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destinysmiles!
09-23-2008, 08:51 PM
...then I heard the floor cracking. I couldn`t think of anything else than putting on my pants! I mean you wouldn`t want to fall without pants in all that poop and pee! I put my pants and I was just about to zip up my zipper when-The floor cracked.
Floor! Nice! Helloooo POOP! This can`t be more perfect! ... Wait a minute... I don`t feel poop under me.. but a clean floor, nice jeje. Now I wonder if his is a latrine why the heck there is nothing here?
I stood up and looked around, but coulnd`t see something else but darkness surounding me.
I started to walk with my hands up, to find a wall or something to climb.
I mean Im not going to stay here in a latrine while my family is eating delicious stuff. "I`m so gonna talk to uncle Joe about getting a real toilet" This is just his crazy ideas versus my hurting butt.
I walked for several minutes (I know Im exagerating) and then FINALLY I found a wall with something in it. Like a button thing. I pushed it; life is for risks if you don`t risk yourself you won`t know the world.
Suddenly the floor (actually the hole that right now would be a bigger latrine or the "ceiling") closed with a metalic sound. Now I was DEFINITLY scared. So just sratch out the risking phrase I told you! After that a light, of fire, started iluminating the room, each time getting bigger, it was a tea. You know this is really out of the subject, but I always say that the flames of fire are God, just light up a candle and you`ll see God in his blue or I dont remember what else color tunic.
After that idea I looked around the room it was just like a normal place-NOT. Not after a metallic secret door started opening automatically.
Now God bless me cause I`m scared, but I`ll take that risk! I`m going to find out what up with all this stuff. I need your protection God. Well like I say (but I think another person said it once) a brave person is just the same that a scared person, just that the brave person is stupid and takes the risk! And I`m going to be that stupid! ...okay I know that sounded bad, but let`s enter to the door, yeah?
I took the tea and started walking through a tunnel, wich was made of nothing else than dust of the ground and rocks.


That`s the intro. And the characters I`ll add them as they appear. The name of the protagonist, you are going to find it probably in the second chapter. This is an adventure, mystery and comedy fanfic. No drama, sorry girls and Derek :lol:.

cutiepie7897
09-23-2008, 09:03 PM
Lol nice FF!

destinysmiles!
09-23-2008, 09:11 PM
Lol nice FF!

:lol: i know the first part is weird but yeah lol :lol:

blovehannah
09-23-2008, 09:11 PM
Love it!!!

destinysmiles!
09-23-2008, 09:13 PM
Love it!!!

thanks luca! :P

huskerrich
09-23-2008, 09:25 PM
nice job destiny

destinysmiles!
09-23-2008, 09:37 PM
nice job destiny

thnx but actually my name is ashley :P destiny is miley old name n like she is always smiling i put the account name destinysmiles! :P

huskerrich
09-23-2008, 09:55 PM
I know , if I can remember your name, I'll try to use though ashley.:)

danadog75
09-24-2008, 01:50 AM
um....strange.
but continue please! i wanna see what happens!

destinysmiles!
09-24-2008, 10:07 PM
I know , if I can remember your name, I'll try to use though ashley.:)

its okay anyway :P

um....strange.
but continue please! i wanna see what happens!

lol k

destinysmiles!
09-24-2008, 10:38 PM
as i continue walking through the tunnel i got more scared and wanted to go back, but is there any other option? I mean the latrine is now closed!
So I continued walking until I reach a door... a door?
It was pretty dusty and had spiders webs, but no spider was found. So I just removed the webs and knocked. I know! I know! It`s really weird why would I know the door? For Good Luck, at least that`s a tradition in my family... since now.
I opened the door and step softly in the floor and then knowing my first step was secure I step with all my weight in it. And I continue doing the same until the door closed, inmediatly turned around and just after that a knife went flying just above my head... and I loooove being little!
I looked at the floor just to search for any others traps, but all I found was a blue american footbal helmet. I put it on. Just in case another knife went flying against me again.
Then I heard a sound.... someone opening the latrine metalic floor (well the ceiling for me). I runned the farest I could, I didn`t mind of the traps or whatever, I just wanted to leave and posibly,very POSIBLE trying not to find the monster who is opening the metalic lantrine floor.

UNCLE JOE'S P.O.V.
"Let`s make a toast for being together!" I said while holding my glass of wine high.
"TOAST!" said the rest of my family bringing up their glasses.
After that we sat down and I took a deep breath.
"Can I have your attention for one moment?" asked my mom.
Everyone was in silence.
"Today, being such a thankfull and happy day I brought gifts to everyone!" said my mom as everyone cheered.
"I love our family reunions" said Nick
"And so do I" said little Jasmine, my niece.
"Well darling here are the gifts" said my dad after bringing up a big box and a big bag.
"Okay, let`s open them... the first one is for Katelyn!" said my mom smiling brightfully
"Katelyn?... Where is Katelyn?" asked mom getting sadder and sadder
"She went to the lantrine" said Katelyn`s mom.
"And looks like about 40 mins ago" said Stevie, Jasmine`s brother
"But who takes that long to go to the bathroom?" asked Jasmine
"You know teenagers! Maybe reapplying make up" said Stevie
"Or maybe she`s just having a stomachal problem" i said
"Diarrhea!" shoute all the kids.
"I`m going to see if she`s okay" said my mom.
"No! Don't worry mom, I`ll go, I`m going to ask her if she`s okay or what does she needs" I said
"Okay" said my mom breathing deeply.

huskerrich
09-24-2008, 11:17 PM
more please

destinysmiles!
09-24-2008, 11:28 PM
more please

i`ll post more tomorrow if i have the time cause i need to pack im going to a camp in friday n wont come back until sunday

it`s name is the greatest battle, cause we have to fight against the staff, the staff objective: be the winners and don`t let us win
our objectives: triuphm :P

huskerrich
09-24-2008, 11:30 PM
be gentle ashley, be gentle, but win

destinysmiles!
09-24-2008, 11:35 PM
be gentle ashley, be gentle, but win

:lol: k im going to be gentle but as soon as we go to the lake... im sure someone is going to be soaking wet MUAJAJAJA :lol: just kidding... maybe :P

huskerrich
09-24-2008, 11:37 PM
what are lakes for, have fun ashley

cutiepie7897
09-25-2008, 04:49 PM
can't wait for more ashley!!

destinysmiles!
09-25-2008, 09:18 PM
what are lakes for, have fun ashley

thnx i will :D

can't wait for more ashley!!

im going to write as soon as inspiration hits me

destinysmiles!
09-28-2008, 10:53 PM
I went out and then went in again with everybody staring at me.
"lol i forgot my flashlight" i said taking my flashlight and leaving like it was nothing while nick just did a head movement like saying: oh joe....


I`ll write more later if i can cause i havent sleep well -cause of the camp- and cause i need to study for a week of exams.

huskerrich
09-28-2008, 11:32 PM
i believe it, hope you didn't take too many prisoners, or break too many hearts

destinysmiles!
09-29-2008, 10:13 PM
i believe it, hope you didn't take too many prisoners, or break too many hearts

:lol: of what i know dont think so :P
but of what i know i couldnt throw anyone to the lake :P but it`s still okay i saw many ppl falling into the lake :lol:

destinysmiles!
09-29-2008, 10:22 PM
I`ll try to write more, but if any of you guys got an idea, please send it. I`ll credit youand thank you, course! :P
It doesn`t matter how stupid or crazy or spectacular or whatever it sounds, just send it ;)

huskerrich
09-29-2008, 10:47 PM
I had a feeling you were all bark and no bite, ashley stepping bravely on to the log.

destinysmiles!
09-30-2008, 06:56 PM
I had a feeling you were all bark and no bite, ashley stepping bravely on to the log.

no actually i was going to push someone in the waterfall, but it was really dangerous, some rocks DID moved, but i couldnt i mean what if one of my mates loses his/her balance and the water carries him/her away? no really it was dangerous so i couldnt

and in the lake neither cause everyone wasnt in the mood for more water and cause i didnt even know if it was clean cause it looked brownish, but you could just that anyone would want to swin in it :P