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PinkRubberDuckie
06-23-2008, 08:09 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/2lc47wy.jpg
^made by me


New fanfic. New people.
This time, it's camp rock. And, it's in Tess' point of view.

plot

Ok, we obviously know that me and Shane didn't work out.
And that I apologized to everyone, I had ever hurt.
But, seriously. Did you really think I meant it?
It's a new camp year, and another way to redeem myself.
And with another Connect Three member.
Definetely not Shane.

characters

Tess (http://content6.flixster.com/photo/11/07/59/11075992_tml.jpg)
Mitchie (http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/845/demilovatoav2.jpg)
Caitlyn (http://eur.i1.yimg.com/eur.yimg.com/ng/mo/premiere_photo/20060908/12/1228340157.jpg)
Ella (http://teenhlwdphotos.s3.amazonaws.com/011027/0000203596.jpg)
Peggy (http://www.sitcomsonline.com/photopost/data/1341/Jasmine_Richards_IMDb_Photo_.jpg)
Connect Three (http://hotmusicbeat.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/03/jonas-brothers.jpg)
Emma (http://www.teenidols4you.com/blink/Actors/emily_osment/emily_osment_1182356102.jpg)
Sam (http://celebrityphotos.sheknows.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/02/miley-cyrus-instyle-recording-academy-celebrate-grammy.jpg)

chapters

first day of camp (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2088970&postcount=10)
what?! (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2091222&postcount=23)
natie! (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2098531&postcount=35)
this could be the start of something new (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2105132&postcount=54)
i'm the ladies' choice (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2107201&postcount=62)
oh my gawd. ehmagawd you guys. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2110911&postcount=75)
they're from australia (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2121513&postcount=92)

andy, barron, sander, lola, and whoever else, is not in this one.

hope you like it!

Jasmine
06-23-2008, 08:11 PM
:o
Sounds cool!
start!

YouKnowYouLoveMe
06-23-2008, 08:13 PM
ahhh sounds awesome!
Write, por favor

PinkRubberDuckie
06-23-2008, 08:58 PM
i'll write with three more comments = ]

inluv
06-23-2008, 09:02 PM
start!

xXmandyXx
06-23-2008, 09:04 PM
ahhh!
alexaaaa <3
the awesomest person everrrrr!
yay :D
start woman!
sounds really amazing :D

PinkRubberDuckie
06-23-2008, 09:36 PM
lol. one more comment
awesomest person everrr?
awesome!

( soulmates )
06-23-2008, 09:43 PM
That sounds like a good idea.
Post it!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-23-2008, 09:46 PM
ok. one minute.

PinkRubberDuckie
06-23-2008, 10:18 PM
first day of camp

I'm back. And better than ever.
I'm ready to take over this camp, once again.
"Hey Tess," I heard someone call.
I whipped my head back, and saw someone familiar.
"Hey Shane," I replied, rolling my eyes.
I shot him my signature "Whatever major loser" hand movement thingy, and left.
I wasn't going to let him ruin my good time, this time.
I have better things to do.
Like win Final Jam.
Speaking of Final Jam, where is last year's winner, and Ella?
I started searching, and searching, until I came across Mitchie.
Ew. That man stealer.
Well, she's not really a man stealer, because her and Shane aren't going out.
Unless they have something to admit.
"Hey Tess. What's up?" she asked, grabbing my attention.
"Just looking for Peggy and Ella," I replied, looking behind her.
"I don't think they're here yet, but good luck."
Great. That was no help.
"Tess?!" I heard Ella's clueless voice behind me.
"Ehmagawd!!" I squealed, turning around, to hug my camp best friends forever.
It seems as everything's back to normal.
I hope it is.


Sorry, it's short and boring. what can you do for first chapters?

xXmandyXx
06-23-2008, 10:25 PM
Ew. That man stealer.


ahhh. thats pretty funny :D
yay! cant wait for more!!!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-23-2008, 10:27 PM
lol.
it felt clique-ish

YouKnowYouLoveMe
06-23-2008, 10:29 PM
hahahaha you could kill someone in the first chapters!
Now that would be new and different xD

PinkRubberDuckie
06-23-2008, 10:32 PM
killing people?!
lol. i was thinking of doing that.
but too much like lauren's ff.

best_of_both_worlds16
06-23-2008, 10:40 PM
Oh, this sounds good, Alexa!
More, yo!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-23-2008, 10:41 PM
alright. i'll write after i finish playing this guess the profile game!

SmileyMiley11
06-23-2008, 11:00 PM
I like this...the man stealer part was funny :P

PinkRubberDuckie
06-23-2008, 11:13 PM
lol. thanks.

Gabriella Read
06-24-2008, 12:07 AM
whatever major loser. haha....it so funny. more more...love it.

adolphin
06-24-2008, 01:09 AM
lllleeeeeeexxxxxxxxaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa a
mmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeee ee
plzzzzzzzzzz??????!!!!
:P

MileyRox1174
06-24-2008, 12:25 PM
killing people?!
lol. i was thinking of doing that.
but too much like lauren's ff.

Psh, lol :P

I love it so far! More!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-24-2008, 05:55 PM
ok. i need to turn in a entry for a fashion contest, and then i will write.

PinkRubberDuckie
06-24-2008, 07:21 PM
what?!

After unpacking, Ella, Peggy, and I all walked over to the stage, for Opening Jam.
Almost everyone was there. Except for Shane.
Where is that kid?
Caitlyn and Mitchie were standing together, giggling at something Mitchie had said.
Dee took the stage. "Hello Camp Rockers!"
"Hi Dee!" we all singed back.
We didn't want her to make us do it again, like last time.
It worked.
"Ok guys, welcome back!" she squealed into the microphone.
We all cheered.
"So, remember last year, we had a special star come to our camp!" Dee sing-songed.
We cheered again.
"This year, we're having three stars here!" she yelled.
"Three?!" I squealed to Ella and Peggy, hoping it would be someone extra hot. Hotter than Shane Gray.
"Guys come on out!" Dee called to the side of the stage.
Nate, Jason, and Shane all ran out on stage.
"What?!" I demanded, confused.
I mean they're cute and all, but all of Connect Three?
This camp is pretty popular. So that obviously means they get a lot of money, right? Couldn't they afford someone else?
I looked up at Nate. He had given this look at Final Jam last year that looked like "Whoa. She's hot."
Does he feel the same way?
I hope so.
This year is going to be the best summer of my life.
Not Mitchie's.

xXmandyXx
06-24-2008, 07:31 PM
This year is going to be the best summer of my life.

Not Mitchie's.

ouch! and the claws are outttt...
rotfl!
amazing alexabexa <3
moreness!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-24-2008, 07:33 PM
four more comments.
yes the claws are def out. lol = ]

PinkRubberDuckie
06-25-2008, 12:26 AM
anymore comments?

.Oh.My.Jonas.
06-25-2008, 12:41 AM
more!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-25-2008, 09:12 AM
three more comments = ]

indianrockyeah
06-25-2008, 09:57 AM
more more more this is really good

MileyRox1174
06-25-2008, 09:58 AM
1. More
2. More
3. More

There's your three comments, now post!

xXmandyXx
06-25-2008, 10:25 AM
-more
-more
-more

dude! you just got 9 comments, from all of us!
post :D

adolphin
06-25-2008, 02:41 PM
yay!
LEXA
I DEMAND U POST MOREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

xo_hannah_fan1_xo
06-25-2008, 02:58 PM
This is great so far! MORRRE!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-25-2008, 07:16 PM
i'll write when i get home = ]

p.s. mandy it's your turn to write for the disney one ; ]

PinkRubberDuckie
06-26-2008, 10:17 PM
natie!

The next morning, I woke and went straight to breakfast.
I saw Nate and Jason there.
Shane never went to breakfast.
"Natie!" I called from across the room.
I caught his attention, and he came straight over.
Jason was trailing right behind.
"What about Jasonie?" he asked, stupidly.
"Alright, Jasonie, too!" I squealed.
"Shane better make me a birdhouse this year," Jason mumbled and went to go get breakfast.
Nate rolled his eyes, and looked at me. "What do you want?"
"Just wondering if you want to sit with me, I mean, Peggy and Ella are still sleeping." I explained.
"Fine," he agreed.
I led him to the line where I got a drink, and some eggs.
"What about waffles?" he asked.
"Morning carbs, huge no, no, Natie," I replied, like I had last year.
Why don't people understand it?
"Whatever. And please stop calling me Natie," he responded, pouring a huge puddle of maple syrup on his plate.
"Tess! Natie!" I heard someone call.
"That must be my new name," Nate muttered to himself.
I shot my head around, and saw Peggy and Ella.
I rolled my eyes, and kept walking with Natie.
Time for a new Tess. A new crew.
I'm too cool to know you. Don't take it personal, don't get emotional.

adolphin
06-26-2008, 10:22 PM
wow
something is seriously rong with her head
haha
MORE!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-26-2008, 10:23 PM
LOL. def.

indianrockyeah
06-26-2008, 10:25 PM
more more more

Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
06-26-2008, 10:36 PM
"That must be my new name," Nate muttered to himself.
^Best line!
More!

Jasmine
06-26-2008, 10:39 PM
haha.
more!!!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-26-2008, 10:42 PM
just one more comment [ =

adolphin
06-26-2008, 10:44 PM
LEXA!!!!!!
I DEMAND U POST MORE!!!
plzzz?!?!?!?!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-26-2008, 10:47 PM
lol you really like it?

indianrockyeah
06-26-2008, 10:48 PM
more more more

PinkRubberDuckie
06-26-2008, 10:49 PM
if I were to write more tomorrow, would you guys eat me?

indianrockyeah
06-26-2008, 10:54 PM
yea....i am curious

SmileyMiley11
06-26-2008, 10:56 PM
Ooh awesome! :)

PinkRubberDuckie
06-26-2008, 10:57 PM
I'm gonna write tomorrow. I g2g soon.

indianrockyeah
06-26-2008, 10:59 PM
okay, drat!

SmileyMiley11
06-26-2008, 11:00 PM
Okay I'll check back tomarrow :)

adolphin
06-26-2008, 11:23 PM
lol you really like it?
No I don't like it
I LUFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
:P:P:P:P:P

inluv
06-28-2008, 02:29 PM
more!!!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-29-2008, 12:19 PM
alright, I'm writing.

PinkRubberDuckie
06-29-2008, 12:28 PM
this could be the start of something new

After my breakfast with Nate, we had class.
Ella, Peggy, Mitchie, and Caitlyn were all sitting together.
I could tell from their evil glares, that they were mad.
I saw these two girls. One with honey blonde hair, and one with jet black hair.
I walked over to them. They looked like the type of people I could push around. I mean, every good star need a great posse.
"Hey, I'm Tess. Tess Tyler."
I saw a smirk from each of the girls as they exchanged glances. They obviously knew each other before camp, and were new.
"Hi, I'm Emma, and this is my friend, Sam," the blonde girl said. She had this thick English accent.
"Nice to meet you," Sam said, reaching out her hand in front of me. She had the same exact accent.
I shook it gratefully, looking over at my former friends, and now enemies. They were giggling and laughing.
Emma looked as if a lightbulb went off in her head. "Is your mom TJ Tyler?"
"Yeah," I replied, smiling. This could be good, very good.
"Oh, so you're like the ring leader?" Sam asked.
"Yep," I answered, copying their English accent.
"Hey, would you guys like to be in my group. Like for the Final Jam and stuff?" I asked.
"Yeah!" they agreed in unison.
"Great, I'll get my songwriter to write some great songs for us."
And with that, Brown walked in.
"Hey guys!" he yelled. "Welcome back!"
I rushed to a seat, and smiled.
This could be the start of something new.

MileyRox1174
06-29-2008, 02:04 PM
More!

new_york_girl
06-29-2008, 02:29 PM
that is good update.

SmileyMiley11
06-29-2008, 02:31 PM
Thanks for updating! :)

Ashley Marie 1992
06-29-2008, 02:35 PM
ooh, i likee this fanfic! and i just started reading it! moree!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-29-2008, 06:05 PM
thanks guys! just one more comment!

Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
06-29-2008, 06:42 PM
More! It's awesome!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-30-2008, 11:21 AM
alright. i'm writing = ]

PinkRubberDuckie
06-30-2008, 11:30 AM
i'm the ladies' choice

Shane's POV

I was sitting in my cabin with Jason and Nate.
"Hey Nate. I saw you eating with Tess Tyler this morning," Jason called. Nate was brushing his teeth.
"Yeah," he said as he spat out the toothpaste. "Got a problem with it?"
"Tess Tyler? Good going, dude," I said, giving him the thumbs up. Tess didn't like me anymore, and if Nate could score her, awesome!
"Hey, what can I say? I'm the ladies' choice," he laughed, coming back to sit where me and Jason were.
"So dude, are you going to make a birdhouse or what this year?" Jason asked, hopefully.
"Dude, enough with the birdhouse!" I yelled. "Why don't you make one yourself?"
"Ok dude. Don't be so harsh," Jason said. I saw a smirk from Nate.
"Hey, do you think we can compete in Final Jam?" Nate asked.
"No. That's for amateurs. We already have a record deal and stuff, so we can't." I explained.
"Alright, I'm gonna go!" Nate said, running out of the room, slamming the screen door behind him.
"Where's he going?" Jason asked.
"I was just thinking the same thing," I agreed.

xXmandyXx
06-30-2008, 11:33 AM
chyeahhh...
wheres he going??
lol.
moreness, woman!

PinkRubberDuckie
06-30-2008, 11:36 AM
haha. i have no clue. i was just writing.
i guess i'll figure out.

Ashley Marie 1992
06-30-2008, 01:26 PM
moreeee haha, he's going to MY house.. jkjk... :P

PinkRubberDuckie
06-30-2008, 02:22 PM
hahahahaha.
no my houseeee
hahahahaha.
i can't stop laughing >_< "

adolphin
06-30-2008, 02:45 PM
like yeshtersayyyyyyyyyyyyy????
OOOHHHH, Is he goin to Tess's cabinnnnnn???????????????????????????

new_york_girl
06-30-2008, 03:26 PM
oooo update.
oh jason while you at making yourself a birdhouse, can you make me one too?

Ashley Marie 1992
06-30-2008, 04:33 PM
haha. noo he's going to a pickle store!!!!!!!!! haha random crap. but MOREE.

PinkRubberDuckie
06-30-2008, 04:46 PM
hahaha.
yes. he's going to the pickle store, to buy cheese
hahahahaa

Ashley Marie 1992
06-30-2008, 06:05 PM
noo, he's going to the pickle store to buy cheese AND crackers! haha!

SmileyMiley11
06-30-2008, 06:09 PM
Awesome Chapter :)

PinkRubberDuckie
06-30-2008, 08:43 PM
hahahahaha. that's exactly what he's doing.
oh yah. he's also buying pieee
pumpkin pieee!
cause that's nick's favorite ; ]

SmileyMiley11
06-30-2008, 08:45 PM
haha :P

PinkRubberDuckie
07-01-2008, 08:59 PM
oh. my. gawd. ehmagawd you guys!

Emma, Sam, and I all were in our cabin, getting ready for the Pajama Jam tonight.
Soon we heard someone come through our door.
It was Nate. Natiepoo.
"Hey Tess," he said, when he entered.
Emma screamed. "What?" I asked confused.
She rushed over, and whispered in my ear, "Nate just walked in, and I have a pair of underwear in my hands!"
I sighed. "Go to the drawer, and put it in," I whispered, as though the solution was obvious.
"So I just came here to ask you out," Nate said. "So will you go out with me?"
"Chyup!" I squealed.
"Great, so I'll see you at Pajama Jam, right?" he asked.
"Yeah," I agreed.
He walked over to the door, and left.
"Oh. My. Gawd. Ehmagawd you guys!" I sang, imitating Elle Woods from Legally Blonde the Musical.
"Whoah, that was close," Emma sighed, he English accent, still strong.
"I just love that accent!" I squealed.
"Thanks!" Sam and Emma said in unison.
We picked out our outfits, and went to Pajama Jam.
I couldn't wait to rub it in Shane's face.

haha. retarded, i know.
i had to write really fast because secret life of the american teenager.

SmileyMiley11
07-01-2008, 09:33 PM
That was a good chapter :)

PinkRubberDuckie
07-01-2008, 10:08 PM
haha. i thought it was slightly retarded, but glad you liked it.

xXmandyXx
07-02-2008, 12:41 AM
ah!
i love legally blonde the musical =]
i actually just saw it on broadway a couple weeks ago!
gah, i loved the chapter alexabexa!
moreness!

PinkRubberDuckie
07-02-2008, 09:04 PM
haha. three more chapterssss.

xXmandyXx
07-02-2008, 09:31 PM
wait...
three more chapters till its over?!
ahh... *tear*

PinkRubberDuckie
07-02-2008, 10:22 PM
haha. lol. that's like the fifth time i've proven that i'm going mental.
haha. i meant comments.

PinkRubberDuckie
07-03-2008, 08:24 PM
comment pleaseee

destinysmiles!
07-03-2008, 08:40 PM
more

PinkRubberDuckie
07-03-2008, 09:16 PM
two more pleaseee.

MileyRox1174
07-04-2008, 02:36 PM
More!

PinkRubberDuckie
07-04-2008, 03:18 PM
one more.

PinkRubberDuckie
07-05-2008, 04:39 PM
one more comment!

~*GirlzRule*~
07-05-2008, 04:55 PM
Moooooore!!

Gabriella Read
07-06-2008, 05:51 AM
more more...love it.

PinkRubberDuckie
07-06-2008, 10:06 AM
whooo! ok, i'll write as soon as mom is done with the computer.
we're gonna see hancock today!
yay!

xXmandyXx
07-06-2008, 11:47 AM
ah yay!
alexas gonna post :D

PinkRubberDuckie
07-06-2008, 12:00 PM
they're from australia

Emma, Sam, and I arrived at the Pajama Jam wearing light pink boxers (girl boxers, you know the ones you wear to sleep), and a tank top.
I spotted Nate, and walked over to him. He was with Shane and Jason.
"Hey guys!" I squealed.
"Hey," they all replied.
"These are my English friends, Emma and Sam," I introduced, putting emphasis on the "English" part.
"Uh, Tess," Sam butt in. "We're not English, we're Australian."
"What?!" I asked, majorally confused. They had me thinking the whole time that they were English, but they're really Australian. Isn't there a whole distinctive way to figure that out? Like Australians, their accents are more southern sounding.
"We're Australian," Emma clarifyed. I could hear Jason and Shane's snickers. And I could feel Nate trying to shut them up.
"So buddy, where'd you go this afternoon?" Jason asked Nate.
"I went to Australia," Nate replied, making Emma and Sam giggle. I tensed up.
"Really dude? That's awesome!" Jason said, completely oblivious of the fact that it was a joke, and not the truth.
Soon Dee grabbed the microphone, and said "Alright, please give a warm welcome to Caitlyn, Mitchie, Ella, and Peggy!"
The four girls got on stage, and Caitlyn grabbed the mike. "Alright, we're pumpin' up the party, now!" she shouted into the microphone.
"Thanks, Cait," Mitchie said, and grabbed it. She was going to sing first, then Peggy, then Ella.
They started the song, and Nate, Shane, Emma, Sam, and Jason were all clapping and cheering.
I on the other hand, was not.
I mean, they're from Australia. Aren't they not supposed to break my heart?

MileyRox1174
07-06-2008, 12:53 PM
Haha more!

Gabriella Read
07-06-2008, 02:56 PM
more more...love it.

~*GirlzRule*~
07-06-2008, 02:57 PM
Nicee:)
write more!

PinkRubberDuckie
07-08-2008, 10:32 PM
two more comments.

xXmandyXx
07-09-2008, 12:49 AM
you had me laughing the whole chapter through!
but then...
i read the last line, and i literally cracked up!
im actually listening to that song now <3

more alexa!

PinkRubberDuckie
07-09-2008, 08:44 PM
haha, that's my favorite jb song <33
one more comment.
btw mandy, post on the disney one ; ]