Will Problems Happen?

[secretive_angel]

Ok I have grown bored and decided to write a fan fiction involving the Jonas Brothers and Hannah and a made up character.
Intro
The main characters jora Beddings and lisa Simmons get chosen to go on tour with the Jonas brothers and hannah Montana, but will love bloom? Stardom come? Torn relationships?


Should i continue on??????????????????? I know there are alot of these jonas/hannah fanfics but idk what do u think Sorry i changed it a bit ok a lot but I am gonna get something in it do not worry

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[secretive_angel]

It all started when two girls had never met in their life before got the chance of a lifetime and it all happened because they went to a Jonas Brothers concert before their tour with the teen sensation Hannah Montana . The first Lucky girl was in the fifth row, Lisa Simmons (smileyface93) even though she had been too over 20 JB concerts, she was still as excited as a 4 year old in a candy shop, she sat with her two best friends, Sammy and Alana (made up). Lisa Simmons was too most people a very friendly person, she had long curly brown hair, which makes her eyes pop, a light perfect sun touched tan, around 5’4 , as she waited for the concert to start she had a huge pixie stick (I think that is what it is) her two friends exchanged glances and prepared for their friend, to go berserk!
The other lucky girl was in the 9 row, Jora Beddings, but she didn’t care she was so happy it was her first concert ever, and it was her favorite band also the Jonas brothers, she sat with her best friend Hannael. Hannael only came because of her best friend Jora who was patiently awaiting the concert to start. Jora was somewhat different then Lisa and yet somehow alike, she had green eyes, she had natural Raven black hair with blue, green, purple and red streaks all over, she had skin people almost as white as flour, she had a unique style. She was known as the quiet girl but once you got to know he you find out she is the most outgoing person you can hang with she is crazy. As Jora and Hannael sat there they tried reading a book, to occupy themselves.
MEANWHILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Jonas brothers were getting pumped up, But Joe was acting stranger than usual he was all calm while his brothers we getting hyper to have a great show. All of a sudden Joe says “I am so happy, do you realize that tonight we choose two completely random girls to come on tour with us, oh yeah I said it GIRLS!!!” Nick and Kevin stared at their brother as if he was crazy but were also feeling the same way, The concert was starting . The audience went crazy They sang The Year 3000, Mandy, SOS, and Hold On.
When they made their announcement about choosing two lucky fans to come on the full tour with them. Joe picked the first girl he went over to the manual light thing and did a maniacal laugh then went to pick a girl he kept slowing down then speeding up when he abruptly stopped and yelled into the mic “The Girl with the blue tank top and denim skirt” it was Lisa she was so happy , the body guard led her to the stage as Nick said it was his turn and he wanted to pick someone who looked totally different when he saw two girls paying somewhat of attention but were reading a book he saw which one to choose he acted like Joe but stopped exactly on Jora and said “ The girl with the book and wearing the loose tie and shirt thingy I don’t know what its called” Jora was shocked she stood there for a moment when a bodyguard brought her on the stage. Lisa and Jora were taken backstage. But on different sides of the stage after a few more songs the boys came out and had the Bodyguards Tony and Bobert, go and get them. As They were brought back Jora was completely quiet, calm yet nervous while Lisa was jumping up and down almost . As they walked in the boys headed over along with there soon to be touring with Hannah Montana/ Miley Cyrus when.
OOOOOOOOOOO what you people call a cliffhanger.

[smileyface93]

omg i love it!!!!!!haha

[secretive_angel]

yay one or two more comments and i will post more on Saturday

[DragonFlyGirl]

I like it write more pleeeeeeeeeeez

[flower1]

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[secretive_angel]

Chapter 2
When all of a sudden Miley slipped and was about to hit the ground when Nick caught her and she safely landed in his arms she said thanks while her face turned a pink color. Lisa and Jora watched awkwardly , Lisa did not really care only for the fact she was in love with Joe, who she was only inches away from she smiled at the thought of that and Jora did not care very much either she didn’t have favorites or crushes. When the unexpected happened Nick kissed Miley and her face turned an even deeper pink. Then they broke apart and Lisa and Jora looked at each other and though they only met moments ago they read each other’s minds and tilted their heads and said “AKWARD” Joe and Kevin laughed as the two “lover’s “ went as red as tomatoes. So then they called the ‘rents to arrange everything and then they started talking.
Lisa’s Point of View
As we all sat in a circle I noticed how Miley and Nick were talking and sitting so close no surprise with the whole kiss thing, The girl who introduced herself as Jora is talking to Kevin how can she be so calm I mean we are meeting three of THE HOTTEST GUYS ON THIS EARTH! So from what I could tell she seems pretty cool, not exactly for her style choice but otherwise cool. Wait a second I just realized I haven’t said anything wow my mom would be shocked. All of a sudden Joe said “So are you excited? Because I am.” he asked and declared with his wonderfully perfect smile, at first all I could do was stare and say “eeeeeeepp “ then I snapped out of it and said “ Yea I am and sorry about the whole freaking out because you know its you and you are you and you are” he laughed at my rambling and said “I get it and don’t worry” that made me feel better then we talked about simple stuff like hobbies, what the type of person we were and our friends, we had a lot in common.
Joe’s Point of View
I am so glad I chose Lisa she is so interesting, and we are a lot alike. Looks like Nick and miley are beginning to kiss again how cute wittle nicky has girlfwiend I looked to Jora she seems awesome also she and Kevin are talking about random things I can see she is keeping a tight grip on her book I guess she is one of those brainy girls, then I turned my head back to Lisa just as she smiled. Oh wow my stomach just did a flip flop do I like Lisa as more than a friend I mean we have only been talking for an hour, is that even possible.
Kevin’s Point of View
I can see my little brothers are falling hard Nick for Miley, and Joe for Lisa, Lisa seems cool she and Joe have the exact same personality, she is kind of girly though. Jora now she is awesome too, I learned she loves to sing but she doesn’t think she is good, a skateboarder, a dancer in ballet, tap, jazz, hip hop, and swing, and has already skipped two grades ahead. Talk about achiever, I think she and I are gonna be pretty good friends. Even though she is really smart she has fun she is like Joe a lot also maybe a bit less, she told me how she had one friend who was a girl, Hannael, and a ton of guy friends, she is not the girliest girl you would meet she was more of a tom boy. She also told me how strict her manager for her dancing and singing, she said she has to be on a strict diet and she hates it, but she signed a contract so it has to be that way, I don’t see why she needs a diet she is already thin. We talked and talked.
As they all walked onto the bus the tour was starting in a week so they were going to stop at the houses to get all the stuff they will need. They all sat when Nick said “How about we play the almighty Truth or Dare?” he said with a mischievous grin. Everyone said yea right away but they noticed Jora didn’t and had a look of fear in her face, then she said yea ok. She looked down. Nick went first “Miley Truth or dare?” he said with a twinkle in his eyes as Miley bit her lip and said “Truth.” Nick then smiled while turning the pink that seemed to be permanently there all day and asked “Tell the truth, when did you start to like me?” Miley turned red and said “About a month ago.” Miley said “My turn. Truth or Dare…..Joe?” Joe smiled and put his hand behind his head and leaned back and said “Dare” in a demonic voice. Miley smiled a devilish smile and said “ I dare you to tell us who you like right now, “ she knew Joe like Lisa and she liked him back and he turned bright red and said……………..

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[DragonFlyGirl]

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[secretive_angel]

i know in real life this could never happen but let life live :D
Chapter 3
Joe’s Point of View
I nervously looked around while saying random things such as “umm, urgh, err” and such like that avoiding the subject I looked at Lisa who looked completely calm, I darted around the room and saw Jora reading her book not paying attention, and I looked down and said “Jora…..” I was right she was definitely not paying attention, she kept looking at her book and said “What?” then I looked at everyone they all had shocked face’s, Lisa had a really sad face I just blew it and then I looked to Jora and she looked up and repeated herself “What?” she was very confused and I felt bad for dragging her into this and blowing my chance. Lisa shocked me when she laughed and said “Looks like LOVE is blooming!” she did a heart in the air as she stretched the word love, now Jora looked like someone just said “blue banana corn chow” in other words very confused. She looked at Kevin since they seemed to be friends and said “Did I miss something ?” Oh no what if Kevin likes Jora and I just blew it, great I blew any chance with Lisa, might have gotten Kevin my own brother angry at me and got a girl very confused. What else can I do wrong? Then I chimed back into reality while Kevin said “Joe said that he likes you.” Jora looked even more confused and said “Yea well we are kind of friends you have to like someone to be friends duh.” she shook her and looked back to her book and Kevin said “No in the other way.” Jora must be clueless I thought and then she sat up and said “ What other way? You mean as in a crush way?” Everyone aside from Lisa and I nodded . She grabbed her book and excused herself and walked out of the room to the bunks not even making eye contact with anyone. We sat in an awkward silence as I got up and walked back towards Jora she looked up as she heard me walk in but quickly looked down. I sat down on the bunk across from her and said “J-Jora the truth is I don’t like you in that way….” she looked relieved I felt the same, I mean we haven’t talked all that much, I mean sure she is down to earth , pretty, sweet, and what am I doing I can’t think of Jora like this I like Lisa and Kevin has got dibs I am sure he likes her anyways which gives him dibs. I continued “ I just said that so Lisa wouldn’t know that I like her, but I just blew it.” I felt like crying but just hit the pillow next to me Jora looked up and said “Joe just tell her how you feel I don’t want her to hate me or you, and if you don’t I-I w-will and I-I think that she would much rather hear it from you.” she gave a sincere smile it was small one though and she was right I nodded and came up to her with open arms and she got up and hugged me. When what happens Lisa walks in. She stared for a moment then turned out of the room but I let go of Jora who understood and let go and I grabbed Lisa’s arm and……

Lisa’s Point of View
As Joe was about to say who he liked I stayed calm on the outside but on the inside I was jumping up and down, causing earthquakes to go down my back when he said “Jora………..” I was shocked the smile dropped from my face and I felt like crawling in a hole and dying but I laughed and just said “Looks like LOVE is blooming!” while doing a heart in the air as I stretched the word love, Joe looked crushed I didn’t get it, maybe he was upset because Jora was not getting it. Then she excused herself and walked out with her book. Wow this much drama and it hasn’t even been a full day. Joe got up and left to most likely comfort Jora, gosh I thought he liked me but no he liked that… that, no its not her fault that he likes her I will just deal with it, I mean what guy wouldn’t like her she is nice, pretty, and very polite, shoot me now I walked into the bunk area just as they were hugging, at first I felt like crying but I just stared at what I wish was mine but it wasn’t and I turned around and started to walk out when Joe grabbed my arm and said “ Listen Lisa when I said I liked Jora….. I lied because, because…” he looked away and I said unsurely “because you like me?” and he said “Yes, but I do not want to move to fast I mean we have known each other for 8 hours and this is crazy and I can’t believe it but I like you a lot and …” I smiled when he said yes and this time it my turn to stop him from rambling and I said “just shut up and hug me” and we hugged and everyone clapped Joe and I broke apart and laughed while taking a few glances in each other’s eyes.
We went to bed, they all must have been worn out because they all fell asleep and soon I drifted off to sleep, too.

[DragonFlyGirl]

it's awesome write more!

[secretive_angel]

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[secretive_angel]

Chapter 4
The next morning
Kevin’s P.O.V.
The next morning, I woke up early but just stayed in my top bunk, thinking of how last night had so much drama in one night but luckily everything worked out. But I think even though Joe thought he ruined it, which he almost did, Jora was more worried because of the shock and I don’t think she has really has went out with anyone before. As I look at everyone Nick is asleep with a smile on his face that matched the girl’s across from him, Miley. Now I looked at Lisa she was sleeping with a goofy smile and she was mumbling something but all I could make out was “No mommy, 15 more minutes.” then she grunted and turned to her side, I just kind of chuckled to myself. I looked towards Joe who was hugging his teddy bear, all sprawled out and was drooling, typical Joe was all I could think of. I rolled my eyes with amusement, then I looked at the last person Jora she looked the most normal lying on her side with the cover pulled to her nose, then her eyebrows twitched and her eyes fluttered opened, and I said “Morning” she smiled and got off her bunk while stretching and saying “Morning” with a light yawn. She looked up to me and asked “So…what are we up to today?” I thought for a moment then said “ We are stopping at Lisa’s house to get her stuff and then your house.” I noticed when I said her house her smile drooped a bit but when she noticed that I noticed she quickly put it back on. She is hiding something about her home life maybe it is her manager.
Narrator
Soon everyone awoke and ate there breakfast then everyone was in three groups, can you guess the groups? Well I will tell you it was Joe and Lisa, Nick and Miley, and Kevin and Jora. Joe and Lisa sat in the front lounge and talked for awhile before deciding to watch a movie, here is how their conversation went,
Joe: So Lisa, I know that we both basically admitted that we liked each other.
Lisa: Yeah, so what do we do now?
Joe: Well I thought maybe we should do this properly, so would you like to go out sometime?
Lisa: Of course, now let’s watch a movie. How about Disturbia?
Joe: Okay
So they put in the movie as they watched the movie they held hands as Lisa laid her head gently on Joe’s shoulder.
Nick and Miley were just talking all lovey dovey and saying ridiculous nicknames, they sat in the bunk area holding hands and kissing.
As for Jora and Kevin sat in the back lounge, they were the third wheels of the bunch because they were not in a relationship but that was fine with them. Kevin was reading a magazine, and Jora was on the laptop talking on IM. Kevin put down his magazine and sat next to Jora, and said “Who are you IMing?” She replied to the last IM and then looked at Kevin and said “My little brother, Nolan.” Kevin said “That’s cool.” Jora got a reply saying “Sorry Jora, mama says I have to get off, bye.” She wrote back bye and then closed the laptop. She then asked “ So what should we do?” Kevin was about to say something when the bus stopped. They got to Lisa’s house. It was actually more like a loft it was awesome.
Lisa’s Point of View
As I ran out of the tour bus I was clutching Joe’s hand, as we walked in I saw my mom and dad and gave them a huge hug., my mom had already packed my stuff, so we could talk and I wouldn’t have to pack. We sat around and I must talk to my parents at least once a day, and I have to come home during breaks. We were just about to leave when my mom grabbed my arm and said “We need to tell you one more thing…” my mother’s voice trailed off. I was a bit nervous and my voice shook a bit as I said “What is it?” when my mother and father looked at each other and I was hoping they would not say they were getting a divorce I mean they are like the perfect couple. When my mom smiled and said “ I’m pregnant!” I felt my scared thoughts quickly shatter and I smiled I had always been an only child and now that I am almost 17 I am getting a baby brother or sister. I was so happy as I and everybody else congratulated my mom. As we left we all talked about it even Jora.
Narrator
They drove for another hour when they came into Jora’s small hometown, she gave the bus driver, Bill, the directions, they pulled up to a beautiful Victorian house, as they pulled up everyone was shocked because most people who are rich act quite snobby and Jora was anything but she led them to the house just when they got to the door, Nolan screamed “Jora!” at the top of his lungs. Nolan had dark brown hair with blue green eyes, he was 6 and a half. Jora picked her brother up and smiled while in the loudest voice they had all heard her speak, say “Nolan! Hey where is mama?” Nolan replied “She had some work to do so she had to leave, Anna is watching me.” Jora you could tell she was completely upset but she tried to hide it as she told everyone to go sit in the living room. Jora went up two flights of stairs to her bedroom, she had her bags packed thanks to Anna, so she wrote a thank you note. As she was gone a man who introduced himself as Danny A.K.A. her manager/coach came in and was about o start talking when Jora walked in and dropped her suitcases as she saw him.

What is Jora’s problem with Danny?
Is Danny evil? Who will the couples be?
PM me if you have any idea’s for my fanfic :D

[smileyface93]

omgg i luffff itt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =]

[DragonFlyGirl]

Oh It ROX MY SOX write more!

[destinysmiles!]

more!!
sorry for not postin i didnt find ur fanfic until now

[destinysmiles!]

no i dont wnat suspense

[secretive_angel]

I will post more later tonights

[DragonFlyGirl]

oooh i can't wait!

[secretive_angel]

This one is a bit deep and mature you may not want to read it.



Chapter 5
Jora’s Point of View
As I saw Danny, I felt a sudden fear go through my spine, I quickly dropped my suitcases and I regretted it, I tried to scramble out of the room before anyone could see me. But alas it was too late, everyone turned their heads to face me I may not have been facing them but you can feel when eyes are on you. I started to grab my bags and try to get them to leave NOW! Then Danny came up to me with arms open for a hug while saying “Jora!!!!!!!!!!!” I managed to smile and say “Danny… nice to see you, but we should probably get going so bye!” I was desperate to get out of my own house pretty sad huh? As everyone got up to leave Danny said “Wait, you need this. I will be calling you tonight to make sure you have read it bye.” and everyone said a quiet eerie bye. As he walked out the door I breathed a sigh of relief. Then we headed back out the door after I said bye to my brother Nolan and went to the bus.
Kevin’s Point of View
As I heard a bang against the floor me and everyone else turned their heads to see Jora turning around, what in the world just happened? She then scrambled for her bags when “Danny” held his arms open for a hug while saying “Jora!!!!!!!!!!!!” Jora said “Danny… nice to see you, but we should probably get going so bye!” she had a look of true fear in her eyes when Danny gave Jora something. He left, I could see everyone was relieved. Mostly Jora. As we got on the bus we all sat in the front lounge when I blurted out “Jora, aren’t you goin’ to read that” I said while pointing to the folded piece of notebook paper. She looked down while muttering “ uhh….. Yeah” she carefully and slowly unfolded the paper and read it to herself she did a smile everyone fell for it but I could tell it was fake she excused herself from the room., I was about to follow her to see the note when Joe said “Wow that was really awkward.” Everyone including me said yes while nodding in agreement. When out of nowhere Nick blurted out “Kevin, do you like Jora?” I was flustered, I liked Jora but not in that way, she was more like a best friend, why would he think I liked Jora in that way. I replied “No, at least not in that way she is more like a friend.” Joe and Nick looked at each other and both said “You like her” they had annoying smug grins on their faces and I shook my head no, then left the room, to check on Jora. As I entered the room Jora was talking on the phone with Danny she was getting a little angry you could tell in the shake of her voice.
Meanwhile
Lisa’s Point of View
I wonder if Kevin really does like Jora and just lied about it. As soon as Kevin left the room Joe and Nick started concocting a plan, a scheme, Miley and I just watched in somewhat of shock and interest Here was our conversation.
Nick: We have to get them together, it is so obvious they like each other.
Me: They do? They seem more like friends, maybe Kev was telling the truth.
Nick, Joe, and Miley looked at me as if I was crazy.
Me: Or maybe you guys are right, continue with your plan.
Joe: Ok let’s think of ways to get them together now think!
We were all thinking in a serene silence when Miley blurted out in an excited voice
“ I got an idea how about we…….”

Kevin’s Point of View
As Jora got off the phone I walked in completely she looked up and although she was still angry she managed to pull off a real smile. Before I could say a single word she said “ I am going to go take a shower, but you wanna hang out afterwards?” I replied with my usual happy voice “Duh.” she smiled and rolled her eyes playfully and then walked out to the bathroom. I noticed the note on her bunk, I couldn’t fight the urge I needed to read it. I quickly grabbed her note and went to my bunk and unfolded it and read to myself, it read….
Jora,
I am warning you now if you gain one pound during this tour with those freaks, you will be put on such a strict diet it will be worse then last time, I promise you that you won’t just be in the hospital for three months you will die right there in the bed, if I am the one who has to strangle you.
- Danny
I was shocked at what I just read, there was a last time. I heard the shower stop and I quickly folded the note and was putting it on her bunk right as I turned around she was walking out towel drying her hair and this time I faked a smile.

[DragonFlyGirl]

oh my goodness I LUV IT! pleeez write more soon!

[smileyface93]

More I Lufff Itt!lol

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[destinysmiles!]

im gonna kill danny if no one does!!!