Sidesplitting

[krrristin]

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Characters:
Eric Gibson (http://nickjonline.com/photos/displayimage.php?pid=21025&fullsize=1)
Jeremy Gibson (http://nickjonline.com/photos/displayimage.php?pid=21051&fullsize=1)
Nicholas Gibson (http://nickjonline.com/photos/displayimage.php?pid=21133&fullsize=1)
Layla McInly (http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t87/beekahsgraphics/blends/gallery/krrristin-fanficbanner-sidesplit-1.jpg)
Maria Sanchez (http://www.selena-fan.com/gallery/displayimage.php?album=76&pos=4)
Kristin Davis (http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee222/so_kristin/001.jpg)
Allison McKewin (http://www.thedragonflyinn.org/gallery/displayimage.php?album=775&pos=3)
Alexa Gill (http://demi-lovato.com/gallery/displayimage.php?album=123&pos=22)
Leslie Keaton (http://emilyosmentfan.com/gallery/displayimage.php?album=222&pos=25)
Adrianne Gillman (http://flickr.com/photos/xosara/2569936240/sizes/l alt=brunette girl) (brunette girl)Introduction:




Layla McInly had two bare feet on the dashboard of her mother’s old convertible, she glanced at the clock: 7:30 am. She sighed, stared into the yellow morning sun, and sunk further into the vinyl seats. The sound of the screeching vinyl made Layla surprisingly feel at ease, she slowly closed her eyes and breathed rhythmically with the ocean waves. It was nice to revisit the salty air of the beach, moving to cold New York was hell on Layla.
She hesitantly opened one eye at the subtle sound of fingers running against the metal of the car; the figure was familiar. She opened the other eye to get a better look, “Do I… do I know you?”
“How could you not you stinker!” the voice rang through out the beach area, “wow some best friend you are.” The person said playfully.
Layla’s body stiffened as she sprung from the seat, she lowered her sunglasses and eyed the visitor. “Germy?!”
“Yes!” Jeremy Gibson nodded embracing his friend with a hug, “Wh-why are you here?”
“Why am I here?” Layla shoved her sun glasses back in place as a smug grin grew on her face, “I’m reliving the past. Why are you here? Why aren’t you in God knows where…”
“You mean New Jersey?”
Layla nodded impatiently awaiting the answer of her long forgotten friend. The last time they had talked was when Jeremy was moving away from New York to ‘the Middle of Nowhere’ (quoted by Jeremy herself) aka: New Jersey.
“The whole family is here!” Jeremy explained, “We moved here when the first album went platinum.”
“Platinum… exciting.” Layla rubbed her chin as if she were solving some perplexing algebraic equation, “Now explain to me why you are at the boardwalk... I thought you hated the beach.”
Jeremy hopped into the passenger seat, his jeans making the familiar screech that Layla loved. In fact, Layla laughed at its awkward sound when it had happened. “Just like you, you know…” he shrugged and stared solemnly into the horizon, “Reliving the past.” He looked up at Layla, his eyes pleading for attention. “It’s been one hell of a ride.”





Chapters:
Rekindled (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2062072&postcount=2)
The Bermuda Triangle (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2068340&postcount=28)
Smitten with Vodka (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2079490&postcount=81)
Love-Struck All-stars (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2089697&postcount=135)
Unraveled Stitching (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?p=2098050#post2098050)
How to Deal (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=71945&page=22)
Pages turned & Bridges Burned (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2129562&postcount=325)Gibson:
So I guess you're wondering... why does Gibson look like the Jonas Brothers? Well, in this fanfiction the Jonas Brothers are non existant. Scary I know... but these adorable group of brothers have way different morals than that of JB.
They are still playful and fun, but their personalities are different.

Reader Beware: I might think of adding some real-life teenage drama. Which means: some adult content. Nothing gross, just lauguage, etc.

PG - 13

***Banner by Beekah

[krrristin]

Chapter One: Rekindled

Note: I like random chapter names... especially when they are irrevelent to the chapter itself.
ohh! And the chapters are kinda short... long ones put me under enormous stress (;

It had been 2 years, 5 months, and two days since Layla last saw Jeremy.
She’d been keeping track of everyday that’d gone by since the airport scene:
Jeremy pulled his luggage from the Taxi, “So this is goodbye?” He looked at Layla concerned. She had her hands crossed,
and weight shifted to one side. Stray pieces of hair covered her watering eyes. “Poor baby gonna cry?” Jeremy said playfully. “Oh c’mon Lay… You know I’ll come back!”
“When?” Layla demanded, her voice booming with anger, “When you’re rock star dreams crash and burn?” Layla hissed still staring at
her feet. She watched the snow fall slowly around her converse and the fluff on her scarf move with the wind.
“Woah Layla… that was a bit harsh… even by my standards.”
“Whatever…” she said rolling her eyes, “I’ll go say bye to your family… wish them good luck with the future debt they’ll be paying with your ‘dream’”
Jeremy watched as she walked away, they’d be walking the same way…
but being around an angry Layla was a bad idea. He trailed behind, watching as she kissed the cheeks of his brothers, and hugged his parents.
Then she turned to him, “See you soon?” she asked, for the first time that day she stared him in the eye.
Jeremy let out a sigh of relief, “Yeah… POUND IIIT!”
Layla rolled her eyes, and held her hand out in the shape of a fist. “Sure.”

---back to real life---

“Layla, red light!” Jeremy yelled as he clinged to the vinyl seats.
Layla woke up from her trance, “Oh ****!” she slammed on the brakes and looked at Jeremy, who’s face had all traces of blood drained from it.
“You’re soooo lucky.” He said narrowing his eyes, “Kill a rock star and you’ll be
killed by angry fans.” He flashed her a smile.
“Speaking of that…” Layla said pressing lightly on the gas once the light turned green, “I can’t believe that happened… I mean how fast!”
“Yeah…”
“I hate to admit this Germ… but you were right. You did become famous.
Like extremely famous.” She looked at Jeremy quickly before watching the road again; he was staring out the window quietly. An odd sight to see with Jeremy Gibson.
“No Layla, you were right.” Jeremy shifted in his seat, “It was a mistake.”
“What’re you talking about? I mean you’ve gotten everything you
wanted. I thought you always wanted the millions of girls worshiping the ground you walk on…”
Jeremy laughed weakly, “Yeah well that’s before I discovered that everyone’s
crap still stinks.”
“And what’s that supposed to mean?” Layla ran her hands through her blonde hair and made a turn onto the Gibson’s street. She glanced at the directions
written on an old napkin, “You regret it?”
“A little bit”
“Knew it!” Layla laughed, “Told you…”
“Yes, yes… the all power Layla McInly has conquered the world with her psychic powers… oh wait… I meant psycho!”
“Now that’s the Germy I know.” Layla pulled the keys from the car
and hopped out, she thought the classic convertible hop was the coolest thing since Velcro. She dusted her
old jeans off and gave the house a good stare, her jaw dropped in awe. “How could you regret this?” she said pointing to the house, “This… this is a palace!”
“It’s easy.” Jeremy lead her to the front door. “Let me remind you that a lot has changed.”
“Trust me… I’ve noticed.”

[hannahlover2007]

Wow.. that's incredible.. love
the first chapters... awesome..
deffinately post moreee. ;]

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

I luv it more!

[krrristin]

thanks guys ;)

[adolphin]

morE!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

oOo what now!
taking the band names.
I tell you I shall sue you when my book gets out
xD
hahahah maybe not.

ok i gotta read this now
ssssssssssssh

[krrristin]

may I remind you of who thought up that band?

Jeremy and Eric are different in your fanfic and mine thouugh.
Jeremy=Joseph

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Ahhh this is love.
I'm glad you decided to keep the Layla character.
I like her.
And this one seems, for now, to have a less depressing angle then the last one you showed me.

edit:
yeah i noticed that.
I guess i won't sue you because of it xD

[123_abc]

this fanfic is beastt, yo =P
“Kill a rock star and you’ll be
killed by angry fans.” aha
truee dat Jeremy.

MORE.MORE.MORE.

[niiro_tatsu]

i love this kristin

ur stuff always rocks!

[HighSchoolMusicaaal]

love it! (:
moree !

[mileyboo897]

i told you i'd read it, kristen.
(:
haha. funny you call him germy.
i have a friend names jeremy and i've called him that for ages.
more, though.
it's...fantastilistic, as joe would say.

[Cheerleader111]

ohmygoshh another kristin ff!
your writing talent lives on kris O: you're still
amazing :P post more!

that was so amazing, haha i loved that
"POUND ITT!" xD

[PursePrincess4eva]

KICK!
I <3 it.
more!

[123_abc]

come on gal :] post
nowwww.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

You know what I want to know?
WHY ISN'T THERE MORE!

[niiro_tatsu]

You know what I want to know?
WHY ISN'T THERE MORE!
im asking teh same question....

[Cutiegril123]

i lovee it,
kristin your such and amazing writer,
moree

[Cheerleader111]

You know what I want to know?
WHY ISN'T THERE MORE!

O: tisk tisk tisk;
i was just thinking the same thing alli :P

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

HA!
I am not alone!
-hits sticks together-
here Kristinnnnnnnnnn
time to write more!

[123_abc]

ahaha niiicee allison.
come on tin tin..or else
i'm gonna kick your
butttttttt. chyeahh what
noww.

[PursePrincess4eva]

Kick, im with leslie.
you betta write more :P

now, POUND IT!

[krrristin]

ok lol. after summer school tomorrow. til then, i have to get off... this weekend has been busy.

[PursePrincess4eva]

kick has to get off?
KICK HAS TO GET OFF?
without pounding it and giving me a chapter?

yeah you officially hate me so much, that you would do this to me :P

[123_abc]

ughh finee, tin tin.
xD geez.

[krrristin]

writing :)

[krrristin]

Chapter Two: the Bermuda Triangle

Allison stumbled out of a bathroom holding a plunger in one hand and a toilet cleaner in the other.



“Can anyone go to the bathroom in this place without clogging it?!” she fanned the air around her face and dropped the cleaning utensils. “I don’t get paid enough for this job…” Allison mumbled as she peeled her gloves off. She’d been working at that specific house for over a week now, and today was the day that she would receive her first check.


Leslie walked into the entryway, which was right across the bathroom, wearing a breathing mask and carrying a bottle of spray, “Is it safe now?” she said noticing Allison was out of the bathroom.


“You were here the whole time; with the breathing mask?!” Allison screamed and she pulled the mask off her best friend. “I’ve been slaving over a toilet while you sit in the living room with Lysol and a mask?!”


Leslie backed away slowly, she and Allison shared the job along with the check… and she knew this minor incident would be deducted from her half, “I was running late…” she lied, “so I came in… and it smelt. Sooo I grabbed the spare mask.”


“Spare mask?” Allison’s eye started to twitch and her fists started to tighten.


“Y-yeah? I hid it just incase I was assigned bathroom duties.”


Allison leaped forward, “Leslie Marie Keaton you are so dead.”


Too bad Allison was the one about to feel some pain… why you ask? Just as Allison’s fingertips reached Leslie hair, the front door swung open.


An overweight man walked in the house looking eerily similar to the neighbor of the Hannah Montana family. “Who’s ready to get paid?” He asked merrily as he waved two envelopes. He noticed one employee missing, “Leslie, where’s your friend Allison?”


Leslie smiled nervously and pointed to the door, their employer shut the door only to discover Allison whimpering behind the door holding onto her nose.


“Tsk tsk tsk…” The fat man said shaking his head, “Allison, why aren’t you cleaning?”


Allison looked up, her eyes now slits, as she glared at both Leslie (who was biting nervously at her nails) and her boss.


“Allison,” the boss started, “That’ll be a deduction…”


Allisons draw dropped, “What? How much?!”


The man smiled, “See that’s what I wanted to talk to you two about… you see I’ve made some deductions to both your final checks. You both watch TV in my house… deduction. You both leave cleaning things around… deduction… and my potato chips have gone missing… I blame you…deduction.”


“Maybe you shouldn’t be eating potato chips.” Leslie mumbled under her breath.


The fat guy turned her way, his sausage pointer finger facing her, “DEDUCTION!” his frowned soon faded as he left the girls with one last goodbye, “Well your final check is… 2 dollars and 95 cents.”


xxx


“Allison are you okay?” Leslie asked staring at her stinky friend.


Allison broke out into another round of hysterical laughter, “Haha! Two dollars… want to know what I can buy for two dollars?”


“If your lucky chips?”


“YEAH!” Allison burst into laughter again, somewhat traumatized from the situation… or so we think.


Leslie rolled her eyes, ignoring her temporarily insane friend. She opened a newspaper that they stole from their former employer’s house. Leslie scanned the pages for job openings.


“How about this Al: it says animal caretaker… Isn’t that cool? And easy?” she read on, “Oh never mind… that’s the zoo… and it involves shoveling crap… you’re favorite job Allison!” Leslie peeked over at Allison from the pages… Allison seemed to be returning to normal, but she didn’t get the joke.


“Ok how about this… it’s about a couple houses down from yours. They’re asking for a baby sitter.”


Allison looked over, “Does it involve fecal matter of some sort?”


“Kids toilet trained…”


“Then let’s head over.” Allison said now sounding normal; she pulled the steering wheel to the left and headed down the street. “What number?”


“Huh?”


“What house number?” Allison repeated now irked.


“Oh! Um… 9334.”


“Thank you!” Allison said now pulling over at the exact house. She glanced at a classic convertible and then back at the mansion. “Rich part of the street.” She said to Leslie who was now jumping out of the car.


Allison followed, walking slowly… making her way to the massive door.


“Hey Allison,” Leslie said pointing to the door, “This thing is bigger than your house!”


“I noticed.” Allison smiled ringing the door bell, she saw a couple characters scrambling toward the door from a frosted glass window.


The door opened quickly, a roar of cheers and laughter blasted from the house and Leslie and Allison stepped back, their purses drooping.


“Oh my gosh!” Leslie screamed, her shaking fingers pointing at the guy in the doorway, “I’m going to be babysitting Nicholas Gibson?!”


Nick laughed lightly, “Ok no need to introduce myself; you guys are?”


Eric walked over to the door, “fans?”


Allison, struggling to keep her dignity, smiled, “We’re babysitters.”

[krrristin]

haha your classic unlikely Jonas like meeting.

dgaf.

more realistic shizz to come.

[PursePrincess4eva]

hahaha.

“Maybe you shouldn’t be eating potato chips.” Leslie mumbled under her breath.

^ that made me laugh, kick.

MORE!
or i shall hurt someone :P

[krrristin]

I'm SO scared.

pshh

naht.

[krrristin]

Lesliiiiie is viewing:o

Ok guys.

I PROMISE
to make things more realistic from here on out ;)

[123_abc]

haha girlfriend, that chapter was pretty darn
hilarous. ahah =P $2.95?! youu have got to
be kidding me fat mann..rawrr. ahah
lysol=lovee (:
“Oh never mind… that’s the zoo… and it involves shoveling crap… you’re favorite job Allison."

^_^ ahaha.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

geee i realized how much i love my job at Schlotskyz's now.
Thank you for that Kristin xD

Haha i love it,
I laughed... well I didn't cry, but I feel like that is how the saying is supposed to go!
Masness

[munchkingirl822969]

omg write more!!!

This is soo good!!
Pretty funny

[Cutiegril123]

haha, i lovee it!
more

[Cheerleader111]

ohmygoshh, kristin
that chapter was pretty darned
funny :P i laughed[: & i loved it.

oh goshh, that man ripped you
guys off allison & leslie :P

[123_abc]

pshh i know right lex?! xP
rawrr

[niiro_tatsu]

haha awesome kristin

i forgot that there was no jb so i was like "nicholas gibson.. OH YEAH!!!" hah im so stupiod

[krrristin]

ok so the next few chapters... are not lovey dovey.
quite the opposite of what I want for this fanfic. "I love you" crap makes me wanna puke, crappy fanfics.
So Reader beware: Rockstars use drugs, I plan to incoperate that.
darnnn i cant spell.

[Cheerleader111]

gibson uses drugs? O:
oh noww i have to read[: writeee[:

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahaha Leslie, i vote we hunt that guy down and take him out.
He was a jerk xD

oOo Gibson on drugs?
wow.
interesante.
and i know you can't spell

[123_abc]

haha kristin youu amuse mexP

and allison i'm with you girliee,
pshh $2.59?! seriously, we cleaned
his house and that's all we gett?!
geez.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

I know!
It's on strange jerk man.
We know where you live xD

Kristin that should be in the ff!
Leslie and I taking out the guy...or tping his house.

[Cheerleader111]

allison, you are SO violent! O:
now you want to take out people!? :P

[niiro_tatsu]

YESSSS no traditional FFs... ive been looking for a new FF that wasnt cliche...

so drugs... this'll be interesting!

POST

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

ok...so Jenny is into drugs.
wow.
I will try to remember that at the party in dallas

[123_abc]

ahaha you guys are funny. xD

and yeahh we so know where you
live old man, so watchh out.
psssst let's bring some banana
peels allison.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahaha definetly Leslie.
I have a stash prepared.

MORE KICK!

[niiro_tatsu]

bahah yes allison iwill go to a JONAS BROTHERS concert.. high.. on drugs... and to a team jonas party... DEFINITELY!

PSH HECK NO!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahahaha wow.
That's how Jonas fans roll xD
Team Jonas members always have the best stuff

[niiro_tatsu]

kristin is a poo head

[niiro_tatsu]

hahahahaha wow.
That's how Jonas fans roll xD
Team Jonas members always have the best stuffhaha HECK YEAHHHHH

dont worry ill be clean when i see u in dallas!!!! :P

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

well yes, that sums up Kristin in two words.

hahahaha thats good.
Then i will be able to know the real you, not the high you

[niiro_tatsu]

bahaha yes.. shes not posting till "manana" as she said


hah THIS IS REAL, THIS IS ME! IM EXACT WHERE IM SUPPOSED TO BE (yup im supposed to be at the jb concert :P)

hah im NEVER high... so u donthave to worry

[lucyinthesky]

ooh, this is gooood
write more (:

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Jenny...that is what they all say.
Just admit you have a problem, that is the first step.

Blah, tomorrow...so far away!

[krrristin]

haha i love reading your comments guys.
you all make me laugh.

But nothing like overly done and fake, I'll try to slowly add in Gibson's problems towards the middle/ climax. I guess at this certain begining stages I have to work in foreshadowing and bad habbits. aka: twitches, walking around with whiskey bottles... the works. jk :P

[niiro_tatsu]

ahhh cant wait!

ahhh allison do u have Disney on Demand too? me too isaw camp rock at 6:50 this morning man IT WAS AWESOME!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

I seriously hate you Jenny.
NO!
I don't have it!
=[
Sadness.
But my sister and I did go over to Walmart at 8am in our pjs to get the soundtrack xD


Post more kristinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Wait walking around with whiskey bottles?
wow theres a mental image I didn't expect

[krrristin]

i was joking.

sorry guys I had a 5 hour nap today, so tomorrow... i promise. actually Lex helps me learn how to write fanfics decently :P

[123_abc]

5 hour nap?!
geez kristin.
xP

[Cheerleader111]

oh goshh kristin
don't get me started on how
amazing your writing is :P
& 5 hours? there goes a whole
day right there xD

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

5 hours?
seriously?
Wow that is one intense nap!

[munchkingirl822969]

oh I've done that before.
sleeping for a long time like that.
It sucks waking up.
dang.....I was looking forward to another chapter today. =<

[123_abc]

haha intensee is right allison.
come on kick, we're waitingg.

[lucyinthesky]

ooh mooreee i cant wait (:

[krrristin]

Ok lemme PM Lex. ;)

[123_abc]

goshh finee, i am running out of
patience here missy..
:P ahah jkjk.

[krrristin]

well you're kinda in luck.
i sent her the beginig of Chapter 3. (:
so the rest is bound to appear sometime

[123_abc]

woohoo :D

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

come onnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn kristin!
Mas =]

[krrristin]

Lex hasnt messaged me back ):

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o
no!
Ok Lex is going downnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

[lucyinthesky]

come on lex!! =]

[krrristin]

Where is Lex? I need her feedback ASAP!

[123_abc]

lex, wheree are you?! come out, come
out, wherever you aree.
aha

[krrristin]

Hmm maybe Allisons way will help :P
*bangs sticks together*
Heeeeeeere Lex.
Heeere lexie lexie lexie

[x3Meghan ily]

omg, i love this.
moree : DD

[krrristin]

gracias....

I'll post the begining..

[krrristin]

Chapter 3: Smitten with Vodkah

Deborah Gibson, the mother of the Gibson boys, was not what Allison and Leslie expected.

For a woman who produced such amazing specimens, she herself was probably the least attractive mom.. or make that woman... on earth. She was a tall, lean woman, her straight blonde hair was pressed against her face, and she sat across a large table ready to interigate the 'babysitters'.

Her surgically lifted eyes had smudged black eyeliner all around them. She looked like a racoon, infact those same creepy eyes were used to stare deeply into the souls of Allison and Leslie.

Deborah, who insisted that they NOT call her Debbie, held a skinny cigarette between two of her equally skinny fingers. In her other hand was a half empty bottle of Vodka.

Leslie glanced around the large diningroom, Layla, Jeremy and Nick eyed the bottle of Vodka, their mouths practically drooling. Leslie was turned off, slightly.
She then looked at Eric, who was facing the window outside...Leslie just assumed he didnt want to look at the monster they called a mother.
Deborah pressed the cigarette against her lips, and let out a stream of smoke...
"So girls," Debbie smiled, "What are your names?"

Leslie had never been more intimidated in her entire life.
She watched as Deborah's eyebrow started to rise and right corner of her lips lift.
Crap! Debbie was enjoying this.
In a moment of panic she nudged Allison, urging her to speak first.

"Hi!" Allison squeaked practically leaping from her seat, she rubbed the area of her arm where Leslie elbow had just bruised, "I'm Allison... and this is my friend Leslie."
She pointed to Leslie, her 'friend'. She so wanted to wring her neck.
First, Leslie had deprived her of useful pay check (which reminded her... she was planning on TPing fat mans house that night)
and secondly, she had just bruised her arm... and it was throbbing!

Debbie sucked at the filter of the cigarette, "Dahlings now... do you have expirience? Any? Any at all?"

Allison looked at Leslie, waiting for her to respond. But no such luck, Leslie was busing herself examing every facial flaw and every bit of plastic and collagen on Debs face.
She knew it would take away until she was done.

Allison straightend her back, trying to appear as bussinessy as possible while trying to distract the wandering eyes from ditsy Leslie.

"Yes, tons!" Allison smiled. "Infact, if you didn't know... I actually live several... ok a lot houses down from you. I babysit all my neighbors kids." Her voice trailed off noticing Deborah yawm and stab the cigarette into an astray.

Deborah looked at Layla, her right hand gal, and Layla nodded.
The blonde beauty turned toward the girls, ready to speak to them for the first time.
"You two have got the job." Layla smiled. She secretly just wanted some female friends, and since Gibson was nowhere near being normal she knew she it would only be a matter of time before she was annoyed with their life. And that was the only reason she agreed the girls were perfect for the job, if the choice had been left to Debbie, the girls would've been out the door a long time ago.

Debbie nodded, "Alright then. It's a done deal. You're hired."

[krrristin]

^^ just the begining more to come

[123_abc]

mmhmm finally! :P ahaha.
oh boyyy, wow..that should
be funn, ahaha interesting
womann. hmm.
xP

[munchkingirl822969]

oh wow. I'd be scared but excited at the same time.
Being the baby-sitter of those guys'(exciting).
but being around debbie(frightening).
but so good.
more?

[PursePrincess4eva]

egggh. she's scary!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

ok i can't decide if i like her or fat chip eating guy better.
Well if I get payed more than 2.50 I will like it more xD

more =]

[( soulmates )]

This is good, Kristin.
I like it. =D

[krrristin]

YAY Adri commented
i feel special :P

[( soulmates )]

Wha-huh?
Of course I commented! Its pimptasmangorical!

[krrristin]

Wow... i couldnt even pronounce that lol.

Drew, you're funny.

[krrristin]

Attention: I need uno more character for this fanfiction. Whoever wants it, just post a picture of whoever they want to look like annnnd The name (:

[( soulmates )]

ME ME ME!
Hold on a second.

Okay so I'd LIKE to look like the brunette girl (http://flickr.com/photos/xosara/2569936240/sizes/l/). If you need another picture, just let me know.
My name I guess could be Adrianne Gillman?

That is, if you'd LIKE me.

[MileyFan_4_Ever]

Kristin, You're Such A Great Writer!
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE
Do Me A Favor! Don't Abandon It!
I Beg Of You, Please!
OH! And Post More =D

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Yes i second the no abandoning and writing more part!

[krrristin]

YAY Adri, ok I'll add you in when I edit this chapter. You'll be with Lex (:
I'll try not to abandon it. Prolly wont, because this is the first fanfic I wrote that wont make me sick with their happiness :P

Im a naturally depressed person, so I'll clique with these. :P

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahahaha wow.
Sick with happiness.
interesting...

[krrristin]

im a naturally intresting person aswell :P

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Oh I have noticed Kristin, it is quite obvious

[lucyinthesky]

haha, i'd be so freaked if i had to sit in a room with that lady
mooreee (:

[MileyFan_4_Ever]

haha Well, As Long As You Don't Abandon It.
This Is Like, Amazing =D My Favorite!
Now Post More Now haha

[krrristin]

thanks mufassa (:

[MileyFan_4_Ever]

No Problem =D Now Please Post More! lol

[123_abc]

POST.POST.POST.
[: get itz?

[niiro_tatsu]

post more kristin!!!

[Cheerleader111]

oh god kristin, how do you write so good?
it's truly magnificentoo[: i loved that chapter,
i think it was the....second funniest cause the
second one was pretty darnned funny :P
ohkay, i'm ranting, but POST MORE! that was soo
good[:

[MileyRox1174]

I just read all the chapters...it's amazing, more!

[munchkingirl822969]

any more chapters coming up??

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Ahhh Kristin.
How do I make this simple for you?
You write more...or I stop writing Underdog
The longer you wait...the longer it takes me to finish xD
WRITE!
=]

[123_abc]

oooooh. *insert intense music heree*

[krrristin]

haha guys
sorry. Still trying to figure out how to add Lex and Adri into the next chapter.
also want to add the word "badass." and maybe "fuhk" into the chap

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahahaha ohhh kristin you make me laugh.
Good luck working everything in!
I'm sure it will be amazing =]

[( soulmates )]

You don't have to add me if its a hassle.
I don't really care :P

I just want you to POST.

[krrristin]

No adri... I NEED you in this.
:04:

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

pssh stop commenting your own ff and WRITE!

[krrristin]

Not until Lex helps meeeee *crosses arms(

H
A
S
T
A

hasta la vista

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

pfft. FINE!
I will just sit here and stare aimlessly.

[krrristin]

sounds like funnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

oh it is

[123_abc]

ahaha geekettes[;

tick tock, tick tock.

[krrristin]

I got an idea!!!!!

[123_abc]

idea?! heckk yeshh. woohoo.

[krrristin]

in involves sneakers, pools, angry managers, and wet people.

[123_abc]

ooooh sounds beastlyy :P ahaha.
pshh sneakers huh?! niicee.

[krrristin]

grrrrrrrrrrrr.
how should I start it out.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

sneakernight what?
xD

[Cutiegril123]

no chapter is complete with out sneakers.

that reminds me of hudgens song

"basically what were gonna do is dance."

[niiro_tatsu]

gahhh write moreeee

[krrristin]

i'd totally be writing right now
vut cramps prevent me from being in the zone

[niiro_tatsu]

STUPID GIRL ISSUES!!!!!!!!!

ok fine then1

[123_abc]

awww poo :[

[( soulmates )]

That makes me sad inside

[krrristin]

if it helps, i got the begining done before pain set in :P

[123_abc]

ohh yeshh; that helps..a lot. :P

[krrristin]

next chapter isnt so good.
I rushed through it and might edit it manana.

YAY ADVIL!

[krrristin]

5 days later.

Adrianne Gillman sat on a dirty street corner on, staring at her one way ticket into a more perfect life. Although the idea seems naive to you, at the moment Adri was convinced that the very thing standing 20 feet from her would throw her into the arms of the boy she was madly in love with.

She stared longingly at a thrift store mirror, at a pair of old green converse. They were perfect.


You see… Adri loved Gary McDowell. And Gary McDowell was a boy who loved his converse. Loved them. He had about every pair that was sold in his lifetime, and placed each and everyone neatly on a shelf on his wall… those beautifully beaten up shoes were the only things Gary was missing from his treasure.


Adrianne imagined herself walking into the school, perfectly and coolly. She imagined Gary Marshall running up to her and confessing his love for her, because of course… her shoes had hypnotized him. She imagined the pink popular crowd and their drooping purses staring in awe that the guy they fought violently for, fell in love with the perfect girl. Her.


If only she’d realized sooner how cheesy and unrealistic her story was.


Alex Gill ran up to her long time friend, and shook Adri out of her trance. “Is there something I’m missing?” Alex (aka: Lex) asked as she helped pull Adri to her feet. “I really don’t see anything worth looking at.”

Adri rolled her eyes; Lex just didn’t have the same vision. “I do. And we’re gonna go get it…” she smiled and led Lex to the store…. As they walked through a glass door, Lex’s eyes lit up as she too spotted the shoes.

“Oh those are so cute!” she squealed, making her way towards them. “I so need them.”


Adri laughed lightly and followed after her quickly, making sure Lex didn’t get too attached. “So do I.”

Lex looked up, “You called me over to East LA to get a pair of shoes? You could’ve gone to Target…” Lex rolled her eyes.

“Yeah, but those new ones… everyone has… these have… Character.”


“Character?”

“Character.” Adri nodded, content with her answer. “And I need these to land the boy.”

“How are a pair of shoes going to get you a boyfriend?”

Although the question ‘How are a pair of shoes going to get you a boyfriend’ entered Adri’s mind numerous times, it just now hit her that her daydream was simply and completely fantasy.


She frowned, knowing the only thing Gary would do when he saw the shoes was look at them.


“So, are you going to get them?” Lex asked, interrupting yet another thinking process.


“Yeah.” Adri replied reluctantly, her mind was already made up.


Lex picked beaten up shoes and handed them to Adri, “Take ‘em. Is that all now?”

Adri nodded.


“Fine, I’ll meet you at the cash register just incase you want anything else, kay?” She walked away without waiting for a response.


Adri rolled her eyes, “Whatevah,” and dug her hands into her pocket searching for her wallet.


She switched hands and switched pockets, both of which were empty. She’d left her wallet at home while she was rushing out to get to the store. Dammet.


Without thinking Adri pulled the shoes into her jacket, and looked around to make sure no one saw. Clear.

She walked over to the door cautiously, “Lex… psst Lex!” Adri whispered impatiently. She waved her over, “Let’s go.”


Lex followed, “What about the shoes?”


“We’ll talk about that later…”


“Why?”


“Can you just be quiet? For the time being… please.” She rolled her eyes and walked briskly out the door and down the street. Finally, as they reached the corner she let out a sigh of relief.


“Promise you won’t hate me?” she asked Lex. Her stomach and turning, and as every second went by she become more nauseous.


“And why would I hate you?”


“Be-because.” Adri looked at her feet for a second feeling guilty, “I took ‘em.”

“You took what?” Lex frowned, not liking where the conversation was going. Her voice became even more serious. “What did you do?”

“I stole them. I stole the shoes.”


Lex’s eye grew, “Are you serious? Adri, are you really that dumb? You’ve never done that before.”


“I know.” Adri said taking the shoes from inside her jacket, “I just needed them. Or thought I did.”


As Lex reached her hands out to grab ahold of the shoes a voice called from behind them; a balding man with a beer belly started running to them. “You dirty rotten kids… You stole from my store.” Apparently, that was the owner of the store and apparently the two of them were in big trouble.


“Fuhk!” Lex screamed. She broke out into a mad dash heading into the suburban part of town.


Adri followed and after a few seconds caught up, only to be greeted by nags.


“You just had to try and be badass?” Lex asked almost out of breath, she was still racing to the houses, the man not far behind.


“I told you I was sorry.”


“Sneakers? An ugly, not to mention used pair of sneakers?!”


“I told you I was-“


“Turn here.” Lex said grabbing her friends arm as the turned a corner. They finally reached the houses. And were finally gaining some space between the owner of the store and themselves.


“Adri I can’t believe you right now…”


Adri rolled her eyes, “I really don’t need this at the moment! I’m a tad preoccupied.”


Lex rolled her eyes, pulling Adri once more… but this time into an open gate. It led into a well landscaped backyard, and a huge backyard at that. Complete with a pool and gazebo.


Adri and Lex turned to check behind him, “Did we lose him?” Lex asked still running.


“Yes. Thankfully.”


Adri turned forward, “Oh sh-“.


Splash.

Adri and Lex fell headfirst into the massive pool.


The two of them popped up, gasping for air at the same time.


“Adrianne Gillman. I hate you!” Lex screamed ready to drown her friend.

“Ahem!” a different voice called. It was the home owner, who was just entering the backyard from the house. “Do you guys need a towel or something?” he said slightly chuckling.


“Adrianne Gilman. I love you!” Lex squealed realizing the home owner was none other than Eric Gibson.
The sneakers floated away from Adri's hand and landed at the bottom of the pool.
They remained there for the three months.

[PursePrincess4eva]

lol. XD I loved that.
more!

[( soulmates )]

Haha wow!
I love ittt!

There is no need for editing! :D

[123_abc]

OMJ! I love it[: It was funnayy.
Ahaha. “Adrianne Gilman. I love you!”
that made me laughh.

[krrristin]

HAha thanks guys. (:

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahah the sneakers lived there for 3 months?
really?
interesante.

[123_abc]

ahahaha xP i lovee that word.
interesante..interesante..interesante.
woohoo

[munchkingirl822969]

ooooo awesome. more?

[Cutiegril123]

haha that was good
more

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahaha thanks Leslie xD

[123_abc]

haha (: you're welcomee.
that word is seriously stuck in
my head. but anyways; enough
about interesante.

ahahaha. kristin..were
waitinggggggg.

[krrristin]

waiting for what?
a chapter? sadly my friends, you are mistaken.
none tonight. MAYBE manana. til then I will PM
Allison for FF questions.

[123_abc]

ohhh no; we're waiting for nick jonas to
turn 45 so he could run for
president. pshh; ahaha.

haha and okayy finee :P

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

I'm sry, I dont speak Spanish. So I'm guessing mañana means today. :P

[krrristin]

You mean 35 right Leslie :P

haha manana means tomorrow. I only know like a little bit of spanish, spanish class is el hard :P

[123_abc]

uhmm; yess..35..:O oh boyy,
now i feel stupid..and blonde-ishh.
eeeek.

ahaha.

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

I was joking I knew that^
I hate spanish but I'm being forced to learn it by me madre & padre

[krrristin]

Im being forced to learn by the state of california... its so lame.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahah i'm sorry.
i chose spanish over French and Japanese

[niiro_tatsu]

WRITE MORE KRISTiNNNN

[lucyinthesky]

hahhaaa priceless x]
moooahh

[krrristin]

im stuck... grah.
after a couple chapters with these people, I plan on adding dos more characters. ;)

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

okey dokey

[krrristin]

can someone PM me and help me... im in velcro guys! super glue!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

-sigh-
fine........
xD

[Cheerleader111]

O: kristin...that chapter turned out sooo good!
i loved it! i laughed so much[: omg i think that was my
favorite chapter so far :P hehe post more...when you're unstuck[:

[krrristin]

Character lists updated. (allison and lex I changed your people)
added Kristin (moi) and selena.

So basically I guess Layla is the preppy druggie
and Kristin is the edgy pure kid. HAH! (that's why I picked Willa Holland, she's not preppy. Cause Im not preppy :P)

[lucyinthesky]

i love willa holland, shes so pertty =]
are you unstuck yet?

[krrristin]

totally (:

allisom is a super hero

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

what about my people...person?

hahahah thanks,
i try.
=]
I seem to be good at helping other people come up with ideas...

[krrristin]

POV: Nicholas Gibson: 1:09 pm and counting

There were an odd sequence of events that followed Layla’s coming, whether they were purely
coincidence are deviously planned is unknown. I assumed that these “happenings” were just one
way of God foreshadowing my future… our future… this family’s future. Seeing them just made
me realize how my future was going to be… bleak.
I allowed my hand to go deeper into the pool, grabbing the other hand of a girl by the name of
Lex.
I smiled, noticing her expression; it was full of pain and happiness. Not something I’d seen
everyday.
Her pale blue lips moved with her chattering teeth and she began to speak in a stutter like way,
“C-Can I have a towel?” she asked squeezing the water of out her shirt. She attempted to smile but
her shivers had the best of her.
I nodded, doing my best not show that I was being entertained. “Leslie!” I called, not moving a
muscle. (Fame did have its perks… maid service). I stared back at Lex, “So what are you doing in
my pool?” I teased.
She glanced at Adri, who was watching Eric intently as he stumbled around the backyard looking
for a near by towel. He had yet to discover the babysitters could retrieve one for him. Lex looked
back over at me and cocked her head at Adri’s direction, “because of her.” She laughed, he body’s
sudden tremors started to recede. “I owe my life to her.” She smiled again, this time her teeth
stayed in place and her eyes were glued to the ground. Adorable.
“Hey.” I said taking a step closer, “Why don’t we-“
.
“Why don’t you get it yourself…?” A firm voice boomed from behind me. I looked over my
shoulder, slightly annoyed that my dinner plans were ruined before they were announced. Leslie
stood at the opening of the sliding door, with her hands at her hips. She seemed slightly irritated,
her hair, although it was in an up-do (don’t ask me how I know that), was all over her face. I
guessed Franklin, our younger brother, had given her more than a hard time.
.
“You know Leslie,” I started, “The messy look works for you.” I said sarcastically. Oddly enough
though, I meant it.

Her jaw dropped and her nose wrinkled, “Excuse me?” She laughed ever so slightly as she spoke,
not a happy laugh though. “I was hired to baby-sit your younger brother.” She stomped toward
me, “Not you.” She was now inches away from my face, breathing heavily so that the hairs that
covered her face flew with each exhale.
.
She was fired up. Dammet. “Sorry.” I said raising my hands into the air, acknowledging defeat.

“Good.” Her voice cooled and she stepped back. Satisfied with my reaction she started to walk away.

I bit my lip and looked nervously at Lex, “Sorry about that.”
She grinned, “No probelmo. You were just about to ask me something?” She asked… hinting.
“Oh yeah.” My voice broke with uncertainty. I glanced back at where Leslie once stood, “Never
mind.” I walked away to get her a towel. Confusion.
.
Narrator: 1: 14 pm and counting

Adri stared straight ahead, pondering the pros and cons of her current situation. Her body shook
vigorously every time a cold breeze hit her body. At that current moment the con’s seemed to be
more apparent then the pro’s.
.
Adri shook her head, throwing all bits and pieces of hair that clung to her face flying. Her cold wet
clothes were glued to her body… and by Adri’s facial expression you could tell she was enjoying
every minute of it. Not.
.
Eric ran back toward her, running his hands through his curly hair. He was obviously frustrated.
“Sorry dude.” He sighed, “Jeremy’s looking for a towel for you and you’re friend.”
.
“Mm, finally.” Adri said bluntly and quickly. She forced a smile and her body was ached more
with every breeze.
.
Eric walked over to her and stared at her sympathetically, “You okay?” He’d grown accustomed to
people screaming when they saw him. It was an odd sight and feeling to watch someone go from
ecstatic to humiliated so fast.
.
Do I look okay? Adri thought sarcastically, secretly wanting to spazz out and hide in Eric’s jacket.
Sadly, she could not. She had to stand soaking wet, clinging to herself and wait for Jeremy, who
by the way is not the brightest star in the sky, to find a towel. A towel in his own house. Which he
could not find... in his own house. Can someone please explain this to me? “To answer you’re
question,” Adri said, subtly clearing her throat, “No. I’m not okay.” She could go on about all the
reasons as to why she was not okay, but decided to leave that out.
.
Eric bit his lip nervously; it had been a long time since he was in a situation like this. “So…” he
started, trying to turn on the charm, “what’s you’re name?”
.
“Adri.” She said quickly. Her eyes traveled from the redness of Eric’s face to her bare feet.

.
He took a step back, slightly shocked by her response, “Oh. So um… how are you?” he asked,
forgetting that he’d asked that a couple minutes ago.
.
“Cold.” Adri hissed now getting annoyed that there was no towel in site.
.
Finally, Eric let out a sigh. “Fine. You win, I give up.” He watched as Adri looked up at him with a
raised eyebrow. “It wasn’t my fault you fell into my pool.” His voice was firm. “You’re lucky I
didn’t call security.”
.
Adri tilted her head, confused about Eric’s reaction. “All I want is a towel…” her eyes narrowed to
tiny slits. “All you guys can do is call for a nanny to help you?” she said referring to the Nick
situation. “Are you guys really that spoiled if you can’t find textiles in your own house.”
.
Eric straightened his back ready for some action, “Well at least we’re getting you a towel.”
.
This was not Adri’s day. She neither stole nor showed displeasure when someone was trying to
help her out. It was in fact her fault she fell into the pool. But she wasn’t going to say that. ****.
She was out of ideas. “Whatever…” she rolled her eyes and turned away, walking toward Lex…
who too was without a towel.
.
POV: Layla McInly 1:20 pm and counting
.
Although it may seem slightly rude of me, I did see the entire pool fall out. Yes, I watched as the
two girls fell into the pool, when Leslie enchanted Nicholas with her guts, and when Adri and Eric
almost killed each other. Yes, I saw that all.
In fact, I’ve seen Jeremy run up and down the stairs looking for towels.
And, he still hasn’t found them. :0
.
I snickered, watching him stumble down the stairs yet again. “They’re cold. They’re cold!” He
sighed racing to the kitchen. Obviously, dish towels aren’t enough to dry off a human being.
.
Jeremy paused to stare at me for a second, “Can I have a sip? Duuuuuuude, I’m parched.” He said
referring to the whiskey coke I had resting neatly in my hand.
“Gee wiz Germy, ‘parched’ is a pretty big word, especially for you.” I joked handing him thee
alcoholic beverage. He sniffed it, “Oh man this is stanky!” he rolled his eyes and chugged it,
ignoring the taste.
“Same o’ Layla.” He said smacking his lips. He handed the drink back to me, “Oh by the way… do
you know where some towels are? I asked Allison and Leslie but they both said they were hired as
nannies not-“
“Laundry room.” I interrupted him midsentence. Poor thing, I’ve lived here for several days and
already know more than him.
Same o’ Germy.


GRAH! Layla's POV is seriously gay, I was falling asleep so w/e. DGAF.
actually i do care, but I can live with the crappiness.

[MileyRox1174]

Oh can't wait for the rest :P More!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

ahhhhh nice kristin!
i think i may have ti kick you into the zone, like old times

[krrristin]

oh wow that brings back memories!

[adolphin]

moreeeeeeee kristinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
plzzzzzzzzzzzz

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahhaa yes it does!

[Cheerleader111]

that was the most wonderful chapter on the
planet of this earth O:
i'm "adorable" :P hehe i love you kristin[:
post more! omg that made me laugh,
i love leslie :P "why don't you get it yourself!?"

[krrristin]

Bahahah.
you're turn ;)

[lucyinthesky]

lmao
"why dont you get it yourself?"
teehee

[123_abc]

woohoo that was awesomee :]
pshh yeah why don't you get it
yourself, nicholas?! goodness
gracious. ahah. post more, missy.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

still waiting for more miss kristin

[PursePrincess4eva]

hahaha. more. XD

[Cutiegril123]

ah-mazing kristin, more

[123_abc]

come on kristin. pweasee pweasee
pweasee with nick jayy on top?!
:D

[krrristin]

haha hmmm... i'll try and get into the zone.
just for you:P

[123_abc]

awww [: yayy.
*applause applause*

[krrristin]

whatheduck?
...
i can't seem to get in the zone.
lemme eat dinner and i'll try to post the rest of that chappppptier.

[123_abc]

goshh fine,finee.
:P

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahah duck...buck.
ahhh kristin.

[krrristin]

I'm waiting for Lex to post... once she posts, i'll start typing :P

[niiro_tatsu]

write mreee

[123_abc]

arghhh FINEEE.
:P

[( soulmates )]

Methinks you should just post.

[123_abc]

yessir i agree with adri.

[krrristin]

welllll the ball is in Lex's court now :P
I've always wanted to say that lol

[Cheerleader111]

you don't play fair kristin :P

*edit; i posted i posted! :P the ball...
is in your court kristin[:

[krrristin]

Fine, I'll post Adri's POV when I get home... which is in like 30 minutes

[123_abc]

dood, tin tin come on giiiiirl
post post.

[krrristin]

okay sorry, i was at a birthday party :P

[destinydreamer]

kristin, more!

[123_abc]

oooh a birthday partyy huh?!
coolio.

:] kayy now post missy.

[krrristin]

alright alright
no more slacking off, im typing now :P

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

pssh type faster

[123_abc]

woohoo :] the girl is typingg.
can i get an 'amen'?!
xP

[krrristin]

Chapter Updated!
Click HERE (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?p=2098050#post2098050) to read it, beware last POV is suckish.

[krrristin]

Lex, the ball is back in YOUR court ;)

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahaha ahhh kristin
you make me laugh.
drink some dr. pepper... or pepsi {weirdo}
and edit it again if you must.
But it twas good.
I loved it =]

[krrristin]

edit again? hmm umm never.
like i said haha i can live with the shiddeousness of that chapter. :lol:

[Cheerleader111]

kristin, you have now officially made me
hate basketball :P

but wtf is wrong with you!? layla's pov was not gay, and
that...was the funniest chapter ever :P seriously, i couldn't stop
laughing, gosh i love your writing. [: post more kristin! xD

[( soulmates )]

♥
=D

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

wait...what is wrong with basketball?

[krrristin]

the ball being in her court and all :P
thanks for the commento's.

I re-did Layla's POV almost as much as I re-did Adri's. Dudeeees, Adri's POV took me 3 days to do and re-do.
I was liek "screw it! it's shiddeous eitherway."

shiddeous is me favorite word

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

pfft.
Basketball is a good sport.

hahahaha i have noticed you like that word.
WEll if it makes you feel any better, i still find myself editing like the first chapter of Underdog,
and i wrote that how long ago?
like months.

[123_abc]

"so uhm..how are you?" he asked.
"cold.." xP

that was awesomeee. :]
post moreee.

[new_york_girl]

omg update!! just wondering is this where we all are chating now since jbfa has gone deadish?

[krrristin]

fo shizzie.
but atleast on JBAF we can cuss like no other :04:
which makes me happppy

[new_york_girl]

yeah i know! it sucks... i have to put this * for the voules and then i have to type out the concents, so atleast they know what word is being said.

but we made a chat thread out of a fanfic... nice :)

[lucyinthesky]

thats why i love JBAF, its where i vent
hehe

haha shiddeous
:P
moreee!

[new_york_girl]

yeah true... that's where we can speak our minds.

[krrristin]

or you can be like
shet
fuhk
betch

[123_abc]

stop with the cussing missy and
post a chapterrxP . haha

[krrristin]

speaking of chapters.
have you are mimi posted?

[krrristin]

I'm kinda sorta in the zone, and Im on Mick's POV

[krrristin]

How to Deal – Inspired by the movie

Maria Sanchez: 2:45 pm and counting

The seconds of every minute of every hour began to slow tremendously; the world was almost at a
stop. Everything that I thought my whole life, was easily proven wrong in 3 months. The perfect
family, a normal family, and true love were things I thought my family represented well. What
happened? Let’s just say, I am now a cynic of love.
Foolish would be the ideal term to describe marriage and its baggage. People go in expecting to
live the perfect Cinderella story, but fate has other plans. They have kids, buy houses, move… and
suddenly, fate throws them a curve ball. The couple has no say, well they do, they just don’t want
to admit it. It’s the children who are the victims in divorce dramas. They are the ones who have
no say, they just have to deal.
Life seemed to be spinning so fast back then, and now… it just drags on.

I jumped back, feeling a twinge of pain remembering those three fateful months. The once perfect
family, torn apart because of greed… and pants that couldn’t stay zipped.

“Dammet Mimmerz.” a soft voice whispered, “You really need to put that crap in the past.”

I stared up from counter, noticing that I had rubbed the surface of the counter ultimately
removing the varnish or whatever kept it a certain color. A cool white surface peeked from the
dark purple finish that was originally there. Like me, the counters insides were exposed for the
world to see.

Kristin began to snap her fingers impatiently awaiting my response.

“Sorry.” I smiled, finally recognizing my surroundings: Kristin’s family general store, where we both worked.

“You better be,” Kristin joked while rolling her eyes. She continued her job of stacking cans on
shelves, “That counter cost a bundle.”

“Did it really?”

Kristin laughed and shook her head, “No.” she glanced over in my direction briefly and watched
the cans sit on the shelf, “So you wanna talk about it?”

“Talk about what?” I said, returning to my assumed job of polishing the now white speckled
counter top.

Kristin rolled her eyes again. “Miley Cyrus.” She said sarcastically. “You know… your dad and-“

“No.” I said firmly, now putting my weight into the rag and polish.

“I think you need too…” she said, taking note at the purple counter quickly turning white.

“You want to talk?” I asked throwing the rag down. “You want to talk about how my dad had a
midlife crisis and decided to bang a blonde, orange, skinny, silicon and collagen Bimbo? You want
to talk about how my life has suddenly fallen apart, and now my mom is forcing me to move out of
my childhood home because she’s a lonely old hag? You want to talk about how the people I used
to call mom and dad have now officially ruined my life? Do you?” My grip on the counter loosened
as my body began to grow weak.

“Maria?” Kristin made her way toward me; her detailed face became a blur as my tears began to
start to roll down my cheeks.

My voice broke, “You want to talk about-“ my voice trailed off and was quickly replaced with
sobs. I was quickly loosing feeling in my legs, and my in no time, my knees began to buckle. I had
never felt so helpless. Normally, I run to my parents for support… but for the first time they were
the problem. Was there any real way to deal with the situation?
I sunk behind the register counter and held my knees close to me, “What am I suppose to do?”
Kristin crawled near me playing the part of my best friend perfectly, “Nothing. You're gonan have to deal with it.”
She was quickly becoming the backbone I currently need. Finally, being friends with her paid off.
I sniffed, my body began convulse as my cries grew louder. “How?! How is that even physically
possible.” 15 years of my life thrown away could not just be forgiven and forgotten.
Kristin remained quiet. The foggy image of Kristin was distorted, her black eye makeup was the
only way I could tell what direction she was looking. She looked away from me and towards the
window. “I’m so sorry Maria.” Her voice, for once, was serious and sympathetic. “I thought talking about it would be
good.” She too began to tremble, “I wish there was something to make this all better… something… magical?”

Layla McInly: 3:15 pm
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coming soon

Does someone want to be my BFF and help me out with an actual intresting topic to write about for Ms. McInly? I want some drama now.

[123_abc]

aww poor Mariaaaa :[
“You want to talk about how my dad had a
midlife crisis and decided to bang a blonde, orange, skinny
, silicon and collagen Bimbo?"
aww man that made me lol.

[new_york_girl]

[CENTER]Does someone want to be my BFF and help me out with an actual intresting topic to write about for Ms. McInly? I want some drama now.

This might be stupid. But something where Nick is really drunk and tries to go all the way with McInly. But she doesn't want to. Then Joe comes and saves her, she starts to fall for him (If those are old feelings.) then they almost kiss. Then she realizes he is a friend and she can't do that to him.

More.

[krrristin]

Actually that's not half bad... but maybe for a climax.
I reeeeally like that idea, but I'll use it when we get to know the characters (:

but diff characters :P

oh and next time guys, PM me ;)

[lucyinthesky]

awwh that was really good
more pweese (:

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

awwwww good partial chapter
-claps-
welll maybe clapping isn't sensitive,
since maria has a sucky life.
well...uhh
good job at making a sad chapter?
blech, my brain is off xD

[krrristin]

I was in a sad kinda mood last night :P

[Cheerleader111]

]: that was so sad...
but SO good. haha i loved it[: more
kristin :P

[new_york_girl]

Actually that's not half bad... but maybe for a climax.
I reeeeally like that idea, but I'll use it when we get to know the characters (:

but diff characters :P

oh and next time guys, PM me ;)

thanks. it just ended up in my head. but did joe and that one girl use to date?

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

it showed kristin,
so you going to write more or what?

[Froggygreen108]

wow ur write really good fan fics(:

[krrristin]

thank you (:

[Froggygreen108]

willa holland...
was that the girl in the o.c.
who played marissa's younger sister?

do u kno??
haha

[krrristin]

She played Katelyn

[Froggygreen108]

yah!
i remember her,
hahaha coolio
lol.

[krrristin]

she was my fav character

[Froggygreen108]

yah i liked her and seth and summer. i hate that they cancelled the show just cuz people stopped watching it cuz marissa died.

seth was hot lol (:

[krrristin]

I liked that Marissa died. She was a hoe. :P

Katelyn was who I based Layla off of. We'll see if it works xD

[Froggygreen108]

hahaha yah. she turned lesbian

Oh cool!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

OK time to write Kristin!!!!!!!!!

[krrristin]

Yeah I was so confused when that happend!
I was like... um what's going on?!
Then she dated that one guy with the funny name, that eventually ran her off the road :P

[Froggygreen108]

haha yah.like the part that girl slept over then her mom was in the kitchen and they started kissing...
i was likeEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
hahaha
and that guy tried to beat up ryan
ha

[krrristin]

Lol
I like Ryan and Taylor anyway. I adored Taylor, she was the shizz

[Froggygreen108]

who was taylor??
oh YAH!!!!!
i loved her too.
she was so cool!
hahha
i loved the episode when seth and summer kissed like on spiderman.

[krrristin]

HAHA I adore the OC.
I like to watch reruns on soap net when I dont have summer school (:

[lucyinthesky]

haha i was glad marissa died too, idl misha barton
hobagg
=]

anywhoo, time to write missy!

[wizardsrock]

haha

hoebagggg

[wizardsrock]

oh sorry wrong account!
lemme go back to Krrristin

[Froggygreen108]

summer school??
that must b funn haa

[krrristin]

oh yeah. oodles of fun! :P

if you're easily scared, don't click here (http://www.youtube.com/user/TheKrrristin). Make sure your volume is a little lowwww. xD

[Froggygreen108]

haha okay.
urr youtube channel??
is that u singing..
ur really good(:
and which girl is u in the video??

[krrristin]

neither is me in the video
those are just pics of demi lovato

[Froggygreen108]

but those pictures dont really look like her