HM ROCKS
11-21-2007, 08:31 PM
Note: I know that XxarlimeXx12 made a Fan Fiction called Ackey Jakey Heart (my version) but mine is different so don't say that I copyed her because I DIDN'T!!
:.:Ackey Jakey Heart:.:
(My Version)
More Drama
It was a day just like any other day. Miley got out of bed and walked down stairs to eat breakfast. When she got down stairs, as soon as she turned to go into the kitchen, the doorbell rang.
“Ugh,” said Miley as she was looking at her phone noticing that it was seven thirty, “Who would come over to someone’s house at seven thirty in the morning?” She walked over to answer the door. She pulled the door open very fast. Not even bothering to see whom it is.
“What?” she asked just as she pulled the door open and to her surprise it was someone that she would never expect to see. It was Jake Ryan.
“Hi, Miley,” Jake told her. Miley could tell that he was nervous.
“J…J…Jake?” Miley said questioning. Right as she saw him all of the questions came running through her head. Why is he here? Why at seven thirty in the morning? Has it been three months already? Is he back to say that he still wants her?
“Miley can I talk to you outside?” Jake asked me. I did not know what to do I was so shocked. So I just walked outside. We both sat down in a chair. Then Jake started to speak.
“Miley I know that I just kissed you then left but would you give me just one more chance?”
“Jake do you know how much you hurt me? I don’t know if I can.”
“Miley please…” Miley cut him off.
“I’m sorry Jake, I just can’t.” she got up and walked back into her house. Jake got up from his chair trying to stop Miley.
“Miley wait…” just before he could finish Miley shut the door.
“Who was that bud?” asked her dad, Robby Ray. Who had just laid her breakfast.
“Jake Ryan,” Miley sounded annoyed.
“That actor? What did he want?”
“He wanted to get back to get together with me but I turned him down. The last thing I need is more drama.”
Miley finished her breakfast and got ready for school. She came down wearing a sparkling pink shirt and some jeans. Her hair was perfectly done. It was really curly. Her purse was in one arm and her backpack was on her back. She said bye to Robby-ray and went outside where she met Lilly who had her backpack on. She was on her skateboard with a helmet on.
“So Miles you ready to go?” she asked me referring to us walking to school together like we always do. I decided to wait until we walked a little bit before I told her about Jake.
We walked a little ways and then I decided to tell her about Jake.
“Umm there will be someone coming back to our school today,” Miley said trying to ease into the whole Jake Ryan coming back thing.
“Who? I hope it’s not Jake Ryan. I mean he broke your heart.”
“Well then you are going to be disappointed. It is Jake Ryan?” Miley said nervously.
“What?” said Lilly surprised, “how do you know this?”
“Because he came over to my house this morning.”
“Oh my god! What did he say?”
“He wanted to get back together with me…” Miley was just about to tell her that she said no but Lilly interrupted her.
“But, you said no. You did say no right.”
“Yes, Lilly I did. The last thing I need in my life is more drama, but don’t be surprised if he asks me again.”
Once they got to school they walked into Mr. Crellie’s class and sat down. Just as they sat down Jake Ryan came in with his “big” entrance and sat down next to Miley.
“Ok class,” said Mr. Crellie clapping his hands together, “as you may have noticed, Jake Ryan is back.”
Mr. Crellie pointed to Jake Ryan.
“Aah,” said all of the girls in the class except for Miley and Lilly.
Jake smiled.
“Ok back to business,” said Mr. Crellie then he started teaching.
Miley noticed that Jake was writing something and she knew that he wasn’t taking notes. If he were that would be a big surprise because well he’s Jake Ryan.
Then he handed what he was writing to Miley.
So it was a note, Miley thought, to me.
So Miley opened it and read it.
Miley,
I know that I have tried this once today and I will not stop until you say yes.
I knew that since the first time I saw you that you where the girl for me.
You didn’t chase after me like all of the other girls here did. When you did kiss
me it was magic. After that I was positive that you where the one. I hated that I
had to leave. And right after we kissed. But I have changed. So please give me
one more chance. I promise that I will not disappoint you. So after class met me
by your locker and you will get something that you will never imagine.
See you after class.
xo Jake
Wow he has grate handwriting, thought Miley, maybe he does really like me. What the heck there’s no harm in going and meeting him at my locker. I mean I have to go there anyway.
Class was over and it was time for Miley to meet Jake.
I wonder what he is going to give me, Miley wondered.
Once Miley got to her locker Jake was waiting right there just like he said.
Miley turned the lock on her locker waiting for Jake to say something but he didn’t say anything. He just stood their staring at her. Miley was starting to get a little creped out.
She was done getting stuff out of her locker so she shut it. Then all of a sudden Jake spun her around so that she faced him and kissed her. This wasn’t just any kiss it was the most powerful kiss that that she have ever had.
Maybe I will give him another chance what could it hurt?
:.:Ackey Jakey Heart:.:
(My Version)
More Drama
It was a day just like any other day. Miley got out of bed and walked down stairs to eat breakfast. When she got down stairs, as soon as she turned to go into the kitchen, the doorbell rang.
“Ugh,” said Miley as she was looking at her phone noticing that it was seven thirty, “Who would come over to someone’s house at seven thirty in the morning?” She walked over to answer the door. She pulled the door open very fast. Not even bothering to see whom it is.
“What?” she asked just as she pulled the door open and to her surprise it was someone that she would never expect to see. It was Jake Ryan.
“Hi, Miley,” Jake told her. Miley could tell that he was nervous.
“J…J…Jake?” Miley said questioning. Right as she saw him all of the questions came running through her head. Why is he here? Why at seven thirty in the morning? Has it been three months already? Is he back to say that he still wants her?
“Miley can I talk to you outside?” Jake asked me. I did not know what to do I was so shocked. So I just walked outside. We both sat down in a chair. Then Jake started to speak.
“Miley I know that I just kissed you then left but would you give me just one more chance?”
“Jake do you know how much you hurt me? I don’t know if I can.”
“Miley please…” Miley cut him off.
“I’m sorry Jake, I just can’t.” she got up and walked back into her house. Jake got up from his chair trying to stop Miley.
“Miley wait…” just before he could finish Miley shut the door.
“Who was that bud?” asked her dad, Robby Ray. Who had just laid her breakfast.
“Jake Ryan,” Miley sounded annoyed.
“That actor? What did he want?”
“He wanted to get back to get together with me but I turned him down. The last thing I need is more drama.”
Miley finished her breakfast and got ready for school. She came down wearing a sparkling pink shirt and some jeans. Her hair was perfectly done. It was really curly. Her purse was in one arm and her backpack was on her back. She said bye to Robby-ray and went outside where she met Lilly who had her backpack on. She was on her skateboard with a helmet on.
“So Miles you ready to go?” she asked me referring to us walking to school together like we always do. I decided to wait until we walked a little bit before I told her about Jake.
We walked a little ways and then I decided to tell her about Jake.
“Umm there will be someone coming back to our school today,” Miley said trying to ease into the whole Jake Ryan coming back thing.
“Who? I hope it’s not Jake Ryan. I mean he broke your heart.”
“Well then you are going to be disappointed. It is Jake Ryan?” Miley said nervously.
“What?” said Lilly surprised, “how do you know this?”
“Because he came over to my house this morning.”
“Oh my god! What did he say?”
“He wanted to get back together with me…” Miley was just about to tell her that she said no but Lilly interrupted her.
“But, you said no. You did say no right.”
“Yes, Lilly I did. The last thing I need in my life is more drama, but don’t be surprised if he asks me again.”
Once they got to school they walked into Mr. Crellie’s class and sat down. Just as they sat down Jake Ryan came in with his “big” entrance and sat down next to Miley.
“Ok class,” said Mr. Crellie clapping his hands together, “as you may have noticed, Jake Ryan is back.”
Mr. Crellie pointed to Jake Ryan.
“Aah,” said all of the girls in the class except for Miley and Lilly.
Jake smiled.
“Ok back to business,” said Mr. Crellie then he started teaching.
Miley noticed that Jake was writing something and she knew that he wasn’t taking notes. If he were that would be a big surprise because well he’s Jake Ryan.
Then he handed what he was writing to Miley.
So it was a note, Miley thought, to me.
So Miley opened it and read it.
Miley,
I know that I have tried this once today and I will not stop until you say yes.
I knew that since the first time I saw you that you where the girl for me.
You didn’t chase after me like all of the other girls here did. When you did kiss
me it was magic. After that I was positive that you where the one. I hated that I
had to leave. And right after we kissed. But I have changed. So please give me
one more chance. I promise that I will not disappoint you. So after class met me
by your locker and you will get something that you will never imagine.
See you after class.
xo Jake
Wow he has grate handwriting, thought Miley, maybe he does really like me. What the heck there’s no harm in going and meeting him at my locker. I mean I have to go there anyway.
Class was over and it was time for Miley to meet Jake.
I wonder what he is going to give me, Miley wondered.
Once Miley got to her locker Jake was waiting right there just like he said.
Miley turned the lock on her locker waiting for Jake to say something but he didn’t say anything. He just stood their staring at her. Miley was starting to get a little creped out.
She was done getting stuff out of her locker so she shut it. Then all of a sudden Jake spun her around so that she faced him and kissed her. This wasn’t just any kiss it was the most powerful kiss that that she have ever had.
Maybe I will give him another chance what could it hurt?