Another script (without a name)

[apogeum]

I once said that I wouldn't write another fantasy script; guess I lied. Maybe the writer's strike motivated me.

Haven't given the thing a name though, not always that good at naming things. Warning though, it's quite long (not as long as the first one I did though, this is closer to what a normal HM script would be in length. Too bad I haven't been able to get hold of an original script yet). I'm not posting it on here for that reason but linking it externally, it's just too long to post on here (the layout would get screwed up as well).

http://www.bvang.com/HM2.txt

It will really be a while before I write another one though, have to get back to rewriting my movie script.

[cutiepie7897]

cool

[mileycyrusisluv]

I thought of a title, a spin off of a song of course


Not-So-Sweet Sixteen

[apogeum]

I was thinking about something in that direction, not really a classic song though.

[destinysmiles!]

its good

[apogeum]

I've been thinking about the title thing, the best thing I came up with so far is "Bittersweet Sixteen" which would be sort of a play on "Bittersweet Symphony" by The Verve, not too fond of that one though.

Just wondering, is this really too long? Since I'm noticing that not that much people are reading it? Or does it have to do with the lay-out? Can't really do it in a different layout if that's the problem; it's a normal sitcom script layout.

[apogeum]

It's clear to me now that people don't actually read things that aren't posted on the forum itself, so I guess I'll try posting it in parts after all; even with the messed up lay-out. Just to note that it will take fourteen parts if it's posted like this. If nobody replies after this I of course bother posting the rest :P. And no I still don't have a name for it.

ACT ONE

SCENE A

FADE IN

EXT. OUTSIDE OF A CLUB - NIGHT

A CROWD IS STANDING OUTSIDE OF A CLUB ALONGSIDE A RED
CARPET. A REPORTER IS STANDING ON THE RED CARPET AS HANNAH
AND LOLA WALK UP.

REPORTER

Reporting from Hannah Montana's big

sixteenth birthday bash here; and

here comes the birthday girl

herself.

HANNAH WALKS UP TO THE REPORTER WHO STARTS INTERVIEWING
HER.

REPORTER

Happy birthday Hannah.

HANNAH

Thank you.

REPORTER

How does it feel to be sixteen?

HANNAH

Just great, I'm so excited about

this party.

REPORTER

So what will this sixteenth year

bring us on the Hannah Montana

front?

HANNAH

I'll of course bring out another

album and I'll pretty much do

anything to keep my fans happy.

REPORTER

Well, go have fun at your party and

happy Birthday again.

HANNAH

Thanks.

HANNAH AND LILLY WALK INTO THE CLUB.

LOLA

This is so cool; you've got the best

record label ever for throwing this

party.

INT. CLUB - NIGHT

THEY GET INTO THE CLUB AND LOOK AROUND.

HANNAH

They're cool alright, I just wish

they gave me more control of the

guest list though.

LOLA

Why?

HANNAH POINTS BEHIND LOLA. LILLY TURNS AROUND AND SEES
MIKAYLA.

LOLA

I see....

MIKAYLA

Hannah! Happy Birthday.

MIKAYLA WALKS UP TO HANNAH AND KISSES HER ON THE CHEEK. AS
MIKAYLA PULLS BACK HANNAH WIPES OFF HER CHEEK.

HANNAH

What are you doing here?

MIKAYLA

Can't a friend come to your birthday

party?

HANNAH

Friends yes.

LOLA

So what are you doing here?

MIKAYLA

I was invited by Hannah.

LOLA

Not really.

MIKAYLA

It said Hannah Montana on the

invitation.

HANNAH

I didn't exactly have full control

of my guest list.

LOLA

Being invited doesn't mean you have

to come.

MIKAYLA

Can't hurt to be seen in public.

HANNAH

Depends on what kind of person you

are.

MIKAYLA

The whole world thinks we are

friends, you should be happy about

that.

HANNAH

One of the disadvantages of being

famous; things being made up about

you.

MIKAYLA

Well, have a good time anyway, ta

da.

MIKAYLA WAVES AND WALKS AWAY.

HANNAH

And I looked forward to this party.

LILLY

You still can, you can just ignore

her. Now lets party!

THEY GO INTO THE PARTY.

[supersarah089]

Wow! that's good.

[apogeum]

Thanks for the praise but I think you're one of the few that sees it that way :) (not that I mind).