The Journal of an Illiegial Child

[Destiny9910]

This story is a fanfiction of Miley. A member on this forum came up with the idea and started to write a fanfic about this. No one has commented it and stuf for a while so I am taking her idea and writing my own version of it. The credit goes to violared21 99.9%. Me, .1%

Should I do it?

[cutiepie7897]

sure

[Destiny9910]

ok here is part 1

[Destiny9910]

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Credit by Destinydreamer

Part 1

When I was born, my family was very happy. The year was 1992. I was born to a family of 4. My mother, who died when I was 4, was so happy to have another daughter. I had 2 other siblings. I was the thrid child. Jackson was 4, and Liz was 6.
"I finally have a sister!" Liz shouted with delight. My father, who was a singer, was also very happy.
"Her name is Miley." He said because I was all smiley. When my mom died when I was 4, my family was crushed. Luckliy we pulled through. When i truened 13, I becamw a famous singer named Hannah Montana. I wanted to live a double life, so I wore a blonde wig. Then at 1 concert my whole world ended.
"I LOVE YOU ALL!" I shouted into the mike. The crowd cheered. Just then a man in a black suit came onto the stage.
"I Have an annoucemnet." he said. "All 3rd children of a family are illigel!"
"No!" Everyone shouted.
"All 3rd children come up here!" He shouted. People began running toward the exits, but other people in black suits blocked them. I was a 14 year old who was illigeil! I rushed off stage and into the car of my family and we raced off into the night.

1 comment to continue
PS can anyone make me a banner?

[Destiny9910]

sry its so short

[destinydreamer]

it's awesome. yeah I can make you a banner...just give me pics

[cutiepie7897]

cool

[Destiny9910]

i will write part 2 later
maybe in a fwew minutes

[shopaholicoxxo]

ohhh this is based off among the hidden, right?
love that book :D

[Destiny9910]

i think
like i said i dont really kno i used teh idea off another fanfic but Iam makeing my own verson

[PAiNTBYNUMBER]

interesting concept! update! [:

[Destiny9910]

give me a few hours I have to leave for school like in 7 minutes!

[Destiny9910]

Part 2
The next morning the police were going door-to-door taking away a family's 3rd child. It was 10:01 am when the police came for me.
"Miles, go hide." My dad said. He opened the door and found an officer.
"POPULATION POLICE!" He said. He walked in and began looking through the house. I scooted back in the corner behind the couch as the officer came toward me. He then left.
"MILEY COME OUT!" My dad said. As I did the officer barged through the door again.
"Gochta!" He said and dragged me to the truck and it drove away.

[destinydreamer]

ooh - right more!!!!!

[flower1]

Oh wow!....Post more!

[Destiny9910]

oh and destinydreamer thax for teh banner all credit goes to you

[PAiNTBYNUMBER]

awesome. write more please!

[Mnkygrl957]

Mmmmmmmooooooooorrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeee

[cutiepie7897]

more

[x3Meghan ily]

wow! this is veryy good.

[Mnkygrl957]

hhhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyy y pppppppppppplllllllllssss wwwwwwwwwwwwwwrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitttttttttttt tttttteeeeeeeeeeeeee

[Destiny9910]

Part 3
As the truck drove away I stared out a little window. I remembered the song my dad used to sing, I LEARNED FROM YOU. Some girl had brought a guatar aboard teh truck.
"May i borrow that?" I asked. The girl nodded and her black hair fell into her face.
I began strumming a few note and sanf.

ooooo
yeah
i didn't wanna listen to what you were sayin'
i thought that i knew all i need to know
i didn't realize that somewhere inside me
i knew you were right but i couldn't say so

i can take care of myself, yeah, you taught me well

(chorus: (miley))
i learned from you that i do not crumble
i learned that strength is something you choose
all of the reasons to keep on believin'
there's no question, that's a lesson, that

As I sang that little did I know my dad was singing it back at home.

(billy ray)
we always don't agree on
what is the best way
to get to the place that we're going from here
but i can really trust you, and give you the distance,
to make your decisions without any fear

(both)
i'm grateful for all of the times
you opened my eyes

(chorus: (both))
i learned from you that i do not crumble
i learned that strength is something you choose
all of the reasons to keep on believin',
there's no question, that's a lesson
i learned from you

(both)
you taught me to stand on my own

(miley) and i thank you for that

(both)
you saved me, you made me,
and now that i'm looking back

(miley) i can say

(both) woooaaahhhh!

(miley) hmmmm... hmmmm... yeah!

(both)
i learned from you that

(miley) i learned from you

(both)
i do not crumble
i learned that strength is something you choose

(miley) something you choose

(both)
all of the reasons to keep on believin',

(miley) keep on believin'

there's no question, that's a lesson that i learned from you

(miley)
woooaaahhhh!
i learned from yoooouuu

i learned that strength is something you choose
(billy ray) something you choose

(both)
all of the reasons to keep on believin',
there's no question, that's a lesson that i learned from you

(miley) yeah!

(both)
i learned from you

When I finished the sng I looked up. All of the girl in teh truck had tears in their eyes. I started singing again.

Sha-la-la-la-la, sha-la-la-la-la
You used to call me your Angel
Said I was sent straight down from Heaven
You'd hold me close in your arms
I loved the way you felt so strong
I never wanted you to leave
I wanted you to stay here holdin' me

I miss you
I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear every once in a while
And even though it's different now
You're still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you
Sha-la-la-la-la
I miss you

You used to call me your dreamer
And now I'm livin' out my dream
Oh, how I wish you could see
Everything that's happenin' for me
I'm thinkin' back on the past
It's true the time is flyin' by too fast

I miss you
[I Miss You lyrics on http://www.metrolyrics.com]

I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear every once in a while
And even though it's different now
You're still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
I miss you

I know you're in a better place, yeah
But I wish that I could see your face, oh
I know you're where you need to be
Even though it's not here with me

I miss you
I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear every once in a while
And even though it's different now
You're still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
I miss you

(Repeat)

By hten everyone was crying. Thats when I remembered I had a radio in my pocket. I pulled it out and it played Good and Broken.

Are you overloaded
Candycoated
Your life's imploded now
There's a risk worth taking
A pain worth aching
On this hollow ground
( we can) Let go
Don't hold on to all of life's hardest parts
When we think of stopping
Let's keep on rockin
To the rhythm of our hearts

CHORUS
We can
We can break outta here
Jump on over there
Where the air is clearer
We can
We can forget the pace
win our own race
Become a broken chain, yeah
We are broken chains, yeah
Good and broken

Find the magic
Go and grab it
Your fate is in your hands
Come on, find a reason to believe in
Just tell yourself we can

CHORUS
We can
We can break outta here
Jump on over there
Where the air is clearer
We can
We can forget the pace
win our race
Become a broken chain, yeah
We are broken chains, yeah
Good and broken
[Good and Broken lyrics on http://www.metrolyrics.com]


BRIDGE
Get off your seat
On your feet
Raise your hands
Feel the beat
Let it go
Lose control
Feel it in your soul
Don't you know what you can do
If you have faith in you
Let's not be invisible
There's no red light in life
Just go!

We can
We can break outta here
Jump on over there
Where the air is clearer
We can
We can forget the pace
win our race
Become a broken chain, yeah
We are broken chains, yeah
Good and broken yeah

We can
We can
We can
We can
We can, oh yeah
We can
We can
We can
We can
We can
We can
We can
We can
oh,We can
Good and broken

Just then a loud bang occured.
"SHUT UP!" everyone was silent and we remained that way the rest of the way.

[Mnkygrl957]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmoooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeee eeeeeee

[Xo_Disney_Princess_oX]

Please!

[Destiny9910]

wow i am thinking 1 more comment will do

[Mnkygrl957]

more!!!! pls look at my little face...=( lol

[Purple_Panda]

more please. :P *begs*

[Destiny9910]

sorry maybe tomorrow or later like 8

[Destiny9910]

PArt 4
It seemed like hours before we reached our destination. We had picked up 2 more girls making a total of 10 altogether. When teh truck stopped, the back doors opened.
""EVERYONE OUT!" A guard ina blue suit said. I hopped out and the guard hand cuffed me. We all walked into a huge b=uolding then into a small, dark room. The rrom was empty. This was going to be our new home. Suddenly I was pushed from behind onot the ground.
"You are number 13." He growled. h had given me an unlucky number. I slumped down againtst the cold, wet wall.
"And even though it's different now, you're still here somehome. My heart won't let you go, and I need you to knoe, I miss you." I sang quietly. "Daddy." I murmured. Just then a girl named taylor Marcus sat down next to me. Her long, blonde hair hung limply in her face, and her bright blue eyes filled with tears.
"Nice song." She said. "we'll get through this, together." I knew this wqs going to be a long journey.


sry my chapters are short, but theyll be long ones pretty soon i think
2 commentws

[Destiny9910]

u want more?

[Mnkygrl957]

mooorrree
pls

[Destiny9910]

Part 5
Days passed and I grew weaker and weaker. They gave us each 3 bread rolls a day. We were also given each a blanket. By December 6, 2007, I was out of it. I woke in a corner of the room. I was hurting from head to toe. Everyone was still alseep except for Taylor. She was l looking ou the small window. I walked over toward her with my blanket tightly wrapped around me.
"Taylor, are you ok?" I asked her. She stared into my deep, green eyes.
"I have two sisters. They are twins. Fifteen each. The officers grabbed me the minute I opened the door." By then she was crying.
"It'll be okay." I said. Just then a girl namd Sara rushed over to us. Her black hair hung in her face and her brown eyes were wide with horrow.
"The guards are outside. They said they are going to leave us here to freeze to death!"

[Mnkygrl957]

mmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[destinysmiles!]

idk but this remember me of the nazis

[Destiny9910]

its kinda like that

[Mnkygrl957]

more!!!!!!!!!

[Destiny9910]

I am osrry for what i am about too say but here it goes.
Under teh curcumstances i am unable to continue this story

[destinydreamer]

oh and destinydreamer thax for teh banner all credit goes to you

my pleasure! I love helping people! That's one of my four mottos in life. BTW, great fan-fic. more please!

[xoxohuggablemiley]

:))I am osrry for what i am about too say but here it goes.
Under teh curcumstances i am unable to continue this story
why not?

[Destiny9910]

its a long story i kno a lot of people like it but i just cant

[destinydreamer]

can you tell us the story?

[Destiny9910]

ok
well my mom doesnt want me writing sotries liek that and I want to do it anyway buty i cant
I have beem asking for morre posts but I cant get any
I have a writers block