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megz
06-20-2008, 05:08 AM
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This is my first fan fiction =D
It is about Miley finding out she has a long lost twin who is also a great singer so Miley makes her sister a disguise and she becomes Sarah Montana.

If you don't have an account and want to leave a comment asking for more or telling me what you think add a comment on my youtube http://youtube.com/user/yourSooRadiC00L its my new account my old once got deleted by youtube =(
Also if you have any ideas for the fanfic and don't have an account just send me a message on youtube =D

Trailer (http://youtube.com/watch?v=nlAQ4D96JRs)

Chapters:
1- I must be seeing things (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2083996&postcount=6)
2- it cant be. can it? (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2086746&postcount=13)
3- the quest has begun (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2093002&postcount=20)
4- Start explaining (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2102910&postcount=33)
5- Hailey learns the truth (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2102987&postcount=34)
6- Is that My Little Girl? (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2107039&postcount=40)
7- Welcome home (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2120514&postcount=48)
8- Is it the End for Hannah Montana? (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2121295&postcount=52)
9-A new pop star is born (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2153798&postcount=56)
10- Hannah's big secret (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2160378&postcount=61)
11. She's just sweet innocent Miley... or is she (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2163258&postcount=68)
12. A blast from the past (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2166604&postcount=72)
13. Is it another real life fairy tale? (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2169557&postcount=75)
14. Lovers together forever. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2178395&postcount=80)
15. A little to star struck (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2200231&postcount=88)
16. For the one I love?- page 11
If you have any ideas just send me a Private Message and I will hopefully be able to add it in the story
:D

Gabriella Read
06-20-2008, 05:27 AM
start. it's interesting.

adolphin
06-21-2008, 11:53 PM
ohh, start!

megz
06-22-2008, 12:17 AM
1 more comment and first chapter

vanessarox14
06-22-2008, 12:20 AM
this sounds interesting

post

megz
06-22-2008, 12:46 AM
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(Lilly P.O.V)

'Why do I have to go see my cousin today! of all days today! the day of Hannahs big concert. I hope Miley doesn't get mad, we cant help accident things happen. But why did that plane have to crash :'('

Lilly: Miley I am so sorry but I really can't come to the concert tonight my cousin Hailey is in hospital she was in a plane crash and her whole family died except for her mum thinks i can make her feel better because she is our age.

Miley: Lilly its ok don't worry about it you don't have to come to every Hannah concert family comes first.

Lilly: You promise your not mad, I made a promise and now I have to break it.

Miley: Lilly its ok really I have Oliver to keep me company

Lilly: Thank you so much your *Hugs Miley*

(Miley P.O.V)

'Its a pity Lilly can't come Hannah hasn't been seen without Lola in years I'm really going to miss her.'

Miley: Lilly I have a brilliant idea to make Hailey feel better :D

Lilly: You do what is it? tell me quick:o

Miley: After the concert i make a surprise visit at the hospital and I'll visit her and everyone else there, it always makes people feel better when Hannah is there.

Lilly: Really you would do that Hailey loves Hannah

Miley: Yeah I love meeting fans.

Lilly: Thankyou soo much I cant wait until tonight.

Miley: Me either, well i gotta go get ready I'll see you then.

Lilly: Bye
*They hug*
Foward to hospital

(Lilly P.O.V)

Lilly: Hey Hailey its me Lilly

Hailey: *Turns around to face Lilly* Hey Lilly nice to see you its been a while.

*Lilly freezes

:o 'OH MY GOSH SHE LOOKS JUST LIKE MILEY!'








3 comments for next chapter. What do you think?




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Curly
06-22-2008, 04:32 AM
Cool it's awsome

Gabriella Read
06-22-2008, 10:11 AM
nice...keep it up girl.

Miley&HannahFan
06-22-2008, 10:28 AM
yeah post moreee

HannahMontanaismyhero
06-22-2008, 11:55 AM
more!

adolphin
06-22-2008, 07:09 PM
more!!!

megz
06-23-2008, 06:52 AM
sorry everyone I had it written but my internet broke just as i pressed post and i lost it =(

I should have it on very soon but i need to study now so if i have time i will after that

megz
06-23-2008, 07:58 AM
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(Lilly P.O.V)


Lilly: Hey Hailey its me Lilly

Hailey: *Turns around to face Lilly* Hey Lilly nice to see you its been a while.

*Lilly freezes

:o 'OH MY GOSH SHE LOOKS JUST LIKE MILEY!'

Hailey: Lilly are you ok?

Lilly: Yeah sorry, Oh Hailey I have a big surprise for you tonight :D

Hailey: Really! What is it?

*Hannah Walks in*

Hannah: Hey Y'all

Hailey: OH MY GOSH ITS HANNAH MONTANA!

(Hannah P.O.V)
Wait a minute she looks just like me

*Looks at lilly

Hannah: Hey Hailey

Hailey: Hannah how do you know my name?

Hannah: Lets just say your cousin here is the best :P

Hailey: Lilly, you did this

Lilly: Yeah. I wanted to help you feel better

Hailey: Well its working :)

Lilly: I'm glad

*Hannah sings a few songs and signs some autographs then they leave.*

Lilly: Well I guess its time we all went and let you rest a bit

Hailey: Aww but Lilly

Hannah: No Lilly is right its getting late

Hailey: Ok bye Hannah

Hannah: Bye Hailey *Gives Hailey a hug

*Hailey smiles:D*

*Lilly and Hannah leave*

Oh now Lilly has some explaining to do, how can someone look just like me.

Lilly: Well bye Miley see you tomorrow

Hannah: Not so fast Lilly.

Lilly: *Stops walking* Miley I am so sorry if i knew she was going to look like you I would have given you a warning but i am just like you here, I was a huge shock.

Hannah: Lilly its not your fault, but i do need your help with something.

Lilly: Miles what is it?

Hannah: I need you to do all you can to find out as much as you can about Hailey, This cant just happen, someone cant just look like someone else. Its not right.

Lilly: Miley, I don't think there is any explanation to this, I think its just happened that way

Hannah: Maybe your right Lilly,but I have never seen anything like this happen I'm really scared

*Looks at Lilly

3 comments. Sorry its not that long it was much better last time i wrote it :'( Anyway if you have any ideas for the next chapter let me know and i'll see if i can fit it in somewhere =D
remember 3 more comments =D

huskerrich
06-23-2008, 08:17 AM
hi, megz, nice story, more.

Gabriella Read
06-23-2008, 11:55 PM
nice...more more....

megz
06-24-2008, 02:43 AM
1 more comment =P

destinysmiles!
06-24-2008, 11:04 PM
more

Khockeygrl4
06-25-2008, 12:00 AM
MORE!!! i luv it!!!

HannahMontanaismyhero
06-25-2008, 12:05 AM
more its forktastical! *my weird word*

megz
06-25-2008, 04:54 AM
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Hannah: Maybe your right Lilly,but I have never seen anything like this happen I'm really scared

*Looks at Lilly

Lilly: Miley It will be ok really, I am here for you

Hannah: I am so glad you are *hugs lilly

Lilly: I will talk to mum about her she will be able to explain this how about you sleep over tonight and we can figure it out together

Hannah: That would be great I'll just go home and change back into Miley and I'll be there in an hour :D

Lilly: Cool see you then

(At Lilly's)

Lilly: Ok Miley i went through some old photos here is a picture of her when she was younger it looks a bit like the pictures of you when you were younger.

*Shows Miley the Picture.
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o280/megzpoo/NoahVariousPhotoshoot001-1.png?t=1214377702

Miley: Wow your right!
*Goes through her purse to find a picture*
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o280/megzpoo/miley-cyrus_dot_com-babyandyoung-1.jpg?t=1214379706

Lilly:WOW

Miley: This is really really freaky

Lilly: I think its time to talk to mum

Miley: I think you right

Lilly: MUM!! CAN YOU COME HERE PLEASE!!

* Heather walks in

Heather: What wrong?

Lilly: We need your help

Heather: Sure

Miley: Can you explain this

*Shows Heather the pictures

Heather: WOW!..... thats impossible

Lilly: What?

Heather: She cant be a Stewart

Miley: Pardon?

Heather: Well.......



2 comments this time because i had so many last time =P

oh btw the sooner you comment the sooner the story will be finished and the less you will have to wait. if its not finished by the end of next week you will have to wait up to 2 weeks for the next chapter as i am going over seas and I'm not aloud to take my laptop

If i get 5 comments ill post 2 chapters!!!

huskerrich
06-25-2008, 08:55 AM
one comment megz, great story.

Khockeygrl4
06-26-2008, 08:48 PM
two, more pleaz!!!!!

Gabriella Read
06-27-2008, 02:15 AM
more more....love it.

Miley&HannahFan
06-27-2008, 02:41 AM
moreeee please

adolphin
06-27-2008, 08:26 AM
more!!!

megz
06-27-2008, 08:27 AM
ill post more soon but atm im not very well and need to get better to play netball tomorrow in the freezing cold so im taking it easy i cant even think straight =(
i promise 2 chapters asap

huskerrich
06-27-2008, 09:24 AM
np megz you do have a life, but a question, What's netball?

megz
06-27-2008, 09:28 AM
np megz you do have a life, but a question, What's netball?


its a sport :P

its like basketball but you throw the ball instead of bounce it and you wear a really short body suite with a little skirt on it. you play in the morning in winter really early usually its freezing cold but really fun =D

indianrockyeah
06-27-2008, 10:17 AM
more when u can i love it

huskerrich
06-27-2008, 11:11 AM
I think I get the idea, but living in the interior on a continent, i have a different idea of freezing cold, but then I guess you wouldn't be playing in "really short body suits" or at least you would move the game indoors, anyway be careful and have fun.

HannahMontanaismyhero
06-27-2008, 06:40 PM
more more more!!!

destinysmiles!
06-27-2008, 08:39 PM
more!

megz
06-28-2008, 07:33 AM
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(Miley P.O.V)

Heather: She cant be a Stewart

Miley: Pardon?

Heather: Well.......

Miley: Well what??

Heather: Hailey could possible be related to you.

'WHOAAAA NO WAY DAD WOULD HAVE TOLD ME'

Miley: WHAT!! HOW??

Heather: She was adopted as a baby, she was found in a bush with her pram, the police said she was most likely lost but they couldnt find the parents. All they knew about her was her name was Hailey because of her necklace

Miley: When was this?

Heather: They prodicted she would have been about 6 months so probable 1993

Miley: This is freeky

Lilly: Miley are you sure your dad never mentioned her

Miley: Yeh

Heather: Maybe you should go talk to your father

Miley: Thats a good idea. Thanks Mrs Truscott

Heather: No problem

*Leave the room

Lilly: Miley you want to go talk to him now?

Miley: I guess. But your comming with me. Please

Lilly: Of course

Miley: Thankyou *Hugs Lilly

*They leave and go back to Mileys house but as there at the door they hear her dad talking and when they looked through the window they saw he was talking to a photo

Robbie: My dear Hailey

*Miley and Lilly freeze

Robbie: I'm so sorry we never found you :'( you and Miley were the sweetest twins I had ever seen

*The girls walk in

Miley: HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME

*runs upstairs with Lilly following

Robbie: Oh sweet niblets

*Robbie runs up to Miley

Robbie: Miles wait

Miley: You lied to me, my whole life

Robbie: Miley *Sits next to her* I didn't tell you about Hailey because I didn't want to upset you, for all i know she is dead

Lilly: Well thats not quite the situation

Robbie: *Looks at Lilly

Lilly: Sorry I'll be quite

Miley: Daddy there are some things I need to know like me having a twin sister. Its oblivious i would have found out some day. Why couldn't I have found out the right way

Robbie: Well by the time we called the police they hadn't found her and they never called us saying they did so we just assumed she was dead. We knew you were to young to remember so your mother and I decided it would be better if you didn't know

Miley: WELL I DO AND I KNOW HER!!

Robbie: You do!?

Miley: YES! but she doesn't even know i exist

Robbie: How did you meet her?

Miley: She is Lilly cousin... Step cousin. She was involved in an accident and her whole family died so she had to be flown over here to live with Lilly but the plane crashed and she went to hospital. Lilly was visiting her and I decided to let her meet Hannah as she was a big fan and had such a hard couple of months

Robbie: You got a big heart Miles

Miley: Daddy don't change the subject, we have to go tell her the truth

Robbie: Miles I can't do it, it would be weird me just turning up

Lilly: I'll take Miley to see her tomorrow. We can tell her everything

Miley: Yeah! then later I can bring you and then when she is better she can come home with us :D

Robbie: Good idea girl

Lilly: Thankyou *looks proud

Robbie: But I am a bit worried

Miley: Why daddy?

Robbie: What if she hates me for not continuing to look for her :'(

Next chapter coming soon prob in an hour =D

megz
06-28-2008, 08:13 AM
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Robbie: But I am a bit worried

Miley: Why daddy?

Robbie: What if she hates me for not continuing to look for her :'(

Miley: Just be honest with her

Robbie: Ok Miley. *Leaves the room

*Lilly and Miley go to sleep

(Hailey P.O.V)

'I cant wait until next week and they let me out of here :D'

*Gets out of bed and gets changed to go for a walk*

*Lilly walks in

Lilly: Hailey :D

Hailey: Lilly :D What are you doing here so early?

Lilly: Well I need to talk to you about something I have been trying to find the right time to tell you

Hailey: Lilly? What is it? *Looks worried

Lilly: *Sits down* Well you know how you were adopted?

Hailey: Yeh

Lilly: Well I know your real family, you actually have a twin sister, she only found out that you were her twin yesterday and her and your dad wanted to tell you the truth

Hailey: *Freezes

Lilly: Hailey? *Haves hand in fount of her face

Hailey: Cousin from another family say what!!

Lilly: Wow and she talks just like that. Hailey, I am serious here

Hailey: Wow *sits down

Lilly: Hailey I would like to introduce you to my best friend, who happens to be your twin sister. Miley Stewart

*Miley walks in

Hailey: Wow!

Miley: Hi Hailey

Hailey: Wow!

Lilly: Hailey I know this is a surprise to you but when Miley heard about it she was just like this

Hailey: Miley is it?

Miley: Yeah, how are you Hailey

Hailey: I'm a little scared at the moment can i please have a moment *Walks into bathroom

Miley: Well that went well *Sits on bed

Lilly: Miles whats wrong

Miley: She obviously hates me the way she acted

Lilly: *Sits next to Miley* No she doesn't she was just taken by surprise

*Hailey comes out

Hailey: Sorry. This is something unusual to me

Miley: I know how you feel

Hailey: So what are our parents like?

Miley: Well dad is the best

Hailey: And mum?

Miley: *Looks sad* Well mum is dead :(

Hailey: Oh:(

Lilly: How about we go now Miley and come back this afternoon with your dad. Were gonna be late for school

Miley: Ok Lilly Bye Hailey

Hailey: Bye Miley see you later

*The girls leave*

Lilly: How do you think your dads gonna go?

Miley: I don't know but I hope it all goes well...


Hope you liked the last 2 chapters sorry it took so long.
3 comments for the next 1 =D

huskerrich
06-28-2008, 09:04 AM
more please

Miley&HannahFan
06-28-2008, 09:21 AM
moreeee....

megz
06-28-2008, 08:25 PM
1 more comment =D

HannahMontanaismyhero
06-29-2008, 05:48 PM
more!

Gabriella Read
06-30-2008, 12:59 AM
more more....

megz
06-30-2008, 04:31 AM
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(Robbie P.O.V)
'Gosh I hope Hailey likes me I'm so nervous when will Miley get home'

Miley: Daddy I'm Home

Robbie: FINALLY I HAVE BEEN WAITING ALL DAY

Lilly: Chill Mr Stewart it'll all be alright

Miley: *Stares at Lilly* Don't talk to my dad like that. *Shakes her head

Robbie: Are we going yet? I'm ready to go, lets get out of here

Miley: Daddy settle down

Robbie: Sorry Darling I am just really nervous

Lilly: Oh yeah thats not obvious

Miley: Come on lets go

*The 3 leave for the hospital

In the car

Miley: Daddy isn't Jackson meant to be coming

Robbie: He got held up at work apparently Rico was being a pain he will meet us later

Miley: Ok

*They arrive at the hospital

Lilly: Miles I'll go get us something to eat at the canteen you 2 go ahead

Miley: Ok Lil

*Robbie and Miley walk into Hailey's room

Miley: Hey Hailey

Hailey: Miley!! :D

*Robbie freezes in shock of how alike his little girls look

Miley: This is our dad, Robbie Ray *Elbows him

Robbie: Hi Hailey

Hailey: Hi... Dad

Robbie: I'm so glad your all right how have you been?

Hailey: I'm good. Im so glad I am finally meeting you

Miley: I'll just give you 2 some time. You guys want anything from the canteen?

Hailey: Sure I'll have a hot chocolate
Miley: No Problem, Daddy?

Robbie: No thankyou darling

*Miley leaves

Robbie: *Sits down at the bottom of Hailey's bed* Hailey darling, are you mad at me for what happened?

Hailey: Well when I first found out I was furious but after a while I realized that you would have done all you could to find me and I wanted to finish that search for you by finding you but I couldn't do it.

Robbie: I am so sorry

Hailey: It is ok really. But.. Dad.. can i ask for something I have been wanting my whole life from you

Robbie: Anything

Hailey: This may sound strange but when I met my real parents I always wanted to give them a hug

*Robbie smiles and leans over and hugs Hailey

Miley and Lilly are looking in from the window

Miley: Wow it seems there getting along

Lilly: Your right Miles. Soon you will all be one big happy family

*Miley and Lilly walk in

Miley: Here you go Hailey *Passes Hailey her hot chocolate

Hailey: Thanks Miley

Lilly: So how are things going?:03:

Hailey: Wonderful :D

*Mileys Phone rings

Miley: Oh its Jackson, I'll be back *Leaves the room

Hailey: Who's Jackson?

Lilly: You'll see

5 Minutes later

*Miley and Jackson walk in

Miley: Hailey I would like you to meet you brother Jackson

Jackson: WOW FREEKY

Hailey: Hi Jackson

Jackson: Dad there are to Miley's in the room

Robbie: Jackson be nice

Jackson: Sorry, Hi Hailey nice to meet you its been a while

Hailey: Did you ever remember me?

Jackson: I think, I don't really know it could have been anyone or anything

Miley: *Rolls her eyes* So Hailey you excited to come home?

Hailey: ARE YOU KIDDING!? I cant wait tomorrow will be the best! Like all my dreams come true!

Robbie: Your gonna love the house, were right on the beach

Hailey: Really!!! COOOOL

Hailey: Everything is finally falling into place

3 comments! what do you think so far?

huskerrich
06-30-2008, 09:22 AM
nice job megz, you know what we want

megz
07-03-2008, 07:44 AM
doesnt anyone else want more =(

destinysmiles!
07-03-2008, 08:33 PM
mooooooooree!!!!!

megz
07-03-2008, 11:30 PM
1 more comment

megz
07-05-2008, 09:33 AM
ill post more tomorrow even though i dont think anyone is reading this but i am leaving for thailand and im not taking my laptop so ill post 1 tomorrow b4 we leave hopefully people will read it

huskerrich
07-05-2008, 11:07 AM
megz, take a look at how many views your story is getting, unfortunately you are not getting the comments.you are doiing a great job and I do love your story.

megz
07-05-2008, 08:44 PM
megz, take a look at how many views your story is getting, unfortunately you are not getting the comments.you are doiing a great job and I do love your story.

I never thought of it that way =P
thanks
Ill write more asap

megz
07-06-2008, 12:46 AM
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(Hailey P.O.V)

'I cant believe I am finally going home! to my real home, I AM SO EXCITED'

*Starts Packing her bags*

*Robby Ray walks in*

Robby: Hey bud you nearly ready?

Hailey: Yeah daddy just got a few more things to pack

Robby: *Looks at Hailey small suite case* Is that all you've got?

Hailey: Everything I owned got lost in the plane crash *Shivers from the terrible memory

Robby: *Hugs Hailey* Don't worry darling everything will be ok. How about you, Miley and Lilly go on a shopping spree tomorrow and get you a whole new wardrobe. My Treat :D

Hailey: REALLY THANKS DAD :D

Robby: Its nothing really I've got 15 years to make up for

*They sign Hailey out and head home

At home

Miley and Lilly are waiting out the frount

Miley: I can't wait until Hailey gets here its going to be so fun

Lilly: Same here. I'm used to 1 Miley now I get 2:D This is gonna be great

*The car pulls up the driveway

Miley and Lilly: She's here! *Run the the car

Miley: *Hugs Hailey* I'm so glad your finally here

Hailey: Me too

Lilly: Wow

Miley: Whats wrong?

Lilly: Thats all she's got *Points to the suite case

Robby: She lost all her stuff in the crash but you 2 will be taking her on a shopping spree tomorrow

Miley and Lilly: SHOPPING SPREE!!!! I CANT WAIT

Hailey: *Laughs

Miley: Hailey come I'll show you your room. Its not all that good it used to be the guest room but were gonna get some renovating done so it looks just as good as mine, we were gonna put you in Jacksons room but that would be punishing you

Lilly: Yeah if you know whats good for you you wouldn't even go near that room

Hailey: I'll keep note of that

*They all laugh

*Lilly and Miley give Hailey a tour of the house

Miley: And this is your room *opens the door

Hailey: WOW I LOVE IT

Miley: Really? its so small

Hailey: No its not its beautiful *Runs out to the balcony* And the view. Look a dolphin

Miley: I'm glad you like it

Lilly: Lets go to the beach

Hailey: I don't have a swimming costume

Miley: Don't worry about that I have plenty meet me in my room when you have unpacked

Hailey: Ok thanks Miley

*Miley and Lilly leave.

Lilly: Your not gonna let her in the closet are you? she'll find out your secret

Miley: No I have my other closet my Miley one. But I am going to have to tell her about Hannah soon

Lilly: You need the perfect time

Miley: I know..

*Hailey walks in

Hailey: Ready Guys

Miley: Sure are *passes Hailey a swimming costume

Hailey: Thanks *Runs to the bathroom

Miley: I don't know how I am going to tell her she is such a big fan

Lilly: You can't keep it from her

Miley: Hmm *Walks out of the room

Lilly: This is going to be bad

At the beach

Hailey: Wow this beach is nice

Lilly: it is isn't it:)

Miley: Lets go for a swim

Lilly: Yeah

Hailey: you to go ahead I'll go buy us some water

Lilly: You want us to come?

Hailey: Na its ok I'll just go look around:D

Miley: Ok Hailey but take this *Hands her money* Rico charges so much

Hailey: Thanks Miley *Walks off to Rico's

Oliver: MILEY MILEY *Runs up to Hailey* MILEY LOOK AT THIS *Waves a magazine in the air* MILEY ITS IMPORTANT *Taps Hailey

Hailey: AHHHHHH

Oliver: Wow Miley whats wrong??

Hailey: I'm not Miley

Oliver: Uhmm??

Hailey: Who are you?

Oliver: Mileys best friend Oliver

Hailey: What about Lilly

Oliver: Were all best friend. Please explain why you look like Miley

Hailey: Well twins usually look alike

Oliver: Ohh so your Hailey

Hailey: Ya think

Oliver: Wow your a lot like Miley and I'm not talking about looks

Hailey: Uhmm thanks.. I think

Oliver: Well can you tell me where I can find Miley I really need to tell her something

Hailey: She is swimming with Lilly

Oliver: Thanks *Walks off

Hailey: *Walks over to Rico's.* Hey Jackson

Jackson: Wow Miles since when do you talk to me at work?

Hailey: Uhmm Jackson its Hailey

Jackson: Ohh sorry. I'll get used to this one day I hope

Hailey: *Laughs* Its ok, can I have 3 bottles of water please

Jackson: Here you go *Passes her the water

Hailey: Thanks *Passes him the money

Jackson: So are you home? for good now?

Hailey: Yep :) *Walks off

Jackson: WELL SEE YOU THERE THAN

Hailey: *Waves

On the beach

Miley: This isnt good. How can this be happening :'(

Lilly: Miley don't worry we'll figure it out

Oliver: Yeah like we always do

Miley: Oliver this is so different. My career is nearly ruined *Sits down and puts her head in her hands.*

*Lilly and Oliver look at eachother worried*


What do you think so far :D I may write more in a few hours before I go.
Tell me what you think:57:

HannahMontanaismyhero
07-06-2008, 12:53 AM
more!!!

megz
07-06-2008, 01:03 AM
more!!!

I'll write more in a few hours =D
I'm going to go play Mario Cart Wii with my Sister now :D

Gabriella Read
07-06-2008, 06:06 AM
more more...love it.

megz
07-06-2008, 07:08 AM
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o280/megzpoo/xx.jpg



(Miley P.O.V)

'I cant beleive this is happening, the best day ever turns to the worst with one magazine artical :'('

Lilly: Miley I am sure we can think of something

Oliver: Yeah Lilly is right

Miley: No one like Hannah anymore look at me im 59th on the chart and look at this Mikayla is 15th *The Hannah phone rings* Oh not now :(

Miley: Hello

Mikayla: Hey Hannah told you I was gonna take all your fannas!

Miley: Mikayla shut up

Mikayla: Ohh Miss 59th got a bit of a problem

Lilly: *Grabs the phone* Listen here Mikayla! NO ONE AND I MEAN NO ONE TALKS TO MY BEST FRIEND LIKE THAT

Miley (whispers): Lilly what are you doing?

Mikayla: Ohhh I'm so scared

Lilly: You should be, everyone has a problem in there career thats how life runs but you'll see Hannah will be number 1 before you know it :D

*Miley's mouth drops open :o*

Mikayla (worried): How?

Lilly: How what? How stupid do you think I am? You really think I would tell you how? GOSH

Miley: *Takes the phone* Mikayla, Mikayla, Mikayla. You had a nice career while it lasted but you better start saying bye bye career. Like this...
BYE BYE *Hangs up*

Miley: ok Lilly whats your plan?

Lilly: Uhmmm I hoped you had one

Oliver: I HAVE ONE!

Miley: *Rolls her eyes oh this will be good

Hailey: *Come back* Hey what I miss? *Picks up magazine

Hailey: OH MY GOD LOOK AT THIS! HANNAH IS 59TH! 59TH CAN YOU BELIEVE THAT? AND MIKAYLA IS 15TH

Miley: Hailey settle down

Hailey: They must have printed their names wrong it cant be true. Mikayla has no talent at all we have to help Hannah!

Lilly: And how do we do that

Hailey: You know Hannah tell her to call me, I have an Idea

Miley: Sure why don't we go get her right now ;) You stay here with Oliver

Hailey: Ok

*Miley and Lilly Leave*

Oliver: So whats your idea? I was gonna say we sneak into her dressing room and destroy all her stuff.

Hailey: Thats a terrible Idea they will guess its Hannah my idea is... *Her phone rings*

Hailey: Hello?

Hannah: Oh Hailey hey, I was told you had a great idea to get back to number 1

Hailey: Yeah I do but it may take a bit of work

Hannah: I'll do anything

Hailey: Great meet me at my house in Half an Hour

Hannah: Will do see you then *Hangs up

At home

Miley: Lilly we gotta get dressed quick before Hailey gets home *They run into the closet

5 mins later

Lilly: Wow thats the fastest we have ever done lets go hide *Leave through the back door

Hailey: *Walks through the frount door* Wow this place is a mess I need to clean it for Hannah

20 mins later

Hailey: Wow im exhausted *Sits on the couch* *Hears a knock on the door* *Runs to door*

Hailey: Hannah your here

Hannah: Hey Hailey *Hugs her* Hows it going?

Hailey: Not bad, How about you

Hannah: Other than that terrible Mikayla I'm good

Hailey: Well I have a couple ideas you could use

Hannah: Really I'd love to hear them

Hailey: Sure have a seat

*They sit on the lounge

Hailey: My first idea is a clothing line:D

Hannah: WOW THATS A GREAT IDEA!

Hailey: Thankyou. My second is a new sound, and a new look to wow your fans

Hannah: That could work. I shall go home and start working on it right away thankyou sooooo much

Hailey: No problem glad I could help you :)

Hannah: Bye Hailey can't wait to see you again

Hailey: Same here Hannah bye

*They hug

Hannah: *Leaves and talks to Lola* Wow Hailey has great Ideas

Lola: I heard everything! she is so great I told you here being here would be a good thing

Hannah: Lola you are so smart :)

*They head to Lilly's house to start planing*

I'm off for 2 weeks how am I going to survive with no computer :'(
I'll write more as soon as I get back on in 2 weeks so keep checking up for more =D

huskerrich
07-06-2008, 10:49 AM
Megz, have fun in Thailand, I'm going to miss you and your updates.

~*GirlzRule*~
07-06-2008, 11:05 AM
Ahhh I'll miss you and the story !!! :'(
Bye!

Khockeygrl4
07-07-2008, 06:18 PM
ahhh, i cant wait that long!!! cause i luv it soooo much!!!!

megz
07-18-2008, 10:39 PM
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o280/megzpoo/dcfggdg-1.jpg?t=1216427144

Hannah: *Leaves and talks to Lola* Wow Hailey has great Ideas

Lola: I heard everything! she is so great I told you here being here would be a good thing

Hannah: Lola you are so smart :)

*They head to Lilly's house to start planing*


After 3 hours of drawing and mucking around with clothes they finally designed a great jacket
http://images-cdn01.associatedcontent.com/image/A1646/164661/300_164661.jpg

Lilly: I love it I would totally buy this

Miley: Me to lets go take it to daddy to get it made for us :D

Lilly: Great idea

*They head off to Miley's house*

Miley: Daddy?

Robbie Ray: In here bud

Miley: Daddy check this out we created a jacket for a Hannah Montana clothing line

Robbie Ray: Wow you 2 created this

Lilly: Yup

Robbie Ray: I love it I'll go get it made right away =D

Miley: Thanks daddy *hugs him*

*Miley and Lilly head upstairs*

Lilly: Whats that singing

Miley: I don't know

Hailey: *Sings best of both worlds*

Miley: I think its Hailey

Lilly: where is she?

Miley: I think she is in the shower

*They run to the bathroom door and sit outside listening to Hailey sing*

Lilly: Miley this is actually perfect

Miley: What do you mean?

Lilly: Well Hannah needs to get back at the top if she had someone new to sing with

Miley: That could work

*The shower turns off Miley and Lilly run to the Hannah closet*

*Miley txts Hailey*
Hey hailey meet me in my closet i need to show you something

Hailey (to herself): Her closet thats a bit strange *gets dressed and heads to Mileys room

Hailey: Miley? *walks to her closet and the hannah closet is open Miley is sitting with her normal clothes on and her Hannah wig on*

Lilly: Hailey come in

*Hailey walks in slowly*
*Miley turns around on the chair*

Hailey: OH MY GOSH!!

Miley: *takes the wig off* I'm sorry I didn't tell you sooner

Hailey: Your seriously Hannah?

Miley: Yeah.

Hailey: This is so cool

Miley: Hailey I am going to need your help with something

Hailey: What??

Miley: Hannah needs a new sound something to get her back to the top the clothing line was great but its not enough

Hailey: And?...

Lilly: We heard you singing in the shower and your amazing

Hailey: Uhmm

Miley: I would like you to be Hannah's singing partner

Hailey: Famous sister say what!?

Miley: Please Hailey

Hailey: I would love to but I don't think I am good enough

Lilly: HAILEY YOU BETTER THAN GOOD ENOUGH

Hailey: Ok I'll do it

Miley: Thankyou thankyou sooo much *hugs hailey*

Lilly: We need a name

Hailey: Well I have always loved the name Sarah

Miley: Sarah Montana

Lilly: Sounds good

Miley: We got ourselves a name, now tomorrow on our shopping spree we need to get you a Sarah wardrobe

Lilly: And a Hailey one thats going to be alot of shopping :)sounds like fun to me

Hailey: Me to

Miley: We need to write some knew songs, before I introduce you to the public were going to have to record and album that will take a few months to do so you can settle in here

Hailey: Sounds good

Lilly: I can't wait until tomorrow lets go now

Hailey: YEAH!

Miley: I'll get some money off daddy

*The 3 run downstairs get some money and head off to the shop they find heaps of great outfits for both Hailey and Sarah they headed back home for some sleep for some busy days of recording, photo shoots and a new life for Hailey*

What do you guys think? I'm starting to get into it :D tell me what you think

Khockeygrl4
07-18-2008, 11:42 PM
i luv it!!!! more pleaz!?!?!?! :)

megz
07-19-2008, 07:44 AM
i luv it!!!! more pleaz!?!?!?! :)

I'll write more tomorrow I am so tired I was on the plane all night and it is so hard to sleep on a plane!

Khockeygrl4
07-20-2008, 10:29 PM
its tomorrow..... jk, if ur too tired, i'll understand, but i just luv it so much!!! :)

megz
07-20-2008, 10:32 PM
its tomorrow..... jk, if ur too tired, i'll understand, but i just luv it so much!!! :)

lol thanks glad to know you like it
i will write more in a few hours i have a HUGE assignment to do and if I don't do it my mum wont let me go to this biig party tomorrow that i have to preform in with my friends and i really wanna go.
I'll start my assignment to make her happy then i'll write some more =D

megz
07-21-2008, 04:34 AM
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o280/megzpoo/Untitled-6.jpg?t=1216622540

Miley: Hailey! Hailey wake up were going to be late for recording

Hailey: Miley its to early

Miley: get up! you have to change into Sarah your not going to have enough time!

Hailey: BUT MILEY......

Miley: Please Hailey *Does puppy dog face*

Hailey: Grr alright *Gets up and has a shower*

Lilly: Miley!

Miley: *Runs down stairs* Lilly what are you doing here?

Lilly: I wanted to come to the recording studios with you :D

Miley: Ohh well Hailey just in the shower then were gonna get changed come on up

Lilly: Cool

(they all get changed then hop in the car to the recording studio)

Sarah: Miley I don't think I can do this, I'm scared

Hannah: You can do it I have heard you sing

Lola: Yeah your nearly as good as Miley

Hannah: HEY!

Lola: Sorry

(They get out of the car and the paparazzi start yelling at them)

paparazzi: Look two Hannah's this is gonna make me millions!

Sarah: Ahh

Hannah: Don't worry they do that all the time

Sarah: I'm not ready for paparazzi I only decided to do this yesterday

Hannah: Come on Sarah just smile and wave *They pose for the picture then walk inside*

Robbie Ray: Ok girls we have half an hour to record this song Sarah how are you feeling

Sarah: Like my stomach is full of butterfly's

Hannah: Don't worry anything that we don't like we can just delete in editing no one is going to hear this but us ok?

Sarah: Ok

*They start recording there new song 'Driveway' (By Miley Cyrus)*

Hannah: After twelve, not so well Won't pretend it's too soon to tell

Hannah & Sarah: What's 'round this bend

Sarah: No disgrace, about face Anything not to have to chase

Hannah & Sarah: You down again

(They finish recording)

Sarah: OH MY GOSH! THAT WAS SO FUN:D

Hannah: I told you it would be

Lola: Wow that sounded great how come I haven't heard that song before?

Hannah: Oh we wrote it last night after you went home. Hailey is really good at writing songs

Sarah: Thanks Miley *They hug*

Robby Ray: Come on girls lets go home and have a nice ice cream sundae

Lola: Sounds good

(They go home get changed and sit watching tv with their ice cream sundaes)

News reporter: And after the break we will be talking about Hannah Montana and a huge secret she has been keeping from the world

Miley: *Freezes*

Lilly: It couldn't be could it!?

Hailey: How did they find out?

Robby Ray: We have been so careful

(The news come back on)

News Reporter: And now its time for Hannah Montana's BIG SECRET that she suddenly decided to share with the world today

Miley: HUH!?

News Reporter: Hannah was found with what looks like a twin sister walking to the recording studio today why hasn't Hannah told us about her sister well that is something we want to know

Miley: Oh thank god!

News Reporter: We will have paparazzi following Hannah and her sister around until we find and answer

Robby Ray: *Turns off tv* Girls your going to have to be VERY careful, when you get home MAKE SURE NO ONE IS AROUND! when you take your wigs off MAKE SURE NO ONE IS AROUND

Hailey: Gosh this is scary

(The Hannah phone rings)

Miley: Oh great its Mikayla

Lilly: (sarcastically) yippee

Miley: Hello

Mikayla: Miss Hannah Montana keeping secrets from the world

Miley: was it really a secret Mikayla? No one asked me 'Hannah do you have a sister'

Mikayla: Soooo you should tell people

Miley: Why you don't tell people about your family

Mikayla: Thats different

Miley: HOW? She is my sister do you have a sister?

Mikayla: Yeah...

Miley: And how come no one knows about her

Mikayla: Well..

Miley: MESS WITH ME!

*Hailey snatches the phone*

Hailey: Mikayla right?

Mikayla: Yeah who's this?

Hailey: Your worst enemy

Mikayla: Huh?

Hailey: Lets just say your gonna wish you never started you little career by the time i'm done with you. Wait its not just your career I'm going to destroy its your whole life. See you soon *Hangs up*

Miley: What did you just do?

Hailey: You'll see. You got Mikayla's address?

Miley: Yeah why?

Hailey: Lets just say its time that girl got down from that cloud she's floating on and joined in with the real world.

Lilly: I don't get it

Hailey: Its revenge time

3 comments =D hope you like it

Khockeygrl4
07-21-2008, 09:54 PM
one word........amazing!!!! more!!! :) :) :) :) :) (i give it five smileys out of five :) )

megz
07-21-2008, 09:56 PM
one word........amazing!!!! more!!! :) :) :) :) :) (i give it five smileys out of five :) )

Lol thanks
but I still need 2 more people to comment so tell your friends :D

mollzy_23
07-22-2008, 12:03 AM
Please write some more.
It is really good.
:)):):)):):)):):))

~*GirlzRule*~
07-22-2008, 12:08 AM
Oooh, revenge! Write woman, write! :D

megz
07-22-2008, 12:11 AM
ok new chapeter on its way

mollzy_23
07-22-2008, 12:59 AM
OK thanks.
:)

megz
07-22-2008, 03:05 AM
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o280/megzpoo/Untitled-8-1.jpg?t=1216697687

Lilly: Oh revenge! I'm in :D I'll go get changed into my Lola outfit

Hailey: Lilly wait. If we do it as Hannah and Sarah and Lola then thats the end of our career's

Miley: Then whats your plan?

Hailey: Well Mikayla likes you right?

Miley: Yeah...

Hailey: Well then were counting on you to get this job done

Miley: WHAT? ME? WHY ME IT WAS YOUR IDEA!

Hailey: Well she doesn't like me does she? she has never met me

Miley: But... grr fine what do I have to do?

Lilly: Please don't have it including bad accents, sticky food and dumb costumes

Hailey: Huh?

Lilly: Lets just say Miley likes revenge

Hailey: Ok then....

Miley: Just tell me what to do before I change my mind

Hailey: Ok first you have to act like her best friend then when she least expects it BAM!

Miley: I really don't want to be her friend

Hailey: come on Miley

Lilly: Why don't you just pretend to be Miley you look enough alike and Mikayla would never notice

Miley: Thats a great idea Lilly! Come on Hailes

Hailey: Miles I don't think I can pull something like that off I haven't known you that long

Miley: Please please please please I can't stand to be around Mikayla

Hailey: Ok. Can I have your phone?

Miley: Why?

Hailey: I'll call Mikayla and ask her if we can hang out

Lilly: Already?

Hailey: Yeah why not

Miley: Here Hailes

Hailey: Thanks *calls Mikayla*

Mikayla: Hello

Hailey: Hi Mikayla its Miley

Mikayla: Miley! Whats up?

Hailey: Not much I was just going through my contacts and thought why don't I catch up with my good friend Mikayla :D

*Miley and Lilly laugh*

Mikayla: I'd love to catch up how about I meet you at the beach in Half an Hour

Hailey: Sure see you then

*They hang up*

Miley: That was fast

Hailey: I have my ways. Miley I need to borrow some clothes were meeting at the beach in half an hour

Miley: Sure *They head upstairs to Mileys room*

Lilly: Oh my gosh Hailey you have to wear this outfit its so cute

Miley: Lilly think who she is meeting

Lilly: Oh yeah.... but come on it'll look great on her

Miley: Thats because it looks great on me

Hailey: Girls just give me the outfit

Lilly: Oh sorry

*Hailey gets changed*

Miley: *Hands Hailey a badge* This is has a camera in it its connected to my laptop so we can see everything that is going on if something happens Lilly will be there before you can blink

Lilly: I will?

Miley: Yes you will. you can wait down at the beach if something happens ill call you

Lilly: good thinking

Miley: Well i'm not very happy with this plan i don't Mikayla not one bit

Hailey: Miley don't worry how hard can it be all i gotta do is say how much I hate Hannah Montana and her new sister

Miley: Just be careful what you say

Hailey: I will thanks Miley *turns the camera badge on* Lets go Lilly

*Hailey and Lilly leave*

Miley: This shall be fun *Sit on her bed with her computer on her lap*

Lilly: Hailey I hope you know what your doing here

Hailey: Lilly it'll be fine just don't make it look like your watching us. Look theres Oliver

Oliver: MILEY LILLY! OVER HERE

*The girls walk over to Oliver*

Oliver: Wheres Hailey

Hailey: right here

Oliver: Then where's Miley

Lilly: At home

Oliver: Hailey was that you on the news with Miley?

Hailey: Yeah, look I gotta go bye *Gets up and walks to Mikayla*

Mikayla: Miley

Hailey: Mikayla *They hug*

Mikayla: It's so good to see you

Hailey: Yeah you to

Mikayla: So you heard from Jake lately

Hailey: Who? *thinks to herself: Hailey your Miley! Miley would know Jake* Oh Jake naa

Mikayla: Me either he said he would call me then he never did

Hailey: Boys..

Mikayla: *Looking around worried* yeah

Hailey: Mikayla whats wrong? you look worried

Mikayla: OK i'll tell you. I just got off the phone with Hannah Montana and some one started talking to me and freaked me out they said that they were gonna do something to me.

Hailey: I doubt anything will happen

Mikayla: How can you be sure, this world is full of crazy stuff

Miley: HAHAHA THIS IS SO FUNNY I CAN WATCH THIS FOR HOURS

Hailey: Don't worry about it

Mikayla: Its not just that I'm worried about, I'm going on Oprah with Hannah on the weekend and if she brings along that sister of hers I will freak I can't put up with both of them

Hailey: Hmm

Miley: eeek Hailey seems like she can't handle being around Mikayla much longer maybe I should do something

Mikayla: Miley can I tell you a secret?

Hailey: Sure

Miley: OHH maybe not its getting good

3 comments what do you think??

mileyfanforever101
07-22-2008, 03:36 AM
more.
i like it.
:]

mollzy_23
07-23-2008, 12:56 AM
Please write more.
:))

mollzy_23
07-23-2008, 01:16 AM
Please.

megz
07-23-2008, 08:38 AM
A BLAST FROM THE PAST
http://www.cypressgardens.com/events/images/starliner_grand_opening_eventimage1.jpg



Oliver: *Oliver running down the beach with lilly chasing him* HAILEY HAILEY!

Lilly: OLIVER STOP

Mikayla: What are your friends doing?

Hailey: I don't know

Lilly: *Tackles Oliver down* Oliver I told you she is being Miley

Oliver: Oh yeah! well I just embarrassed myself cya later

Lilly: Oliver don't leave me to do this alone

Oliver: Sorry I have to

Lilly: Oh man, MILEY!

Hailey: *Turns around* Excuse me a moment

Lilly: *Runs up to Hailey* Miley you wouldn't believe who Oliver saw at the mall

Hailey: Who!

Lilly: JAKE!

Mikayla: Oh My God sorry Miley I have to run we'll talk later ok?

Hailey: Uhmm ok Bye

Miley: *Freezes*

Hailey: Uhmm Lilly WHO IS JAKE!!

Lilly: HaHa Miley's ex, you no Jake Ryan?

Hailey: OH MY GOSH SHE DATED JAKE RYAN!!!!

Lilly: Yup he went to our school

Hailey: What doesn't that girl do?

Lilly: Haha

Hailey: So why is Mikayla so weird about him

Lilly: Long story, I'll tell you on the way home

*They walk back to see Miley and Lilly tells Hailey all about Jake and Mikayla.*

*They walk into the house*

Hailey: MILEY?

Miley: UHH

Lilly: MILEY ARE YOU OK?

Hailey: *Runs upstairs with Lilly* Miley?

Miley: Jake is back? Are you sure?

Lilly: Pretty sure

*They hear a knock at the door*

Hailey: I'll get it *runs downstairs, opens door*

Jake: Miley *Hugs Hailey*

Hailey: Uhmm Hi... Jake, Uhmm come in I just gotta run up stairs for a minute *Runs up stairs*

Miley: Who is it?

Hailey: I'm not being you this time

Miley: Huh?

Hailey: Its Jake

Miley: Oh my gosh, oh my gosh!

Lilly: Settle down just go talk to him

Hailey: Here take this *takes the camera badge off and pins it on Miley* Now go good luck

Miley: *Walks downstairs* Hi Jake

Sorry it's only short but I started school for the new term today got lots of homework and now I have to go to bed before I get grounded to.
2 comments
tell me what you think about Jake coming back it was kinda a last minute decision to bring him back =P if most people dont like him back i'll take him out and dont worry Mikayla's secret will hopefully come out in the next few chapters

mollzy_23
07-23-2008, 08:22 PM
Oh getting good.
Love it.
Write more.
:))

~*GirlzRule*~
07-23-2008, 08:30 PM
More please!

megz
07-24-2008, 07:27 AM
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o280/megzpoo/Untitled-9-1.jpg?t=1216893367


Miley: *Walks downstairs* Hi Jake

Jake: Miley you look great

Miley: Uhmm thanks, you to

Jake: I'm sorry for just turning up but I really wanted to see you

Miley: It's ok *They sit down*

Jake: Miley

Miley: Yes?

Jake: I want to give us another chance. Lately all I could think about was you and I really want you to give me another chance I have changed I promise

Miley: I don't know what to say

Lilly: Oh my gosh Hailey there gonna get back together

Hailey: Shh they may hear you

Jake: Say whats in your heart

Miley: I would love to give us another chance

Jake: *Smiles*

Miley: But I'm scared of getting hurt again

Jake: Miley I won't hurt you, any breakup is hard but everyone needs a chance to make up for their mistakes, please

Miley: I need some time to think about it

Jake: Ok I understand

Miley: So how have you been

Jake: *Surprised that Miley didn't kick him out* Uhmm good, what about you?

Miley: I have been great

Jake: I saw Hannah and her "sister?" on tv the other day

Miley: Oh yeah your probably wondering about that

Jake: A little...

Miley: Ok... HAILEY!

Hailey: I don't wanna go down there.

Miley: HAILEY COME HERE PLEASE!

Hailey: Oh man Lilly =( COMING MILEY! *Walks downstairs*

Jake: WOW!

Hailey: Hi Jake

Jake: Hailey right? I am so sorry about hugging you before

Hailey: It's ok

Miley: Jake this is my twin sister Hailey also known as Sarah Montana

Jake: You never told me you had a twin

Miley: I never knew

Hailey: It was a big shock!

Lilly: *Runs downstairs* Hey I feel left out up there

Jake: Hi Lilly

Lilly: Sup Jake

Jake: Well maybe I should get going, talk to you soon Miley.

Miley: Uhmm Yeah bye Jake

Lilly: Oh my gosh Miley! are you gonna get back together with him?

Miley: I don't know, I really want to, but then I don't want to.

Hailey: I say go for it he seemed like he really loved you

Miley: Yeah but I hate breaking up

Lilly: Miley...

Hailey: You can't not go in a relationship because your afraid of a breakup. 99% of relationships don't work out but what if this one will be the 1% one that does work out?

Miley: Wow that was really good, where did you get that from

Hailey: Haha I just made it up. Miley please go for it, you don't always get a second chance

Miley: I don't think I can

Lilly: Oh come on its Jake! You loved him so much

Miley: Yeah "loved" i don't know if the love is still there

Hailey: You can always kiss him to find out

Miley: *roles her eyes* guys i think I need to think this over by myself for a while

Hailey: Ok but if you wanna talk you know where here for you

Miley: Thank you guys *hugs them*

*Miley thinks long and hard and after a good night sleep she finally has a decision*

Miley: *Walks downstairs for breakfast* Hi daddy is Hailey up?

Robbie Ray: Not yet *Hailey walks in* Or maybe she is

Miley: Hailey! *Drags her over to the couch and whispers something to her*

Hailey: Oh my gosh *Hugs Miley*

Robbie Ray: Do I want to know?

Hailey: Haha probably

Miley: But your not gonna find out i kinda need to keep this quite for a while

Hailey: Yeah! lets call Lilly

Miley: Great idea *They phone rings*

Hailey: Hello

Jake: Hi its Jake

Hailey: Oh hi, I'll get Miley for you *Hands phone to Miley*

Miley: Hello

Jake: Hey Miley

Miley: Oh Hi

Robbie Ray: Who's that?

Hailey: Don't worry dad. Whats for breakfast?

Jake: I'm sorry to call so soon but I need to know if you have thought about it yet

Miley: *Talking with not expression in her voice so she doesn't give anything away* Yeah

Jake: Really!? how about we meet somewhere and talk about it tonight

Miley: Uhh tonight I cant Hannah's on Oprah with "Mikayla"

Jake: Oh, How about lunch time?

Miley: Uhh sure

Jake: Great, I'll come get you at 11:30?

Miley: Sounds great Bye Jake

Jake: Bye Miley. *they hang up*

Robbie Ray: Did I just hear you say Jake!?

Hailey & Miley: Oh sweet niblets

What do you think? 3 comments :D

mollzy_23
07-24-2008, 06:37 PM
It is good.
:) :) :) :)

~*GirlzRule*~
07-24-2008, 06:40 PM
Eeep
Fantastic!

huskerrich
07-24-2008, 10:06 PM
more please

megz
07-26-2008, 09:40 PM
i'll post more in a few hours

megz
07-27-2008, 03:45 AM
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o280/megzpoo/ddd-1.jpg?t=1217138238

Robbie Ray: Girls I want an explanation! why is Jake calling you Miley?

Hailey: Well I should go get dressed *Starts running

Miley: *Grabs Hailey* Your not leaving me

Robbie Ray: Well

Miley: Ok Jake turned up and wants to start over

Robbie Ray: And are you going to?

Miley: It's a bit complicated

Lilly: *Walks in* Hey

Hailey: Come on Lilly lets go upstairs and let them talk

Lilly: But.. *Gets dragged upstairs*

Robbie Ray: Miley...

Miley: Daddy

Robbie Ray: Tell me

Miley: Dad I can't there are some things a girl can't talk to her father about

Robbie Ray: I'm sorry darling

Miley: Why?

Robbie Ray: I'm not making things any easier for you. Go on go upstairs and talk to your sister about it, just remember if you need me I am here

Miley: I know daddy *Hugs him* I love you

Robbie Ray: I love you to bud

Miley: *Walks upstairs*

Lilly: So whats happening

Miley: Ok, I'm going to give him another chance

Lilly: YES! I KNEW IT! when are you gonna tell him

Miley: today

Lilly: Well lets get you ready

Hailey: Oh yeah I love this part

*The girls spend hours trying to find the right outfit*

*The doorbell rings*

Miley: Oh my gosh its him

Hailey: Just relax

Miley: *Walks downstairs* Jake *Kisses him

Robbie Ray: Oh boy

Hailey: Dad no

Jake: Does this mean what I think it does

Lilly: DUH!

Miley: I love you Jake I have never stopped loving you

Jake: I love you too Miley

*Miley's phone rings*

Hailey: Perfect timing *takes phone off Miley and her and Lilly run upstairs*

Hailey: Hello

Mikayla: Miley I am so sorry about running off yesterday

Hailey: It's fine

Mikayla: So you think maybe I could come around later to finish our talk

Hailey: Uhmm I'll just check *Hands phone to Lilly* Hold this I gotta talk to Miley

Hailey: Miley do you think you and Jake can go out for a while Mikayla wants to come over

Miley: Sure

Hailey: Great i'll txt you when she is gone and its safe to come back

Miley: Cool lets go Jake *The two of them leave*

Hailey: *Runs back upstairs, takes phone*Mikayla?

Mikayla: Yup

Hailey: Your aloud. How about in an hour?

Mikayla: Great *They hang up*

Lilly: Oh great Mikayla's coming

Hailey: Yes and your not leaving me, I hate that girl *They walk downstairs*

Robbie Ray: Hailey

Hailey: Yes daddy?

Robbie Ray: We got your first Sarah interview tomorrow

Hailey: Really?

Robbie Ray: Your going on Oprah with Hannah and Mikayla

Hailey: OPRAH! I cant go on Oprah she is like huge I have never done an interview before

Robbie Ray: Don't worry you'll have your sister

Hailey: Oh I'll worry *Walks upstairs*

*1 hour later

Mikayla: Hey Miley

Hailey: Hi Makayla

Lilly: Hey

Mikayla: What is she doing here?

Hailey: She is always here

Mikayla: *Roles eyes* can we talk in private please

Lilly: I'll go upstairs

Hailey: *Sits down* Whats up

Mikayla: *Sits* I was just about to tell you my huge secret but you have to promise not to tell anyone

Hailey: I promise *Looks down at her camera badge and smiles*

Mikayla: The truth is I don't actually hate Hannah Montana

Hailey: WHAA?

Mikayla: I am actually really jealous of her, she is so big everyone loves her and well I wish I was like that

Hailey: Whoa

Mikayla: You promised not to tell

Hailey: I wont *Her phone rings*

Hailey: Excuse me a minute. Hello

Miley: Hailey can we come home yet there is nothing else to do his fans are everywhere

Hailey: Uhmm ok, Bye

Hailey: Sorry Mikayla but something came up I really have to run

Mikayla: It's ok, I'm glad we had this talk

Hailey: Me too

Mikayla: Bye *Leaves

Hailey: Finally

Lilly: *runs downstairs* I cant believe it

Hailey: Me either

Miley: *Walks in* Finally

Jake: I'm sorry Miley

Miley: Oh Jakey its ok you can't help it

Hailey: (to lilly) Jakey? ewww

Miley: Oh Hailey dad told me that your comming on Oprah with us tomorrow its gonna be great

Hailey: *Turns Pail* Oh yeah great fun


What do you think? Sorry it took so long to write this chapter I have been heaps busy lately

3 comments

mollzy_23
07-27-2008, 03:49 PM
It was great.
:)
Keep it up!

Curly
07-28-2008, 04:10 PM
Keep going. you're awsome.

WiLDoNE0457
07-28-2008, 05:56 PM
you're awesome, keep going

Khockeygrl4
07-28-2008, 06:39 PM
more more more and more!!!!!! :)

megz
07-30-2008, 01:34 AM
sorry i haven't posted more I am actually really sick just got back from hospital for the 2nd time and prob will have to go back again I'll post more as soon as I get better.
Once again sorry

mollzy_23
07-30-2008, 02:36 AM
It is alright.
Just get better. :)

megz
08-02-2008, 05:40 AM
I should hopefully post more tomorrow i am a bit tired now and still a bit sick
i got food poisoning, well actually my sister got it and gave it to me but it hit me really bad.
sorry its been taking so long

megz
08-03-2008, 10:06 AM
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o280/megzpoo/Untitled-10.jpg


Robbie Ray: GIRLS HURRY UP WERE GONNA BE LATE!

Hannah: Comming daddy

Lola: Oh were going to meet oprah how exciting *Jumps up and down

Sarah: Yeah, Exciting thats one way to put it

Lola: I thought you loved Oprah, didn't you like always watch it?

Sarah: Thats it, I love her I can't meet here you remember when I met Hannah Montana well Oprah is gonna be 1000000x's worse

Hannah: Don't worry you'll be fine

*The girls head outside to the limo*

Sarah: I sure hope so.

*In the dressing room*

Sarah: Oh God its happening, I can't do it maybe I'll just stay backstage with Lola or.. Lola go on as me

Lola: No I'm no pop star what if they ask me to sing!? I stink at singing

Robbie: Its true you know

Lola: Hey!

*Mikayla walks in*

Hannah: Oh great, Mikayla what do you want?

Mikayla: Oh I'd just thought I'd say hi *Turns around and see's Sarah* Oh uhmm gotta run

Hannah: HaHa she is really scared of Sarah

Sarah: I know! isn't it great!

*Knock on the door*


Hannah: Who is it?

Oprah: Oprah

Sarah: Oh my gosh! *runs into bathroom to hide*

Hannah: Uhh come in

Oprah: Hannah so great to finally meet you

Hannah: You to, I am a big fan, but not as big as my sister Sarah she can't wait to meet you

Lola: But she is so nervous!

Hannah: *Elbows Lola* Yeah well aren't we all

Oprah: So where is Sarah?

Hannah: Oh she is just freshening up in the bathroom she shouldn't be to long, SARAH SOMEONE IS HERE TO SEE YOU!

Sarah: Uhh JUST A MINUTE HANNAH! i can't believe I am doing this! *Walks out*

Oprah: Hello Sarah

Sarah: *Freezes*

Lola: Excuse her this is her first time meeting a celebrity *Elbows Sarah*

Sarah: Uhh Sorry, Hey Oprah so good to finally meet you! I am a huge fan!

Oprah: So I've heard, Look don't be afraid out there I know this is your first interview but thats why your sister is here to help you out.

Sarah: Uhmm yeah I know thanks.

Oprah: Sorry but I have to run and say hi to Mikayla before the show, see you soon

Hannah: Bye, say hi to Mikayla for us

Lola: I just got an idea

Sarah: What is it?

Lola: Well its your first interveiw so there are gonna be things your a bit uncomfortable about talking about, right?

Sarah: yeah

Lola: Well you guys should make a signal if you don't wanna answer it do something and Miley will for you

Hannah: Great Idea! Sarah whenever you want me to answer a question clear your throat

Sarah: Cool, Like this? *Clears throat*

Hannah: Perfect

*Knock on door* Girls your on in 5 start making your way out

Lola: Lets go

Robbie: Come on girls

*They all head back stage*

Oprah: Our next guest is one of your favorite teen pop stars Hannah Montana! and she will be answering all those questions about that mysterious look alike we have seen with her latley. Please welcome Hannah Montana!

Hannah: *Walks on stage, waves to audience* Hey

Oprah: Take a seat

Hannah: Thankyou

Oprah: So Hannah how have you been?

Hannah: Great Thankyou and yourself

*They continue the interveiw*

Backstage

Mikayla: Man I hate her, I have to get off the charts some how

Sarah: Hey you do anything to my sister and you'll wish you were never on the charts

Mikayla: And who are you?

Sarah: (Sarcastically) Sarah Montana, twin of Hannah Montana, also know as the look-a-like girl Hannah has been hanging with, Nice to meet you

(Back on stage)

Oprah: So you really have a twin sister?

Hannah: Yes, and she is actually here today

Oprah: Great! so why don't we bring here out

Hannah: Great Idea, Everyone, Sarah Montana

Sarah: Eek

Robbie and Lola: Goodluck

Sarah: *Walks out, waves*

Hannah: *Gets up with Oprah to welcome her sister*

Oprah: Sarah so good to finally meet you, I have heard so much about you!

Sarah: You too :D


Oprah: So Sarah how come we have never seen you with your sister before this past month

Robbie Ray: Oh god we didn't make up a story I can't look

Sarah: Well I actually didn't want the fame so me and my friend Hailey Stewart

Lola: What is she doing!?

Sarah: went to boarding school together, I wanted to get away from fame and she didn't want to move to Hollywood with her family.

Hannah: It was a big decision, Hailey's sister Miley and her family was moving here and we were also moving here, but the two of them hated that idea.

Oprah: It must have been hard living away from your family for so long, didn't you ever visit?

Sarah: I wanted to, but I knew if I did I wouldn't be able to spend much time with my sister because of all the paparazzi so we stuck to phone calls everyday

Robbie Ray: This story better work!

Oprah: So what made you come here and start up fame?

Sarah: Well I missed my family to much I decided if fame is what I need to be with my family then so be it, I lived here for a few months before Hannah asked me if I could do some singing with her

Oprah: What about your friend Hailey?

Sarah: At first she didn't want to move, so she stayed at school, but after a while I really wanted her to come see us so she came for a holiday here and well she loved it! so she just moved here as well a few weeks ago.

Oprah: And how come we haven't seen her in any of your photo's?

Sarah: Well she doesn't want camera's following her everywhere we go so we hang out at our houses and try to avoid going out, its just like it was a boarding school.

Oprah: I see. Well after the break we will be joined by Mikayla.

*Goes to commercial*

(Backstage)
Robbie: Hailey that is a great story.

Lola: Yeah, But... school is going to be crazy when the summer ends

Hannah: Oh I never thought of that :(

Sarah: Me either

Lola: Oh well, whats the worst that can happen, Its just as bad as Miley dating Jake

Hannah: HEY!

Lola: Sorry but the kids are gonna fight over you guys like they did then but it would have happened anyway

Hannah: You know what! your right! good thinking Lola, and great story sis!

(Commercial ends)
*Hannah and Sarah run back to the couch*

Oprah: Welcome back, and now we would like to welcome to the show another teen pop sensation, MIKAYLA!

*They all get up to welcome her*

Oprah: So Mikayla we have just heard your new single, how does it feel to be up agents some of the greatest artist ever on the charts?

Mikayla: Well...

(The interview continues)

(The show ends)

Lola: Hey Mikayla great show you looked so tensed what was wrong scared of a few blonde pop stars?

Sarah: *laughs* Oh don't worry Mikayla, we don't bite

Hannah: Or do we, *Starts biting the air*

Mikayla: Scared of you guys, In your dreams! *Looks worried*

Sarah: Well dreams can become reality sometimes, maybe this is one of them *Smiles*

Mikayla: *Looks around worried* Just leave me alone!

Lola, Hannah & Sarah: *Laugh

Robbie: Come on girls we have to go

Sarah: coming daddy

*They all head out to the limo

*Miley's phone rings*

Miley: Hey Jake

Jake: Hey Miley, I was wondering do you want to go out tonight I need to ask you something important

Miley: Uhmm Sure, Is everything ok?

Jake: Yeah its a good thing, Just a favor for a few friends thats all

Miley: Ok :)

Jake: Great, I'll come round about 6:30

Miley: Sounds great

Jake: Bye

Miley: Bye

xshawty♥
08-03-2008, 10:55 AM
mooree

mollzy_23
08-03-2008, 09:46 PM
LOVE IT.

Post more when ready.
Hope you feel better.

Khockeygrl4
08-04-2008, 02:43 PM
ahhhhh!!! i luv it sooooo much!!! more pleaz!?!?!?! but only if your feelin ok :).

megz
08-06-2008, 08:28 AM
sorry i haven't updated it yet I'm getting back to school and the work load is huge im shocked how much work I do in just over a week

mollzy_23
08-06-2008, 04:18 PM
Well I hope you update soon!

megz
08-08-2008, 09:23 AM
I will try and update tomorrow =D Saturdays are always boring but right now I am watching the opening of the olympics =)

megz
08-09-2008, 07:02 AM
I just updated the last chapter, so tell me what you think
3 comments to continue

huskerrich
08-09-2008, 01:58 PM
one comment

mollzy_23
08-09-2008, 03:21 PM
Thats good.

Two comments.

Khockeygrl4
08-10-2008, 10:14 PM
Three!!! AMAZING!!!!

megz
08-12-2008, 04:57 AM
ill post more tomorrow hopefully but I have youth group tonight and I missed it to much when I was sick to miss it again.
I shouldn't have any homework tomorrow because I'm going into town for an excursion so unless they give us homework about that I should be posting a good chapter =D

skatergator777
08-12-2008, 11:30 AM
please post more amazing story.

Khockeygrl4
08-12-2008, 06:52 PM
AHHH, i cant wait any longer!!! i luv it soooo much!!!!

megz
08-13-2008, 08:23 AM
sorry I can't post it again today =(
I was just about to start then mum told me off for not doing my assignment so I had to do some of that.
I will try again tomorrow
I miss out on to classes to do workshops for year 9 elective classes so that less homework but I do have an idea
=)

I have decided you can all help =) this is the next chapter
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o280/megzpoo/Untitled-11.jpg?t=1218626193

you can PM me any ideas for this chapter...

What I was thinking is Jake is friends with the Jonas brothers and they want to get more popular so Jake asks Miley if she will go on tour with them

then in the sequel it will be a kinda Niley/Jiley love triangle

so PM me the more PM's I get the sooner the chapter will be finished

and this may just be the last chapter as I have to many Ideas to continue on the story and not have it go on for to long so I will start them in a sequel =D

megz
08-14-2008, 08:55 AM
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o280/megzpoo/Untitled-11.jpg?t=1218626193


Jake: *Knocks on Miley's door*

Miley: *Runs downstairs* Jake! *Opens door and hugs Jake*

Hailey: *Walks downstairs* Hi Jake

Jake: Hi Hailey

Hailey: Where you to off to?

Jake: Well actually I was hoping we could stay here I need to talk to the two of you and its a lot more private here without all my fans

Miley: (Worried) Uhmm sure

Hailey: I'll order pizza :D *Grabs the phone*

Jake: Miley, don't worry its not bad I promise

Miley: Ok Jake *They kiss*

Hailey: Pizza is on its way, so Jake whats up?

*They all site down*

Jake: I need to ask you two a huge favor

Miley: Ok

Jake: Do you know the Jonas Brothers?

Miley: Yeah!

Hailey: I have heard of them but their not that popular are they?

Jake: Well thats the thing, they asked me if I could talk to Hannah and her Sister if they will record a song with them and go on tour with them to get them more popular

Miley: Wow, excuse us for a minute we need to talk this through

*Miley and Hailey go to the kitchen*

Miley: Hailey we have to do this

Hailey: I know the Jonas brothers are so cute, I meen come on Nick Jonas mega hottie

Miley: I know!

Hailey: Miley he is mine you have a boyfriend

Miley: Yeah yeah yeah whatever but should we do this?

Hailey: We have to talk to dad but for now YES!

*They go back and sit down*

Miley: Well we would love to do it! but its really something we need to talk to dad about

Jake: Oh thats great thankyou =)

Miley: Its not a definite yes yet

Jake: I know, but your gonna try and that means a lot to me

Miley: Ohh Jake *They kiss*

*The door bell rings*

Hailey: Thats the pizza! *goes and gets the door*

(Robbie Ray walks in)

Robbie: Hi girls... Hi Jake

Hailey and Miley: Hi daddy

Jake: Hi Mr Stewart

Miley: Daddy...

Robbie Ray: Yes bud?

Miley: Can Hannah and Sarah record a song with the Jonas brothers... And maybe go on tour with them? *Closes eyes scared of what the answer is*

Robbie Ray: Well uhmm

Hailey: Please daddy

Robbie: Well uhh I don't see the harm in it

Miley & Hailey: YES! thankyou!

Jake: This is great thankyou Mr Stewart I have to go tell them!

Miley: Bye Jake

Jake: Bye Miley I love you *They kiss*

(Two weeks later)

(In the Hannah closet)

Hailey: Miley we need the best outfits today where finally going to meet the Jonas Brothers!

Miley: I know Hailey we have to find something perfect!

Lola: *Walks in* I got you girls a present

Miley: Lilly you got dressed early

Lola: I know :P I couldn't resit, But check out these outfits I bought you

Hailey: WOW THERE BEAUTIFUL

Miley: OH MY GOSH THANK YOU!

Hailey: THANK YOU SO MUCH

*The girls run and try on their outfits*

(3 Hours later)

( at a 5 star restaurant- Hannah, Sarah, Lola, Joe, Kevin & Nick)

Kevin: Hannah!

*Hannah, Sarah & Lola turn around*

Lola: (whispers) Oh my gosh its the Jonas brothers!

Hannah: Hii *Her and Sarah Get up to meet the Jonas Brothers)

Hannah: Hi Kevin, Nick and Joe

Sarah: Hey

Kevin & Joe: Hi Hannah and Sarah so great to meet you

Hannah: You too

Nick: *Staring at Hannah*

Sarah: Uhh is your brother all right

Nick: (To Hannah) Your so pretty

Hannah: (Shocked) Uhh Thankyou

(They all sit down and have dinner talk about their song and their tour, with plenty of awkward Hannah Nick Moments during the whole dinner, to be continued to a whole tour of crushes and broken hearts)

THE END!

5 Comments and I will post a trailer for the sequel
remember any ideas PM me =)

huskerrich
08-14-2008, 09:21 AM
nice job, megz, great story.

megz
08-14-2008, 09:22 AM
thanks i could have done a better ending but I just wanted to get it finished to start all over =P

Khockeygrl4
08-14-2008, 09:28 AM
I loved it!!! I cant wait for the sequal!!!

megz
08-14-2008, 09:30 AM
thanks, I will hopefully make the trailer tomorrow because I have to stay home because I have to have my cancer check up

skatergator777
08-14-2008, 12:42 PM
please write more!

megz
08-18-2008, 07:08 AM
the montana sisters 2 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?p=2255551#post2255551)