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Smiley_Miley1234
11-29-2007, 09:32 PM
Summary:
Too many bad things happen to Miley. Horrible things. Friends will be made, friends will be forgotten, people will come back when you least expect it.
And yes, sometimes I will use song titles as chapter titles.
Chapters:
Chapter 1: The Twisted Carnival Ride Begins (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1608289&postcount=11)
Chapter 2: Just a Dream (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1624036&postcount=20)

Smiley_Miley1234
11-30-2007, 11:54 PM
Oh come on! Somebody has to want to see what will happen in chap. 1. Seriously. There will be lots of interesting things going on in chap. 1. And all the chaps after that.

ΜĭľėуĊуŕŭŝŁövëř♥Je§§îca
12-01-2007, 02:03 PM
i want more....since anybody doesnt i think its going to be a good story

Destiny9910
12-01-2007, 02:05 PM
More

destinysmiles!
12-01-2007, 02:30 PM
start!

Destiny9910
12-01-2007, 03:00 PM
more

xoxdestinynightxox
12-01-2007, 06:22 PM
more!

Smiley_Miley1234
12-01-2007, 11:27 PM
Ok, I'll start tomorrow, I don't have enough time to write tonight.

xoxdestinynightxox
12-02-2007, 05:24 AM
OK but now it is tomorrow...START jk but plz start

Smiley_Miley1234
12-02-2007, 11:04 AM
Ok, Im starting.

Smiley_Miley1234
12-02-2007, 11:06 AM
Chapter 1: The Twisted Carnival Ride Begins
It all started that one day. That one day. Everything was going great. Then, it all went downhill. How about we start from the beginning,
shall we?
Ok, so Hannah had won the American Music Awards' Artist of the Year and as if that wasn't great enough - she was the youngest
artist in music history to win the award!! And of course she invited Lily, her best friend. It's about time for the Stewarts-
or should I Say Montanas go to the award show. Miley's Mammaw and Aunt Dolly was coming too - there shouldn't be any trouble
they promised to behave themselves. "I can't believe I'm winning this award! It's such an honor!" Hannah exclaimed. "Well, if
you want to get there on time, you better move!" Robby Ray said. Everyone grabbed their coats and left the house. Then, they
entered the limo. "Boy is this such an honor!! I'm the youngest person ever in music HISTORY to win this award!" "We know, we
know," Jackson said. "Your the youngest person in music history to win the award. Now would you PLEASE shut up about that stu-
pid award?" "You know, Jackson, if it was a stupid award, you'd get it down pat." Then, Hannah smiles a devilish smile. Jackson
acts like he didn't hear her. Then, the Hannah phone rang. "It's Trace." Hannah told everyone. "Yola." "Hey, Hannah-" "Ryan,
look out!!!!" Hannah yells. The limo swereves and they hit a car.The last thing Miley could hear was "Miles?
Miles? Say something Miles. Say something. Anything." Then, the sound of an ambulance coming down the street, getting louder
and louder as it approached her.

Secretpopstar1
12-02-2007, 11:39 AM
more!

Smiley_Miley1234
12-02-2007, 10:41 PM
Two more comments!!! :D

monster411
12-07-2007, 02:20 AM
omigoodnees...more!
I thought this was gonna n about carrie cuz of the title

But its really great ... More!!!!

Smiley_Miley1234
12-07-2007, 07:58 PM
One more comment!

destinysmiles!
12-07-2007, 08:14 PM
more

Destiny9910
12-07-2007, 08:40 PM
more omg hannah/ miley is goonna fie!

Secretpopstar1
12-07-2007, 08:41 PM
more!!!!! Still!

Smiley_Miley1234
12-07-2007, 09:09 PM
OK guys, I'm writing. I think y'all might like it.

OH!!! And y'all are welcome to give me ideas and such, just be sure to PM ME!!! If you post here, It will be completely ignored.

Smiley_Miley1234
12-07-2007, 09:39 PM
Chapter 2: Just a Dream
Miley looked around her. "Where am I?" She wondered. "I don't see anyone." "Think again, Sweetheart." It was as if someone was
reading her mind. And that voice.. that voice.. it was so.. familiar. Was it? No, no it couldn't be. "Mom!" Miley exclaimed.
"Why hello again, Miley!" They were both smiling as big as they could. "Miley, why are you here?" Miley's mom asked. "I don't
know, first, I was talking on the phone with Tracey and then.. sirens.. and Dad saying.. I don't remember it all." Miley glan-
ced around the room one more time. "Well, Miley, there's some reason why your here, Honey." All of a sudden, Miley's Mom sna-
pped her fingers and they were in the Stewarts' home. Miley looked at her mom. "How did you-" Robbie Ray came down the stairs
she knew what was happening. It was a rewind of what happened before. "Oops, wrong place." Miley's mom snapped her fingers again.
Then, Miley and her mom were at the hospital. "Well, we need to do some X-rays first, Mr. Montana." The real Miley was lieing
on the bed, with some blood down from the head down. Miley could tell that her leg was broken. "Well, then do the x-rays!"
Robbie Ray shouted. "I'm sorry, Doc, it's just that.. that I want my baby girl back." Robbie Ray started bursting out in
tears. "Uh-oh, I think you over stayed your visit." Miley's mom was about to disappear. "No, Mom wait!" Miley took a locket
out of her pocket. "It has a picture of me inside," Miley said. "Just so you'll always remember how big your little baby has
gotten. Tears started to stream down her face. "Oh, Miley, this is beautiful. I love it." Miley's mom took the locket and
put it on. "Mom, I'll miss you."
"I'll miss you to, Honey."
Miley's mom turned around to a bright light. And she walked in. Miley knew her mom was in a better place, and thaat one day
Miley herself would go to that wonderful place. "I think it's about time for me to go back." Miley turned and saw herself on
the bedside.

Smiley_Miley1234
12-10-2007, 07:34 PM
Doesn't Anybody like it? :(

Destiny9910
12-10-2007, 07:55 PM
duh ME!

Smiley_Miley1234
12-10-2007, 09:35 PM
^ lol.
One or two more comments. :)

Destiny9910
12-11-2007, 06:25 PM
more

monster411
12-17-2007, 01:31 AM
beauticious.
I have a question though:
Did Miley's mom JUST die?? OR has she been dead for a while, then Miley just visited her??

Smiley_Miley1234
12-17-2007, 01:18 PM
beauticious.
I have a question though:
Did Miley's mom JUST die?? OR has she been dead for a while, then Miley just visited her??
She had been dead for a while, Miley just visited her.

I'm gonna start writing chapter 3 tomorrow. :)