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Shenae Grimes Fan
11-18-2007, 02:44 AM
New York Happiness, (and sadness.) ™
I couldn't think of anything to write in my recent one, so i made this one.
I've made soooo many fanfictions and i have abandoned them all, but
trust me on this one, i will not try to abandon this ff. xD


What it's about:
Some people go to New York. Lucky for them, they
meet the Jonas Brothers! They Become really good
friends with them. Relationships form, hearts
are broken, and the best part is, you get to be
in it. =]

Next post for Cast. =]

Shenae Grimes Fan
11-18-2007, 02:44 AM
The Jonas's:
Nick Jonas.
Joe Jonas.
Kevin Jonas.

The People I have made up, (besides me xD):
Alvana Weller; main character; a.k.a. me.
Tanner Johnson; main character's bestfriend.
Brian Weller; main character's older brother.

MMW Peoples:
Zanessa Fan1; Katie Miller.
shopaholicoxxo; Casey Sullivan.
PursePrincess4eva; Maria Diaz.
( soulmates ); Adri Bradshaw.
Nichole; Nichole Johannsen.
krrristin; Kristin Spears.
mileyforever; Aly Kaladina.
Cutiegril123; Kayla Smith.


the first four people, i thought they
would want to be in it, if one of you
doesn't, just tell me. ;]
Also, I used lastnames that
you guys use in ff and rpgs,
if you want me to change them,
please just say so. xD

no more forms. ;]

Shenae Grimes Fan
11-18-2007, 02:45 AM
Le Chapters:
NUMBAA ONE. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1562288&postcount=15)
NUMBAA TWO. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1567302&postcount=28)
NUMBAA THREE. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1574950&postcount=35)

Miles Of Smiles Rock
11-18-2007, 02:48 AM
omj alvana i cant wait to read this story [and maybe be part of it] when you put the form up, ill be sure to sign up ;)

krrristin
11-18-2007, 02:54 AM
YAY Alvi!
I can't wait to read it

Nichole
11-18-2007, 03:08 AM
Name: Nichole
Age: 14
Looks: Long Long Longggg brunette hair,
Hazel eyes,
Slim.
Personality: Nice, Bubbly,
Funny, Energetic.
Good or Bad?: Goooodd.

Shenae Grimes Fan
11-18-2007, 03:09 AM
Long long longggg. [x

ima put you on the list. =D

krrristin
11-18-2007, 04:05 AM
Name & Last Name: Kristin Spears
Age: 15
Looks: click. (http://i230.photobucket.com/albums/ee222/so_kristin/WebCam_20071019_15272.jpg)5'4" and 100 lbs I am skinny. Toned from sports.
Personality: Fun but chill. I have my spazzztic moments, but usually I'm the calming force.
Im bubbley to say the least. And nice... sometimes. I always have a smile on mah face.
Good or Bad?: Good please
Fav. jonas: Nicholas

I'll try and add you to my ff. :]]

Shenae Grimes Fan
11-18-2007, 04:06 AM
you're in Kristin. : DD

guys, i'm writing the first chapter right now.
;]

krrristin
11-18-2007, 04:11 AM
yayzers

mileyforever
11-18-2007, 04:33 AM
Name & Last Name: Aly
Age: 12
Looks:
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s83/Mushinimario/rawr.jpg
Personality:
I am odd :P
Fun, hyper, energetic, nice,
random[at times] sometimes very stupid,
and i'm always the one to put a smile on your face if you're sad...
and for some off reason i can't do that to myself...:P
Good or Bad?: Good.
Fav. jonas:
Kevin ♥♥♥

Shenae Grimes Fan
11-18-2007, 04:34 AM
Name & Last Name: Aly
Age: 12
Looks:
http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s83/Mushinimario/rawr.jpg
Personality:
I am odd :P
Fun, hyper, energetic, nice,
random[at times] sometimes very stupid,
and i'm always the one to put a smile on your face if you're sad...
and for some off reason i can't do that to myself...:P
Good or Bad?: Good.
Fav. jonas: Kevin ♥♥♥

you're in. ;DD

mileyforever
11-18-2007, 04:35 AM
WOOOO!!!! :P

Shenae Grimes Fan
11-18-2007, 04:35 AM
wait, can you make up a last name please? :P

Shenae Grimes Fan
11-18-2007, 04:40 AM
Chapter 1:
We're going to New York!

ALVANA'S POV:
Tanner and I were talking about how we never have been out of California
before, so now we're going to New York, well, atleast we think we are. We
just need to ask out parents, then we'll know. We made a list, the only person
on it is my brother Brian. Cause he wants to go too. Before we called our
friends, we thought asking our parents would be a good idea. We practiced
what we were going to say and then asked the parents. "Mom, Dad," I said,
"Tanner and I have been thinking, and we've never been ot of California
before, so, we were thinking if we could go to New York." I said, and before
they could say anything, i continued, "And we wanted to bring a couple of
friends," I said. They looked at eachother. I knew they were gonna say no.
My mom nodded, "You guys can go, but, Tanner's parents have to say yes,
you can't bring a whole lot of people and your dad and I have to come with
you guys." she said. I smiled, and it was a big smile. "Thanks mom." i hugged
her and ran upstairs to my room, Tanner was still talking on the phone, with
his mom, i guessed. Tanner put his hand over the thing you speak in, "My
mom said it's fine if your parents said yes." he told me. "They said yes." I said.
"They said yes...ok bye mom." he said and then he hung up the phone. "We're
going to New York!" we said in unison. We High-fived and ran down stairs.


Everything was set, we were going on Friday, two days from now, we were
going to the airport at 7:30 a.m. and we were gonna come back in 3 weeks.
Everyone that was going was gonna stay the night the day before, my parents
trusted him to stay the night, because we knew eachother before pre-school,
because our parents knew eachother in high school or something. Tanner
and I got my phonebook and the house phone and sat on the floor in my
room calling our friends. We first called Katie, we told her about everything,
why we were going, the time, the date, the sleepover, and when we were
coming back. Her Parents said yes. We said bye and hung up. We then
called Casey. We told her everything, her parents said yes. We said bye
and hung up. "We're getting lucky." Tanner said. We laughed. We called
Kristin last, and of course, she could go. We put all the stuff away.


About an hour later, Tanner had to leave, so i said bye to him and went
upstairs to my room, i laid on my bed and thought about how fun it
would be at New York. And the sleep-over tomorrow. I turned on the
tv and flipped thru the channels, i stopped at a movie, Spider Man 3,
i decided to watch it, cause there was only about 1 and 30 minutes left
of it. I wanted to watch it but i fell asleep. I dreamt of how i thought
New York would be.

Sorry that it's short, i can't really think of anything. xD
2 or more comments to next chapter.

mileyforever
11-18-2007, 04:42 AM
Yeah sure...
How about..Aly Conrad :P ahaha, i'm such a The Hills Freak.
Or you can do Aly Kaladina...hmm intresting, i just like typed a bunch of different letters :P
I like the second one best. :D

Cutiegril123
11-18-2007, 04:43 AM
Name & Last Name: Kayla (can't think of a last name.) (still can't think. my brain has left right now, ill tell u when it comes back)
Age: im 13
Looks: http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l205/Cutiegril123/188074578437.jpg and http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l205/Cutiegril123/190727046277.jpg
Personality:blonde moments, nice, shy but once i get to know u im normal, random, i wouldn't get on my bad side.
Good or Bad?: Good, and bad...
Fav. jonas: I love all of them, Im in a joe phase right now tho, but it doesn't matter who.

Edit Again: I might be a little late posting this =O

mileyforever
11-18-2007, 04:46 AM
:O:O
More! haha

krrristin
11-18-2007, 04:49 AM
woah I cant read that x)

Cutiegril123
11-18-2007, 04:50 AM
more!

krrristin
11-18-2007, 04:51 AM
ok I read it!
YAY I can go!

haha :P

MORE

Cheerleader111
11-18-2007, 05:27 AM
More! =]

Shenae Grimes Fan
11-18-2007, 05:37 AM
ok, i'll write more later.
Kayla, you're in, but
thats the last person.
;DD

( soulmates )
11-18-2007, 10:41 AM
I loff it Purple!
post more pleaseeee

Cutiegril123
11-19-2007, 02:59 AM
ok, i'll write more later.
Kayla, you're in, but
thats the last person.
;DD


ohh yay, post more oh
and
for my made up last name
just use Smith...
---
only thing i could think of since its a common last name.....

Shenae Grimes Fan
11-19-2007, 08:07 PM
Ok guys, i wrote some on a piece
of paper when i was "sleeping"
so i'll type it and then post it.
:P

mileyforever
11-19-2007, 08:30 PM
Well what are you waiting for?!
Do it now! :P

Shenae Grimes Fan
11-19-2007, 08:57 PM
Chapter 2:
The Sleepover.

ALVANA'S POV:
I woke up the next morning. You're probably wondering if the TV was
on, it was. It was 12:46 pm, to be exact and it was Thursday! I was
excited about the sleepover and going to New York the next day, I got
dressed, brushes my teeth, and went downstairs. Tanner was sitting
on the couch watching TV. "Tanner, what are you doing here?" I asked
sitting next to him, "I thought you were going to wake up earlier," he said,
"You obviously didn't" I laughed, "I see..." I said, "Excited for th sleep-
over?" we both got up and when into the Kitchen. "Yea, i can't wait to
do my nails, my make-up, and talk about boys!" he said in a girly voice.
"Ok, that was really Tanner," I laughed, "Some girls don't do that, well,
at least i don't..." I got two water bottles from the fridge and handed one
to Tanner, i opened mine and took a sip, "But if we happen to do some-
thing like that, which we probably won't...you can do something with
Brian." I looked at him and he was having trouble opening his water
bottle, "Need help?" I asked. "I can do it...myself!" He said. I grabbed
it from him and opened it, i gave it back to him, "I loosend it.." he said.
"Yea, ya loosened it." I said grinning.

Tanner and I waited outside for everyone to come, they got
at my house at like 6:54. We put their things in my room and
then packed my stuff for the trip. Tanner was laying on my
bed telling us what to pick out. But we didn't really listen to
him, unless he was choosing the right thing. When we were
done, we got a whole bunch of blankets. We went downstairs
and put them on the floor in the living room. We each got a
pillow and we put them against the couch. It looked like a
really big bed. It was 7:24, so we decided to play Guitar
Hero. Tanner didn't play because he said hes too "good."
Casey played against Kristin. Casey won. Katie and I played,
and Katie won. It was time for dinner a bit after we stopped
playing. We had Steak, Mashed Potatoes, and Mac and Cheese.
After Dinner, we watched a movie and then feel asleep.
The next day, we woke up at 7:00. I was so excited to go
to New York.

Sorry that it's so short. : P
I promise that the next chapter will be long.
2 comments to next chapter.
: D

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-20-2007, 04:20 PM
This Is Good Alvana =) Now Finish That Chapter!
[Wish I Seen This Earlier. So I Could Sign Up TeeHee]

Shenae Grimes Fan
11-21-2007, 12:21 AM
Ok, i put the rest of the chapter.
(:

Cutiegril123
11-21-2007, 12:29 AM
mores!

mileyforever
11-21-2007, 01:28 AM
MORE MORE MORE.
haha.

( soulmates )
11-21-2007, 10:15 AM
POST MORE
now please?

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-21-2007, 01:05 PM
Post More Alvana! I Loves Your FanFics =D
You Ish A Great Writer!

Shenae Grimes Fan
11-21-2007, 07:30 PM
Chapter 3:
Tuna

ALVANA'S POV:
We woke up the next day, we had breakfast, eggs and bacon, put everything in the car, and then left.

My dad decided not to go, but hey, one less parent to worry about, right?

We have an Expedition, so the way we were sitting was, my mom was in the driver seat,

Brian in the passanger, In the middle, I was sitting on the seat next to the window, and Tanner in the middle.

and in the back, Katie, Casey, and Katie were talking about something, obviously important

because they didn't want anyone to hear them.

Tanner and I tried to listen.

What I heard was "Jonas.....Brother....Concert....New York." I lighted up

and then looked at Tanner. I turned around a bit and gave them a look.

"Would you keep it down back there? I'm trying to listen to this wonderful music that my

mom listens to." I said sarcasticly. They stopped talking and I turned around

again. I couldn't stand the music, and obviously neither did Brian,

Cause he changed the radio station, then my mom changed it back and they

started fighting over it, "Seriously guys!," I said making them stop, "Just turn it off."

My mom turned it off and then we just sat there for about half an hour and

then we got to the air port. We waited forever to get on the plane. The way we sat was:

Tanner and I, Then Katie and Casey, and Kristin sat next to my brother. My mom sat

In front of me and Tanner with a guy that smelled like Tuna. It was very disturbing.


After the plane ride....

It took us 4 hours and 45 minutes to get there, but we survied. Tanner and I got

Napkins and stuck some pieces in our nose so we wouldn't have to smell the tuna. We had

to breath through our mouths and we talked weirdly. It was not enjoyable.

We got off the plane and walked out of the air port, we were rolling our luggage.

We got a taxi, which was hard to do by the way and then we went to this hotel. It was

very nice and expensive. "I call bunk by window!" I yelled running into the room to see

if there were any windows in the room. "Theres one." I said as I put my stuff on the floor. I've always

wanted a top with a window on the side. My brother was going to sleep on the bottom bunk

of the bunk bead i was sleeping on, Tanner on the top of the one right next to us. Well not

right next, but you know what I mean. Casey on the bottom of that bunk. And there

was another bunk in that room, it was a really big room, and Kristin was at the

top and Katie on the bottom. My mom got the Bed that was in another room.

We went outside and explored New York. We went to some stores and bought a little

stuff, we ate at this place, their food was really good and then we started walking

towards the hotel again. New York was really packed, so many cars on the road, so many

people walking on the sidewalks, it was really nice too. So we got to the hotel

and we saw a guy leaning against the wall, he looked exactly, and i mean EXACTLY

Like Nick Jonas.

3 or more comments to next chapter. : D

Cutiegril123
11-24-2007, 03:27 AM
moreee :)

mileyforever
11-24-2007, 03:28 AM
Tis a comment i see :P

Micky_4_Life
11-24-2007, 10:32 AM
Could ya please make the print bigger? I used a magnify thingy to read it!

shopaholicoxxo
11-24-2007, 12:16 PM
oooh more! (:

MileyFan_4_Ever
11-24-2007, 10:28 PM
I Believe It Is Time For You To Write Some More Miss Alvana.