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D.H.C
04-02-2008, 05:27 PM
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Katie Young
Katie Young Has Just turned 15 and her life isnt exactly perfect she has to babysit her brother and sister all the time her parents are both acholics and her dad is absuive at some points...Katie finally gets the couarge to leave her family when she leaves she meets new firends... a new crush. Will her life finally be called perfect or will it just stay the same??


PS IF YOU CANNOT STAND DRAMA ABUSE...then do NOT read this fan fic.

adolphin
04-02-2008, 05:28 PM
oooooooo
sounds good START!

CASSXIES
04-02-2008, 05:37 PM
Ooo.
:]
Start please.

D.H.C
04-02-2008, 05:47 PM
Katie Is Babysiting her brother and sister
Mom: God Katie you are just a mistake a good for nothing kid!!
Katie: Mom Why Are You Always Like This To ME!!!
Dad: Because What SHE SAYS IS TRUE!!!
Mom: Sometimes i wish you were NEVER BORN!!!!
Katie: You Guys Are DRUNK again arent you?? what are the kids gonna think of you when there older?!?!?!?!
Mom: They Will understand that we are smart..and that they should do the same!
Dad: Katie Come Here!!!!
Katies Dad Begins To Slap Her. Katie Runs Up Stairs To Look at her eye
Eye: http://i29.tinypic.com/mm62o5.jpg
Katie: Great theres no possible way that im gonna be able to cover this up with makeup!!
Karlie Katies sister wo is 13: Are you okay sis??
Katie: No now go to bed before dad comes!!!
Karlie hurried to bed and katie went into her room
Katies Bedroom was the nicest room in t he whole house because katie had been working on it for 3 years
Katie: the nicest and safest room in the house
Dad: KATIE I SAID GET TO BED!!
Katie Layed there restly all night she went to school on 0 hours of sleep
Sammy katies bff: Hey What Happendd To Your Eye?!?!?!
Katie: My...
Sammy: Your Dad again!!!
Katie: yea
Sammy: you have to tell someone about this its just gonna get worse..
Katie: i no and tonights my last nigh of putting up with the Crap!!!
Sammy: good!!!
Katie: Yes its good!! By the way sammy...Take Care Of My Sister and Brothers For Me!!!!
Sammy: Huh?? What Do You mean??
B4 she could say anything else Katie Was gone

adolphin
04-02-2008, 05:51 PM
omg!
more!

CASSXIES
04-02-2008, 05:51 PM
More.
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D.H.C
04-02-2008, 06:05 PM
Katie Got Home and of course she had to Babysit
Katie: Karlie come here!!
Karlie: Yea??
Katie: I need to tell you something!!
Karlie: Wat?!?!?!
Katie: Im Runing Away for good!!!
Karlie: NOO!!!! whos gonna babysit Isic??
Katie: You You can do it trust me!!!!!!
Karlie: IM 13!!!
Katie: i statred babysitting when i was 10
Karlei: WOW!!
Knock Knock..on the door
Katie answers the door
Sammy: What are you doing?!?!?!
Katie: Leaving!!!
Sammy: You cant!!! who will i talk to?
Katie: Kelsey!!! were her bffs!!
Sammy: what will i tell the teachers?!?!?!?
Katie: I got sick of my parents and left!!!!
Sammy: Then the police will loke for you!!!
Kaite: They Will Have no idea who i am..im a nobody anyways!
Sammy: No your not you Katie Elizabeth Young!!!
Katie: Yea...right nobody cares!!
Sammy: I CARE WE CARE!!!
Katie: Sammy if i stay i get abused...do you want me to die??
Sammy: NO ill just miss you..to...DEATH!!
Katie: Here have my necklace
Sammy: Your K naclace!!!
Katie: Yes..its for you to rember me!!
Sammy: *Crys*
Katie: Well..im ready.
Sammy: You stay safe you hear me!!!
Katie: Yes
Karlie: *Hugs* Im gonna miss you!!!
Sammy: ill stay here with them..
Katie: Just Watch out for my dad!
Sammy: i will!!!
katie leaves and is now on her own. soon her dad and mom are home
Dad: Wheres KATIE?!?!?!?!
Sammy: Gone!!!!
Dad: Thats No Way To speak to me!!!
Katies dad comes towards sammy
Sammy: you lay one finger on me Ill call the Cops!!
Dad: do it see if i care!!!
Sammy runs home grabes Karlie ans Isic
Mom: Wheres Katie??
Dad: Gone
Mom:.....

adolphin
04-02-2008, 06:07 PM
ooooo
wat is she gonna say!

xoxo Babii xoxo
04-02-2008, 06:10 PM
more.

CASSXIES
04-02-2008, 06:10 PM
Moreee.

D.H.C
04-02-2008, 11:12 PM
next chapeter tomorro

adolphin
04-03-2008, 06:02 AM
no, not tomorrow!!!!!