`to me you’ll be {forever} SACRED ♥ // whether you l.i.k.e it or n.o.t

[MileyRox1174]

`to me you’ll be {forever} SACRED ♥ // whether you l.i.k.e it or n.o.t


OMIGOD YOU GUYS!
New fanfiction time!

You all demanded it after the final chapter of my threequel
"don't call me an underdog just because I'm small"...
And I listened! So here is Lauren's (me) newest JB FF!
(Sorry, no plot or intro given ;))


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JONAS BROTHERS:
Kevin, 20, Nick, 15, & Joe, 18. You know who they are.

THE GIRLS:
Samantha, 15, is one of the nicest people you will probably ever meet. Though she does have flaws and is a klutz.
Caitlyn, 16, is pretty headstrong. Mess with her friends, you mess with her.
Amanda, 16, & Ashley, 19, are sisters, three years apart. Girly, pretty, super-sweet.
Hallie, 14, is younger than the rest of the girls, but smart and talented. She can think on her feet and is very creative.

OTHERS TO NOTE:
Elizabeth, 15, is Samantha's twin sister. No, she's not evil; but can be persuading if you fall under her "spell" (no, it has nothing to do with magic).
Mitchie, 18, is usually pretty shy, and only comes out of her shell if she feels safe and confident. But she has interesting quirks that no one knows about.


♥♥♥

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let's go back, back to the beginning. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2058933&postcount=11)
you can't always get what you want. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2060813&postcount=32)
how do I put this delicately? (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2060923&postcount=42)
boy genius? (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2064838&postcount=53)
flying monkeys?! (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2064942&postcount=57)
tough guy. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2065178&postcount=67)
when you look me in the eyes and tell me that you love me…you’re lying. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2065882&postcount=72)
i was there. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2067164&postcount=82)
who's elizabeth? (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2067646&postcount=96)
"them". (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2067763&postcount=104)
choose wisely, "indiana jones". (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2068029&postcount=110)
good? bad? (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2068317&postcount=113)
action movie. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2068317&postcount=113)
what are you doing?! (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2070036&postcount=119)
i have a dead rock star right here. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2070187&postcount=134)
i wanted to know. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2070294&postcount=139)
miracles do happen. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2070395&postcount=142)
THE END.

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Thanks, and enjoy!

[MileyRox1174]

4 comments to post the first chapter :)

[cupcake]

:o TH! :P
HAHA.
Well, can't waittt. =]

[MileyRox1174]

Haha yeah, 3 more comments.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

muy interesante.
postness

[MileyRox1174]

Muchos gracias.
:P
Dos comments.
(Spanglish :lol:)

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahahaha nice.
spanglish all the way

[MileyRox1174]

Definitely :P
Guys, I need those two comments :)

BTW, unlike my past FFs, these chapters will have titles, not just "one" or "two", etc ;) Random and probably irrelevant, but whatever.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hmmm interesting...
xD

COMMENT DORKS!

[cupcake]

Okay. Mas. [:
Now where's Allison to say the other 'mas'? :]

[MileyRox1174]

Haha here, I'll just post the other chapter now since I'm bored and feel like being nice ;) A/N: There are Tokio Hotel influences in this chapter :P


let’s go back, back to the beginning.

Life has a way of throwing amazing opportunities in front of you, and taking them back when you reach for them. Just like love.

Love stinks.

I’m sitting here, alone, in my room. Nothing to do but read this letter.

Dearest Nick,

I don’t mean to hurt you, but we can’t date anymore. It’s great that you’re “back”, but I feel as though it won’t work out and you’re just another one of those boyfriends that will last for a few weeks, months even, and then hurt me like all the rest. It would be illogical to stay together. Now, I do love you, I really do, but I can’t be near you anymore—it’s confusing, yes, but you have to learn to forget me. By now, I’ll be gone—long gone—and you won’t know where I am, so don’t bother looking for me, you will not find me; there is no way to find a person who isn’t even living.

That was it. The last line was long. Confusing too. I mean, what kind of a person says that they’re not living?

Oh wait, SHE does! Ha, what an idiot I am! Okay, sarcasm is not helping right now.

Alright, I’m starting to assume that you’re getting confused, am I correct? Let me explain everything from the beginning…

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“Nick!!” My at-the-time girlfriend, Samantha, squealed upon seeing me. I ran up to her and hugged her tight.

“It’s so great to see you again!” I said. “We have so much to catch up on.”

“Like…this?” She asked, and then leaned in. Her lips crashed into mine and we stood there kissing for a few minutes.

“Yeah, like that,” I smiled.

I slipped my hand into hers and intertwined our fingers. We went into another room backstage and sat around for a while, talking and being all cuddly. And when I was summoned onstage to rehearse was when it all went wrong.



COMMENT PLEASE :)
Next chapter...hm...tomorrow.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

ok why is the song reminding me of a song?
that is gonna bug me.
Post more!
I hat ehe whole revealing one part that doesn't make any sense, and then going back to the well begining xD
very good...now more =]

[MileyRox1174]

Haha, it's from the song "Come Clean" by Hilary Duff ;)
Thankies! More comments please :)

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

AHHH THAT'S IT!
I was singing it and blah that was going to bug me for ages.

[cupcake]

^ Wow, Allison :P
I haven't listened to Hilary Duff in AGES, and I remember that XD :P
Well, anyways, mas!! :D

[MileyRox1174]

LOL :P

Anybody else?

[PinkRubberDuckie]

whoah. write more, lauren = ]

[MileyRox1174]

More tomorrow...so in the mean time...more comments?

[adolphin]

more!
Come Clean
Used to be my favorite song
I looked at the title and was like, that reminds me of something
then u said it was come clen
and I went on youtube, and listened to it
and Im like
wow
anywayz MOREEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
EDIT:
It is tomorrow!
so rite!
EDIT'S EDIT:
OMFPDKJNFJ!!!!
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz get onnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

[moonrainy]

more!

[mileyfanforever101]

pshh,
lauren you are not gonna go post a chapter on
me then not post another one.
grr.
write more.
or i stalk youuu.
be scared.
very scared.

[ilygracie]

LOl, love it,
more pleasee

[Jasmine]

more!

[MileyRox1174]

LOL guys, it's not summer for me, so I have school :P That's why I didn't post at...what, 11 this morning Michelle commented?! :lol:

Next chapter soon.

[adolphin]

lol
my bad
but now u r back!
and it is 6:01 PM
and u can rite!
right?

[MileyRox1174]

Ha, we live in the same time zone :P

I'll write right now ;)

[adolphin]

:P
lol
I lif in Indiana
:lol:
yay!
EDIT;
btw, Indiana SUCKS!
the only good thing here, is indianapolis, and I live more near Richmond
I can't say MY city on her, cuz we are really close to when you go into the city
it is small

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

pfft.
excuses, excuses
xD

[MileyRox1174]

Psh be quiet :P I said I was writing...and now all you people are doing is distracting me. Tisk, tisk.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahaha
thats what we are here for xD

[adolphin]

^lol
psshh, yeah, that is our job!
lol
rite faster!!!!!!!
jk jk
lol

[MileyRox1174]

you can’t always get what you want.

I didn’t sleep that night. All I did was stare out at the stars…sigh, just like Samantha and I used to do. Used to do. When that tragic thing hadn’t happened.

When Kevin came into my room the next morning, my eyelids were like lead. But I couldn’t close them…I wouldn’t. And no one could make me.

“Nick, you okay?” He knocked lightly on my door.

“Guess,” I answered sarcastically.

“Miss her?”

“No…I miss what we had.”

“Bro, you can’t always get what you want. Heck, I haven’t had a girlfriend in a long time and you don’t see me whining about it!” He replied, sitting on the edge of my bed.

“Oh, stop with all this corny nonsense. You know I loved her. I loved her more than I’ve loved any of my girlfriends…”

Kevin noticed the letter on my side table and picked it up. His eyes scanned it and before he said anything, I knew what he was going to ask.

He opened his mouth, but I said, “Yeah, yeah, I don’t understand why she said she was dead either, okay?”

“Maybe something happened to her. You know, when…that…happened.”

I sighed. “Maybe. Or maybe it was because of what happened. Because of me.”

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The next thing I remembered was waking up in the hospital room. But it was only for a second. I saw a bright, blinding space filled with white, and then nothing again.

My eyes were shut tight and they wouldn’t open. I tried to open them, but ended up falling into a deep sleep.

Deeper than I had planned.



COMMENT PLEASE :)
More tomorrow...or later if I'm feeling extra generous and nice :D Haha.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

....
wh-wh-WHAT?
post more
like now.
no joke.

[adolphin]

ooohhh
scary
kreepy
MORE!

[Jasmine]

omg.
what happened?
i am curious....
please be genorous??!!

[PinkRubberDuckie]

i'm confuzzled (omfnj awesome word!)
lol please write more = ]

[MileyRox1174]

Not to worry, I'm feeling generous tonight :) I'm writing a few more chapters and stuff and then I'll post another one, promise :)

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

okay im confuzzled but I LOVE IT!

[MileyRox1174]

^^Yeah, it's supposed to be confusing right now :P You'll understand more in the next chapter.

[adolphin]

OK< Samantha, is like mad at Nick for something, like that she thought that he was different from the other guys, but he is not
and then she rites a weird letter to him
then she gets hurt?
yes?

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

ok time for next chapter!
xD

[MileyRox1174]

Michelle: Eh, not quite. You'll see, you'll see. I have a point, I'm just taking longer to get to it :P Here's the next chapter:


how do I put this delicately?

Kevin patted me on the shoulder and left my room. I fell back onto my bed, a loud breath escaping from my mouth. No one else came into my room that morning. So I forced myself to close my eyes, at least for a few minutes.

I saw the white room. I saw the people walking frantically around me, whispering inaudible words. Then I saw my parents and my brothers, crying and hugging in the corner of the room. I saw Samantha take one look at me, lying on the bed unconscious, stare for a few seconds and leave. I saw my almost-lifeless body and saw the concentration in my mind to force my eyes open and move. But it failed. It failed and I saw myself falling into oblivion…

I awoke when I felt my head smash into the floor. God, that hurt.

But wait…what was that dream? Was that…when…OMIGOD.

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** JOE’S POV **

I stared a Nick’s body, lying almost lifeless in the white hospital bed. I had already cried myself dry—yes, I’m not afraid to show emotions—and couldn’t stop thinking about what could…or would…happen to Nick. I called an unoccupied doctor over.

“Excuse me, doctor, but what happened to Nick? Why isn’t he awake? What’s wrong?” I asked as calmly as possible.

“Oh, no one told you?” He looked around at me and my family. I shook my head. “Well…how do I put this delicately?...he’s…he’s in comatose.”

“WHAT?!?!” I yelled. All the nurses and doctors stared at me, and I felt myself turn light pink. They went back to their work and then my parents and Kevin came over to ask what was wrong. I told them, and they all had similar—but mute—reactions.

“So…he’s…he’s in a coma? For how long?”

“It’s hard to tell…maybe a few weeks, months, maybe even a few years. He might even never wake up, you know.”

“B-b-but…but he…he has to wake up…I won’t let him die!” I stated nervously and furiously.

“I’m sorry, sir, but there’s no way to control it.”

The doctors and nurses all left the room. My parents, Kevin, and I walked over to Nick’s bed.

“Hey, buddy,” I said quietly, patting his arm. “Please don’t give up on us, okay? Please don’t. We love you and need you.”

I stared at the screen which monitored his heart rate. I watched the steady rise-and-fall motion of it.

I didn’t want that to stop.



COMMENT PLEASE :)
More tomorrow...or later, if I'm feeling extra super generous :D

[Jasmine]

more!
please
post more

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Please dont make me cry. God, TELL US WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM! And more pweaz.

[mileyfanforever101]

moreeeeee.

[mileyfanforever101]

OMG!
It's like almost 9 there.
Write more now.

[moonrainy]

omg more! :o

[mileyfanforever101]

moreee.

[mileyboo897]

lauren dearie.
you've lost me.
what happened???

i guess you wont spoil the plot so i'll just say this:
moreeeeeeeee.

[lilxangel]

mores

[adolphin]

plz don't kill him
you'll make me cry
:(
:'(
Don't kill Kylen's Boyfriend!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

-cough-
WHAT?!
NOOO!
WAKE HIM UP!

[MileyRox1174]

Hehe sorry guys...I was busy ALL DAY yesterday--at school (and outside for the entire day), at a volleyball party for a few hours, and then babysitting for a few hours. I had absolutely no time to get on the computer...but here's the next chapter! Haha it's weird.


boy genius?

I stayed on the ground for however many hours that morning. I didn’t care, I didn’t want to get up. And no one could make me.

When my mom came in asking if I wanted breakfast, and then later, lunch, I refused. I didn’t want to eat. And no one could make me.

Next, Joe and Kevin came in, wanting to hear my input on a song that they wrote together. I declined. I didn’t want to hear any music other than my own beating heart. And no one could make me.

Finally, Frankie came in. I decided to let him stay, since, I mean, he’s only 7.

“Nick, what’s wrong?” He asked.

“It’s grown-up, stuff, Frankie.”

“But I understand grown-up stuff, Nick. I want to help.”

I looked up at his big, brown eyes. They sparkled, reminded me of myself when I was his age. Always wanting to help and be a “grown-up”. I relented.

“It’s just…I had a dream last night.”

“What kind of a dream?”

“A bad one. And…it reminded me of…when you-know-what happened.”

“Okay, so what happened in the dream?”

“I saw the hospital room. I saw the doctors and nurses walking around frantically, tending to whatever my body needed. I saw you, Joe, Kevin, Mom, and Dad crying. I saw myself, almost dead, trying to open my eyes but not being able to…and then I fell. That’s when I woke up down here,” I explained, hitting the ground.

Frankie nodded his head. “Maybe you have something that’s bothering you. What’s bothering you?” Dang, this kid is smart.

“Samantha…she wrote me this letter…and said she was dead. I don’t understand,” I answered, pointing to where the letter was. Frankie picked it up and read it.

“I don’t understand. Maybe you should try being more social?” He said, a chuckle escaping his lips.

“Ha, thanks Tank. I’ll get back to you on that,” I winked, obviously sarcastic. He smiled, put the letter down, and left the room.

“’What’s bothering you? Try being more social?’ What is this kid, a boy genius or something?” I asked myself. I let the thought go and stood up, hearing the doorbell. I checked myself in the mirror to make sure I was presentable to whoever it was, and stood in my doorway, about to go down the stairs.

I saw Joe open the front door, followed by Kevin. Then I thought I saw a girl’s head…it looked like black hair. With blonde streaks though, so it couldn’t be Samantha.

But then I saw the face, and my mindset changed.

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** JOE’S POV **

It’s been three weeks. Nick’s still in his coma.

Guess this means the Jonas Brothers have to go on hiatus for a little while. At least we haven’t had anything to do in the past three weeks.

I sighed. Nothing positive has come out of this yet.

Suddenly I heard a light knock on the door. It was Kevin, and he walked in with someone.

“Hey Kev…who’s that?” I asked, pointing to the person behind him.

“Oh, Joe, this is Elizabeth.” The girl waved.

“She looks an awful lot like—“

“Samantha? Yes, she’s my twin,” Elizabeth replied.

“Evil?”

“No, silly. Neither of us is evil…well, maybe she is, but that’s just my opinion,” she laughed.

I didn’t know why, but I felt suspicious and odd around her. “So, Elizabeth—“

“Please, call me Lizzie.”

“Alright, Lizzie…what happened to Samantha?”

She got a scared and sad look in her eyes and shook her head. “I have to go,” she said quickly. She dashed out of the room without another word.

“She seems nice,” I lied.

I don’t trust her. I don’t trust her one bit.



COMMENT PLEASE :)
More later or tomorrow.

Hehe okay, this chapter is extremely confusing, I know. I just read it and I'm like, "What the heck?" so I thought I'd explain it to you.

So, in the present-day, Nick doesn't know who Elizabeth is, only Joe and Kevin do. Joe and Kevin know her because when Nick was in a coma, Elizabeth came into the hospital room and met them and then they all became "friends" (haha you'll see) later on....get it? :P If you don't, sorry, but you'll understand it more soon I guess.

[hannahlover2007]

Hm... confusing..yes..
but oh well.. I like cunfuzzling.
Anyways..More.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

confuzziling but more!

[PinkRubberDuckie]

whoah. i'm so confused >_< '
please write more lauren!

[MileyRox1174]

Haha here's the next chapter:


flying monkeys?!

I stood there at the top of the stairs, staring, when Joe noticed me and looked up at me.

“Nick? OMIGOD you’re out of your room!!” He said the last part in a high-pitched preppy-girl voice.

“Yeah, yeah, shut up,” I replied. I hesitated. “Is that Samantha?”

“Oh, no, this is Elizabeth. Samantha’s twin.”

That’s when I reunited with my best friend, the floor, again.

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** JOE’S POV **

It’s been 3 months. I’m starting to think Nick’s going to…never mind.

“Joe, you okay?” Kevin asked, putting a hand on my shoulder. I stared at Nick in the hospital bed with tears in my eyes, shaking my head.

“He can’t. I won’t let him!”

“I’m sure he’ll be fine.”

“Then why hasn’t he woken up?!” I turned to Kevin.

Kevin just stared back at me, equally upset, but not showing it, I could tell. He wanted to be the big brother and help me in this situation, not the other way around.

“I…I don’t know, Joe. Honestly, I don’t know.”

I looked down, apologetic. Then I looked back up at Nick, thinking I saw him move.

But it was just my imagination. Great, now I’m hallucinating…what’s next, flying monkeys?!

Then I saw it again. And this time, I KNEW I wasn’t hallucinating. But Kevin didn’t notice…he pulled me out of the hospital room, and I could’ve sworn I saw someone move in that room.

Someone or something.



COMMENT PLEASE :)
More later or tomorrow.

[PinkRubberDuckie]

yet, i'm confused again.
please write more

[hannahlover2007]

OMG>>>wow..Lauren that was very interesting..
lol Love the flying monkeys..hehe

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

I'm seeing flying monkeys rite now. Im confused but its great!

[Jasmine]

very confused...
more

[moonrainy]

confused....
its like theres 2 different stories...
one with Nick in a coma and another one Nick not in a coma...
more!

[MileyRox1174]

LOL what is there to be confused about? The first story within the chapter is present-day, and the second story is when Nick was in a coma. What's so hard to understand about that?! :P

More later. I'm gonna go clean my room. It's a pig sty :P

[moonrainy]

oh... now I get it :P

[hannahlover2007]

lol.. I get it now.. it's kinda like it you take chapter 1 pt. 2
and put it with chapter 2 pt. 2, you get chapter 1 of nick in
a comma... kinda..lol

[adolphin]

flying monkeys?
lol
NICK IS AHLIVEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You DIDN'T kill Kylen's BF!
whoo!

[MileyRox1174]

tough guy.

Kevin and Joe rushed upstairs to see if I was okay. No, I’m dead. No freaking DUH I’m okay!

They picked me up off the floor. “You okay?” Kevin asked. Ugh, WHAT did I JUST say?!

“Sure, let’s go with that,” I answered sarcastically.

“Look, dude, what’s up with you these days? Ever since Samantha—“

“Samantha?” I heard the girl say.

Kevin looked down the stairs at her. “Yes, Samantha…Nick dated her.”

“IT WAS YOU!!” The girl screamed at me, pointing.

“What was me?!” I asked frantically. “WHAT DID I DO?!” I probably looked like I had seen a ghost…no, better—a freaky girl pointing and screaming at me!

Then I heard the front door slam. Perfect, another girl walking out my door. Not that I liked her for screaming at me. But she was the closest thing I have to Samantha.

And DO NOT say I’m still in love with her…because I honestly have no clue.

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** JOE’S POV **

“Kevin, dude, listen…I think—“

“Joe, Nick didn’t move. That was me.”

“Wait, how did you know I was going to say that?”

“I’m psychic,” he said sarcastically. “I know you, Joe. When you have something on your mind, it shows.”

“Right…so—“

“He didn’t move. Trust me, I didn’t see anything.”

I didn’t mean to say what came out of my mouth next. “Then you need your eyes checked!”

Kevin looked at me with an angry expression, his eyes bugging. I saw his contact lenses from how close he was to me.

“WHAT did you just say?!”

“Uh…uh…I need to go to the eye doctor.”

“That’s what I THOUGHT you said.” Jeez, when did he become such a tough guy?

Kevin drove us home in silence. I didn’t want to add to the tense air, so when we got home, I just went right inside. Evidently I had been running, because I hit something—no, someone.

“Sorry,” I mumbled. I started walking away when the person grabbed my arm. “Look, I said I was—hello there,” I said, almost-flirting at the end.

The person who had grabbed my arm was a girl. She had curly brown hair and short, but full, bangs. Her eyes were big and brown, and when she smiled at me, her teeth were bright (and also big, but not in a bad way).

“Hi,” she replied. “I assume you’re Joe, right?”

“Yes, I am. Joe Jonas. That’s me. What’s your name?”

“Mitchie.”

“Mitchie no-last-name?” I joked.

“Mitchie Torres,” she laughed. “I just moved in next door, and your parents invited me over.”

“Cool,” I said, smiling. “Let’s talk.”

I led her into the living room and she sat down on one of the chairs, while I took the couch. “So tell me about yourself,” I said.

“Like what?” She smiled.

“Just…anything. Your age, etc.”

“Alright, well, I’m 18 years old. I sing, play guitar, write songs, and dance. I have two sisters, one older, and one younger. My mom is a caterer. My dad…” Her voice trailed off and she lost the bright smile she had had on her face before.

“Your dad?”

“He…well…”

“Never mind, it’s okay if you don’t want to tell me.”

“Okay…um…where was I?”

“You just told me about your mom, and didn’t tell me about your dad. Anything else interesting about Mitchie Torres you’d like to tell me?” I asked.

She smiled again. “Hmm…I don’t think so. Oh, wait; I’m a HUGE fan of you guys!!” Mitchie said, referring to us as the band, the Jonas Brothers. “What happened to you three?”

“Oh, um…well, I don’t know how you’re going to take this but—“

“YOU BROKE UP?!”

“No, no, we didn’t break up. But, Nick…he’s…he’s in a coma.” I bit my lip.

She stared at me like I was crazy. I nodded my head and she got all wide-eyed and shocked.

“What happened to him?!”

“He fell off the stage when we were rehearsing one day…three months ago…and must’ve hit something that triggered it…honestly, I have no clue about anything related to that kind of stuff,” I laughed a little at the end.

She was completely solemn, and then said, “I hope he gets better soon. Want to go visit him?”

“I just got back with Kevin, but sure. I’d actually like to investigate something over there while we’re there.”



COMMENT PLEASE :)
More later or tomorrow.

P.S. I'm ending this soon...I spend WAY too much time on the computer, and most of that time is spent writing FFs. Sorry, but only a few more chapters of this, and then it's over.

[mileyboo897]

lauren, woman you've so lost me.
it's intresting though...
like..a stoy inside of a story..
ohhh.
my brain just like..attacked me.
i DON'T think nick moved.
i think it was something else.
someone else.
ahhh. smart.
-taps head-
yesss.
bahah.
i don't know, i'm just thinking things.
(:

[PursePrincess4eva]

i LOVE it!
moreee!

my fav line:
That’s when I reunited with my best friend, the floor, again.

bahahaha.

[adolphin]

WHAT?!?!?!?!?!
You start it, and then u r just gonna end it?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
plz Lauren, nooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

you confuse me oh so much.
just thought you should know xD

[MileyRox1174]

LOL I'm so sorry guys...I don't mean to confused you, but that's basically the point. I mean, it's supposed to be confusing :P Hehe.

Here's the next chapter:


when you look me in the eyes and tell me that you love me…you’re lying.

“Since when do you know Samantha’s twin?!” I practically screamed. “How long have you known her?!”

“Only for a few months…we met her when you were in a coma.”

“Oh, so you didn’t bother like, waking me up?! Was Samantha with her? Cause if she was, I swear, I’m gonna—“

“She wasn’t.”

“Oh…she…she didn’t come visit me?”

“Not that we know of…Elizabeth didn’t say anything about it. Whenever we mentioned Sam, she would always run away. It was odd.”

“Just my luck.”

“Sorry, dude.”

“No, it’s not a problem. At all,” a sly smile crossed my face.

“Nick?” Kevin asked suspiciously.

“Yes?” I asked, still smiling.

“What do you think you’re doing?”

“Nothing. Nothing at all,” I nodded my head and walked back into my room.

“Alright, that kid has SERIOUS problems,” I heard Joe say after I left.

“Yeah, I’m confused,” Kevin agreed.

“Don’t worry, fellas, I won’t do anything TOO drastic,” I called out to them from my room.

“That’s just what we were afraid of,” Kevin mumbled, inaudible to me.

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** JOE’S POV **

Mitchie has her license, so she drove us to the hospital (yeah, I still don’t have mine).

“Where do you want me to park? In the parking lot or out here?” I eyed the parallel parking spaces and looked back at her.

“Don’t rub it in,” I scowled.

She giggled and drove into the parking lot. She parked the car and we got out. I could’ve sworn while we were walking to the hospital, she was flirting with me. Well, then again, I was flirting with her too, so…yeah.

I opened the door for her, being the gentleman that I am, and she walked inside. I followed, and we found Nick’s room. I opened the door to it, and then just about had a heart attack when I saw someone in there messing with Nick’s IVs.

Samantha.

She saw me and tried to run out the door, but I stopped her. “What are you doing here? What were you doing to him?!”

Samantha only looked me straight in the eye and said, “Goodbye.”

She pushed her way through me and Mitchie and ran around a corner, disappearing as if in thin air. My immediate reaction was to run inside and check what she did to the IVs. Nothing seemed wrong, but just to be sure, I called a nurse in. She checked them too, and said everything was fine.

I think my blood pressure rose when I saw something written on Nick’s arm.

“When you look me in the eyes and tell me that you love me…you’re lying”

What a stupid thing to write, right? Mitchie noticed it too, and rubbed my arm a little to comfort me.

Then I jumped back. Nick’s arm. It…it moved. And this time, I was positive, because I felt the movement with my own hand.

I walked closer to him and his eyelids fluttered. His mouth opened slightly and his hand squeezed the bed. Nick opened his eyes, and saw me standing over him. He looked surprised.

“Joe?! Is that you?” He asked; his voice low and hoarse.

“Yes, yeah, Nick. It’s me, Joe. How you feeling?”

“Better, actually. How long have I been asleep?”

“Eh…3 months.”

“3 MONTHS?! WHAT?!” He yelled, shooting up in his bed.

“Nick, Nick, calm down, your blood pressure is high enough as it is!”

A nurse walked in and was astonished. She did some stuff (I wasn’t really paying attention) and thankfully took the IVs out of Nick’s arm. As she did so, I saw him looking at what Samantha wrote.

“When?” He asked quietly as the nurse left.

“Just a few minutes ago…Mitchie and I walked in and saw her in here and then she ran out like she was being chased.”

“That’s Mitchie, right?” Nick asked, pointing to her.

“Yes,” I replied.

“So why did Samantha write this?” He asked, pointing to his arm.

“I don’t know…”

“But I DO love her. Why can’t she understand that?”

The nurse walked in and said Nick was free to go whenever he wanted to. He nodded and she walked out of the room. Nick just sat there and I noticed something out of the corner of my eye.

Jet black hair and piercing blue eyes staring into the room. “Dude, we should…um…probably get out of here.”

“Why?”

“I…I don’t know. I just…something isn’t right.”

“Okay then, weirdo,” he said, getting out of the bed. I looked back at the doorway and saw nothing again. I helped Nick out of the room, Mitchie following.

And just when I thought we were clear of Samantha, she showed up right in front of us like a ghost. We all gasped in shock and then sighed when we saw her.

Nick’s eyes were sad and angry. He stared into hers. “I love you, Samantha. I really do. Why don’t you believe me?”

She stared back into his, and then squinted hers. “You stole my heart, you dirty crook. Now give it back,” she said, holding out her hand. Nick looked confused.

“What are you talking about?”

She groaned and stared him down for a few seconds. Then she flicked her hair back and ran away again.

“Dude, THAT’S why I wanted to leave. Let’s just go,” I said, tugging on Nick’s arm.

He nodded his head and Mitchie came up next to me. I looked at her and smiled. She did the same. And right before we got to the car, we heard something.

A bloodcurdling scream. And it sounded like Samantha.



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[MileyRox1174]

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[mileyfanforever101]

OMFJJ!
That was amazing!
That chapter!
You need to write moreeee!
OMG!

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

uh oh. write more!

[PursePrincess4eva]

OH MY!
moreeee

[adolphin]

creepy
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[Jasmine]

more!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

i get chills from the last line.
masness

[PinkRubberDuckie]

I'm. so. confused.
Yay Nicholas woke up!
lol, write more lauren = ]

[moonrainy]

Is Samantha evil?
more please!!

[MileyRox1174]

^^Hmm...that's a good question :P Haha...no, she isn't evil ;) Next chapter:


i was there.

I will find out just what happened to Samantha. I will, I will, I will.

Wait…shouldn’t I already know? I thought, flicking around a piece of paper on my desk. I was there, after all.

I was there.

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** NICK’S POV **

“We have to go back, we have to go back!!” I half-screamed frantically to Joe and Mitchie. I tugged away from Joe and stood there for a few seconds, screaming random things at them.

I ran inside, not caring if they followed, and ran to where I thought I heard the scream. Then it all became clear.

Samantha had been running away from me, but also from someone else. That’s why she was always dashing around every time we started to talk.

I walked closer to the scene of the crime, turning a corner just before it, and just about had a heart attack when I saw what happened.

She was on the floor. There were stains all over her clothing, and there was a huge, dark red puddle underneath her; her hair was practically swimming in it.

I ran over to her, making sure to stay away from the blood, and stroked her face—the only place that didn’t have blood all over it. I looked into her eyes, which were wide open. Isn’t it creepy, looking into a dead person’s eyes? You can almost see the fear, or whatever emotion they were feeling at the time of their death, in them. As if they were still alive.

A tear fell from my eye onto her cheek. But then it rolled down, into the puddle of blood now surrounding Samantha. I had to stand up to avoid it, and I walked a good distance away from her. Suddenly I felt someone tap my shoulder. I spun around; thankful it was just Joe and Mitchie.

“I’m so sorry, bro,” Joe said quietly, opening his arms for a hug.

“Me too, Nick. It’s horrible,” Mitchie agreed.

I refused the hug. “No, it’s not your fault. It’s mine. Purely my fault.”

Just then I noticed something taped to the wall. I ripped it off and read it. I just about fell over, and Joe had to catch me.

“What? What’s wrong?!” He asked.

“Let’s…let’s go home...”

I felt like I was going to throw up, but thankfully didn’t. And when we got home, all I did was run up to my room and slam the door in anger.

I refused the knocks at the door, begging and pleading to come in. I didn’t want to talk. And no one could make me.

No one could make me do anything. Not now, not ever.

And this is where everything went downhill.

Downhill, like right after you get to the peak of a roller coaster. What goes up, must come down.



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[HannahMontanaismyhero]

oh no what happened!!!!

[PinkRubberDuckie]

whoah!!!!! what did the note sayyyyyyyyy!!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Anybody else?

And are you guys making connections now? Haha I sound like a teacher...but if you read the last few lines of this chapter (the "no one could make me" parts), they are just like the beginning of this chapter (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2064838&postcount=53)...so, what does that mean? Basically that means that the past is tying into the present sooner or later ;) Get it? :lol:

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

wow ur smart.

[PinkRubberDuckie]

ahhhh. lauren your making my brain hurt, and it's summertime >_< '

[MileyRox1174]

Haha thanks, and sorry...hehe it's not summer for me yet :( Not until next Monday, the 23rd.

[adolphin]

I don't care if it is confusing or not, just don't kill Nickolodeon!
lol
Poor Nick, losing his ex-girlfriend, that way!
:(
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[moonrainy]

what happened?? :o

[PursePrincess4eva]

I've been reading since the beginning, but i am a wee bit confused.
can you like give me a summary?

[MileyRox1174]

Haha it's hard to give a summary, but I'll try...

So basically, Nick was dating this girl Samantha, who he really loved. Then one day, at a soundcheck, Nick fell off the stage and something happened (yeah :P) and he was in comatose. There's this "background" behind Samantha that you'll find out soon, but basically, she was being chased by someone and could never talk to the Jonases or stay with them for very long. So she'd always disappear. And then when Nick finally woke up, they were about to leave the hospital when they heard a scream. Nick ran in and saw Samantha, dead, on the floor, and a letter taped to the wall....you'll find out more in the next few chapters, I guess.

Hehe sorry, I'm not good a summaries :P

Anybody else?

[adolphin]

no offese, but it would have been hard to summarize it anyway!
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[MileyRox1174]

None taken, I completely agree :P

[adolphin]

lol
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[MileyRox1174]

Alright, alright, here's the next chapter:


who’s elizabeth?

I felt my stomach twist in ways I never thought possible. I remembered what happened to Samantha.

I remembered. I was there.

It was all too much, so I opened a drawer of my desk. A paper fluttered out. It’s not like me to be messy, so I picked it up and read it.

My stomach basically came out of my mouth when I read it. This was the letter from when Samantha died.

2 years ago.

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** NICK’S POV **

“Nick! Nick! Come on, bro, get out of your room! You’ll waste away in there!” Kevin yelled through my closed door.

“Go away!” I yelled back. “I don’t care! Just go away!!”

“Fine,” he replied. “Have a nice life.”

I fell back onto my bed with a loud sigh. Another tear fell from my eye. I stole yet another undeserved breath.

After a while of just lying around being depressed, I picked up the letter again. I read it carefully.

Nick,

I knew this would happen. Please, don’t try to find who killed me. Please. If you do, there will be consequences, and I don’t want anything to happen to you. The reason I wrote what I did on your arm was…I was being chased. By someone else. It’s hard to explain. Show this to Elizabeth and she’ll tell you everything.

I love you—
Samantha

“Who’s Elizabeth?!” I yelled.

Kevin and Joe came running into my room. “Um…we know her,” Joe answered.

“What?! You do?”

“Yes, she’s Samantha’s twin.”

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That’s when it hit me.



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Connection time! Now the past and present stories are tying together, so the next few chapters (and the last few, at that) will be ONE story, because it will be the present. Okay? Get it? Got it? Good.

[MileyRox1174]

Anybody?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

uuhh more! im still onfuzed

[MileyRox1174]

Well, basically, the next chapters will be JUST present-day; one story, instead of two. Get it? :P

Anybody else?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

oh. MY SEE BUTTON IS STILL NOT WORKING!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Your what button? I don't understand :P You mean the letter "c" button?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

c button its broken. i cant type c so i wrote it LOL

[MileyRox1174]

Haha nicee.

Anybody else?

[MileyRox1174]

Okay, I'm bored, so here's the next chapter:


“them”.

I squeezed my eyes shut, picturing the day that Joe and Kevin told me about Elizabeth.

I have to go see Elizabeth. I need to show this letter to her.

I ran downstairs and knocked into Frankie on the way. “Sorry bro!” I yelled back as I sprinted for the living room.

Joe and Kevin were lounging on the couches watching TV when I screamed, “WHERE’S ELIZABETH?!”

The looked at me with flabbergasted faces. “Uh…she’s probably at school or…something, right now. Why?” Kevin asked.

“I HAVE TO SHOW HER THIS LETTER!”

They raised their eyebrows. I groaned and showed them the letter. “Oh,” they chorused.

“What school does she go to?”

“I don’t know…well, what school did Samantha go to?” Joe inquired.

“Right, got it, thanks! Bye!”

I ran out, only remembering what the school looked like and not the name. I also remembered where it was. It was between two gigantic trees; one with Central Park on the other side of it, one with a skate park on the other side. I ran into the school doors, and sprinted up to the 10th grade (sophomore) floor. I noticed that no one was in their classes, so I ran down to the cafeteria. Just my luck, the 10th grade was eating lunch. I looked around and noticed Elizabeth’s black hair with blonde streaks, so I ran over to her table and sat down next to her.

She turned to me, startled, and then her friends stared. I began talking. “Elizabeth, do you know anything about this?” I asked, holding out the letter.

She still had a shocked look on her face, but then when she opened the letter and read it, her eyes were distant and sad. She nodded her head as she handed it back to me.

“Yes, yes I do…”

“What can you tell me about it?”

“Can we talk about this some other time? I’m kind of in school, and my friends,” she motioned around the table, “and I are eating.”

“No, I need to know NOW.”

I looked around the table, smiled awkwardly, and went back to Elizabeth. “Fine,” she replied. “But listen carefully, because I’m only saying this once.”

“I’m listening.”

She leaned in closer and whispered, “Samantha was being hunted by one of the world’s greatest assassins. Sounds scary, but she was also one of the world’s greatest assassins.”

My eyes bulged. Elizabeth continued. “She had no intention of killing you or your family though. She was actually off-duty when she met you. Sam fell in love with you—the one thing assassins are forbidden to do. So, they sent someone to kill her because she violated that. They followed her everywhere but our house, and she still went out in public because she loved you so much. And she always went to see you because the assassin could not kill her in front of you, whether you were awake or not. And when you left the hospital that day two years ago, she was vulnerable. They caught her and killed her right there.”

She leaned back and resumed her normal tone. “I’m sorry for overreacting like that a few days ago…but I didn’t know it was you.”

“It’s fine, and thanks for telling me…so what do I do now?”

“Well, now that I told you…you can’t do much about them.”

“Who’s ‘them’?”

“The assassins,” she whispered.

“Wait, does this mean—“

“Yes, you are their new prey.”

“Oh God, why didn’t you tell me that BEFORE you told me the story?!”

“Because, you wouldn’t have understood anything. Now go, I sense their presence around here.”

“Great, that helps,” I said sarcastically.

She nodded and her friends looked confused. She flicked her hand as if to “wave” the subject away, and I started walking to the door.

This is it. I could die in ten seconds. As soon as I open the door, I could be ambushed and killed just as quickly as Samantha was.

But nothing happened. I walked slowly for a minute, and then sprinted all the way home. I knew exactly what Elizabeth was sensing…I could sense it too now. “They” were near, and I had to escape them.

She said I would be safe at home, right?

Wrong.


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Confusing twist, eh?

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Okey doodles. Assasins, death, prey....I got it. I get it. Its cool. LOL MORE!! Dont kill Nicky doodles!

[MileyRox1174]

Haha anybody else?

[PursePrincess4eva]

Thanks soooo much :] for summarizing.

and now i understand!
scarrry though.
the whole assasin thing. XD

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[mileyboo897]

OMG.
bah. I just caught up.
omgg.
I was so right about Samantha being in Nick's hospital room.
That's what I was thinking in my last post..
Oh I'm goodd.
DON'T KILL HIM.
BAH.
nooo.
more, please.(:

[MileyRox1174]

Haha no problem, PursePrincess4eva ;) And thanks guys! Here's the next chapter:


choose wisely, “indiana jones”.

I ran inside, breathing heavily, and noticed that all four of Elizabeth’s friends had followed me home.

“Hello,” I said awkwardly, closing the front door.

“Hi, my name’s Caitlyn,” the first girl, with her brown hair pulled into a ponytail, said.

“I’m Amanda, and this is my sister Ashley,” the next girl, with blonde hair, introduced, gesturing to another girl next to her with blonde hair. They had a striking resemblance, but one was obviously older than the other.

“And I’m Hallie,” the last girl, with her black hair partially covered by a hat, said.

“So…you’re Elizabeth’s friends.”

“And Samantha’s…when she was alive,” Hallie answered.

“Oh, so you know what happened to her?”

“We trained with her.”

“Huh?”

“We’re assassins also,” they all said in unison.

My eyes bulged and I smiled awkwardly. “Great, more killers. So are you the ones that Elizabeth told me to stay away from?”

“No, we’re the ones Elizabeth said to stay as close to as possible,” Ashley said.

“What are you talking about?”

“The assassins are in your house right now.”

“Yeah, aren’t they you guys?”

“No.”

I felt the blood drain from my face. I couldn’t breathe. I looked around hectically and grasped the nearest girl’s arm, who happened to be Caitlyn.

“So what do I do?! Just sit here and let them kill me?! They could be anywhere!”

“Our point exactly,” Caitlyn answered.

“WHAT?! I thought you were supposed to protect me!”

“Yes, but we can’t fight our own comrades.”

I let go of Caitlyn. “Am I being Punk’d or something? I thought you just said you were the good guys!”

“We are, but we also aren’t.”

“HUH?!” I started hyperventilating.

“You can trust half of us. The other half is working with the assassins trying to kill you.”

“And you’re telling me this BECAUSE?!”

“Because you need to choose wisely. In life you make difficult decisions, and you have to know how to choose between life and death.”

“Great, so if I make a wrong decision I die. That’s nice.”

“Basically,” Hallie replied. I looked her up and down. She looked too young and small to be an assassin, but you can’t judge a book by its cover.

“So what happens if I choose one good person and one bad person? What happens then?”

“Then the good person will have to teach you how to fight the bad person.”

“Why can’t the good person fight the bad person for me?!”

“That’s just the way it goes. Now choose two of us.”

I looked at all four of them and bit my lip. “If it helps, I’m 14, Caitlyn and Amanda are 16, and Ashley’s 19,” Hallie said.

“Alright…um…I’ll take Hallie and Ashley, I guess.”

“Good luck,” they all chorused as Hallie and Ashley locked arms with me. I felt good having someone four years older than me, but not so good with someone younger than me. You know?

Caitlyn and Amanda disappeared into different areas of the house. I think I chose wisely, I thought. Let’s hope my Indiana Jones senses were correct.

“Are my brothers and parents home?” I asked as I looked around each room.

“No, they’re out to dinner for a few hours,” Ashley answered.

“I only get a few hours to live?!”

“Yes, sorry.”

Wait, a bad person would never say “sorry” as sincerely as Ashley just did. I’m 95% sure she’s a good person. But what about Hallie?

“Hey, I think we’ll be safe if we go into this secret tunnel we dug underneath your house,” she whispered.

SECRET TUNNEL?! Since when did they dig a secret tunnel?!

Oh well, if it helps me, I’m cool with it. I think Hallie is good too.

Let’s hope.



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Hehe I got the idea for "Indiana Jones" because I watched the 3rd movie today ("Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade") :P

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[HannahMontanaismyhero]

oh jeez, more assains! poor nicky! MORE MORE!

[MileyRox1174]

Haha I'm feeling really nice, so here's two chapters:


good? bad?

They dragged me outside and deep into the woods behind my backyard. We reached an opening, and I saw a huge slab of stone just sitting in the center of it. It didn’t look that suspicious, but considering I already knew there was a secret tunnel underneath it, I didn’t know what to think of it anymore.

Ashley and Hallie let go of me, making me feel vulnerable, and moved the huge rock. Man, they’re strong.

They dropped me through the hole, and Ashley followed. Hallie followed, but made sure to put the rock back on top of the hole when she did. There were three huge flashlights sitting on a rock inside the tunnel, and we each grabbed one. I locked arms with the girls again and then we turned on our flashlights.

With all three of them lit up, it looked like there was a floodlight or spotlight down here. It didn’t even look like a dark, scary, underground tunnel until you looked behind you or very far up ahead.

I looked at Ashley. She was 19 years old, pretty, nice, and an assassin. Unlikely combination.

Then I looked at Hallie. She was 14 years old, smart, nice, and an assassin. Seems more of a likely combination, but her small frame and sparkling eyes couldn’t possibly disguise her as a bad guy.

I think they noticed I was thinking about whether or not they were good, because we stopped in this little room with huge rocks (to sit on) everywhere. They sat me down on one and sat around me on two other rocks.

“Look, we know we don’t seem like assassins, but there is more to us than meets the eye. Don’t be thinking that just because we’re pretty, we’re good. Everything could change like the switch from on to off on this flashlight,” Ashley said.

I looked from her to Hallie twice. “But can you at least tell me one of you that is bad?”

“Out of us two, or out of Caitlyn and Amanda?” Hallie asked.

“Caitlyn and Amanda, I guess, if you can’t tell me about you two.”

“We can tell you about us two AND about Caitlyn and Amanda,” Ashley replied. “So out of us two, I can tell you that…I’m good.” I sighed. “Out of Caitlyn and Amanda…Caitlyn’s bad. But that’s all I can tell you.”

I sighed again, relieved I didn’t choose Caitlyn. “So what about Hallie and Amanda?” I asked Ashley.

“You’ll just have to find out yourself.”



action movie.

I took a deep breath and rested my head in my hands. Perfect, just perfect. This is like “P.S. I Love You”, only there are no letters—just lies, mysteries, and assassins.

Fun, I know. And I’m wrapped up in all of it.

Hallie looked around the room, studying something on the wall. I looked at her, trying to determine if she was good or bad. But like Ashley said, just because they’re pretty doesn’t mean they’re necessarily good.

But for now, I’ll be able to get the fact that I was thisclose to death off my mind. How, you might ask? Well…actually, I really don’t know.

Especially not with all that knocking and hammering. “What’s all the ruckus?!” I asked.

Ashley looked up and then around the room and back at me. “We’ve been breached.”

“Oh, come on, you’ve got to be—“

Just then someone dressed in all black ran in and knocked Ashley out. I sat there like a stone, my eyes bulging, when Hallie grabbed the other assassin’s attention. I used this opportunity to run. And so I did.

I ran out the little doorway, making sure to take a flashlight with me, and sprinted farther and farther down the tunnel. I tripped on something, and fell into shallow water.

I kept running and finally ended up having to wade waist-deep in water. Fun. I looked back when I heard a noise, and saw Ashley. I sighed and she plunged into the liquid, coming next to me.

“What happened back there?” I asked.

She shushed me a little. “Keep your voice down,” she whispered. “And I guess they found us. Our only hope is if we can find a way out this way.”

I looked at her like she was an idiot. “What are you talking about? You didn’t even think about this happening when you dug this tunnel?!” I asked quietly.

“Not really,” I saw her blush in the faint light of our dying flashlights.

“It’s okay…we’ll get out of here somehow,” I encouraged. She smiled. “Hold on, let me just try something.”

I waded over to a wall, and started feeling along it for any depressions or weaker areas. I felt a something push in a little when I put pressure on it. Just what I thought. I made a fist and punched that area as hard as I could. It—and a lot of the wall around it—crumbled and collapsed into the water. Ashley came over and patted me on the back as if to say “great job. never thought you had it in you,” and I went through the hole in the wall. She followed and we ended up in another room, but were still swimming in the water.

I looked around and found a large box sitting on a ledge. It was the size and shape of something that looked like a coffin or something you’d find in a pharaoh’s tomb.

And it was just that, only with someone more familiar inside.

I gave Ashley a confused look, which she returned, and then swam over to the ledge. I got up onto it, and Ashley helped me slide the lid off the box. What I saw made me almost want to drown myself in the water.

It was Samantha’s body. Only cleaner, and her eyes were closed now. Even creepier.

Ashley got up onto the ledge and looked at it, getting a suddenly terrified look on her face. That did NOT make me feel good. At all.

“I guess they’ve known about the tunnel all along,” I said with a suspicious tone.

Ashley looked away. “I promise you, I’m good. I swear on my life. I didn’t know they knew about this…maybe Hallie did it.”

“Wait, are you saying she’s bad?”

“I could be.”

“Just tell me.”

“No, you have to find out yourself.”

“You basically just told me, though—“

“Alright, alright, I’ll tell you. Yes, she is bad,” she whispered. “But you can’t know that yet. Are you good at fighting?”

“Uh…um…I don’t know, I’ve never tried it.”

“Just, take this,” she said, handing me a knife.

“And WHAT exactly am I supposed to do with this?” I asked, holding the knife a good distance away from me.

“Whatever you WANT to do, Nick. You’re in a real-life action movie. And you’re the main character. What do main characters always have?” She inquired.

“Bravery, courage, and great fighting skills? Oh, I get it. So I have all those things?”

“Only if you believe you have them.”

“I do!”

“Then let’s put it to the test. Punch me.”

“What? Are you crazy? I won’t—“

Then she punched me in the face. I looked back at her with an angry expression and she raised her eyebrows and shrugged her shoulders like it was no big deal. That made me so mad that I punched her right back in the face.

She didn’t look phased for a few seconds and then she rubbed where I punched. “Good, great…no, perfect.”

“I’ve never punched a girl before…”

“Then get used to it, or you’ll be dead by the end of today and probably in here with Samantha.”

I shuddered and nodded my head. Ashley got back into the liquid and started swimming away when we saw something bright and orange and red charging on the water.

“Fire!” I yelled over the roar of it. Ashley looked helpless, swimming in the heavy water, so I acted quickly.

I pushed the coffin into the liquid, Samantha’s body floating on the surface of the water next to it. The coffin was floating also, so Ashley held her breath and swam underneath the box. I jumped into the water and did the same, coming up for air underneath the box. There was only enough space to lift our heads out of the water, but it would have to do.

I knew we were safe under the box though, because the fire can only burn on the surface of the water. As soon as the whole room was engulfed, I decided to investigate a new escape route.

I held my breath and swam out from under the box, staying under the surface of the water. I looked around and saw what looked like a huge sewage pipe. I swam back under the box, coming up for air.

“I found a way out,” I said. Ashley nodded her head. “Take a really deep breath and get on my back.”

She did as I told her and I took a huge breath. I swam out from under the box and swam toward the sewage pipe. I swam through the murky and disgusting water in it, searching for the surface or a place to breathe. I was beginning to think we’d just drown in here when I saw a ladder on the wall. I was thankful there was no fire in here when we came up to breathe. Ashley latched her hands onto the ladder to stay above water and I started climbing. She followed, and I reached a manhole cover.

I pushed it away from the hole, and climbed out onto the ground. Ah, good old land. How I longed for it—but at least I’m a great swimmer. I pulled Ashley out of the hole and we stood on the dirt, catching our breaths for a few seconds. Then I heard yelling down below and pushed the manhole cover back over the hole as quietly as possible. I grabbed Ashley’s hand and we ran away from everything. As soon as we got to the end of the woods, I realized where we were. We were in the middle of town, near Central Park. I ran a little further and saw Elizabeth walking around in the park. I motioned to Ashley to follow me, and we both ran over to Elizabeth. She was startled when I tapped her on the shoulder, and then looked at me, disgusted.

“WHERE have you been?!” She asked, holding her nose for emphasis.

“We don’t have time to explain. Ashley and I—“

“Ashley? Why Ashley?” Elizabeth asked, looking behind me at her.

“Because I chose two of them, and she was the only one that made it out with me.”

“What are you talking about?”

“Ugh, I told you we don’t have time for this!”

“Alright, explain later. But what are you doing here?”

“Do you know any really great places to hide from assassins?”

“No, not really. You can’t exactly hide from them, but you can run from them.”

“So...?”

“So, you have to confuse them. Pretend to let them almost catch you, and then run. Maybe go on a boat, or a motorcycle or something. Anything. Confuse them and escape when they lose sight of you.”

“For how long?!”

“Well, their goal is to kill you. But if they fail to do that in a few hours—tonight—they’ll just kill me.”

“And I’m supposed to let that happen?!”

“Better me than you, honey,” she replied, raising her eyebrows. “Plus, they know I know more than you, so it’d be better to kill me.”

“So what happens after they kill you? They come back after me?”

“No, you’ll be fine. Trust me.”

“Alright, I’m trusting two people here. You, and Ashley.”

Elizabeth raised her eyebrows and looked away. “What?” I asked.

“Nothing, nothing,” she shook her head.

“Whatever. Gotta go. Thanks, and bye.”

I grabbed Ashley’s hand and ran. Ashley looked back at Elizabeth, but I couldn’t see the expression.

I guess I’ll have to wait and see what happens.



COMMENT PLEASE :)
More tomorrow.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

wow, long chapter but more!

[moonrainy]

wow! assassins :o
more!

[adolphin]

um, OK, now I think it is possible to summarize
lol
OK, one of them is lying, Elizabeth, or Ashley
most believeable is Elizabeth, which makes her the biggest suspect of lying
so, yep
lol
MORE!

[mileyboo897]

jdjkghagha.
once again, completely confuzzled.
sooooo.
well.
tomorrow?
kayy.

[PursePrincess4eva]

dudeeeee.
i totally loved those chappies.
<3

i love this line.
This is like “P.S. I Love You”, only there are no letters—just lies, mysteries, and assassins.
that made me crack up. XD

[MileyRox1174]

Haha thankies guys :) Here's the next chapter:


what are you doing?!

We stopped running after a long time to catch our breaths. Soon though, I noticed a person—no, a few people—dressed in all black, carrying knives, looking around for us.

“Now,” I whispered to Ashley. She nodded and we started running, not caring how much noise we made. We had already talked about what we would do when the assassins saw us, so we put that plan into action.

I ran straight to the beach, Ashley following close behind, and then we ran straight for the jet skis (like motorcycles on water, in case you don’t know). I grabbed one and pulled it into the water. I sat down on it and Ashley sat behind me, wrapping her arms around my midsection. I put my foot on the gas and started driving it out into the open ocean. I stopped and looked back, noticing the assassins had followed. Perfect, I thought. Just as I planned.

The only thing I DIDN’T plan was them having guns and shooting. They started shooting, but were very bad at aiming, so they thankfully missed us by a mile. Until one hit the handlebars of the jet ski, just barely missing my hand. And even better, now I only have one handle bar. I can’t touch the other one because it’s like, destroyed.

I felt Ashley reach into her pocket and take out a shotgun. But she didn’t point it behind us at the assassins. She pointed it at me.

“What are you doing?!” I screamed.

“My job,” she answered, pulling the trigger.

All I heard was the sound of the gunshot, and then nothing. My head fell onto the handlebars and the jet ski stopped.



COMMENT PLEASE :)
Another hugee twist :o

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

:O :O bad ashley. wow. more please!
i loved this line
and then we ran straight for the jet skis (like motorcycles on water, in case you don’t know)
funny.

[adolphin]

:o
SHE KILLED HIM!
YOU KILLED HIM!
I SHALL EAT U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
jk jk
but still
I want to cryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(
:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(
:'(:'(:'(:'(
:'(:'(:'(
:'(:'(
:'(
*cry*

[mileyboo897]

sdmfbqlkhgewrkgubnwljbhwlerfbnh.

SHE SHOT HIM?!?!?!
OMG.

LAURENNN. YOU KILLED HIM!

*sob*

I'm sad now.

more.

[adolphin]

Kylen, I am srry, but ur boyfriend is dead
:(
:'(
jk
not really
but STILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MORE!!!!!

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

I'm really sad now.

nobody shoots nicholas jerry jonas.

ashley seriously needs to be dead.

i wish she accidently shot herself. :(

but its good. so more.

[MileyRox1174]

Haha you guys make me laugh :P And not because I killed Nick, but yeah...haha, Mandy, that's funny "i wish she accidently shot herself" :P

More soon...I'm writing.

[mileyboo897]

^^
who ever shoots nicholas jerry jonas gets to mess with his girlfriend, yo.

*kung fu kylen*
YAWWWW.
wow.
i'm so corny.

EDIT;;
OMG SHE JUST SAID SHE KILLED HIM.

LAURENNNN.
*ATTACK OF THE FAN GIRLS*

[MileyRox1174]

Hey, hey, don't attack, don't eat me. Just wait. Alright? Can you guys have patience? :P

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

haha *kung fu kylen*
you make me laugh.

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

Hey, hey, don't attack, don't eat me. Just wait. Alright? Can you guys have patience? :P
haha not really.

and i don't think 'kung fu' kylen can either. lol

[PursePrincess4eva]

ashley.
you.are.going.down. XD

[mileyboo897]

kung fu kylen can NOT wait!
not if her boyfriend is on his death bed.

nahh. i can wait.
for a little while.
then i'll sick them fannys on you.

[adolphin]

muhhahahahaha
I guess we can
but not for very long
He is alive anyway
or else she couldn't rite another chappie
which she is!

[mileyboo897]

well you never know.
the next chapter might be his funeral!
okay know what?
i'm not going to think about nick's funeral right now...

[MileyRox1174]

i have a dead rock star right here.

** HALLIE’S POV **

Oh no, Nick’s not moving. Why did Ashley have to do that? He trusted her in every way, but she lied and killed him.

Oh yeah, by the way, Ashley told the whole story backwards. SHE’S bad, and I’m good. Yep, stupid Ashley. I can’t believe I’m friends with her. I can’t even believe I was dragged into being an assassin, too.

I drove my jet ski closer, fighting back tears as I saw blood drip from Nick’s mouth. He can’t be dead, he can’t be. I won’t let him die. I just have to get rid of Ashley.

“Good job, Ash,” I lied. See, she THOUGHT I was on her side also. But I wasn’t.

“Thanks, Hallie. Now let’s bring him back to the headquarters, okay?”

“Why don’t I take him? I mean, you’ve had him for so long, you must be bored with him, right?”

“You know, that’s a great idea. Here, you take this jet ski, with Nick on it, and I’ll take yours.”

We switched jet skis and she drove back to shore. Wow, that was too easy.

Too easy indeed. Ashley must’ve figured out that I wasn’t going to bring him to the headquarters when I got back to shore, because I heard (and saw) gunshots from behind me. I sprinted past Elizabeth, giving her a “help me!” look, and she looked utterly confused until she saw Ashley. I just barely dodged the bullets—and with Nick slung over one shoulder; it didn’t make it much easier.

I ran and ran until my I couldn’t feel my legs anymore. I collapsed in the middle of nowhere—no, seriously, it was literally the middle of nowhere. There were like, two cars, and one building out here. I didn’t even know I could run that far.

But thankfully, for now, I was safe from Ashley. Something felt really heavy on my shoulder, so I pushed it off. It landed in a heap on the ground next to me. I looked at it and whacked myself in the head.

I’m such an idiot! I forgot to take Nick to the hospital before saving myself! Gosh, why am I such a dumb blonde now, of all times?! I’m usually like, really smart. Ugh why me?

I put my head in my hands and glanced over at Nick. I stared at where the bullet had hit him. Straight through his stomach. He could live. He could, but…you never know. It’s hard to tell from my angle anyways.

And somebody must’ve noticed me just sitting out there with a dead person next to me, because a man came outside from the little motel-like building.

“Why, hello there, Miss,” he said.

I looked up. “Oh, hi.”

“May I ask what you have here?” He pointed to Nick.

“Right…see…I have a dead rock star right here,” I answered.

“A dead rock star?”

“Well, maybe not dead, but I’m pretty sure he is.”

“Who is it?”

“Nick Jonas.”

“NICK JONAS?! My God, girl, my daughter is a huge fan of his! We have to bring him to the hospital immediately!”

What are the chances? I thought sarcastically. I sighed. “But we’re no where near civilization, Mister. I don’t see a hospital anywhere.”

“Well, I’ve got a car. I can drive you over there, real fast!”

I shrugged. “Sure, okay, thanks.”

“Anything for a celebrity.”

“Gee, thanks for including me,” I muttered under my breath. He helped me pick up Nick’s 115-pound body and load it into the backseat of his car. I sat in the passenger seat with the guy, and he went from 0 to 50 mph in like, two seconds. Insane.

“By the way, my name’s Brendan,” he introduced. “Brendan Boyle.”

“Alliteration, that’s nice,” I joked. “My name’s Hallie.”

“No last name?”

“Uh…no, I…don’t like giving my last name out to strangers,” I lied. It was the best excuse I could come up with without saying I’m an assassin!

“Oh, but you’ll take free rides from them?” He laughed.

“Yeah, I guess,” I muttered.

There was an awkward silence until he said frantically, “Go, get out! Get Nick out of the back! We’re here!”

I unlocked my seatbelt and whipped open my car door and the car door to the backseat. I tugged Nick off of the cheap leather seats and slammed the doors as soon as I did so.

Brendan and I ran inside and screamed everything to the front desk people. They called some people to come get Nick, and we placed him on a stretcher for them to take to the room. I started walking with them to the room, until they pushed me back, saying “sorry little girl, but no one gets in”.

And I responded with, “I’ll have you know, I’m 14 years old, Mister! And I don’t care if no one gets in, I’m his…sister! Yeah! I’m his sister!”

“I thought Nick Jonas never had a sister.”

“His family lied. I’m his long-lost sister. Hallie Jonas,” I said.

“Whatever, come with me Hallie Jonas,” he relented.

I smiled to myself and walked with them to the room. I closed my eyes when they did the surgery-type-thing to remove the bullet from his body, and then when he was all cleaned up and the nurses and doctors left, I went over next to the bed.

I hear talking’s good for dead people. Maybe I should talk to him.

“Hey Nick, it’s…it’s Hallie. You know, the 14-year-old assassin? Yeah, that’s me. Um, right now, you’re kinda at the hospital. I mean, I’m sure you would know if you were awake, but…anyways. Um, Ashley, see, she…um…she shot you. She was on the bad side. I’m on the good side, just so you know. And um, I just…I wanted to let you know that, if you don’t make it, I’m sorry for everything that’s been happening to you. It’s just, us assassins are trained like that, and we have to do our job. I lied to you and to Ashley, pretending to be the bad one. I didn’t think she’d do anything to you that soon, but it was bound to happen sometime. And now, to finish off my babbling, I’ll tell your family and friends about this—but with lesser detail—if, you know, you want me to. I guess. I mean, yeah. And I wanted to say, I’m gonna miss you, Nick. I didn’t know you that well, but you seem really cool, and…it was nice knowing you.”

A tear rolled down my cheek and I started walking away from the bed when I heard something. My ears were practically deaf from all the gunshots and screaming, but I turned around anyways. And what I heard amazed me.

“Hallie,” a quiet, hoarse voice said.

“Nick?” I asked excitedly, but quietly.

“Why did you...s-save me?”

I walked closer. “Because, I…I can’t stand Ashley, and I didn’t want you to die. But, now you’re alive, and…”

“Yeah, I’m…alive.”

I smiled and another tear rolled down my cheek as I walked closer to his bed. I knelt down beside him, so we were now at eye-level with each other.

“Hallie…” He whispered.

“Yes?” I asked.

“Thank you…”

“You’re welc—“ I started to say. But then something surprising happened.

His lips crashed into mine. I was NOT expecting that, but I returned it happily. See, I actually had a crush on him. Yeah, ‘nuf said.

“Wow,” I whispered after we released. “That was fast,” I said, a chuckle escaping my lips.

“Yeah. I’ve…wanted to…do that since we met,” he whispered, still hoarse.

We both smiled, and then I noticed that same nurse guy that had told me I couldn’t come in, standing in the doorway, with his eyebrows raised.

“Mhm…yeah, Hallie, I’m starting to believe you’re not a Jonas sister. Am I correct?” He joked.

“Uh, yeah, see, I can explain…”

“No need to, it’s perfectly fine. I can see you really care about this boy anyways.”

“Right, yeah, thanks?”

“Haha, no problem. But now visiting hours are over, so…?”

“Right, I’ll be going. Bye Nick,” I whispered, kissing his cheek.

“Bye Hallie,” he whispered.

I smiled at him and waved as I walked out the door. But then the worst thing possible happened.

I heard a cough, and then that beeping of the heart monitor turned into one flat tone.

Oh no.


COMMENT PLEASE :)

GASP, another twist! :o

[PursePrincess4eva]

you write rather fast :P

I <3'ed it.
i just cant imagine anna marie with nick though. XD

[adolphin]

Well, he did say
'Bye Hallie'
so technacally
nvm
rarr
this time
I shall eat uuuu!!!!!!
unless u rite more NOW!

[MileyRox1174]

you write rather fast :P

I <3'ed it.
i just cant imagine anna marie with nick though. XD

Yeah, I can't imagine Anna Maria with Nick either, but...you know, I felt like adding that just for the fun of it :P And I write fast because I had some of it done yesterday anyways. Hehe I'm almost done writing the next chapter though. I guess since I type extremely fast, it helps :P

Anybody else?

[PursePrincess4eva]

nobody else.

JUST WRITE! pllleaseee.
i beg :]

[MileyRox1174]

i wanted to know.

I ran over to Nick’s bed, tears already streaming down my face like rapid rivers.

“What happened?!” I asked the male nurse.

“He…he gave up.”

“He gave up?! But he was already alive!”

“His heart gave up, Hallie. I’m sorry, I’m so sorry. I don’t know if I can bring him back.”

“What?! You have to! You can’t let him die!”

“I’m sorry, Hallie. We’ll do everything we can. For now, just…go home, and get some rest. I can tell you need it,” he said, gently pushing me out the door. He slammed it as soon as I was out, and then I saw Nick’s family in the waiting area when I got to it.

They stood up when they saw me, the person at the desk pointing to me.

“Hello, where’s Nicholas?” Mr. Jonas asked frantically.

I didn’t say anything, just looked down, still crying. Joe took a stab at it.

“Um, Miss, where’s Nick? You know, Nick Jonas?” He emphasized.

I looked up at them, and motioned for them to sit down in another, vacant, waiting room. They did, and I stood before them, explaining the entire story from start to finish.

Their mouths gaped and they all had tears in their eyes. “So…he’s dead?” Kevin choked.

“I…I don’t know. The nurse said he would do everything he could, but…I don’t know…”

Mrs. Jonas pulled me in for a hug. “Oh, honey, you’ve seen so much. How do you do it?”

“How do I do what?” I asked, pulling away from the hug.

“Stay so strong and emotionless when you see so much death and killing around you.”

“I would tell you, but it’s classified. Only trained assassins know.”

“Alright, alright, Miss Assassin. We’ll lay off, just…how about you stay at our house tonight? You know, stay in Nick’s room.”

“In his bed? Why?”

“Because, you said you didn’t have anywhere else to go, and that the assassins were long gone, correct?”

“Yes.”

“So how about you just stay with us? It’d be much easier, and a lot safer. And yes, you can sleep in Nick’s bed. If you like, that is.”

“Sure, I guess. Thanks,” I forced a smile, even though sadness was pricking at the back of my eyes.

Joe and Kevin took both of my hands reassuringly and we all walked out of the hospital together, into the dark night. Mr. Jonas drove home, and I walked into the Jonas’ house, chills running down my spine, remembering what had happened in here before.

All Joe and Kevin did was squeeze my hands a little more and bring me up to Nick’s room. I stood in the doorway, suddenly feeling vulnerable and nervous (for no apparent reason) when they let go of my hands and gave me a light push into the room. I walked around, looking at everything—taking it all in. I walked over to his bed, ran my hand along the covers, and saw a piece of paper sitting on it. I picked it up and read it, swallowing to make the tears go away when I realized it was from Samantha. It was the second note…about her being dead.

I placed it on Nick’s desk, and continued examining the room. I was almost hoping someone would jump out and kill me right there—I just couldn’t deal with all of this. But nothing happened. I went back downstairs for dinner, and then when I came back up to Nick’s room, closed the door and went right to sleep.

I wanted to know how it felt, to be shut out from the world. I wanted to know what it was like, to be dead. Just like Nick is now.

I closed my eyes tightly and held my breath for 60 seconds, gasping for air after that.

You know, death doesn’t feel too bad. But I guess in Nick’s experience, it is…he’s been near death once before, but came back from that.

What about now?



COMMENT PLEASE :)

[PursePrincess4eva]

OH ME!

you surprise me. XD

[MileyRox1174]

Haha :P

Anybody else?

[MileyRox1174]

Alright, I'm bored, so I'm posting the FINAL chapter of this FF right now:


miracles do happen.

I woke up to the sound of…nothing. I looked at the clock, and it was 5 AM. That is what my body basically was trained to do—wake up bright and early, for no apparent reason at all. And I was so good at it.

I was a bit content that morning, thankful it was a new day, but unthankful I remembered my dream from the night before.

It was Nick’s funeral. I was dressed in all black, tossing roses into his grave. When they had buried him and put the tombstone in, I was kneeling at it, crying my eyes out. I was the only one left in the graveyard—it was dark, cold, and windy. The wind was howling in and out of my ears, taunting me, saying “you’re next, you’re next”. And I looked at the information on the tombstone, and gasped.

And that was all I could remember. I wished I could see it clearly, but I couldn’t. So for now, I’ll just wait until we find out the situation with Nick.

I went downstairs, feeling extremely full—although I had only had a small dinner last night. I refused any breakfast, and I could sense depression signs coming on. Well then, I thought. Let them. I don’t care. I’d much rather be depressed than have to live with my “friends” the assassins.

I was technically the only good one out of all of us. Ashley lied. There were 3 bad and 1 good. I was the one good person. The rest were bad. But let’s not dwell on that right now. We have more important things to attend to.

Mr. and Mrs. Jonas corralled Joe, Kevin, Frankie, and I and we all made our way to the hospital to check on Nick. They allowed me to go in first, alone, because I was the one that had been with him before that, so they wanted to give me a chance to see him first.

I stepped cautiously into the room, closing my eyes, hoping that the bed Nick was lying on wasn’t his death bed.

I took a deep breath, and opened my eyes, only to see Nick sitting up in his bed, smirking.

“Wha—Nick?! You’re…you’re…”

“Yes, I’m alive,” he laughed. His voice wasn’t hoarse or quiet anymore.

“But…how…and…oh my god!” I squealed, running over to his bed and holding his hand.

He squeezed my hand. “I don’t know. I guess it’s just the magic touch of a great doctor…” He began. “Or, maybe a little helping hand from somebody who really cares about me,” he winked.

“Wait, who?” I asked, totally ditching my ‘smart’ personality.

“You,” he whispered.

“Oh, right, yeah,” I giggled. “I’m just so happy you’re alive!”

“Same here. I guess miracles do happen,” he smiled. He moved over on the bed and patted the area next to him. I sat down next to him and he put his arm around me. I grinned happily and his family whipped open the door to the room frantically, relaxing when they saw him sitting up in his bed with me next to him.

After all the laughing, talking, crying, and everything, I leaned my head on Nick’s shoulder and closed my eyes for a few seconds, breathing in the same, perfect smell as was on his bed. Within those seconds, I saw what was written on the tombstone in my dream.

Nicholas Jerry Jonas

September 16th, 1992 – November 8th, 2078

I smiled happily. There was a long time to go before that day came around. A long, long time.

I smirked to myself when I read the next part.

Married to Hallie Jonas

I think I’m liking that part. A lot. Wink, wink.

The poor boy has no idea. But by that sparkle in his eye, I think he might.

THE END.


COMMENT PLEASE :)
Haha and don't ask why I chose November 8th, 2078 to be when he dies :P It just popped into my head, so don't be like, making assumptions or anything :lol:

Thanks so much to everybody who read this and made it successful! It was fun to write, but I'm afraid it had to end. And no, I will NOT be making anymore FFs. I spend way too much time on the computer as it is ;) Sorry guys. But thanks so much for all the wonderful comments and stuff! I love you guys! ♥

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

it was amazing. lol

and thats what you said the last time you made a fan fic i think.
so i'll be expecting more from you.. lol

[MileyRox1174]

Thanks so much! Haha I say it every time, but this time, I'm serious...at least until after the summer ;)

Anybody else?

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

Well thats not good.

[PinkRubberDuckie]

whoah. this reminds me a lot of the book i read called 'i'd tell you i love you, but then i'd have to kill you.'
it. was. intenseeeee!

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

I read that book!^
i think..

[MileyRox1174]

^^Oh I loved that book! I read the second one in that series also :) Those are two of my favorite books :P

Anybody else?

[munchkingirl822969]

ome i read that book. I'd Tell you i love you but then i'd have to kill you. I still need to read the sequel to it Cross my heart and hope to spy. that's what i was thinking when i was reading this too!! I was like, wow, that's just like the book.

But it's a really good FF. I enjoyed it.
I kinda got lost but then I reread it and was like..." ohh."
lol

[moonrainy]

Aww... it ended... =(
I love it!
write another FF when you can ;)

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

wow that was a blood bath but I LOVED IT!!!!

[hannahlover2007]

Oh. em . gee..
wow lauren that was
probably my fave of all
your fan fictions..; woah..

[PursePrincess4eva]

no more ff?!

[adolphin]

:D
HES ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!
thank u thank u thank uuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!
BUT U MADE ME DEPRESSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!
U Won't Be Riteing FanFictions AnyMore!!!!!!!!!!
:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(

[mileyboo897]

!!!!!
halleluigh chorus anyone?
*whoaaa*
Kung Fu Kylen and the Fangirls won't have to like..spaz on you knoe, Lauren.
(:
That was great.
Oh.... November 8thh??
Hahah. No assumptionss..
So. I"ll be writing on mine soon enough?
Yesh.
Very good..
YOUR NOT WRITING ANYMORE?
HUH?

[adolphin]

I know!
THAT IS LIKE THE WORST THING YOU COULD EVER SAY LAUREN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[.Oh.My.Jonas.]

seriously^
you totally made me depressed.

shame on you. :P

[MileyRox1174]

Aw, you guys are so nice!! :D

And yeah, I'm sorry, but I don't think I'll be able to keep up with another one...I mean, I have a few days of school left anyways, and I'm busy the ENTIRE month of July (working, sleepaway camp, and more working)...I'm not busy in August though...but my mom yells at me enough for sitting on the computer for hours at a time, so yeah.

[PursePrincess4eva]

i think you, LAURENNN!! hates me, MARIA!! so much that she isn't going to do another ff :P

[MileyRox1174]

Noooo, I don't hate any of you :) I love you guys!

And maybe, just MAYBE I'll write something this weekend or something....I mean, I don't have much time in July, so I'd have to post it all in like, one week :P But yeah, I'm thinking. But thinking does NOT mean yes. It means closer to maybe, but still a no. LOL if you understand my reasoning :lol:

[PinkRubberDuckie]

would you do it for my birthday?
= ]

[MileyRox1174]

Birthday? Hmm...maybe *smiles evilly*

When is your birthday? :)


EDIT: Okay, this may sound stupid...but does anybody know how to make the peace sign symbol with your keyboard? Or does anybody have it so I can copy it? Hehe I want to put it in my sig :lol: Stupid reason, I know.

[PinkRubberDuckie]

i have no clue
sorry

my birthday is july 20th = ]

[PursePrincess4eva]

sooo..that means YES?
YAY!

[MileyRox1174]

July 20th...hm, I'm in town that day. How about I write it like, now and then post it earlier that that? Cause, yeah, I'm a little busy. Or I could write it that past week after I get home from sleepaway volleyball camp...yeah, I might do that :P

LOL I'm in a really indecisive mood right now I guess :lol:

[PursePrincess4eva]

ok..here's a thought.
JUST WRITE!! XD

[MileyRox1174]

Yeah, I probably will...I feel like something's missing in my life without a FF :lol: I guess that's why I keep writing more and more of them :P

I'm gonna think of something tonight, and then write, and MAYBE post it :)

[PinkRubberDuckie]

yay! ily lauren!!!!

[MileyRox1174]

Haha I love you too, Alexa ;)

[adolphin]

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ILY!!!!
lol

[mileyfanforever101]

Wow.
That was amazing.
I was like
What the crap is she trying to do kill him?!