English Assignment Help

[HannahMontanaX3]

We read the outsiders in class and now I have to write a thirteenth chappie for the book. It needs to be 6 pages typed and I have about 3 quarters of one in Word. help please. What I have so far:

When I had turned in my report it turned up to be about ten pages long. I wrote about the fight, the runaway, and the death of Johnny. I wrote about everything that happens as a greaser. When I got it back, even though he and I agreed on a C grade I ended up with an A. I walked home and entered the house. I saw Darry and showed him the paper. He hugged me and let me go congratulating me. I made my way to my room thinking about all that had happened. Even if I had informed my English teacher it didn’t change many feelings that I was having with Johnny and Dally’s deaths. It didn’t change any feelings I had about anything that has happened over the course of time since Johnny killed Bob. I went just outside the house and lit a smoke. I blew a few rings before I was finished. I put it out then headed inside again. I grabbed Johnny’s copy of Gone With The Wind.
I felt it was the only way at the time to connect to Johnny.

[Mileyfan001]

i have read the outsiders in 7th or 6th grade.

But what do u need help on???

[HannahMontanaX3]

I need help to write a final chapter for the book. now I have this:
When I had turned in my report it turned up to be about ten pages long. I wrote about the fight, the runaway, and the death of Johnny. I wrote about everything that happens as a greaser. When I got it back, even though he and I agreed on a C grade I ended up with an A. I walked home and entered the house. I saw Darry and showed him the paper. He hugged me and let me go proud that I didn’t fail. I made my way to my room thinking about all that had happened. Even if I had informed my English teacher it didn’t change many feelings that I was having with Johnny and Dally’s deaths. It didn’t change any feelings I had about anything that has happened over the course of time since Johnny killed Bob. I went just outside the house and lit a smoke. I blew a few rings before I was finished. I put it out then headed inside again. I grabbed Johnny’s copy of Gone With The Wind.
I felt it was the only way at the time to connect to Johnny.
Then I thought about what he said, it was better for someone like him to give his one life to those little kids who still can start fresh. I thought, sometimes you do have to think of others before yourself. So thinking that it also has me thinking even if I lost someone close and dear to me, those parents could have lost many kids dear to them. My life may not be the best and of course Soda and Darry would never want me to leave but if I died from saving more peoples lives they’d probably understand what I am starting to understand now.

[None]

I think the ending was great.

Paul Newman and a Ride Home...

What else is there to write about? Jonny's dead, and Pony was writing the story... What else is there to add? It had the best ending ever. It's my favorite book.

You know what I think? I think you should go up to your teacher, and slap her across the face for me, and S.E Hinton

[SupaStaRrMiley92]

hmm..i read the book a while ago, so stuff i write might not be completely relevant, so i suggest you look it over before taking it. i can edit your grammar mistakes, also :P sorry im a grammar freak. ill just turn everything i changed red. ya don't have to agree with all the changes i made, these are just suggestions as to what i would change ;)

When I had turned in my report, it turned out to be about ten pages long. I wrote about the fight, the runaway, and the death of Johnny. I wrote about everything that happens as a greaser. When I got it back, even though [add something here besides "he." the reader doesn't know who you're talking about] and I agreed on a C grade, I ended up with an A. I walked home and threw the door open excitedly. Darry was standing there, waiting, and I shoved him my paper. He hugged me and let me go, congratulating me. I made my way to my room, thinking about everything that had happened. Even if I had informed my English teacher, it didn’t change the several feelings that I was having about Johnny and Dally’s deaths. It didn’t change any feelings I had about anything that had happened over the course of time since Johnny killed Bob. I went just outside the house and lit a smoke. Blowing a few rings, I put it out and headed back inside. I grabbed Johnny’s copy of Gone With The Wind and flipped to the first page.
I felt it was the only way at the time to connect to Johnny.

okay, here's where I start with my writing :P

I took in all of the words on the pages, focusing on not only the story, but the way Johnny would have read it, the way he would have looked at it. I remembered the days we spent together in the old church, the times we endured together.
Tears found my eyes and rolled down my cheek. Wiping them away, I realized that I should be strong, just as Johnny would have wanted me to be, and to "stay gold." He would have wanted that.
I kept on reading, turning the pages, lost in the words. Putting the book in a safe place, I promised myself that I would read it when I needed some guidance.

okay, writers block :P sorry if that didn't help haha but i hope it did a little bit. its sorta hard to write a diff ending to that book

[mollzy_23]

I think the ending was great.

You know what I think? I think you should go up to your teacher, and slap her across the face for me, and S.E Hinton

i totally agree..
the outsiders was good enough

I mean 6 PAGES. i can understand 6 paragraphs but PAGES. omg!!!

sry im not any help

[pksllayer]

You know what I think? I think you should go up to your teacher, and slap her across the face for me, and S.E Hinton

My sentiments exactly! why mess up a perfectly good book........