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Shenae Grimes Fan
09-22-2007, 12:31 AM
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Well, this is my fanfiction. (:
What it's about:
A girl. She doesn't have the best life.
But she doesn't have the worst, either.
In this fanfiction she'll be writing in a journal and stuff.
And idk. but i think you guys will like it. (:
-Purple
Shenae Grimes Fan
09-22-2007, 12:32 AM
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[Chapter 1] (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1382123&postcount=3)
[Chapter 2] (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1382330&postcount=8)
[Chapter 3] (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1382391&postcount=13)
Shenae Grimes Fan
09-22-2007, 01:21 AM
Chapter 1:
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I put my journal away and turned on the tv.
There was nothing on.
I thought so.
I turned the tv off and went downstairs.
It was 11:30.
My dad was at work, and he's not coming home till' 7:30.
Jane was probably with her boyfriend Jake.
Hes a loser. I hate him. (:
Shane was in his room playing video games.
Kane was making breakfast. I think.
Yupp. Breakfast.
It smelled like egg omelets.
Yay. It was. (:
There was 5 of them.
Why? I really don't know.
I can ask! I have a voice! oh emm gee! I can ask!
I walked next to Kane. "Why are there 5 omelets?" i asked puzzled.
He stopped and thought. "Well," he said and started counting his fingers.
"One for me, One for you, One for Shane, One for Jane, and One for Jake." he said.
"Jakes coming?" I asked already knowing the answer.
"Yea." Kane said.
"Well thats great," I said sarcastically and sitting down. "When are they coming back?"
Kane said, "They should be here in 5...4...3...2...1..."
Jane and Jake walked through the front door.
"How did you know they were coming?" I asked.
"I saw them in the window." Kane said as he handed me a plate.
I laughed. Kane is very stupid. (:
Jane and Jake sat down. Kane gave them plates also, and then gave all of us our omelets.
Jake is cute. But he is really conceded. And stupid. and Preppy. And stupid.
Also, who would date Jane? That proves how stupid he is.
Shane came into the kitchen. He looked hyper. Soda much?
"What happened to you?" I asked as I ruffled his messy hair.
"I-i-i-ive b-b-b-been t-t-t-trying t-t-o BEAT LEVEL 17 ON MY VIDEO GAME." he said hyperish.
He sat down and took a sip of his milk and a bite of his omelet.
I took a bite of my omelet too, it was good.
About 10 minutes later everyone was done.
Shane went to his room, Jake and Jane went to Jane's room.
Both rooms were downstairs.
Kane's room was upstairs. So was mine, and so was my dads.
My lonely, lonely dad.
He hasn't anybody since my mom died.
He's really really sad and alone. I feel really sorry for him.
Kane and I went into Kane's room.
We started having a conversation. One about our parents.
"Have you noticed that dad hasn't dated anyone since mom died?" I asked.
"Yea," He said. "I feel sorry for him."
"I do too." I said. "But, what if something else happened?"
"What do you mean?" He asked.
"Like," I said, "Like, what if mom didn't die? What if she escaped somehow?"
"Theres a possibility." he said.
[2 comments to next chapter. :D]
Backstroker495
09-22-2007, 01:55 AM
Great job!
Keep posting!
:D
Amy Lee Fan
09-22-2007, 01:58 AM
Great! keep up the great work. Can I be one of her other friends? PLEASE??
Shenae Grimes Fan
09-22-2007, 02:54 AM
Great! keep up the great work. Can I be one of her other friends? PLEASE??
Uhh, sure. (:
We'll meet later in the fanfic.
(thanks for the comments! I'll start writing more now!)
Backstroker495
09-22-2007, 03:10 AM
Yay more is coming!
Can't wait!
These things get addicting after a while, lol.
Shenae Grimes Fan
09-22-2007, 03:30 AM
Chapter 2:
"So you think theres a possibility?" I asked.
"Well. There could be one. You know?" He asked.
"Yea. I do know." I said. "If shes still alive. Where do you think shes at?"
"I don't know actually. She could be anywhere, if she were still alive." He said.
"Mmmm." I said.
I started thinking and thinking about it. What if my mom was still alive?
Ughh. I need Elisha. Yea, Elisha. I can call her. We can go somewhere.
And we'll have fun. That will get my mind off of everything.
I called Elisha, she was coming in like 3 minutes.
She lived on my street. So, how long will she take?
Well I was wrong.
She took 30 seconds exactly.
Whoa.
My bestfriend got skills. (:
Off the happy land!
We decided to go to Boomers.
Boomers=Awesometasticalnessishnessishlicious. (:
I like winning big stuffed animals. I have 3, hehe.
And i like riding the GO-Carts.
When I ride them, I feel that I have enough practice to actually drive an actual car.
We invited Tanner. I love Tanner. We met before we met Elisha.
So hes my bffaeaeaeaeaeae. (:
He gives the best hugs. ;]
haha.
I haven't seen him for along time, so when he came, I gave him the biggest and longgest hugg ever.
Yay!
We got to boomers.
I ran inside the Arcade.
I needed to play Dance Dance Revelution.
(:
I love that game.
I'm the goddess of it.
Not really, haha.
But I'm good and its fun, so I play.
I played about 5 levels and i played the other games.
We drove in those car games and we played that game were you shoot the zombies.
And alot more gamess.
I got this really humungi Tweety. (:
He was gonna be in the passenger seat when we went on the GO-Carts.
Oh chyeaa!
We got wristbands and rode on the Go-Carts.
Tanner ish very fast.
So he beat Elisha and I.
Elisha was behind me.
So i was second.
And 1st is worst, 2nd is best, and 3rd is the nerd with the hairy chest!
But, I'm not calling Elisha a nerd with a hairy chest....
I'm just saying I was second and I was happy.
It was 6:00 when we left.
I had forgotten about my mom.
Until little kids stared walking by with their moms.
Ehh. I was Sad..
We got picked up and Elisha ended up spending the night.
Tanner was gonna see us at school tomorrow.
Oh yea!
I forgot to tell you!
We didn't get school today because the teachers had some kind of meeting.
So we go to school on Tuesday.
[Next day]
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[B][2 comments to next chapter :D]
Backstroker495
09-22-2007, 03:35 AM
omg, post more!
Shenae Grimes Fan
09-22-2007, 03:37 AM
omg, post more!
Omg, you actually like it?
:P
I'll post more when I get another comment.
(:
Backstroker495
09-22-2007, 04:10 AM
yes, i loved it!
Amy Lee Fan
09-22-2007, 05:45 AM
Awesome. I can't wait for a million other chapters.
Shenae Grimes Fan
09-22-2007, 06:34 AM
Chapter 3:
Beep. Beep.
It was 5:00 a.m. I had until 7:00.
I got into the shower.
When I got out it was 5:30.
I dried myself off and everything you do after a shower.
I put on my clothes i was wearing this:
The Shirt. (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=125366100&ctg=007_Girls_Tanks&parentctg=007_Girls_Tanks&rank=12&size=-1)
The Sweatshirt. (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=129156100&ctg=030_Girls_Sweatshirts&parentctg=030_Girls_Sweatshirts&rank=0&size=-1)
The Shorts. (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=108115100&ctg=065_Girls_Shorts&nav=brand&bid=13&kw=dickies&size=-1)
The Shoes. (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=124589125&ctg=110_Girls_Footwear_010_Sneakers&parentctg=110_Girls_Footwear&rank=23&size=-1)
The Socks. (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=370076125&ctg=120_Girls_Acc_077_Socks&parentctg=)
hahahaha. (:
I put my make-up on which is:
eye liner.
mascara.
eye shadow.
blush.
lip gloss.
And I grabbed my backpack:
The Backpack. (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=124440100&ctg=120_Girls_Acc_010_Backpacks&parentctg=)
It was now 6:00. I guess I'll eat breakfast, watch tv then leave.
I went down stairs, and what I saw on the counter was a Jack In The Box bag.
We were having Jack In The Box!
I love that food.
It's really really good. Their chicken sandwiches are the bomb.
And I liked the Breakfast Jacks. And thats probably what I got.
Yupp. I got that. And with a hashbrown. And Milk.
Awesome. (:
We all ate and stuff. When we were done it was 6:15.
I went into the family room and watched tv.
Nothing was on. ughh.
I guess i can go on the computer.
I went upstairs again, into my room and onto the computer.
Tanner was on.
becks.blahh. : hey tanner.
xxTannerxx : hey becca. whats up?
becks.blahh. : not much, just waiting for time to fly, you?
xxTannerxx : same. and I'm talking to other people.
becks.blahh. : like who?
xxTannerxx : uhhh. no one. gtg. bye, see you at school.
xxTannerxx has left
conversation
becks.blahh. : uhh bye.
xxTannerxx
could not
receive your
message
I got off the computer, who was he talking to that was so special?
Ughh, I really don't know. It was 6:30.
Wow, that all took 15 minutes? I can't believe it.
Well I guess i should do something to make time fly.
School started at 7:15 and I needed to get there by 7:00
there was nothing to do.
I can call Elisha.
[ME Elisha]
Hey Elisha.
Hey! Whats up?
Well, I just got off the computer, I talked to Tanner.
What did he say?
Well we talked for about 10 minutes I guess, it took him long to reply.
Well, what did he say?
He said that he was talking to other people and that he needed to go.
Then?
Then he just close the conversation before I could say bye.
Whoa. I wonder who he was talking to.
I know.
Omgg.
What?
Maybe.
Maybe what?
Maybe hes secretly dating someone and he doesnt wanna tell us.
What? He wouldn't do that....Would he?
Possibly.
Oh great.
Yea. Very very great.
Well now its 6:45. So i gtg bye.
Bye-Bye. See you at school.
See ya.
Then I went downstairs again and my dad was already ready.
So was Shane, Kane, and Jane.
So we went outside, into the car and off to the prison called school.
[2 comments to next chapter :D]
atisdale01
10-01-2007, 04:38 PM
great idea of the journal thing great work!Love all ur fanfics and 1 more word left!
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