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adolphin
10-10-2008, 02:50 PM
I heard the door slam downstairs, and saw that my dad was leaving. 3 years old. How could he do that to me?

11 years old. My mom left me, and I was on my own. Breaking down crying was my only memory. He could she do that to me?


18, my boyfriend slammed the door, and left me standing dumbfounded. How could he do that to me?

I need someone back in my life. Someone to help me get through the day. Someone to hug me when I needed it. My boyfriend's family? Maybe...He left them too.



Do you see how much I need you right now? When your gone...The pieces of my heart are missing you...When your Gone...The face I came to know is missing too. When Your Gone...The words I need to hear...to always get me through the day...And make it Okay.



I miss You
---Avril Lavigne---



Chapters;;;



3 comments for me to start...
totally chan
10-10-2008, 03:17 PM
owww start!
huskerrich
10-10-2008, 03:41 PM
two, dolphin, glad to have yous back doing ff
mileycyrus#1fan14
10-10-2008, 04:18 PM
Bree! START!!!
destinysmiles!
10-10-2008, 06:27 PM
start
adolphin
10-10-2008, 08:30 PM
Chapter 1
Slamming the Door


"Joe! Joe Please! Don't Leave Me! You know I hate people leaving me,"

"Do you THINK I care? You don't-"

"I don't what?"

"I-I , nothing, I just-have to leave!"

"Joe!"

"No, just, no,"

He walked out, slamming the door.

I could'nt believe it.

"How could he do that to me?" As I had said 7 years before, and so on.

My father had left me, slamming the door.

MY mom had left me, slamming the door.

And now my boyfriend has left me, slamming the door.

I had a real problem with that.

Slamming doors.

I knew it hurt people, so I never did it.

Because I had felt the hurt.


Why would he leave me?




Kayy, whatcha guys think?
huskerrich
xDD
yahh!
It feels good too!
WiLDoNE0457
10-10-2008, 08:42 PM
that was good, can't wait for more
HannahMontanaismyhero
10-10-2008, 09:20 PM
Oooo Bree chiiiiillls!! morrree!!!
WishingGirl
10-11-2008, 01:23 AM
More.
ilygracie
10-19-2008, 11:07 AM
bree!!!!!!!!
haha =]
this is awesomeee!
more pleaseee
huskerrich
10-19-2008, 11:16 AM
more please
danadog75
10-19-2008, 11:57 AM
sooooooo good! more soon
MileyandAshleyfan4ever
10-19-2008, 03:36 PM
More please!
adolphin
10-25-2008, 10:31 PM
Love Again
Chapter 2

Do you believe that Love is infaninte?

I Don't.

Crying.
That's what I believe is Infaninte.

True Lovae Only comes around once in a life time.

But Crying comes to lots of people every day.
Not Everyone, but Lots.

Im one of them.

Why do people have to hurt the way they do when a loved one is gone?

Is it because pain is the answer to them leeaving?

Pain is not love, becasue Love is supposed to be true.

But sometimes, it's not.








Srry for the short chappie.
xD
I was in a deep mood today.
I want to get you thinking.

But is there really anything to think about?
Hannahfan_eva211
11-01-2008, 11:38 PM
Morreeeeeeeeee
WiLDoNE0457
11-01-2008, 11:48 PM
more!
caylee[:
11-02-2008, 12:48 AM
more. [: