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volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 01:26 AM
Hold on, baby, you're losing it, The water's high, you're jumping into it {JB FF!!}

Hold on, baby, you're losing it The water's high, you're jumping into it And letting go... and no one knows You cry, but you don't tell anyone That you might not be the golden one And you're tied together with a smile But you're coming undone-
FROM TIED TOGETHER WITH A SMILE BY TAYLOR SWIFT!

Intro:
Unlike most guys, I happen to like a girl who isn't a random girl I've known for about 5 weeks, I've actually known this girl my whole life basically, she is like my best friend since the day our parents met in the shared hospital room during labor, I wouldn't be friends with Taylor. Yeah, I like my friend Taylor Nicole Harris. The only reason why her middle name is close to my name is because my mom and her mom decided on our names. My name, Nicholas, is sorta like her middle name, which now you know is Nicole. Our parents were inseperable, attached at the hip, we went everywhere together, until I moved to LA. Then Taylor and I got all sad and I hung out with her all night. Now, 5 years later and I see her again, we're 19 and she's sooo beautiful, now all I need is another miracle to tell her how i feel................

CHARACTERS
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NICK JONAS
(Nick is 19, Taylor Harris Best friend, Loves Taylor with all of his heart, He's part of the famous band The Jonas Brothers with his bros Joe and Kevin, His attitude is very sweet, kind, and sometimes (well most of the time, if he knows you realllly well) he'll make you laugh. He's hardly ever in a bad mood, only if you wake him up early in the mornings, but most of the time he's a nice guy who loves hanging out with his friends)
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TAYLOR HARRIS
(Taylor is 19, Nick, Kevin and Joe's Best friend, Loves Nick with all of her heart. She's a singer and works her rock and roll attitude well with her songs, she is funny and slightly sarcastic, but everyone loves her nice personality, she's never in a bad mood unless you make her very mad, and she'll be your best friend or your worst enemy, you be the judge of that!!!!!)
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g272/motocross_sweetheart/Icons%202/thjoe30.png
JOE JONAS
(Joe is 22, Taylor Harris Best friend, He's part of the famous band The Jonas Brothers with his bros Nick and Kevin, His attitude is very funny (of course you all knew that), sweet, kind, and he's a gentleman who's very nice to girls (just like his brothers) he's only in a bad mood if you make him mad, and he doesn't get mad easily, so he's your typical nice guy friend, He also loves Taylor and does a lot of things just to tick Nick off)
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KEVIN JONAS
(Kevin is 24, Taylor Harris Best friend, Not sure if he loves anyone right now, but he'll definettly tell you if he finds someone, He's part of the famous band The Jonas Brothers with his bros Joe and Nick, His attiude is funny, talkative, very sweet and gentleman-like, he's also friends with lots of girls, so he knows how to put up with them, mess with his brothers or his friends and he'll pound you like a turkey sandwich then he sorta starts liking Taylor a little bit)

CHAPTERS
CHAPTER 1 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1930847&postcount=8)
CHAPTER 2 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1931313&postcount=17)
CHAPTER 3 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1931597&postcount=38)
CHAPTER 4 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1931959&postcount=43)

Do I want anymore characters???
No, sorry, I don't need anymore characters right at the moment!

I NEED 4 COMMENTS TILL CHAPTER 1!!!

adolphin
04-13-2008, 01:29 AM
Start!!!!!!!!

HannahMontanaismyhero
04-13-2008, 01:29 AM
Start!! Start!!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 01:32 AM
2 moreeee

adolphin
04-13-2008, 01:33 AM
Start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 01:34 AM
1 moreee

adolphin
04-13-2008, 01:36 AM
START!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but ill have to read lata cuz im about to drop dead, who knows, i might get on in a few!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 01:58 AM
Chapter 1
[NICK'S POV]
I think my past is coming back to make me feel better, my best friend since birth turned up at my doorstep a few seconds ago and I'm superhappy, it turns out, she hated life in New Jersey without me. The first thing I said to her was this "Hi-oly moly!" What the freak is Hi-oly moly?? At first I was suprised and somewhat shocked Taylor appeared on my doorstep like that. The truth is I've been in love with her since she held my hand after I broke my arm when we were 7. She was everything I wanted and everything I still want. She changed her hair, it's not straight and it's a lighter blonde than it was before, she looks kinda... well actually.... sexy! Granted after I heard her songs on the radio, I thought her voice was aboslutely perfect. Now that we're 19 and she looks wayyy different than what she looked like when we were 14. "Uh okay, Hi-oly moly too you too." She replied. "Come in." I offered her. Taylor walked in and sat on the couch next to Joe. Joe got up and whispered to me "Who's the hot chick??" I looked at him weirdly. "Uh that's Taylor Harris, remember my friend." I whispered back. Joe sat back down right next to her, "Hi, are you single??" Joe asked Taylor. HE WAS HITTING ON MY BEST FRIEND! My jaw dropped and I sat next to her. "Uh yeah." She replied. "Why?" She asked him. "Just wondering." Joe said. I moved closer to Taylor to let Joe know he was making a big mistake. Joe got up and popped in a movie. The movie was John Tucker Must die. I already knew it was Taylor's favorite movie. I put my arm around Taylor and Joe tried to snuggle close to her. WHY WAS HE TRYING TO TORTURE ME? Wait, maybe he didn't know I liked Taylor as much as I do. "Joe, I need to speak with you, alone, in my room." I said. "Alright." Joe followed me to my room. "Why are you hitting on Taylor??" I asked. "Because I like her a lot." Joe said. "Oh yeah, well have you ever thought that I liked her more than YOU ever do?" I asked. "No.... well dude if you really feel that way, I'll back off of her for a while." Joe said reasonably. I walked off and sat down next to Taylor again. Joe sat next to her again but he didn't follow through with his problem, instead he kissed her cheek and tried to make me even more mad than I am. I'm serious, my brother is gonna get slapped for this one day, and when it happens I'm gonna laugh.


I NEED 5 COMMENTS TILL CHAPTER 2!!!

HannahMontanaismyhero
04-13-2008, 10:36 AM
LOL! MORE! Bad Joe

xXmandyXx
04-13-2008, 11:45 AM
more!
caca face joe :P lol

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 11:52 AM
3 more

huskerrich
04-13-2008, 11:53 AM
not bad keep going

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 11:57 AM
2 moreeeee

adolphin
04-13-2008, 12:07 PM
HAHA!!
MORE!!
:P
Stupid Joe, not following with his word
MORE!!
I must see Nick punch him!
haha!
jk!
MORE!

HannahMontanaismyhero
04-13-2008, 12:08 PM
more! DOes that count as one more?!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 12:08 PM
lol. yesh i'm fixing to type more up now!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 12:46 PM
Chapter 2
[NICK'S POV]
Just as the movie ended it was around midnight, and we were all exausted. "Taylor, you can sleep in my room tonight." Joe said. I looked at him wide-eyed. DOES HE REALLY WANNA GET A BLACK-EYE FROM HIS 19 YEAR OLD BROTHER? I think he does, but I'm not gonna punch him until he really ticks me off. "No, Joe, If Taylor sleeps in anyones room tonight, it's gonna be mine!" I said. I walked Taylor to my room and I went to the bathroom to change into a shirt and pajama pants. When I got back, Taylor was in cami and pajama pants. Did I tell you how hot she looked in her pjs. I am serious, I had hold on to my nightstand to keep me from fainting. She got into the bed and I got in after her. It was quiet for a little bit. I suddenly fell asleep and I think Taylor might have fallen asleep also. I woke up at 9:30 am, and I saw something that wasn't supposed to be in my bed. IT WAS JOE! It was getting personal now! Shortly after I saw the worst sight of my life, Taylor woke up. She walked over to me and put her hand on my shoulder. "I'm serious, your bro is starting to creep me out." She whispered. I kinda laughed, but Kevin walked in and opened his eyes wide. He pulled me aside into the bathroom. "Who in the world is the hottie in there???" He whispered. "Uh, it's Taylor Harris, my best friend." I whispered back. "Oooh, she got sexy since we last saw her." He whispered. WHY ARE MY BROTHERS FALLING IN LOVE WITH THE GIRL I'M ALREADY MADLY IN LOVE WITH! They don't know her as well as I do. She's never even told them her deepest darkest secret! I'm the only one that knows it. Kevin walked in to my room and sat Taylor on my bed. Joe woke up a few seconds later. "Great," I thought. Joe sat next to Taylor, shirtless and he hugged her super tight. Taylor sorta hugged him back. He kissed Taylor on the cheek again and he looked at me slyly and smiled. I was seriously about to punch this guy.

I NEED 4 COMMENTS TILL CHAPTER 3

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 12:48 PM
any comments?+

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 12:58 PM
anyyyy??

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 01:10 PM
is anyone gonna read it???

adolphin
04-13-2008, 01:12 PM
i just got back on ill read it right now!

EDIT:
I just read it!
It was awesome!
MAKE HIM PUNCH HIM!
haha!
lol!:lol:
:P

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 01:15 PM
o yeah and the rpg is starting!! :P

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 01:21 PM
3 moreeee

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 01:31 PM
anyyyyyyyy moree

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 01:36 PM
anyyyy

xXmandyXx
04-13-2008, 01:46 PM
more!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 01:48 PM
2 moreeee

adolphin
04-13-2008, 01:51 PM
More!!!!!!!

xXmandyXx
04-13-2008, 01:51 PM
more!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 02:02 PM
don't worry im typing moreee

adolphin
04-13-2008, 02:15 PM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANK U SO MUCH!
Now type faster!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 02:19 PM
I willllll!!

adolphin
04-13-2008, 02:21 PM
GOOD!
rite faster though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 02:22 PM
GAHH i willl!!

adolphin
04-13-2008, 02:23 PM
rite faster!!!!!!!!!!!!!
srry for the pressure!!!!!!!!!
but still!
rite faster!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh, and I replied to the RPG!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 02:25 PM
i'm trying to and ok!!

adolphin
04-13-2008, 02:27 PM
haha!
Ok, Ill stop pressuring u!
I rote somthin else on the RPG!
:P

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 02:28 PM
Chapter 3
[NICK'S POV]
After all of us were dressed we all went to the pool in our backyard. Taylor wore a bikini, and that made Joe and Kevin love her even more than what they used to love her. While Taylor tanned, My brothers and I were in the pool. I was thinking of ways to tell Taylor that I like her. Joe got out of the pool and sat next to Taylor. HE IS STILL TORTURING ME! Now since this is getting personal, I decided to tell Taylor now. "Uh Taylor, can I talk to you for a moment??" I asked her. "Uh sure, Nick." She said. "Wait, Taylor, before you go off and talk with Nick, I've got something to tell you!" Joe said. "What is it....." Taylor was cut off when Joe kissed her on the lips. OH NO HE DIDN'T!

I need 3 comments till chapter 4!

adolphin
04-13-2008, 02:30 PM
:o
EVIL JOE!
ANGRY VILLAGERS WILL BE AFTER HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!
more!

HannahMontanaismyhero
04-13-2008, 03:48 PM
Ohmigod Joes A Jerk In This More More More!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 04:04 PM
1 moreee comment!

adolphin
04-13-2008, 04:09 PM
More!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 04:31 PM
Chapter 4
[NICK'S POV]
Joe had crossed the line from about to fight mode, to BRING IT ON mode. After he kissed Taylor, I punched Him in the nose. It bled and Taylor gave him tissues. After my violent moment, I was about to pull Taylor aside to the guesthouse, but before I did, Kevin put her in the guesthouse himself and he locked the door. I tried to open the window, but I forgot I was outside. So I threw a brick at the window and I broke in. Kevin was already Kissing Taylor. I punched Kevin too, except it was even harder. Kevin unlocked the door and left. I sat next to Taylor and Smiled. "Uh, what did you want to tell me??" She asked. "Ummm, that I ... I.... I.. love you." I said. She looked at me and Lit up. "I love you to." She said. I looked at her and Kissed her on the lips........

I NEED 5 COMMENTS TILL CHAPTER 5.

adolphin
04-13-2008, 04:35 PM
KEVIN TOO!
ANGRY VILLAGERS AHEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
haha!
YAY NICK!
lots of kissing!
haha!
MORE!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 06:22 PM
4 moreeeeee

adolphin
04-13-2008, 06:29 PM
MORE!
NOW!
now?
NOW!
pweez?!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 06:40 PM
3 moreee

adolphin
04-13-2008, 07:02 PM
More!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 07:06 PM
2 moreeee

adolphin
04-13-2008, 07:07 PM
MORE!
NOW!
pweez?!

xXmandyXx
04-13-2008, 07:57 PM
more!

volleyballprincess33
04-13-2008, 09:03 PM
i'll post it later!!

volleyballprincess33
04-14-2008, 09:47 AM
i lied i'll post it after school or probably tonight!!