Bigger Than Us...But It's NOT Love {A Hannah Montana fanfic} {Age 14+}

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Trailor I Made for This. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4lbn7S-BxY)

Please remember, you should be age 14 up to read this. It includes dramatic, scary, and war. Please, please don't make fun of. I just had this idea, so I'm going with it. Please no copying!



Chapter 1: It's A War Zone

"L-O-V-E LOVE!" sang hit singer Hannah Montana. Only about 100 people were in the stands at this particular concert, which was highly unusally, because she was always had sold out concerts. Yet America had just gone to war with Russia and Japan...Welcome to World War III. The kids that had ventured out during this dark time were very brave, very brave indeed.
Outside the concert hall, bombs wer going off, making the electricty go off every now and then.
"Come on! It's love, its love, thats bigger than us, its love, it love, thats bigger then us, its love, its love, its love, its love, its love, its love, we all wanna believe in love, we all wanna beleive in something, bigger than just us..." and Hannah finished up the song, just right before another black out occured. As soon as it came back on, Hannah's father come out onto the stage.
"Thats it for tonight. Safe jouney home, and God-" Blackout. "Bless." he said when they came back on. He hurried Hannah off stage.
"Quick, change Miley, we have to go." he said to Hannah. Hannah went into her dressing room, and 2 minutes later, came out as a regular girl- Miley Stewart.
The two started out the door, praying that Hannah's fans that came to her concert made it home safe. Finially Miley and her father made it back to there house in Malbue, see destruction everywhere. They walked in, and sensed something was wrong. Jackson was on the couch crying, another body next to him, crying too.

5 comments to contiue please.

[tricia1228]

Its good so far write more I want to know who is with jackson and the trailor was cool too!

[sweet_smile]

more!!im like a BIG fan uv ur fanfaics!!!!!!!!!1

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Its good so far write more I want to know who is with jackson and the trailor was cool too!

aww thanks, and yea i already written up to chapter 5, im just going to wait for comments b4 posting them. and thanks, im acually working on an extended trailer (with the full song) right now so ill post that later.

more!!im like a BIG fan uv ur fanfaics!!!!!!!!!1

aww thanks so much :)

[sweet_smile]

welcome,i also sended u a friend request on youtube

[hannahmontanarulz55]

oh, ok thanks

[mileyboo897]

I loved the trailor. The story is really good.

[xoxdestinynightxox]

MORE PLZ MORE I BET IS IS MILEYS MUM NEXT TO JACKSON ANYWAYS MORE PLZ MORE I NEED MORE I WANT MORE

[HannahMontanaX3]

more please

[hannahmontanarulz55]

I loved the trailor. The story is really good.

aww thanks, i just made an extended version of it, ill post the link when its finished uploading

MORE PLZ MORE I BET IS IS MILEYS MUM NEXT TO JACKSON ANYWAYS MORE PLZ MORE I NEED MORE I WANT MORE

um, miley's moms already dead, but thats ok, thanks for supporting

more please

ok, your the 5th person, ill post chapter 2 now :)

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Trailor I Made for This. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4lbn7S-BxY)
Extended Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AIBzTDw5EfY)

Chapter 2: Horrible News

"There home..." the other person said, trying to stop crying, for Miley's sake. It was Miley's best friend, Lilly Tresscott. Lilly and Jackson, Miley's brother, were crying, their faces red, eyes bloodshot red, and hands sweaty from holding them to tight.
"What's wrong?" shaid Mr. Stewart, in a strong way. Jackson opened his mouth, but closed it again. It was to painful to say, to hard, to..to...to horrible to even think about.
"Who...who is it..." said Miley, trying not to cry. In these days, when someone was crying it was usually because a loved one had died. Then Miley looked around....and she started to breath heavily. Rico, a boy no more than 12, had died previously this week, by getting caught in cross fire. He ran Rico's, a shop that was down by the beach. Jackson used to work there. Then there was Jake Ryan, Miley's ex boyfriend. He was comming back from Florida, from doing a movie there. His plane got shot down by the enimy. Who was it now, Miley knew....
"No...." said Miley, trying to stop crying. "Not him..."
Lilly looked at her best friend, and took a deep breath. "I'm sorry Miles...it was your boyfriend." And Lilly broke out crying again.
"No...no....he can't!" said Miley, who was breathing really hard, tears starting to come to her eyes. Her dad rushed over to her side, and hugged her.
"NO, NOT OLVER!!! NOOO!" yelled Miley from the inside of her fathers arms.
"Miles..." said her brother, the first thing he said this whole time. He hugged her too, along with Mr. Stewart. By now Miley was crying so hard, all she could see were blurred figures around her. Lilly joined in with the hug.
"It's all MY fault!" yelled Miley, as the house went black.

6 comments to contiue, also the extended trailer is up!

[friendsaddict4ever]

post chap 2!!

[friendsaddict4ever]

wow that would suck to lose everyone u knew

[tricia1228]

So sad write More!

[sweet_smile]

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YOUR STORY IS FANFICABULOUSE!

[PursePrincess4eva]

That is so sad! More!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

wow that would suck to lose everyone u knew

yup...

So sad write More!

i know...but for the record i did warn u guys, lol

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YOUR STORY IS FANFICABULOUSE!

aww thanks so much, 2 more comments though

That is so sad! More!

yea...2 more comments

[Loverya56]

this is sad
more,more?:)

[LotsaBigHearts]

oh my gosh! :O

[HannahMontanaX3]

more

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

wha wha.....
more!

[Ashley Marie 1992]

OMG MORE MORE MORE!! :( So sad!!

[Cheerleader111]

nooo!! not Oliver!! :(

[hannahmontanarulz55]

this is sad
more,more?:)

yea i know....it gets worst, just to tell you guys

oh my gosh! :O

oh my gosh good? or oh my gosh horrible? lol

more

kk

wha wha.....
more!

aww thanks for reading this fanfic too :)

OMG MORE MORE MORE!! :( So sad!!

u guys r supper supportive, thanks!

nooo!! not Oliver!! :(

i know....not Oliver, but I had to. but hes still hot! lol

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Chapter 3: The Previous Day

"Come on Miley, your crazy!!!" said Lilly. Lilly, Miley, and Oliver were currently ducking under a low roof to the broken movie theater. It was currently raining, which was good and bad. Good that it was washing all the blood down into the rivers, so people did'nt have to remember the many people who died in yesturday's battle. Bad that it was making it almost impossible to go anywhere.
"I'm crazy!" said Miley, making a run for the Seaview High school's door. "This school's crazy!!!" she said when they made it. "We are comming here, in the middle of a war zone!!!"
"They expect there won't be anymore attacks for about a week." said Lilly in a matter-of-fact tone.
"What ever, I don't beleive the news anymore. They said we were winning this war, but you don't see that do you. And besides, I want my fans to be able to look forward to something, something good, not bad. Like at last weeks concert, a little girl said she witnessed her mother DIE! Its horrible!" said Miley.
Oliver rubbed her back. "It's ok Miles. But were going to come to the concert too then." He put his hand around her waist.
"No." said Miley turning to her boyfriend. "What if a bomb hits the concert hall. I don't want anything to happen to you." she said looking down.
"Oh Miley." he moved a brown lock of hair out of her eyes. "I want to be there though, in case that happends. I want to protect you..."
"Yea...and I'm comming too." said Lilly.
"No!" said Miley very strong. "I don't want you to die...." she said hugging Oliver. "And I don't want you to go either Lilly..."
Just then the bell rang, and only 2 other kids ventured to school. The teacher did'nt even show up.
"Ok..." whispered Lilly and Oliver in defeat.

7 comments to contiue, I don't think I'll post anymore tonight though....I already posted 3 chapters in 1 night! lol

[Ashley Marie 1992]

Omg More More The Suspense Is Killing Me!

[tricia1228]

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[crazy_in_a_good_way]

more!

[Loverya56]

More:)

[xoxdestinynightxox]

More plz more this is soo sad but o well more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Omg More More The Suspense Is Killing Me!

lol, 2 more comments

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more!

2 more commetns, again, lol

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2 more comments

More plz more this is soo sad but o well more

i know, it gets worst...but thanks, and 2 more comments plz, lol

[Baby Vanessa]

more please it's really good

[gmv45]

more!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

more please it's really good

aww thanks, and ok!

more!

ok, ill post it now :)

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4lbn7S-BxY)
Extended Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AIBzTDw5EfY)

Chapter 4: Oliver's Last Day Part 1

Oliver Oken, hotty of the 9th grade, well to Miley anyway, and to be more specific, he was one of the ONLY guys in the current 9th grade. Most boys dropped out to join the War, to die for their country. Miley had told Oliver she didn’t want him to go, and of course he didn’t. Miley and him have been together for almost two years now…they got together on the first day of World War III. Miley, Lilly, and Oliver were in school, and that’s when the planes attacked Hollywood. Miley’s mother had been on the plane. Ever since then, Oliver comforted her, and soon their love bloomed.
Well on this particular day, the day of the Hannah Montana concert, Oliver got up and went to the mall (to the few stores still open) and bought the most expensive ring he could afforded. A cute, little, cheap, 50$ ring. Oliver planned to give the ring to Miley, and ask for her hand in marriage. At the age of 15, it was highly unusually these days, but since the war it had become very usual. Young teens were eager to start there life with another person, before they died not having the chance to love someone fully. Oliver wanted to marry Miley, and since they have been going out for two years, today was the day he would ask her, before her concert at 12 noon. On his way, he saw Jackson, crying. He was sitting on a stool by the abandoned Rico shack.
“Hey Jackson.” Even though in different grades, the two have been best friends since Stewarts’ moved to Malibu.
“Hey.” he said, blowing his nose into a tissue. “Miley’s already gone…you missed her…sorry.”
“Oh.” Oliver voice dropped, and he dropped the ring back into his pocket. “Are you ok Jackson?” he asked. Just then an explosion echoed the air.
“QUICK!” yelled Jackson. He grabbed his best arm and started running back toward the Stewart house. “INSIDE!” he yelled, as another bomb echoed about a mile away. Jackson pushed Oliver into a newly completed air-raid cellar. Jackson closed the door, and the two went into the cellar even deeper. Thanks to the loot Hannah Montana pulled in, they were able to build the cellar to go to, if bomb started to go off in the middle of the night or if air-raids started. After about an hour, the rumbling of the ground, and the sounds of explosions stopped.

5 comments to contiue

[Baby Vanessa]

that is so good more plz

[tricia1228]

More!

[gmv45]

More!

[sweet_smile]

More!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

that is so good more plz

oh why thanx!

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More!!

1 more comment plz

[Ashley Marie 1992]

More!! More More More More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4lbn7S-BxY)
Extended Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AIBzTDw5EfY)

Chapter 5: Oliver's Last Day Part 2


“Ok you stay here, I’m going to look to see if its ok outside.” said Jackson. He left Oliver in the back of the room, and walked up to the tight - locked door. He pressed his ear against it. Naturally he didn’t hear anything, since it was sound proof, but he tried it anyway. He undid the door, and opened it. Smoke filled the room. The smell of bombs, and explosives reached Jackson’s nose. Jackson coughed, but all seemed peaceful outside.
“OLIVER, I THINK IT’S OK!!!” he yelled, and Oliver walked up to him, coughing a bit himself. The two walked outside. In the distance, a person was running towards them. Jackson recognized the person at once, it took Oliver a little bit. Then Oliver saw the blond hair- Lilly Tresscott.
“JACKSON!” she yelled, and she flew her arms around him. “I thought you got caught in the bombs, oh my gosh!” she started kissing him. “Please don’t leave my side!” said Lilly, tears starting to pour from her eyes. Oliver just stood there, rocking back and forth on his heals.
“I won’t…” said Jackson, pulling his girlfriend into a deeper hug, realizing she really loved him, and didn’t want anything to happen to him.
Lilly turned her head to Oliver. “I’m glad your ok to Oliver, don’t worry.” She smiled at him, sniffing her snot back up her nose.
“Ugh…Lilly that’s so gross!” complained Oliver. He handed her a tissue.
“Thanks.” she laughed, and went back into a hug with Jackson, comforted by his arms around her.
Just then, one bomb, which must have been on a timer, blew up a few feet away. A few feet, where Oliver was standing. Jackson protected Lilly against the explosion. But when the smoke disappeared, Oliver was no where to be found. Then a few feet from where Oliver was standing, was a ring…a very cheap, 50$ ring… left unnoticed.


4 comments to contiue

[tricia1228]

Oh sad

[HannahMontanaX3]

OMG you are gonna make me die. more. I seriously am crying. How lame am I?!?!

[MileyHCyrus]

Hey! this is soooooo cool!

[cutiepie7897]

more

[~destiny~miley~]

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[Jessicarocks24]

eeeeeeeh it was ok but I've read better! (No offense)

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Oh sad

sry!

OMG you are gonna make me die. more. I seriously am crying. How lame am I?!?!

omg, im sooo sry!!!! i did'nt relize it was THAT sad! sry!!! and your not lame :)

Hey! this is soooooo cool!

thanks so much!

more

kk, ill post it now :)

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

yup yup

eeeeeeeh it was ok but I've read better! (No offense)

oh, ok, thanks for being honest...

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4lbn7S-BxY)
Extended Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AIBzTDw5EfY)



Chapter 6: No More Hannah Montana


“Daddy, it’s all my fault!” repeated Miley, shaking uncontrollably. Jackson was sitting on the couch, Lilly resting in his arms, still crying.
“You weren’t even there when this horrible thing happened bud. It couldn’t have been your fault.” said Mr. Stewart, now with Miley in his arms.
“But if I just left Oliver and Lilly come to the concert…then he would still be alive!” she said, crying some more. Her words were slurred and faint.
“Honey, its ok….it would have just delayed him from going to heaven…everyone goes eventually….”
“BUT DADDY! I loved him!!!!” she screamed. He pulled her closer to him for comfort.
“I know you did bud…” After minutes of silence, Mr. Stewart said finally, “But, I think Hannah needs to go…it’s best for everyone….”
“What?”
“I mean for now…Like Hannah could go into hiding from the war or something. I just think its to dangerous to keep going out, you know…”
“But I can’t dad!!! Hannah is my life!!!!”
“But it’s just better if we go into the air-raid cellar and stay there till War World III is over. I mean we have many supplies there, we should be ok…” said Mr. Stewart.
Miley looked down, a tear rolling down her face. First Rico, then Jake, the Oliver, then her secret life, what’s next? “Ok…” her voice small and frightened.
“Good.” Said Mr. Stewart. “Lilly, if you and your mother want to stay with us, your more then welcome…” he said.
“Thank you Mr. Stewart.” She said. “I think that’s best….I’ll go gather her and some stuff from our house, I’ll be back soon…”
“I’ll come with,” said Jackson.
“Ok. Meet us at the air-raid cellar in 20 minutes. Miley and I will get some more food and clothes and stuff.” he gave a week smile, and they all departed, leaving Miley on the couch crying more then ever.

5 comments to contiue

[Loverya56]

that must be really hard on miley
i like the story

more:)

[AllisonTame]

omg more its soooo awesome!!

[flower1]

More

[gmv45]

Please more!

[tricia1228]

More!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

that must be really hard on miley
i like the story

more:)

yea....

omg more its soooo awesome!!

thanks sooo much!

More

kk

Please more!

i will

More!

kk

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4lbn7S-BxY)
Extended Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AIBzTDw5EfY)



Chapter 7: Lilly and Jackson's Journey
“Thanks for coming with me.” said Lilly quietly to Jackson.
“Oh Lilly.” Jackson put his arm around her. “Come here. It’s no problem.” they stopped out in the middle or the road, which was a very stupid thing today in this days. He pulled her into a tight squeeze. “Lilly…you know I love you…right?” he asked.
Lilly pulled away from him, just enough to look into his eyes. “Of course. I love your too….” He pulled her into a long kiss. Then sirens started going off, which usually met when they were getting attacked. Jackson let go of Lilly.
“COME ON!” He took her hand and raced towards Lilly’s house, which was only a two houses down. “No time to get anything, lets get your mom, and get out of here!!!” Lilly raced towards the door. The screen door was open, which was unusual.
“MOM!!!!” called Lilly, the house beginning to shake. “MOM!” she yelled again. There was no sound. “JACKSON???” she asked to make sure he was still there.
“YEA?” he ran inside the house.
“I can’t find my mom!” Lilly said running over towards him.
“Come on!” He took her hand and they headed upstairs.
When they reached the top of the stairs, they smelled…blood.
“Mom?” Her mothers door was cracked.
“Lilly wait here…” said Jackson. Jackson tip-toed over to the door, and opened it. As soon as he opened the door, he wanted to vomit. On the bed, laid Lilly’s mom, dead, blood covered over her…some one murdered her.
“Lilly, lets-” Jackson began, but then a piercing scream filled his ears. “NO!” he raced outside, and a man was holding onto Lilly, a knife to her neck.
“STAY!” he commanded. “OR THIS GIRL WILL SERVE THE SAME FATE AS THAT OTHER GIRL!” he said. Lilly was close to tears.
“What do you want?” asked Jackson. A bomb hit the house across the street.
“To find a girl with the name Miley Stewart….”

7 comments to contiue

[cutiepie7897]

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there you go seven comments now make more

[HannahMontanaX3]

uh-oh... more please

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Okay, thing is I love it i mean your a great writer but even for people that are 14 or over...... this can make them look at Hannah montana differently. I don't really like the idea.

[tricia1228]

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[hannahmontanarulz55]

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there you go seven comments now make more

lol

uh-oh... more please

yup...uh-oh! lol

Okay, thing is I love it i mean your a great writer but even for people that are 14 or over...... this can make them look at Hannah montana differently. I don't really like the idea.

um, thanks, but how would they look at miley differently? i mean its a fan fiction...she doesnt do anything bad or anything....

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[HannahMontanaismyhero]

*um, thanks, but how would they look at miley differently? i mean its a fan fiction...she doesnt do anything bad or anything....*

Yeah well think about it. A kid reads this and watches Rico or Oliver and all they think about is that character's head getting blown off in a Fanfic.

[hannahmontanarulz55]

*um, thanks, but how would they look at miley differently? i mean its a fan fiction...she doesnt do anything bad or anything....*

Yeah well think about it. A kid reads this and watches Rico or Oliver and all they think about is that character's head getting blown off in a Fanfic.

look its a FAN fiction...i can write about WHATEVER i want to... PLEASE don't tell me to write about...plus i DID warn people that ppl under 14 should'nt read this....so PLEASE stop attacking my fanfiction. if u dont like it, dont read it

[Loverya56]

thats intense
wow,wow.

hannah montana is a tween show by the way
if you watched other shows you'd get whats going on
14+ means an older audience

so stop complaining
and also,its a free country
meaning free speech
if the administors didnt like it,it would've been gone by now
so let the person write it :)

[hannahmontanarulz55]

thats intense
wow,wow.

hannah montana is a tween show by the way
if you watched other shows you'd get whats going on
14+ means an older audience

so stop complaining
and also,its a free country
meaning free speech
if the administors didnt like it,it would've been gone by now
so let the person write it :)


thank you. now no more fighting, i dont want it closed cause for fights, lol, but yea ill right more later, im about to go see a movie...also guess what, i got tickets to see hannah montana in concert!!! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

[HannahMontanaX3]

BTW I love my supery awsome powers ZB!!!! wanna know what they are hmm? I'm 12. I have the power of reading fanfics like this. BOO YAH

[hannahmontanarulz55]

BTW I love my supery awsome powers ZB!!!! wanna know what they are hmm? I'm 12. I have the power of reading fanfics like this. BOO YAH

lol, thats an awsome power! lol

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

YOU PEOPLE ARE SO RUDE! CLEARLY AND SO NICELY *COUGH COUGH* THAT LOVERYA56 PUTS IT IT IS A FREE COUNTRY. SO I AM INTITLED TO SAY WHAT I WANT TO! AND AS I SAID..... I LIKED YOUR FAN FICTION! BUT NOW APPARENTLY YOU CAN'T READ FINE PRINT BECAUSE I SPECIFICALLY SAID THAT. I JUST SAID IT WAS PRETTY INTENSE IS ALL! YOU PEOPLE HAVE REALLY GOTTA READ CLOSER!
LOOK....I'M LEAVING.....I'M ALMOST THERE...
AND I'M GONE!

[HannahMontanaX3]

YOU PEOPLE ARE SO RUDE! CLEARLY AND SO NICELY *COUGH COUGH* THAT LOVERYA56 PUTS IT IT IS A FREE COUNTRY. SO I AM INTITLED TO SAY WHAT I WANT TO! AND AS I SAID..... I LIKED YOUR FAN FICTION! BUT NOW APPARENTLY YOU CAN'T READ FINE PRINT BECAUSE I SPECIFICALLY SAID THAT. I JUST SAID IT WAS PRETTY INTENSE IS ALL! YOU PEOPLE HAVE REALLY GOTTA READ CLOSER!
LOOK....I'M LEAVING.....I'M ALMOST THERE...
AND I'M GONE!

hey kids can you say dramatic?

New word boys and girls, can you say attention-seeking?

now sorry if thats rude but I have tons of jokes like that that I use in real life and the people arent offended when I use them so you shouldent be either.

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

thats intense
wow,wow.

hannah montana is a tween show by the way
if you watched other shows you'd get whats going on
14+ means an older audience

so stop complaining
and also,its a free country
meaning free speech
if the administors didnt like it,it would've been gone by now
so let the person write it :)


ME COMPLAIN? I NEVER SAID ANYTHING LIKE
"HEY YOUR FANFIC STINKS BECAUSE YOU WROTE A GORY STORY?"
YEAH...I DON'T THINK SO! AND 14+ MEANS AN OLDER AUDIENCE...... I'VE BEEN READING TEEN BOOKS LIKE MEG CABOT AND STUFF LIKE THAT SINCE I WAS 9!
AND ALSO.....I NEVER SAID THAT SHE SHOULD STOP WRITING IT...... I JUST SAID THAT IT COULD BE DISTURBING!!!!! :28:
>: (

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

hey kids can you say dramatic?

New word boys and girls, can you say attention-seeking?

now sorry if thats rude but I have tons of jokes like that that I use in real life and the people arent offended when I use them so you shouldent be either.

Okay....rude much? LOL. Sorry guys. Not a good day. I'm prone to take it out on other people but seriously guys......can you see one thing wrong with what i wrote? See my next comment for further explaination.

[HannahMontanaX3]

Okay....rude much? LOL. Sorry guys. Not a good day. I'm prone to take it out on other people but seriously guys......can you see one thing wrong with what i wrote? See my next comment for further explaination.

did you even read this part of my message?:

"now sorry if thats rude but I have tons of jokes like that that I use in real life and the people arent offended when I use them so you shouldent be either."

Now you see I said I was being rude myself. Look just for you I will give you virtual chocolates. Yah, mhmm how good do you feel now? dont ask me to say sorry all I did was make a joke. and so I dont get myself in trouble or go against all no drama morals of mine I will kindly back out of this fight

[HannahMontanaismyhero]

Truthfully.... I can think of a bunch of "jokes" that could actually make a normal human being cry. So don't think just because some of the people you played that joke on that wasn't offended, that other people can't be offended too. Many people say I'm dramatic. I'll admit that but attention-seeking? I am sorry but that's pretty low. I usually am the shyest person in all of my periods at school! I'm outgoing but I am not an attention seeker. U too would be mad when a person says that when you know what you said. So I will back out of this argument too. I also will stop reading this Fan fiction because I am starting to think it's a bit more trouble than it's worth. So once again...I'm sorry and No hard feelings? Please?

:) I'M SORRY!!!!!!! KEEP GOING WITH THE FANFIC. IT'S REALLY GOOD. ;)

[HannahMontanaX3]

Truthfully.... I can think of a bunch of "jokes" that could actually make a normal human being cry. So don't think just because some of the people you played that joke on that wasn't offended, that other people can't be offended too. Many people say I'm dramatic. I'll admit that but attention-seeking? I am sorry but that's pretty low. I usually am the shyest person in all of my periods at school! I'm outgoing but I am not an attention seeker. U too would be mad when a person says that when you know what you said. So I will back out of this argument too. I also will stop reading this Fan fiction because I am starting to think it's a bit more trouble than it's worth. So once again...I'm sorry and No hard feelings? Please?

:) I'M SORRY!!!!!!! KEEP GOING WITH THE FANFIC. IT'S REALLY GOOD. ;)

so glad we just made up. sorry peoples for before. Continues ZB. -Pops collar- I can just be a Diamond Dog sometimes. Seriously you have to hear the song by Beck to understand. You also had to be THERE. Only my friend, Stephanie, knows what there I am talking about

[hannahmontanarulz55]

YOU PEOPLE ARE SO RUDE! CLEARLY AND SO NICELY *COUGH COUGH* THAT LOVERYA56 PUTS IT IT IS A FREE COUNTRY. SO I AM INTITLED TO SAY WHAT I WANT TO! AND AS I SAID..... I LIKED YOUR FAN FICTION! BUT NOW APPARENTLY YOU CAN'T READ FINE PRINT BECAUSE I SPECIFICALLY SAID THAT. I JUST SAID IT WAS PRETTY INTENSE IS ALL! YOU PEOPLE HAVE REALLY GOTTA READ CLOSER!
LOOK....I'M LEAVING.....I'M ALMOST THERE...
AND I'M GONE!

hey kids can you say dramatic?

New word boys and girls, can you say attention-seeking?

now sorry if thats rude but I have tons of jokes like that that I use in real life and the people arent offended when I use them so you shouldent be either.

ME COMPLAIN? I NEVER SAID ANYTHING LIKE
"HEY YOUR FANFIC STINKS BECAUSE YOU WROTE A GORY STORY?"
YEAH...I DON'T THINK SO! AND 14+ MEANS AN OLDER AUDIENCE...... I'VE BEEN READING TEEN BOOKS LIKE MEG CABOT AND STUFF LIKE THAT SINCE I WAS 9!
AND ALSO.....I NEVER SAID THAT SHE SHOULD STOP WRITING IT...... I JUST SAID THAT IT COULD BE DISTURBING!!!!! :28:
>: (

Okay....rude much? LOL. Sorry guys. Not a good day. I'm prone to take it out on other people but seriously guys......can you see one thing wrong with what i wrote? See my next comment for further explaination.

did you even read this part of my message?:

"now sorry if thats rude but I have tons of jokes like that that I use in real life and the people arent offended when I use them so you shouldent be either."

Now you see I said I was being rude myself. Look just for you I will give you virtual chocolates. Yah, mhmm how good do you feel now? dont ask me to say sorry all I did was make a joke. and so I dont get myself in trouble or go against all no drama morals of mine I will kindly back out of this fight

Truthfully.... I can think of a bunch of "jokes" that could actually make a normal human being cry. So don't think just because some of the people you played that joke on that wasn't offended, that other people can't be offended too. Many people say I'm dramatic. I'll admit that but attention-seeking? I am sorry but that's pretty low. I usually am the shyest person in all of my periods at school! I'm outgoing but I am not an attention seeker. U too would be mad when a person says that when you know what you said. So I will back out of this argument too. I also will stop reading this Fan fiction because I am starting to think it's a bit more trouble than it's worth. So once again...I'm sorry and No hard feelings? Please?

:) I'M SORRY!!!!!!! KEEP GOING WITH THE FANFIC. IT'S REALLY GOOD. ;)

so glad we just made up. sorry peoples for before. Continues ZB. -Pops collar- I can just be a Diamond Dog sometimes. Seriously you have to hear the song by Beck to understand. You also had to be THERE. Only my friend, Stephanie, knows what there I am talking about


i will post more tonight, but plz stop fighting thanks guys...

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4lbn7S-BxY)
Extended Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AIBzTDw5EfY)



Chapter 8: The Ring

Before the attack, Miley and Mr. Stewart were getting more cloths, blankets, anything basically, and putting them in the air-raid cellar. Naturally there were already tons of food and stuff to last for decades, but they wanted to be extra safe.
“Daddy, do you think Oliver’s in heaven?” she sniffed while carrying a basket of can goods, no noticing Oliver’s ring that was on the ground near the entrance of the cellar.
“Of course Miley. But lets not talk about that now…” Mr. Stewart didn’t want to bring up that subject, since Miley just stopped crying from it.
“Where are Jackson and Lilly???” He said, pausing for a second.
“Dad…” said Miley, looking up into the air. “What’s that in the sky???” she asked, just as, what seemed like, shooting stars falling from the sky.
“BOMBS!” yelled Mr. Stewart, just as the sirens started.
“Where’s Lilly and Jackson!!!” yelled Miley over the noise.
“Get in the cellar!” yelled Mr. Stewart.
“NOT WITHOUT LILLY AND JACKSON!” yelled Miley, that’s when something glittery caught her eye on the ground. She looked down, and saw the ring. “What’s this?” she asked, while picking it up.
“GET IN!!!!!” yelled Mr. Stewart. Miley didn’t move, dazzled by the ring. Mr. Stewart picked up his daughter, and carried her in. He put her down, and locked the cellar, now nothing from the outside could get in.
After a few minutes, Miley came back to her senses, “What about Lilly and Jackson?” she asked, tears in her eyes again.
“Don’t worry, Jackson will protect Lilly. I’ll open the door again when the attacks over…” he said, his voice not completely sure.


7 comments to contiue

[gottagomyownway_betonit_everyday]

good, you gotta continue

[gmv45]

more please

[cutiepie7897]

more

[flower1]

OMFG, moreeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[tricia1228]

More!!!

[cutiepie7897]

more

[shopaholicoxxo]

moreeeee! :D

[hannahmontanarulz55]

good, you gotta continue

i will :)

more please

i will

more

kk

OMFG, moreeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol, glad u like it!

More!!!

kk

more

i will

moreeeee! :D

yup, ill write more soon!

[XxarlimeXx12]

aww this is so sad, but i love it. MORE,MORE,AND MORE

[mileyfanforever101]

i hate you for not writing more.

[cutiepie7897]

more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

aww this is so sad, but i love it. MORE,MORE,AND MORE

aww thanks!

i hate you for not writing more.

sry, ive been sooo busy with school and such!

more

i will, i promise!

[Shoughton101296]

plezz write more!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4lbn7S-BxY)
Extended Trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AIBzTDw5EfY)



Chapter 9: The Man With the Knife


“Miley…Miley Stewart?” repeated Jackson. “Why do you want to see her?” he asked.
“NO QUESTIONS!” he said, pointing the knife into Lilly’s cheek. A trickle of blood ran down her face. “I KNOW THE GIRL WHO LIVES HERE, KNOWS HER!!!!” he bellowed.
“Yes…” said Lilly in a whisper. The man loosed his grip on her. “So you are….” he lifted his sleeve up his arm. “Lilly Tresscott.” he said reading writing on his arm. Lilly nodded her head. “Good.” he said lowing his voice. “Take me to her…” He finally let go of her. Lilly ran over to Jackson.
“Why?” said Jackson in a strong voice.
“Because, if you don’t, then the USA will be terminated….” and with that he moved from the stairs, meaning that Jackson and Lilly were to lead the way.
“Why did you do that to Mrs. Tresscott?” asked Jackson all of sudden.
“What?” Lilly’s voice cracked, turning to Oliver. She ran into her mother’s room, and saw her on the bed. “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!”
“Get that girl out here now!!!” said the man, and Jackson went in and scooted his girlfriend out the door again.
“Come on Lilly.” he whispered.
“WHY???????” shouting Lilly. “MY MOM!!!” then a bomb hit the backyard.
“HURRY!” yelled the man basically pushing the two down the stairs. “She was interfering with my project.” said the man, pushing them out the door. “Now lead…” he pushed the knife against Jackson’s back. Outside, the smell of smoke was filling their lungs.
“HURRY!” yelled the man again. “If you don’t go now, we ALL will die!!!” he yelled!!! And they turned into a fast run, not because they wanted to bring the man to Miley, but to get out of the bombs in the air.
“THERE!” yelled Lilly. And she ran over to the air-raid cellar. She tried the door, but it was locked. “HELP!” yelled Lilly. “HELP!”
“LILLY!” yelled Jackson. “THEY CAN’T HEAR YOU!!!! COME ON!”
“NOOOOO!” yelled the man with the knife. “WE NEED MILEY NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” he started pounding on the air-raid cellar.
“WHY DO YOU WANT MILEY SO BAD!” yelled Jackson.
“BECAUSE!!!!!!” said the man. “ONLY HANNAH MONTANA CAN STOP THIS WAR!!!!” he yelled over the noise.


lol. i have to think how only hannah can stop the war still...lol...

[gmv45]

how does the man know Mileys Hannah Montana? and More

[cutiepie7897]

more

[HannahMontanaX3]

morehs.

[adolphin]

I know who it is ITS JAKE HES THE ONLY OTHER ONE WHO KNOWS HER SECRET

[cutiepie7897]

I know who it is ITS JAKE HES THE ONLY OTHER ONE WHO KNOWS HER SECRET
jake died in the begining of the story

[adolphin]

jake died in the begining of the story
oh yeah nvm:lol:

[cutiepie7897]

come on you should make more

[deathgirl_45]

Omg i want to know who is next to jackson plz continue its good so far cant wait for more :)

[cutiepie7897]

come on moree