View Full Version : Hannah and the Vampires [A Twilight/Hannah Montana Story]
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The day was comming, Renesmee was nearly a whole year old but she could pull it off as a 6 year old anyday. Me and Edward wanted to get her something amazing for her birthday. We were sitting on the couch discussing the big day. My little angel was out hunting with Jacob, they could be gone for hours. We knew exactly what she wanted more than anything. To meet Hannah Montana, and this was something we were going to get her.
Do you think I should continue? comment =D
-Trailer
(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=plqu2CBzrKs)
Chapters-
1- How fast a year can pass (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2347853&postcount=12)
2- My Poor Little Girl (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2350239&postcount=21)
3- The search for the tickets (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2353919&postcount=26)
4- It's all about who you know (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2357556&postcount=35)
5- Where not hiding anything (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2359789&postcount=41)
6- Plane Trip (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2369440&postcount=47)
7- Hannah Montana (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2376405&postcount=55)
8- The Greatness of Meeting a Celebrity (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2383082&postcount=60)
9- Your in great danger (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2394112&postcount=64)
10- Sleepover (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2402276&postcount=72)
11- Meet the Cullens (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2407868&postcount=75)
12- It's not your Fault (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2413086&postcount=80)
13- Don't Be Sorry (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2429686&postcount=88)
14- Warning (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2433951&postcount=94)
15- Beach Trouble (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2446667&postcount=100)
16- Visitor (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2464086&postcount=105)
17- Meeting (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2481027&postcount=107)
18- Time to Kill (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2498692&postcount=114)
19- You and Me Together (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2512813&postcount=124)
20- Merry Christmas (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2534330&postcount=128)
huskerrich
09-25-2008, 09:17 AM
what do you think, megz,
what do you think, megz,
I made a Trailer
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=plqu2CBzrKs
I may post it on youtube instead of this site if people like it a lot =D
huskerrich
09-25-2008, 09:26 AM
just saw it, I added you as a subscription, a video ff, that sound interesting but a lot of work
just saw it, I added you as a subscription, a video ff, that sound interesting but a lot of work
no trouble for me =P
I have a lot of spare time a head of me holidays :D
HannahMontanaismyhero
09-25-2008, 09:36 AM
souds cool.
cutiepie7897
09-25-2008, 05:41 PM
I love Twilight!!! Not a big fan of Miley Cyrus/Hannah Montana thoughh. If you havn't noticed I never use miley in my ffs, only like 2 or 3 times but that was a while ago. lol. But this sounds good. Continue!!
indianrockyeah
09-25-2008, 06:56 PM
You need to start this.
You need to start this.
lol i will soon =D
mileyfanforever101
09-25-2008, 11:04 PM
start.
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It was early in the morning, although it made no difference to me. Today me and Edward would let Charlie spend some quality time with Renesmee while we did some birthday shopping. Renesmee didn't want a lot for her birthday, she was such a lovely child. Sometimes I find it hard to believe she is mine.
"Bella dear we will have to wake Renesmee up soon if we want to get out before the shopping rush"
Edward announced as i was sitting beside my daughters bed watching her sleep.
"Edward I can't believe she is nearly a year old time goes to fast"
I replied, I didn't want time to go fast I wanted her to stay little forever what if I lost her one day. Edward came sat down with me and pulled me on his lap putting his head on my shoulder.
"We have all the time in the world to be together, the 3 of us.. and Jacob of course. Were really not getting any older deer."
I knew he was right, we don't get older. Not in the physically anyway. My husband is over a hundred years old, but he is still the 17 year old I will always love. Me on the other hand I was only 19 well 18 really, if i were still human I would be turning 20 not long after Renesmee's 1st birthday. The hundred year age difference between Edward and I never mattered to me, I have always loved him. Renesmee stirred in her bed.
"I really hate to wake her, she looks so cute, so peaceful."
I complained to Edward.
"Come on dear we have to get moving, your father will be expecting us soon anyway."
He pushed me off his lap and got up to wake Renesmee.
"Nessie Darling"
he said. I loved the way he spoke to our daughter, it was so beautiful. She didn't move, she was lost in her dreams. I got up and ran my fingers through her lovely hair.
"Nessie, you have to get up now"
I said to her. Her hand raised to my face, I knew she was still asleep I sat down on the bed and let her tell me about her dreams. They were beautiful, but it came as quite a shock what she was seeing, of course Edward has already seen it. Our little girl was dreaming about her birthday, she was dreaming she met her hero, her favorite singer in the world Hannah Montana. Edward looked at me, I didn't need his powers to know what he was thinking, we were both thinking it. We had to get Renesmee what she wanted, no matter how hard it was. We were going to make sure she met Hannah Montana.
I removed her hand from my face and picked her up, Edward packed her bag with a new outfit for the day, complement of my sister-in-law Alice, she always had a new outfit ready for everyone long before they would need it. We were never aloud to wear the same thing twice.
"I'll go put her in the car"
I said to Edward as I carried her hot body out of the room, I was surprised my freezing cold skin hadn't woken her yet, but I suppose she was used to it.
Edward was at the car not even a minute after me, we got in and drove to Charlies house.
When we pulled up in the driveway Edward was smiling, I knew he could hear something I couldn't I looked at him curiously.
"Renesmee is going to have a lot of fun today Charlie has a lot planned"
he said smiling at me. He got out of the car and got Renesmee. Trust Charlie to plan the day out, he hasn't had any alone time with Renesmee in a while, and I doubt today will be much different, I suspect Jacob will be here before we get back from shopping. I collected Renesmee's bag and we
walked up to the house, letting ourselves in, we knew Charlie wouldn't mind. He was sitting at the kitchen table, it looked like he had be up for hours waiting for us to arrive.
"Hi dad"
I said before he even noticed we were there, he jumped.
"Oh sorry"
I laughed.
"Bella" he said, getting up with his arms stretched open, I went and hugged him.
"Hi Charlie"
Edward said
"Edward son!"
My dad replied and hugged him kissing Renesmee as they broke the hug.
"She really didn't want to wake up"
I said, Charlie was looking at Renesmee he had never seen her asleep before, she wasn't usually much of a sleeper.
"Oh well, let the little angel sleep"
He said, he was awfully happy today, I wasn't used to it, I looked at Edward concerned, letting him read what I was thinking, he loved it when I did that. He just looked at me and smiled. I knew there was nothing wrong, I knew that smile. Edward carried Renesmee up to my old room to tuck her in. I went and sat on the lounge Charlie followed and sat next to me.
"So do you know what your getting her yet?"
he asked curiously.
"Well kinda, we had a little talk about it this morning, it may be a bit difficult to get her, but I'm sure we can manage."
I replied. Of course we could manage, us Cullen's could do anything.
"What did you have in mind?"
He questioned.
"Well"
I said,
"She really wants to meet her favorite singer Hannah Montana. You heard of her?"
I asked him.
"I think I may have"
He replied.
"Blond Hair? Sparkly Clothes?"
he asked.
"Yep that's her"
I answered.
"We were thinking maybe we could get her a backstage pass to a concert or something. I don't really know to be honest we need to talk more about it."
"I'm sure she would love that."
He replied. Edward come down the stairs
"Bella, Nessie wants you."
I got up and walked upstairs.
"Excuses us please"
Edward said to my dad and followed me up. Renesmee was sitting in bed, she looked upset.
"Nessie darling whats wrong"
I asked her sat on the bed with her, sitting her on my lap. She didn't speak. That wasn't new for her, but she also didn't give me her hand to tell me what was wrong. I looked at Edward worried, she had never been like this before, I knew something wasn't right.
I decided to post it here because it didn't seem like many people liked it on youtube.
Comment =D
What do you think so far?
Oh and please tell your friends about this FF I don't want to have to close it down like my other 1. I have some pretty good ideas for it =D
Also if it ever starts to bore you tell me and suggest what I could do to make it less boring =D
I no it wasn't that good a chapter but I will get better as we get further into the story =D
huskerrich
09-27-2008, 09:04 AM
more please :), its going to be fun to see how you combine these two stories.
more please :), its going to be fun to see how you combine these two stories.
I'm working on the next chapter now but I need more comments before I can post it :D
huskerrich
09-28-2008, 08:39 AM
Now, I'm a nobody, oh well can't win them all
Now, I'm a nobody, oh well can't win them all
oh
sorry =(
let me correct myself
Doesn't any one ELSE want more? =(
huskerrich
09-28-2008, 08:45 AM
Rich laughs, "have a good evening Megz". You might try to advertise your story in the Twilight club thread here
anime peace lover
09-28-2008, 09:24 AM
so cooooooool ,keep up the good work
thanks.
Im gonna post more within the next hour =D
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“Edward”
I said,
“Whats wrong with Renesmee?”
Renesmee hid her head in my hair, I didn't like this, not one bit, I hated to see my daughter sad. My phone rang I looked at the caller ID.
“Alice”
I moaned and pressed the hang up botton, if it was something important she would have came here to tell us.
“Renesmee darling”
I said. Renesmee lifted her head and looked at me.
“Whats wrong sweety?”
A tear came rolling down her face. My little girl was crying, and I didn't have the slighted idea why.
I needed answers and I knew Renesmee wouldn't tell me, what ever this was it was bothering her deeply. She looked at her father with pleading eyes. I had to ask him what was wrong. I did something I was very good at doing now, I let him read what I was thinking.
Edward whats wrong with her? I thought. He came and sat on the bed next to us, he looked at Renesmee she looked back at him then hid her face in my hair again.
What is going on!
I was getting sick of this, Edward looked at me and ran his fingers through my hair, I knew he thought I was over reacting. He's phone rang.
“Alice” he said.
“Go on answer it, she isnt going to give up”
I hugged Renesmee as Edward answered the phone.
“Alice this really isn't a good time.”
he said into the phone.
“No where not shopping yet, we have a bit of a problem”
I could hear their whole conversation perfectly
“What type of problem?” Alice asked confused.
“It's nothing to worry about really.” Edward was always good at calming me down, but Alice wasn't so easy to calm.
“I'm coming over” Alice said
“No Alice..”
but it was too late, Alice has already hung up and she would be here any minute now.
“Am I ever gonna find out what happened?”
I asked Edward, I was starting to get annoyed.
“Bella it was just a bad dream”
I was angry now, I clenched my teeth together
“Bella calm down”
Edward said, he looked worried.
I didn't want Renesmee to hear me angry she was already upset enought I thought everything I wanted to say
Edward! How could it be just a dream! She is crying! CRYING FOR GODS SAKE! And all you can say is that its a dream
I grunted. Edward looked at the door and Alice walked in.
“Whats going on?” She demanded. This really wasn't a good day.
Renesmee looked up
“Mummy”
The sound of her voice calmed me I looked at her, cleaning the tears off her face with my finger.
“Please don't be mad at daddy”
I looked at Edward, he had moved from the bed to the rocking chair, he looked upset. I kissed Renesmee and handded her to Alice who was sitting beside me I got up and walked over to Edward. He looked at me, he didn't know what to expect, I sat on he lap. He rapped his arms around me
“I'm sorry” he wispered.
“No I'm sorry” I replied. I kissed him, he kissed me back pasionatly. If i were still human my heart would be pounding a thosand miles and hour. I was glad I wasn't I would have had to breath if I was and this kiss wouuldnt have been half as good. Renesmee giggled, we didn't usually kiss like this in frount of her. We looked up her, she jumpped from Alice's arms to my lap, Edward and I both hugged her.
“Aww that's sweet” Alice said.
“Now please tell me what is going on” she was just as angry as I had been before my wonderful family had calmed me. I got up and moved over to the bed again with Renesmee, she seemed happier now.
“It's nothing really Alice” Edward said. Alice didn't agree with that she looked at me then back at Edward then shook her head.
“Bella you'll tell me wont you?” She asked me,
“I honestly wished I knew my self” I answerd Renesmee looked up at me.
“Don't worry sweety, I don't need you to tell me, I'll make daddy tell me later, you just forget about it” I placed her on the bed and got her clothes out.
“I'll go down and watch tv with Charlie he is proably worried” Edward said then he left the room. Alice and I started dressing Renesmee.
“What was all that about?” Alice asked me. I looked at Renesmee and shrugged, I didn't want to bring up any memories for her. I grabbed Renesmee's mp3 player it always made her feel good when she listened to music, I passed it to her and she put on Hannah Montana. Alice laughed,
“Thats what I called about” she said, and we walked down the stairs, I looked at her what did she know about Hannah?
Comment for more =D
do you like it?
huskerrich
09-28-2008, 10:11 AM
I like it megz, nice job
WiLDoNE0457
09-28-2008, 01:47 PM
this is good, can't wait for more
this is good, can't wait for more
thanks =D
I will probably post more tomorrow
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We left the house and got in the car, Renesmee was a lot happier now but I don't think she will be sleeping for a while. Alice got in the car with us, she insisted on shopping with us. It was no use fighting Alice. Once we were out on the open road I looked at Edward, he looked back and me. He knew exactly what I wanted to know.
“She dreamed the Volturi came back on her birthday and took her away from us” he said, he seemed to calm. Alice gasped. I looked at him speechless.
“Bella it was just a dream, you had plenty of them when you were human” He tried to calm me, I looked at him I knew he was right. I relaxed and he reached for my hand, I took his.
“I'm sorry Edward, I know I was over reacting, I just hate to see her upset” I said Alice looked at me and rubbed my sholder.
“It's ok Alice, what did you want to tell us about Hannah?” Edward asked her.
“Oh yeah. Well she doesn't have a concerts next month for Nessie's birthday, they are cancelling them all, something about a break her dad is making her take or something, I'm not quite sure, the girl in my vision looked nothing like Hannah, but it was definatly her.”
I looked at Alice confused, how could it be her but not be her? And how were we going to get Renesmee to meet Hannah, I looked at Edward, he looked just as worried as me.
“Don't worry Bella we'll find a way, I'm sure Carlisle knows some one that knows Hannah” I could tell by his voice that he wasn't so sure about that but I believed him anyway, I knew we could find a way.
We were pulling in the driveway to Charlies house after a long day of shopping Alice had gone home early to go hunting with Jasper. I smelled the air it wasn't its usual fresh smell.
“Jacobs been here?” I asked Edward, he nodded and took my hand as we walked to the door. When we walked in Renesmee was jumping on the couch Charlie sitting on the floor looking exausted, when he saw us he looked pleased.
“Please get your daughter to stop” he begged us, I laughed, Renesmee has a lot of energy, I opened my arms out for her and she jumpped right into them. Charlie looked at me shocked.
“Sorry dad we should have came earlier, was Jacob here?” I asked him, although I knew the answer I wondered why he left.
“Yeah. He came for a while, but then he left for some reason he just ran out the door saying he'll speak to my later, I didn't have a clue what was going on, it was probably a warewolf thing” He answered.
Edward and I laughed we knew how much Charlie hated all this.
“Sorry Grandpa” Renesmee said, she relised she had exausted him, she forgets that he doesn't have as much energy as Edward and I. Charlie got up and took Renesmee,
“It's ok Nessie, you have a lot of energy in you, to much for your poor old grandpa” he looked at her, she hugged him. She always loved her grandpa.
“Well we better get going” Edward said, I knew he just wanted to get home, he hated shopping as much as I did.
“Come on Nessie” He said. Nessie jumpped our of Charlies arms and skipped over to us.
“Bye Grandpa” she yelled behind her and ran out to the car.
“Bye Charlie, see you next time” Edward said running after his daughter. Charlie looked at me.
“Keep save Bells” he said, then came to hug me.
“Don't worry about me dad, your the one that needs to stay save, I hope you not just ordering take out every night” I pointed to the Pizza boxes on the kitchen bench. He laughed.
“Love you dad” I said as I walked out of house to join my family.
“You to Bella” he said after me. My poor dad I hated to leave him alone. I got in the car and we drove back home.
“Jacob” I yelled staring at the big warewolf in our garden,
“What are you doing here?” Jacob ran into the woods and came back out in his human form.
“I was waiting for you guys.. NESSIE!” he yelled looking at my daughter snuggled up in my arms. She smiled but didn't let go, she had a hard day, she looked at me, she knew I hated her going out hunting late, even if she was with a warewolf.
“Go on honey” I said and she jumpped out of my arms and ran off with Jacob.
“Don't say out to long” I called after them, then turned to Edward. We had some reasearch to get done. We walked inside and sat at the computer.
“How are we going to do this?” Edward asked.
“I thought you knew” I replied. We started reasearching Hannah Montana, all her concerts were in a few months, we needed her before then. Edward got up and walked to the phone he dialed a number.
“Rose” He said
“Do you still have that number of Traci Van Horn, that record producers daugher from Hollywood?” he asked her then grabbed a pen and paper and wrote down the number Rosalie gave him.
“Thanks Rose I owe you” he said, then hung up.
“What was that about?” I asked,
“Traci is the daughter of Hannah's record producer, she and Hannah are good friends. We went to school with her once, Rose and her got on really well” he answerd
“But I really hate talking to her, she has such an annoying voice, something to do with a deviated septum. But I am sure she will find us a way to get to Hannah. She had a huge crush on me when we went to school together." I laughed.
"Who didn't!?" I commented. He laughed with me.
"Anyway" He continued
"She would do anything I asked her, she was like my personal slave, so she should do this" I laughed trying to imagine that. We walked over to the couch and sat down, he dialed Traci's number.
“Hello Traci” He asked into the phone
“Yes, who is this?” She replied, I understood what he ment about that voice,
“Hi its Edward” He answered,
“Edward who?” She replied, she was shocked, I could tell she knew very well who.
“Edward Cullen” he said.
“Look Traci I know it's been a while, but I need to ask you a HUGE favor” He said in his dazzling voice, I knew she wouldn't be able to resist and so did he.
Comment =D
doesn't anybody want moree?
huskerrich
10-01-2008, 09:21 AM
Sorry Meghan, I swear I commented yesterday on this don't know why it didn't post.
I loved it.
lol its k
i may post more soon =D
i need a few more comments first
WiLDoNE0457
10-01-2008, 10:02 AM
more!!
more!!
i'll post more tomorrow
its 11:05 at night here and i'm going beach tomorrow so i need some sleep :)
ohh beach :D
WiLDoNE0457
10-01-2008, 09:27 PM
i'll post more tomorrow
its 11:05 at night here and i'm going beach tomorrow so i need some sleep :)
ohh beach :D
k, can't wait for the next chapter, and have fun at the beach :D
HannahMontanaismyhero
10-01-2008, 09:57 PM
I shouldnt read this!!! im only on eclipse!!!!!! NOOO! BUT ITS SO TEMPTING!
huskerrich
10-01-2008, 11:19 PM
lol, I finished Twilight, and thinking Eclipse was the next, that was the next book I started, I think I made it about half way through the first chapter before I said what?
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“What is it Edward?” she asked stunned. I couldn't help but laugh.
“Well.” Edward said
“My daughter...”
“Whoa Whoa since when do you have a daughter?” Traci interupted.
“Traci its been 8 years since we last saw eachother, a lot can happen in 8 years” he answered. How did he always know what to say?
“I guess your right, sorry continue” I rolled my eyes.
“My daughter is a huge fan of your friend Hannah Montana, and well he birthday is coming up, I was going to get her backstage tickets to a concert but all her concerts for the next couple of months have been cancelled, as you would probably know. But I was hopping you could some how get Hannah to meet her?” I closed my eyes hopeing she would say yes.
“Ahh that's all you wanted? No problem how about I talk to Hannah then get back to you?” Traci answered.
Yes! I thought, Edward smiled at me.
“Sounds great, thanks so much Traci” He gave her is mobile number than hung up.
Edward pulled me onto his lap then kissed me.
“Edward your so brilliant” I told him he laughed pushed me of his lap grabbed my hand and dragged me outside.
“Come on” he said
“Lets catch up to Nessie and Jacob” we ran through the woods, it didn't take long before we found them. Nessie saw us and ran straight towards us jumping into Edwards arms, I laughed, the look on her face was so cute. She smiled at me and put her hand to my cheak.
“I love you to” I told her, kissing her on the head.
“Come on lets go hunt!” Edward said with excitement, Nessie jumpped to Edward's back, she loved it when he ran, we ran towards the sent of Elk hand in hand Jacob chasing after us.
We were at the Cullen's house Rensemee sitting on the floor playingg with Rosalie while Edward and I sat on the lounge watching our little girl have the time of her life.
“She is so cute” I wispered to Edward.
“I am the luckiest living thing in the world, I have the two most beautiful girls in the universe” He replied, I hit him
“Yeah right, I'm not even close” Renesmee looked up at us, I knew the eyes, they were pleading, she wanted us to go play with her I looked at Edward and we got on the floor. Edward's phone rang. He looked at the caller ID then at me.
“Its Traci” He said getting up, he ran upstairs to his room to answer the phone without Renesmee hearing. Alice smiled. Renesmee climbed onto my lap
“Mummy who's Traci?” She asked. I smiled at her
“Just an old friends of daddy's.” She put her hand to my cheek.
“I think you might meet her soon” I answered her. She smiled. I smiled back.
5 minutes later Edward came running down the stairs smiling, I knew what that meant. He walked right over to the computer, I walked over and stood behind him. He was booking plane tickets,
Should we book some for Jacob? I thought. He shook his head.
“This is just the 3 of us this time, we haven't had a real family holiday. I already talked to him about it, don't worry Bella, I know what I'm doing.”
“I know you do” I replied kissing him then walking back over to our daughter, I could tell by her eyes, she had so many questions.
“It's a surprise” I told her and sat back down next to her. Esme came in and turned the tv on,
“Hi girls” she said to Rose, Renesmee and I. We all smiled at her. The news came on.
“And Hannah Montana's concerts for next month have all be canceled, Hannah sends her apologies to everyone who was planning to buy tickets but she said that something came up and she wasn't able to do them anymore” The news reported said. Rensemee looked at me, I knew she wanted to go to one of those concerts. Tears formed in her eyes. I picked her up and sat on the couch with her on my lap.
“Aww sweety don't cry” I hugged her.
“You'll get to meet Hannah one day I promise” I kissed her head. She smiled at me and placed her hand to my cheak.
“Soon, we can try and go to her next concerts. Can you wait until then.” I looked at her.
“For me?” I continued. She smiled and nodded.
“All done” Edward said. Everyone looked at him confused. Everyone but Alice and I. He looked at Alice. She nodded.
“Come on Bells, lets take Renesmee home, its getting late.”
We said goodbye to everyone then ran home. I knew Alice would tell everyone what is going on. She probably knew more than me.
“Mummy I don't want to go to sleep” Renesmee said after we had bathed and dressed her. She looked at me then Edward.
“Daddy what if they come back again” She was really scared of these Volturi, I knew the feeling.
“Renesmee Darling.” Edward started. Picking her up from her bed.
“It's only a dream sweetheart. I would never let them come back and get you. Ever, they would have to get through me first.” He said
“And me” I added running my fingers through her hair.
“And your Grandpa Carlisle and Grandma Esme.” He continued.
“And Auntie Rose, and Auntie Alice, And Uncle Jasper, and Uncle Emmett” I added.
“Oh and dont forget Jacob and the rest of his pack.” I continued.
“See sweaty, we would never ever let anything happen to you. We love you much to much” He assured her. A small smile crossed her face.
“Come on Nessie, please go to sleep.” I begged her. She shook her head.
“What if we sat and watched a movie with you until your sleepy?” I asked her. She smiled and nodded. I walked over to her cupboard under her tv and found her favorite movie, Peter Pan. She jumped up and down in excitement. I turned her tv on putting the dvd in the dvd player, but Edward interrupted. I felt his hand on mine. I looked at him, then Renesmee.
“She wants to watch it in our room” He said before I could ask what was wrong. Nessie nodded smiling.
“Oh, my mistake” I said then turned off the dvd player. Renesmee ran out of the room and Edward picked me up.
“Edward what are you doing?” I asked him.
“What does it look like I'm doing. I don't want your beautiful feet to wear out babe.” He kissed me.
I laughed then he walked into the room and placed me gently on the couch next to my daughter. She jumped on my lap with excitement. I hugged her, and Edward put the movie on. He walked out of the room and a second later came back in with Renesmee's blanket. He gave it to me and I rapped it around her so my cold skin wouldn't make her freeze. The 3 of us sat there and watched the movie.
We weren't even half way through the movie when Renesmee had fallen asleep. I carried her back to her room and placed her gently in bed. I sat next to the bed for awhile, just in case she woke up. After a while Edward came and joined me.
How are her dreams? I thought.
“Perfect” Edward whispered. I nodded and got up Edward following me, I heard him close the bedroom door behind us then I turned around.
“What did Traci say today?” I asked him. He walked towards me and hugged me, I hugged him back.
“She said she's having a small get together on the day of Nessie's birthday with Hannah and a few other friends, and were invited.” I nodded then thought about what I had read about Traci on the internet that afternoon. She loved throwing parties. I looked up at Edward.
“Small?” I asked.
“That's what she said. I hope she meant small. But she assured me that Nessie will definitely be meeting Hannah.”
“Wonderful” I said walking back to our room and siting on the couch. Of course it was going to work out. Was there anything my Edward couldn't do?
Comment =D
I shouldnt read this!!! im only on eclipse!!!!!! NOOO! BUT ITS SO TEMPTING!
haha i'll try hard to not to breaking dawn to much in the story
HannahMontanaismyhero
10-02-2008, 09:26 AM
bleeh, i already know what happens but still. :D
huskerrich
10-02-2008, 09:30 AM
more please, I'm loving it.
i will hopefully post more tomorrow =D
WiLDoNE0457
10-02-2008, 04:27 PM
more!!!
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(1 month later)
I dropped Renesmee off for a day with Alice, Edward and I had some packing to do. Tomorrow we would fly to Hollywood and in just 3 days we would meet Hannah Montana, I can't wait to see the look on my little girls face.
“We need to pack her something beatutiful for when she meets Hannah” I told Edward as we went through her closet.
“Thats easy” Edward said and picked up a pakage.
“Alice's birthday present?” I asked. Edward nodded. After we packed Renemee's bag we went to pack our own.
“Oh fun” I said browsing through the huge closet.
“Bella why don't you just rest” Edward said.
“I'll pack for you.” He continued. I shook my head
“It's fine” I said, I had to get used to this closet sooner or later. With Edward's help we managed to pack our bags.
“The one thing I hate about holidays” I said to Edward. He laughed and hugged me, I kissed him. The phone rang.
“Perfect timeing” I laughed and went to get the phone. It was Jessica, I hadn't heard from her in ages. I picked it up.
“Hello?”
“Bella!” She said, she seemed very happy.
“Oh hi Jess how are you?” I asked. Edward looked at me confused. I shrugged.
“Yeah I'm good thanks, How about you?”
“I'm great..”
“Look I know its kinda short notice, but I was wondering if you and Edward wanted to come out and see a movie tonight and me and some others from school, where having a kind of reuinion?”
I looked at Edward he nodded
“Why not” he wispered.
“We'd love to, thanks for asking Jess”
“Great!” She said
“Were meeting at the cinimas at 6”
“See you then” I said
“Yeah Bye” She replied then hung up. I looked at Edward confused.
“There up to something” He said, I nodded in agreement and we ran out the door to go see our daughter
When we got to the Cullen's house Alice was sitting on the frount step waiting for us.
“They think your hiding something” She said. I looked at Edward, I had no idea who she was talking about.
“Like what?” He asked.
“I'm not sure, I can't make out the words but thats why they invited you out tonight to see if it was true” Alice replied
“Oh thats gonna be fun” I rolled my eyes and walked inside.
“Bella!” Edward called after me. I turned around to face him.
“Bella dear, don't worry about them, we can cancel if you want.” I shock me head.
“No, we'll go if we cancel it'll just make them think we really are hiding something” I said.
“Oh Bella come here” He pulled me in his arms, I hugged him tightly.
“Don't worry what other people think of you, we'll go catch up with your old friends, see what their accusing us of doing and if you want to leave early, I'll be right behind you” He always knew what to say, I reached up to kiss him, he lifted me up and kissed me back. Then we walked inside, Renemee was sitting on the lounge, it looked like she had been waiting for us, she ran right towards us and jumpped in my arms. We hugged her together. Edward looked at me and smiled, he walked over to his piano.
“Yay” Renesmee clapped. I carried her over and sat next to Edward, he played the lullaby he wrote for me not long after we first met. I smiled at him, he knew this always calmed me. Renesmee looked at me and put her hand to my cheek.
“Don't worry sweety I'm fine” I smiled at her, she smiled back, that adorable smile, I could never get enough of it, it was just like Edward's I kissed her on the head. Edward looked at the clock. He stopped playingg.
“Come on Bella, or we'll be late” Renesmee looked at Edward then me then frowned.
“Don't worry Nessie” he said.
“We'll be home before your bed time, you can play with Autie Rose” he continued.
She looked at me I hugged her
“I love you” I told her then passed her to Edward, he kissed her forehead
“I love you Nessie, forever” he said, then placed her on the floor. We walked out and I blew her a kiss and she blew one back, I would have prefered to have spent the night with her then some so called friends who are accusing me of hiding something. We went home to change then headed to the cinima, when we were there everyone from our high school group was waiting for us. I held Edward's hand and we walked towards them.
“Hey guys” I said.
What are they thinking? I thought, Edward looked at me, he didn't look very happy.
“Hi Bella, Edward” Jessica said.
“Nice to see you again” She continued.
“You to Jessica” Edward said. I looked at him, I knew that was a lie.
“So what are we seeing?” I asked.
“Oh were seeing Hairspray” Mike answered.
“Ohh sounds good” I lied.
“Come on Edward lets go get our tickets” I said to Edward. We walked towards the line while the others went to the candy bar. I looked at Edward once we stopped.
“There is a rumor going around that your 8 months pregnet” he said, low enough so only I could hear.
WHAT! I thought
So they called us out here to see how fat I'd gotten? If they really cared they would have a least called to congratulate us or something. I was furious.
“Bella calm down” he wispered.
How are we gonna prove to them that I'm not pregnet? I thought
“Hmm, I may have an idea, but it may be a bit difficult for you, you haven't tried it before” He wispered
What is it?
“Champane. All you need to do it drink it, we can choak it back up later” He turned around
Mike was walking towards us laughing, with two champane glasses.
“Here you go love birds” he said. I looked at Edward, we could always reject it, we were under aged after all. Edward took the glasses and passed one to me.
“This better not ruin my liver Mike” he said. I couldn't help but laugh.
“How did you get these anyway?” I asked him as I took a sip, I knew he understood what I ment, he was underaged. I looked at Jessica, she was shocked to see me acttualy drinking it.
“Oh simple” He laughed pulling out a fake ID I rolled my eyes.
“I should have guessed” I said, then drank the rest of the glass. He's eyes popped out. Edward laughed. I looked up at the ticket bored.
YES! I thought, Hairspray has been sold out. Edward followed my eyes to see the same thing.
“Aww looks like Hairspray is sold out” he said. Mike looked up to.
“Oh that's to bad, sorry guys, I knew we should have got those tickets for you” Mike apologized I shrugged, Took Edward's glass and walked over to the bar to return them. Angela walked up to me.
“So Bella” She said. I looked her her.
“Hi Angela, how's it been?” I asked her.
“It's been great, how about you? How are you and Edward?” She asked. I knew she wanted me to splirt out something like great we just found out were expecting, or we just had a baby. But that wasn't going to happen.
“Yeh we have been good, better everyday” I answered.
“How long have you two been married now?” She asked. I knew where this was leading.
“Just over a year” I answered. All I wanted now was to get out of here back to my daughter.
“Wow that long all ready? You guys thought about having kids yet?” And there it was. Edward looked at me, I shrugged.
“Naa. Kids are to much hard work. That's something were gonna have to pass on” I said. Edward smiled.
“Aww to bad” She said. “I rekon you two would make great parents” I knew where this was going, I decided to play along
Lets play along a bit I thought, Edward laughed.
“You really think so?” I asked
“Yeah, I'd love to have parents like you.”
“I don't think I could do it” I answered.
“To hard. I don't want to be a parent. Nor does Edward. It's really just not out thing”
Edward came up to me.
“Come on Bells lets leave and let them go watch their movie.”
“Ok” I said.
“Bye guys” They waved.
I heard them talking as we left.
“There is no way she is pregnet” I heard some one say
“There is no way they have a kid” Someone else said. I looked at Edward and smiled.
That's cleared. I thought
Now lets get home to Renesmee.
He laughed.
“Oh yeah parenthoods really not your thing” He said as we got in the car. I rolled my eyes. Parenthood was deffinatly my thing. And that would never change.
Don't forget to comment =D
Oh btw Hannah will be coming into the story next chapter, maybe the one after. I'll try and put her in soon =D
huskerrich
10-03-2008, 10:48 AM
great job meghan more please
huskerrich
10-03-2008, 09:53 PM
good morning
huskerrich
10-03-2008, 10:01 PM
how are things down under today.
how are things down under today.
all good =D
its wet here today =(
wbu?
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Our plane trip was at 10:00 which ment we had to be at the air port by at least 8. I looked at the clock it was 6:00.
“Should we wake her now?” I asked Edward who was checking if we had all our paper works and passports. We had gotten Renesmee a fake once a few weeks ago, when we first found out we were going on a holiday, she couldn't have a real one. What would people think? A one year old in the body of a 5 year old, they wouldn't let her on the plane. He looked at the clock.
“Hmm. Yeah I guess we should.” He said. I looked at him.
Whats wrong? I thought. He came over, sat next to me and put his arm around me.
“I'm just a bit worried, with Alice not being able to see the future with Renesmee in it” He shrugged.
“It just worries me, I'm not used to her not being able to tell me before something happens” He continued. I moved and sat on his lap. He kissed me.
“Edward, we will be fine, I lived most of my life without knowing what ahead of me, and I'm still here arn't I?” I tried to cheer him up. He laughed.
“The way you were as a human you chould have used Alice” he joked. I hit him.
“Come on Edward. Stop worrying, I'm sure we'll be fine.” I kissed him.
“Lets go wake Renesmee” I said, getting up and grabbing Edward's hand. He got up and walked with me. We walked into Renesmee's room and Edward smiled.
“I love her dreams” He wispered. We went and knelt beside her bed.
“Renesmee” I said
“Time to wake up” She stirred in her sleep I looked at Edward. We were used to this now, she hated waking up.
“Please, we'll be late for your surprise.” I said to her. Her eyes popped open and she sat up. I laughed.
“Surprise?” She asked. I loved to hear her voice, it was a pitty she didn't talk much. I nodded and smiled. She jumpped up and ran to her closet, I ran in after her and handed her something that she would be comfortable in while sitting on the plane. She ran back to Edward and passed it to him. He laughed and dressed Renesmee.
“Daddy” She said after he had dressed her.
“Yes Nessie?” He asked.
“What's my surprise?” She questioned. Edward looked at me. I laughed.
“Renesmee, if Daddy told you what the surprise was, then it wouldn't be a surprise anymore would it?” I said to her. She frowned
“I guess not” She said, I walked over to her and picked her up.
“Chear up Nessie!” I said.
“Your gonna love it, you just have to wait a few days before you find out. Trust me on this” I told her then kissed her head.
“Ok mummy” she said then kissed me on the cheek. I carried her out to the living room and placed her on the couch. Then Jacob walked in.
“NESSIE” he yelled then ran over and picked up Renesmee. She hugged him.
“I just came to say goodbye before your big surprise, your gonna love it”
she placed her hand on his cheek.
“No im not coming, your going with your mummy and daddy as a family, trust me you'll be fine, you be having so much fun if i were there i'd just be in your way” He said. I laughed.
“He's right you know” Edward called from Renesmee's room. He was busy making her bed. She laughed then put her hand back on Jacobs cheak.
“I'll miss you too” He said. I smiled, he looked at me, put Renesmee down and walked into the kitchen,
“Hey Bell's” He said
“You got any human food in here?” he continued. I laughed.
“With the amount of times your he I'm surpried theres any left.” I teased. Edward came out and put his hand around my waist.
“Speaking of food.” He said
“Maybe we should go hunting before we leave” I nodded at him. Rensemee came and jumpped on his back.
“Seeya Jacob” I called as we ran out the door.
When we got home Rensmee was jumping up and down on the couch.
“Where we going!?” she asked again. I laughed ran over to her and caught her in mid air.
“I told you it's a surprise.” I said. Edward came out with our luggage. Her eyes popped out.
“Where leaving?” She asked. I looked at her, tears were forming in her eyes. Edward came over and ran his finger down her face.
“Where not leaving” He told her.
“Where just going on a holiday, we'll be back soon. I promise” He said, scooping her up in his arms.
“Wheres that smile I love?” I asked her.
“Now come on or we'll be late” He told Renesmee.
“Chear up please” He contined. She smiled.
“Thankyou” He said, then he kissed her on the forehead.
“You girls go get in the car, before were late I'll bring out the luggage.” He told us. I nodded then took Renesmee out and buckled her in. Edward came out with our luggage, I ran over to him and helped him put them in.
“Thankyou” he said, then kissed me.
“No. Thankyou” I replied, kissing him back. We got in the car and drove to the air port.
When we got their Renesmee's eyes widened.
“What are they mummy?” She asked me. I looked at the planes
“There planes” I answered.
“What do they do?” She asked.
“They fly you to places far away. Like that one. Watch it take off” I told her, pointing to a plane about to take off.
“Wow” She said. Edward and I laughed.
We checked in and went to our gate, they were already bording by the time we got their.
“You ready to go on the plane?” I aked her. She nodded, a huge smile on her face. I picked her up, and hugged her.
“Lets go” Edward said, handing our tickets to the flight attendent, then taking one of my hands.
“Oh” The flight attendent said. I looked at Edward. He shrugged then smiled,
“It looks like we booked you 3 in the same seats as someone else.” She told us.
“Ohh” I said. Edward's smile didn't leave his face, so i knew something good was coming.
“I'll have to put you in first class” She said. I smiled.
“Thats fine with us” Edward laughed. We walked onto the plane and took our place. Renesmee's smile never left her face. I looked at Edward. He smiled.
“Nearly time to take off” He said to Renesmee. She smiled.
“Yay” She said.
“Where gonna fly” She continued. I laughed.
“Just like a bird” I told her. Then buckled up her seat belt.
“Hold on tight.” Edward laughed. She held on to her arm rest.
“I'm ready” She said. I laughed. Then the plane started moving. My little girls dream was closer to coming true then ever. I smiled.
I can't wait to see the look on her face when she meets Hannah. I thought. Edward looked at me and smiled. I knew he felt the same way.
Sorry it took so long to post this chapter
comment for more =D
Oh and Hannah is in the end of the next chapter, I have already written it =D
all i need is comments
huskerrich
10-07-2008, 09:07 AM
nice job megz, love it.
nice job megz, love it.
thanks
WiLDoNE0457
10-07-2008, 04:55 PM
this is awesome can't wait for more
this is awesome can't wait for more
Thanks =D
I'll try and post more later, but I just found out I have an assignment due next week, that no one decided to tell me about because I was away, so I have to go chase up one of my friends in my class who was there that day, (because no one went for the last day of term) and get her to tell me what to do.
sorry i havent posted any i will try to tonight, I have just been really busy
huskerrich
10-11-2008, 01:31 AM
thanks megz, glad to see you are back
:) I'll try and post it in the next few hours.
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We had been in Hollywood for a day and today was Renesmee's birthday. Edward was sitting on the bed with his laptop. I walked and sat next to him.
“What you doing?” I asked.
“Looking up Hannah Montana” He said. I looked at him confused.
“I haven't really had the time to do this until now, and I thought I should before I meet her.” He continued.
“I'm lost” I admitted.
“When Alice had the vision first. About Hannah cancelleing her concerts and all that, half the visions were of her and this purple haired friend, the one in this picture” He pointed to a picture on the computer screen.
“And some of them were of a brunette and a different blonde, not Hannah, someone else. But they seemed somehow like the same people”
“How can that be?” I asked.
“I don't quite know, there is nothing here of the other 2 people in her vision.” He answered.
“Hmm” He continued. I shook my head at him.
“I'm worrying to much aren't I?” He asked, I nodded closed his laptop then kissed him. He layed down pulling me over with him. Then Renesmee walked in and jumped on us.
“Whoaa!” I yelled, she and Edward laughed. I looked at her and smiled picking her up and cuddling her.
“Happy Birthday angel” I said, kissing her head. She hugged me. Edward joined in the hug.
“Happy birthday big girl, a whole year old, wow your getting old.” He kissed her. I laughed. Then got up.
“You want your presents, or should we take them back to the shop” I said. She looked at me and smiled.
“PRESENTS!” she screamed. That was the loudest she had ever been in her life. I looked at Edward shocked. He shrugged.
“Come on then” He said picking her up and putting her on the floor next to her pile of presents. She opened them one after the other, she had outfits,toys and games.
“This is so fun, I love birthdays.” She said. I laughed, then picked up one of the outfits Alice had gotten her.
“You better get dressed or you'll miss the best present yet” I told her. She ran over to me and I dressed her. Then Edward and I got changed into something new for the day.
You should call Traci. I thought. He nodded then walked out on the balcony of the hotel room and got out his phone. Renesmee looked at me, I winked at her, then turned the tv on. 5 minutes later Edward came back in.
“She said we can come any time after midday” he said. Renesmee looked at him.
“You'll see Nessie” He answered the question she was thinking. Then my phone rang.
“The family will be wanting to speak to Renesmee” He told me, I answered the phone, it was Esme.
“Hi Bella” She said.
“Hi Esme.” I said back. She put me on speaker.
“Hi Bella” Everyone said, even Jacob was there.
“I'll put Nessie on” I said. Knowing that's what they would want. I put the phone on speaker.
“Hello” Renesmee said. They all started singing happy birthday, she laughed then danced to their singing.
“Have a good day Nessie” Alice said.
“Yeh your parents put a lot of effort into this day” Rosalie continued. Renesmee looked at Edward, he smiled.
“Make sure you tell us all about it when you get home.” Jasper said.
“Yup” Rensemee answered.
They stayed on the phone for hours, and by the time we finally hung up it was time to go.
“Come on Rensemee, don't want to be late.” I told her picking her up and carrying her out of the room Edward following.
When we arrived at Traci's house Edward looked worried. And I knew why, all the noise coming from inside didn't seem like a small get together. He shook his head.
“Tipical Traci” He said. I looked at the house, it was huge, a lot bigger than the Cullen's house back in Forks. We pulled to a stop and got out of the car.
“Renesmee, don't let go of my hand” I told her, placing her on the floor and grabbing her hand. She nodded and got a tight grip of my hand. Edward grabbed her other hand. Traci came running out of the frount door. She looked at me, then Edward, then Renesmee then me again.
“Traci!” Edward said.
“Good to see you” He continued.
“Edward, old pal” She said, that voice was more annoying in person.
“I'd like to introduce you to my wife, Bella, and daughter, Renesmee.” He said.
“Hi Traci nice to meet you” I said.
“Hi” Renesmee said. Traci laughed.
“Edward your daughters so cute” she said.
“She looks just like you, and your wife.” she continued.
“Thanks” Edward said.
“Well come on inside, what are you waiting for?” Traci laughed, we followed her inside. Rensemee stopped. I picked her up she wispered into my ear.
“Why are we here mummy?” She asked.
“You'll see” I told her. Traci led us to an empty room. Edward smiled.
“You can wait in here” She said.
“I'll go get Her” She continued. We walked in the room and sat down on the chairs.
“She only had a big party so it didn't seem strange asking her to come.” Edward said.
“Ahh I see.” I replied. 5 minutes later Traci walked in. Hannah following her, with her purple haired friend right behind her.
“Happy Birthday Renesmee” Edward and I said. I put Renesmee down. She stood their frozen, her mouth wide open. Traci left. Hannah looked at Edward and I, then Renesmee. She laughed then walked up to Renesmee and got on her knees to Rensemee's level.
“Hi Renesmee” She said.
“I'm Hannah.”
Sorry it took so long to post. I would have yesterday, but the day went to fast, then I went to Luna Park last night with my netball team and by the time I got home it was past midnight.
Tell me what you think. Comment for more =D
WiLDoNE0457
10-11-2008, 03:53 AM
more
huskerrich
10-11-2008, 08:59 AM
more please , Megz.
sorry i didnt post any yesterday. Had to go to bed early. I will try and post some tonight if i get all my homework done. I wish holidays never ended :(
D.H.C
10-14-2008, 01:13 AM
Ahhh more more more mroe more more
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“Hi Hannah” Rensemee said, shocked. She looked up at us, we smiled at her. Hannah looked at her friend,
“This is my best friend Lola” She said. Lola who was staring at Edward got out of her daydream.
“Hi” She said. Edward got up.
“Lets make this a proper introduction” he said. I got up after him.
“Hi, I'm Edward Cullen.” He said.
“And this is my beatutiful wife, Bella. And our Adorible daughter Renesmee.”
Hannah laughed.
“Hi Edward, Bella and Rensemee. My name is Hannah Montana and this is my best friend in the whole world Lola Lofnagle.” She said. Some weird guy ran in.
“There you are Mi... Hannah! I have been looking everywhere.” He said. I looked at him confused, what was he about to say. I looked at Edward, he didn't seem shocked by this, what did he know?
“Oh and thats Mike” Hannah said. Mike nodded. Hannah sat down on the floor.
“Come here Rensemee” she said, holding her arms out for her. Rensemee looked at Edward he nodded. Renesmee walked over and sat on Hannah's lap. Edward's phone rang.
“Hello?” He said into the phone. I new the voice on the other line, but I never expected it to be who it was.
“Oh hi Renee” He said, I looked at him.
“Yeah she is right here” he handed me the phone. I was totally shocked. I hadn't spoken to mum since I told her about the whole vampire thing, I knew I wasn't ment to but I just couldn't keep it from her, and Edward Rensemee and I went to visit her, and well it just slipped out. She didn't speak to me after that day.
“Hello mum?” I asked.
“Bella honey!” She said.
“Mum whats wrong?” I asked her, I thought there would have to be something wrong, since when did she talk to me. I looked at Hannah and Renesmee, they were playing together as if they were sisters.
“Nothing” She said.
“Then why..” But she interrupted me.
“Look Bella I'm sorry.” She said.
“It was wrong of me to ignore you the way I did, I should have accepted you for who you were, please forgive me.”
“Of course I do mum” I said. I hoped this would happen one day. I looked at Edward, he was smiling.
“So” Mum said
“How are things? How's Renesemee? She must be big now.” She continued.
“Things are great. And you'd be shocked how much she's changed” I said. When mum saw Renesmee she would have been about 6 months old, she looked just under 3 years.
“I can't wait to see her again” Mum said.
“I was hoping maybe Phil and I could come visit you soon” she continued. I looked at Edward he shrugged.
“I'd like that” I said to her.
“But where actually not in Forks at the moment, where in LA, for Nessie's birthday” I continued.
“It's Renesemee's birthday?” She asked.
“Yeah” I said.
“Well let me speak to her” She insisted.
“Uhmm, nows not a good time mum” I said.
“Can I call you later tonight?” I asked her.
“Sure” She said.
“Thanks mum I love you” I said, then I hung up. Not even a minute later the phone rang, it was Alice.
“Excuse me a moment” Edward said, then he walked into another room. I got on the floor with Hannah, Mike, Lola and Renesemee.
“Wow Hannah, your really good with Renesmee, do you have any sibling at home?” I asked her. She shrugged,
“I do have an older brother, but what's the fun of that. I have just always loved kids” She said,
“By the way, yours is adorable, one of the cutest I have ever met.” She continued.
“Thanks” I said,
“She gets most of I off her father though” I added.
“I must say, I disagree” Her friend Lola budded in,
“I see so much of you in her” She finished. I smiled. Edward walked into the room.
“Uhh Bella, can I see you for a minute.” He said, I got up and walked over to him.
“What's wrong?” I asked. He started whispering, fast and slow so only I could hear.
“Alice said the volturi are on their way, they have been watching Hannah, or should I say Miley, and want her to join them as vampires, they think she will have a great power. Much greater than my mind reading” He said.
“But..” I whispered back then I paused.
“What do you meen? Miley?” I added.
“Hannah isn't actually Hannah.” He said. I looked at him confused.
“Hannah Montana isn't an actual person, nor is Lola, or Mike. Hannah is actually a girl named Miley Stewart, in discuise, she wanted to live a normal life and a pop star life so she got a disguise, Lola and Mike are Miley's best friends, Lilly Truscott and Oliver Oaken.” He explained. I looked at him shocked.
“Very interesting minds I must say, never met anyone with double lives before.” He said. I laughed.
“So what are we going to do? About the volturi?” I asked.
“Well I guess were going to have to tell them about us being Vampires I guess, tell them that their in danger.” He said.
“Wait a minute, if we didn't come to meet Hannah what would have happened?” I asked him.
“Well I'm not sure, Alice said they have no idea we're actually with her, well not yet anyway.” I looked at him worried.
“I guess we better get explaining” He said, I grabbed his hand and walked toward Miley with him. I didn't like where this was going, and I knew he didn't either.
Comment =D
I may not be able to post for a while, heaps of assignments and tests.
tell me what you think =D comment for more
huskerrich
10-14-2008, 09:09 AM
this could get interesting.
D.H.C
10-14-2008, 06:21 PM
More more more more more more more more more more!!!
sorry i haven't posted any yet, I have got more assignments, and tests. I need to fit time in to write more.
I will try and post some ASAP
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“What's wrong mummy” Rensemee asked me. I looked at Edward, he sat down on the floor, I sat next to him.
“We need to tell you guys something.” He said.
“This may be a bit of a shock to you, but we mean no harm, please, keep this a secret, like the one you are keeping now, about yourselfs. And please, do not leave this room until I am finished, you will need to be very understanding” He told them.
“Your scaring me” Oliver said.
“Were sorry, but if we don't tell you, you will be in much worse danger.” I told him.
“Whats going on?” Miley asked.
“Look Miley..” Edward said. She froze.
“How, how did you know?” She asked shocked, then looked at her friends who were also in shock.
“I can read minds,” Edward said.
“No seriously tell us” Lilly said
“I am serious.” Edward said.
“I am not your average human, well I'm not atually human, nor is Bella, or Renesmee.” He said.
“I think we better leave” Miley said.
“No please.” I said,
“Listen to what we have to say, we're not here to hurt you, we want to protect you, but if you leave you will be hurt, and not by us, by people a lot more dangerous.” I told them.
“Ok were willing to listen, and we promise not to leave or freak no matter what you say or tell anyone what you say, like you asked, as long as you promise not to tell anyone our secret” Hannah said.
“It's a deal” I said. Rensemee looked at Edward confused.
“It's ok darling” He told her.
“Wow dude could you like just tell what she was thinking?” Oliver asked him.
“Yes” Edward answered.
“Ok try me” Oliver challanged.
“Do you really want me to say that?” He said looking at Oliver then Lilly, I laughed knowing exactly what Oliver was thinking.
“You'll get it wrong” Oliver said.
“Ok then if you really want me to. Your thinking about Lilly, and...”
“Wow Wow Wow! You can stop there.” Oliver said. I laughed,
“Hey what was he thinking about me?” Lilly asked, she looked at Oliver then Edward. Edward blinked at her. She blushed. Renesmee jumped onto my lap and put her hand to my cheek.
Mummy, why are you telling them this? she asked me in her thoughts, Edward looked at her, then me.
“You'll see Nessie, but don't worry we wont let anything happen to you or them” I told her. She hugged me.
“Wow can you read minds to!?” Lilly asked me. I shook my head.
“No” I said.
“But Renesmee, she has a power, that allows you to see what she's thinking.”
“Wow” Miley said.
“You can see for yourself if you want” I said. I looked at Nessie.
“Go tell Miley about our family at home” I told her, she walked over to Miley and put her hand on her cheek. Miley froze.
“Wow” she said when Renesmee was done.
“Thats just... Can you show Lilly and Oliver?” She asked Rensemee, Renesmee nodded and went towards Lilly. Once she showed the two of them, they believe every word of what we were saying.
“So where sitting in a room with 3 vampires? Isn't that like dangerous? Shouldn't you be like drinking our blood by now?” Oliver asked. Edward shook his head and laughed.
“We don't drink human blood, its the way of life our family chose, there is only one other vampire family that does that.” He said.
“Oh and your only in the room with 2 vampires.. and a half.” He continued.
“Huh?” Lilly said. I laughed.
“Renesmee is only half vampire, she is half human, I gave birth to her a year ago as a human and well died during the process.” I told them.
“Edward saved me by biting me, his venom spread just in time, but a vampire bite is the most painful thing you could ever ask for, I was bitten twice as a human, Edward saved me the first time.” I continued.
“Wow” Miley said.
“Wait a year ago?” She asked, looking at Rensemee.
“Renesmee, grows a lot faster than a human would. She will keep growing until she looks about 17, then she will stop.” Edward told them.
“Ohh. This is all very... weird.” Miley said.
“Why are you telling us all this anyway?” She asked. I looked at Edward. I wished there was some other way.
“Mi.. Hannah, you are in danger” he started. She froze.
“The voturi, which are like our kings, their after you. They think you power as a vampire will be great, and they want you to join them. Joining them isn't a great choice, they have been chasing after my sister and I for a long time.” He explained.
“Your. Kidding. Right?” She asked.
“Sadly, No” I said.
“And how do you know this?” Lilly asked us. I looked at her.
“Remember the girl Renesmee showed you? The one with black hair? My sister?” He asked they nodded.
“Her gift is seeing the future, she saw the voturi coming after Hannah and well thats when she called.” He explained. They looked at us, wide eyed. I looked at Miley.
“Hannah, please don't worry. We will not let them get you, we have delt with them before. And many other vampires. I have had 3 vampires come after me as a human, and the Voturi was very close to. But they came after both me and Edward not long ago, they thought we broke the rules, they thought we had turned our little girl into a vampire, they didn't believe she was half human.” I explained. They shuddered. I looked at Edward.
“The fights us Cullen's have, A lot in the last few years, for my Bella. Have taught us a lot. We will be fighting for you Hannah,we will not let them get you. We promise” Edward said. Hannah relaxed.
“Thankyou” she said. I looked at the time then got up.
“We should get Renesmee back” I told Edward. He nodded then got up to, with the other 3 following. I picked up Renesmee.
“We will be keeping watch over you and your family's. Please do not worry. And please do not tell anyone about this. Not even your family, we will come and find you again soon.” Edward assured Miley. She nodded. I went and hugged her,
“Trust us” I said. Then we left, I could feel how scared the 3 of them had been, I had only been in their positions a few years ago. And that memory will never fade.
Sorry it took so long to post. So much school work :'(
anyway tell me what you thinkk =)
i love reading your comments :D
D.H.C
10-19-2008, 02:48 AM
More...!!!!!
huskerrich
10-19-2008, 09:19 AM
great job megz.
WiLDoNE0457
10-19-2008, 09:32 AM
more
i am writing the next chapter now
sorry i didn't get to post the chapter it is written but i remembered i have heaps of homework that i have to do because my school doesn't let u get away without doing it. i will try an post it tomorrow.
sorry :(
huskerrich
10-22-2008, 09:00 AM
oh come on megz, ff is more important than school
oh come on megz, ff is more important than school
lol
i wish i was as good as school as i you guys say I am at writing ff. But i failed my latest writing exam so obviously my teachers don't like my stories. :'(
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By the time we got back to our hotel Alice was sitting on the bed waiting for us.
“Alice!” I said and ran over to hug her. Renesmee jumpped up and down with joy then jumpped into Alice's arms.
“Happy Birthday Nessie” She said. Renesmee smiled. She looked at Edward.
“The others will be here tomorrow.” She told him. Edward nodded, I could tell he was worried. I dragged him over to the couch and sat him down and hopped on his lap. I kissed him.
“Edward, don't worry, it'll all work out.” I told him. He kissed me back.
“I know Bella, but I can't help it, Miley is such a great girl, and the Volturi just want to change her like that, its not right.” He said. I hugged him, he hugged me back, I knew all he needed was time. Alice came over and sat next to us with Renesmee on her lap.
“Sorry to interrupt but I think one of us should go keep an eye on Miley.” She said. I nodded.
“I'll go.” I said getting up. Edward pulled me back down.
“Bella don't go” He said. I looked at him.
“I'm not letting you go, and she hardly knows Alice yet, and if we need to tell her something, you turning up at her house won't be very good from her fathers point of few.” I explained. Edward looked at me then nodded.
“Your right” He said.
“Be safe” He said.
“I will” I said. Then kissed him.
“Call me when you get any news” I said as I got up.
“I'll call you just to hear your voice” He said. I laughed then kissed Renesmee,
“sleep tight honey” I told her, she hugged me.
“I love you mummy” She said.
“You to Nessie.” I said, then looked at Alice.
“Thanks for everything Alice” I said. She got up and hugged me.
“Call me if you want me to come take over.” She said. I nodded then left.
I ran all the way to the beach where I knew I would find Miley. She saw me and ran over to me.
“BELLA!” she screemed. I walked over to her.
“Bella I'm freaking out here!” She told me. I shook my head.
“Miley, we told you not to worry.” I told her.
“I know, I just can't help it.” She said. I hugged her,
“It'll be alright, I keep a look out for you tonight, you'll be fine.” I assured her.
“Bella, no, go and get some sleep, you can't spend your whole night worrying about me.” She said. I laughed.
“I don't sleep Miley” I told her. She looked at me.
“Wow” She said, I laughed again.
“Honestly Miley, you'll be fine, I told you this has happened to me a lot before. If it gets out of hand we'll call the La Push pack over as well.” I said.
“The La Push pack?” She asked.
“Warewolfs. Great guys, but pretty scary when they get mad.” I said. She shuddered. I laughed.
“Come on Miley, stop worrying. Go home and spend the time with you family.” I told her. She shook her head.
“Won't you come with me?” She asked.
“We could have like a sleepover, Lilly can come to.” She continued. I shrugged.
“I don't see the harm.” I said. Then Lilly ran up to us.
“Did I just hear the word sleepover?” She asked. I laughed,
“Were you like listening to our conversation?” Miley asked her. She blussed then shrugged.
“Come on then, lets go back to my house.” Miley said,
“You girls go, I'll catch up.” I told them, I had to hunt before I spent the night with humans.
“How will you find us?” Miley asked.
“I already know where you live, Alice told me.” I told her.
“Ok, don't be to long but.” Miley said. I nodded then went off to hunt.
I was just walking up Miley's driveway when Edward called.
“Edward” I said.
“Bella dear, anything new?” He asked.
“Nothing, Miley wants me to stay at her house tonight so I'm just heading there now.” I told him.
“Oh ok, be careful Bella, and if you want Alice or I to come take over just call.” He said.
“I will.” I promised.
“I love you” He told me.
“I love you too. Give Renesmee a kiss for me.” I told him.
“Will do. Bye Bells.”
“Bye Ed.” We hung up and I walked up to the door. I knocked.
“Bella?” I heard Miley ask.
“Yeh it's me Miley.” I said. She came and opened the door.
“Finally” She said, hugging me then dragging me inside.
“Hey dad this is Bella. Can her and Lilly sleep over tonight please?” She asked her dad.
“Sure Miley.” he said then turned to me.
“Hi Bella, nice to meet you.” He said to me.
“You to Mr Stewart.” I replied.
“Do you want a lift to your house to get your stuff?” He ask me.
“No its fine, I'll get my uhmm, sister to bring it over.” I told him. I really hoped Alice was watching this. My phone rang,
“That would be her now.” I said then answered the phone.
“I'll be there in 5” Alice said.
“Thanks Alice,” I said. Then hung up. Miley's brother came running down the stairs.
“Hey Miles can you..” He looked at me.
“Whoaa! Hello there.” He said to me.
“Uhmm Hi.” I said. Miley rolled her eyes
“Jackson this is Bella, Bella, Jackson.” She said
“Bella” He said.
“You intrested in going out sometime?” He asked me,
“Uhmm, I'm in a relationship, a very strong one, that isn't going to end soon.” I told him.
“Ohh” he said then looked at the ring on my finger. His eyes widened. There was a knock at the door.
“That would be Alice.” I said. Jackson walked to the door.
“Whoaa.” He said. I shook my head.
“She is to.” I said.
“Awhh man” He complained then walked back upstairs.
“Your brother is weird.” Alice said, letting herself in.
“Miley this is Alice.” I said.
“Hey Alice.” She said
“Hi Miley.” She said.
“Heres your stuff Miley, oh and Edward said to call him later and Renesmee said she loves you.” Alice said,
“Thanks Alice. Any news from the others?” I asked. She went and sat down,
“Not yet. Their landing at 10 tomorrow if you want to come to the air port. You to Miley, you should meet them all.” She explained.
“Thanks I'd love to.” Miley said. Then let Lilly -who was waiting outside- in.
“Bella if you want to go back and be with your family, I can stay and keep watch.”
“No Alice it's fine, really” I assured her. She nodded.
“Ok then, I guess I'll just be going.” She said.
“Bye Alice.” Miley said. Alice looked at Miley.
“Bye Miley, Lilly.” she said. I hugged her.
“Thanks Alice, I'll see you tomorrow.” I said. She kissed me on the cheek then skipped out the door.
“ Bella” Lilly said. I turned and looked at her
“Yes?” I said as I went and sat beside her.
“Whats going to happen to Miley?” She asked looking at me then Miley. I sighed.
“Nothing is going to happen to Miley, we wouldn't let that happen. Most of their powers won't even be able to get pass us.” I assured them. Miley looked at me confused.
“Whys that?” She asked. I laughed,
“My power will stop them.” I told them.
“Bella, what exactly is your power?” Miley asked me.
“I can sheild the mind. Most of the powers effect your mind. Like Edward's he can't read my mind. He never actually could, not even when I was human. But when I became a vampire. I learnt how to expend my sheild. I can protect the people around me from their powers as well.” I explained.
“Wow” Lilly said.
“Vampires are so cool.” Miley said. I laughed.
“I guess you've never had vampires try to kill you have you?” I suddered at the memory.
“What happened?” Lilly asked. I sighed and told them about Victorier, James and Laurrent, and the times they came after me. When I finally finished telling the stories. They were frozen solid in their sleeping bags, shocked by my stories.
“It's a good thing Edward managed to kill them.” Miley wispered. I nodded.
“You to look exausted. You should get some sleep. Don't worry, nothing should happen tonight, I'll be here if anything does. And Alice would see it coming.” I told them. They sighed.
“Ok Miley” Lilly said.
“Thankyou for this.” Miley said.
“It's my pleasure, I'd hate anything to happen to you, Either of you.” I told them
“Sleep tight girl.” I finished.
“Goodnight.” They said together then drifted into a deep sleep.
sorry it took so long to post more =(
tell me what you think :D
i will try and post more on the weekend
huskerrich
10-23-2008, 08:51 AM
thank you megz, if you would like help on the writing issue contact me.
i am writing the next chapter now.
I just spent the whole weekend doing a science assignment :(
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It was early in the morning, about 3:00 when my phone rang. It was Edward.
“Hey Edward.” I said.
“Bella!” He said, relief in his voice.
“Why didn't you call?” he contined.
“I was worried sick.” He said.
“Sorry Edward” I said.
“You shouldn't have been worried. Alice would have seen if something happened to me.” I told him.
“I know.” He sighed.
“But you always call me when I ask you to, and well when you didn't I well couldn't help but worry.” He said.
“I was going to call you when they woke up.” I told him.
“Is everything ok Bella?” He asked me. I sighed.
“Yeh, I guess.” I said. I knew even if I tried to lie he would see right through it.
“Bella...” He said.
“I just hate, seeing them in danger, they did nothing, they didn't even know about us. Why do things like this have to happen?” I asked him.
“Oh Bella.” He said.
“It's ok really, I better go, I can hear Miley's dad walking around.” I said.
“Ok, I'll come and pick you girls up around 8.” He told me.
“Ok. I love you Edward.” I said.
“You to Bella, see you soon.” He replied, then hung up.
At about 7:00 Miley and Lilly woke up. They had breakfast and got dressed. By the time they were ready it was already 8:00. There was a knock at the door.
“Thats Edward.” I said getting up.
“Oh do I get to meet my competition?" Jackson said from the kitchen table.
“Give it up Jackson, I love Edward, and nothing is gonna change that.” I told him, then opened the door. The minute I opened the door he pulled my face to his and kissed me. I kissed him back, I could hear Robby Ray's footsteps coming down the stairs. He coughed. I placed my forehead on Edward's and laughed. Then I turned around to face Robby.
“Sorry about that Mr Stewart” I said. He sighed.
“Teenagers.” He said. I laughed.
“I'd like you to meet the love of my life, Edward Cullen.” I said to him.
“Hi Mr Stewart, nice to meet you.” Edward said.
“Hey Edward. Come in.” Robby Ray said. Edward shook his head.
“I should get going, I'm actually here to pick up these 3 lovely girls.” He said.
“Oh really?” Robby Ray said.
“Yeh, where just going out for a bit of shopping and stuff, I insisted on tagging along.” He lied.
“Oh ok then, you kids have fun.” He said. And the 4 of us left. I heard Jackson complain to his father as we walked down the driveway to the car where Alice and Renesmee where waiting for us.
“Thats my competition!?” Jackson complained. I laughed then kissed Edward.
“He's nothing compared to you.” I told him he kissed me back.
“I wasn't worried.” He laughed. I laughed with him. Reneesmee was sitting in the car with Alice the minute she saw me she jumpped up and down in her seat then ran out of the car into my arms. I laughed.
“Hello Renesmee” I said, she hugged me then placed her hand on my cheak.
“I missed you to.” I told her. She hugged me again.
At the airport as we were waiting for the plane to land Alice had a vision.
“There planning how to get her.” Alice said. I looked at her,
“When will they be here?” I asked. She shook her head.
“Thet haven't decided yet, but I think it will be soon.” She answered. I looked at Miley worried, she was sitting next to me playing with Renesmee, she had know idea what was happening. Edward pulled me onto his lap.
“Bella, please don't worry.” He said. I rapped my arms around him,
“why do they have to do this?” I asked him. He hugged me.
“Because, they only think of themselves, their selfish and unfair.” He said. I nodded then placed my head on his chest. A few minutes later the plane landed, Alice jumpped to her feet the minute she saw Jasper and ran over to him at a human pace. The rest of the family followed behind him. Alice and Jasper kissed then Alice skipped over to us dragging Jasper along with her. She did the job of introducing everyone.
“Everyone this is Miley and Lilly,” She said.
“And this is Carlisle, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie and Emmett.” She said pointing to everyone as she said their names.
“Hello Miley, Lilly.” Esme said.
“Hi.” The girls replied. I could see the shock on their face.
“Girls don't worry about anything, we wont let the volturi touch you,” Carlise said. Miley sighed she had heard that so many times.
“Thankyou Carlisle, and all of you, I don't deserve people like you to protect me like this.” She said. Jasper shook his head and went over to Miley, placing his hand on her sholder, she suddenly calmed.
“Don't think like that, we will protect you, because you deserve to be protected. No questions asked.” He told her. She sighed again.
“Well we should be getting you to home now.” Edward said.
“Don't want to worry your father Miley.” He continued. She nodded.
“Wait before you go!” Alice said. Then dissapeared, only to appear not even 3 seconds later with two shopping bags.
“Told your dad we were shopping didn't you?” She asked them handing them their bags.
“Uhmm thanks Alice.” Lilly said.
“Yeh thanks” Miley continued. Edward picked up Renesmee and grabbed my hand.
“Come on then” He said leading them to the car, they followed silently.
Comment! :D
I only got one comment last time but I still posted it because I knew I wouldn't be able to for a few days after this.
More comments the sooner it will be up :)
huskerrich
10-26-2008, 09:39 AM
I understand Megz, you are doing great.
WiLDoNE0457
10-26-2008, 02:40 PM
more!!!
i will probably post more on Wednesday.
If i can I will tomorrow but I have a lot of homework that i couldn't do today due to a BIG exam tomorrow that i had to study for. And I also have another exam on Wednesday but its not a big. And I have youth group tomorrow. So we will see what happens.
huskerrich
10-27-2008, 09:12 AM
have funmegz
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Alice and Jasper were out keeping watch on Miley, the rest of us were waiting in the hotel room, Renesmee asleep in Rosalie's arms. I was sitting on Edward's laps staring into his eyes when suddenly worry appeared in them.
What's wrong? I thought. He just shook his head then looked at Renesmee, I followed his eyes, Renesmee was stirring in her sleep. I looked back at Edward, he hugged me tighter. Then suddenly Renesmee screemed.
“NO LEAVE HER ALONE!” She screemed. My head shot up to look at her again, she was still sound alseep, stirring like crazy. My poor little girl was having a bad dream. I started to get up and take her but Edward held me closer.
“Leave her.” He said. I shook my head.
“I can't do that.” I told him, fighting against his hold.
“If she doesn't resolve the dream it will just come back.” He said. I sighed. Not moving my eyes from my daughter. Edward put his hand under my chin and turned my face to see his.
“I love you.” He said. I smiled then kissed him, he pulled away from the kiss looking at Renesmee again. She was awake now, her hands held out to Edward and I, tears rolling from her face. I jumpped up and scooped her into my arms, hugging her close to my chest. Edward put his arm around my waist and pulled me back onto his lap, hugging us both. Then Renesmee placed her hand on my face, I gasped in shock. She had dreamt the volturi were chasing Miley and she was alone to save her. All Miley was screeming was 'it's all your fault Renesmee!' I wipped the tears from Renesmee's face, and kissed her forehead.
“It's not your fault” I assured her.
“And don't ever think it is.” I said.
“And we would never leave you alone with the Volturi Renesmee, you know that.” Edward told her.
“Miley will be fine,” I told her.
“You promise?” She asked me.
“I promise” I answered. She hugged me tightly.
“I love you mummy.” She said.
“I love you to Nessie.” I told her. She yawned.
“Go back to sleep Renesmee, your tired.” Edward told her. She looked at him and shook her head.
“Please Nessie, for me?” He asked her. She sighed and nodded. Edward took her from my arms and hugged her.
“Sleep tight darling. I love you.” He told her.
“I love you to daddy.” She said, then yawned again. Esme came over towards us and Edward handed her Renesmee, Esme took her over to the bed and place her in there, sitting at her feet. Edward hugged me tight to his chest and started kissing me all over.
“You. Know. How. Much. I. Love. You. Bella” He said in between each kiss. I laughed.
“I think i have a pretty good idea.” I joked, then kissed him back eagerly. Suddenly his cell phone vibrated. I sighed.
“Leave it please” I begged, he laughed.
“It could be Alice.” He said. I kissed him.
“Please.” I continued. He laughed then shook his head. Then the phone stopped ringing.
“Yes!” I said under my breath. He laughed then kissed me. Suddenly Carlise's phone started ringing. I felt guitly, what if it had be an emergency. Carlise walked over to us and handded me the phone.
“It's for you.” He said. I sighed.
“Hello?” I said into the phone.
“BELLA!” Alice screemed. I sighed, I could feel a lecture coming on.
“would you please not distract Edward like that, you know he has no self control and there could have been an emergency.” she joked. I laughed.
“HEY!” Edward said, then went back to kissing me. I laughed again.
“What is it Alice?” I asked.
“Oh yeh.” She said.
“I just had a vision of Aro and he's planning a way to get Miley.. Well Hannah alone to transform her. He thinks if he just can get her alone he can do anything he wants.” Alice said.
“Ohh.” I answered
“You want me to come warn her?” I asked getting up, Edward pulled me back down.
“No, No, I'm on my way now, and Edward wouldn't let you go anyway.” She said, Edward laughed.
“Thankyou Alice.” I said.
“Anytime Bella.” She said then hung up. I kissed Edward.
“You know your going to get me in big trouble one day.” I joked.
“Oh well” He said.
“I can always get you out of it.” He continued. Suddenly Renesemee started screeming. I jumpped up to fast for Edward to catch me and ran to pick her up. Her eyes suddenly opened and she hugged me closely. Edward ran and hugged both of us.
“It's all my fault” She mumbled.
“Why did I ever wish to come here, its all my fault.” She said then hid her head in my hair. I looked at Edward worried, I could see the worry in his eyes staring back at me. What were we going to do?
sorry its only short
heaps of exams
comment please :D
WiLDoNE0457
10-29-2008, 04:47 PM
more!
doesn't anyone else want more? :(
huskerrich
11-01-2008, 10:08 AM
Megz, I understand that you want people to appreciate your story more, for myself I love your story and the work you are putting in it for us. Write because you enjoy writing not because I or the entire forum want you to write.
i will post more soon, got a few assignments i need to work on sorry its taking so long
huskerrich
11-03-2008, 10:42 AM
on your own time and schedule is fine.
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It was a long night, Renesmee crying until she finally fell asleep in my arms, clinging on to me tightly. Edward has his arms rapped around me, we were standing perfectly still, not wanting to wake Rensemee, she needed her sleep. Edward suddenly moved away from me and looked out the window.
What's wrong? I though. He turned and looked at me.
“Alice is on her way, with Miley.” He said. Then looked at Renesmee, he smiled then walked over to me, he took Renesmee from my arms releasing her grip on me and putting her in the bed, pulling the covers over her. I looked at him confused. He took my hand and sat down on the couch pulling me on his lap.
“She's sound asleep now.” He said.
“She hasn't has such a deep sleep since we got here.” He smiled. I smiled back.
“Finally.” I sighed. He laughed.
“Bella, Bella, Bella” he said, then kissed me, I kissed him back then rested my head on his chest.
“If I could sleep.” I said sounding exausted. He laughed then kissed the top of my head. Suddenly Alice came in with Miley and Jasper right behind her.
“Edward!” she said loudly, Edward held up his hand and shook his head, Alice looked at him confused he pointed at Renesmee.
“Oh sorry.” She wispered. I laughed. She sat on the couch beside us on Jaspers lap, Miley sitting on our other side.
“Five weeks.” Alice whispered. I looked at her, I knew exactly what she meant without having to ask. I turned to look at Edward, he was staring at Miley.
“Stop worrying.” He told her. I turned to face her to.
“Aro is coming alone, he thinks it will be better” Alice explained. I sighed,
“We can beat Aro any old day.” I said.
“Really?” Miley asked. I nodded.
“No body guards coming Alice?” I asked, but Edward answered before she could speak.
“Surprisingly no.” He said. I looked at him shocked.
“See Miley, he'll have no one to protect him and you'll have all of us, trust me please, you'll be fine.” Miley nodded. Sunddenly Renesmee woke up, she sat up in the bed and looked at Miley with pleeding eyes.
“She wants you Miley.” Edward said. Miley looked at him shocked, Renesmee crawled to the end of the bed waiting for Miley to come to her. Miley walked over and picked Renesmee up then brang her back to the couch and sat next to us with Renesmee sitting on her lap. Renesmee looked at me then grabbed my hand and looked back at Miley.
“Im sorry Miley.” She muttered, Miley looked at me and Edward confused. Edward sighed.
“She thinks it's her fault Aro is coming after you, she is going crazy about it.” He said.
Miley looked at Renesmee.
“Please don't be sorry.” She begged. Renesmee shook her head tears forming in her eyes.
“It's not your fault Renesmee, and I will never think it is. If it wasn't for you coming here I probably would be in worse danger. I wouldn't have your family here to protect me.” Miley explained.
“Really?” Renesmee asked. Miley nodded, Renesmee looked at me and Edward we nodded at her as well. She sighed.
“Ok then. But I won't be happy until your safe.” She said.
“Thankyou” Miley answered.
Suddenly Alice froze, Edward only seconds after her, I could feel him stiffen under me.
“What? What is it?!” I asked them. There was a short silence.
I know its only short.
I will post more very very soon,
sorry its been so long a wait for this chapter.
please comment :)
huskerrich
11-07-2008, 09:15 AM
thank you Megz, I'm enjoying your story so much, I just hope you are having as much fun writing it.
thank you Megz, I'm enjoying your story so much, I just hope you are having as much fun writing it.
thanks im glad to know your enjoying it :D
yeh im having heaps of fun writing it the problem is finding time to do it.
WiLDoNE0457
11-07-2008, 09:34 PM
more!!!!
more!!!!
i will hopefully have the next chapter up by the end of today, if not it should be by the end of the weekend
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“He's changed his plans.” Alice said, I looked at her confused
“He's coming next week.” She said.
“WHAT!” I yelled jumpping up.
“Bella, love. It'll be ok.” Edward said.
“One week!” I said. He hugged me. I looked at Miley, she was shocked, staring into space, Renesmee trying to get her attention but failing. I walked over and picked Renesmee up.
“It'll be ok mummy, remember.” She said. I nodded.
“Of course it will be Nessie, I was just taken by surprise, thats all.” I assured her. The last thing I needed was her stressing out again. Miley finally spoke.
“What do we do?” She asked.
“We,” Edward answred.
“be ready, someone will be with you all the time, and if anything happens the rest of us can be with you in seconds. We are not leaving you or Lilly or anyone else you know that Aro may be after out of our site.” He said. Miley bit her lip worried.
“Don't be scared.” He told her,
“It'll be fine. Won't it Alice?” I asked her, Alice nodded,
“I see you as a human long after Aro is gone, don't worry Miley.” Alice assured us, Renesmee smiled.
“You'll be ok Miley, Auntie Alice is never wrong.” Renesmee assured her. I kissed her head, she looked up at me and smiled. A huge grin suddenly crossed Edward's face,
“Lets not sit here worrying, lets go do something fun,” He said. He looked at Renesmee,
“What do you want to do Nessie?” He asked her, she looked at Miley then back at Edward.
“I don't know daddy.” She said, I laughed,
“Any seggestions Miley?” I said. Miley thought for a minute,
“The beach here is beautiful we could go there.” She said. Renesmee smiled and nodded, I looked at Edward.
“Is that what you want to do Nessie?” He asked her.
“Yes please” She said. Edward and I laughed.
“Ok then, you and Miley can go to the beach, just stay safe.” He told her. Miley looked at us
“Your not coming?” She said to me.
“Oh no, we couldn't never go out in the sun” I said, she looked at me confused, I laughed and got up walking towards the window, I opened it and let the sunlight shine on me. Miley stared mouth open, after a few minutes she finally spoke.
“Wow.” She said. I laughed then walked back over to the lounge Edward held his arms out for me and I sat on his lap, he hugged me tight to his chest.
“What about Renesmee?” She asked.
“She's fine in the sunlight, she doesn't” I stopped trying to think of the right word.
“Sparkle in the sunlight the way we do, she can go out in the sun without drawing any attention at all.” I said. Renesmee smiled.
“Will you take me to the beach Miley? Please” She asked. Miley nodded.
“Of course I will.” She said.
“Edward and I will be close by, you will be perfectly safe.” I told her, she smiled.
“Maybe you should invite Oliver and Lilly?” Edward suggested. Miley shook her head, I looked at her, then Edward confused,
“After that day we met you guys, and you read Oliver's thoughts, he finally told Lilly about the way he feels for her, and well their kinda on a date.” She explained.
“Oh.” I said,
“Well good for them.” I added, Miley laughed,
“I must say it's about time.” She said. Suddenly Edward's phone rang, Alice froze.
“It's Aro, he has no idea your here, but he is going to try and get us on his side again, he'll be in for a shock when he see's you next week, don't mention to him you here.” She explained before Edward could answer, I got up and took Miley's hand,
“Come with me Miley, he might hear your heart beat on the phone.” I said, she put Renesmee down and followed me outside. I could still hear everything going on inside.
“Hello?” Edward said.
“Edward, old friend, how are you?” I heard Aro on the other line, I grinded my teath, Miley looked at me confused.
“I'm jjust great Aro what about you?” Edward replied, all I wanted at that moment was to run in there and snatch the phone and have a go at Aro.
“Oh I'm wonderful, just calling to check up on you and your family. How are all the Cullen's?” Aro said.
“We're all great Aro, but none of us are joining your army, we are all happy where we are.” Edward said.
“Oh fine then, I'll be getting some one much better than all you Cullen's put together soon anway. Bye Edward” Aro said, I looked at Miley worried then led her back in.
“That was very... Weird.” Edward said, he picked Renesmee up and walked over to Miley and I.
“Oh well, lets get you two to the beach.” He said, Rensemee smiled and reached over to me, I took her and went to change her into beach clothes.
I know its not that good.
I wrote it quickly
please comment :D
huskerrich
11-09-2008, 10:24 AM
I'm still curious as to what power, Miley has over vampires, but great story.
ill try and post more soon
sorry its taking so long
huskerrich
11-13-2008, 09:20 AM
Megz, i thought you fell off the world.
Megz, i thought you fell off the world.
lol sorry
i should post more today
i got a pupil free day soo i have more time today.
I am going out for lunch with some friends for my birthday, then my best friend is coming over for a few hours cause she can't come to lunch cause she goes to a different school now. then i have all night to write :) i told myself no studying today =)
if i have time ill post 2 chapters
it will be posted tomorrow
sorry its taking so long
ive started the next chapter, but im off to bed now.
sorry
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We were watching Renesmee at the beach from the trees when all of a sudden Edward's phone rang. It was Alice.
“Alice whats wrong?” Edward said.
“He is near, very near, I can see him talking to you. Get Miley away from there, get her away now!” I heard Alice demand, I looked at Edward and pulled out my mobile to call Miley.
“Miley! Get to us now! Bring Renesmee and get to us, leave your stuff just get to us!” I told her.
“Why?” She asked.
“This isn't the time Miley, just run.” I said then hung up. I could see her in the distance, running with Renesmee in her arms, although Renesmee would have been faster runner there was no way she would do it with all these humans. Edward looked at me.
“Bella.” He said. I stared into his eyes trying to read what he was thinking.
“You take Miley and Nessie back to the others, I'll stay here and talk to Aro.” He told me.
“I'm not leaving you alone!” I demanded.
“What other option is there?” He asked.
“Keep Nessie, she can run for help if something happens, I'll drop Miley off and come straight back. Aro will want to see how much she has grown anyway, we don't want him coming back.” I told him. He nodded, he knew we didn't have tome to fight. When Miley arrived Edward took Renesmee and I went to Miley.
“Hop on my back” I said
“What?” She asked confued.
“I'm taking you back to the others, I'll explain on the way.” I told her.
“But..” She started but I cut her off pulling her onto my back.
“Close your eyes!” I told her and ran. I knew it was no use trying to explain everything to her, she'd be so scared at the moment. All of a sudden she was screaming.
“Miley, I told you to close your eyes.” I told her. I looked back at her and she closed her eyes tightly.
“HOW DO YOU DO THIS!” She yelled. I laughed.
“Easy.” Then I stopped we were in the hotel room. I placed her down on the bed, laying her down.
“Open your eyes Miley.” I said. She opened them.
“Wow” She said. I laughed and then Alice was suddenly beside me. Miley looked at Alice.
“Wow” She said again, I looked at Alice.
“Explain to her what's going on, I'm going back to Edward and Renesmee” She nodded.
“You'll be safe.” She assured me.
“Thanks Alice” I said, I hugged her then left. Within seconds I was with Edward again.
“He is near I can hear him.” Edward said before I could do anything. I rapped my arms around him and Renesmee -who he was carrying- and hugged them tightly. He kissed the top of my head then stiffened. I knew what that ment. I releised my hold him and took his free hand. We looked into the forest, waiting for Aro, then he appeard.
“Ahh” He said
“Edward, Bella and little Renesmee. What a surprise seeing you here.” He said,
“Where on vacation” Edward told him.
“Yes, Yes of course.” Aro replied, looking at us.
“I suppose that meens you know what I'm plaining to do?” He said, I grinded my teeth and Edward tightend his hand around mine.
“Of course we do, and were going to stop you.” Edward said.
“Ahh, no my friends, your not. Hannah will be a great vampire, all singers always are. I have done tests on her. I believe that her power will be with her wonderful voice, you see, she will somehow be able to convince anyone of anything. And when I have her, I can get her to convince yourself and Alice to join my covin.” He explained
“That will never happen!” I demanded. Renesmee looked at me, worried. Then I had a thought.
He doesn't know she is Miley? I thought. I looked at Edward. He shook he's head slightly.
If he doesn't find out, and Miley doesn't be Hannah for a while it should be fine? He'll just give up?
I asked. He shrugged.
Then he won't find out. I promised. A smile crossed Edward's face as I let my sheild around him and Rensemee. Aro looked at us confused,
“WHAT ARE YOU THINKING!” He demanded touching Edward. Edward just smiled, I knew that meant this was working. Aro's eyebrow raised and he looked at me.
“Leave her alone!” Edward demanded passing me Renesmee he pulled his upper lip up and barred his teeth. I placed my hand on Edward's sholder.
“Edward, he's not worth it” I wispered, Edward relaxed with my touch.
“Aro you need to learn to figure things out by yourself not with others thoughts.” I told him.
“Oh and that only occurs to me?! Not your husband?!” He demanded. I stayed calm, I knew if we fought him the rest of the volturi will be chasing after us until were dead.
“He's figured me out hasn't he? He know more abou me that I know about myself, yet he can't read my mind. And even if he could, he doesn't see half as much as you do. Start doing stuff yourself.” I said, I was really getting sick of this, I just wanted to go back to the hotel room and be with my family.
“Aro, where not going to waste any more time on you, but I know for a fact you will never find Hannah. And if you do you'll be wasting your time.” Edward warned, he grabbed my hand again and we walked of. I looked back a Aro, he was standing there frozen, I laughed.
How shocked is he? I thought.
“Very” Edward wispered. We both laughed. I kissed Renesmee's head and she hugged me tightly.
“She'll be safe mummy won't she?” She asked me.
“Of course she will.” I told Renesmee
“No matter what.” Edward added. Then we broke into a run, heading back to the hotel room to be with the rest of out family.
Once again sorry it took so long
been so busy
comment please :)
huskerrich
11-15-2008, 08:25 AM
I had a feeling that it was her voice, great story, more please.
I had a feeling that it was her voice, great story, more please.
I will try to get some up soon
I have to study but, heaps of yearlys in the next few weeks
huskerrich
11-15-2008, 10:35 PM
no problem, Megz, i enjoy it whenever I see you around,
sorry its taking so long i will try and have it up tomorrow
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It was early morning and we were sitting in the hotel room quitely watching Renesmee sleep, Esme and Carlise were out keeping watch for Miley, we were alert and ready to go as soon as we were needed. Alice was more alert then I had ever seen her, looking out for anything and everything. I was laying across Edward's Chest on the bed next to Renesmee, waiting for her to wake. Edward was just staring into my eyes, playing with my hair kissing me every few minutes.
“Whats going on Alice?” Edward asked. He must have seen something unusal in her thoughts. I looked at him then Alice confused.
“I'm not sure, everything is getting blurry.” She told us.
“Is it Renesmee? We can take her out of the room.” I offered.
“No, No, I'll look through the blurs, I don't want us to seperate.” She told me. I nodded and turned back to look at Renesmee to see that she was awake. Once she noticed that I saw her she smiled at me, I sat up and she jumpped into my arms, I kissed her head and hugged her tightly.
“Argh, it's getting worse!” Alice complained. I looked at Edward, he was now smiling, he got up and walked over to the door, to answer it just after there was a knock. I recignised the smell before I saw who it was. I looked at Renesmee, she was smiling widley.
“JACOB!” she screemed, jumpping out of my arms and running to him to give him a huge hug. He laughed.
“Hey Guys” He said then let himself in.
“That explains thing Alice.” I laughed.
“Yep.” she said. I laughed again and walked over to Jacob,
“What are you doing here?” I laughed.
“HA, nice to see you to Bells.” He said.
“Oh sorry.” I laughed.
“It's Kay, I thought you guys might need some help fighting Aro that's all.” he said. I looked at him confused.
“Carlise told him.” Edward told me.
“Ohhh.” I said.
“So what have I missed? Nothing good I hope.” he said. We told him all that had happened then Renesmee interrupted us.
“Mummy, I want to see Miley.” She said. I could see worry in her eyes.
“Sure honey, whats wrong?” I asked her. She climbed out of Jacobs arms into mine and hugged me, I held her close to my chest.
“I worry mummy, when I'm not with her I worry. If Aro ever did anything to her, I would never forgive my self.” She told me, then started to cry. I rubbed her back.
“Shh” I hushed her.
“Nessie, you know it will be ok.” I told her kissing her head. She shrugged.
“We have been through this before darling.”
“I know, but I can't help it. I worry, the worrying hurts mummy” She said. I stood up,
“If I take you to Miley will you feel better?” I asked her. She nodded.
“Then lets go.” I said. Edward jumpped up and stood next to me.
“You stay here Jacob.” he said.
“I think it will be a bit weird Miley meeting you, we'll introduce you to her later. Lets take things slow.” he continued. Jacob nodded then together we jumpped out of the window and ran. We met Carlise and Esme on the way,
“What are you three doing here?” Esme asked. Renesmee reached over to her to explain, I handed her to Esme and she placed her hand on her face. When she was done, Esme hugged Renesmee,
“Aww Nessie” She said
“You know your mum and dad will protect Miley, and so will the rest of us.” She assured her, Renesmee nodded then reached out to me, I took her carefully into my arms hugging her.
“Thankyou Esme.” I said. Esme nodded. Edward was thanking Carlise at that same time, then we took off.
When we jumpped through Miley's window her room was empty, but we could hear her voice. It was coming from her closet. I put Renesmee down and took her hand -Edward taking her other- and walk to the closet, I slowley opened the door and gasped. He closet was smaller than mine, but somehow seemed bigger, it was amazing, Alice would love this place. Miley was sitting on a step with Lilly, they both smiled when they saw us. Renesmee let go of Edward's and my hands and ran to Miley giving her a great hug, Miley just laughed.
“Hey Renesmee.” She said.
“Anything new?” Lilly asked us.
“We haven't seen Aro again, Alice is keeping watch. But we do have a warewolf here if needed.” I laughed. Lilly and Miley froze.
“A...a..a warewolf?” Miley said. I looked at Renesmee and she nodded, she placed one hand on both Miley and Lilly's face and told them all about Jacob and the other warewolfs.
“This is all very weird.” Lilly said when Renesmee was done.
“All this time I thought all this stuff didn't excist.” She continued. I laughed.
“I know the feeling.” I said and went to sit beside them Edward following.
“Don't worry, the dog won't hurt you.” Edward answered to an unspoken question. I elbowed him in the ribs.
“Owch” He said. I laughed.
“Remember when that used to hurt me” I said. He laughed too.
“Bella you were so brakeable.” He laughed. I nodded in aggrement.
“Tell us more about yourself please Bella, the you before you were a vampire, it seems like your a sister I know nothing about.” Miley said. I nodded.
“What do you want to know?” I asked.
“Everything.” She said.
“Well.” I said.
“My name was Bella Swan, my parent devorced when I was very young and I lived with my mother for most of my life, she was more of a child herself, it felt like I was the mother in the relationship. But when she got re-married I decided it would be better to go live with my father, Charlie. I moved to Forks and started at Forks high school. I still remember my first day, Edward avoided me.” I looked at him.
“She smelt to good, I was trying my best not to kill her.” He explained. Lilly shuddered.
“Well.” I continued.
“That ingnoring didn't last long, out first date was after he saved me from some guys who were stalking me, scary night that was. Soon after I guessed who he was, with a little help from Jacob I have to admit, at first I didn't believe it but when he told me it was true I wasn't scared, though he thought I was. Then after my 18th birthday, Edward left me, alone and heart broken.”
Miley looked at Edward.
“I thought that would be best, you see Jacob kinda attacked her, I believed I was much to dangerous for her.” He said.
“Well, Jacob mended my broken heart, he was and is my best friend, he made me happy when I never thought I could be. Then one day Alice saw me jumpping off a cliff, I was cliff diving, Jacob saved me when I was drowning, but Alice thought I died because she can't see wearwolfs, so she came to see for herself. Edward of course jumpped to conclusions after Rosalie told him what happened and he went to go kill himself, worst thing he'd ever done. I had to go stop him and then after that we were back together, that was the night he proposed to me, althought I didn't accept, I didn't think it was something I was ready to do.” I contined to story up to the current day. Hours had passed. Edward's phone rang when I was done. He answered it was Jacob he wanted to meet Miley. I looked at Edward worried once he hung up.
“Jacob wants to meet you.” Edward told Miley. She looked at us, I could read on her face that she was worried.
“It'll be ok.” I assured her.
I know this chapters a bit boring. But I should be getting better ones up soon
I have a few more exams then im done:)
tomorrow i have a bigg state wide exam. so i had to right this quick
tell me what you think :)
comment please
huskerrich
11-24-2008, 02:09 PM
Megz, you are doing real well, take your time, and when you are ready. nice job.
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“Miley hop on my back.” Edward told her. She walked over to Edward and he pulled her up on her back. I walked to Lilly.
“Up you get” I said pulling her up.
“What are you doing!” She demanded.
“You may want to close you eyes.” I told her as I took Renesmee's hand, Edward took her other. We jumpped out the window.
“Lilly! Eyes!” Edward said, then he starting leading the run back to the hotel. Once we got there Rosalie was standing outside. We stopped and put the girls down.
“You ok?” I asked them. Miley nodded but I could tell Lilly was a bit dissy, I laughed scooping her up in my arms and walking towards Roaslie.
“Whats wrong Rose?” I asked her.
“That dog, is the most annoying creature I have ever met!” She said. I laughed,
“Come on give Jake a break you know he only wants to help.” I told her. She sighed.
“I still don't like him” She said. I laughed and looked at Lilly, she was starting to get some colour back into her face so I placed her down holding her sholders so she wouldn't fall. Rose laughed.
“I'm ok” Lilly assured me. I laughed and let go of her. Miley walked over carrying Renesmee, Edward right behind her. Renesmee reached out to Rosalie, Rosalie took her then Renesmee put her hand on Rosalie's face. Edward stood behind me raping his hands around my waist and placing his head on my sholder. He kissed my cheak and we all stood there watching Renesmee tell Rosalie what was on her mind.
“I won't hurt Jacob” Rosalie told her, I knew exactly what Renesmee was thinking after that.
“It's just that the two of us dont get along, don't worry Nessie” She assured her kissing her head. I laughed.
“Come on lets go talk to the dog.” Rosalie said to us. Renesmee frowned and placed her hand on Rosalies face.
“Sorry Nessie” She apoligized. Renesmee reached out to me I took her in one arm and took Edward hand with my free hand, he let go of my waist and stood next to me,
“Let's go talk to Jacob.” I said. We lead the way up to the hotel room, Miley and Lilly behind us. We stopped outside the door.
“You'll be ok, I promise.” Edward assured Miley and Lilly. They nodded. I opened the door Jacob was standing in the doorway a huge smile crossed across his face, Edward laughed and lead us in.
Jacob walked up to Miley and Lilly who were standing in the doorway.
“Hey, I'm Jacob.” He said. I laughed,
“Give them a break Jake, you'll frighten them to death” I joked.
“Hey, at least I wont suck their blood Mrs Dracular” He replied.
“Ha very funny.” I said sarcastically. Renesmee struggled out of my arms, I placed her down on the floor and she ran over to Miley. Miley picked her up and Renesmee reached her hand to Miley's face. Miley sighed, hugged Renesmee then looked at Jake.
“Hey Jacob, I'm Miley, and this is Lilly” She said. Lilly waved nervously.
“Don't worry, he won't turn into a warewolf.” Edward assured her. She nodded.
“Hi Jacob.” she said looking at him with a confused expression. Edward laughed loudly.
“Lilly, stop thinking about it.” He told her, I laughed to.
“How is it, that you, you know, change?” Miley asked.
“I can show you if you want” Jacob said, Miley and Lilly took a quick step back. Jacob laughed.
“Its not that big a deal, its just like the vampire thing.” He told them.
“Jacob can't you please show them” Renesmee laughed, I looked at Jacob worried, he glanced back at me and Edward. Edward shrugged I turned to stare at him worried.
“It'll be fine.” He assured me, strocking my cheak. I sighed,
“Lets go” I said.
Once again sorry its took so long. But it paid of 93% in my maths yearly. :D
School is nearly over for the year :D YAY SUMMER :D
Tell me what you think :) love to hear from you
huskerrich
12-02-2008, 08:51 AM
good evening, how is my favorite Aussie doing, congrats on the 93, but I think you can do MORE
good evening, how is my favorite Aussie doing, congrats on the 93, but I think you can do MORE
im great how are you.
lol 93% was great! i only got like questions wrong in the whole test, I beat some people in the highest maths class (im in 2nd highest (above average for my age group) and the highest are expected to get at least 85%+ i only need to get like 70-80%+). my teacher told me it was one of the best scores.
i will try and get more of the story up asap, it will be alot easier when school is over teachers are throwing in last minute assinments and stuff they forgot to give us throughout the year that the government reqires us to do.
huskerrich
12-03-2008, 09:07 AM
That's great Megz, you must have good instincts, I been doing great, we had our first snow last night,
i am so sorry i havent posted any lately
my internet was heaps slow mmw wouldn't even load i waited hours.
then i was planning to tonight but i ended up going to a xmas party, playing so good old Ozzie cricket :)
I will try and post some on Saturday
thats the soonest ill be able to come on im down in Canberra til friday then friday night im off to see twilight :) finally.
sorry :(
huskerrich
12-09-2008, 08:19 AM
No need to apoligize Megz, it is nice to hear your voice, have a good trip to Canberra
WiLDoNE0457
12-13-2008, 01:11 PM
can't wait for more!
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We were in the forest, and Jacob had just phased when it happened.
“That's really freaky” Miley said to Jacob, he barked a laugh, then suddenly Edward froze, I knew suddenly something was wrong, I pushed Lilly and Miley behind my back and picked Renesmee up hugging her close to my chest.
“He's in the forest” Edward wispered. We looked at eachother, worried. I slowley pulled out my phone and dialed Alice's number.
“Come quick” I wispered into the phone, I couln't make my voice any higher.
“And bring everyone.” It was all I could say, I didn't give her time to ask questions, I hung up instantly. I looked at Miley and Lilly, I had never season anyone as scared as these girls looked right now.
“I wish Alice could see what's going to happen” I told Edward. He put his arm around my shoulder
“I know love, I do too.” He said, then suddenly Alice was next to us.
“Your not the only ones. This is killing me.” He said. Lilly and Miley jumpped in shock when she spoke.
“The others are on their way.” She said.
“Gosh Alice don't sneak up on us like that” Lilly wispered in shock. We all laughed.
“No Jacob” Edward said, but he was too late Jacob was already gone.
“Where did he go?” I asked.
“He wants to go find Aro, before he gets to us.” Edward said.
“WHAT! IS HE CRAZY!” I demanded. Then suddenly Alice froze,
“What is it Alice?” I asked. But she didn't reply. I looked at Edward.
“She can see.” He wispered.
“See what?” I asked confused.
“Aro will be here in a few minutes” Alice wispered.
“You can see? But Renesmee?” I asked, confused.
“I can see Renesmee” She said.
“How...” but she cut me off
“I have no idea, maybe as she gets older she becomes more like a single creature, maybe she's just grown on me, I still can't see warewolfs but.” She wispered. I looked at her confused.
“Bella, forget about it, we'll figure it out later.” Edward wispered in my ear, I nodded slowly. Then suddenly Emmetts voice was booming
“Where is he? Im gonna tear him appart” He boomed.
“Emmett” Jasper said.
“Sorry” Emmett replied Rosalie let out a small laugh then became very alert. We were all there, standing out guard and he came flying out of the trees launching himself at Miley. Edward caught him before he could even get to her.
“Aro, Aro, Aro, we don't want to hurt you but we will.” Edward threatened. Aro tried to free himself from Edward grip.
“No so strong without the rest of your coven are you?” Jasper laughed.
“I'm here to get a job done, let me do it peacefully.” Aro said.
“Not gonna happen.” I demanded.
“Now we can do this the easy way or the hard way Aro” Carlise said.
“LET ME GO!” Aro screemed.
“The hard way? Ok then?” Emmett said, he got down into a fighting position the others following his lead.
“Close your eyes.” I wispered to Miley and Lilly, they did as I said shutting their eyes tight. I passed Renesmee to Miley and followed the others in their fighting position.
“You wouldn't dare! You know my coven will be chasing you until you die!” Aro told us.
“No, they wouldn't they'd be so happy to be free, I've read all their minds before, they only stay because their scared of you.” Edward said. Emmett let out a growl ready to attack.
“Renesmee close your eyes” Edward said, then we attacked, we were all over him, ripping him apart.
“BELLA GO START A FIRE!” Edward screamed bettween attacks, I nodded and ran off, Rosalie following me,
“Get as much wood as you can” She said, we started ripping bark of trees. 5 seconds hadn't even passed when we started collecting Aro's scattered body parts and throwing them into the fire. Then it was all over.
“Miley, your safe now.” Esme said. Miley and Lilly opened their eyes slowley.
“He's gone?” Miley asked. Esme nodded, He won't bother you again.
“Who's gonna be in charge now?” Lilly asked. I looked at Edward, I had the same question.
“Caius, I can see it all, there all gonna be so happy” Alice answered.
“Thankyou so much, all of you, I owe you big time!” Miley said, I laughed.
“You owe us nothing.” I told her. I walked over to her and reached out for Renesmee, she jumpped into my arms and gave me a big hug. Then Jacob came running back.
“You guessed right Jacob, we killed him, it was out only choice.” Edward said. Jacob barked.
“Go home Jacob, Your family would be worried.” I said, Jacob just nodded and came and placed his nose to my face then licked me.
“Eww Jake grose!” I said, he barked a laugh then did the same thing to Renesmee, she laughed loudly and patted Jacobs head, then he was gone. Then Miley walked towards us.
“I know what I'll do.” She said, I looked at her confused.
“Renesmee, I have a surprise for you, I'll come by tonight before my concert, You're gonna love it” She said. I looked at her then Edward. They were both smiling.
“Alice you'll tell me won't you?” I asked her.
“Later Bella” She said, I groaned,
“Fine” I said. They laughed.
“Come on Edward lets take the girls back to the beach” Alice said, Edward nodded pulled Miley onto his back.
“Your gonna love it tonight Nessie” Alice said before she pulled Lilly onto her back and ran towards the beach with Edward. I sighed.
“Looks like were both gonna be surprised tonight” I said to Renesmee and kissed her forehead before running towards out hotel. It had been a long day. I couldn't wait to be safe between 4 walls again.
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.Oh.My.Jonas.
12-14-2008, 02:24 AM
more! This is good!
WiLDoNE0457
12-14-2008, 04:01 AM
this is great, more!
huskerrich
12-14-2008, 10:20 AM
good job megz.
I will try and post more soon
I finish school on Wednesday so if not before then I will do it on Wednesday
.Oh.My.Jonas.
12-15-2008, 08:16 PM
you finish school WEDNESDAY?!?!
i do Friday!
you finish school WEDNESDAY?!?!
i do Friday!
lol i go to a private school :P
my friend finished at the start of last week.
.Oh.My.Jonas.
12-18-2008, 05:46 PM
woahh, i went to a private school last year.
we never got out that early.
i get out early tomorrow.
butt.
i'm trying to convince my mom that going to school tomorrow is pointless. :{D
anywayss,
more!!
woahh, i went to a private school last year.
we never got out that early.
i get out early tomorrow.
butt.
i'm trying to convince my mom that going to school tomorrow is pointless. :{D
anywayss,
more!!
i always love the half day last days
this year my pastrol group play wii while we waited for the assembly to start then in assembly i always just catch up on sleep :P
sorry i haven't posted any all this preparation for Christmas is keeping my busy
i will try and post some soon
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We wern't at the hotel for long when Edward and Alice arrived. I had just put Renesmee to sleep when they came jumpping through the window. Edward came up behind me and gave me a hug, I turned around to rap my hands around him.
“Are you going to tell me what the big surprise is?” I wispered. He looked at me and smiled.
“My lips are sealed.” He said. I groaned and turned to Alice.
“Alice?” I asked.
“Miley asked me not to tell you.” She said.
“Hmph”
“Bella, you don't have to wait long, just let Nessie have someone to be surprised with.” Edward soothed me.
“You know I hate surprises.” I told him. He laughed.
“Yes I know, but since you stopped being a stubbern human you've accepted them a bit better.” He told me. I laughed.
“Bella, to save you the surprise.” Alice joked.
“Your mother will be calling in a few minutes.” She told me.
“Wow big surprise” I said and walked over to the couch. Edward followed me and sat next to me.
“Bella..”
“No Edward, I'm not talking to you.” I joked.
“Oh really?” he laughed, then leaned over to kiss me, I placed my hands on either side of his face and pulled away from him.
“Cheater” I said under my breath before pulling myself back to him. Then my phone rang. Alice laughed. I pulled away from Edward and could see the saddness in his eyes, I laughed and put my finger on his lip.
“Later” I wispered. Then answered my phone.
“Hey mum.” I said.
“Hi Bells, How are you?” She asked.
“I'm great mum, what about you?” I replied.
“Im wonderful. Look Bella, I was wondering if you, Edward and Renesmee wanted to come to Phonix and spend Christmas with Phil and I this year?” She asked. I looked and Edward, he nodded.
“We'd love to mum” I told her.
“Really? Thats great, come down whenever your ready, I can't wait to see you Bella” She said, the excitement in her voice made me just as excited,
“We'll come soon, where just about to leave LA in a few days, we'll come straight from here.” I told her.
“Wonderful, I can't wait to see the 3 of you” She said, her excitement building.
“Yeh, you to mum” I told her.
“Oh sorry Bells, I have to go, Phil needs the phone.” She said. I laughed.
“Bye mum, love you.”
“You to Bella.” She said than hung up. I looked at Edward, he was glaring at Alice.
“Whats going on?” I asked.
“It's nothing Love, just Alice not getting her own way, she wanted to throw and big christmas party this year.” Edward told me. I looked at Alice.
“Sorry Alice, I didn't...”
“Don't worry Bella, we have forever to have a christmas party, you need to spend as much time with you parents while you still can” She told me. I nodded and rapped my arms around Edward, I hated thinking about these type of things so much, I only have a small amount of my forever left with my parents, soon I would have to let go.
“Don't worry Bella, nothings wrong now so don't worry, life isn't ment to be spent behing upset.” Edward soothed me, I nodded then got up and walked towards Renesmee.
“If we have a big surprise tonight we should get ready.” I said, mostly trying to distract myself, I would worry about it when the time came. Edward put his arm around my waste, stopping me.
“We should go hunting first, there will be a lot of people, more people than you and Renesmee have ever been around, it may be a bit difficult for the both of you.” He told me. I nodded and went to pick Renesmee up, she woke up as I picked her up.
“Where are we going mummy?” She asked me.
“Hunting.” I answered, she jumpped out of my arms and headed for the window, Edward caught her before she got out.
“You don't want to go without us Nessie, you'll have no one to see your wonderful prey.” Edward joked.
“Sorry Daddy” Renesmee said, I could hear the dissapointment in her voice. I laughed.
“If you want to get back before your surprise you better get daddy moving” I told her.
“DADDY DADDY JUMP QUICK DADDY QUICK” Renesmee screamed, we all laughed. I turned to face Alice.
“Comming?” I asked.
“No me and Jasper went this morning” She told me, I nodded and jumpped out the window, Edward and Renesmee on my tail.
We spent the next half hour hunting then went back and got dressed. Then got in the car on our way to the big surprise.
“Where are we going?” Renesmee asked. I looked at Edward he laughed.
“You'll see just wait a few more minutes” He told us. I sighed.
“I hate surprises.” I complained. Edward laughed and pulled me over to him and kissed my forehead,
“You have to learn to like them, part of being my wife is the surprises that come with it.” He told me.
“Edward...I don't need surprises to be happy with you” I told him, he laughed again.
“I know, but it doesn't meen I'll stop giving you them” he joked. I sighed again when we pulled in the huge parking lot.
“Where are we?” I asked.
“I'm surprised you haven't figured it out yet” he told me as he got out of the car and got Renesmee from the back seat. I groaned. Suddenly a stretch limo came by behind us the door opened and Miley leaned out, well it wasn't really Miley, it was Hannah.
“Come on let's get you guys back stage” She said, I looked at Renesmee, the smile on her face was huge.
“Hannah!” she said and then jumpped into the limo, we all laughed.
“Hey Nessie” Miley said.
“Are we going to your concert?” she asked excited.
“Yep, but that's not the surprise.” she said. I looked at her, then Edward. He laughed,
“Bella, I have to get you likeing surprises.” He told me, I shook my head. He just laughed again in reply.
We were back stage and Miley had just finished singing 'Nobody's Perfect' when she came running to us.
“Your surprise is next Nessie” She said, having no hints in her voice. She ran to get changed into a new outfit. When she was onstage she didn't start singing, Edward was smiling.
“This next song was written for someone very special in my life, I only wrote it recently, and this person never even knew I was doing it. She is only young, but very mature for her age” She explained, I looked at Edward, knowing what she was talking about almost immediately. He just smiled and nodded, rubbing Renesmee's sholder.
“I would like to welcome to the stage, this important person, who even thought it may be a shock to you, this girl helped save my life. Please everyone welcome to the stage my good friend Renesmee.” As soon as she heard her name Renesmee looked at me and Edward with a huge smile.
“Go on” I wispered to her, she smiled again then ran on stage up to Hannah and held her hand.
“Renesmee, this song is for you, its called 'You and Me Together'” Miley said. I looked at Edward as she started singing.
“And why didn't you tell me this?” I asked him he just laughed and kissed my forehead. I sighed,
“Edward Cullen, your going to make me go absolutly crazy one day” I joked. He laughed again.
“Bella Cullen, if you ever go crazy, it won't stop me loving you the way I do” He assured me. I just shook my head laughed then reached up to kiss him.
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huskerrich
12-23-2008, 08:25 AM
great job Megz, you deserved the votes you got.
WiLDoNE0457
12-23-2008, 06:25 PM
more!!!
sorry i haven't posted been having a computer problem :(
happy new year =D
I will try and post some soon :)
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We were on our plane off to Phoenix for Christmas, Renesmee was jumping up and down in her seat.
“Settle down Nessie” I laughed placing my hand on her shoulder.
“Why don’t you go to sleep Nessie so you don’t have to have a nap when we get to Nan’s house” Edward suggested. Renesmee stopped jumping and looked at him.
“Please Renesmee, don’t you want to spend more time with Nan” He said. Renesmee placed her hand on my cheek replaying in her head the last time we were there and how angry Renee was when I told her about all this vampire stuff. I sighed
“Nan doesn’t care about any of that anymore she just wants to see you, she loves you Renesmee, and she misses you.” I told her, she nodded and smiled. I kissed her head and pulled the blanket from under her chair and put it over her.
“Sleep tight Nessie, I love you.” I told her.
“Love you mummy” She said then closed her eyes. I sighed and laid my head on Edwards shoulder, he kissed my hair.
“How’d I manage to get both you and her in my life?” I asked him. He laughed,
“I ask myself the same question every day. I must have done something very very good to get you two girls in my life.” He told me. I shook my head.
“Her maybe but I’m nothing special” I told him. He took my face in his hands and held my gaze.
“You are special, your more than special, and don’t ever think you’re not” I sighed.
“I really don’t deserve you” I told him then kissed him. He shook his head.
“Bella, Bella, Bella” He said agent my lips, I placed mine more fiercely on his so he would stop, when I finally pulled away he just laughed. I placed my head on his chest and closed my eyes, he laid his head on top of mine and kissed my hair again.
The next day!
We were at the airport, we had just gotten our luggage and were walking out to Renee and Phil, I had Renesmee in one arm and dragged my suit case in my other, Edward was next to me dragging his and Renesmee’s suit case.
“Renee is just behind them” Edward said, pointing to a large group of people, I put Renesmee down an d took her hand.
“Don’t let go” I told her, she nodded looking at all the people around her, probably smelling their blood, large groups of people wouldn’t be any easier for her has it was for me.
“Hold your breath if you need to Nessie. It’s ok” Edward told her. I looked at him worried, he just shook his head and smiled at me. I looked back at Renesmee she looked like she was in pain. I picked her back up again and she hid her head in my hair, I rubbed her back.
“BELLA!” I heard Renee scream, I turned to the sound of her voice she was running towards me, Phil chasing after her, I laughed and handed Renesmee to Edward and ran to her –at a slow human speed- and hugged her.
“I missed you so much” She said.
“You to mum” I said, as I walked over to Phil –Renee not letting go of my arm- and hugged him.
“Nice to see you Bella” He said.
“You too Phil, I’ve missed you both so much” I said.
“So where’s my son in law? And my beautiful granddaughter?” Renee asked. I laughed a pointed Towards Edward and Renesmee, Who were just standing in the middle of the huge crowded airport talking. Renee gasped; Edward looked up at her a smiled.
“That’s...Renesmee?” She manages to gasp out. I nodded.
“Breathe mum” I reminded, her she took a deep breath then walked over to Edward and Renesmee. I followed behind her with Phil. Renesmee frowned and hid her face in Edwards shoulder, I walked over to her and took her from Edward, I knew my hair would block out the smell a lot better than Edward’s shoulder.
“What did I do?” Renee asked worried.
“Nothing mum” I assured her.
“It’s just difficult for Renesmee, all these people. We should have hunted again before we came, sorry.” I apologised, Renee frowned. I knew this was a touchy subject for her, but it was her choice to live with it.
“Mum—“ I started but she cut me off.
“Sorry Bella, it’s ok really” I sighed. She turned to look Edward.
“Edward, nice to see you” She said.
“You too Renee” He said, and hugged her, then held out his hand to shake it with Phil. Phil shook it.
“Nice to see you Phil” He said. Then to my shock, Phil hugged Edward, as if he was his own son, Phil had never done that before.
“Great to see you Edward” He said. I looked at Renee shocked, she just laughed at my expression.
“You been taking care of my little girls Edward?” My mum asked, I sighed.
“You know it Renee” He said, rapping his arms around Renesmee and me. I laughed and lifted my head up to kiss him.
“Let’s get Renesmee settled in so we can take her out hunting” I suggested. Edward nodded and grabbed two of the suit cases, I went to take the other one but Phil stopped me.
“Let me Bella.” He said. I looked at him and nodded.
“Thanks Phil” I said then kissed his cheek and walked over to Renee, she grabbed my hand and led us out to the car.
Christmas Day
It was early in the morning and everyone was asleep, Edward and I were stuffing a turkey for Renee, so she could have a peaceful Christmas morning.
“I can’t believe I used to eat this stuff” I complained as we put it in the over. Edward laughed and rapped his arm around my waste and pulled me towards him, I rapped my arms around him and stood on my toes to reach up at kiss him then dragged him to the living room, he sat down and I sat on his lap. I looked around the room, I hadn’t noticed how much we had gotten Renesmee but the room was full of presents. Edward knew what I was thinking before I did,
“Much better than last year” he laughed, I shuddered at the thought of last Christmas, when the Volturi were after us, trying to take Renesmee from us, Edward pulled me tighter to his chest. Then Renee walked into the room.
“What are you two doing up so early?” Mum asked. I looked at her and sighed.
“Mum...Remember we—“
“Oh yeah sorry.” She said, I looked at her worried.
“What are you doing up so early mum? It’s a holiday, you should sleep in” I told her.
“I just got up to cook the turkey” she said
“Already done mum” I told her.
“Ohh.. Well thankyou” She said shocked.
“Mum just because I don’t eat doesn’t mean I can’t cook anymore.”
“I know sorry” She said. Then looked around the room, Edward laughed,
“We went a bit over bored, we know, but last year wasn’t much of a Christmas at all for us, it was a very uhm difficult time.” Edward said. Renee looked at us confused and went to sit on the couch opposite us.
“What happened?” She asked. I looked at Edward worried, should she know all this. He sighed, I knew he thought it was too late now.
“The.. Rulers, of our kind. Were after us, to kill us, they thought we broke the rules, they didn’t know Renesmee was half human, were not allowed to change children into.. you know, and well it took some convincing but of course it all worked out.” He explained Renee gasped,
“They would have killed you? All three of you?” She asked, shocked. Edward and I nodded. Renee turned pale.
“Mum, don’t worry about it, that’s honestly nothing compared to what we’ve been through..” I stopped there, I had said to much.
“What have you been through?”
“Erm well, That time I was down here, in hospital. I hadn’t actually fallen down a flight of stairs, I was attacked.....” I looked at her studying her face.
“What about the broken window and everything?” She asked, trying to hide her shock.
“Alice” I said, I knew I didn’t need to say anymore.
“Is that all that happened?” She asked, I looked at Edward, worried.
“Bella tell me” she demanded. I sighed.
“The year after that, when I.. ran away, with Alice. I actually went to Italy, Edward thought I was dead, so he wanted to.. get himself killed. He went to the Volturi—“
“Volturi?” She asked
“The uhm rulers we were telling you about” I explained.
“He went to the Volturi trying to get them to kill him, I got there just in time, but that didn’t turn out good, they of course
threatened to kill me because I was in on their secret, Alice saved us. We were lucky to get out alive” I explain.
“Whoa, Bella.” Renee said.
“Yes there’s more” Edward said, answering her thoughts.
We explained all the other terrible incidents that have happened then us, then I looked at the time on the dvd player it was 9:00.
“We should go wake Renesmee.” I said, hopping up from Edward’s lap.
“Ok, I’ll go get Phil, and have a shower, then we can open presents.” Renee said.
“Ok mum” I said. Edward and I headed to Renesmee’s room.
“We should probably call everyone at home, and Charlie, and Jacob too.” Edward told me. I nodded in agreement. Once we were in Renesmee room, she was laying in her bed awake, when she saw us she smiled.
“Nessie how long have you been up for?” I asked her, walking towards her bed and sitting next to her.
“Not long, I just remembered that its Christmas, and I woke, I’m so excited mummy” she said. Edward laughed and came to join us on the bed and pulled out his phone.
“Let’s call Carlisle and the others first, there probably waiting for us.” Once we had called everyone we took Renee to the living room where she opened all her presents.
“Kids” My mum sighed when Renesmee was finally done. I laughed,
“Your turn now mum” I said handing her the present Edward, Renesmee and I had gotten her. She ripped the paper on and gasped at her new laptop.
“You shouldn’t have!” She said. I laughed.
“You would have had to be getting sick of that old thing” I pointed toward her old computer.
“So we thought why not make life a little easier” I said. She got up and hugged all three of us, once we have everyone their presents it was my turn, of course I wasn’t happy about that.
“Come on Bella, open yours.” Renee said.
“Nup”
“Bella, love, please open them” Edward pleaded.
“I don’t want to, I said no presents” And that was where that conversation ended, I walked into the kitchen, avoiding the subject as much as possible and checked on the turkey.
“I’ll get you to open them sooner or later, you know I can do it” Edward joked as I walked away. I sighed and tried my best to ignore them while they talked about me. What was I going to do with this family of mine? I thought to myself, suddenly smiling to myself at the thought of how blessed I was to have them all in my life. My family was the best anybody could ever ask for, and nothing would change that.
The End
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