View Full Version : Meetings In Manhattan (a JB FF)
Zac_efron_luvr
11-24-2007, 02:10 AM
Characters
Alexa "Lexie" Carmicheal
Serenity "Ren" Rivera
Justin Rodriguez
Monika Randall
Blake Sanders
Kevin Jonas
Nick Jonas
Joe Jonas
Plot
Three 14 year old Best Friends,Justin, Ren, and Lexie are the most popular people in Trinity Middle School.Not to mention Blake who Lexie has an extreme/major/OHMIJONAS HE'S SO CUTE crush on. The threesome soon befriend the new girl, Monika and find out her mother works designing clothing for the famous in California but they moved to Manhattan on business. After they befriend her, they find out all the famous people she has met in her life and are amazed that she can keep herself from squealing while giving them a list of which famous people she has met. 3 of which are the Jonas Brothers.
Should I Write It?
Chapter 1 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1585040&postcount=7)
Chapter 2 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1590903&postcount=10)
Chapter 3 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1683736&postcount=27)
**UPDATE 1**: Yea, I know like NOBODY reads this FanFic but i'm getting bored and I need something to do when i'm bored other than stare glumly at the screen & wish people read my fanfic. So, i have forms....
Name:
Good Or Bad:
Hobbies:
Habits:
Personality:
Hugs Or High Fives?!:
How do ya look??:
so, i understand if the forms don't come pouring in. I just need something to get more readers & commenters so i'm writing for people nawt just writing to write and look all dopey cuz nobody's commenting.
And, look out for like updates and news & stuff although i can't imagine what updates i would have...but just in case ;)
**UPDATE 2** Ok, so I already have some forms. I think it's time to make a list of added peoples.
**UPDATE 3** Umm, yea. So, I realized that I don't have a banner.. So, I'll get to that.
Added Peoples xD
Erina/-- l\l A l\l A --<3
Anna/ best_of_both_worlds16
GreatSierra
11-24-2007, 02:17 AM
I LUV IT! THE PLOT IS AWESOME POSSUM!!!
Its Perfect-oh!!
Marvelous MEETINGS IN MANHATTAN!!
-Greatsy
Zac_efron_luvr
11-24-2007, 02:17 AM
Ok so if at least 3 ppl want the FF to start,start it shall.
Zac_efron_luvr
11-24-2007, 02:18 AM
1 person WOO!
monster411
11-24-2007, 02:26 AM
I want it to start.
Please, allow it to start =)
Zac_efron_luvr
11-24-2007, 02:26 AM
1 more person
to comment and i shall start
Zac_efron_luvr
11-24-2007, 03:30 AM
Chapter 1
They walked down the halls, the wannabees looking bitterly at them.
It wasn't their fault they were the prettiest and cutest people at TMS!
So why in the world did these people look at them so bitterly?
Ren rolled her eyes and whispered to Justin.
"Ugh, wannabees! What do they have against us?"
"They're tempted to enter out bodies. " Justin Joked.
Ren smiled.
She turned towards Lexie who was whispering a song.
"What are you doing?"
" That kid is wearing a beanie.."
Lexie mumbled.
"Such a disgrace!"
Ren and Lexie looked at each other with mischeivious smiles and shouted,
"What's That? A Hat? A Crazy Funky Junky Hat, overslept, hair unslightly tryin to look like Keira Knightly, we've been there, we've done that we see right through your funky hat!"
They started cracking up.
Alexa AKA Lexie had always been the crazy outgoing one.
Serenety, AKA Ren, the mostly Serene one but the rest hilarious.
And Justin, the only boy, He liked Ren, Ren liked him, pretty much all Lexie had to do was play cupid and they'd be an item.
But, no.
She had to swear to both she wouldn't tell either.
But, her being the loudest, it almost slipped out everytime anyway.
"Aww.. Look who hasn't grown out of Disney Channel yet?"
Justin said grabbing Ren's water bottle.
"Aww... look who knows thats from Disney Channel?"
She said, taking it back.
"It's called having a sister!"
Justin said walking to his locker.
"Uh huh, likely story!"
Ren and Lexie shouted at the same time.
They both walked to their lockers and grabbed their books walking to class.
They passed by Blake Sanders.
Lexie stayed back while Justin and Ren walked off.
"H--Hi Blake.."
Lexie stuttered.
Why did this always happen?
"Oh, hey Lexie."
He answered not even looking up from his book.
Yea, he was the hottest geek on Earth and did a good job hiding it.
Ren came running to Lexie as soon as she noticed she was gone, which was 30 seconds later.
"C'mon Lexie!"
She said catching her breath.
"We don't wanna be late for cla--"
The bell rang.
Lexie and Ren looked at each other with worried faces.
They ran with their books and purses.
They got in class as soon as the late bell rang.
Justin started laughing as soon as they took their saved seats next to him.
"Kids, we have a new student today named Minaka!"
The teacher said.
A small shy voice spoke up,
"It- it's Monika..."
"Oh, Well then Monika Randall!"
The girls giggled at the teacher's mistake.
Justin made a popping noise.
Blake stared at the new girl.
"Monika, why don't you tell us what brings you to Trinity?"
The teacher said.
"Um...ok."
She walked up to the front.
"Well, I'm Monika Randall and I have recently moved her from Los Angeles, California with my parents."
Blake kept staring... Lexie practically burned his face off with her evil stare.
Lexie Carmicheal: Known to be able to burn a hole in your face with her evil stare.
"I moved here because my mom is a designer. She designs clothes for photoshoots, movies, you name it, she designs it"
Lexie was now staring at HER.
"We moved her on business and might be staying for a while. And, that's why I've moved here.."
She finished timidly.
Ren and Lexie rolled her eyes.
"And, Monika why don't you take a seat next to Alexa Carmicheal?"
"LEXIE!"
She, Ren, and Justin said at the same time.
The teacher ignored them.
Monika sat.
Lexie slid down in her seat.
The teacher talked about current events and the bell rang.
Time for lunch.
"You know we have to be nice to her?"
Justin said.
"Why?"
Lexie whined.
"Because, as the most popular people in TMS, we're officially the welcoming committee"
Ren answered.
Lexie groaned.
She walked up to Monika who was standing in the lunch line.
While walking, she put on an extremely fake smile.
Monika looked sooo naive, she wouldn't notice.
"Hey. I'm Lexie! My friends Ren and Justin and I were wondering if you wanted to sit with us?"
She said twisting a piece of her hair.
"Umm...sure i guess.."
She responded.
"Great, we're over there"
She pointed to the table.
"Ok."
Lexie turned on her heels and rolled her eyes.
"There happy?"
She asked Justin and Ren.
"Yup!"
They responded.
Monika came up to the table and sat.
Ren and Justin were talking about science homework.
Lexie only had Monika to talk to.
"Soo...what people has your mom designed for?"
"umm....The Jonas Brothers, Lauren Conrad, Miley Cyrus, Selena Gomez, and a lot of other people i forget."
She said as if it was no big deal.
Justin and Ren stopped talking to look at Monika.
"And have you guys met any of them?"
She said with a tone you'd use when asking something so a mentally challenged person.
"Yea, all of them.."
"Well, then..is your mom currently designing for anyone?"
Ren asked.
"Yea, she's actually designing for the Jonas Brothers, meaning, they're in town. Oh yea!"
She took out her phone.
"I have to meet them today."
She said writing something in her planner and texting something to someone.
"And this is no big deal for you?!"
Ren said.
"Nope.."
She said not looking up from her planner.
"If you want, since your the only person offering me any hospitality, you could come with me to meet them."
Ren and Lexie Nodded.
Justin said,
"Ok."
and walked away with his half eaten lunch.
Ren followed him.
"So then later."
Monika said standing up.
"Bye."
Lexie walked to Justin and Ren.
It was after school.
Lexie would be standing in the same room as Joe Jonas.
ugh too bad he's like 3 years older than you... Her good consience said.
Age is nothing but a number! Plus, you'll be fifteen in a month.
So, technically it's just 3 years! That's not that bad, is it? Beside's if he really likes you, he wouldn't care. And you guys live in a black stone mansion your parents would never notice him at your house or talking on the phone with you or sending you gifts! Her mischevious consience said.
"Yea, but..."
She had nothing to say back.
Especially when Ren and Justin started staring at her weirdly.
She shrugged it off.
In 10 minutes, they were standing in front of 3 guys with incredible singing voices.
"Hi, I'm Joe and this is Nick and Kevin!"
He said.
Zac_efron_luvr
11-24-2007, 01:22 PM
THeRe HoW iS iT? i aCTuaLLY THouGHT iT WaS PReTTY GooD. BeTTeR THaN My LaST oNe. i NoTiCeD THaT iT WaS LaMe. No WoNDeR NoBoDy eVeR ReaD iT...PLeaSe ReaD aND CoMMeNT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!
monster411
11-25-2007, 04:45 PM
MORE I NEED MORE I NEED MORE
and im not saying that just cuz im ur friend, I REALLY WANNA READ MORE!!~!
Zac_efron_luvr
11-25-2007, 05:42 PM
Chapter 2
"Eh Ma...."
Ren was about to faint..
"JONAS..."
Lexie finished.
She was already falling back.
Ren hurried behind her and pushed her up.
Almost causing Lexie to fall into Joe's arms.
Monika started giggling at their little mini show.
Joe, Nick, and Kevin looked amused.
Justin furrowed his eyebrows. He didn't really like this...
Ren and Lexie were looking at them as if they were gods.
How ' Great and Fabulous ' could they be?!
They were just three brothers!
Ren managed to extend a hand.
"I'm Ren. This is Lexie."
Lexie did a little wave out of total excitement.
Nick, Kevin and Joe each took turns shaking her hand.
Lexie was about to extend her hand but it was sweaty.
Her palms had been melting along with her heart.
" Hey Ren."
Joe said, smiling at Ren.
Then he turned towards Lexie.
"Hey Lexie."
Lexie pinched Ren's arm meaning to squeal witout squealing.
Ren pinched back meaning she was as excited as Lexie.
"I'm Justin"
He came out from behind the girls and extended his arm.
"Apperantly I'm now invisible to these girls."
"Ah haha...."
Ren grabbed Justin.
"Excuse us!"
They walked away, leaving Lexie with Monika and the Jonas Brothers.
"SOOOO...While their--"
Monika stopped, and looked at Lexie so she could tell them what they were doing.
"Umm...Who knows? Haha....Be right back.."
She ran to Justin and Ren.
"What are you guys doing?"
She whisper-yelled
"I'm telling Justin not to be so jealous!"
Ren just yelled.
"And I'm telling Ren not to be so obssessive!"
"And I'm telling you guys there are 3 famous guys, one of which is like super-cute, and a new girl who introduced us to these 3 guys are waiting for us over there!!"
Lexie pointed to them.
She ran over there with a smile.
"They're just talking about.....the comics in the newspaper. Good stuff they have there. Good stuff."
Lexie covered for them.
"All...rightythen! Let's do something!"
Monika said optimisticly (sp?)
"Sure...but what?"
Nick asked.
"Umm... I don't know..."
Monika answered.
"Let's do something here!"
Ren said running to them.
"Yea, like what? There is nothing to do here but look at designs and stuff."
Monika said glumly.
"Let's go to your house, I love the fountain in the front of your new house"
Joe said.
"IM LACTOSE INTOLLERANT!!!!!"
Lexie said all of a sudden, or so it seemed.
"I think you mean H2O intollerant, big brains."
Justin said.
"Haha."
Lexie said sarcastically
"We can go to my house if u all agree..."
Monika said.
"Ok."
Everyone except Lexie said.
"Fine."
They got drove to Monika's house in a limo.
"you have a limo? I don't even go to school in a limo. And have you seen my house? I go to school in a BMW."
Lexie said.
They finally got to Monika's house.
Well, not finally.
It was only 5 minutes.
When they walked in, the cutest little brown yorkie ran up to Monika and barked.
"Oh, guys this is my dog, Lorie!"
Monika said picking her up.
"Oh, cool! So what should we do now?"
Kevin asked.
monster411
11-25-2007, 06:16 PM
Me Likey!
You should include a little more boy drama.
but CONTINUE your totally awesome fanfic. =)
Zac_efron_luvr
12-09-2007, 12:35 AM
Nobody likes the freakish fanfic except u && Ren and u guys r supposed to like it or i'll ttly kill u :P COMMENT :((
Zac_efron_luvr
12-14-2007, 11:04 PM
baha comment
best_of_both_worlds16
12-16-2007, 09:12 PM
ahhh, more!
this is good!
Name: Anna
Good Or Bad: Good
Hobbies: Bowling, Singing, Acting, Reading, being the best Jonas Brothers fan I can, and being Mrs. Nicholas Jonas <3 :P
Habits: um, i bite my bottom lip alot and playyy with myyy dog tags/cross too much.
Good Or Bad: Good?
Personality: shyish- like Nicholas, you think I'm shy if you don't know me, nice, good listener and is in love with Nicholas Jerry Jonas <3
Hugs Or High Fives?!: erm, either?
How do ya look??: short [5' 3"], brown sholder length hair and brown eyes, black plastic squarish glasses... always wearing me dog tags.
vanessarox14
12-16-2007, 09:13 PM
awesome
can i be in it if i fill out the form
or can nobody be in it any more
also post more
monster411
12-27-2007, 02:29 AM
^ I know im not the writer of this (Awesometastical) fanfic, but you can totally be in it (:
Also,
MORE!
-- l\l A l\l A --<3
12-27-2007, 02:52 AM
Name: Erina
Good Or Bad: GOOD!!!
Hobbies: Singing, acting, talking on the phone(I'm practically attached to it), listening to music, surfing the web, being a jonas brothers fan...
Habits: Takes things too seriously, Tends to misunderstand things, bite my nails and play with my hair when I'm nervous...
Good Or Bad: you asked that already! GOOD!!!
Personality: bubbly, energetic, hyper, fun, sometimes misunderstood, funny, likes to fool around... calm
Hugs Or High Fives?!: Hugs!
How do ya look??: brown hair, quite tall, skinny
Zac_efron_luvr
12-27-2007, 03:55 PM
awesome
can i be in it if i fill out the form
or can nobody be in it any more
also post more
Yea, you can be in it.
Just fill out the form!
Zac_efron_luvr
12-27-2007, 03:59 PM
Name: Erina
Good Or Bad: GOOD!!!
Hobbies: Singing, acting, talking on the phone(I'm practically attached to it), listening to music, surfing the web, being a jonas brothers fan...
Habits: Takes things too seriously, Tends to misunderstand things, bite my nails and play with my hair when I'm nervous...
Good Or Bad: you asked that already! GOOD!!!
Personality: bubbly, energetic, hyper, fun, sometimes misunderstood, funny, likes to fool around... calm
Hugs Or High Fives?!: Hugs!
How do ya look??: brown hair, quite tall, skinny
ahhh, more!
this is good!
Name: Anna
Good Or Bad: Good
Hobbies: Bowling, Singing, Acting, Reading, being the best Jonas Brothers fan I can, and being Mrs. Nicholas Jonas <3 :P
Habits: um, i bite my bottom lip alot and playyy with myyy dog tags/cross too much.
Good Or Bad: Good?
Personality: shyish- like Nicholas, you think I'm shy if you don't know me, nice, good listener and is in love with Nicholas Jerry Jonas <3
Hugs Or High Fives?!: erm, either?
How do ya look??: short [5' 3"], brown sholder length hair and brown eyes, black plastic squarish glasses... always wearing me dog tags.
Ok you guys are in! I'll make a list & add you guys
Zac_efron_luvr
12-27-2007, 04:18 PM
OK, here's chapter 3!
monster411
12-27-2007, 04:20 PM
Where's chapter three, buddy??
WHERE!!? I must read it :P
Zac_efron_luvr
12-27-2007, 04:22 PM
Then Wait Theonika!
monster411
12-27-2007, 04:29 PM
Dude i'm waiting.
But seriously, how much LONGER?
Zac_efron_luvr
12-27-2007, 04:32 PM
Sorry, My computer gets slow everytime i click paste.
SO,,,,, im trying to do stuffs that'll help it and let me paste chapter 3!!
monster411
12-27-2007, 04:33 PM
ah huh..ah hahaha
HURRY UP WOMAN!
Miley is Smiley
12-27-2007, 04:39 PM
^^lol^^
More!!
Zac_efron_luvr
12-27-2007, 05:11 PM
Chapter 3
“Let’s play Twister Moves!”
Ren shouted.
Everyone - except Lexie - nodded.
“I wanted to play Truth or Dare...”
She pouted.
“Oh, yes! The typical girls Sleep Over activity! Other than painting each other’s nails or giving each other make-overs! Let’s Play! I THINK NOT!”
Justin said.
“Fine then. Be like that meanies!”
She crossed her arms and stuck her tongue out at Justin.
So, they played Twister Moves and, ironically, Lexie won.
“No Fair! You won because you were Mad!!”
Joe shouted.
Lexie smiled,
“No, I’m just a Twister Moves expert! Which is why I wanted to play Truth or Dare so I wouldn’t beat you guys and you wouldn’t feel bad!”
She put a pouty face on.
“Monika, do you have any flavor splash water?”
“Uh.. Yea, in the fridge. Can you get me one?”
“Sure.”
She walked away.
“Uhh... I want a water too, I’ll be right back.”
Justin ran after her.
“Lexie, this is too hard.”
“Walking to the kitchen to get water is hard?”
“No, it’s hard keeping me liking Ren a secret from her and her being one of my best friends.”
“Other than me.”
“Could you tell her I like her?”
“Me? Dude, seriously?”
“Yea, it’d be less weird coming from you as gossip than from me as the truth.”
“Ooh! I get it. So you want me to like tell her?”
“Yea, Big Brains. Tell her.”
He grabbed 3 bottles of water and handed 2 to Lexie.
“Tanks You!”
“Sure. Let’s go.”
So, they went.
Lexie jumped into the room and threw the water at Monika.
“WHO WANTS TO PLAY TRUTH OR DARE?!?!”
“Me!”
Monika and Ren shouted.
“Not Me!”
All the guys screamed.
“Yea, sure, whatevs. Let’s play truth or dare!”
Ren said.
“No.”
Justin said.
“YES!”
The girls screamed.
“FINE!”
All the guys said at the same time.
“Ok, ok me first!”
Lexie shouted.
“RennyPops, truth or dare?”
“RennyPops?”
Joe asked.
“Yea....RennyPops! RennityRenPops!”
Lexie said.
“RenMcRenitySer!”
Joe said.
“Guys, can we like stop experimenting with my name? It’s Ren. Serenity, Ren. Whatever.”
Joe & Lexie started cracking up.
“What?”
“OH YOU HAVE THE WORD!!!”
Joe shouted.
“What’s the word?”
Monika asked.
“OH MONIKA HAS THE WORD!!”
Lexie shouted and gave Joe a high five.
“Weirdos!!”
Justin, Monika, Ren, Kevin, & Nick shouted.
“The word is....W-H-A-T!”
Joe said slowly.
“Yea, if you haven’t caught on!”
Lexie said.
“What.”
Nick said.
“OH NICK HAS THE WORD!!”
Lexie and Joe screamed.
“Again, Weirdos!”
Ren said.
“Yea, We Are! Problemo?”
Lexie said.
“No...I pick Dare!”
“Aww....I dare you to....go outside and scream “ I FLIPPING LOVE PIE, YO, WORD!!”
Lexie said, crossing her arms.
“Umm,, ok?”
Ren walked out the door and everyone followed.
“I FLIPPING LOVE PIE, YO, WORD!!”
She ran back inside.
“You were scared!”
Joe said.
“Nuh uh!”
“Uh Huh!”
“Nuh Uh!”
“Uh Huh!”
“Nuh –– “
“I said you were, DARNIT!”
“Yea, well I said I wasn’t!”
“Ok. Fine! Well, at least..it’s my turn!”
“Fine. Truth or Dare, Joe?”
“Uh, Uh, Uh, What was the question?”
“Truth Or Dare?”
“I’m gonna have to go with....B!”
“Ok, so Dare?”
“There’s no ‘B’ in DARE! It’s D-A-R-E!”
‘Yea, well there’s no ‘B’ in Truth Either So There!”
“Yea, there is!”
“No. There isn’t! T-R-U-T-H”
“No! T-B-R-U-T-H!”
“Truth or dare??”
Joe crossed his arms & shook his head.
“Dude! Joe! Just answer the freakish question!”
Monika screamed.
“Dare..”
“I Dare You to...”
There Peeps!
Chapter Numero Tres.
monster411
12-27-2007, 05:19 PM
Your evil.
Make a chapter 4 NOW! Or i will scream my head off at you, buddy :P
Zac_efron_luvr
12-27-2007, 05:20 PM
2 more comments.
monster411
12-27-2007, 05:22 PM
Comment 1 ; OMIGOSH MORE!!
Comment 2: MORE WOMAN MORE!!
There!
Zac_efron_luvr
12-27-2007, 05:24 PM
From Diff. People!
monster411
12-27-2007, 05:27 PM
Random Person 1: *in low voice* Sup man! Yeah..your fanfic like..ROCKS!! MORE MAN MORE!
Random Person 2: *in shy voice* wow..umm lovely.. more?
Zac_efron_luvr
12-27-2007, 05:37 PM
Your Very odd Monika.
Zac_efron_luvr
12-27-2007, 06:26 PM
Now, to wait for more comments...
-- l\l A l\l A --<3
12-27-2007, 07:51 PM
more!!!
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