SmileyMiley11
04-08-2008, 12:15 AM
Ok If you guys remember my last fan fiction Elevator Love. Which I doubt any of you do since only one person read it, you'll have to read that first to fully understand this one. So if you haven't read it here is the LINK (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=68401) Ok so yeah I decided to do another chapter of it because today at school I got inspired to write just one more for this story (This is the final for this one). Ok so I know I'm pretty boring so why don't I just get on with the story? lol Here I go......
Elevator Love Part II :
Five Months Later
Vanessa and Zac lay cuddled up next to each other in Zac's apartment watching a scary movie. "AHH!" Vanessa scrwamed as she nestled closer into Zac. "Its Okay Babe, I'll take care of you" She said with a smile and he pulled her close and kissed the top of her head. Vanessa smiled remembering back to the time she had first met Zac. Their meeting wasn't like any normal meeting she'd ever heard of. Normal people just caught each others gazes and went from there, and occasionally people would bump into each other and fall in love. However Vanessa was not a normal person she had met Zac while being stuck in an elevator for quite some time. Now it had been 5 months since that incident and Vanessa couldn't be happier Zac was perfect in her eyes. "What are you thinking about?" Zac asked interuppting Vanessa's thoughts. Vanessa gently shaked her head coming back into reality, "Oh nothing just how happy I am that I met you" Vanessa said with a soft smile. "I'm happy I met you too" Zac replied and he kissed her. Pretty soon both of them wern't paying any attention to what was going on in the movie they were to wrapped up in each other. Finally Zac asked "Do you wanna go to Paty's to get some lunch?" Vanessa nodded. "OK lets go" he said pulling her off the ratty couch. "Just let me get my jacket" Zac said behind him as he disappered behind the door to his room. After a few minutes he returned with the jacket in his hand and a huge smirk on his face. "What??" Vanessa asked. "Oh nothing you just have a cookie crumb stuck to your face" he said as he flicked the crumb onto the already dirty floor. See Zac wasn't the clean type he threw everything on the floor, his whole apartment looked more like a dumpster that a suitable place to live according to his mom, but Vanessa didn't even care. "thanks" Vanessa said as they made themselves to Zac's Car. After ten minutes of chattering in his car they pulled up at Paty's their favorite local diner. He quickly opened his door and walked over to Vanessa's side to open her door. 'He is such a gentlemen!' swooned Vanessa but said "Thanks" Zac noticed that Vanessa seemed a little out of it lately but decided not to comment on it and they just walked into the diner to be seated and waited for their order to be taken. Vanessa still kept quiet, lately she had been feeling this weird sensation everytime she was with Zac and its not that she didn't like it, its just that she felt like she needed to tell someone her feelings but she didn't want to go to fast and scare zac off because he was the best thing that ever happened to her besides 50% off sales at the mall which didn't happen to often but Zac was better that silly old sales. Vanessa stared blankly at her shoes and Zac shifted awkwardly not knowing what to do. Zac was about to ask her what was wrong when a young lady came by to ask for their orders. After they had ordered Zac had felt like he shouldn't say anything at all. Vanessa noticed he was nervous so she looked up at him and smiled. He smiled back and finally asked "Vanessa whats wrong?" Vanessa started twirling her hair with her index finger and said "Nothing at all" Zac knew she was lying by the way she twirled her hair she always did that when she was nervous. "Vanessa I know your lying just tell me...please?" Zac pleaded. Vanessa sighed and said "Zac lately I've been wanting to tell you something but I'm afraid of what you'll say.." Zac's face looked serious "what is it Vanessa??" he asked with pure curiousity. "Well.." Vanessa began "everytime I'm around you, you make me feel special and I.. I.." "Come on just spit it out!" Zac saud joking. Vanessa sighed once more and 'spit it out' "Zac I...I think I'm in love with you" She said. Zac just stared at her. 'Oh no he doesn't feel the same way! I knew I should have just kept my mouth shut but no I have such a big mouth!' Vanessa thought. Finally Zac realized he needed to say something and simlpy replied.
"Vanessa I love you too"
So there it is, I personally think its some of best work! What do you guys think? Please read and comment. I don't know why but everytime I write something and knowing that at least one person read it and liked it makes me feel beautiful inside. I know it sounds cheesy but its completely true. So you better read it lol ;).
Elevator Love Part II :
Five Months Later
Vanessa and Zac lay cuddled up next to each other in Zac's apartment watching a scary movie. "AHH!" Vanessa scrwamed as she nestled closer into Zac. "Its Okay Babe, I'll take care of you" She said with a smile and he pulled her close and kissed the top of her head. Vanessa smiled remembering back to the time she had first met Zac. Their meeting wasn't like any normal meeting she'd ever heard of. Normal people just caught each others gazes and went from there, and occasionally people would bump into each other and fall in love. However Vanessa was not a normal person she had met Zac while being stuck in an elevator for quite some time. Now it had been 5 months since that incident and Vanessa couldn't be happier Zac was perfect in her eyes. "What are you thinking about?" Zac asked interuppting Vanessa's thoughts. Vanessa gently shaked her head coming back into reality, "Oh nothing just how happy I am that I met you" Vanessa said with a soft smile. "I'm happy I met you too" Zac replied and he kissed her. Pretty soon both of them wern't paying any attention to what was going on in the movie they were to wrapped up in each other. Finally Zac asked "Do you wanna go to Paty's to get some lunch?" Vanessa nodded. "OK lets go" he said pulling her off the ratty couch. "Just let me get my jacket" Zac said behind him as he disappered behind the door to his room. After a few minutes he returned with the jacket in his hand and a huge smirk on his face. "What??" Vanessa asked. "Oh nothing you just have a cookie crumb stuck to your face" he said as he flicked the crumb onto the already dirty floor. See Zac wasn't the clean type he threw everything on the floor, his whole apartment looked more like a dumpster that a suitable place to live according to his mom, but Vanessa didn't even care. "thanks" Vanessa said as they made themselves to Zac's Car. After ten minutes of chattering in his car they pulled up at Paty's their favorite local diner. He quickly opened his door and walked over to Vanessa's side to open her door. 'He is such a gentlemen!' swooned Vanessa but said "Thanks" Zac noticed that Vanessa seemed a little out of it lately but decided not to comment on it and they just walked into the diner to be seated and waited for their order to be taken. Vanessa still kept quiet, lately she had been feeling this weird sensation everytime she was with Zac and its not that she didn't like it, its just that she felt like she needed to tell someone her feelings but she didn't want to go to fast and scare zac off because he was the best thing that ever happened to her besides 50% off sales at the mall which didn't happen to often but Zac was better that silly old sales. Vanessa stared blankly at her shoes and Zac shifted awkwardly not knowing what to do. Zac was about to ask her what was wrong when a young lady came by to ask for their orders. After they had ordered Zac had felt like he shouldn't say anything at all. Vanessa noticed he was nervous so she looked up at him and smiled. He smiled back and finally asked "Vanessa whats wrong?" Vanessa started twirling her hair with her index finger and said "Nothing at all" Zac knew she was lying by the way she twirled her hair she always did that when she was nervous. "Vanessa I know your lying just tell me...please?" Zac pleaded. Vanessa sighed and said "Zac lately I've been wanting to tell you something but I'm afraid of what you'll say.." Zac's face looked serious "what is it Vanessa??" he asked with pure curiousity. "Well.." Vanessa began "everytime I'm around you, you make me feel special and I.. I.." "Come on just spit it out!" Zac saud joking. Vanessa sighed once more and 'spit it out' "Zac I...I think I'm in love with you" She said. Zac just stared at her. 'Oh no he doesn't feel the same way! I knew I should have just kept my mouth shut but no I have such a big mouth!' Vanessa thought. Finally Zac realized he needed to say something and simlpy replied.
"Vanessa I love you too"
So there it is, I personally think its some of best work! What do you guys think? Please read and comment. I don't know why but everytime I write something and knowing that at least one person read it and liked it makes me feel beautiful inside. I know it sounds cheesy but its completely true. So you better read it lol ;).