A Twist In Time {HM ff} =]

[sophiecool]

Hannah Montana FanFiction: A Twist In Time™
By Sophie.

Okay, so this is my brand spankin' new FF. I kinda just stopped writing my last two the R/Hr one and the "Shoulder to lean on" one. I'm sorry about that, if anyone was really hoping for more, I just didn't have enough time and I got a little bored of doing the same things. So here's my new idea for a fan fiction, it's loosely based on the movie "It's A Wonderful Life". So if you've see the movie, you'll know what I mean ;) I hope that you all like it because I've been working very hard on it for a long time now. I've been filling up my notebook every night, and staying up late to write chapters. It's different from the others I have done, because it DOES NOT involve death or really anything sad. I did pretty well with the whole death preface of the "These Wounds Won't Seem To Heal" series, but this is funner in my opinion.

Oh and please post comments! I'm very open to critiscm and I appreciate comments about things I could make better or things you would like to see happen! Thanks and enjoy!

<3Cassie :04:


P.S: First chapter after 1 comment.

[destinysmiles!]

start cant wait!! :D

[sophiecool]

Thanks! I'll post it in one second, almost done putting it into word ;)

[destinysmiles!]

ok :)

[sophiecool]

Chapter 1: I hate this!

Miley was in her room, on her bed. She was crying heavily, it just wasn’t fair! She felt so angry at her dad that she didn’t feel like she could hold it in. And at the precise wrong moment, Robby Ray entered her room.
“Miley I-.” He said.
“Go away!” She cried, turning away from him.
“Listen to me, Destiny Hope,” He said, loudly, firmly, and this time using her real name. “This is not as big a deal as you think! It’s fine, really! We’ll fix it!”
“Just get out!” Miley screamed, pushing him towards the door. “I never want to talk to you again!”
Her father took one last pleading look at her and left. Jackson walked in behind him and made a rude face at Miley.
“Looks like Miley-Wiley’s in twouble again.” He said in an awful mock-baby voice.
“Shut up!” She shouted, throwing her pillow at him. He laughed heartily and ran out of the door. She got up and slammed it shut behind him, locking it. She then collapsed onto her bed.
“I hate this!” She screamed, “I hate me! I hate everybody!”
She got up again and threw her lamp against the wall, watching it shatter into a million pieces.
“Ugh! I wish I had never been born!” She yelled, falling into her bed again. Crawling under the covers, she fell asleep.

[sophiecool]

I need 4 comments to post da next chapter!

[numba1puppyluva]

MORE!!
What is she so mad about?
And why is Jackson so cruel? :P

[sophiecool]

Lolz, I didn't really know what she would be so mad about.....So no one shall ever know....An Jackson's a butt face :P

[mileyboo897]

Oh. I like it. Very good Sophie!


MORE.

[sophiecool]

I'll post da second chapter even tho I didn't get four comments. Just cuz I lke that chapter. ;)

[sophiecool]

Sorry it's so short!

Chapter 2: A new life.

Miley woke up to bright sunlight pressing against her eyelids. She didn’t open her eyes, but sat up and stretched. When she finally opened her eyes, she was confused. Miley saw that she had been lying on the Malibu beachm but she could not remember getting there. All of a sudden, she felt a light tap on her shoulder. Turning around, she saw Roxy in a long white dress.
“Roxy?” She asked, furrowing her eyebrows.
“Hey Miley.” She replied, smiling. “Liking the beach?”
“What’s going on Roxy?” Miley asked, “How did I get here?”
“You wished you’d never been born. Well, now Miley Stewert and Hannah Montana never existed.” Roxy replied.
Miley almost fell over. “This is a joke, right? You must be kidding!”
“Nope, I’m an angel, I don’t joke.” She said.
“Oh my God!” Miley gasped, “This is awful! When I made that wish, I didn’t really mean it! I was just mad at my dad and brother! I want my life back, please!”
“Too late.” Roxy said, simply. “You don’t get a do-over. Sorry superstar.”
“But Angel, what happened to all of my-?” She asked, her mouth falling open. “Angel, what happened to Lilly?”

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I'm still putting chapter 4 into word but here's chapter 3:

Chapter 3: Lilly.

Roxy snapped her fingers. Next thing Miley knew, they were at a concert, in the audience. They were in the front row and there was girl with dark hair and pink highlights on stage singing. The LED screens on the stage said “Danika Canada” in large, bold letters.
“What the-?” Miley started to ask, and suddenly it hit her. “Lilly’s leading a double life like me?”
Roxy nodded, “By day, she’s Lilly Truscott but by night, she’s pop superstar Danika Canada! Everyone loves her, see?” She gestured to the crowd of screaming fans.
“Oh my GOD.” Miley said, stunned, staring up at her best friend. “Wow! I never even knew Lilly could sing!”
“Well, she can.” Roxy said, matter-of-factly.
Miley sighed. “Her life’s a lot better without me in it.” Miley said sadly, hanging her head.
“I wouldn’t be too sure of that.” And, snapping her fingers, they disappeared again. Seconds later, they were standing in the halls of Miley’s school.
“What are we doing here Angel?” She asked. Roxy pointed to someone behind her and Miley turned to see Lilly. She looked exactly the same; skater girl clothes, long blonde hair, skateboard in hand. But ther was just one problem, she looked absolutely miserable. As she walked down the hall, people pointed and laughed.
“What happened to her?” Miley asked. “Why is everyone laughing at her?”
“In this world,” Roxy explained, “Lilly has no friends to support her, so she’s the skater girl that everyone makes fun of.”
Miley felt horrible. Her best friend in the whole world was now the laughing stock of the school! She hated watching them tease Lilly.
“This is terrible!” Miley cried, stepping towards Lilly, “I have to do something.”
“You can’t.” Roxy said, “They can’t see you!”
Miley tried to touch Lilly’s shoulder, but her hand went right through her.
“No! Lilly!” She called to her friend, desperately. “I want my life back!”
“I already told you, no do-overs.” Roxy told her.
“Well then… will you at least show me what happened to Oliver?”


A/N: I PROMISE that it gets better!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!

[sophiecool]

I'l post more when I'm done with my homework. I still need to put it all into word.

I just wish more people would read this, cuz I've worked pretty hard on this....:(

[mileyboo897]

EEP.

WHERES OLI??? I want OLI!!!

haha.

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

I'l post more when I'm done with my homework. I still need to put it all into word.

I just wish more people would read this, cuz I've worked pretty hard on this....:(

Don't worry, Cassie, it's only the third chapter, I'm sure more people will start reading it :)