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MileyFan_4_Ever
11-25-2007, 06:44 PM
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Someone Comes A Knocking.
introduction to story
This winter holiday, I was to stay with some distant relatives whom I've never heard of. The same as every other holiday. My mother didn't exactly have a job of glam and luxury, and didn't make ten folds of money. So to help pay for certain things, my brother and I have been thrown about here and there to work for family. So this year, all my hard work would be given to my unlce and two cousins off in Florida. To help them in their ice cream parlor.
Not the greatest life to live, if you ask me. But that's my life. So tell me something. Why?
Why did they notice me? Why do they pay attention? Why have they been thrown into my life of routine? Why have they mixed everything up?
Why, why, why?! Please tell me!
You now, if you've read this far, are probably wondering what in the name of the great Lord Jesus I am talking about, and who exactly they are. Well I'll be sure to tell you in my story.
This is my story. The story of me.
Mattilda Ann Carsen.

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-25-2007, 06:44 PM
C A S T
m a i n
Mattilda Ann.
A Dude.
Another Dude.
One More Dude.

m i n o r
Jenny.
Kristin.
Casey.
Adri.
Aly.
EmBee.

m o r e m i n o r
Erin.
Kelly.
Ashley.
Sarah.
Veronica.
Lexi.

I N E E D S O M E C H A R A C T E R S
w a n n a b e o n e
Name.
Age.
Personality.
Looks.
[if picture is used, please link it]
Other Stuff.
Good? Bad? What?

C H A P T O R S
c o m m e n t f o r m o r e
one (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1595405&postcount=21)
two (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1597190&postcount=36)
three (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1599420&postcount=53)
four (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1645338&postcount=87)
five (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1660857&postcount=93)
six (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1665032&postcount=100)

cutiepie7897
11-25-2007, 06:48 PM
cool more

heyitswhatever
11-25-2007, 06:50 PM
Ooh cool! does it have jb?
Also, I wanna be a character. Ha, my character name should be 'Jazz'.. hence the fact that I gave you that nickname ;D

destinysmiles!
11-25-2007, 06:51 PM
post more!

heyitswhatever
11-25-2007, 07:02 PM
Name. Erin {Or Jazz :P}
Age. 14 {But I like 18 better because now I can have Joe & Kevin!}
Personality. I'm extremely kind! I make friends with anyone. I'm bubbly and I take life as it comes.
Looks.
http://a103.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/63/m_9504b146b694f9ade1bf4d33459accfe.jpg
http://a82.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/77/m_a75f19946d4338651bf0ce1ff4378b99.jpg
{Tell me if you can't see them^}
[if picture is used, please link it]
Other Stuff. I love Kevin, but lately I've been in a Joe phase. Idk.
But yeaa, I have an autistic brother so I don't judge. AT ALL. I also don't care about if I'm super skinny or overweight. I'll eat and not care if it makes me look pudgy. I'm very outgoing, and if someone is too shy to try something new with me I'll just forget it and do it without them. I'm very loyal and trustworthy. I'm outspoken and honest.
Good? Bad? What? Good!

m&jrule
11-25-2007, 07:04 PM
another ff by ashley [:
cant wait for it to start
Name.Kelly
Age.13
Personality.funny, outgoing, talkative, smart [sometimes] :p completely amazingly hyper! crazyyy
Looks. Me! (http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j19/miscool10/l_ac2e07d572b29544d862d55a72fc1965.png)
[if picture is used, please link it]
Other Stuff.hmmm....well im completely nick jonas obsessed [: and i hate my name, a lot lol so you can either use the name kelly or give me a different name, your choice, im always nice unless your mean or do anything to hurt my friends. if u do that u should run lol
Good? Bad? What?Good [:

niiro_tatsu
11-25-2007, 07:08 PM
Name. Jenny
Age. 15
Personality. Crazy, hyper, clumsy at times :P Fun. Nice to those i like, mean to those i hate. Very clever. Play pranks ALLLLLLLLLLLL the time. A huge prankster and troublemaker.
Looks.My sig:
Tall, skinny---ish, long layered brown hair with side bangs. brown eyes. tanish skin color.
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3679/dsc03051gk5.th.jpg (http://img99.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc03051gk5.jpg)
[if picture is used, please link it]
Other Stuff. I like Joe the best. I love Nick's soft hair, and Kevin's sense of style. And i love Joe's white ray-ban sunglasses (hence my pic haha)
Good? Bad? What? Good

destinysmiles!
11-25-2007, 07:08 PM
Name. ashley -did u know that i love ur name?-
Age. 13 years or 14
Personality. weird/random. crazy,. funny,. good friend
Looks. brown eyes-hair,. thin., pink cheeks,. i kinda look like miley-vanessa-selebna mixxed up
[if picture is used, please link it]
Other Stuff.,.,.,.i like nick jonas?
Good? Bad? What? good

( soulmates )
11-25-2007, 07:17 PM
I WANNA BE IN ET


Name. Adri/Adrianne
Age. 14. but make me any age I do not care.
Personality. can I fill this out later? my sundae is beckoning me...
Looks. click me (http://a930.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/91/l_9dccf7d2cb85beff98ba80fbeb075141.png)
Other Stuff. kevo is amazing.
Good? Bad? What? I don't rather care.

shopaholicoxxo
11-25-2007, 07:17 PM
Name. Casey
Age. 14
Personality. goody-too-shoes, funny, nice. shy around people i dont know but loud & bubbly around people i know well. if i dont like you you'll know it -- i dont keep it a secret. im straightforward.
Looks. pro-pic (:
[if picture is used, please link it]
Other Stuff. i love all the JB's. x] and i get confused sometimes about who i like best. but i think i've come to the conclusion that i usually like Joe best. it just changes sometimes. but yeah ... right now i love Joe. (:
Good? Bad? What? good please (:

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-25-2007, 07:25 PM
Okay. I May Have To Look At These Forms And Decide Who Will Be Main, And Who Won't Be.
Because Right Now That's A Lot Of People.
But All Who Posted A Form Will Be In The Fan Fiction At Some Point. I Promise You That.
-----
Hmm. And You All Seem To Have This Strange Hypothesis That The Jonas Brothers Will Be In This?
Weirdos.
What Would EVUR Make You All Think That?
Lol.
-----
EDIT. I Will Post More Tomorrow. I Still Need To Write The Chapter. And By That Time, We All Should Know The Main And Minor Characters.

m&jrule
11-25-2007, 07:28 PM
^^
haha
hmm ashley i wonder why ??
[:

heyitswhatever
11-25-2007, 07:28 PM
Okay. I May Have To Look At These Forms And Decide Who Will Be Main, And Who Won't Be.
Because Right Now That's A Lot Of People.
But All Who Posted A Form Will Be In The Fan Fiction At Some Point. I Promise You That.
-----
Hmm. And You All Seem To Have This Strange Hypothesis That The Jonas Brothers Will Be In This?
Weirdos.
What Would EVUR Make You All Think That?
Lol.

Lolz, did I ? :33:

shopaholicoxxo
11-25-2007, 07:34 PM
Okay. I May Have To Look At These Forms And Decide Who Will Be Main, And Who Won't Be.
Because Right Now That's A Lot Of People.
But All Who Posted A Form Will Be In The Fan Fiction At Some Point. I Promise You That.
-----
Hmm. And You All Seem To Have This Strange Hypothesis That The Jonas Brothers Will Be In This?
Weirdos.
What Would EVUR Make You All Think That?
Lol.
-----
EDIT. I Will Post More Tomorrow. I Still Need To Write The Chapter. And By That Time, We All Should Know The Main And Minor Characters.
hmm ashley.
why would anyone think that?!? x]

Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
11-25-2007, 07:47 PM
Okay. I May Have To Look At These Forms And Decide Who Will Be Main, And Who Won't Be.

Because Right Now That's A Lot Of People.
But All Who Posted A Form Will Be In The Fan Fiction At Some Point. I Promise You That.
-----
Hmm. And You All Seem To Have This Strange Hypothesis That The Jonas Brothers Will Be In This?
Weirdos.
What Would EVUR Make You All Think That?
Lol.
-----

EDIT. I Will Post More Tomorrow. I Still Need To Write The Chapter. And By That Time, We All Should Know The Main And Minor Characters.

DO I have to point out all the facts? =D Can't wait for the first chapter.

krrristin
11-25-2007, 08:58 PM
Name. Kristin
Age. 15
Personality. I am much different than my online self. If you set aside the randomness, the upfrontness if that even is a word, and the know-it-all like attitude I present online... then you have me. I really am not special.
Here are something that I AM:
I'm smart, yeah, but I do have too many blonde moments to be considered normal.
I can be insecure... something people cant run away from.
Bubbley, Im the kind of person that usually attempts to find the positive in life.
I can be mysterious... if you refer to Lex's fanfic she pretty much summed me up in the first two chapters of my entrance. THATS me. Yeah I say what I think, but Im not as blunt as I am online. Oh and Im not forward...
Im a giggler. I laugh at the weirdest of times... and thats one of my best assests.
Im sarcastic! Wheee!
Oh and I love food... not so much american food. But Im forced to eat chicken whenever possible but I love oriental food... ps, Im a vegetarian.
I basically act like Miley Stewart on Hannah Montana.
Looks.
Im about 100 pounds and 5'4". Im petite. Twiggy... whatever you'd like to call it.
You can refer to my propic... ;)
[if picture is used, please link it]
Other Stuff. Im a Nicholas Jonas kinda gal. hehe
Good? Bad? What? Good preferabley... I hate to be hated

mileyforever
11-25-2007, 09:24 PM
Name. Aly
Age. 12
Personality.
If you must know :P
I am energetic most of the time and i'll hate you if you rain on my parade[just kidding], I get bored easily and get amused very easily, I can be annoying at times but only if it becomes too quiet for me...i'm like the person who laughs the loudest at a movie, i tend to be quiet and shut people out sometimes...and you know how I act..right?
Looks. Look at my profile picture..
[if picture is used, please link it]
Other Stuff. Kevin :P
Good? Bad? What? Good please.

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-26-2007, 05:36 PM
Alright. I'll Have To Post Later Because [Shh.] I'm Not Supposed To Be On Now.
And I Have Massive Amounts Of Homework To Do.
But I Was Going Over What I Have Written For The First Chapter, And You Know What I Think?
I Think You All Must Be Absolutely Psycho To Think That I Am Such A Fantastic Writer.
I Pretty Much Smell Worse Than A Donkey In A Hot Sauna In August! Okay? Okay.
But I Will Continue Just For You People. Cuz Ya'll Think I'm So Good.
But Really Guys, Come On, You're Being Too Nice :P I'm Horrible!!!

heyitswhatever
11-26-2007, 07:11 PM
Alright. I'll Have To Post Later Because [Shh.] I'm Not Supposed To Be On Now.
And I Have Massive Amounts Of Homework To Do.
But I Was Going Over What I Have Written For The First Chapter, And You Know What I Think?
I Think You All Must Be Absolutely Psycho To Think That I Am Such A Fantastic Writer.
I Pretty Much Smell Worse Than A Donkey In A Hot Sauna In August! Okay? Okay.
But I Will Continue Just For You People. Cuz Ya'll Think I'm So Good.
But Really Guys, Come On, You're Being Too Nice :P I'm Horrible!!!

Noo. You seriously are an amazing writer, continue!

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-27-2007, 12:18 AM
A Cinderella Story.
chapter one
"Mattilda! It's closing time! Get to work!" one of my cousin's called out at me.
I looked in the direction of the voice. My cousin's are younger than me, and here I am, taking orders from them. Story of my life. I slumped out of the chair I sat in, and sluggishly made my way to supply closet. Today was my third day here, and already I had an everyday routine. So, like I did every day for the past three days, I grabbed the broom so I could start to sweep the floors.
Everybody left. My unlcle, Aandi, Aidan, everybody. I was now alone. Everyday stuff.
As I swept the floor and fixed other random things that I saw out of place, I wasn't soon alone anymore. There was was rapid rapping at the door.
This, however, was a tad bit strange and unusual. But I answered the door nonetheless.
A group of 3 girls all stood in the door. All seeming about my age.
"OMIGAWSH! CAN YOU BELIEVE HOW CLOSE WE WERE?!" One of the girls practically screamed.
I tried to stop them from coming in, but they trampled over me and came in anyways.
"Uh. Guys. Guys! Yeah, um, this place is closed." I yelled loudly to be heard.
They all stopped in place and looked at me.
"Well obviously. if we're here now, it can't be closed. Lé duh!" One of the other girls said.
"Yeah. Seriously! Anyways, I'm starved. What do you got to eat in this place?" The screaming girl said, more calmly this time.
"Um. Well you're at an ice cream parlor, so, my guess, you're gonna find ice cream here. But that doesn't really matter, because at this time - or any time really - I can't serve you guys." I said, locking the door back up and starting to get back to my sweeping.
"What are you talking about, um, Cinderella?" The last girl said.
"I'm talking about the fact that I don't have the, uh, privelages to work behind the counter with the ice cream stuff or whatever. I just clean the place." I said throwing some garbage away. "And it's Mattilda. Not Cinderella."
"Do you know the family that works here?" The second girl said.
I stopped and looked at them. "Uh. Yeah. I'm related to them. And living with them at the moment."
They all exchanged glances. Then looked at me and nodded. The second girl started talking again. "Evil adult. Evil siblings. Put you to work. Face it girly. You got it bad. You're living a Cinderella story!"
I thought about it all for a moment. As crazy as it sounded, she made a point. Then I shook my head. "You're crazy. I'm NOT living a Cinderella story. Okay? But you all really need to be leaving."
I figured they decided to ignore me and go back to their own business, because I overheard them talking. This is what I heard.
"That ... was absolutely amazing!" The screaming one said.
"Definitely. And did you guys see ..." The last girl said.
"Lé duh! And I'm positive he saw me too." Girl number two.
"Right Kristin. Whatever you gotta tell yourself. But ... was extra hott tonight!" Last girl.
"For sure! I can't wait until we see them again on ... " Screaming girl.
"God! They are so hott! I love them all!" The Kristin girl.
"Hey uh, Matti girl person! Can we get ANY food at all, or no. I'm still hungry!" The screaming girl shouted.
"You're ALWAYS hungry Jenny!" Kristin laughed.
"I told you. I can't do anything. I just clean." I shouted from the supply closet. I was putting the broom away. "And, hey, what are you guys talking about?"
A phone rang. It seemed to belong to the last girl. "Oh crap. Guys, we gotta go. That was my mom."
"Casey. Tell your mom to stop ruining all our fun! Oh well. Little miss Cinderella over there has been trying to kick us out from the beginning." Jenny laughed, and started to the door. Even though she was the first to start heading that way, Kristin was the first to make it there.
"Hey Mattilda! Your door won't open!" she shouted at me. I laughed at her.
"It's, um, locked." I said between laughs.
She looked at the lock and switched it. Then opened the door and nodded. "Right. Thanks." She said and left. Then Jenny. And Casey last.
They left, and I locked the door again. Then went back to my work.
I kept thinking about what they were talking about. I wish I had heard more. But I'll have to find out later.
Now this sort of thing may seem like some type of mix up, but no, these three aren't the they I was referring to before. Not just yet.
Sure this did some weird things to my schedule, but nothing too drastic. They aren't the they. You'll have to wait for them to come.

Okay. So This Isn't The Best. But Whatever. It's Not The Worst.
Anyways, Enjoy It. More Will Come When It Comes.
It Actually Turned Out Better Than What I Had Before, So Be Happy. Lol.

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-27-2007, 12:30 AM
Okay. So I've Got The Cast All Figured Out Now. WooHoo For Me.
Anyways, Those Of You Who Are "More Minor"
Don't Take It The Wrong Way. I Just Don't Know You As Well As The "Minor"
People.
And As The Story Continues, I May Move You Up. Depending On How Important You Become.
I Don't Exactly Know...
Anyways. Yeah.

krrristin
11-27-2007, 12:42 AM
mmoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooore

niiro_tatsu
11-27-2007, 12:52 AM
WHAT?!?!? i thought that was amazing haha its PERFECT u captured me.. PERFECTLY haha the hungry part... so true

and kristin's le duh's! right on the dot! haha

i knew you had done kristin the second i read the first "le duh" and then i was wondering if the screaming girl was me.. and it was haha

niiro_tatsu
11-27-2007, 01:01 AM
oh yeah, post more tomorrow!

krrristin
11-27-2007, 01:06 AM
Haha i know!
Le Duh = me!

Psh, you stalker!

shopaholicoxxo
11-27-2007, 01:36 AM
ohmygosh you got me down perfectly x]
the MORE calm one {though not perfectly calm} who always ruins it when her mom says it's time to go :P
that is me in a nutshell. (:

why do i have this strange prediction that we saw 3 boys named nick, kevn & joe that night? :P whatever would lead me to think that ...? :P

write more!

heyitswhatever
11-27-2007, 05:10 PM
more!

krrristin
11-27-2007, 08:08 PM
Yo Cinderella!
You need to Post!
Le duh!

destinysmiles!
11-27-2007, 08:14 PM
more!

crazy_in_a_good_way
11-27-2007, 08:28 PM
Name. Embee
Age. 12- or as old as i need to be
Personality. don't you know?
Looks. uh, you've seen me but
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc243/embeesgraphics/mois.png
[if picture is used, please link it]
Other Stuff. yeah, actually no.
Good? Bad? What? hee hee bad.

( soulmates )
11-27-2007, 08:34 PM
port more my little patooshka
(I don't know what a patooshka is but it sounds cool)

crazy_in_a_good_way
11-27-2007, 08:36 PM
nice adri ;)

heyitswhatever
11-27-2007, 08:42 PM
Now, who can these 3 'Dudes' be ?

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-27-2007, 09:13 PM
I'll Start Writing Now. But There Is The Slight Posibility That I Won't Finish.
I'll Try Though.
Skittlez! You Are In For Sure! WOO!

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-27-2007, 11:10 PM
Work This Out.
chapter two
The next day rolled around, and no matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t seem to forget about those girls from last night. What were their names again? Oh well. But I do remember them talking about some guys they saw or something. And I still wanted to figure out who they were. I figured it was some sort of band or something. Most likely to be more than one person I assumed by the way they talked.
“Mattilda! Get up off your lazy arse and come help! Today is one of our busy days.” I heard Uncle call from the counter.
At that moment, my eyes lit up. For some reason, I had always wanted to work behind that counter. Since the day I arrived here. I wasn’t much of a people person, and yet I wanted this job! I jumped up from my seat and practically sprinted to my caller.
“Alright. Now do you know how to work the cash register?” He said solemnly.
I looked at it, and then at him. “Sorry, but no. Never have I worked in a place like this, and you never taught me how to do such a thing. I was just supposed to be the cleaning crew, so you never thought it of much importance to show me how to work the cash register.” I said all smart like.
He gave me a very confused look. “You could have stuck with a simple no. But alrighty then. Um. I guess just take orders then.” He said and shooed me away.
So I wasn’t working behind the counter, but I at least got to do something. And that was good enough for me. Normally I would get yelled at by random passerby because I was supposedly loitering. I was told to sit there until closing! People aren’t really my best thing to deal with. But I’d have to get over that for the next couple hours.
I heard the door open from the bell that rang whenever it opened. This was my time to shine. I looked for the people who walked in, and followed them with my eyes as they found a place to sit. After a few seconds I went to get their orders.
“Hello. I’m Mattilda. Um. What would you guys like to order?” I said. Not really knowing what to say.
“Cinderella?! Hey girl! I thought you couldn’t do this stuff? Just clean. Huh?” one of the people from the table blurted.
I looked at them. Three of the people were from the group here last night. Only there were 3 other girls with them.
“Normally, yes. That is all I do. But today we’re busy, and Uncle told me to work.” I said.
“Right. Well that’s all fine and dandy on one hand, but on the other hand, I’M STARVING! I’ll have a banana split, yo.” One girl said. She was one from last night. Penny was her name? I don’t know. I just nodded and wrote it down. The other girls told me what they wanted, and I did the same. Then walked to the counter to get the ice cream. After my Uncle and Aidan and Aandi got all the orders made, they gave them to me to hand out, of course. So I did so. Nobody else came in for a while, so my Uncle told me to stop working and wait until closing time. Typical.
So I decided to sit with the group of girls - Jenny, Kristin, Casey, Aly, Adri, and Embee. They ate really slow. Most of their ice cream was melted, and pretty much a shake now. Good thing they came in bowls.
I thought about last night, and then out of nowhere, blurted out, “Oh hey! You three. What were ya’ll talking about last night? About some boys or something…” I said and pointed to Jenny, Casey, and Kristin.
They looked at each other and started to giggle madly. “The Jonas Brothers!” One of them squeaked out. I couldn’t tell which one it was though.
I thought for a moment. Trying to think of who they were. But never heard of them. I just formed a look of confusion on my face and shrugged. “Who?”
Every single one of them dropped their jaw. “‘Who?!’” They all shouted in unison.
“How can you NOT know the Jonas Brothers?! They’re only the hottest teen band right now!” Casey yelled at me.
I shrugged. “I’m pretty much isolated and don’t get out much. Don’t know much about anybody.”
“But haven’t you ever seen them on the television? Like Disney Channel or something? Or heard them on the radio?” Embee said in complete shock.
I shook my head. “Nope. Never. I don’t got a television set. My mother says it kills the brain cells.” I said and pointed to a boy who was going completely ballistic. “She doesn’t want me to be like… that. And we never really could afford a radio. We never used a car, always walked to places. Saves money, and the ozone.” I smiled softly.
“Wow. That’s really something. Hey! I have the perfect idea! Why don’t you come with us to their concert in a couple days! It’d be perfect!” Aly suggested. They all nodded in agreement. I smiled and shrugged.
“I’d have to ask of course. But we’ll see. I’d love to go.”
“Well go ask now you patooshka! Go! The concerts a couple days away! And I want to show you my boyfriend!” Adri said and started to nudge me.
“I believe you mean MY boyfriend! And what in the world is a patooshka?!” Aly shouted.
Adri shrugged. “How am I supposed to know? But it sounds cool! And, actually, no. I meant what I said. Kevin is my boyfriend, and you know it!”
I laughed at them, and then went to go find Uncle.
“Uncle! Can I go to a concert in a couple days? With some, uh, friends?” I asked. The word friends sounded awkward to me. I’m not used to having any.
He shrugged. “I suppose. You’ve done a nice job here so far. But just so you know; it’s coming out of the pay if you have to spend money!”
I looked down. I didn’t want to take money away from helping my mom. “But wait. I worked extra hours today. Shouldn’t I get paid more? I can use that money!” I smiled.
He pondered the thought for a moment. “Maybe. But I’m sure you’ll need more money than just that. Earn it your own way if you will. But just know that if you need any from me, it’s coming from you.” He said and walked off.
I nodded and walked back to the table. “He said sure. But I gotta pay my way. Which is almost impossible.”
“Oh don’t worry Cinderelly. It’s some sort of special event type of thing. Completely free.” Kristin said. I smiled. I was going to a concert. My first concert.
And with… FRIENDS! I couldn’t wait!
Alright. So still no they. Aly, Adri and Embee weren’t them either. But they do come in soon I believe. Some time. But not yet. Be patient you will.

Okay. I Thought This Chapter Went Pretty Decent.
You Other Characters Will Be Mentioned In One Of The Next Couple Chapters.
So Yeah, Enjoy, Comment, And More Tomorrow Maybe.

niiro_tatsu
11-27-2007, 11:15 PM
ooo i loved it! u captured me perfectly once again! lol

“I’ll have a banana split, yo.”

Penny was her name?

HAHAHA i loved it!

shopaholicoxxo
11-27-2007, 11:16 PM
aww, i love it! (: write more, dear!

krrristin
11-27-2007, 11:21 PM
OMJ I like LOOOOOVED IT!

crazy_in_a_good_way
11-27-2007, 11:32 PM
i luff you. lol.

i'm soo inquisitive.

destinysmiles!
11-27-2007, 11:32 PM
more!

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-27-2007, 11:34 PM
lol Jenny :P
And I Finally Got A Banner Up.
Not The Best Of My Abilities, But It'll Do For Now.

Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
11-28-2007, 05:34 PM
You need to post more.

LotsaBigHearts
11-28-2007, 09:00 PM
Great chapter!! I love your stories!!

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-28-2007, 10:12 PM
Great chapter!! I love your stories!!
Aww. Thanks =)
And I'll Try My Best To Post Tomorrow, Tonight If I Can, But I Find That More Than Likely Not Gonna Happen.
Sorry.
I Have Like, A Massive Butt Load Amount Of Homework To Finish, And Then Tomorrow I'm Busy.
So Yeah. Sorry.
I'll Post Like, Quite A Bit Over The Weekend If Possible. So Don't Fret Too Much ;)

niiro_tatsu
11-28-2007, 10:25 PM
awwwwww mufasa! i love ur ff cause u captured me perfectly so like i want to read MORE lol

( soulmates )
11-28-2007, 10:48 PM
post please you little patooshka

supersarah089
11-28-2007, 11:33 PM
Great story so far. please post more!

Name. Sarah
Age. 18
Personality. weird, funny, night owl.Not Mean.
Looks.Brown hair and eyes short and has glasses.
[if picture is used, please link it]
Other Stuff.no
Good? Bad? What? good.

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-28-2007, 11:37 PM
Lol Jenny :P Adri :P You Two Make Me Giggle.
And Sarah, I Added You To The Cast.
Thanks For Applying.

krrristin
11-29-2007, 12:06 AM
Post

supersarah089
11-29-2007, 12:06 AM
You're welcome!

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-29-2007, 12:18 AM
Okay. I Guess I'll Post. Since I'm Special And Wrote A Chapter.
But Be Forewarned That It Is Icky. Quite Icky Actually.
I Don't Know What I Was Writing.
Worst Chapter So Far.

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-29-2007, 12:25 AM
Who Are You.
chapter three
Still overcome by the shock of having friends, yes, REAL friends, made me not want to get up for some reason this day. I begged and begged to get a day off so I could maybe try and do a little research on those brothers. The answer was no of course, but maybe the girls would be there today, and then I could ask them questions about the, um… Jones Brothers? No. Honas? I don’t think so. Oh well. I grabbed a small pad of paper. And wrote down a little note-to-self:

REMINDER:; find out who the band is, and REMEMBER when told.

After I wrote that down, I put the pad in my back pocket. I had a bad memory. Or a horrible one. I was somewhat close to being diagnosed with short term memory loss. I would more than likely need the pad of paper later in the day.
I went into the bathroom and pulled my hair into a messy bun, and then made my way to the car, where everyone else was waiting for me.
“It’s about time Mattilda. Hurry on now! We can’t be late to our own shop!” I heard Aandi complain from the back seat.
“Well SORRY Aandi, you know how I am in the mornings. And technically, you guys actually can show up any time you want little girl. It’s your shop. Remember? Or do you suffer from memory loss as well?” I smirked. But my last question was both sarcastic and serious. I didn’t know any of these people a whole lot. Despite the fact I’ve been living in their house for the past 5 days, and they are family. I never really got to talk to them. But whatever…
In 27 minutes exact, we pulled up to the ice cream parlor. And then we all piled out and opened the shop for the day. The same thing happened today that happened pretty much everyday. Mostly nothing, and I was just left sitting there waiting for closing time.
That time finally came after 8 long, brutal hours of absolutely nothing besides the more-than-should-happen screaming of little kids wanting more ice cream. Which; by the way, gave me an excruciating headache.
But once the kids and Uncle left, I started my ritual work. Walking around looking for things to clean. I had done mostly everything, but now was for the worst part. The boys bathroom. I went in with precaution. It was better today than most days, but still quite frightful.
After about 15 minutes, I finally finished. When I walked out, I grimaced.
“EWWW!!!” I screeched. “THE grossest thing I've ever had to do in my life here -- EVER!”
I walked back out to the main lounge area place, and was a bit scared when I saw three figures in big bushy jackets and lots of layers on. They seemed a bit startled to see me as well.
“What are you doing here?!” I said grabbing the broom and raising it like a baseball bat.
The shortest one of the group jumped back a little. “Just looking for a place to eat or something. This was the only place opened.” He was male.
“This place isn’t open guy.” I said.
“Then why is it unlocked?” One of them taunted. Also male.
“I forgot I guess. But I can’t help you with anything anyways. I’m only the cleaning help. Cinderella as my friends call me sometimes.” I lowered the broom.
“When they don’t call you Cinderella, what DO they call you?” the last of them said. Again, a male.
“Mattilda. Why do you care?” I said.
He shrugged. “Just curious. Aren’t you curious as to who we are?”
I shrugged. “I guess. Who are you?”
One of them pulled their hood down. He seemed to be waiting for something. I gave him many confused looks. After a few minutes, he looked at the others, and they too pulled their hoods down.
“Do you not know who we are?” The one who taunted me asked.
I shook my head. “No. I am still waiting for you guys to tell me. Do you suffer from memory loss? It must be contagious.” I shrugged.
The boys exchanged glances. “We’re the Jonas Brothers.” The first one to talk said.
I nodded. “Okay… And at the current moment, I’m the Carsen single. Now are you gonna tell me who you are?” I said irritably.
They exchanged more glances. They seemed to be very confused.
“I’m Kevin. This is Joe. And that’s Nick. We’re the Jonas Brothers. A band.” Kevin said. The taunting one was introduced as Joe. And the first speaker as Nick.
I thought hard. The name sounded familiar. Why did it sound so familiar?
“OH! YOU’RE THE JONAS BROTHERS! Yeah. My friends were talking about you. They were right about –” I had started to say, but then stopped myself before I told them they were completely gorgeous hotties!
And at this moment, this is when I met the they I had been talking about. What happens after? Only time will tell.

Okay. There You Guys Go. I Actually Got To Post Tonight, But The Chapter Turned Out Blech-ish.
My Worst So Far In This FanFic. And If You Don't Like It, Tell Me! I Don't Mind! It'll Help Me To Improve.
And I Could Definitely Improve!
Anyways, Yeah. Enjoy.

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-29-2007, 12:33 AM
Okay. So I've Decided Something.
Chapter Titles, They Are Going To Be A Song Or Movie Title.
Maybe A Quote Or Lyric From Movie Or Song, If I Can't Think Of Anything.
But Yeah. I Think I Wanna Do That. I've Done It So Far.

A Cinderella Story (http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0356470/)
Work This Out (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xlgxfv-sm1I)
Who Are You (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G3N7V3wp5xE)

Yeah. Okay. I'm Gonna Do It. And Enjoy The Sucky Chapter By The Way!

JB4ever
11-29-2007, 12:58 AM
Name. Veronica or Vero
Age.15
Personality.funny, insane, hyper at times, very nice, polite, loves to read
Looks. profile pic
[if picture is used, please link it]
Other Stuff. love of my life = Nick J, i play the piano
Good? Bad? What?Good

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-29-2007, 01:03 AM
Okay. Yes Vero. I Just Added You.
You Are On The "More Minor" But You May Be Added
To The Minor Later On. Depending.

JB4ever
11-29-2007, 01:08 AM
kk

LotsaBigHearts
11-29-2007, 08:50 PM
lol.Great chapter!!

supersarah089
11-29-2007, 09:12 PM
Dang i wasn't in that chapter oh well Great story so far. I like it!

( soulmates )
11-29-2007, 09:14 PM
post you....
person

krrristin
11-29-2007, 09:20 PM
cool shum!
mmooooore

shopaholicoxxo
11-29-2007, 09:59 PM
haha i love it :P write more!

niiro_tatsu
11-29-2007, 11:10 PM
OOOOOOOO eeeeekkk ahhh POST MORE NOW

crazy_in_a_good_way
11-30-2007, 07:30 PM
more mah dear!

niiro_tatsu
11-30-2007, 09:29 PM
Post More!

LotsaBigHearts
11-30-2007, 11:08 PM
I like your banner!!

heyitswhatever
11-30-2007, 11:57 PM
okayy, this is officially uhmazingg.

supersarah089
12-05-2007, 12:51 AM
Please write more!

niiro_tatsu
12-05-2007, 07:29 PM
c'mon mufasa! WRITE!

MileyFan_4_Ever
12-05-2007, 07:32 PM
I'm Tryin. I'm Tryin. But I've Been Busy With Stuff, And Then I Just Can't Think Of What To Write! RAWR!

niiro_tatsu
12-05-2007, 07:42 PM
TRY HARDER! lol jk

but write more soon!

MileyFan_4_Ever
12-05-2007, 08:13 PM
Send Me Some Ideas
[Some Without Joenny]
And I'll See What Comes To Me!

niiro_tatsu
12-06-2007, 12:37 AM
grah u know me too well...

well basically like u talk to jb and get to know them a bit, being their waitress.

then at the concert we all stalk them and end up meeting them, and they like remmeber you...

and ummmmmm maybe that could start u off... i got nothing from there haha

heyitswhatever
12-06-2007, 05:53 PM
mooore ashley.
ps happy birthday.

supersarah089
12-08-2007, 04:03 PM
Please, Ashley write more!

MileyFan_4_Ever
12-09-2007, 05:20 PM
grah u know me too well...

well basically like u talk to jb and get to know them a bit, being their waitress.

then at the concert we all stalk them and end up meeting them, and they like remmeber you...

and ummmmmm maybe that could start u off... i got nothing from there haha
We'll See. But Tomorrow.
Cuz I'm At My Dad's Now,
And For Some Reason, I
Just Can't Write At Over
Here... It's Weird, Yes,
But Get Over It :P That's
Me. So I'll Try My Best To
Post A Chapter Tomorrow.
If Not, Then Shun Me!!!!!!

heyitswhatever
12-10-2007, 03:50 PM
Yay! it's tomorrow today!
:P
MAS PUHLEASE.

niiro_tatsu
12-10-2007, 09:55 PM
i'm shunning u!!!

crazy_in_a_good_way
12-11-2007, 11:44 AM
more...


or else.

MileyFan_4_Ever
12-11-2007, 08:46 PM
Sorry I Couldn't Post Yesterday. I Was Like, Way Sick...
Got Home From School And Went Straight To Bed. Mum's
Orders... No Computer At All! Torture Man! Pure Torture!
Anyways... I Probably Won't Be Able To Post Today...
Bombarded With Homework. RATS! And Tomorrow Will
Probably Be A No Go As Well... I'm Going Home With A
Friend To Do Some Stuff...

EDIT. OH CRAP! Probably A No Go On Thursday Too!
I Have A Band Concert, So Yeah... Poopie... Um.
This Weekend I Should Be Free. I'm Not 100% Sure
Yet. But Let's Hope I Am. And Um. Yeah. I'll TRY To
Post Lots This Weekend.

Zac_efron_luvr
12-11-2007, 09:53 PM
Name. Lexie Lexington...ok nawt lexington
Age. 12 or older or watever
Personality. I'm LOOPY, weird, random, retarded (nawt literally...) ummmm umm hyper like always..... uhhhh....idk thats MOI!
Looks. uh uh uh black hair, dark brown eyes, umm i wear glases hahahahahahaa uuhhh tan-ish-ish-ish-ish skin umm and thats umm all
[if picture is used, please link it]
Other Stuff. uhhh omijonas i like rawk dudes *rock & roll sign* WOO!!
Good? Bad? What? idk idc u pick its ur FF hahahahahaha :P

MileyFan_4_Ever
12-11-2007, 09:57 PM
Okay. I'll Put You On. Lexi Lexington :P TeeHee. I Like That Name.

MileyFan_4_Ever
12-12-2007, 03:55 PM
Okay. So Here's The Deal. I Decided That My Business Today Can Wait.
I've Thus Given Myself ABout 2 Hours To Try And Write.
I Shall Start Now And See What Happens. And Maybe We'll All Get Lucky,
And There Will Be A Chapter Tonight!
But I Don't Promise Anything! This Is Just A Possibility!

heyitswhatever
12-12-2007, 07:28 PM
yay!
you have such an amazing ff<3

Zac_efron_luvr
12-14-2007, 09:44 PM
....PLEASE POST MORE wahahahahah :(

MileyFan_4_Ever
12-15-2007, 02:42 PM
Okay, So I'm Posting Now. It's Not A Very Good Chapter, But I Hope You Like It Anyways.
I Don't Like It A Whole Lot, But That's Just Me :P I Don't Like Most Of My Chapters.
You All Should Know This. TeeHee.
Anyways, Here It Comes.

MileyFan_4_Ever
12-15-2007, 02:46 PM
The Breakfast Club.
chapter four
I was awakened by the loub abrupt noises of what seemed like clinking and clanking. My first instance was to look out the window for reasons I couldn't begin to explain. I saw nothing but the blank slate of nothingness. Not even a dim glow or anything pointing out a sun or even a star in the sky. I took my gaze to the clock sitting nearby. It read 5:18 AM.
There were a few more noises. I kicked off my covers and stepped to the floor. Gloomily following the noise, rubbing my eyes on the way, I soon spotted a light shining from a room in the house.
If I knew the house as well as I presumed, then this room would be the kitchen. I walked toward it, my eyes slowly adjusting to the growing light amount, and stopped in the doorway. I saw not one source, but two sources that caused my awakening. The little monstrosities Uncle calls children. I watched as the two of them quickly scattered about in the kitcen, stumbling over one another every so often, and giving each other orders. It was a true Kodak moment if ever there were one. Not that I even know what that means, but I've heard it said before in my life, and liked the way it sounded. But that doesn't matter now - nor does it matter ever, really...
Anyways. I watched them for a little while longer, both completely oblivious to my existance at this moment. Then I cleared my throat loudly.
"WHAT - IN THE NAME OF JESUS - IS GOING ON IN HERE?!" I demanded. And as soon as I was finished, they both looked at my, eyes wide, mouths gaped. You could probably, almost literally, fit a watermelon in there. Clearly the little buggers were not as acquainted with this side of me. Normally I was quite well-mannered and quiet.
They both just stood there and stared for what seemed like ages. However, they did manage to drop what they were holding, I thought they might scream, but thank the high Heavens they didn't. Finally one of them came back to Earth and shook their head violently.
"Mattilda! What are you doing up?" Aandi said in the soft voice of hers. Aidan soon shook his head too and nodded.
"Me? What are you two doing up?! And in the kitchen?!" I said, taking a few steps closer to them.
My eyes were now fully adjusted, and I could see all that they had out. There were numerous kinds of fruit, some chocolate chips, some sort of batter splattered EVERYWHERE, and all other stuff lying about.
"We are making breakfast. For the company coming over. For YOUR company coming over. Father had told us last night to make some breakfast, and so I decided that we were to get up early and make a breakfast that your friends would never forget!" Aidan said going back to cooking.
"Extra early alright. Do you two realize that is five something in the morning?" I said taking one of the chocolate chips.
"Yes we do. Do you realize you are eating away your friendship?" Aandi said whipping a spatula around in my face. I stuck my tongue out at her.
"Well would you guys like some help? I mean, you did say this was my company... The least I could do was lend a hand."
"As long as that hand doesn't eat anything more until breakfast, we'd really like the help." Aidan said.
It was this time that I could really tell these two, no matter how montsrous and demanding they can be, they can be nice too. And they were certainly related to me in some way. No one, especially their age, would be up this early to make a big breakfast or use half the words they use. Only I would do such a thing. That is, if I could cook at the age of 10. TeeHee.
So I got up and started to help the two of them prepare the meal.

..........

So time just flew right by, and the three of us had finished breakfast at 7:45. I had sent the two of them off to their beds to get a few hours of sleep before breakfast. I would have gone to bed too, but I was too excited to sleep. So instead I went into the study and sat in a chair, hugging a pillow tightly. I wondered why they were coming, and why I hadn't known about it.
Then, as I looked around the room, I noticed the calendar. And today was the day. We were going to THE concert of the year. We were going to see the Jonas Brothers!
I jumped up and started to go to the computer so I could do a little quick study on the boys. But was interrupted by a knock at the door.
They were here.

Yeah. So, Once Again, I Don't Like The Chapter So Very Much.
But I Hope You Guys Do.
And Sorry For Taking So Long To Post, I've Been Terribly Busy.
But I'll Try To post More Again Later Today.

Zac_efron_luvr
12-15-2007, 04:03 PM
I liked it :D Now post more woman.

Or else...

MUAHAHAHA

niiro_tatsu
12-15-2007, 08:48 PM
post more mufasa

Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
12-15-2007, 09:19 PM
Sorry I was a little behind!
[Do you mind if I borrow the messy kitchen idea? I think it may work in one of my fanfics.]

heyitswhatever
12-16-2007, 11:23 AM
that wasnt bad!
it was actually incredibly good!
:P

Zac_efron_luvr
12-16-2007, 03:47 PM
Yeshes it was.

Now, post another incredibly good chapter.

Before....i....umm..just post more

MileyFan_4_Ever
12-21-2007, 03:05 AM
"Untitled".
chapter five
A smile grew on my face. I ran to the door and opened it. And, of course, there stood my company.
Jenny, Kristin, Casey, Aly, Adri and Embee.
“Hey ladies. Welcome to my abode.” I started to say as I let them in and took notice of my attire – pajamas. I hit my leg and let out a small chuckle. “Um. Make yourselves comfortable, and I’ll be back. Should go change. And maybe wake up the others. Be back in a jiff.” I turned on one heal and started for my room.
I had finished preparing myself by throwing my hair into a quick braid that hung helplessly draped over my shoulder.
Then I started back to the living room where everybody was. To my surprise, Uncle and Aandi and Aidan were there too. Maybe the knocking woke them. But I didn’t care. I just went over to everybody and sat down on the couch. A long silence followed my arrival, and the lot of us just sat there staring at one another.
I clapped my hands together and smiled. “Well. I’m hungry, and breakfast is calling. Let’s say we chow down?” I shrugged.
Jenny cheered quickly and jumped up. “I’m game! Let’s go!” She said, and was first to take a seat at the table.
Once we all sat down and got our food, we just ate silently. No words said, no sounds made. Except that of forks scraping at plates.

..........

After about 40 minutes, everybody was finished. Uncle and the kids head off to the parlor, and that left me alone with the company.
“So are you ready for the concert of a life time?!” Aly screeched.
I nodded slowly. “I suppose. It’s just that I don’t know much of the three characters. Nick, Joe and Kevin.” I sighed.
“Well you know their names! That’s a start.” Embee chortled. I couldn’t tell if she was being rude or serious.
“Yeah. I guess.” I shrugged. “So when is the concert? Is there anything specific I should be bringing?”
“Well you don’t really have much that you could bring. No pictures for them to autograph, no poster boards to make a sign. So I’d say you’re good on the bringing of stuff. And the concert is in about an hour – hour and a half maybe.” Kristin answered.
I nodded and started to walk to the study. They followed me. “A quick study on the boys may be handy. Or a run through of their songs.” I said taking a seat at the computer. The six of them crowded around.
After listening to about 4 songs and reading each of the boys’ bios, someone said that we should leave. So I hoped I had enough to get me through the concert. I could do more later on. And so then we all packed up what we needed, and headed for the concert.

..........

We arrived to the concert a half hour later. We, as I would expect, weren’t the first ones there. I saw probably about a thousand screaming girls, if not more. I stood in the crowd, feeling almost out of place. Many were singing random songs that I assumed were by the Jonas Brothers, and pretty much ALL of them were wearing some sort of Jonas article of clothing. I looked down at my feet, and said nothing as I waited for the concert to start.
Which was quite soon actually. And the band played a few songs I didn’t get to listen to, but when they played one I had heard, I started dancing and singing along to what I remembered of the song.
Soon after, the concert came to an end. Many cried out for an encore, and the guys were kind enough to answer our cries.
So we got to rock out to one more song. Then. The meet and greet.

Okay. So Not The Best Of My Abilities,
But It Is 2 AM Over Here, So Yeah. Enjoy Anyways.
And I'll TRY To Post This Weekend If I Can.
I'm Going To My Dad's, And You Guys Know I Can't Write
Over There... Anyways. Yeah. Try To Enjoy This...

krrristin
12-21-2007, 03:22 AM
amore!
j'adore!

I love
more...

-- l\l A l\l A --<3
12-21-2007, 03:38 AM
more

Zac_efron_luvr
12-21-2007, 11:41 AM
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease

post

More!!

That was awesome.

crazy_in_a_good_way
12-21-2007, 03:03 PM
Ha, that's is soo
something i would say.

yeep!
more!

shopaholicoxxo
12-21-2007, 03:17 PM
hehe i love it :P write more!

heyitswhatever
12-21-2007, 03:52 PM
that was so good, i can't wait for more!

MileyFan_4_Ever
12-22-2007, 10:43 AM
Dumb & Dumber.
chapter six
The girls and I made our way to where the meet and greet was being held. They each let out noises that made me laugh.
Noises I could, in no way, explain.
It seemed as if every girl there made these noises. It was almost as entertaining as the concert itself.
But seeing three guys jump and dance around on a stage while singing a song is definitely better, of course. Especially when they are as gorgeous as these ones here.
And at that moment, I couldn't help but let out one of those strange noises myself. Some of the others must have heard me, and they let out a little cheer. This only made me laugh more.
I stepped over to the side to see how many people were ahead of us. There certainly were a lot. So I turned around so I could maybe tell how many were behind. Not very many. We were pretty much at the end of the line.
"UGH! This is going to take forever!" Embee exclaimed. "I don't think I can take it much longer!"
I took my place back in line and looked at her. "I know. Seriously. We're so close - yet so far away."
"EXACTLY! FINALLY SOMEONE UNDERSTANDS!" Embee cheered.
I laughed at her. I started to move foward in the line, and tripped. I landed on someone ahead of me.
"Ooh. I'm sorry. Clumsy me." I tried to laugh at myself as I got back up. "I didn't hurt you in anyway did I?"
The person smiled at me and shook their head. "No, no. I'm fine. Are you okay?" She said.
I nodded. "Superb. How could I not be? I mean, I'm gonna meet the Jonas Brothers!" I squealed.
The girl I was talking to let out a small eep and started jumping out of excitement. "I know EXACTLY what you mean! This is awesome! I'm Erin by the way."
"Mattilda." I tugged at my braid.
"Cool. These are my friends. Kelly and Ashley." Erin pointed over her shoulder with both hands to two girls. At the sound of their names, they both turned around.
I waved to them, and they waved back. "Hello. These are my friends here." I said pointing to them.
"Jenny, Casey, Kristin, Aly, Adri, and Embee."
"Wow. Big group. Anyways, it's almost us! YESSS! Maybe we'll see you later?" Kelly said pulling at Erin and walking forward.
I nodded and started to walk forward as well. "Smooth move girlie. Did you have a nice trip?" Embee chortled.
Somebody nudged her, and I just stuck my tongue out at her and laughed as she rubbed her side.

..........

So we were in the line for what seemed like forever, even though it was only about an hour or so. I found myself talking to Erin, Kelly and Ashley every now and then, along with my own posse. You know, just something to pass up the time. But by now I would estimate that we were only about 7 groups away from meeting the band. Small groups luckily. And they were getting through quite fast.
The people that stood behind us, clearly impatient, had left, so my group was last. Kristin said this might be good, because then we could have the possibility of talking with them longer.
We all agreed and thought she made a pretty good point. Embee just thought that she was saying that to settle us down. A lot of us were complaining about being last.
But after about another 45 minutes in the line. It was finally our turn! The girls quickly pushed me ahead, and I almost fell again.
I did, however, stumble a lot, and eventually made it to the back of our group. Jenny, Kristin, Aly, Casey, Embee, and Adri REALLY wanted to meet these fellas.
So they talked for a while. Adri and Aly lingering around Kevin mostly. Kristin by Nick. Jenny and Casey with Joe. And Embee over by where she could get in, which was over by Nick mainly, since he only had Kristin. After a while, I started to get a little impatient myself, so I started to head to the exit, but was stopped by someone grabbing at my braid. It was Aly.
"Where do you think you're going little lady? You haven't yet met the boys!" She laughed and pulled me up to the table at which they stood.
I hit the table pretty hard, and stuff went flying everywhere. I turned beet red as the boys started to pick the things up.
"Wow. You're just an accident waiting to happen Cinderella." Embee laughed.
I put my hands in my face so they couldn't see me when they got back up.
Nick was the first to stand. "Did you just say 'Cinderella?'" He asked.
Aly nodded. "Yes she did. And sorry about the stuff. Twas my fault. Not Mattilda's." She said giving Embee a look.
The other two stood back up. "MAC?! MAC IS THAT YOU!?" One of them exclaimed. I figured it was Joe by how hyper-active he sounded.
I pulled my hands down and looked at them. Everbody looked at me.
"Mac? Did you just say 'Mac?' Mattilda! You know the Jonas Brothers?! You know them and you didn't tell us?!" Kristin exclaimed.
I looked at her. And then back at the boys. "I - I don't know. They do look familiar, but we just saw them on stage, and looked them up on the computer. They sound familiar, but we just heard them sing this morning on my computer and a little bit ago on stage." I shrugged. "Do I know you?"

Okay. So This Chapter Is Kinda Poopie Like...
But Anyways, Yeah.
You Guys [Or Girlies] Will Probably Like It.
Try To Enjoy It, And I'll Post More When I Can.

shopaholicoxxo
12-22-2007, 11:17 AM
hahahaa this is greaaaat :P
i need more! :D

heyitswhatever
12-22-2007, 12:41 PM
superb<3
hahaa, that is so me!
post more!

crazy_in_a_good_way
12-22-2007, 01:08 PM
Hee hee. Twas I
am soo evil. I love it.

krrristin
12-22-2007, 01:22 PM
woah I thought i commented this.
anyway
more foo!

tricia1228
12-22-2007, 02:09 PM
More!

destinysmiles!
12-22-2007, 04:26 PM
more

niiro_tatsu
12-22-2007, 09:44 PM
haha nice mufasa

post more

-- l\l A l\l A --<3
12-23-2007, 06:12 AM
more

heyitswhatever
12-23-2007, 09:36 PM
moreeeeeeee girl :]

supersarah089
12-24-2007, 03:13 AM
WOW! sorry i had to read up a little. Please post more those chapters were really good.

-- l\l A l\l A --<3
12-24-2007, 09:04 PM
more

conanpotter
12-25-2007, 11:15 AM
great job ashley :D :D more more more :P

heyitswhatever
12-25-2007, 11:18 AM
I Need More Jazz!

destinysmiles!
12-25-2007, 01:56 PM
more

mileyforever
12-25-2007, 09:49 PM
i believe that you need to post more missy

crazy_in_a_good_way
12-25-2007, 10:32 PM
Mizzy pwease post
more!

heyitswhatever
12-26-2007, 11:23 AM
more

-- l\l A l\l A --<3
12-26-2007, 09:47 PM
more more please

MileyFan_4_Ever
12-27-2007, 02:47 PM
Hmm. I Currently Seem To Have No Creative Juices Flowing For This FanFic.
I May Have To Put It On A Small Hiatus. But I'm Not Sure Yet.
I Just Know That There May Not Be A Chapter Up For A While.
Sorry Guys.

heyitswhatever
12-27-2007, 02:56 PM
awh, okay.. as long as you make it amazing! :)

( soulmates )
12-27-2007, 03:31 PM
yay i just got caught up

you need to get off yer patootie slash hiatus and WRITE