When Everything c o l l a p s e d . . .

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When everything C O L L A P S E D . . .
By Alice.


I know I said I wasn't going to make another fan fiction, but I have had this story stuck in my head for quite some time.

Enjoy =D

C H A P T E R S
1. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2341146&postcount=2) 2. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2344395&postcount=8)
3. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2347163&postcount=13)
4.1. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2353526&postcount=17)

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`1.

"Finally!!!" I screamed. I was in line with my best friend, Nissa, to meet the Jonas Brothers. We were about three people away. I could see them.
"It's about time! No pun intended..." Nissa said, laughing at the no-pun.
The weather today in Dallas was slightly overcast. By overcast I mean it's pouring outside with major flashes of lightning and big clashes of thunder.
There was a loud crack of thunder, and I jumped. I caught a glimpse of Joe, and he flinched. I laughed at that.
I hadn't even noticed, but our time was here. We were going to meet the Jonas Brothers. Finally. We won a drawing, and so only a few people got to meet them. And by a few people, I mean like, 50. So basically, we could spend a maximum of a minute with them, as said by the guards.
We walked into the room and I smiled real big. I reached for my camera, a huge crash of thunder and a blinding light struck.
And then the lights flicked off.
I screeched a little, but my screech was drowned out in the noise of a tornado siren about two blocks down the street.
I saw Big Rob with the light that was available. He had his walkie talkie in his hand. He put it in his pocket and said in a booming voice. "Everybody in the storage closet; Pronto. I've just been alerted that there has been a touchdown near here."
A touchdown? "Good grief," I said to Nissa. We just stood there as everyone in the room, inclusing the Jonas Brothers, made a bee-line for the storage closet across the room.
"Ladies, are you just going to stand there and be overthrown by a tornado or are you going save your butts and get in this closet?" Big Rob boomed from behind us. He put his hands on our backs and guided us towards the closet.
I whispered to Nissa, totally oblivious to the storm. "We're going to be in a closet with the Jonas Brothers!"
Nissa slapped me in the face. "You idiot! We're about to get eaten alive by a tornado and you're worrying about that?!" Nissa shouted.
I thought for a moment, and said in a small voice. "Yes."
She just glared at me.

[danadog75]

YAY!!!
im happy your doing another ff! your sooo good!


more soon by the way!

[smilez]

thanks!!!

[huskerrich]

tornadoes don't eat, but great story.more please

[smilez]

i know tornadoes dont eat; its metaphorical.

[danadog75]

you need to post...even its only been a day!

[smilez]

sorry =D i was busy from sunrise to sunset [maybe even longer] yesterday, and I had no time on the computer at all. soo.....


`2.

It was only for a split second when we were walking briskly towards the closet, but I started to walk faster when the windows started to rattle.
"Walking faster is better, Nissa," I whispered yelled. She was walking fast, but not fast enough.
"Shut up, Mel!"
Well, that really didn't matter now, since we were at the closet. I stepped in, and I was pushed to the very back. Well, what I thought was the back.
"Ow," Someone said. That someone sounded like Kevin Jonas, and I nearly lost my cool.
"Sorry," I said in a shaky voice. I was scared for two reasons: The tornado, and the fact that I was surrounded by singing icons that were about to get hurdled into a tornado.
"Mel, have you ever been in a tornado?" Nissa asked from beside me. I laughed silently to myself, knowing she didn't have any Jonas to cling to.
And so I reminded myself not to cling to a Jonas, because I knew that would just be plain weird. Well, not for me, I mean, I don't mind, not one bit. But I had to think of others...
"No," I squeaked.
A loud roaring interuppted my thinking and two pairs of hands grabbed onto my shoulder. One pair had to be Nissa's, but then, who's was the other pair?
I grabbed onto the arms that surrounded me, waiting for the intense hit of the twister.
One sleeve covered arm I was clinging to was muscular, and so was the other arm.
A terrible sound ripped through the air; It sounded like a window breaking.
Both me and Nissa screamed. Loud sighs and gasps came from around the closet. What sounded like a freight train came through the room beside us. The door in front of us rattled, and parts were coming off. Pens and pencils from the other room came flying in the closet, looking for a place to not be suspended in the air.
Flashes of lightning could be seen from the tears in the door, and I looked over in the lightning storm to who I was clinging onto, and who was clinging onto me. I was clinging to Kevin Jonas and Nick Jonas, and Joe Jonas and Nissa were clinging to me. I also saw Big Rob, next to me, clinging to a shelf, which was covered in books. Not good.
The wind picked up majorly, and all the books on the shelf came crashing down. They floated around the closet, and a few hit me. Then the door came crashing down, but thankfully, it went into the tornado....
...That was in the room with us.
I held onto Kevin and Nick for dear life, and tears fell loose from my eyes, and I had a sudden realization that this could be my last few moments.

[lilxangel]

Omj awesome!

[best_of_both_worlds16]

More, Lynnie!

EDIT:: Holy crap, I just called you Lynnie again. xD I mean:
More, Alice!

[huskerrich]

more please smilez

[danadog75]

more.that was a reallllllllly good chapter! more soon!!!

[smilez]

The wind wipped my hair into my face, making it impossible to see what was going on.
Therefore, with my luck, I didn't see the lamp coming at my head. A booming crash came from somewhere, and I soon felt the pain and knew that it was my head the lamp crashed into. At least, I think it was a lamp.
A warm wetness drippled down the side of my face. It was a burning sensation in the cut.
"You're bleeding!" I heard someone yell, probably at me, but I couldn't make out who is was. I opened my eyes, the tears streaming down my face. An arm reached over to wipe my head.
"OW!" I yelled. A book hit my arm, and hard. The shelf began to collapse beside us, and many books and buckets and other random stuff started to twist in the air.
I got hi in the head so many times I lost count. I was barely hanging on.
A light squeal came from my mouth, and I ducked as it sounded like something was collapsing.
It was the roof.
Of all things...THE ROOF.
Blocks of ceiling caved in on us, and it didn't help the situation at all. After the roof was done collapsing, and my head was covered in blood and ceiling debris, the choas stopped; Almost immediately.
I then realized I was extremely weak. My arm hurt where the book slammed into it, and my head was throbbing.
"Help," I murmured, sitting up against what was left of the wall. It was when I took in the scene.
The walls were almost completely gone. Debris was everywhere; It covered the floor. The shelf was not there anymore. Instead, it was scattered around the entire room.
"Help," I said, a little louder this time.
Everyone was doing the same. I noticed Nick first, who I was still clinging to. He had blood dribbling from his head, also. His eyes were weary and afraid; I didn't even remember that he was a huge rockstar until I remembered why I was here.
I used my strength and pulled myself over to him.
"Are you okay?" I asked in a mumble. I felt kind of stupid, talking to a huge celebrity naturally. So I kept my distance, though I was so very weak.
"Yeah," Nick answered, he looked over at me, and his eyes widened.
"Someone help! She's bleeding!" Nick screamed. Lucky duck: He had some strength left to project his voice.
I lifted my hand up to my face, and blood coated my fingers. I felt my way up to the cut, and put my purse up to it to help stop the bleeding. Nick ripped a part of his sleeve off with a heavy force and put it against my head.
"Thanks," I said, pressing the fabric to my head.
I looked around, and I saw Big Rob get up. He barely had any scratches. Then I saw Joe, who was still clinging to me. I patted his hand for reasurance.
I then realized that Nissa wasn't screaming. Usually, she would scream if she even got a scratch. I looked around for her, and I finally saw her arm under a heap of debris.
"Nissa!" I yelled.
No response.

[hannahlover2007]

Woahhh..moree!!

[huskerrich]

more please, great story

[m&jrule]

more!

[smilez]

`4.1

I dragged myself throug the piles of debris, my head spinning, towards Nissa's responsless body. My body ached, but I pushed it to the limit.
"Nissa," I whisper screamed. The energy was almost completely drained of my body.
Her hand twitched from under the rubble, but I don't know if that was just a coincidence or if she was trying to respond.
It startled me. "Nissa?" I squeaked.
Kevin moved over to her lifeless hand. He was struggling, though. He had a nice gash on his leg and scratches on his head.
"Kevin," I started gasping. My ribs felt horrible. Did something crash into me and I didn't notice it? It was probably a book or something. "You don't...have to..."
I was gasping real hard now, and it hurt to talk. Let alone breathe.
"Um..." He started.
"Mel."
"Mel, don't hurt yourself. Are you okay?" Kevin asked.
I lifted my hand to my rib cage. A definate break.
I gasped in pain as a loud crunch came from my stomach.

[danadog75]

soooooo intense! haha, more soon!!!

[m&jrule]

more!