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cutiepie7897
04-18-2008, 06:19 PM
ok well i have a good idea.....well it depends if you like drama....and you should deff read the intro before you read the story because some people might not like the idea at all!! and some could find it offending i guess but im not trying to be offeneding


*INTRO*
hi my name is Jayley, Jayley Snow, but you could also call me Jay. I'm 16 years old, and I have a 3 year old sister, emily, who is the sweetest little girl you have ever met! Now if you saw me in school you might think I have the most perfect life! I have a whole bunch of friends, I guess you could call me popular. I have a wonderful boyfriend, Joe, but you probly no him better from The Jonas Brothers. My friends are all great!! I'm mainly your average preppy teen girl, who says like, like, every second. Now how great does my life sound!! It basically sounds like a fairy tale right!
Well you see if it sounds like a fairy tale after you met my family.
I no you are thinking 'What are you gonig to brag about how great that is, too! I bet you are going to tell us how your mother is like a famous singer and your dad is like a movie star or something!'
Actually my dad is an acholic while trying to hold a job at a butcher shop. And my mom died, when i was 13. she died while giving birth to my little sister, so she has no idea who mommmy is and who great she was
Every night, for dinner, he comes home for about 3 minutes and drops a pice of frozen meat on the table.
And every night he yells "GET DOWN HERE YOU WORTHLESS LITTLE BRATS!! I BROUGHT YOU DINNER!!!" any thing he ever brought us was alway un eattable but if i ever said anything i would get slaped and told if i dont like it dont eat it!
plus im a veggie head soo i wouldnt eat it but i would NEVER bring that up to my dad!
the only ppl that knew what my dad was doing was my friend ashley and my boyfriend joe and they always tell me i hve to tell someone else but i cant do that! My father use to be a kinda and nice man when my mom was still alive. But once she died he turned into a monster. Her mother had the option of living and having the baby die or her die and let the baby live. She took the second option. My mother was soo kind and understanding and i only wish that emily knew her, and the man i use to love, my dad. When my dad was drunk he would bet me and/or emily. I always tried to keep him aay from emily. She is only three and has to go through such torcher!

~Form!!!!!!!!~
Name/username:
Charaters name (first and last) :
Good or mean:
Age:
Pic:
Bio (like the kind the other charaters have) :

i neeeeedddd some bad pplz plzz :)

~Charaters~

Meet Jayley Snow
Age: 16
Nickname: Jay
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Jayley Snow is one of the most popular girls at Jameson High. Everyone thinks she has a perfect life, but it's far from that. Jayleys mother passed away while giving birth to her little sister Emily. Jayleys father is VERY abusive and is an acholic. Her bestfriend is Ashley Carson. She has a boyfriend, Joe Jonas. Jayley thinks she can trust joe with anything. soo she tells him basically everything, but can he really be trust?

Meet Ashley Carson
Age: 16
Nickname: Ash
http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj92/characterpictures__/Hanz.jpg
Ashley Carson is Jayley Snows bestfriend. She is also one of the most popular girls at Jameson High, but she is NOT preppy. Ashley is always trying to convince Jayley to tell someone else about whats going on. Ashley really wants to tell someone, because she hates seeing Jayley come in with long sleave shirts on in the middle of summer to hide the bruis. Ashely REALLY feels bad for Emily because she is so young. Ashely wants to tell but knows if she does, Jayley will NEVER forgive her. but is she willing to put their friendship aside to possibly save Jays life?

Meet Emily Snow
Age: 3
Nickname: Em
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Emily is a sweet little three year old who is abused by her father. She never knew her mother, and she anly knows what her dad tells emily about her mother, that she was a stupid b****h. Jayley is always telling her the great things that her mother did though, but she doesnt no that her mom really died giving birth to Emily. Jayley tells Emily that she was a sweet, caring women nad that she loved Emily very much. Emily is abused all the time and is forced to sleep in the same room as Jayley even though there are 2 more empty rooms in the house. Will she ever be in a home that loves her?

Meet Joseph Jonas
Age:18
Nickname: Joe
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Joe is Jayley's boyfriend. He loves Jayley with all his heart and it breaks his heart when he sees bruises all over Jayleys body. Sometime Joe jsut wants to go up to he dad and punch him, but is to afraid of him after what he has been doing with Jayley and Emily. Joe loves Jayley but doesnt think he can keep putting up with all this drama Jayley is giving him. He just wants to go through life with no big problem like this. He wants to tell but Jayley made him swear to never tell anyone. Even though he promised he doesn think he can keep it. He feels his only options are break up with Jayley or tell someone what is going on. Which willhe pick?

Meet Tracey Tunker
Age: 17
Nickname: Trace
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll315/ItsMyParty_bucket/scene.jpg
Tracey Tunker is another one of Jayley's Bestest friend, but she doesn't know Jayleys seceret. Tracey might not look like a popular girl who hangs out with mostly preppy people but she really acts like a prep and is REALLY popular, jsut like Ash and Jay. Trace tells Jay everything and feels hurt that Jay wont tell her everything. Even though Jayley never told Trace she is starting to figure it out. will she ever find out the seceret?

destinysmiles!
04-18-2008, 09:03 PM
uh.... uh..... continue....

cutiepie7897
04-18-2008, 11:27 PM
3 YEARS AGO!
"Mrs. Snow.." the doctor paused "you have two options here"
"Well what are they" my mom asked
"there seems to be a problem...." he stoped again "well im sure your aware of your babys condiction"
"yes im VERY aware"she told him "i just want to no what is going to happen"
"well because of this....you need to me a big choice here" he said
"JUST TELL ME ALREADY!" she snaped..she was baley ever like this but the doctor was being rediulous
"righ..there are 2 choices...you can either have the baby..and wll deffinatly make it...but there is a possiblity that it could die" he said "or we can have it oo the baby will deffinitly die but you will make it"
my mom started to cry "the...thee....the first one" she said through tears
"we can give you some time to think i no this must be a hard choice" the doctor said
"yeah lizzy think this through completly" my dad told her
"no bill!" she said "i hae thought this through...im not gonig to let a little baby die..i have lived a good life i married a great man and had a gret daughter" she said looking at me
"there is a better chance of living if you have sea section (sp?)" the doctor jumped in
"see it will be fine..im strong" my mom told my dad
"ok" my dad said

destinysmiles!
04-19-2008, 12:12 AM
cassie cassie cassie, can u change the pic of ashley? well only if thats me N stop saying im preppy! this is getting on my nerves! okay i am not.... but u keep on making me preppy in ALL ur ffs!

cutiepie7897
04-19-2008, 10:43 AM
cassie cassie cassie, can u change the pic of ashley? well only if thats me N stop saying im preppy! this is getting on my nerves! okay i am not.... but u keep on making me preppy in ALL ur ffs!
it doesnt say you are preppy, you are just popular, you dont have to be preppy to be popular

destinysmiles!
04-19-2008, 01:34 PM
it doesnt say you are preppy, you are just popular, you dont have to be preppy to be popular

sorry i was little mad i tried to make it look not so mad, n no i wasnt mad fo thiss

xo_hannah_fan1_xo
04-19-2008, 02:43 PM
Whoa...MORRRE

cutiepie7897
04-19-2008, 06:41 PM
~present day~
well as you can see...my mom didnt make it through the birth and ever since then my dad has been really mean and abusive
soo lets get started with the day and we willl start it off in school

~school~
i was sweating to death!! i was wearing a long sleve shirt and jeans and it's like 95 degrees out!
ashley walked up to me, she was in short orange shorts and a green tank top "gezz jayley!" she yelled at me from acroos the hall and walked closer to me "what did he do this time" she whispered to me
i rolled up my sleve a little to show her a HUGE bruis on my arm and quickly rolled my sleve bakc down so no one else would see
"jay!" she gasped "he cant do this to you! you have to tell someone"
"no ash" i sighed "i cant"
"why not" she asked
"i told you a million times" i said "if he gets put in jail no one can take care of me..i will be put in a foster home and i dont want that!"
"but you cant go on living like this" ashley told me
"2 more years" i said, i always repeated that in my head when ever i wanted to call the police on my dad two more years, two more years, two more years
"2 more years til what" shye asked me
"2 more years until i turn 18" i told her "then i can live on my own"
"what about Em" she asked me
"when i turn 18, i will get my own place, i will call the cops on my dad, and they will take him away, since ill be 18, i can take care of my sister by then" i told her
"wow you have this all planed out dont you" she asked
"i cant wait til then" i sighed
the bell rang to start the next period
"lets get to class" i said
me and ashley had all the same classes together
we walked into math
"you are late!" mr.smith yelled
"sorry" me and ashley said at the same time
"what ever, next time you 2 will have detention" he said "take a seat"
me and ashley sat down next to one of our best friends, tracey
"why are you always soo late" tracey asked
"long story" i said
"what are you wearing" she asked me
tracey was wearing a mini, mini skirt and a tank top
"umm...welll" i tried to come up with something
"she didnt have any thing else to wear got a problem" ashley jumped in
her and tracey didnt get along to well, they are both from the same crowd, the populars, but they cant get along
"and how would you no that" tracey snaped at ashley
"she told me" ash said
"guys calm down" i said
"EXCUSE ME!" mr. smith yelled "FIRST YOU COME TO MY CLASS LATE AND NOW YOU ARE TALKING"
i was sweating soo much i could feel it drip off my face
mr. smith went on yelling at us about who we have detention...my dad was gonig to kill me if i got detention
i only heard bits and peices of wat he was yelling
i felt like i hadnt drank in days and the sweat was still dripping off my face
all of a sudden..i fell out of my seat and blacked out

destinysmiles!
04-19-2008, 06:48 PM
ooh or wouw?
idk more

cutiepie7897
04-19-2008, 06:56 PM
can someone plzzzz enter a form to be bad :)

cutiepie7897
04-19-2008, 08:00 PM
(no special typing stuff im making this fasttttly)

Mr. Smiths P.O.V

i was telling ashley, jayley, and tracey how they had detention
why was jayley wearing such warm clothing?
i ignored it and went on telling them until i saw jayley hit the floor
"OMG!!" ashley yelled
"now, now everyone" i said "i bet its just a joke to get out of detention, come on jayley its not working just get up"
she didnt get up, she didnt move at all
"SHE'S NOT BREATHING!" tracey screamed
"someone call the 911!" a student yelled
about 5 diff kidds pulled out their cell phone
usually i would have punished them for it up it was an emergancy
ashley was shaking jayley "jay, jay, JAY WAKE UP!"
i walked over "is she breathing?"
"no!!!" ashley said
i could see jayleys lifeless body laying on the floor
"DID ANYONE CALL!!" i yelled
about 6 kids raised there hands
4 guy with a strech board ran into the room
"everyone move give her air" on said as he pushed everyone who was taking pictures away
he put jayley on the strech board and tried pushing hard on her to get her to breath
it wasnt working
he held her nose and did CPR
after about 2 times she was breathing but still laid lifeless on the board
i could see sweat on her face
why was she wearing a long sleve shirt and jeans?
"is anyone coming?" he asked
"can i go mr. smith! she is my bestfriend" tracey and ashley said at the same time
"ok go!" i said and they ran out the room

Ashley's P.O.V
i was like soooo scared i mean my bestfriend just passed out!
while we were in the back of the ambulance one other guy was there too
he was holding a fan infront of her face to keep her cool
i was suprised they didnt move her sleves up or anything to her clothing, but god thing they didnt, or else the might find the bruises
we got to the place and me and tracey jumped out as the guys ran her into the hospital
when we got in there they put her into a room after colling her down enough and were about to put a hospital robe on her
"NO!" i yelled
"we have to or she will get over heated again" the nurse said
"you cant!" i yelled again
"we HAVE to" she said and shestarted to put the robe thing on
as she was putting it on she exposed a HUGE bruise
"what is this" she asked
i gasped no one was suppose to find out
"do you no what this is from" she asked
i was good at coming up with excuses "ummm she got them from.....ummmm horse ridding, she got bucked off"
"these look far worst then a bruis from being bucked off, it looks like someone beat her!" she said
"idk anything about that" i lied
"ok we will just question her when she wakes up" she said
"and when will that be" i asked
"soon, maybe a hour or 2" she told me and she left
"what was that about" tracey asked
"nothing" i sighed i wanted to tell the truth "nothing" i repeted again

Cassie's P.O.V
the next thing i knew i woke up in a hospital room
in a hospital robe!
i looked at my arms you could see a million bruises, little and big
i looked down at my legs and i saw the same
i looked around and i saw ashley and tracey
"whats with all the bruises" tracey asked
"umm" i was about to come up with something
"I TOLD YOU!" ashley yelled
i guess she already came up with a story
"she fell off a freaking horse!" ashley said
"since when does she rid horses" tracey asked
"i have been ridding for a couple of weeks" i lied, i have never been on a horse in my life!
"o ok" tracey said
i felt bad for lieing but i couldnt let her no the truth

Tracey's P.O.V
something seems a little wierd about this whole thing
who com ashley knows everything going on with jayley, i feel like i dont even no her anymore
something wierd is going on and im going to find out what it is

destinysmiles!
04-19-2008, 08:06 PM
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cutiepie7897
04-19-2008, 11:29 PM
Jayley's P.O.V
i was just talking with tracey about what happened and stuff, its hard coming up with this stuff! all of a sudden a nurse walked into the room
"hi, miss. snow?" she asked
"yeahhh its jayley" i said
"i want to question you, about the bruises we found" she said
"ok" i said
"can you 2 leave" she asked ash and trace
"yeah" they said and left
"soo your friend told us you fell of a horse?" she asked
"yeahh, it was a bad fall" i said
"but we found numorouse bruises, bruises that would have come up from falling" she said
"what are you suggesting?" i asked her
"i think you no" she said
"no i dont" i said
"we think your father is abusing you, our records show that your mother died when you were 13 and ever since then, you have come in many times with broken bones" she said
"soo im clumsy!" i said "my dad would never hurt me"
"i understand if you dont want to talk about it" she siad "jsut tell us if he is or isnt"
"he isnt!!" i yelled and i started to cry
i usually never cry, i have been told that im strong, like my mom was.
"we want to no if you wore a long sleve shirt and jeans to cover up the bruises" she said
"yeah i did i didnt want everyone to question me and me having to tell them my dad did---" i stop relizing what i jsut said "i mean my dad did spoke the horse on accedent and it bucked me off"
the lady sighed "you are a very head strong lady.....im going to ask you one more time are you SURE your dad didnt do this"
"im sure!" i yelled
"ok" she sighed...she knew that i was lieing but she couldn't prove that he was abusing me if i never told her "you cant wear jeans or long shirts like that anymore in hot weather....no matter how many bruises you have"
"ok" i said
and she left

destinysmiles!
04-19-2008, 11:32 PM
Tell! Tell! Xd

cutiepie7897
04-21-2008, 08:25 PM
Jayley's P.O.V

when the nurse left ashley and tracey came in
"tracey leave i need to talk to jay!" ashley told tracey
"why should i listen to you, freak!" tracey snaped at ashley
"because i told you to" ashley snapped back
"guys! stop fight!" i yelled
"she started it" they both said pointing at eachother
"o stop being so immature" i joked with them "trace, i really need o talk to ash can you go" i asked her
"well why do you want to tell her" tracey asked
"IM STANDING RIGHT HERE!" ashley said
"what ever" tracey said "anything you want to say to her, you can say to me, you no you can trust me"
"i no i trust you trace but this is really personal" i said "and its just between me and ash"
"what ever im not leaving" tracey said
"TRACEY!" i yelled "i NEED to talk to her plz"
"tell me" she said
"i cant!" i said "just leave!"
"why cant you tell me!" tracey asked me
"JUST LEAVE! FREAK!" ash yelled
"STAY OUT OF IT, LOSER!" trace yelled at ash
"TRACE JUST LEAVE!" i told her
she was getting me mad
"SOO NOW YOU TAKE HER SIDE!" tracey yelled
"I CANT TELLL YOU THIS!!!" i yelled at her "MAYBE WHEN YOU CAN ACT A LITTLE MORE MATURE ABOUT THIS I WILL TELL YOU!"
"YOU NO WHAT!!" trace screamed "I DONT NEED THIS FROM YOU! IM LEAVEING AND DONT EVER TALK TO ME AGAIN!" and she stormed out the room
"TRACE!" i yelled
"let her go she is soo not worth it" ashley said
"why cant you two get along" i asked
"cuz she is a freak, and she is mean, and she is a back stabber" ashley yelled
"i remember when you 2 were actually friends" i said ashley
"ewww i no i cant believe i was friends with that" ashley said
"why did you 2 stop being friends"
"because she is a lier and a back stabber" ashley said
"what ever" i said
"anyway, lets stop talking aobut the freak" ash told me "did you tell them the truth"
"no" i said "but it almost sliped out"
"you need to tell somone" ashley said
"i cant" i said
"you no what" ashley said
"what" i asked
"im tired of covering for you" ashley said
"when do you cover for me" i asked her
"like today i came up with the horse story" she said "YOU HATE HORSES!!! i cant believe your friend, tracey, didnt relize that!"
"i didnt ask for you to cover for me" i said
"no you didnt" she said "BECAUSE YOU WERE PASSED OUT FROM WEARING HOT CLOTHING BECAUSE YOUR DAD BEAT YOU!!"
"SHHHHHHHHHHHH" i said "dont be soo loud they might hear!"
"see" she said "im tired of lieing and covering for you!"
"soo what are you saying" i asked her
"im saying either you tell, or i will" she said
"NO!!" i yelled "you cant" i started to tear up "if they find out, they will take my dad away" i started to cry
"thats the point if they take him away, he cant hurt you" she said
"if they take him away, i will have to go into a foster home" i said "and i might never see anyone i know again"
"its better then getting beat!" she yelled at me
"jsut dont tell!" i said "remember you promised!"
"fine!" she said "then until you do tell someone, dont talk to me, cuz i wont anwser" she said and she walked out of the room
MY DAD IS RUINING MY LIFE!!!! BECAUSE OF HIM I LOST BOTH OF MY BEST FRIENDS!!! atleast i didnt lose my boyfriend, well not yet

destinysmiles!
04-21-2008, 08:34 PM
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