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Marauder
04-15-2008, 09:18 PM
JUST GO AWAY
AN TWILIGHT FANFIC.

What if your power as an vampire is making everyone else around you human?
What if the love of your life became an human?
WHAT IF YOU LOST EVERYTHING.

Characters.
*Bella
*Edward
*Jacob
*Alice
*Emmet
*Jasper
*Rosalie

NewCharacters
Mill Dood:
An young vampire.
Jake Joll:
An Human that likes Mill.

CHAPTERS:
PREVIEW (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1936056&postcount=4)
ONE (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2054643&postcount=6)
TWO (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2059038&postcount=8)
THREE-PART ONE (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2069610&postcount=9)/PART TWO

cupcake
04-15-2008, 09:29 PM
=0 osm! can't wait!

Mileygirl10
04-15-2008, 09:32 PM
Yeahhhhh.
I was gunna do a Twilight FF.
Anyway ;
WRITE IT.

Marauder
04-15-2008, 09:34 PM
Preview
I am already getting nervous,today i am marring Edward,and i dont know anything about Jacob , i ask Alice if she knows where he is , but she is more concern about the human persons coming to the wedding , i cant ask Esme , shes talking to mom since she come.
What to do?
And what if i fell on the wedding , but before that , i will become one of them , like Edward,Alice,Esme....
An Vampire.
And yes,i might sleep 2 days for the agony and pain of the conversion , well , what kind of bride i am?
I cant stop thinking of jacob , i know , its hard , he dissapear for MY FAULT, yes , cause he love me.
But marring Edward is what i am going to do.
Well,its almost the time , ive never been so nervous , the guests are already there.
-Only 5 minutes-say Rosalie , almost in an wisper.
-I am nervous Rosalie , really nervous - I have to say ,after all , it was the truth .
-Dont worry Bella , remember to live your last human days the fulest-She say me , then she smile and dissapear.
I have to see if Jake is still alive , i have too....
-JACOB-i scream , i saw someone that looks like him , really
Oh no , i think its him , but why is he running?
Well hes my best friend , an little brave he would have to do.

-Isabella Swan , do you accept Edward Cullen as your husband-
-Yes i do-
-You can kiss the bride-

What happened?I am hungry...
Oh No...
-What happen to me-I say to Carlisle.
-Well , you are already one of us-he say.
-Congratulations-Esme come as fast as i imagine she could.
-Well,is she..well alive isnt the word , ready?-I listen his voice , his only voice , Edwards voice.
-Edward-Well,that i know there isnt any other thing to say to him , nothing better .
The only thing, i am going to run to him and huge him.
And yes,i didnt fell bad , oddly i can still remeber yesterday,and the day before it , i think i am bringing things up too fast.
-Bella,my dear wait an minute,you have to go to talk with carlisle,he want to know if everythings ok-say Esme on the normal voice.
-Yes-i say in an voice that even amaze me .

Zanessa Fan1
04-16-2008, 08:00 PM
its really good.
i was going to do a twilight fanfiction, but i was afraid i would ruin it.

Marauder
06-09-2008, 07:23 PM
Chapte 1:FOREVER and ever.
-Enter-Carlisle voice say to me.
-Hello-i say on the surprising voice.
-Bella , edward want to ask you some things , and before some matters,i already found your power-he say smiling.
-What it is?-Edward , just entering say.
-She can , well convert you into an human and one of us how many times she wants-respond Carlisle-I will want you to wear this gloves-
He give me some white beutiful gloves,they fit me perfectly.
-He would move on , Bella-Edward say.
-Oh,where?-curiosity full me.
-England , rainy england-Esme came to the room at the moment.
-Yes , you heard it , now we have some matter to talk with you-he say.
-Alone-
-I wanna stay , i am her husband-Edward say.
-Dont edward,is something really important-Esme say on her lovely tone.
-Ok,honey,bella,do you still love me?-edward
-I do edward,you just brought me an dawn-i said.
-No.i broke it,i am broking your dawn-
-You arent-
And we kiss,it was an different kiss,it was cold and soft one , and calm one.
-I want to talk to her-Carlisle interrupted.
And Edward leave me for an while,first time for forever.
-Bella,you will not be as hungry as we was at the beggining-he say-you have us , so and also you can stop yourself with your power,its something incredible,and i must say it,that you still can remember and have an incredible control over yourself-carlisle say.
-And when we are moving?what about my car?-i ask him.
-You can go now, bella-he said to me.
-Thanks-
My velvet voice,sounded alike the one i loved the most.
I didnt see me on long 10 days of pain , just for being like my loved one,like Edward like the man with cold heart and cold blood . the one that makes me like him.Happy i am.
Myself,on an mirror,i was way more pale than i used to be , my hair was an black brown color ,it was shiny and beutiful , i was gorgeous , almost as rosalie.but the thing that worried me the most was my eyes.
My Red bright eyes.

ReminisceOnMemories
06-10-2008, 01:34 AM
more. =]

Marauder
06-11-2008, 08:51 PM
3.Vision
-Bella-angela say when i got out Carlisle office.
-Angela?,what are you doing...-i say to her
-Shh...follow me-
-i have to go with edward-my velvet voice say.
-Dont-
-I will,why are you here?-
-Bella.run away the Cullens arent good -she say.
-Angela , i am confused - i say.
-You cant crie Bella-she murmured me on the air
-Come with me , Bella -Angela continued.
-You arent Angela-i say to her , desesperate
-I am,you know i am me - she say , laughing
-It doesent matter,go away-i say to her.
An slowly point on the top of her head turn red.
The same color Victoria hair was.
I was sure i was breathing , the vision of angela turned to be someone else at the moment.
Jacob.
My dearest Jacob.
-Bells,this isnt good for you-he said to me.
-Jake...this isnt right-i say to him
-Bells,forget everything,we have forever-he say to me,touching my hand.
I felt like an human.
Again,like for all the time i felt.
But this wasnt right,this cant be an nightmare.
Jacob was an wolf,and i was an cold one.
I didnt love him anymore,he was just my friend.
-I am sorry for saying this , but i dont love you-
-Like yesterday?-he asked me on an sweet voice
-Yesterday didnt exist Jacob,what happen between us was just friendship,it was good while it last-i murmured.
This havr to be fake,it was all so unreal.
-Bright Red Eyes-he murmured when he saw me , he start to get away.
I pulled my hand to my heart , and then , Jacob was gone .
The clock behind me was ticking on an small sound.
Carlisle left his office.
-Bella,werent you going to search edward?-
-Yes,i was going to-
I have the chance to be an human.
And it was wasted.

Marauder
06-16-2008, 02:48 PM
Chapter 3:Once Bitten,Twice Shy part 1
Who should now it?
the time stoped to see my two nightmares.
My human friend and my Wolf Friend.
Shes human at my knowledge
At the same time,on my imaginary world.
Who might i tell it?
I know that if i stay at the same place,Carlisle would ask me what i am doing an he will think i am crazy.
I know who to tell this,my other best friend.
Alice.
The pixie,graceful little creature that wanted be to be part of her family.
My sister.
But i didnt find her,the one i found is.
Rosalie,
The beautiful blond ,taller than me,not paler.
-Bells,welcome to the family-She say on an sweet , velvet voice.
-Thank you Rose-
-I know we have some preety bad moments together,but now that all our problems are solved,we can be friends-Rosalie say to me.
She hugged me.
And i fall down.
-Whosh Bells,you havent hit any other werewolf-Emmett say to me.-i havent see you in 3 hours,edward is searching for you-
-I need to talk with Alice-
At that moment,Edward came,dazzling.
-I wanna have an girl talk with Alice and Rosalie-
-Ok,i think we must leave-
-Be Ok bella
-Dont be overprotective edward-Alice say
-Shes an girl!-Rosalie continued
-Oh yeah?i am an bear and mister i-know-what-you-are-thinking always get on my mind-
-But i love her-Edward sayed to all of them
-Me too-i say to edward.
-Ok,sorry for runing this mortal combat,but if we dont go now,we will be tortured by Volturi-
-And my girl talk?-
-Bella,you sound like an 3 year old girl-

MileyLoverForever
06-16-2008, 03:02 PM
this is really cool.

Marauder
06-16-2008, 03:38 PM
Chapter 3 part 2
-Its important to me Jasper-i say to him
-Bells,now is too late-Edward sayed as he already get down the stairs.
They were there,the Volturi.
Aro was sitting next to the piano with Jane,Alec and another girl.
She was,at least my age and haved dark black short hair , not like Alice,cause her hair left on her shoulders with an special curl.
She was as pale as Aro and her eyes were as red as mine.
-Hello Cullen Young People!-Aro sayed to us waving his hand.
-Hello Aro-Edward sayed to him
-Dears,do the young Bella is already one of you?-He asked
-Yes,here she is-Alice answered.
They show me , i didnt get it , did Aro was now good? did he have something good now?did i was going crazy?
-Perfect Perfect,we have an new girl too , her name is Mill,shes really good at beeing other persons-
-Other persons?-Rosalie asked.
-Yes,she can turn out onto others persons-Jane answered.
-I need the girl talk now-I say to them,runining the moment
-And whats this Girl Talk about?-Jane asked
-This is off the topic-
-It sounds funny-Emmett say
-Please,i only need to talk with alice-

Marauder
06-17-2008, 07:48 PM
4.Chapter 4:These Invisible Fangs.
-Way important it looks,let the girls talk-Alec sayed to all of them.
I never listened his voice,or jane,it was an first experience.
-Bells,everything is going to be ok,go and talk with Alice-Emmett sayed.
I know what jasper did,he calmed the situation.
-Alice,please,you can go to Edward bedroom and talk with the girl for once?-Jasper asked her.
-Deal-
It only took to us 3 seconds to get on Edwards,huge room,full of cds.
-I might think you already knew what we are going to talk-
-Believe it or not,i dont know-
-Not time to make bets?-
-No,just,sometimes i dont want to see whats coming next and take at least one surprise-
-Wise-
-Thanks B-
-Alice,on the morning,when we were with Carlisle,well i was,out of the office i saw,and talk Alice and Jacob-
-Talked?-
-Im not crazy Alice,i saw an glimpse of Victorias hair on Angelas,she was converting into Jacob-
-Angela,dear,Angela isnt an human-
-Shes one of us? an werewolf? an fairy?-
-Not any of them,an witch-
-An...an...magic?-I didnt expect this.
It explain preety much everything,i was surronded by no human.
Humans didnt get close to me.
-Yes,but it wouldnt surprise me if that is the new Volturi girl,Mill,she turns out to others people fears,are you scared of Angela?-
-Im not,i also want to ask you what the volturi are doing here-
-They arent the full of them,Aro is more familiar with Carlisle,he know that us are leaving to england,but hes not saying all of them,Marcus is the one that,well manage a little bit more the fact of people joining them-
-And what about Jake?-
-Bells,hes lost , still ,and we dont know if hes still alive-
-Alice , you are the only friend i can trust-

Marauder
06-17-2008, 10:48 PM
Ok,heres the thing.
I need 3 COMMENTS for posting the next chapter.