View Full Version : My new Fanfic about hannah montana
adolphin
09-20-2007, 09:21 PM
Its called Boyfriend Break-up
adolphin
09-20-2007, 09:36 PM
Miley walks downstairs at midnight and sees Jackson
Miley:"Jackson, Wat r u doing?"
Jackson:"What does it look like.I'm sneaking out."
Miley:"DADD-"
Jackson:"SSSSSHHHHH if u tell dad that im sneaking out ill tell him u went to the mall Saturday when u were grounded."
Miley:"You Wouldnt"
Jackson:"Wanna Bet"
Miley:"UUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH fine go its not like I care"
Jackson:"Fine"
Miley:"Fine"
The Next Morning
One in a Million plays on Mileys Cell and she comes downstairs and sees it a text
Hey Miles can u meet me
at the beach by th shore I want
to talk to u-Jake
Sure Wat time
After school will be fine
I just want to talk to u alone
Ok See u then :07:
wat do u think Jake want to talk about
3 comments for more sorry its short
eizy12306
09-20-2007, 10:06 PM
Good Fanfic =)
But This Is Supposed To Be In
The Fan Fictions Section ;)
adolphin
09-20-2007, 10:16 PM
could someone move it plz
LukkiStar
09-20-2007, 11:00 PM
If you PM a mod they'll move it for you ;)
Nice fanfic but like someone already said it should go in the right section.
adolphin
09-21-2007, 07:04 PM
ok they moved it anyone want more anyway 1 more comment
oh wait this was a comment
adolphin
09-21-2007, 07:58 PM
Miley goes to school and sees Lilly
Lilly:Hey Miles
Miley:Hey Lil
Lilly:So hows the boyfriend
Miley:who Jake hes great he wants to talk to me he just got back from Romania you know
Lilly:I know and the girls are sooooooooo jealous especially Amber and Ashley (the dork brains)
Miley:Haha
Oliver:Hey
Miley and Lilly:Hey Oli
Oliver:watz up
Miley:hold on ive got a text
Miley when u get home dad needs to tell u somthin
he just texted me
Ok Jackson can u text dad and tell him
ill be home an hour or less later
Fine
Fine
The Bell rings and Miley goes to the beach
Jake:Hey Miles listen Weve been together for about a week and i think its time we see other people.
Miley:WWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jake:Im sorry Miley But I want to ask out another girl
Miley:Fine*Slaps him and runs off crying* I HATE YOU JAKE
One in a Million plays
Miley:Hello
Robby Ray:Hey Bud
Miley:Im comin home daddy
Dont worry
Robby Ray:ok just checkin
Wat do u think Robby Ray Wants to talk about
3 more comments sorry its short
Secretpopstar1
09-21-2007, 08:10 PM
more!
adolphin
09-21-2007, 09:16 PM
more!
i will after mmmm ill make it one more comment o wait this is a comment lol:lol:
adolphin
09-21-2007, 09:50 PM
Miley:DADDY IM HOME
Robby Ray:Great Bud Get Lucky Lulu
Miley:NO WAY you wrote me a new song
Robby Ray:Yep and here it is "IVe followed a dream that noone else botherd to catch-"
Hannah on stage:"And thats what me got me here today.So go on and chase what you believe in.Noone can stop you from dreamin'-"
Hannah and Lola backstage:Oh my gosh Hannah you were soooooooooo awesome and so was that song your dad wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Miley:I know
Roxi:Miss Montana youve got a text
Hey Miles its oli
I want to ask you somthing
Wat is it Oli Oh
I got to go on
stage tell me
at the beach when
I get home
Ok
Bye
What do you think Oliver wants to talk about
2 more comments sorry its short i am going to have a brainstorm sooner or later
adolphin
09-21-2007, 10:34 PM
im goin to change the title now its Boyfriend Break-up Make-Up
adolphin
09-22-2007, 10:13 PM
nobody wants more:'( jk
adolphin
09-22-2007, 10:33 PM
i got bored so im writing again
Back at home on the beach Miley meets up with Oliver
Miley:Hey Oliver
Oliver:Hey Miley
Miley:What did you want to talk about
Oliver:Well weve been friends FOREVER and I know you just broke up with Jake but ummmmmmmm Do you want to go out with me?!
Miley:I dont know it could ruin our friendship
Oliver:I Guess your right
Miley:Buuuuuutttttttt I Suppose we could give it a try
Oliver:YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Miley:How about tomorrow. We can go to that new movie that just came out.
Oliver:Sydney White?
Miley:yeah that one
Oliver:Sounds great Ill pick u up at 8:00
Miley:Great
Miley leans in too kiss him and Jake Walks by on his way home
Miley:Jake?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Jake:Hey Smiley Miley
Miley:Dont call me that Leslie!
Jake:You promised you would never tell anyone that
Miley:Well too bad
Jake:OOOOOOHHHHHHHH WELL IF YOU WANT IT YOUR WAY FINE THEN ILL TELL YOUR LITTLE HANNAH SECRET
Miley:JAKE NO
Jake:WELL TOO BAD
Miley runs off crying
Jake:Thats what she gets
Oliver:Are You Really Going To Tell Her Secret
Jake:............................................. .........
I will fill in the blanks after 2 more comments
HannahMontanaismyhero
09-22-2007, 10:35 PM
More!!!
HannahMontanaismyhero
09-22-2007, 10:35 PM
RRRRREEAAALLLLYYY ggooooodd!!
HannahMontanaismyhero
09-22-2007, 10:36 PM
Does that count as 2 comments?
adolphin
09-22-2007, 10:45 PM
yes that counts as three
HannahMontanaismyhero
09-22-2007, 10:53 PM
Yay! More pleez. Oh and thanx for supporting my Fanfic.
adolphin
09-22-2007, 10:57 PM
Oliver:Are you really going to tell her secret
Jake:YEAH
Oliver:WELL IN THAT CASE
Oliver gets up and punches him in the face
Oliver:THATS WHAT YOU GET
He runs to catch up with Miley
Oliver:Hey Miles We'll Find A Way to catch him like what your song says Cuz' its You and Me Together
Miley:Thanks Oli
Miley kisses him and says goodnight and kisses him again
Back at home
Miley:I Think Ive Finally Found The One
Jackson:The One..............................................
Miley:Jackson you are so CLUELESS I mean The one boy for me!
Jackson:Its not someone dumb like Oliver is it
Miley:Nooooooooooooooo, Ok Fine Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jackson:Sis are you ok I think youve got The Crazy Fever
Miley:Shut up Jackson
2 more comments for me to continue
sorry its short
HannahMontanaismyhero
09-22-2007, 10:58 PM
More pleez.
adolphin
09-22-2007, 11:16 PM
thx
Jackson:MAKE ME
Miley:MAYBE I WILL
Miley steps on his foot so hard he fell over and she went to her room happily
Miley calls Lilly
Miley:OMG Lilly I got a boyfriend
Lilly:OMG who
Miley:Oliver!!!!!!!!!
Lilly:*lllllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooonnnnn nnnnnnnnnngggggggggg pause*
Miley:Lilly u still there
Lilly:UUUUUUHHHHHHHHH yeah im here now tell me why are you going out with Oliver
Miley:Because He Asked me and Because heeeessssss ssssssssooooooo cute
Lilly:In your dreams
Miley:Lilly Little support here
Robby Ray:Miley Rae Stewert Get off the phone its a school night
Miley:Fine gotta go Lil
Lilly:kk Bye
1 more comment sorry its ssssssssssooooooooooooo short I told u ill have a brainstorm sooner or later
HannahMontanaismyhero
09-22-2007, 11:32 PM
Keep going!!! I hear a cat fight! Meworr!
adolphin
09-22-2007, 11:45 PM
next day
Lilly:UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH
Oliver:Lilly Wats rong
Lilly:MMMMMMMMIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYY YYY NOW BACK OFF
Oliver:Ok backing off
Miley:hey Lil
Lilly:MILEY HOW COULD YOU
Miley:Lil What are you talking about
Lilly:YOU TOOK HIM
Miley:I Took him Who And What
LillyDONT TALK SMART WITH ME I WAS GOING TO ASK OLIVER OUT
Miley:Really When
Lilly:SINCE YOU ASKED HIM OUT
Miley:SORRY HOW WAS I SUPPOSED TO KNOW AND I DIDNT ASK HIM HE ASKED ME
Lilly:WELL IT DOESNT MATTER WERE NOT FRIENDS
Miley:FINE WITH ME
Miley Walks off muttering to herself angerly
HannahMontanaismyhero
09-23-2007, 06:30 PM
OOooooo more
adolphin
09-24-2007, 06:40 PM
ok but i have a question
should i put my teachers name
xoxdestinynightxox
09-25-2007, 01:01 PM
Nah but its gd could u both go to mine by destiny night my first with Jbs andf me and miley plz bacx to urs its great keep goin
adolphin
09-30-2007, 12:14 AM
Oliver:Hey Baby
Miley:Hey Sweetie
They do a kiss before Miss Kalla come in the room
Miss Kalla:Good Morning Class I hope you all did your homework assignments
Miley raises her hand
Miss Kalla:Yes Miley make me Smiley
Miley:Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Miss Kalla I had a really important thing last night and by the time I got home I had to go to bed so i didnt have time to do my homework
Miss Kalla::| Miley What was so important that you didnt do your homework
Miley thinks I cant tell her my secret and in front of the whole class at that they probably wont believe me anyways
Miley:Well........................................ .........................................
HannahMontanaismyhero
09-30-2007, 12:18 AM
Uhhhh MORE!!!!
adolphin
09-30-2007, 01:36 PM
Uhhhh MORE!!!!
ok!:lol:
adolphin
09-30-2007, 01:42 PM
Miley:Well I had to go to a concert last night
Miss Kalla:And thats important how?
Miley:I couldnt let my fans down I mean because I'm Hannah Montana
Class roars into laughter
Ashley:Right A Hillbilly like you a Famous Pop Star
Amber and Ashley:ooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Tsssssssssssssssssssss
Miley:No really Ill prove it tonight on tv Hannahs having a concert LIVE and Ill pull of the wig and show you
Miss Kalla:Righttttttttttt Miley Why dont you take sillyness TO THE PRINCIPLES OFFICE
sorry this is the shorttest one YET!
cgbunny
09-30-2007, 01:53 PM
keep it up
adolphin
09-30-2007, 04:45 PM
Miley:But....
Miss Kalla:NO BUTS TO THE PRINCIPLES OFFICE
Miley walks out of the room and then shes runs back in singing
I Miss you
I Miss You I Miss Your Smile
And I Still Shed A tear
Every once in a while
And Even Though its There From Now
Youll Still Hear Somehow
My Heart Will let you go and I need you to know
I Miss You
Sha-la-la-la-la
I Miss You
Class roars and screams into a applause
Miley:Is that Proof enough for ya!
Miss Kalla:............................................ ..........
To Find out what Miss Kalla says 2 More comments
HannahMontanaismyhero
09-30-2007, 08:43 PM
Go
HannahMontanaismyhero
09-30-2007, 08:49 PM
go
atisdale01
10-01-2007, 04:28 AM
plz more!she told her secret!wow!
adolphin
10-01-2007, 06:42 PM
3 more!
gottagomyownway_betonit_everyday
10-01-2007, 10:23 PM
c'mon, don't leave me hanging, write more!!!!!!!!!
adolphin
10-02-2007, 04:35 PM
2 more
gottagomyownway_betonit_everyday
10-02-2007, 07:25 PM
1) more
2) more
haha, c'mon now, WRITE!!!!!!
adolphin
10-04-2007, 04:38 PM
1) more
2) more
haha, c'mon now, WRITE!!!!!!
nice try im not taking any more of that that only counts as one
1 more
adolphin
10-04-2007, 07:36 PM
Miss Kalla:WOW
Class reapeats"WOW"
Oliver comes up and whispers "Miley, how could you tell them your secret"
Miley whispers back "I dont know I guess it just slipped"
Amber:Thats still not enough proof for me
Ashley:Yeah that doesnt prove anything
Amber and Ashley:oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Tssssssssssssssssssssssss
Miley:Ill show you.............Ill show you all
Really sorry its short I can think today
6 comments for more
sweet_smile
10-14-2007, 03:54 PM
more!!!
sweet_smile
10-14-2007, 03:56 PM
more!!!
Thats 2!!!!
adolphin
10-17-2007, 07:14 PM
4 more
adolphin
10-22-2007, 09:48 PM
i cant think thats why im saying 8 more comments
SmileyMiley11
10-28-2007, 08:26 PM
write more
adolphin
11-02-2007, 04:03 PM
Amber:Yeah.......RRRRIiiiiiigggggghhhhhttttttt
Ashley:ooooooooooooo
Amber:No!
Ashley:Fine......Whatever!
Miley runs out of the room and oli and Lilly follow her!
Lilly:Miley! Dont let thwm Bother you they are stupid!
Oli:Yeah Miles they are and if you think about what they say
its gonna ruin everything if you wnna tell evryone go ahead!
Miley:AAAAAAWWWWW THANKS OLI!
She hugs him and that turns into a kiss that lasts what seems
like 3 hours but really it was about 3 minutes
Oli:Wow
They kiss again for about 1 and a half min
The bell rings
Miley:I gotta go home and get ready for my Regis and Kelly interveiw
and know when im gonna pull off the wig
Oli:Ok luv u
Miley:Luv u too bye
They kiss again
Lilly:Bye Miles
Miley:Bye Lil!
MileyWorld__Girl_05
11-02-2007, 05:40 PM
mORE MORE MORE KORE MOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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adolphin
11-02-2007, 08:09 PM
lolz 4 more
from a diff person
adolphin
11-25-2007, 03:48 PM
Miley:Daddy Its Time
RR:Time for what,bud
Miley:TIME TO SHOW THE WORLD IM HANNAH MONTANA
RR:u sure about that bud remember what happened last time
Miley:Yes Dady Im Sure
RR:BUt u still-
Miley:Yes daddy I remember
Miley runs upstairs to get ready
Miley:what to wear how to wear
after two hours she decides to wear this:
Shirt and jacket(long one):http://cgi.ebay.com/HANNAH-MONTANA-GOLD-SEQUIN-TUNIC-SHIRT-SHRUG-DRESS-SZ-8_W0QQitemZ170172392565QQihZ007QQcategoryZ152636QQ cmdZViewItem#ebayphotohosting
pants:http://cgi.ebay.com/Cache-GOLD-Lined-BUTTER-LEATHER-Pant-268-NWT-10-12-M-L_W0QQitemZ160182164738QQihZ006QQcategoryZ63863QQs sPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem#ebayphotohostin g
shoes:http://cgi.ebay.com/WHITE-Knee-High-Stretchy-Stellito-Heel-Boots-Shoes-10_W0QQitemZ280175966048QQihZ018QQcategoryZ63889QQ ssPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem#ebayphotohosti ng
Necalace:http://cgi.ebay.com/Gold-Wedding-Pearl-Crystal-Necklace-Set-Tiara-1106_W0QQitemZ250191058479QQihZ015QQcategoryZ3260Q QssPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem#ebayphotohost ing
braclet:http://cgi.ebay.com/FABULOUS-PEARL-STRAND-WITH-GOLD-ACCENT-17-BRACLET_W0QQitemZ170173036602QQihZ007QQcategoryZ92 831QQssPageNameZWDVWQQrdZ1QQcmdZViewItem#ebayphoto hosting
Ive got Bad TASTE
Miley:Now how shall I Pull Off my wig!
xoxdestinynightxox
11-28-2007, 01:06 PM
OMJ OMJ Like that rocks This is sooo good More plz like NOWE!¬!!!
sassy1331
11-28-2007, 04:43 PM
More More More!!!!
I love it! :))
:57: sassy1331
adolphin
01-27-2008, 08:44 AM
do u guys want me to
adolphin
02-29-2008, 04:43 PM
Miley is red
Oliver is Blue
Lilly is Lime
Miley:*GASP* Ive got it! Ill have Lola sneak up on stage and pull my wig off.
Just then her phone rang.
Miley picked it up and saw it was a text this is how the conversation went
Hello? Miley u there?
Yeah, Im here!
Did you find a way to pull off ur wig?
Yes! And its totaly perfect!!!!
Great! As long as it does involve me!
Um.......Well
Awww Man!
Destiny9910
02-29-2008, 05:04 PM
more
adolphin
03-23-2008, 09:35 AM
Miley:I can't wait to tell Lilly my plan, that will teach Amber and Ashley!
*Ring Ring Ring*
Miley:Hello
Oliver:Hey!
Miley:Hey, sweetie!
Oliver:So have you figured out how to pull off your wig yet?
Miley:Yes!
Oliver:Let me guess, it involves Lilly/Lola?
Miley:Yep!
Oliver:I figured
Miley:Oh, I got to go pick up Lola for the show, and do you want to come Mike Standly the III(The 3rd)
Oliver:Sure, OK, I'll come! Love you!
Miley:Love you too we'll be on our way, after we pick up Lola!
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