?
(:

jasondolleylover1
11-01-2008, 05:01 PM
oh. my. gosh.
keep typing!!!
that's amazing

destinydreamer
11-01-2008, 05:54 PM
thanks guys :)


The phone rang and rang and rang. Two more rings and it would go to voicemail.
I was silently praying. "Rii-hello?"
"Ohmygoodness, Mom," I said, breathlessly.
"Joy, what's wrong?" she asked. A tone of panic entered her voice on 'what's'?
"Mom, don't freak," I said, trying to sound calm. It wasn't really working though.
"I'm at a police station. Allison framed me and Seresha for graffiti at the back of
the mall. I need you to come down here as soon as you can." I could hear the
panic in my mom's voice, and I could tell she was doing a good job of trying not
to go hysterical. "I'll be right there, hunny," she said. We both hung up, and I
gave the phone to Seresha.
The officer looked at me. "What did she say?"
I couldn't look back at him, but I said, "She'll be here as soon as she can."
"Is she on her way now?"
"Yes sir, but it's a 20-minute drive."
Seresha's mom worked at the same place my mom does, so they both came together.
My mom looked like she'd been crying. She gave me a bear hug. I think Seresha's
mom was just plain mad that her daughter got framed for something she didn't do.
We had to do a bunch of stuff that I don't remember, but my mom was freaking out when
the took my picture. She said it was the worst thing ever to see that happen to her daughter.
I got to go home that night, which I was very relieve about, and I had to go to court
in three days. I was nervous, scared, and more angry with Allison than I'd ever been with anyone
in my life.

adolphin
11-01-2008, 10:28 PM
MORE!
plzZz???!

Hannahfan_eva211
11-01-2008, 10:44 PM
Moreeeee

jasondolleylover1
11-03-2008, 05:33 PM
uhh.. wow
more please??

destinydreamer
11-03-2008, 07:00 PM
Chapter 8

Things didn't go so well with my dad though. He didn't entirely believe I wasn't guilty, which made me so mad.
If my own father didn't believe, why would the judge? Seresha and I really tried to enjoy the last few days before
our trial. But, we couldn't. It was too hard knowing in a few days our lives could change. We went to the movies
and had a sleepover anyways though.

Finally, the day of the trial came. I was scared. I was shaking when I got dressed. My dad had work that day so
he couldn't come, but my mom never had to work on Saturday. I could tell she had been trying, as she was
wiping her eyes when I came down the stories. "Morning, Mom," I said in a very low, subdued voice. I was trying
to prevent my voice from breaking. I knew I couldn't say anything else, cuz otherwise it would.
"Good morning, Joy," my mom said. Her voice cracked on Joy.
She sat me down at the table and gave me three pancakes, orange juice, and the bottle of whipped cream.
She sat down next to me, and ate a bland pancake and drinked coffee.
It was very awkward. She didn't say anything because she didn't know how I would take anything she said,
and I didn't say anything because I didn't want my voice to break. If I was going to keep my composure,
silence was the answer.

We left the house a bit later after getting fully ready. When we got in the car, so she turned and looked at me.
"Now, Joy, hunny," she said. She had to pause cuz tears were welling up in her eyes.
"You didn't do...anything wrong at...all. Just be honest with...the judge...and be yourself....
and know that...no matter what...happens I'll always love you."
I smiled, tears welling up in my eyes too, and we hugged.
It was a very long drive (45 minutes), and it couldn't have seemed to last longer.
When we finally got there, she gripped my hand very hard. "My voice can't break in there,"
she said looking at me. "Don't let yours either." I knodded and smiled.
My mom was kind of an emotional wreck at the moment. I was doing well with my composure,
but I knew I was gonna break eventually. There was only a ten minute wait after we'd gone
through a bunch of stuff. I walked into the courtroom and took my seat. I felt scared, confident though,
and most of all, nervous. I had never wanted this day to come. For me to be here. It wasn't right or fair.
I saw Allison and Seresha both in different places. Allison had an arrogant look on her face, and
Seresha and I stared at each other, and until the judge came into the room.
"All rise..." and the trial had began.

Hannahfan_eva211
11-03-2008, 07:23 PM
Moreeee!!!!!!!!

jasondolleylover1
11-03-2008, 08:40 PM
wow. that's really good

destinydreamer
11-03-2008, 10:00 PM
thanks Kam
THANK YOU CHELE!!!!

how about tomorrow? I'm kinda busy tonight

Hannahfan_eva211
11-03-2008, 11:16 PM
I guess :| but if your busy ok.

destinydreamer
11-05-2008, 05:55 PM
thanks for waiting!
ok, so my www isn't working right now
so I have to wait for it. I'm writing the
next chapter tonight, and I just gotta
wait for my www and then I'll post it :)

Hannahfan_eva211
11-05-2008, 07:05 PM
okay!

jasondolleylover1
11-06-2008, 05:45 PM
YOU'RE WELCOME HANNAH!
now post before i jump through
a computer screen and the internet
to get to your darn good story!

destinydreamer
11-06-2008, 07:16 PM
Chele, DO THAT!! haha XD
I have three chapters written,
and I will post two in the same day
to make up for this. I'm sorry my
computer is so darn annoying. I'll
get on it and post this the second
I have internet again :)

MileyFan077
11-06-2008, 07:27 PM
Excited for more!

Hannahfan_eva211
11-06-2008, 08:41 PM
Awesome

destinydreamer
11-06-2008, 10:42 PM
NEXT CHAPTER


Things didn't go so well with my dad though. He didn't entirely believe I wasn't guilty, which made me so mad.
If my own father didn't believe, why would the judge? Seresha and I really tried to enjoy the last few days before
our trial. But, we couldn't. It was too hard knowing in a few days our lives could change. We went to the movies
and had a sleepover anyways though.

Finally, the day of the trial came. I was scared. I was shaking when I got dressed. My dad had work that day so
he couldn't come, but my mom never had to work on Saturday. I could tell she had been trying, as she was
wiping her eyes when I came down the stories. "Morning, Mom," I said in a very low, subdued voice. I was trying
to prevent my voice from breaking. I knew I couldn't say anything else, cuz otherwise it would.
"Good morning, Joy," my mom said. Her voice cracked on Joy.
She sat me down at the table and gave me three pancakes, orange juice, and the bottle of whipped cream.
She sat down next to me, and ate a bland pancake and drinked coffee.
It was very awkward. She didn't say anything because she didn't know how I would take anything she said,
and I didn't say anything because I didn't want my voice to break. If I was going to keep my composure,
silence was the answer.

We left the house a bit later after getting fully ready. When we got in the car, so she turned and looked at me.
"Now, Joy, hunny," she said. She had to pause cuz tears were welling up in her eyes.
"You didn't do...anything wrong at...all. Just be honest with...the judge...and be yourself....
and know that...no matter what...happens I'll always love you."
I smiled, tears welling up in my eyes too, and we hugged.
It was a very long drive (45 minutes), and it couldn't have seemed to last longer.
When we finally got there, she gripped my hand very hard. "My voice can't break in there,"
she said looking at me. "Don't let yours either." I knodded and smiled.
My mom was kind of an emotional wreck at the moment. I was doing well with my composure,
but I knew I was gonna break eventually. There was only a ten minute wait after we'd gone
through a bunch of stuff. I walked into the courtroom and took my seat. I felt scared, confident though,
and most of all, nervous. I had never wanted this day to come. For me to be here. It wasn't right or fair.
I saw Allison and Seresha both in different places. Allison had an arrogant look on her face, and
Seresha and I stared at each other, and until the judge came into the room.
"All rise..." and the trial had began.

Hannahfan_eva211
11-06-2008, 10:52 PM
^ huh we already read that?

destinydreamer
11-06-2008, 10:55 PM
OOOOPS!
sorry!!!!!


Every inch of me was shaking in fear.
I could see Seresha was in the exact same position as me.
I was scared XD scared.

After I sat back down, I kind of tuned the room out.
I had to try to relax, even though my trial had just begun.
My trial for something I didn't do. I was giving Allison an evil stare.
She saw me and returned it.

It pained me, but I realized that Allison wasn't my friend anymore.
Allison had planned this whole thing because she was angry with me.
Now, I know I haven't mentioned this, but I was waiting for the right
time in the story. I think you've had two questions all along.

#1 - What did Allison get framed for?
Allison got framed for theft. She had a look-a-like, and someone
someone got a hold of her fingerprint, and left it in the store for the
police when they came to investiage.

#2 - Why was Allison angry with me?
Allison was angry with me for not telling the officer that she wasn't guilty.
I hadn't been there, I didn't even know what happened.
How was I supposed to tell him that she wasn't guilty when I didn't even know what happened?
It is illegal to law to an officer.

So, my dad was right for once in his life, in a way.
Sometimes you're friends don't come back. I realized that this is one of those situations.
It really hurts, but they're's nothing you can do about it.
I realized that somehow I had to tell the judge this or I was gonna be in trouble...
Allison was smart enough to have planted evidence that we did it.
I could tell, based on the look on her face...

Hannahfan_eva211
11-06-2008, 11:00 PM
np MORE!

destinydreamer
11-07-2008, 04:08 AM
mmmk, a few more comments?

jasondolleylover1
11-07-2008, 08:07 AM
more hannah more!

MileyandAshleyfan4ever
11-07-2008, 01:17 PM
more more!

jasondolleylover1
11-07-2008, 05:20 PM
that was 2!!

destinydreamer
11-07-2008, 05:44 PM
ok, this is a major twist in the story. if it's confusing, ask me and I'll try to explain it better.


I didn't want to step out of line and risk getting in trouble, so I waited until it was my turn.
That took forever and ever. Finally, he called on me.
"Your honor," I began, "before I defend myself, can I explain something here?" I asked.
I was very nervous and timid, but I had a confidence in me I didn't have before.
The judge seemed a bit surprise, but gave me the go-ahead.

"Six months ago Allison was framed for a crime she didn't commit.
Someone who was identical to her planted her fingerprint in a store
where they committed theft. I didn't tell the officer that she didn't do it when he asked,
because I didn't know if she was guilty or not, and it's illegal to lie to an officer.
Allison had to spend six months in juvy, and she wasn't the same when she got back.
I believe she's holding a grudge against me for this. She might not have been in juvy
if I had told the officer that."

The judge stared at me for a moment. I realized everyone in the room was staring at me.
My mom had a look on her face like was a crazy, but also like she was proud of me.
I felt confident, and then I looked at the judge. I think he was trying to stare me down.
I was trying to deep-breathe without it being noticeable, but that didn't work at all.
"So, you're trying to tell me that you think Allison framed you for this for revenge,
because she was framed by someone else for something that she didn't do."
He paused.
"And then she was angry with you and framed you for something, because if you'd
told the officer she didn't do it, she may have not been sent to juvy?" he asked.

I knodded.
He sighed.
He turned to Allison.
"Allison, is this true?"
Allison sighed too. "Well I can't tell you if it's true," she said.
"Why can't you?" I asked impatiently. She was gonna come up with some stupid story
to keep me framed. Then again, she probably already had one.

"What I mean," she said, "is that Allison isn't here, so she can't tell you."
"What?" the judge asked. "Then where is she?"
Allison, I mean whoever this girl was, looked at the judge like he was stupid.
"How am I supposed to know that? Last time I saw her was when I got her fingerprint
when she was asleep. I come from a poor family, so I rob to cover the things I need."
The judge sighed.
Everyone in the room was in a bit of a shock.
I was stunned. "Why didn't I realize this before?" I said aloud.
"Allison wouldn't treat me like that. "And how do you look like Allison?" I asked.

"It's a simple story," she said. "First of all, my name is Megan. I'm Allison's twin.
Our [Allison and Megan's] mom was married to someone else before our dad.
She had us, my brother Clint, and her brother Richard. Clint is from my dad, and
Richard is from our mom's first marriage."
The judge had a questioning look on his face.
"Why did you frame your twin?" he asked her, rather puzzled.
"It's a long story," Megan sighed.
"Begin."
"Yes, sir."
And then came the story that answered everything.

MileyFan077
11-07-2008, 06:18 PM
Ooooh. That was good.
MORE!

destinydreamer
11-08-2008, 01:35 AM
mmm thanks :)
a few more comments please?

and I can't really write right now.
I lost a loved one and I'm really really sad over it
right now. i can't concentrate enough to

caylee[:
11-08-2008, 04:58 AM
this is really good!
and i'm sorry.
feel better, and maybe take a break and feel better! (:

Hannahfan_eva211
11-08-2008, 11:50 AM
M o r e e e

jasondolleylover1
11-08-2008, 12:22 PM
oh no...
i'm so sorry hannah.
i'll be thinking
and praying for you

destinydreamer
11-09-2008, 02:22 PM
mmm sorry guys :(
I'm just really sad and upset right now.
I just can't concentrate enough to write a good chapter.
just give me some time please (: I'll write more when I can.

huskerrich
11-09-2008, 03:12 PM
hannah, sorry to hear about the loss of a loved one, hope you feel better soon,

destinydreamer
11-10-2008, 05:33 PM
I'm feeling better.
next chapter:


I watched Megan. It was like her mouth was moving in slow motion as she talked.
I drank in every word she said.

"My mom had Allison and I when she was kind of poor. She wanted both of us to have
happy childhood's, but by the time we were five, she couldn't support both of us. Her
job was barely supporting to of us. So, she decided that one of us had to go live with her first husband,
who suggested that one of us did. For some reason, he seemed to like Allison better. For some reason,
I believe Mom did too.

So, I had to go live with a guy who wasn't my real dad, and his wife. Like, living with two step-parents.
I hated it, and so I've been holding a grudge on Allison. She's gotten to live with our brothers and her
real parents, and I've been stuck as the only child with two step-parents. It sucks so hard, and I hate
it. I figured maybe if Allison did something stupid, I could get to live with Mom. But no, that wouldn't work.
Allison doesn't do anything stupid. So, I came up with a plan to frame her for something, and it was
easy since we're identical twins. I'm sorry to Allison, and I esp. mad cuz Mom still doesn't want me."

I had my mouth half open the whole time. I couldn't believe this.
Allison hadn't done it. And over the past few weeks, I'd convinced
myself that she had.

The judge was studying Megan's face the whole time like he was trying to make sure she wasn't lying.
I didn't blame him. A major twist in this story.
"Allison, I'm sorry," the judge said, "apparently your sister is a vengeful person."
He turned to Megan. "I can't believe you would do something to your sister."
"And," Megan asked, as if she was waiting for a punishment.
"To be decided," the judge read her mind. He got up and left the room.
"Megan, how could you?" Allison asked her.
"Just shut up, Alli," Megan said. She sat down and half hunger head,
half-scowled. We all waited anxiously for the judge to return.

best_of_both_worlds16
11-11-2008, 12:23 AM
Hannah! More! <3

huskerrich
11-11-2008, 09:02 AM
more please

MileyandAshleyfan4ever
11-11-2008, 11:02 AM
More!

destinydreamer
11-11-2008, 03:45 PM
after i take a nap I'll write more.
thanks guys!

destinydreamer
11-12-2008, 08:00 PM
This is the 13th chapter I think? And I'm nearly done with the story guys. There's only about 2 chapters (max) left.


It didn't take too long for the judge to get back.
About five minutes; but that five minutes was the longest five minutes of my life.
The judge finally came outt.

I don't remember what happened.
I know the judge didn't want Megan to go to juvy for some reason.
This seriously ticked off Alli, and I could see why.
She had to do 500 hours of community service though.
She said that she would have preferred to 'rot in juvy' vs that, so I guess the judge was smarter than we thought.
She had to rake leaves on the sidewalk for 500 hours. It took her over a year to do that. She did on for six hours
on Saturday and Sunday and three hours every day after school.

She and Allison weren't on very good terms for a while.
She was holding a grudge on Allison for not just 'being the bigger person and letting it go'
and Allison was angry that Megan wouldn't even aplogize to her.
Their mom wouldn't take Megan back, cuz she was very angry with what happened to Allison.
She told her that she never meant for her to feel that way and she should havve just told her.
So, now Megan spends all summer and some weekends with her mom. Her step-parents ended
up having a little boy, so they weren't lonely, and so Megan isn't the 'only child' anymore.

About two months after Megan was done with her community service, she and Allison made up.
I think everyone was very glad that happened. They were twin sister and they were angry with each
other for at least a year. No one likes to see sisters like that :(

So, as you can see, everything turned out fine.

I'm glad I didn't lie to that officer and tell him Alli didn't do it.
Wanna know why?
Well, if I had, Allison and Megan still wouldn't be on good terms and something bad could happen to Allison at any time.
I think her sister would still be evil XD

Hannahfan_eva211
11-13-2008, 05:50 PM
aww it is :( well more whennn yyyooouuu cannnn :))

destinydreamer
11-13-2008, 05:51 PM
yeahh, I'm debating on how to end it. there's a few things i've gotta say, so I'm trying to think of how to combine them so it works naturally :P

destinydreamer
11-14-2008, 06:41 PM
ok, I'm working on it now, but I'd like a few more comments for me to post it (:

jasondolleylover1
11-17-2008, 05:27 PM
write more!!!

crazy_in_a_good_way
11-17-2008, 06:38 PM
V. nice story.

Destiny9910
11-17-2008, 07:42 PM
more

jasondolleylover1
11-18-2008, 08:37 PM
keep goin!
=]

MileyFan077
11-18-2008, 10:00 PM
More!

destinydreamer
11-20-2008, 05:23 PM
ok, this is the very last chapter. I hope you guys like it.


My mom has always told me that doing the right thing will always benefit you.
Sometimes it can be hard to, especially if who you helped is leaving you.
About three months after all this was worked out, I got a letter in the mail:

"Dear Joy,
It's Allison and Megan. We wanted to thank you so much for everything you've done. It really means a lot to us.
Inadvertdantly, you brought two sisters back together. We're getting along, loving be twins, and pulling pranks on our
little brother, who we're positive is sick of having twin sisters, haha.

We realize that what you did, no matter how you could've looked at it, you saved our friendship.
You could have lied to that officer, and gotten us all off the hook, but instead you did the right thing.
Now, we're best friends again.

We both love you tons, but there's one teensy little problem.
We're not gonna be able to see you a lot.
We're both moving to Kansas. Now, if you're wondering why we're moving so far away,
it's cuz our step-dad, who Megan lives with, is going away on a business trip.
Mom can't afford for both of us to live with her, and our step-mom won't take care of
three kids by herself. So, Mom agreed that Allison and I should go together. So, we're gonna be gone
this year, and probably we're gonna go until we graduate, for the next three years.
It's a long ride, the tuition is costly, and we got a discount price, so Mom's going with it.

We're really gonna miss you, and we love you.

Love Always,
Alli and Meg."

I sighed and put the letter down. After what had happened through the past year, I was losing my best friend,
who was going to Kansas. I live in Florida! This really sucks. Like my mom said, doing the right thing doesn't
always turn out well in the end either. You got that one right.

Either way, Alli and Meg come down in the summer and spend it with me, and seeing family.
I really miss them the other 9 months of the year, but there's not much to do about that.

So you see, it didn't turn out exactly as I would've planned, but it turned out just fine.
You've got to take the best road in life.

THE END

Hannahfan_eva211
11-20-2008, 05:39 PM
AWESOMETASTIC HANNAH :o

destinydreamer
11-20-2008, 07:34 PM
thanks Kam.
I really enjoyed writing it.

jasondolleylover1
11-23-2008, 09:42 PM
uhhh... wow

destinydreamer
11-23-2008, 10:50 PM
:o good or bad??