FanFic Ideas Thread?

[( soulmates )]

Okay so on this other site Kristin started an Official FanFic Ideas Thread
and I thought it was smarticle so I guess we should start it here, too? I
know that I love input on some stories I'm thinking about writing, without
actually posting or committing to a whole thing...

If a mod thinks its odd feel free to close it.

I'll just C&P What Kristin wrote...

This thread was made for the fan fiction writers out there that need some input as to whats a good idea and what might not be.
Feel free to post intro's or make a casting call for your fanfic.


Rules:
1. Please make sure that what you type is your own work
2. Do not bash. Phrases like "You suck!" or "Wow that's horrible!" are rude and not tolerated
3. If you find something that you think needs to be critiqued use Comments and Critism. (Otherwise, Gems and Opportunities.)
4. Don't take anything personally, this thread was not made to start fights.
5. Don't spam.

Have fun!

[PinkRubberDuckie]

^That's a good idea to post a whole thread. Now people can hear the reactions, and see if people will like them before posting.

[krrristin]

Ahaha you beat me to it.
I was waiting for comfirmation from Allison :P

[krrristin]

Layla McInly had two bare feet on the dashboard of her mother’s old convertible, she glanced at the clock: 7:30 am. She sighed, stared into the yellow morning sun, and sunk further into the vinyl seats. The sound of the screeching vinyl made Layla surprisingly feel at ease, she slowly closed her eyes and breathed rhythmically with the ocean waves. It was nice to revisit the salty air of the beach, moving to cold New York was hell on Layla.
She hesitantly opened one eye at the subtle sound of fingers running against the metal of the car; the figure was familiar. She opened the other eye to get a better look, “Do I… do I know you?”
“How could you not you stinker!” the voice rang through out the beach area, “wow some best friend you are.” The person said playfully.
Layla’s body stiffened as she sprung from the seat, she lowered her sunglasses and eyed the visitor. “Gabby?!”
“Yeah!” Gabriella Montez nodded embracing her friend with a hug, “Wh-why are you here?”
“Why am I here?” Layla shoved her sun glasses back in place as a smug grin grew on her face, “I’m reliving the past. Why are you here? Why aren’t you in God knows where…”
“You mean New Mexico?”
Layla nodded impatiently awaiting the answer of her long forgotten friend. The last time they had talked was when Gabriella was moving away from New York to ‘the Middle of Nowhere’ (quoted by Gabby herself) aka: New Mexico.
“The whole senior class is here!” Gabrielle explained, “We all um… we all are celebrating graduation. We’re here for a few weeks.”
“I see…” Layla rubbed her chin as if she were solving some perplexing algebraic equation, “Now explain to me why you are at the boardwalk.”
Gabriella hopped into the passenger seat, her jeans making the familiar screech that Layla loved. In fact, Layla laughed at its awkward sound when it had happened. “Just like you, you know…” she shrugged and stared solemnly into the horizon, “Reliving the past.” She looked up at Layla, her eyes pleading for attention. “It’s been one hell of a ride.”

it's an intresting story. I just watched HSM with my cousin the other day and I think the cast and story line bring a comfortable and fun feeling to any situation... so I decided to use it and abandon the over done JB fanfics. ;]

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

[SIZE=3]it's an intresting story. I just watched HSM with my cousin the other day and I think the cast and story line bring a comfortable and fun feeling to any situation... so I decided to use it and abandon the over done JB fanfics. ;]



I totally agree and I love the intro. It's a great idea and I love your style of writing. The JB fan fictions are overdone, and a bit over rated, (cuz I write em myself) but I think this Fan Fiction will go far. :))

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Miley was watching the clock move slowly by. It seemed to be running in slow motion. Almost like it was underwater.

Mandy would be coming off the plane any time soon. She slid deeper into her scratchy airplane chair in the terminal while paparazzi's camera flashes went off around her. Her best friend was worth all
this.

They've done it all. Danced together, preformed together, sang together. They also have made a Youtube show. Miley and Mandy was a hit. She was almost jumping with excitement at the prospect of filming the next webisode.

"Flight 57 is landing," a flight attendants voice said breaking through Miley's thoughts.

Miley jumped and straightened her shirt and lept off of the chair. She rushed through the crowd to wait for the passengers to exit.


I think someone should do a Miley and Mandy fan fiction. Sort of the same vibe as iCarly. Technically, anyone can use this idea. Not many people have done this, and I think this would be a rockin' Fan Fiction.

[krrristin]

I think someone should do a Miley and Mandy fan fiction. Sort of the same vibe as iCarly. Technically, anyone can use this idea. Not many people have done this, and I think this would be a rockin' Fan Fiction.
I like the concept, but it kinda jumps around some...

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

It would be entertaining, and I would do it, but kinda occupied with Underdog right now.
And that is taking long enough.
xD

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

I have a few. This one I was planning on doing.


Laya Cole looked up at her mother. Stunning and radiant, Prascilla Emerson-Cole shook back her hair glancing lovingly at her 17 year old daughter.

Laya was the child of Prascilla and Daniel Cole two rich and extremely famous actors.

Laya was lounging in her chaise chair while her mother and father watched a recent movie of her mother's.

Prascilla hid her face in embaressment whenever her screen self spoke. All was quiet except for the TV.

Then there was a creaking sound from up the stairs. Neither of her parents heard it except Laya.

She looked curiously up the stairs. Before she knew it two shots went off before her eyes and her parents crumpled.

Her scream echoed as whoever had just murdered her parents picked her up and tossed her into the attic.


Technically, to avoid writing further she hits her head and forgets everything. She stays in the house and what do you know the Jonas Brothers move in. Big shocker right (not). She doesn't remember who she is so it's basically an amnesia story. It's not the best idea ever. :02:

[PinkRubberDuckie]

I have a few. This one I was planning on doing.



Technically, to avoid writing further she hits her head and forgets everything. She stays in the house and what do you know the Jonas Brothers move in. Big shocker right (not). She doesn't remember who she is so it's basically an amnesia story. It's not the best idea ever. :02:


I <3 it
yeah, I can definetely agree with the jonas brothers (lyk omg no way) type a thing. i write them all the time. it does get boring.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

I <3 it
yeah, I can definetely agree with the jonas brothers (lyk omg no way) type a thing. i write them all the time. it does get boring.

I haven't wrote that many of them cuz im new to this site. Well sorta, I actually didn't know there was a forum here, so I have yet to die of boredom writing them. I think the Jonas Brother thing is totally over used. Sometimes its hard to even remember which story you're reading. They all basically have the same plot line. We need new ideas.

[PinkRubberDuckie]

yes, we do
i was thinking of doing a juno one?

[Destiny9910]

have any of u read my ghost whisper series, i am going to make another 1!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

yes, we do
i was thinking of doing a juno one?

I've never seen Juno. Somebody should just go crazy with ideas. Any good ideas go for it.

[krrristin]

ok so no more HSM... it was hard with all the characters...
so here:

Becca made the banner (:


http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee222/so_kristin/tangled.png
Layla McInly had two bare feet on the dashboard of her mother’s old convertible, she glanced at the clock: 7:30 am. She sighed, stared into the yellow morning sun, and sunk further into the vinyl seats. The sound of the screeching vinyl made Layla surprisingly feel at ease, she slowly closed her eyes and breathed rhythmically with the ocean waves. It was nice to revisit the salty air of the beach, moving to cold New York was hell on Layla.
She hesitantly opened one eye at the subtle sound of fingers running against the metal of the car; the figure was familiar. She opened the other eye to get a better look, “Do I… do I know you?”
“How could you not you stinker!” the voice rang through out the beach area, “wow some best friend you are.” The person said playfully.
Layla’s body stiffened as she sprung from the seat, she lowered her sunglasses and eyed the visitor. “Germy?!”
“Yes!” Jeremy Gibson nodded embracing his friend with a hug, “Wh-why are you here?”
“Why am I here?” Layla shoved her sun glasses back in place as a smug grin grew on her face, “I’m reliving the past. Why are you here? Why aren’t you in God knows where…”
“You mean New Jersey?”
Layla nodded impatiently awaiting the answer of her long forgotten friend. The last time they had talked was when Jeremy was moving away from New York to ‘the Middle of Nowhere’ (quoted by Jeremy herself) aka: New Jersey.
“The whole family is here!” Jeremy explained, “We moved here when the first album went platinum.”
“Platinum… exciting.” Layla rubbed her chin as if she were solving some perplexing algebraic equation, “Now explain to me why you are at the boardwalk... I thought you hated the beach.”
Jeremy hopped into the passenger seat, his jeans making the familiar screech that Layla loved. In fact, Layla laughed at its awkward sound when it had happened. “Just like you, you know…” he shrugged and stared solemnly into the horizon, “Reliving the past.” He looked up at Layla, his eyes pleading for attention. “It’s been one hell of a ride.”

[mileyboo897]

i, myself, am starting to get somewhat bored with the whole jonas brothers fanfiction thing.
there are absolutely no new ideas out there to be written about.
jonas brothers is basically a one type of plot write about.
though i love them to death, writing out love stories..isn't really..well. i'd like to say it's not working, but it is.
but anyways, i want to start something new, something fresh.
(even though i am currently writing a jonas brothers/ wizards? fanfiction with kaytie and a kevin love story on my own)
HSM is sort of old and i never was a huge fan.
kristin, i love what you have. though i don't exactly know who jeremy gibson is, i love the introduction you've started.
twilight is obviously the 'in' thing right now and i love stephenie meyer's books but, i'm all that good at writing stories about edward and bella.
or edward and anyone, for that matter.
i'm not much of a television watcher and i've read lots of book but tend to read the sames over and over again, not really going inot any new genres.
so i'm not sure what new things are out there to write about.
i'm guessing, the world is becoming a boring place.
either that or i'm a very boring person.
probably both(:
anyone have any good ideas?

[krrristin]

Allison and I have this thing...
remake the Jonas Brothers.
The band is called Gibson.
Their stories are different.
They look the same, but they struggle with different problems.

[krrristin]

i, myself, am starting to get somewhat bored with the whole jonas brothers fanfiction thing.
there are absolutely no new ideas out there to be written about.
jonas brothers is basically a one type of plot write about.
though i love them to death, writing out love stories..isn't really..well. i'd like to say it's not working, but it is.
but anyways, i want to start something new, something fresh.
(even though i am currently writing a jonas brothers/ wizards? fanfiction with kaytie and a kevin love story on my own)
HSM is sort of old and i never was a huge fan.
kristin, i love what you have. though i don't exactly know who jeremy gibson is, i love the introduction you've started.
twilight is obviously the 'in' thing right now and i love stephenie meyer's books but, i'm all that good at writing stories about edward and bella.
or edward and anyone, for that matter.
i'm not much of a television watcher and i've read lots of book but tend to read the sames over and over again, not really going inot any new genres.
so i'm not sure what new things are out there to write about.
i'm guessing, the world is becoming a boring place.
either that or i'm a very boring person.
probably both(:
anyone have any good ideas?
well how about you create your own plot.
I was going to write a story about my life, using Layla McInly instead of my name... but my life is a tad chaotic :P

so I guess you can use your life as a jump off point, and then create stories from there.

[mileyboo897]

ahhh see. i would have never guessed that.
that is a very interesting idea though.
if you write a full on fanfiction about that, i'll be sure to read it because you are an amazing writer.

ahh. see. somethign just hit me.
i dont know if anyone has read this trilogy but it's the Uglies Trilogy by Scott Westerfeld.
three books Uglies, Pretties, ans Specials.
The main characters Tally and Shay struggle thought the fact of becoming pretty.
It's not a very popular series but, an interesting story line.
i thought that might be something to write about...

[mileyboo897]

well how about you create your own plot.
I was going to write a story about my life, using Layla McInly instead of my name... but my life is a tad chaotic :P

so I guess you can use your life as a jump off point, and then create stories from there.

yes but, my life isn't exactly very exciting.
though some people say it is.
i'm a fairly boring person.
and, i was never good at creating something out of my own mind, more like..elaborating off of something else.

[hannahlover2007]

Yes,, even though i do love my boys,
the jonas brothers fan fics are getting terribly
over-used and somewhat boring. I mean.. the Frankie
fan fic was pretty interesting since nobody has really ever
done a frankie fan fiction, but still, it goes with the same story
line as all the other JB fan fics.
I love writing and reading fan fictions, but nobody really seems to
like what i write. I get so tired of keeping all my ideas inside and then
I write them, but nobody really seems to give a crap. So, I eventually
delete them and find something else. I do tend to write lotsa movie
reviews.. kinda stupid though. So yeah.. I would love to read a ff following
the Juno story line, or like based on a song maybe.. like you hear a song that
kinda tells a story. BTW Krrristin, I loved your new fan fic. So.. Original.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

How about, we do stories based on music videos? Just as an example we can use Kelly Clarkson's Behind These Hazel Eyes. You can write a story about what happened before it, what caused it and what happened after it. Music Video Fan Fictions. What do you think?

[hannahlover2007]

Yeah.. gotta agree.. that would be pretty interesting.
I mean not just for that video.. for just about every
video..maybe even Start all Over.. that would be
a good one... hmm..

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Do it please! I'd read it :)

[hannahlover2007]

Yeah.. I think I will.. I will most
definately credit you. I just gotta
plan it out and stuff. So.. I'll post
some of my ideas when I think of
some.. if you want you can pm me
with some ideas.. but if not thats cool...heh

[adolphin]

Yes,, even though i do love my boys,
the jonas brothers fan fics are getting terribly
over-used and somewhat boring. I mean.. the Frankie
fan fic was pretty interesting since nobody has really ever
done a frankie fan fiction, but still, it goes with the same story
line as all the other JB fan fics.
I love writing and reading fan fictions, but nobody really seems to
like what i write. I get so tired of keeping all my ideas inside and then
I write them, but nobody really seems to give a crap. So, I eventually
delete them and find something else. I do tend to write lotsa movie
reviews.. kinda stupid though. So yeah.. I would love to read a ff following
the Juno story line, or like based on a song maybe.. like you hear a song that
kinda tells a story. BTW Krrristin, I loved your new fan fic. So.. Original.
I tried to write a song-fic once, but It didn't really work out.
And I read a song-fic on here, but it is way back in the paged=s of the Fan Fiction section.

[Destiny9910]

u guys ever think of writing a ff about you going to a different world? I am doing that after my Ghost Whisperer 3 story!

any way an idea for a ff is:

go here (http://www.coolquotes.com/inspirational_quotes.php) and read the quoes and make stories off them. that's what i do!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Song fics are challenging, but can be really good.
I think I have done two... maybe xD
The thing is that usually they are like a one-shot,
unless gah idk..it would be hard, but not impossible to do it.

And about the music video idea,
that would be good.
I don't know how many of ya'll listen to Carrie Underwood.
But she made it to where her song Last Name came before the song, Before He cheats, story wise.
I thought it was clever, and can definitely be done.

JB fanfics: They can still be done!
It is just you can't do the same old, boy meets girl, boy asks girl out, drama drama drama!
CHANGE THE PLOT/POV something!
It can work, and a writer can twist the plot around into something new!
Just don't be afraid to try!

[adolphin]

like:

Joe Jonas and Kyley Johnson have know each other forever. But then, they find out that they are related! Can their friendship stay strong, or will they go their seperate ways?


How bout that?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

That's all I do. I try to surprise the readers as much as I can

[adolphin]

OMFPDKJNFJ!!!!!!!
I just remembered, I am doing a fanfic, about a music video!
kinda
it is based on it
it is based on What hurts the most-Rascal Flatts!
here is the link:
http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=71696

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Umm that would be very interesting... as long as it doesn't turn into anything sick xD

Yeah thats what I love.
Surprising people =]

[adolphin]

yeah, of course it wouldn't
duh!

[PinkRubberDuckie]

michelle you need to write it!

[adolphin]

ok, only if u will be in it

[adolphin]

OK, I'm gonna post the first chappie on here, to see if you like it, if u do, I will post!

[Cheerleader111]

YESS ff ideas thread!
haha i've been like, waiting for someone
to put one up, like seriously it helped me out
soo much on the jba site :P

kk, yes, lex is thinking of making a ff
again, but the thing is, i REALLY dont want
to abandon this one, you know? i'm tired of
that[: so i'll post a intro when i'm done with it[:

[krrristin]

keep the NY one friendie (:

[Cheerleader111]

you really want me to bring that one back kristin? O:
that's crazy, cause i miss writing it like crazy. :P i was actually
thinking about doing that, but didn't know if i could pull it off[:
haha idk what to do first on this site to get it going again]:

[( soulmates )]

I started writing one the other day but I absolutely HATE it. But I don't want to abandon
it. Can someone give me ideas on how to make it better?

It all started in a small yellow house, located in the heart of Springfield,
Vermont. Later on, the details of this one-story-wonder would be forgotten, and
those memories remembered would be held on to as if they were the last thoughts in
my head.

But tat that particular moment in time, when it all started, I mean, all that I could
think about was the high that I was about to get. Not the yellow house, not even the
fact that the girl sitting next to me, my best friend Gracie; or even the fact that I
was harming myself, almost to the point of death.

And as I glanced over to Gracie, I could tell she was thinking the same thing.

You see, Gracie had one of those faces. With her bug eyes and too-small nose, she
wasn't particularly attractive, but she didn't have to be. With her dark green, almost
brown, eyes; she was powerful. For with one bat of her eyelashes, she could get you
to do, make, or even believe anything she wanted to. She could deceive you.

And once uponn a time, Gracie's eyes had deceived me, too.

[Destiny9910]

u could star writing abou thow gracie has deecieved you. made you feel uncofortable, almost to the point of deatjh, then change it around so you out did gracie then she becvame your friend again and at the end, come back to teh house with gracie and have total silence and........

well u think of the rest.

hope it helps!

erin!

[best_of_both_worlds16]

I was thinking on doing a Maya Kibbel fanfiction.
So, it'd deff be a Jonas one, too, because y'know Maya is their friend, but it'd be more truer because Maya is an actual person, but I'm not sure.
What do you guys think?

[( soulmates )]

how is it that I ALWAYS end up as the last person to post on a page?!

u could star writing abou thow gracie has deecieved you. made you feel uncofortable, almost to the point of deatjh, then change it around so you out did gracie then she becvame your friend again and at the end, come back to teh house with gracie and have total silence and........

well u think of the rest.

hope it helps!

erin!

well I mainly have the plot, but I didn't actually like the way the little excerpt I posted was written. But thank you, you actually gave me some ideas!

I was thinking on doing a Maya Kibbel fanfiction.
So, it'd deff be a Jonas one, too, because y'know Maya is their friend, but it'd be more truer because Maya is an actual person, but I'm not sure.
What do you guys think?

that actually sounds amusing.
I like jonas stories that are mildly realistic

[Jasmine]

I was thinking of like a Demi and Selena Fan fic??
I'm not sure yet but it would be about like...spending time together and
how much time they could spend togehter and how they really
became best friends and stuff....hm...?

[adolphin]

^ THAT IS A GREAT IDEA!!!
You have to start it!

[( soulmates )]

I was thinking of like a Demi and Selena Fan fic??
I'm not sure yet but it would be about like...spending time together and
how much time they could spend togehter and how they really
became best friends and stuff....hm...?

That sounds good.
Original, too.

[Jasmine]

I didn't really explain it good.
There's gonna be like an Actual story to it though.
I might start it soon...

[xoxo Babii xoxo]

i was thinking of writing a Ryan Sheckler/Jonas Brother's fanfiction..but idk.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

the demi and selena one sounds good =]
can't wait to hear the plot.
And same with the ryan sheckler/jb one

[Cheerleader111]

ok, i just really wanted a ff that kind of
captures what it's like to be a celebrity under the microscope
and everything, so me and allison decided this was the route
that i should take. tell me what you think?[; it's a prologue :P

The craziest thing about celebrities, is that they all have something in common. They all started out like you. Normal, going to school, having parents, learning from mistakes. The craziest thing about me is that I now qualify as one of those celebrities. Yes, I was like you. Although it may not seem like it now from the tabloids and articles on my ridiculous, mortifying, and embarassing behaivor; I started off at a normal high school. I had normal friends. I can't say that I persay was normal, because I, out of everyone at my former high school, was the only one that regretted ever having to take a driver's license test--but we'll steer clear of that subject for now. Believe me, we'll get to it later.

What I'm getting at is that, I was exactly how you are now. I was like everyone. Boring. Goody-goody from a small town in Alabama. I wasn't popular--but I wasn't unpopular. I wasn't a genious, but I wasn't an idiot either. I was normal. Stuck in between. A nobody--but somebody to a certain standard. I was average, and then my life changed from uncreative to pretty schnazzy in pretty much sixty seconds flat. I didn't mind the makeup, the glam, and the attention as much as I should have. I actually enjoyed it. Which may actually be where my famous downfall began.

It actually seems like everyone on this earth is interested in the rise and fall of the famous Alexandria Nicole Mcdowell. People--friends, family, strangers. They all talk about me like I'm some sort of expierament gone wrong. Everything I had done once before as a perfect teen idol had been put under the microscope, but now it felt like that times ten. People were waiting for me to screw up again. It amazes me everyday how many famous people know my name, like the President for example. You'd think robberies, gangs, and wars weren't being held within our country with the way he talks about me. About me because I'm 'the perfect example of the tragedy to represent american youth'. Yes, he said that. About me.

Everyone wants to know how this all went down. How everything happened. How the best thing in my life turned into just one big mess with me & the paparazzi in the middle of it. Well, believe it or not, the whole thing started off a little less scandolous then you would think. It started off like any other day...ten times worse. Because, yes this is right you get to hear my fatal story, it started off with me testing for my driver's license.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

I love it! U should write it

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o
LOVE IT!
Are you sure this isn't the epilogue?
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm?
hahaha kidding.
Write chapters 1-20 tonight,
then post them all tomorrow!
xD

[( soulmates )]

ok, i just really wanted a ff that kind of
captures what it's like to be a celebrity under the microscope
and everything, so me and allison decided this was the route
that i should take. tell me what you think?[; it's a prologue :P

The craziest thing about celebrities, is that they all have something in common. They all started out like you. Normal, going to school, having parents, learning from mistakes. The craziest thing about me is that I now qualify as one of those celebrities. Yes, I was like you. Although it may not seem like it now from the tabloids and articles on my ridiculous, mortifying, and embarassing behaivor; I started off at a normal high school. I had normal friends. I can't say that I persay was normal, because I, out of everyone at my former high school, was the only one that regretted ever having to take a driver's license test--but we'll steer clear of that subject for now. Believe me, we'll get to it later.

What I'm getting at is that, I was exactly how you are now. I was like everyone. Boring. Goody-goody from a small town in Alabama. I wasn't popular--but I wasn't unpopular. I wasn't a genious, but I wasn't an idiot either. I was normal. Stuck in between. A nobody--but somebody to a certain standard. I was average, and then my life changed from uncreative to pretty schnazzy in pretty much sixty seconds flat. I didn't mind the makeup, the glam, and the attention as much as I should have. I actually enjoyed it. Which may actually be where my famous downfall began.

It actually seems like everyone on this earth is interested in the rise and fall of the famous Alexandria Nicole Mcdowell. People--friends, family, strangers. They all talk about me like I'm some sort of expierament gone wrong. Everything I had done once before as a perfect teen idol had been put under the microscope, but now it felt like that times ten. People were waiting for me to screw up again. It amazes me everyday how many famous people know my name, like the President for example. You'd think robberies, gangs, and wars weren't being held within our country with the way he talks about me. About me because I'm 'the perfect example of the tragedy to represent american youth'. Yes, he said that. About me.

Everyone wants to know how this all went down. How everything happened. How the best thing in my life turned into just one big mess with me & the paparazzi in the middle of it. Well, believe it or not, the whole thing started off a little less scandolous then you would think. It started off like any other day...ten times worse. Because, yes this is right you get to hear my fatal story, it started off with me testing for my driver's license.

That sounds AMAZING! I hope you continue. :D






Okay so I want more opinions on this, I'll just C&P it.
I started writing one the other day but I absolutely HATE it. But I don't want to abandon
it. Can someone give me ideas on how to make it better?

It all started in a small yellow house, located in the heart of Springfield,
Vermont. Later on, the details of this one-story-wonder would be forgotten, and
those memories remembered would be held on to as if they were the last thoughts in
my head.

But tat that particular moment in time, when it all started, I mean, all that I could
think about was the high that I was about to get. Not the yellow house, not even the
fact that the girl sitting next to me, my best friend Gracie; or even the fact that I
was harming myself, almost to the point of death.

And as I glanced over to Gracie, I could tell she was thinking the same thing.

You see, Gracie had one of those faces. With her bug eyes and too-small nose, she
wasn't particularly attractive, but she didn't have to be. With her dark green, almost
brown, eyes; she was powerful. For with one bat of her eyelashes, she could get you
to do, make, or even believe anything she wanted to. She could deceive you.

And once uponn a time, Gracie's eyes had deceived me, too.

[adolphin]

o.O
start!
u must!
EDIT:
and, ( soulmates ), maybe, you can kinda, put it in Gracie's POV too.
Like first the main character, saying what happened first, then Gracie can tell her side of the story

[Cheerleader111]

adri, you better continue writing that. i love it
& i actually reaaally want to know what's about to happen :P
hmm to make it better....? i don't really know. i kind of love it
the way it is! =D


thanks guys[: i don't want to abandon this one.
O: any ideas for a title?

oh and btw, in your DREAMS allison xD

[( soulmates )]

Except for the fact that the only time Gracie's going to be in this story will be that part.

But maybe I can switch it so it isn't in Lucy's (the main character) POV
so its like omnicient narration

[Cheerleader111]

^ actually,
if you did switch it out of lucy's pov,
i think that might be better. maybe that
way you can show more of the situation
instead of the main character's thoughts[:

[best_of_both_worlds16]

First off, Lex. Wow. I was speechless by the time I finished reading that. :o
How can someone so young write so good? I'm so jealous. xD

And so the Maya Kibbel fanfiction would be good? I guess I'll give it a try.
I don't want to ruin my own story. It's like going to be different than my rest.... There's no way Maya would ever like Nick like that. xD Oh, well. A challenge.

[krrristin]

Holy hell guys.
i love Adris AND Lex's.

[123_abc]

holy cow/sheep/cows =O lex,
thats amazing. continuee pwease.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

holy hell?
oxymoron xD

Adriness.
Well you first have to go back and tell how she was deceived by Gracie.
Maybe the main character could have started off as the new girl in school,
and then she met Gracie and her life went downhill,
but it took her awhile to realize it.
You could contrast the way the main character was before Gracie to the After gracie.
Idk, just brainstorming.
But i like it =]

[Jasmine]

Ok, so I decided that I am only going to do ONE more fan fiction.
Cause if I do more, I'll end up abandoning one.
So, either the Selena and Demi one or I had another Idea...
A Noah Cyrus Fan Fiction.
I'll post a prolouge later...

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Hmmm both sound intriguing,
and original

[adolphin]

man that is hard
but The Noah Cyrus one is probably the most original idea Ive ever heard of

[Jasmine]

haha. I know.
It's sort of random but I thought it might be good.
I just got the idea out of no where.
Here's kind of a prolouge thing to it...
I don't really like it...but then it'll take place like when she's 13 and she really starts to become a big star, maybe even bigger than miley, that's when the story will start.
Tell me what you think...I am really un-sure about this...

Most people would think that it would be hard living in the shadow of my sister. And in actuality, it is very hard. Miley, being the 15-year old phenomenon singer and actress. And then me, being the little sister, Miley Cyrus's little sister. My dad has encouraged her to live out her dreams her entire life. I guess he thought she was living in his shadow. But when will it be my time to shine? We are Cyrus's you know. My dad, Billy Ray, Miley, and then Trace the lead singer of Metro Station. For a seven-year old, I have alot to look up to, and alot to fulfill. It seems like I am living in the biggest shadow. But I need to breakout and shine, by myself, just me. Noah Lindsey Cyrus.

But I'm living in my sister's dream.
But my sister's dream ISN'T my dream.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

awww sounds good!

[adolphin]

I luf it!
start!

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

i think since like EVERYONE is sooo obsessed with twilight, somebody should do a twilight ff.

[krrristin]

sounds fun!
i like it.

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

i just came up with an idea, that i'll work on tonight.
i know what its gonna be about, but i don't really know the plot yet.
so i'll post it when i'm done with that.
kk?

[adolphin]

mmk, kewl!

[Jasmine]

k. I think I'll start it...
I am still thinking about it...
any ideas for the name...
I'm thinking like that new song Noah sings...
called the Driveaway??

[adolphin]

sounds good!
or, I'm older, so let me Live my dream, Not Yours

[Jasmine]

hm...
I like the "Let me live my dreams not yours" part...

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

so do i^

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hmmm that title is good.
or something like Living In The Shadows
or Shadow.
blech idk

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

thats cool^

it reminds me of demi though.

[adolphin]

yeah, it does
but a good title
and thx guys!

[Gabriella Read]

actually i dunno is my fanfiction nice or not....bcoz i seriously had no idea to write anymore. Can anyone help me? I felt like writing camp rock inside too. Is it a great idea? Can u guys help me? Please read my fanfic. Thanks

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

Chelsea is NOT like other girls, though she is just a teenager, she also knows 14 ways to kill you with her bare hands, and can speak fluently in 27 different languages. Chelsea is a spy. But when she gets sent on a mission to go kill a guy named Josh [for some reason, that she doesn't know yet ;)], she has to become friends with him first. But when she starts falling in love with him, will the plan follow through? or will she develope feelings for him, and not be able to kill him?

Sound good?

btw, no jonas brothers are in it.

[Cheerleader111]

^ i love that[[: it sounds really cool :P
write it[: but OMG have you ever read
the book "i'd tell you i love you, but then i'd have to kill you"?
it sounds sorta like that, and i loved that book, so i'd
definitely read this[;

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

nope i haven't^

i'll be sure to buy it. lol

[mileyboo897]

my 'idea' brain must be malfunctioning because thoughts on new fanfics are seriously not coming.
usually, they just kinda..come to me.
like..hit me in the face and i'm all "oh. cool idea..."
yeah. not now.
though, one did come to me in a dream last night, kind of..strange but..i thought i'd share it with you?

well. like...maybe a pen pal fanfic.
where, two students are given the assignment to have a pen pal in a different country.
they have to ask the regular questions to get to know the other but end up becoming really good friends, though...not exactly knowing who the other is.

??? comments?
i don't have a prolouge written yet but i'm working on that.

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

cool idea^

[mileyboo897]

thankss.
i kinda wanted to do JB again cause...that's something I'm good at writing...?
and also...no one has really done one like mine above before so...
I thought it might be different.
i sorta have a prlouge written. but it's not really..like..the beginning of a story or anything.
what it is is like....
telling about the summer program they'd have to do. and giving the information on the pen pal...
bleh. i'll just post it.

it's a picture..cause i thought that'd turn out...coolish..?

here. (http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb83/mileyboo897/austrailia.jpg)

it's not very good.
but..yeah(:

[adolphin]

that looks cool!
I would read it!
and Mandy
that is a good idea too!
I had an Idea last night, but forgot
:))
This isn't it
but wat about a Brandi Cyrus FF, or a Trace Cyrus FF?

[Cheerleader111]

whoaa i love the picture idea mileyboo897[:
pretty schnazzy if you ask me :P i'd read it too[:

& adolphin, that sounds pretty cool[:
you should write a prologue or something,
cause it might not be easy to write since
we don't know like, as much about them
as we do miley :P

ohkay, i need some more help you guys.
haha i wrote the first chapter, & i based
it off of one of my fave books, better off famous,
so i'm naming my ff that. but i need critique on
the first chapter. do i just like, post it? haha[:

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

i wanna read it!

EDIT! EDIT! EDIT!

hehe, ok i'm working on my ff [about the spy] right now. I'm calling it 'And the 7th Thing I Hate The Most That You Do... You Make Me Love You'
I know, I know, veryy long title. psh. whatever, long things are soo amazing.

so i got a few people working on the graphixy part, because i don't wanna do it my self.

but i need character card, so you know, if anyone wants to help me with that..
i need help.
hehe.

pm me if you can [or would like too] make the character cards for me.

[123_abc]

yeahh lex, post it.

[Cheerleader111]

i can make like, simple character cards if
you want that mandy[: like, the ones i had on my old ff.
VERY simple, i warn you :P

ohkay, i'll post it. it's the first chapter.
c & c please[:

Chapter One

The sweat began at the base of my palms, as always, and continued to urge the nausea in my stomach from there. It was Friday, June 13, and I had now existed in this universe for exactly sixteen years and seven hours. However, at this precise moment in time, I would've given the world just to have never existed. Keeping my mouth shut, afraid that something unexpected would come out, I wiped my hands on my old ripped jeans, shooting a weak smile at my driving evaluator.
Honestly, I could do without a driver's license. It's not that I didn't understand the need to drive though. I've ridden enough buses and walked home enough half hours to understand the full necessity of being in climate controlled motion. I definitely don't mind being in the car with another person driving either. It's just what happens when I'm in control of the car. When I'm in control of anything for that matter.

Something always goes wrong.

And at this moment, I was aware of so much more than usual, and not in a good way. I could feel my fingers burning against the steering wheel, an epicenter for all the queasiness and sweat flooding my body. Deep breaths were proving unsurprisingly radically unhelpful.

"Reverse" she said. 'Doris' was my evaluator, and she was not exactly someone I would feel comfortable around on a normal basis. And today was no acception either. Doris had tight gray curls, a phony smile, and whenever she wrote something down on her clipboard, she made a sort of ticking noise with her tongue. I'm not sure if she did that all the time, or if it was just with me. I was assuming it was just me for now. I examined her out of the corner of my eye nervously, before faking a smile and slipping the testing Honda from Park to R and lightly touching the gas pedal.
The car whirled out of the parking space. Reflexively, I smashed on the brakes automatically and the Honda bounced back into position. Doris, who I assume had endured plenty of rough reversals in her career, bobbed her sausage curls and made a conspicious mark on her pad.

"You're facing the wrong way." She grunted, practically oozing displeasure.
"Huh?" I responded articulately.
"This is a one-way aisle. You're going the wrong way."
My newly dry palms began to moisten themselves again as I reparked, carefully, and reversed again.

Doris continued to make small marks on her pad as she directed me down the main road. I'd driven down this boulevard before with my parents and had been just fine, but suddenly it felt like I was driving down a cemented Amazon River. Biting my lip, I turned into the approppriate, far-right lane as I wondered how Doris would react to me turning on the radio to relax. Gas pedal. Rearview check. Breathe. Count hearbeats. More gas. This wasn't too bad. Really. Like Gloria Gayner once sang, I would survive.

"YOU MISSED THE TURN!" Doris said loudly.
Instinctively, I pushed down on the brake pedal, surprised at the sudden outburst. "What?"
"DON'T BRAKE!" Doris ordered. The car behind us honked loudly and swerved, making that screeching noise on the asphalt. My foot reached for the gas pedal again. I could feel a tremendouls nauseous wave curdling over me. "Didn't you hear me telling you to turn?" Doris asked, eyeing me with disgust as she used her hands to fix her tight curls on top of her puuuny head. I tried to drown her out as I concentrated on not puking all over the windshield. Not only would that be humiliating, but that would dangerously impair my vision as I continued to drive, making me even more of a hazard to everyone surrounding me on the street.
"No."
"I said it four times."
"Oh." My foot tapped the gas pedal in great and shivery jumps. "Do you think...I could pull over?" I asked, glancing at Doris.

I signaled like a far more in-control driver, and moved onto the shoulder of the road. I sat there for a second, sweat streaming down my neck, willing the nausea to diminish. It didn't.
"Excuse me." I said to Doris and then I opened the door. I leaned as far away from the Honda as possible and began to retch and heave. It. Was. Disgusting. And it seemed to last forever. However, when it was over, I leaned back against the car seat.

We sat for a few minutes in silence as I closed my eyes and attempted breathing exercises once again. When I knew it was safe to speak, for both me AND Doris, my voice came out all hoarse and weak.
"Maybe I should just forget about taking the test." I whispered.

"Honey." Doris fixed her puuuny glasses on the bridge of her nose as her lips straightened into a thin line. "you've already failed."

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

awesome chapter! you should totally make it a ff!
and i'll pm you about the character cards kk?

[mileyboo897]

ohhh. lex that was awesome.
hahah. that would deffinately be me, taking my drivers test.
gosh, i can't even steer one of those games like....in arcades and junk.
i'll always loose and end up smashing into a cow or something.
i loved it though, you should so make a ff on that.

edit;;
for those of you who've read my prolouge thingy on the next page over, can you help me htink of a title.
i want something..short ish. 1-3 words.
but also goes with the plot.
so like..something austrailian?
i just cant think of one. thanks in advance.

[Cheerleader111]

ohkay mandy, i sent a pm.
ohh but if you sent a pm, then there'll be
two pms. haha ohkay, whatever. haha
& thanks![: i'm trying to make it into a ff,
but i don't want to abandon it.

i'm probably going to make a thread in the
next two minutes[:

[123_abc]

whoaa lex, that's amazing. continue
pleasee. you're such a great writer..
seriously.

edit; pshh and don't abandon it
lex. ahah..remember those
stories that you abandonedd?!
mmhmm.

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

I'm trying to think of something Kylen, but every time i think about Australia, i think of those jonas people. lol

so i can't think of anything. sry.

[Cheerleader111]

whoaa lex, that's amazing. continue
pleasee. you're such a great writer..
seriously.

ohmygoshh seriously? like coming from THE leslie, that
means a lot. :P haha thanks[: ohkay, i'm gonna
make the ff, since i probably already have three people
to read it[:

ohhh. lex that was awesome.
hahah. that would deffinately be me, taking my drivers test.
gosh, i can't even steer one of those games like....in arcades and junk.
i'll always loose and end up smashing into a cow or something.
i loved it though, you should so make a ff on that.

haha i know, i had to imagine what i would
be like behind the wheel. i figured i'd be like,
awful anyways[:
and OMG i know, i suck at the driving
games too. haha but i'm not as bad as
allison {jaykay alli} :P

[123_abc]

haha THE leslie..ahah xP you crack me up.
but yeahh you should continue, people
aree gonna LOVE it.(:

[Cheerleader111]

O: you know, i AM going
to do it. it's summer & everything,
so it's not like i don't have time[:
hmm i'm gonna make the thread right now
pshh i'm doing this. haha

well it's true! your ffs are amazing!
and you make them like, what? once
every two years? pshh :P you need
to write gurll[:

[mileyboo897]

god i'm giong to be like joe jonas...gawdd. 18 and can't drive worth a crap..

I'm trying to think of something Kylen, but every time i think about Australia, i think of those jonas people. lol

so i can't think of anything. sry.

it's okay, mandy.
i thought of one.

sincerely,
austrailia.

since like..it's emailing back and forth and you'd have to put an ending so..
i thought that'd be cool.

[123_abc]

yayya =P go lex. woohoo let's
partayy. haha. i'm excitedd

[adolphin]

um, ok, here goes;


I'm The older sister to Teen Pop Sensation, Hannah Montana, or, Miley Cyrus if you will. I have been on Zoey 101, and people say I am very talented. Sure they say I am talented at singing, but my biggest dream is to be an actress. And someday, I hope that that dream, will come true. You guessed it, I am Brandi Cyrus, and this is my story.


Whatcha think?

[Cheerleader111]

whooa i like it[:
post it! i'm sure it'll be great
based on the introducteeion :P

[adolphin]

thx!
I will post it after I eat, havent eaten anything ALL DAY!

[Cheerleader111]

haha join the clubb[:
i just got straight online :P
but taylor just brought me a poptart O:

[adolphin]

yummy!
psshh, I am eating Frischs chicken fingers
My grandma brought them home for me last night
she works at a Frischs

[mileyboo897]

poptarts.
i actually don't remember the last time i had one.
gahh. i'm starving.
but like...everthing my aunt has bought to eat this past week was sugar.
and i can't exactly have that.
sooo. i'm stuck eating cheese for the rest of my life.

[Cheerleader111]

believe me, i know how you feel.
too much sugar intake will be bad for me :P

ohkay, so i posted my ff[:

[adolphin]

yay!
I'ma go post mine now
WAIT!
I need a name, and a banner

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

poptarts.
i actually don't remember the last time i had one.
gahh. i'm starving.
but like...everthing my aunt has bought to eat this past week was sugar.
and i can't exactly have that.
sooo. i'm stuck eating cheese for the rest of my life.

cheese is greeattt.

but to much sugar for me is...
not that great :P

btw..

YOUR ONLINE!
Your like never online when i'm online. if that makes since i guess.

[mileyboo897]

^^^
ahahahahah.
Mandy.

Anyways, the picture prolouge i posted was..okay to me.
I mean of course i'll still use it butttt.
i wrote an introduction thingy.
a prolouge is usually something that happends before..right?

so here. oh and i made a banner.
i had it saved and everything. then realized i spelled australia wrong.
:/

well. this is an intro..sorta..telling whats going on.


http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb83/mileyboo897/sincerely.jpg

The better things in life always come to me as completely horrible.
For example.
Today was supposed to be a better day than most.
Why you ask?
Because, on this day, every other seventeen year old girl in the world got to be released from their studies to enjoy the summer time.
But for me, I sat in my Cultural class, awaiting my summer homework.
Do you see what I’m getting at?
Each student got a different assignment at the end of Year 11.
I sighed, waiting for Mrs. Jan to hand me my papers.
“Ms. Karr.” She said my name, her scratchy voice echoing through the silent class room.
I hoped I would get something like ‘volunteer work’ at the zoo.
I honestly would rather shovel kangaroo dung than-
“You’re kidding me?!?” I exclaimed, making eye contact with Mrs. Jan.
I turned to my best friend, Lynn.
“Switch Me.”
“No switching, Ms. Karr.”
I sighed, laying my head on my desk.
Did I really have to talk to some stranger from America all summer?
And really, what kind of name is ‘Joseph’ anyways?



likie?

[adolphin]

Im gonna change what your best friends little sisters bestfriend said
Who wouldn't want to lay on a bed, and write to Joe Jonas all day?
I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE HAS NEVER HEARD OF THE JONAS BROTHERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
U MUST START!

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

god i'm giong to be like joe jonas...gawdd. 18 and can't drive worth a crap..



it's okay, mandy.
i thought of one.

sincerely,
austrailia.

since like..it's emailing back and forth and you'd have to put an ending so..
i thought that'd be cool.
awesome.

i can't drive either [on games]

i was playing against my brother on mario kart wii, and he got 1st and i got 12th EVERY TIME. lol [he's also younger then me]

[mileyboo897]

Im gonna change what your best friends little sisters bestfriend said
Who wouldn't want to lay on a bed, and write to Jo Jonas all day?
I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE HAS NEVER HEARD OF THE JONAS BROTHERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
U MUST START!

so his name is Jo now?
ahahahah.
*Joe.
And it doesnt say his last name,
so you dont know if she's heard of them or nott.
*gasppp*
oh.

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

so his name is Jo now?
ahahahah.
*Joe.
And it doesnt say his last name,
so you dont know if she's heard of them or nott.
*gasppp*
oh.

i can't believe she thought that 'Joseph' was a 'what kind of name is that' name!!!

how dare she.

you must start..

ahaha kylen, austrailia? that made me crack up.

[adolphin]

so his name is Jo now?
ahahahah.
*Joe.
And it doesnt say his last name,
so you dont know if she's heard of them or nott.
*gasppp*
oh.
whoops my bad
typo
i meant Joe
I hate myself
lol
:P

[mileyboo897]

i can't believe she thought that 'Joseph' was a 'what kind of name is that' name!!!

how dare she.

you must start..

ahaha kylen, austrailia? that made me crack up.


i just spelled it like it sounded.
aus-trail-ia.
i'll start soon.

[adolphin]

Kylen, u do know that u will have to let me and Mandy be in this wonderful FF, rite?

[mileyboo897]

^^
yes yes i know.
(:

i started it.
so, you know.
go be characters?

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

i auditioned. lol

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Hmmmmmm not sure if I like the wording.
Is it weird...or ok?

“Weird people…” I mutter. Living with two parents who care more about the weather than their own daughter can really mess up the social aspect of dealing with people who care. I mean I am not complaining; I just don’t know how to handle it, new experience for me.

[( soulmates )]

I can understand it mildly, Allison. Its a tad confusing, but probably with the context it'd be fine.


Just a question, but how do you all get inspired when you're trying to write a new story?

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahah yeah, its like one sentence in my book...just can't give toooo much away.
If you remember my ff Underdog, its from a later chapter xD

hmm i get inspired for a new story by playing it out in my head, like all the possibilities.
I usually think about it awhile and which way I want to take it...and then start writing

[( soulmates )]

I heard that by writing a backstory for a character you help yourself get inspired to write your story.
So I tried that, and it helped. Majorly. This is what I came up with:

KARA HAROLDSON
Back Story

July 27 of last summer was the end of my life. Certain people, namely sappy valedic -
torians at high school graduations, would state that it was simply "The First Day of the Rest
of My Life". And while that may or may not be true, that particular cliché wouldn't exactly
be my choice of words.


huggadahbuggadah


It all started with a party. Namely, Barney Benson's seventeenth birthday party. Barney
was, in three words "A Major Pain", but seeing as the majority of the junior/senior class at
the local high school was in the Hamptons (or other beach front locations), we were stuck in
a party-less lull. Hence, my best friend - Delilah Sentorino's - decision to attend.

No party was a party unless Delilah Sentorino was there.

"Kar," I remember she said to me. "You need to loosen up. No one will get murdered,
there probably won't even be drugs there."

And, as was usual for our pre-party ritual, I would attempt at making an excuse. "Delilah, I
can't go tonight, I swear. I'm on thin enough ice as it is, after you dragged me to Jon's
house last week. Not to mention my parents are out for the night, so I've got to make sure
Sloane doesn't die or anything. I shouldn't even be TALKING to you right now!"

"Wait, Kara. Did you just say you was supposed to watch your li'l sis?"

"You were," I corrected her; Delilah was infamous for her numerous gramatical errors. "And
yes, I am. Any reason why you'd ask me about something that I said not even one minute
ago?"

Delilah, as usual, ignored my sarcastic comment and unveiled the reason why I had to
attend Barney Benson's party. "Kar, you sure Sloane's there? Cuz, I see someone who
looks an awful lot like her getting high with AJ Hammel. Y'know, that kid from your english
class?"

"Okay, three things that should enter your brain right now, Miss Sentorino. Number one: I
thought you said there weren't going to be drugs at this party? Two: Sloane can't be at that
fiesta, she's in bed right now due to menstrual cramps. And three? AJ Hammel is from my
SPANISH class, you retard!"

"Don't shoot the messenger, Kara Haroldson," Delilah sighed. "Look, Kar, I can barely hear
you, let alone hold a conversation. Just get your patootie down here and do that rescue
thing. Then you can go home and listen to the Plain White Socks or whatever."

"Wait, you mean the Plain White T's?"

"Yea, sure. Oh, crap! Look, Kar, I've gotta go. Some freshman just stepped on my - HEY
YOU! YEA, THE IDIOT IN THE CELTICS CAP! YOU JUST STEPPED ON MY FOOT YOU
JACK..." click.

And that was the last time I heard Delilah's voice.

[MileyFan_4_Ever]

That's Awesome Adri! You Know I Can't Resist Your Stories =D
And That Sounds Really Cool Actually. I Just Love It!

[krrristin]

loves it adri

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

awwww i love it =]

[( soulmates )]

The funny thing is that there is actually a druggie in my Spanish class named AJ

PS thank you guys!! I'm happy you like it.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahahaha nice Adri.
Taking real life people and making their problems known to the world.
xD

I liked it.
Write it =]

[Destiny9910]

i sometimes like to fatize what my life would be like if an inccident occured. like what i am doing with my ff, a new identity, i think what it would be like if i was kidnapped and nearly killed iwth my bestfriend. i make that into a story and everythong just pours out.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

blah I need opinions.
Ok spoiling part of my book or whatever, but well yeah.
Please understand you won't get it..like the full happenings
but let me know if i should go from this:
Jeremy jumps up from the couch. He rubs his eyes, and glances at the TV, which is strangely on the news. Turning off the TV, he turns to see Eric zonked out on the chair next to him. Explain why the news was on…we fell asleep. Jeremy turns to look out the dining room window, which faces Allison’s house. He heard a loud bang, but wasn’t sure if he had been dreaming or not.

A loud crash causes Eric to jump out of the chair, and bang his knee on the coffee table. “Jeremy what the frick was that?”

Jeremy walks towards Eric with a mocking smirk on his face. “Ok first of all…frick?”

Eric shakes his head, trying to get his hair settled. “Hey, it is hard to choose the right word when you just woke up, rudely I might add. Now what was that?”

Jeremy shrugs, and quickly turns back towards Allison’s house. “Something feels wrong, first the loud bang and now a crash.” He turns to face his brother. “You call the cops, I am going over there.”

Eric steps forward. “No. I am going out…seeing…ok I am not really sure what Allison and I are, but I know her better.”

Jeremy grabs the phone and walks towards Eric. “I am older, now call!” He tosses the phone towards Eric and heads out the door. Eric grumbles to himself as he dials 911.

A rush of cool air greets Jeremy as he steps out into the night, glancing around he notices the peaceful atmosphere. Jeremy is jerked back into reality by the shattering sound of things hitting the floor; his best bet is that it is furniture. So much for a peaceful evening. He quickly runs over to Allison’s house, finding the door wide open.


immediately to this
My eyelids flutter open, and I quickly jump up, banging my head on something.

“Oww!” My eyes adjust, and I realize that I just hit Nick in the head.

“Oh, sorry Nick. Wait, why are you in my house?” Rubbing my head, I begin to feel the bruise, nothing too serious. Guess not all rock stars have hard heads.

“Newsflash Allison, you are in my house.” Nick grins, enjoying showing me up. Rolling my eyes, I attempt to sit up. Nick, noticing this, gently pushes me back down. “Umm no, you are suppose to stay lying down, and if something happens to you…well I won’t live to see another day.”

“That is just a tad over dramatic, even for you.” I smile at him before glancing down to check for any other injuries besides the bruise caused by Nick. After waking up from a coma in a hospital, you learn to look for certain things. Scanning my arms, I notice some band-aids already placed on me, multiple actually. My eyes close as I search my brain for the memory of what happened before I blacked out. Oh right, Daddy came home.

“You crashed into a window, or something made out of glass, which is why you have the cuts.” Nick leans forward, gently taking my hand, and turning it over. “Couple of scraps on your hand, but nothing major. Some cuts on your legs also.”

Smiling, I slowly lean my head back onto the pillow. “Well on the bright side, if the whole rock star thing falls through…go to med school.”

Nick laughs and is about to reply when a scream cuts him off. “ALLISON!”

My eyes clench shut, not really ready for the high-pitched octave scream. When I open my eyes again, I see Kristin pushing Nick out of the way, so she can get close enough to talk to me. “Wow… you are really nice to him, huh?” I grin.

“You know this is the part where I would slap you, but you are injured.” Kristin returns my grin, mocking me.

“Glad we have an understanding.” I manage to grin.

Within seconds, everyone is in the room, guess Kristin’s high-pitched scream did not only catch my attention, oh and when I say everyone, I mean it. Lex, Leslie, Kristin, Nick, Eric, and Jeremy are here. “Wow… what, nothing on TV to watch?” I attempt to sit up again, to find Nick, once again, pushing me down. I manage to glare at him, which he laughs at.

“Surprising as it may seem, people tend to get all worked out when you black out.” Eric replies as he comes and sits on the edge of the couch I am currently laying on.

“Weird people…” I mutter. Living with two parents who care more about the weather than their own daughter can really mess up the social aspect of dealing with people who care. I mean I am not complaining; I just don’t know how to handle it, new experience for me.

“Gee thanks, we take pride in our weirdness.” Eric grins as he hands me an ice pack. “Not sure how you did it, but you injured yourself within five minutes.” He says commenting on my bruise.

I gently place the icepack on my head. “Banana peels can be very tricky.” I smile, as I see Leslie and Lex pushing their way through.

“I can’t believe you!” Lex hits me on the arm. “Why can’t you stay safe for one stupid moment in your life?”

“Ok, at least Kristin had the decency not to hit an already injured person!” I slowly move my arm across my chest, farther away from Lex.

“Well you deserved it.” Lex says with a straight face, which she held for all of five seconds. “Ok sorry, but I really wanted to hit you.”

I laugh for a moment, and then cringe because strangely it hurts to laugh. “Gee thanks Lex.”


i am not through with the second part...that is just how far i am.
I stopped writing the first part bnecause i wasn't sure if I should make Jeremy see like what is happening in Allison's house or not.
So one day I just started writing what happens when Allison wakes up.
So my question is, should i not write anything more on the first part and jump straight to the second, or should i maybe have a couple lines of Jeremy scoping out Allison's house.
Like maybe descriptions..
Hmm well that sounds good xD
look ok I am talking to myself, just comment please, and if a sentence or something bugs you in my samples I posted, tell me!

[krrristin]

kristin loves it... and thats all that matters

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahahahaha thanks Kristin.
I will remember that when my book comes out {Like 5 years from now at the rate I am going xD}
As long as Kristin loves it...I am good

[krrristin]

yesss sir.
its a valuable life lesson.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahah thanks for sharing,
so i guess I will write some description of what Allison's house looks like, and then put the second part after that and wrap up that chapter.
Whoo ch. 16 is almost done!

[krrristin]

finally.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Ok description done!
What do ya think?

He slowly walks up to the house, and places his back against the walls as he moves closer to the door. Guess watching those spy movies and cop TV shows pays off. He reaches the door, and takes a deep breath. Slowly he turns his head to peer inside Allison’s house. The living room is a complete mess. The sofa has been turned over, cushions all over the floor, and the coffee table is laying flat on the floor. Jeremy sighs as he continues scanning the house; so far, it did not look good. He cranes his head to look further into the house, without being caught, hopefully. The kitchen cabinets that he can see are wide open, and look like someone has gone through and pulled everything out, searching for something. He takes a deep breath, and quickly runs over to the other side of the doorframe. Wow, that was stupid; usually the people are shot after doing that. Jeremy holds his breath as he tries to press his entire body against the wall. After a few seconds of silence, he takes a deep breath and looks again into Allison’s house. His eyes widen as he sees Allison, lying against the wall, unconscious.

[MileyFan_4_Ever]

Hmm. Well. I've Been Thinking. And I Wrote This.
I Might Make It Into A FanFic Later. But I Don't Know For Sure.
I'd Like To Know What You All Think Of It First.

I stood in the entrance way of Cafe Hollywood - where I work.
Sure it wasn't the job of glamour and such that I had always dreamed of having, but it was fun.
I adjusted the apron around my waist for the billionth time today, and stood waiting for people to
come in. Normally I would be in the back, cooking the food, or sometimes taking the orders.
But because of my 'condition,' I was put into the front room to greet everybody and give them
their seats and menus and whatnot. Oh the joy! Ha-ha -- NOT!
UGH. This was the absolute worst...

As I looked down to fix my apron, I heard the front door open. I quickly put on fake ear-to-ear
smile, and started to speak. "Hi, and welcome to the cafe." I looked up before continuing; when I
caught sight of who had entered, I couldn't help but let out a small groan.
With a lot less perk, and a faded smile, I continued my greeting; "I'm Casiddy, please,
follow me to your seats." I turned on my heel and quickly walked off.

One person from the group followed at my heels. It was really annoying. I was about ready
to turn around and sock him in the face! I mean, sure he was cute and all. Really cute...
But after what he did to me and to my life? Good Lord, shoot me now! PLEASE!

After I took the group of them to their table, gave them their menus and everything else
I was supposed to do, I stalked back off to my 'post' at the doors. 20 minutes passed,
and nobody entered, nobody left. God, I was so bored...

"Uh, hey; how's it going Casiddy?" I heard someone say from behind me.
A familiar someone. I turned to face them, putting on that fake smile from earlier.
"It's going." I chuckled slightly. I stopped smiling - it was really tiring.
"What're you doing here Joe? I thought the Jonas Brothers were on tour..."
I lied before... This was the absolute worst!

[krrristin]

adore both.

[MileyFan_4_Ever]

Thanks Kristin :)

[PinkRubberDuckie]

I decided to ride this by you guys.
You Want Me To Go To Florida? (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=71800)

It's about these two girls, who win a trip to Disney, and meet the Jonas Brothers there (no way!)

There's a lot of backstabbing and stuff like that in it.
Nobody's really been reading it. Hopefully this will get more readers.
It's written by me, and my friend Mandy (xXmandyXx)

[Jasmine]

Ok...well I wrote this and I'm really not sure about it.
I don't even know if I want to start another one.
But..if you people like it then maybe I will...
It MIGHT be jb, but I'm not sure...

I looked up at the house as we pulled up to the curb.
It was one of those houses you see in the horror movies, like the Haunted Mansion or Tower of Terror or something.
With the dead plants and gargoyles outside.
God knows what it looks like from the inside.
But from what I can tell, it doesn't look good.
As if it wasn't hard enough moving across the country, my mother expects me to live here!?
I got out of the car, letting out a huge sigh.
My mom smiled, like she was HAPPY she was moving into this house of hell.

"Isn't it just charming!" Debbie, the realtor said running up to us. Her voice was all peppy and irritating.
"Yeah...it's real inviting" I said sarcastically, getting up out of the car and slamming the door shut.
"It's just perfect!" my mom cut in.
"It's a treasure...now let's take a look inside shall we?" Debbie said.
Debbie and my mom quickly headed up the front stairs and I trailed behind them.
The door creeked as it opened.
I took one look at the inside of house and turned around on my heals, but my mom grabbed me, turning me back.

We walked inside, seeing a huge double staircase and an old chandeleir, that looks like it could fall in 10 seconds.
Debbie took out some papers and showed them to my mom.
I wasn't paying attention while I was looking around, until I heard the very last thing Debbie said.

That sealed the deal. I'm officially living here.

"WELCOME HOME BROWN FAMILY!" Debbie yelled.

Oh. My. God.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

ahhhh i like it!
=]

[Jasmine]

thanks.
any ideas for the name if i DO write it??

[mileyboo897]

i likes ittt.
hmmm. a name...sorry, love.
i can't think of one.

[adolphin]

what about
Welcome to the Horror House

[PinkRubberDuckie]

I decided to ride this by you guys.
You Want Me To Go To Florida? (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=71800)

It's about these two girls, who win a trip to Disney, and meet the Jonas Brothers there (no way!)

There's a lot of backstabbing and stuff like that in it.
Nobody's really been reading it. Hopefully this will get more readers.
It's written by me, and my friend Mandy (xXmandyXx)

anyone?

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

HmMm it depends on what you are mainly writing about.
Like if it is just about you in a haunted house, then the title should reflect that

[Jasmine]

yeahh.
The thing is I DON'T want it just to be a girl and a haunted house.
And it WON'T be just that.
I am just still thinking of a story and stuff...
so then I am gonna decide on a name I think...

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

yeah that sounds like a good plan =]

[Cheerleader111]

allison, report to ff ideas
thread immediately[:

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

ummm i am here
-over-
xD

[Cheerleader111]

YAY! ohkay, i need your help
on the next chapters. i have about three
different versions of the next chapter because
i keep editting cause i don't know what i want to happen!


now i'm confused, i don't know what shall happen next]:

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hmmm ok.
well tell you what pm me what you have because i have to jump into the shower real quick xD

I say take one of your "versions"
and then work off it.
like try one angle, maybe "it" will come to you!
And you can do that for all three versions, if you don't find "it" before then.

[Destiny9910]

my Advice, Go With The One That Will Surprise The Readers!

[Destiny9910]

hey, people who here has actually had any writing matriel published?

[destinysmiles!]

I have an idea about a Nick Jonas fanfic and Tiffany Giardina -one of his supposedly BFFs- nothing about love, it just about Nick diabetes and the place where he is, "Health`s Ville" lol :P
It`s about he going to that place (Health`s Ville) and Tifany visiting him and yeah his diabetes, wich means... i gotta investigate

just a question ville isnt the same that village or comunity, right? just wondering cause u now im not from an english speaking country

oh and it kinda supposed to be creepy, if you have any ideas for the tittle please tell me cuase my idea is"See you in Health`s ville"

-Ashley

[adolphin]

how bout
Meet me in Health`s Ville?

[cupcake]

I wanted to make a new one, but like... I already have way too much. :P
I'M WARNING YOU; CONTAINS TOKIO HOTELNESS. SO YAH. DON'T SAY I DIDN'T WARN YOU. the ff is basically gonna be about TH. [:
So, yah;

Casey Joy rushed through the hallways of the white streets, the so called "Hospital". She hurried and looked for her best friend's room; Bill Kaulitz's room to be exact. She soon gave up, and asked a nurse.
"Hi, um, I'm looking for Bill Kaulitz's room. And if you could tell me, like, possibly NOW, that would be great!" She chimed.
"Oh, um, yes... down the hall, last door on the left." The nurse, Sarah, replied. She followed her directions exactly, and barged into Bill's room. He was waking up from a coma, she believed.
"Bill... Bill?" She asked sweetly, putting her hands on his arm.
"Casey...? Where am I?" Bill asked, putting his hand on his head, as if he had a HUGE headache.
"You're at the hospital... because you were in a car accident..." She replied.
"Oh... really?" He asked.
"Yeah, really." She replied.
"Can you just take me back to campus?" He asked.
"Of course!" A doctor came walking in. "We'll just bandage you up and you're free to go."
"Cool," Casey said excitedly.

Aaaaand... that's all I have so far. :P

[mileyboo897]

^^ i like it, veronica.

well, i know i'm in the middle of writing my 'sincerely, AUSTRALIA' story, but this idea came to me...i probabley wouldn't write it right away, since i'm not exactly great at keeping up with two stories, but i would write it.
the place i mention is a really place back in texas. i go there all the time so it's all true and stuff.

i wrote a prolouge:

Growing up in a little town in the middle of Texas, wasn't exactly the future I'd hoped for.
Neither was being surrounded by 6 other males, and no mother.
But, no matter how horrible I may think my life was, there was always an upside.
My upside was June 26, 2008.
That was the day of the Parson Family Annual 'Pick 'Em and Edom' Day.
My whole life, I'd lived near a farm.
Not a farm with cows and sheep but a farm, that was filled with blueberries.
BlueberryHills Farm was absolutely my favorite place in the whole world.
And June 26, made it even more special than I'd ever imagined.

and then a first chapter:



"Dad, do we have to go?" groaned my brother Evan.
"I mean really Dad, picking blueberries is beyond retarded." mumbled Braidon.
Fred protested, "It's girly!"
"Only little kids go these days, anyways." Cris said, crossing his arms.
Darren yelled , "I'm going to leave and never come back if we go!"
I was the only one to not complain about blueberry picking.
Only because I knew it was what my mother loved to do.
And though, it was my favorite thing, I did it in her honor.
"Anna. Are you going to say something?" Asked my father.
I leaned back in the front seat of our van and stayed silent.
It was hard growing up with 5 brothers and only a dad.
Yes, all of those crazy boys are indeed, related to me.
Fred was the oldest. Then Evan, Darren, Cris, and then Braidon.
Braidon was my twin.
Lucky me.
And I, well, I was Anna. Anneliese if you want to bust out the full name.
It was kind of funny, how our names worked out.
The way my mother wanted.
She'd started out with naming Fred with an 'F', hoping she'd have enough children to go down from the alphabet.
Looks like her wish came true.
Obviously, mine didn't if I got stuck with these idiots everyday.
I loved my brothers, I really did.
But because of the 'manliness' in my house, I'd turned out like them.
I was into boy stuff.
Which, frankly, I hated.
So, I continued to sit in silence as my family argued about going to Blueberry Hills.
"We're going because Anna wants to go!" My dad screamed, slamming on the breaks and turning around to face the boys.
I jolted forward, almost hitting my head on the dashboard.
The car was hushed.
He turned back around and continued driving.
I looked at the angriness in his face.
Blood rushed through his veins.
My father scared me half of the time.
He wasn't gentle, like a father should be with his daughter.
He was just one of the boys.
As I saw the turn in for the farm up ahead, I rolled my eyes.
They were fighting again.
Millisecondsafter we parked, I jumped out and slammed the door, making my way into the red barn.
"Welcome back to Blueberry Hills, Anna." Said my good friend, Sarah, who worked there.
"Cut the act, Sar. It's only me." I said, laughing at her.
She handed me a large basket and kept smiling.
"I'm supposed to say that to everyone."
"But. I'm your best friend you don't have to-"
"Welcome back to Blueberry Hills, Parson family." She said, smiling at my brothers who'd walked into the barn.
They all nodded and rushed off to try the free samples of jam.
I rolled my eyes.
"I have a break in an hour." She said, shuffling through her pockets.
"Meet me back here for lunch...Darn it, where is my chap stick?"
I laughed at her.
"Sure thing, bye Sarah." She waved her hand, as I walked away.
I walked out the back door of the building, heading towards my usually isle.
"Nine...Nine..." I mumbled, looking at the posts.
"Nine." I smiled, walking down the row of blueberries.
I headed to the middle, hoping I'd find the ripest ones there.
I picked randomly through the next half hour, thinking about how my 16th birthday was only in 3 months.
I didn't want anything huge. Just something with my family, and Sarah. And maybe a few other close friends from school.
Before I knew it, my basket was already half full.
I moved closer to the end of the isle, humming the tune to my favorite song.
I looked around swiftly, making sure no one was there, and began to sing.
"We are broken...What can we do to restore...Our innocence..." I sang through the chorus of We Are Broken by Paramore.
Every so often, I would sing random parts of the song, always making sure no one heard me.
I came to a really big bush.
I set my basket on the ground, dropping plump berries into it.
I started singing again, a little louder.
I actually ran through the entire song.
"You're really good."
I turned around, my foot knocking over my basket.
Behind me I saw a curly haired boy, smiling.
I blushed and bent down to pick up my berries.
He bent down as well, helping me put the small spheres back into the basket.
His hand brushed mine slightly, causing me to look up at him.
We locked eyes, and he smiled.
His chocolate brown eyes sparkled.
He held his hand out.
"I'm Nick."



c&c? it's kind of a work-in-progress.
also, could anyone help me with a title, should I post it after my other FF is done?

[( soulmates )]

You have have have have have have have have to post that

[mileyboo897]

thanks, adri(:
haha. i probabley will sooner or later.
idk how sincerely, AUSTRALIA is gonna work out, cause ideas for that one are a bit tricky, this one is more based on a place i know really well, and frankly, a topic i know really well..
whoa, weird.
i smell chocolate chip pancakes...
random. anyways, i'll put it up soon.
anyone have a name idea?

[adolphin]

Kylen!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You Have To Post It!
If U Dont I Will Dieeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[destinysmiles!]

how bout
Meet me in Health`s Ville?

hm... i`ll consider it :P

[adolphin]

haha
k
thx!

[destinysmiles!]

haha
k
thx!

thnx me? NO! Thnx you! :lol:

oh and this is bit of my maybe new ff, not excellent, not even good, is...bad :lol: no yeah actually it is, i WILL edit it, i just want to know if any one had more ideas to make is creepier or any advices :P

I entered with the sound of my heels into a yellow room that looked very used and waited for the receptionist. It took like forever until the receptionist came.
“Hi lady, what do you need?” said the apparently 40 years old woman
“Well I came to visit a friend-“
“We don’t have visit dates, actually visits here are prohibited and it just interrupts the patients’ treatment, I’m sorry, but you may leave now” she said fake-smiling.
“Well, excuse me, but from what I can read in this pamphlet you can actually visit them, Mondays, Wednesdays and all week long” I said with a winner’s smile
“Who gave you that?!” She asked disgusted leaning on the counter
“my friend`s family”
“Ugh” she said under her breath
“Now I’m sorry, but can I see Nick Jonas?” I asked, and she better say yes, because I didn’t come here to hear a “No” and less from her…
“There aren`t any Nicks in the list, I’m sorry, but you may go now” she said thinking she would trick me
“Then what about…Nicholas Jerry Jonas?” I asked her kind of tilting my head to the right.
“If I leave you look at him, will you go?” she asked rudely
“Yes, of course” I said, Big lie, I won’t, not until talk to him
She groaned, and later we were walking towards the section K-C.
Then she just left me there on another office…. What an obnoxious person-
“Hi! I`m the one in charge of the section K-C, I`m Kasey” she said smiling, she just looked like one of those persons that don’t stop smiling and freak you out.
“What a coincidence!” I said trying to…. Actually I don’t know what I was trying to do, because a convo wasn’t in my mind, maybe just forget the scaring things
“Actually no, they only hire people with the sections names” she said smiling creepily again, and now THAT`S weird, the fact that she just said.
After Kasey creped me too much I could even puke I was walking alone to Nick`s room, kinda sad I must say, there were a lot of people sitting out in “bancas” staring at the “nada” making me feel sick…
What kind of place is “Health’s” Ville?!
Time later I was in Nick`s room.
“Hi, Nick” I said softly side smiling walking into Nick`s room while he was looking at the window.
“You are interfering with my treatment” he said coldly still looking at the window
“What?”
“Interfering with my treatment, oh yeah must I say-“he cleared his throat “So long not seeing you! I`ve missed you! Well not gonna happen, bye”
Now this was … nonsense! Where is the Nick I know… this can’t be Nick, I think I just opened the wrong door and-yeah that must be it.
“Uh, sorry, I think I opened the wrong door, sorry again” I said starting to walk to the door blackguards looking at him
“Not the wrong door, the wrong time”
“What?” I said turning around and starting to walk towards him again
“Yeah, I’ve been here for 2 months and I haven’t seen you in 3 years, looks like you “got it all” and forgot me”
“Excuse me?! Forgot you?! I did NOT! I haven’t, I`ve been very busy lately and nobody told me you were here! All the media knows is that you are on a tour in England! And that you are sick and that`s why nobody have seen you in two MONTHS!” I said
“I`ve been worried about you…” I said, I wasn’t prepared to see a changed Nick, well a changed one: yes, another person with the same name, but different personality: no. He wasn`t him at all, he got from an INHUMANE, TOO KIND person to an BIG rude, cold JERK, not what a bff might think of a little change, eh?
“…but Jen told me-“
“Jen told you NOTHING! Just TONS of lies!” … “…and by the way who`s Jen?” I said changing my voice tone
“You know the woman with a HUGE smiley smile” he said smiling like an innocent kid
“Smiley smile my dog!” I sat next to him in his bed.
“Look Nick I`ve got questions… and I want answers” I said seriously
He did a head movement which was the sign for me to start asking him… asking him about what I can call Hell`s Ville… and him.

[mileyboo897]

ohhh. i like it. ^^

[( soulmates )]

Wow. That was good.
It captured my attention.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Introduction

"I hate this life," I said. My manager sighed as I rushed around my dressing room.
"You're a famous actress Alexz, why are you so mad?" he asked. I slammed down my brush.
"I'm in a cage. Under the paparrazzi's microscope. Everything I DO IS ANALYZED!" I cried. My manager sighed. He had had enough of my ranting all week. He exited the room and I looked at my vanity table.

I knew what was in that drawer and I didn't want to tell my manager about it. It was my cover. I checked the door to make sure the manager was gone before I threw open the drawer. There it lay. My key to freedom.

I picked up the wig. So realistic, I could've blended in anywhere. I inspected my bright red locks and then threw the wig on.

I was now Terra Freyman. My alternate ego. I could go anywhere, do anything, and the media or anyone for that matter wouldn't look at me twice.

Alexzandria Paul, ultimate superstar was no mas. I was a free citizen.


Alexz meets Joe Jonas as Terra with the wig on and she likes him. They start dating, but Alexz's superstar life gets in the way of Terra things. It's kind've a mix between Hannah Montana and that movie, "Model Behavior" on Disney Channel.

What do you think? Lame idea?

[adolphin]

haha
yeshhhhhhh
:07:
srry rong smilie
:D:D:D:D
THAT MEANS IT IS GOOD, NOT BAD!

[destinysmiles!]

ohhh. i like it. ^^

Wow. That was good.
It captured my attention.

my idea? or anothers person's post :P

[( soulmates )]

Alexz meets Joe Jonas as Terra with the wig on and she likes him. They start dating, but Alexz's superstar life gets in the way of Terra things. It's kind've a mix between Hannah Montana and that movie, "Model Behavior" on Disney Channel.

What do you think? Lame idea?


ugh why is everyone coming up with good ideas!!

my idea? or anothers person's post :P
yea, it was yours :P

[destinysmiles!]

yea, it was yours :P

oh, then thanks! :lol:

[Cheerleader111]

Kevin


In my twenty-one years of life, one of the most important things that I've learned from my father, is that standing up for what you believe in is a great gesture. It's simply more satisfying in the end, and also, it's self satisfying knowing that you gave it your all. In basic terms, I was most definitely applying this to the 'reforming of the Jonas Brothers' situation because yes, this is what I believed would work best. However, the flaw in this plan was that my brothers and I had the exact same father. Which means we all believed that what we fought for was the right thing. Which, of course, resulted in the sixth argument this week.

Not only was this bad news and poor behaivor for three grown guys to be arguing amongst themselves, but it was just general rudeness considering the fact that all three of us were battling it out in a room full of executive producers. And as if that situation weren't bad enough, what we were arguing about...had nothing to do with the actually meeting of these people.


allison, i have no idea what they should be arguing about now
i'm thinking that maybe they're arguing about who should get the
lead role out of the girls so we can flash to the girls sizing up the
competition next. but ALSO, i was wondering which pov should
go first. kristin's or kevin's? :o i'm soo confused, this is why i keep
erasing :P

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm well.
Maybe they could be arguing about whether or not to go through with this whole transformation thing.
Then Nick or Joe can mention how there are hot girls outside who they would get to spend time with through the project.
A typical guy remark, oOo maybe Joe could say that half kidding, then Nick could get mad and storm out.
Then Kevin forces Joe to go apologize which gets kevin out of the room and leaves Kevin in teh room alone with the execs.
Hmm idk,
you could have Kristen's, then Kevin's, then Adris or Leslies, then Nick's, and then the last girl{adri or Leslie's} pov would start with the sizing up the competition and then yeah Joe and Nick enter towards the end of her pov or beginning or middle

[Cheerleader111]

ok, i completely understood what you
were saying until all of those povs. O: why do i need
so many?

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

idk how many you were planning
i jsut felt like throwing in 15 million
just for kicks and giggles

[Cheerleader111]

oh my okay :P
lemme finish this up then, and i'll post the complete pov
version[:

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

Yay!

[adolphin]

thnx me? NO! Thnx you! :lol:

oh and this is bit of my maybe new ff, not excellent, not even good, is...bad :lol: no yeah actually it is, i WILL edit it, i just want to know if any one had more ideas to make is creepier or any advices :P
OMG I LUF ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You should post it!

[Destiny9910]

awesome idea

[destinysmiles!]

OMG I LUF ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You should post it!

gee THANKS! :P i never thought it would be that good :D

[adolphin]

of course it is!
You r a great riter!
everyone is!

[destinysmiles!]

of course it is!
You r a great riter!
everyone is!

thanks! and yeah i agree, everyone is a great writter :D

[adolphin]

bummmpppppp???

[Curly]

I have a half idea
I didn't really write any of it but I have the idea
...I'm going to write some then post...
and I don't feel like writing so...
It's about a girl named California Hills, she used to be a popstar, but she stopped and became a spy...

[Destiny9910]

hmmm that title is good.
or something like Living In The Shadows
or Shadow.
blech idk
'
i have a ff called Hiding in teh SHadows

[MileyRox1174]

I have a half idea
I didn't really write any of it but I have the idea
...I'm going to write some then post...
and I don't feel like writing so...
It's about a girl named California Hills, she used to be a popstar, but she stopped and became a spy...

hmm...i like it :]
then again, i like anything to do with spies and action xD
i have like, a guy's mind sometimes, lol.

sayy...can i maybe co-write it with youu?
it sounds interesting and i'd be happy to help :]
PM me...no wait, i'll PM you ;]

[Curly]

It's sorta J.O.N.A.S. style

[Lexy106]

Hola todos!

I sorta got this idea for a FF...It's kinda...Idk, I just thought of it and thought it was interesting...ANYWAY! Back to the point...=P

Here's a small intro:



The world witnessed what Stella McCarthy insists is just an accident, nothing special or serious.
Life is twisting, turning, and tugging Stella in all directions.
And it’s all because of that stupid video.


tell me what you think? :)

[MileyRox1174]

whoa, Lexy, when i read that, i got the wrong picture in my head xD
you don't even want to know...all i can say is it has something to do with videos and celebrities xD

i like the idea though, besides what popped up in my mind initially :]

[Curly]

whoa, Lexy, when i read that, i got the wrong picture in my head xD
you don't even want to know...all i can say is it has something to do with videos and celebrities xD

i like the idea though, besides what popped up in my mind initially :]

Yeahh what she said:))

[Lexy106]

Hahaha, nooooo.

The video is of this girl and it looks like she's pushing someone out of the way of a bus, which makes her looks like a hero. Then all this other stuff happens and then there's a twist...can't tell anyone the twist but...yep, hahaha

[MileyRox1174]

ooh yeah, that's cool. you should write it :]

[Curly]

Yeah it is cool. Write it, I needa read it.

[Lexy106]

haha, okay. I'm getting all my ideas together so I don't get stumped half-way through.

[lilxangel]

I think someone should do a Miley and Mandy fan fiction. Sort of the same vibe as iCarly. Technically, anyone can use this idea. Not many people have done this, and I think this would be a rockin' Fan Fiction.



This sound really cool!

[adolphin]

I think someone should do a Miley and Mandy fan fiction. Sort of the same vibe as iCarly. Technically, anyone can use this idea. Not many people have done this, and I think this would be a rockin' Fan Fiction.
cough cough
you wanna know who?
YOU!
duh!
hahhahaaha
cowriteee?

[Curly]

I feel like writing a FanFic where they're all superheroes. Should I or is it too fictional?

[destinysmiles!]

I feel like writing a FanFic where they're all superheroes. Should I or is it too fictional?

i think u should, i mean these r fanfic, fan fictions, wich means we can be watever! :P the jonas gf, a deer, ect

lol i remember i was a deer once in a ff :lol:

[Curly]

Someone should also write a Renee Yohe FF

[adolphin]

What about a...Myia and Nick FF?
Lyk, not a relationship, just...their friendship!
I would like to write an FF lyk that!
But what do u guys think?

[mileycyrus#1fan14]

sounds good to me!! i'd read it!

what about a miley and joe jonas story. like joe and miley start to like each other, after nick and miley's breakup, and they start to date. nick doesnt like miley but gets jealous of joe and miley and then goes back after her, reliazing he really does like her. then she'd have to choose.

would anyone read that?

[SmileyMiley11]

:o I would read that [:

[mileycyrus#1fan14]

cool!! im gonna start writing it l8ter!!

[Destiny9910]

that was kinda
my idea for my ff's,
We're In Love, But Ho'll SPill the Beans Triogies

[munchkingirl822969]

I'm thinking about writing a fanfic about the gang life.
No bad language. Nothing graphic.
I'm always reading fanfics that are really good, but, I want to do
something different.

Here's the introduction:


They think they're all that, wearing the baggy jeans and over-sized shirts, matching
they're friends and walking like cholos and gangstas.
Stupid posers.
They don't know what it's like to be in a gang.

They're just wannabes', trying to be cool and make you think they're in one.
They don't know what it's like to sit in your bed awake at night, waiting for someone
to throw a brick through your window, or break in and shoot you and your family.
Do they know what it's like to take the life of someone innocent just to be in the gang?
Once you get in, you can't get out.
You think you want in, but you don't.
That was my mistake.......and here's my story.


What do you guys think?

[~*GirlzRule*~]

I would read that! ^^

[munchkingirl822969]

Okay cool!
I already have the first chapter written.
I'll post it. = )
I would read that! ^^

[~*GirlzRule*~]

OK! Cool

[MileyRox1174]

I'm thinking about writing a fanfic about the gang life.
No bad language. Nothing graphic.
I'm always reading fanfics that are really good, but, I want to do
something different.

Here's the introduction:


They think they're all that, wearing the baggy jeans and over-sized shirts, matching
they're friends and walking like cholos and gangstas.
Stupid posers.
They don't know what it's like to be in a gang.

They're just wannabes', trying to be cool and make you think they're in one.
They don't know what it's like to sit in your bed awake at night, waiting for someone
to throw a brick through your window, or break in and shoot you and your family.
Do they know what it's like to take the life of someone innocent just to be in the gang?
Once you get in, you can't get out.
You think you want in, but you don't.
That was my mistake.......and here's my story.


What do you guys think?


i like it.
go for it :]
i don't know if i'd read it (no offense), but it's different and you should totally try it :]

[bananax3]

ok, i just really wanted a ff that kind of
captures what it's like to be a celebrity under the microscope
and everything, so me and allison decided this was the route
that i should take. tell me what you think?[; it's a prologue :P

The craziest thing about celebrities, is that they all have something in common. They all started out like you. Normal, going to school, having parents, learning from mistakes. The craziest thing about me is that I now qualify as one of those celebrities. Yes, I was like you. Although it may not seem like it now from the tabloids and articles on my ridiculous, mortifying, and embarassing behaivor; I started off at a normal high school. I had normal friends. I can't say that I persay was normal, because I, out of everyone at my former high school, was the only one that regretted ever having to take a driver's license test--but we'll steer clear of that subject for now. Believe me, we'll get to it later.

What I'm getting at is that, I was exactly how you are now. I was like everyone. Boring. Goody-goody from a small town in Alabama. I wasn't popular--but I wasn't unpopular. I wasn't a genious, but I wasn't an idiot either. I was normal. Stuck in between. A nobody--but somebody to a certain standard. I was average, and then my life changed from uncreative to pretty schnazzy in pretty much sixty seconds flat. I didn't mind the makeup, the glam, and the attention as much as I should have. I actually enjoyed it. Which may actually be where my famous downfall began.

It actually seems like everyone on this earth is interested in the rise and fall of the famous Alexandria Nicole Mcdowell. People--friends, family, strangers. They all talk about me like I'm some sort of expierament gone wrong. Everything I had done once before as a perfect teen idol had been put under the microscope, but now it felt like that times ten. People were waiting for me to screw up again. It amazes me everyday how many famous people know my name, like the President for example. You'd think robberies, gangs, and wars weren't being held within our country with the way he talks about me. About me because I'm 'the perfect example of the tragedy to represent american youth'. Yes, he said that. About me.

Everyone wants to know how this all went down. How everything happened. How the best thing in my life turned into just one big mess with me & the paparazzi in the middle of it. Well, believe it or not, the whole thing started off a little less scandolous then you would think. It started off like any other day...ten times worse. Because, yes this is right you get to hear my fatal story, it started off with me testing for my driver's license.
[SIZE=2][FONT=tahoma]my golly. :D
i <3 it!
hahaha... i wish i
was THAT good.

[bananax3]

can anyone help me to come up w/ a new ff idea? btw.. :D

[chloeeXjonas]

anyone ever get on here anymore?

[Curly]

I have an idea-ish. And I think nobody gets on here.

[adolphin]

what is the ideaaaaa, mandiiii!

[Curly]

Idk, it’s something about them all having a super power, idk, I’m working it out. If anyone would like to help I’d appreciate it.

[huskerrich]

I know we had a RPG on that premise but i think it fell flat

[Curly]

Hello, dead thread. Does anybody post her anymore?

[destinysmiles!]

Hello, dead thread. Does anybody post her anymore?

well like not much now

[destinysmiles!]

anyways this is not a ff, but an idea, n i make enphasis, not for a ff!

I mean we should try to check out other ffs, the ones that have few comments, cause sometimes they turn out to be the best ffs and sometimes like they dont get much comments they quit early! Which is horrible and Im not exagerating. Cause I mean remember when you first came to the forums and made a ff, almost nobody read it! Then you would pout, be sad, be depressed, then emo stage and then no more fanfic. Well maybe I`m kind of exagerating with the emo stage, but really try considering reading others people fanfics, the ones with few comments, not for me, not you, for them and actually yeah you :P

Well that`s all :D

[RandomCrystals]

I'm thinking about writing a fanfic, I've never done one before.I probably post it on
fanfiction.net, so yah.I was think about doing a Sweeney Todd fanfic.For those of you
who have never seen or heard of it, it's the most amazing movie to me and I lovett!

Basic NONSPOILER Summary
A innocent man is sent away from his family for a crime he didn't commit.When he
returns home after many years he learns of what has become of his family and he
wants revenge.He never forgives, never forgets.His neighbor becomes his accomplice
and they are keeping a secret from London.

I'm going off that story for those who have never seen it, AMAZING MOVIE, I recomend it.
It's a Tim Burton Film, what more could you ask for.PLUS it's on HBO all this month!

For those who know what I'm talking about I'm thinking of picking up from WHAT IF,
Anthony had not interupted Mrs.Lovett and Mr.Todd. Could Mrs.Lovett ever convince Sweeney
to forget the past and live his life.A possibly totally twisted continued plot.

The problem is, I don't know where to start how to really set up my fanfic.Is there a
certain way?Not too sure about this, any tips.What inspired me to write one is the
Sweeney Todd fanfic Public Affairs & Obsession, anything by funkyflamingo on fanfiction.

So...

[new_york_girl]

Hey does anyone use this anymore? If not I might post this in another thread.

But I got an idea for a Christmas Fanfic, but I might more like sound like a movie.

My idea:
Some people LOVE to spend time with their family's on Christmas and the Hoildays, whell not Stacey. Stacey has been staying away from her family on the Hoilday. Well appearently it's going to change because Stacey gets a call saying it's really important that she comes down for the Hoildays this year. Stacey doesn't want Tom, her new boyfriend to meet her crazy, insane family. But since she told him about it, he was all for it, he wanted to go, because he is a family kind of guy. How bad can it be to bring your new boyfriend to meet your family?

On the other hand, her family is insane, falling apart, Stacey's teenage sister, Roseie, is about to run away. Stacey's mom has a drinking problem. Stacey's dad left her mom, when she was 13, and they never heard from him since. Stacey's grandparents are livng with her family too, they are your normal old couple, who fights with each other, but it doesn't hurt their relationship, they are the only normal people in the family. Her teenage brother got his girlfriend pregnant. What else could go possibley wrong?

Christmas is the most happyiest time of the year. Can Stacey handel being around her family? Can she last threw the family drama? Would it scare her new boyfriend, Tom away?

[V-ball Baby 101]

I have a idea for
a stroy but I doubt anyone would read it

[new_york_girl]

post it.

[NancyDrew]

Does the fan fic have to relate to Miley or any other person on this forum? I wanted to write one about Nancy Drew, but I'm not sure if that's allowed.

[Hannahfan_eva211]

^ no it can be anything you want ;)

[NancyDrew]

Okay, thank you, Kam! :)

[Hannahfan_eva211]

anytime kara ;)

[tanningbry]

Can you post your fanfics from youtube on here? That's what I plan to do when I get my account...

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

i want to write a fanfic, but i don't know what to write it about.
if you have any ideas, please pm me.

[inluv]

okay, so I am writing this FF (I haven't posted it yet) which is kind of like Twilight but idk what I want to title to be. can anyone help me with that?

[new_york_girl]

This is stuck in my head and I can't get it out!

I got this idea from the movie called My Best Friends Wedding. But I am dropping the wedding part, pretty much changing it up a bit, but it stills have the whole I am falling for my best friend plot line.

So here is the plot:

Selena goes back to her small hometown, to restart her life, her life in the big city, lets say sucked. She thought it would just be a good idea to hang out with old friends for a while to find out who she really is. But one thing throws her a curve ball, her best friend Jake is going to ask his girlfriend to marry him, because Selena kind of realizes she has feelings for her old best friend Jake. She plans to tell him how she feels before it's to late. Can she pull it off though or will everything go wrong and blow up in her face?

[huskerrich]

sounds great bailey, I hope you or someone will run with it:)

[new_york_girl]

i'll run with it.

[Destiny9910]

bnothing :{

[blovehannah]

Just-posting!!!!

[new_york_girl]

i have this issue, i think richard knows about it, ff ideas are poping in my head left in right, so kind of something kind freaky friday, i have that idea in my head. lol.

[new_york_girl]

if anyone want to use this for a title you can idk it sounds title worthy:
Your Mama Don't Dance and Your Daddy Don't Rock 'n' Roll

[Destiny9910]

lol dat es funni!
i am writing a love story i dreamt of last night. i hope u guys like it ;]

[cupcake]

if anyone want to use this for a title you can idk it sounds title worthy:
Your Mama Don't Dance and Your Daddy Don't Rock 'n' Roll
:o I might use that.
That is, if it's okay with you. ;)

[To Roam 2018]

Hey I’m new to this... but I have an idea for an ff... It’s called
2 months
its about a 18 year old girl who is very ill and she has been in the hospital for as long as she can remember with a rare heart condition, the doctors find out that she only has 2 months to live, so her mother decides to take her home for her last chance to live her life like a normal teen… and that’s when she finds her love of her life… but she doesn’t tell him about her condition… so she only has 2 months to tell him how she really feels about him and she only has 2 months to spend time with her love of her life……

I have more but I don’t want to give it away....
So what do you think? Should I start it or what?
;)

[flyonthewall2]

omg you have to start!!! i love it

[PeKa_96]

i got 1 idea

Miley and Nick are together , but what will happen when someone tries to end their relashionship ? When new girl comes to school everything will change . There will be love , hate , fights , apologies , forgivness and a lot more . Are Miley and Nick strong enogh to stay together ? Is their love true ?

do u like it ?

[MileyFan_4_Ever]

Would Anybody Read A McFly Fan Fiction??

[tanningbry]

Hey I’m new to this... but I have an idea for an ff... It’s called
2 months
its about a 18 year old girl who is very ill and she has been in the hospital for as long as she can remember with a rare heart condition, the doctors find out that she only has 2 months to live, so her mother decides to take her home for her last chance to live her life like a normal teen… and that’s when she finds her love of her life… but she doesn’t tell him about her condition… so she only has 2 months to tell him how she really feels about him and she only has 2 months to spend time with her love of her life……

I have more but I don’t want to give it away....
So what do you think? Should I start it or what?
;)
That sounds like 'A Walk to Remember'! You should really start it, unless you already did...I'm gonna check.:P

[adolphin]

mmk
This idea just kinda
popped into my head
what if it has to do with one of the Jonas Brothers
and it has Miley in the beginning
and the Jonas Brothers are Jewish
and they all get shipped to different concentration camps in 1941?
haha
Im really interested in the holocaust
(:

[cupcake]

OK, I just had this REALLY weird idea.
I had the idea that this girl, Dani Well, is seriously rebellious.
She wants to drink, get tattoos, etc etc., EVERYTHING. Her mom and dad tell her she can't, because she's too young, and yadda yadda, but then, when they move from Miami to Chicago, she turns into a "good girl".
Her mom and dad are proud of her, but she's turning into this "good girl" against her will, because of her new best friend, Samantha Good.
And then she has to choose between staying in Chicago and being a "good girl", and going back to Miami with the two thousand bucks she got for Christmas, and being her old self (btw, her aunt & uncle & favorite cousin live in Miami, too).

So... this is what I have so far ;P

“Dani,” her dad grunted. “You’re not old enough.”
“And you think I care? Dad, just give me the money! I’m fifteen, I think I know what I want to do with my life, okay?”
“Dani, I don’t care! Don’t make this any more stressful than it already is – we’re moving to Chicago tomorrow and we’re seriously busy trying to get the last-minute stuff done. Oh, and by the way; we’re going to stay at a hotel tonight, because there are no mattresses, and I’m not sleeping on the couch with your mom.”
“Okay, that’s fine! But… what if I just got a tempo. tat?” Dani insisted.
“NO, DANIELA! NO! You’re sure as heck not old enough to even drink!”
“I don’t care! I want to do this stuff! Sure, I’m a bit ahead of my time, but maybe if you and mom were good parents, you guys would respect that and, instead of SCREAMING at me, help me out with this stuff!”
“Well, then we’re NOT good parents!” her dad yelled.
Dani crossed her arms, and huffed impatiently.
“Look; its ten-thirty at night. Just go get your suitcases and put them in the car. We’re going to the hotel, now.”
“Why now?”
“BECAUSE IT’S TEN-THIRTY AT NIGHT, AND I’M A HECKA SLEEPY!!”
“So? It’s not all about you, you know?!”
He sarcastically grinned. “I know it’s not all about me, BUT I’M THE ONE WHO MAKES THE MONEY TO PUT FOOD ON THE TABLE! NOT YOU, NOT YOUR MOTHER; ME! IT’S ALWAYS ME! I NEED TO DO EVERYTHING!”
“Shut up, you old man.”
“Dani, you have irritated me to my boiling point. JUST GO GET IN THE DANG CAR, CHILD!!”
Dani rolled her eyes teasingly. She liked making her father mad. “Whatever, you loser.”
She walked to the front door, opened it, went outside, and then slammed it.
On the street curb was their car. Dani climbed in the back, where she was asked why she took so long, by her mom.
“You know… complications.”

[Curly]

I like it. ^^

[PeKa_96]

me 2

[tanningbry]

What about this idea?:

Waking Up in Vegas

Miley gets taken away and wakes up in Vegas where the Dollhouse is.
They tell her that she's going to be a doll for a while.
So, she becomes a doll and Miley has a different name and everything.
The people at the Dollhouse have programmed her brain or whatever to work with this guy, but she has to betray him at the end.
But what happens when she falls in love with this guy (Nick Jonas)?
Will she betray him or save him from being turned in?