View Full Version : It Feels like A Dream (My JB FanFiction)
Zanessa Fan1
09-17-2007, 07:25 PM
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Introduction to the cast and story..
Hannah was the biggest jonas brothers fan you could emagine. Seriously, she
was totally obsessed. She was in love with Joe Jonas, and convinced they were
made for eachother. but in a sweet way, not a stalker way. :P
One day all her dreams came true. she woke up in the morning, as if it was any
day. But it wasnt just any day. She stood up and paused, thinking. This is when
she rememberd, today was the jonas brothers concert in her town. she
screamed,waking the rest of her family up, but they didnt really mind...
She ran to her best friends house who lived down the street, her friends name
was Alli. Alli was also going to the concert. they were to young, according to
their parents, to go to the concert alone so Hannah's dad was going too. How
EMBARESSING! Alli opend the door and they both started screaming in unicen
saying things like 'its today' and 'yay' and 'finally!'
They both went to hannah's house to pick out what they were going to wear.
The Jonas Brothers concert had been the biggest date on their egenda for months worth of time, and it had finally arrived. not only were they going to have great seats, but Hannah's dad had managed to get them meet and greet tickets to meet the jonas brothers, so they needed to look great.
(if u didnt catch it hannah is supposed to be me, and my BFF's name really is Alli)
niiro_tatsu
09-17-2007, 07:35 PM
sound awesome (putting it up on the club)
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-17-2007, 07:42 PM
Cool. Are You Ending Your Other FanFic?
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
Zanessa Fan1
09-17-2007, 07:43 PM
sound awesome (putting it up on the club)
thanks, and if u guys didnt catch on, hannah is like supposed to be me :P
Cool. Are You Ending Your Other FanFic?
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
i got writers block for that story , so ya probubly, i might go back to it eventually though
POSTING MORE!!!
niiro_tatsu
09-17-2007, 07:52 PM
yeah i kinda figured hannah was u!
cool cant wati!
Zanessa Fan1
09-17-2007, 07:53 PM
Chapter #1 - Preperation
Hannah walked into her closet, she had a huge closet. With tons of cute clothes
from her favrite store Urban Outfitters, and some hammy-downs from her older
sister. Her and alli started picking out things and shaking there heads. then
looking in the closet some more.
Hannah sighed. "i need to look PERFECT tonight... if i dont ill look like an idiot in
front of joe."
Alli looked at her. "Hannah, you care way to much about what people think
about you"
Hannah sat down. "No i dont, i could care less if im popular at school, or if the
populars Natalie, Nichole, and Lane even like me.. its just , you know how much
i love joe .. and i may never talk to him again.. i need to look my best"
Alli laughed. "your so obsessed"
Hannah laughed too. "yeah i know."
They started looking through the clothes again. Hannah found the perfect outfit,
it was skinny dark jeans, a brown shirt that said 'live your life' on it. she looked in
the mirror and sighed. "id'll do" she said.
Alli looked at her. "you look great, now help me"
Hannah: "ok" she helped look through the clothes and alli's clothes and found
her a cute outfit, too.
Hannah and Alli got out of the clothes. now that they had decided what to
wear, the realized it was only noon so they didnt need to have the clothes on
yet. Alli went home. Hannah got in the shower. she washed her hair and her
body. She got out and got in some comfy PJ's while her hair was wet. she blow
dried it dry and flat ironed it. it took her 1 hour, but it was worth it. she now had
straight, strawberry blond/light brownish hair, hanging on the sides of her face.
she smiled, please with herself.
She Did her make-up and alli came back over for dinner. they ate dinner together and went and did their make-up once more, making sure it was absolutly perfect . they got back in the outfits and looked in the mirror...show time.
Zanessa Fan1
09-17-2007, 08:27 PM
any comments?
if it isnt good tell me so i can get it closed :P
eizy12306
09-17-2007, 08:29 PM
Its great! :D
krrristin
09-17-2007, 08:34 PM
awesome!
you should add a Kristin, and she can be Nicks love intrest ;)
Zanessa Fan1
09-17-2007, 08:40 PM
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^made by me
Chapter 2 - The Ups and the Downs
hannah and alli walked downstairs and got their purses with their cell phones
and picked up their 'I love the jonas brothers' signs. She sat down and tapped
her foot. she looked at her mom. "Where is he?"
Her mom sighed. "your father is just running alittle late, calm down."
Just then her dad walked in. "Ready to go?"
"Ive been ready" hannah said, annoied with attitude.
Alli just bit her lip, she was kinda mad too but they were still going to make it
there early, no big deal.
They got in the car, said goodbye to their moms and their dad started driving.
They pulled into the parking-lot of the Palace (the name of the arena they were
going to) and managed to park reletivly close to it. they went in with their
tickets and walked to the store. They bought themselves (except for hannah's
dad) Jonas Brothers T-Shirts and went to their seats.
they all 3 sat down and waited for a few minutes until the opening act came
on, Jorden Pruitt did reletivly well and they clapped. Then she noticed someone
walking past her. she felt someone bump into her shoulder. her and alli had
went to the bathroom so they were near the stage, not in their seats. she turned
to see who it was to tell them off when she saw joe walking by her.
"oh, sorry" he said, looking at her, he smiled at her and he and nick and kevin
went onto the stage. Alli and Hannah ran back to their seats just in time to see
their dad talking to someone trying to be cool
"How embaressing..." hannah sighed, as they sat back down in their seats.
The Jonas Brothers began to play 'Thats just the way we roll'.
And so it began...
Zanessa Fan1
09-17-2007, 08:41 PM
awesome!
you should add a Kristin, and she can be Nicks love intrest ;)
hehe good idea, mabye i will :P
niiro_tatsu
09-17-2007, 09:20 PM
and ummm since u obviosuly got joe... and if ur friend doesnt take kevin? can i have him? :P
smileyface93
09-17-2007, 09:39 PM
thats great! more! =]
secretive_angel
09-17-2007, 10:52 PM
More pleaz
Zanessa Fan1
09-18-2007, 08:02 AM
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Chapter 3 - Hello Beautiful
They listend to the music. It was amazing, the jonas brothers were fantastic live.
They heard all of the songs off the new album, and one they had never heard before.
They concert ended and they ran to where the meet and greet was going to be.
They're dad got in the line with them. Hannah looked at her dad.
"Ok dad, please dont embaress us" her dad just shrugged.
Hannah gave up on the whole 'not embaressing' task and turned back to Alli.
"This is so exciting" said hannah.
Just then someone that was behind them bumped into them.
"Oh.. im sorry, the people behind me are pushing" the girl said,
"Oh" hannah smiled. "thats alright"'
The other girl smiled and paused. "im Kristin.." she said, cautiously and slowly.
Hannah smiled. "Hannah, and this is my best friend Alli". Alli smiled at them.
Kristin nodded. "So which jonas brother is your favorite? mines nick"
"Oh yeah thats her favorite" she said pointing to Alli. "mines Joe"
Just then they noticed they were next and turned back around. hannah fixed her hair and alli and her exchanged excited faces before hearing the guy yell 'Next!'
This was it, she was finally going to be able to meet them, she couldnt beleive it.
"Hi" she heard Joe say, she felt like she was going to faint.
"Hi, um im hannah and this is my friend alli'' she said, nervously.
Alli was talking to nick, though, a few feet away at the table where the jonas brothers were sitting.
Hannah's dad was right behind her which made it even more akward, but he
eventually backed away , and took their picture, he then said he would wait in
the car, this made her feel better.
Joe looked at hannah, thinking about how nice she was, and beautiful. She was about to leave when he said. "Wait!... do you want to , go out .. somtime?" he asked.
her heart started beating fast, this was weird, she had NOT excpected that. "Yeah" she smiled
"umm.. here" she wrote her number on a peice of paper and handed it to him.
"Ok..bye" he smiled and watched her leave. Alli followed.
Hannah turned around to look back in time to see kristin talking to nick. she laughed.
Zanessa Fan1
09-18-2007, 08:05 AM
and ummm since u obviosuly got joe... and if ur friend doesnt take kevin? can i have him? :P
hehe, no my friend likes nick actually, but yeah mabye you can.. ill think about it
xoxdestinynightxox
09-18-2007, 01:34 PM
More plz more i need more i want more
Zanessa Fan1
09-18-2007, 05:14 PM
1 more comment and ill post the next chapter ;)
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-18-2007, 08:01 PM
more!
PursePrincess4eva
09-18-2007, 08:02 PM
UGH. I wanna be in the fanfic..Can i?
Can be related to them or like be Nick's girlfriend or osmething? You know How i love Nick! :'(
More please..!
Zanessa Fan1
09-18-2007, 10:40 PM
UGH. I wanna be in the fanfic..Can i?
Can be related to them or like be Nick's girlfriend or osmething? You know How i love Nick! :'(
More please..!
I would have made you nick's girlfriend, but kristin asked first, and im both ur guys friends, so ya ill make u related to them! ;) u will be in one of the next chapters ;)
POSTING MORE!!!
Zanessa Fan1
09-18-2007, 10:56 PM
Chapter 4: Text Messaging OMG
she got home and alli was sleeping over , it was late and they went into the
basement and turned on the TV.
just then she heard her phone ring, she was getting a text. she opend her cherry-
chocolate phone and screamed. "ohmygosh.. its joe!"
Alli looked at her. "Stop joking with me"
"No im SERIOUS!" she yelled.
The Text Said:
Hey Hannah, its joe
uh this is so u have my #, give me a call. bye
she showed it to alli who also screamed. her mom came down and she hid the
text, she didnt want her mom as a part of her personal life.
"Nothing!" they said in unicsion. when she left Hannah dialed the number.
It rang, and rang and rang.. "Dang i dont think he's going to pick up" she said,
disapointed. just then she heard his voice on the other end. "Hello?" he asked.
her eyes widened, but you couldnt tell she was suprised by her voice.
"Uhh hey , this is hannah, you told me to call" she laughed alittle and looked at
alli, who was almost as excited as hannah was!
"Oh yeah. hey hannah" he said, smiling to himself. "Uhm what are you doing t
tomarow..? we have a concert in your state just a differnt place , but thats not
until night time.. so i have all day free, basiclly.
"Uhm im not doing anything.." she said, standing up and pacing , now.
"ok well do you want to go to lunch? Nick and someone he met are going, and kevin and some girl he met..." he said, smileing still.
"uh yeah sounds good.. um what time?" she asked.
"Umm 1-ish? we'll pick you up.. where do you live?"
she gave him directions and they said goodbye. she hung up and so did he.
Her and alli started happy-dancing. "oh.." she jumped. "my.." she jumped again.
"GOSH!" she yelled.
She talked to her mom who said she could go and her and alli went to bed.
Zanessa Fan1
09-19-2007, 07:56 AM
any comments...?
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-19-2007, 04:20 PM
COOLSIES! LOVING THE STORY!
Post More Now!
Zanessa Fan1
09-19-2007, 10:45 PM
COOLSIES! LOVING THE STORY!
Post More Now!
1 more comment and ill post some more ;)
secretive_angel
09-19-2007, 11:03 PM
More Pleaz
Zanessa Fan1
09-20-2007, 08:06 AM
Chapter 5: The Pick up
The next day her and alli woke up and alli helped hannah pick out an outfit.
Then alli went home. Hannah got into the outfit and did her hair and make-up.
She looked in the mirror and smiled at herself, excited.
She Went and ate breakfast, it was like 11 am. She still had 2 hours before they
would be picking her up at her house. Her mom talked to her about
"responsibility" and hannah pretended to listen. she had been given this talk
before and could basiclly resite it if she wanted too.
Before she knew it it was 5 to 1. She double-checked her outfit, make-up, and hair and went into her family room. she turned on the tv trying to make it look casual. The door-bell rang. Her mom answerd it.
"oh no.." she mumbled to herself.
Her mom started talking to joe.
Hannah quickly picked up her purse and went to the door. "Mom, mom MOM!"
she said trying to shut her up. "ill talk to you later" Joe chuckled and they walked
out, closing the door behind them. "im sorry about that" hannah said, knowing
how her mom can be with people dating her.
"Its no big deal" he said. They turned around the corner and hannahs eyes
widened. She still tryed to look casual but there was a limo sitting there. I mean
i guess its normal for them, being famous and all, but for hannah, it was cool.
Alli was watching from her bedroom window, also excited, for her friend.
Joe opened the door for her and hannah went into it. He followed and closed the door. Inside sat Nick, Kristin,Kevin, and Jenny.
(:P)
And She had met kristin before. "Hey, didnt we meet... at the concert..?"
Kristin: "yeah i think so, i was just going to ask you the same thing.. hannah right?"
"Yeah.." she nodded."is it, kristin?" Kristin smiled at her and nodded.
The Limo began to drive to the resterant.
secretive_angel
09-20-2007, 11:35 PM
more pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Ashley Marie 1992
09-21-2007, 08:59 AM
more plz! Can I be in the story as your friend who loves kevin??
PursePrincess4eva
09-21-2007, 06:44 PM
Can I be like an over protective cousin, that doesnnt want anyone of them to date, so she tried to desrail it?
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-21-2007, 07:21 PM
Cool Chapter. Post More!
Zanessa Fan1
09-21-2007, 08:37 PM
more plz! Can I be in the story as your friend who loves kevin??
well jenny already asked to date kevin ;)
Can I be like an over protective cousin, that doesnnt want anyone of them to date, so she tried to desrail it?
idk.. ill consider the idea ;)
and btw peeps, if ur a fan of miley, the next chap. i post she trys to steal nick and it DOSNT go well for her, so just warning, 1 more comment and ill post more ;)
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-21-2007, 10:45 PM
1 More Comment? I Need More!
xoxdestinynightxox
09-22-2007, 07:31 AM
More plz i need more i want more NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ashley Marie 1992
09-22-2007, 11:09 AM
well jenny already asked to date kevin ;)
idk.. ill consider the idea ;)
and btw peeps, if ur a fan of miley, the next chap. i post she trys to steal nick and it DOSNT go well for her, so just warning, 1 more comment and ill post more ;)
But Can I just be the one who loves Kevin but moves on to a guy named Sam.
PursePrincess4eva
09-22-2007, 04:25 PM
Okay, post mre!
Zanessa Fan1
09-24-2007, 07:52 AM
But Can I just be the one who loves Kevin but moves on to a guy named Sam.
idk.. mabye
Okay, post mre!
and in a few chapters you can come on ;)
sorry i havnt posted, i had tons of homework this weekend, so ill post more now!
POSTING MORE!!
Zanessa Fan1
09-24-2007, 08:01 AM
Chapter 6: Lunch Date
Hannah looked at the other girl, she didnt know her. She really didnt even know
Kristin, but she had met her before. She looked at Kevin then back at the girl she
did not know. Kevin caught on. "Oh," he laughed "my bad.. this is Jenny"
Jenny smiled at hannah. "hi"
hannah smiled back at jenny. "hey"
Joe smiled at hannah and the limo drove to the resterant. they got there and
got out of the limo. Joe opened the door for hannah and helped her out.
"thank you" she said, nervously.
he just smiled and nodded at her.
Jenny, Kristin, Kevin, and nick, all got out of the car, too. They all went into the
reserant and were seated ammediatly. It was alittle weird at first, unsure of
what to say, and causous of everything they did say, but after a few minutes the
ice had been broken and it was just like a normal date. it was really fun, as
hannah would put it, and so would joe actually.
After lunch, joe, kevin, and nick, payed. They got back into the limo which
started driving, she wasnt sure where too.
She then rememberd that the jonas brothers were leaving late that night to
their next town they had a show in..It was going to be hard for her, and
probubly for kristin and Jenny , too.
Just then the limo pulled over and parked in the parking lot of the local park by
her house. she was confused but Joe took her out of the limo and away from
the others. Kevin and Jenny went a differnt way, and so did kristin and nick. she
was really confused.
Zanessa Fan1
09-24-2007, 10:13 PM
no comments?
Ashley Marie 1992
09-25-2007, 12:09 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is really good!!!!!!!
Zanessa Fan1
09-25-2007, 10:39 PM
Chapter 7: too far for too long..
hannah walked and sat on the bench in the park next to joe. he started talking
to her, way fast, you could tell he was nervous.
"whoa.. joe.. JOE!" she said trying to get him to stop talking. "slow down.."
Joe blushed alittle. "right, sorry.. umm.. you see, me and my brothers are
leaving tonight after the concert, and going to tennessee... were leaving and, i
know this is going to sound really stupid but, even though we just met, i feel like
ive known you forever and i really dont want to loose that because of the tour,
and the long distance EISPECCALLY on the tour , wont work. so kevin and nick
are asking jenny and kristin this too.. i was wondering if you would come on the
road with me.."
hannah looked as though she was in a tranze, but she wasnt, just in shock. "but, i.. i- c .. i .. uhh" she mumbled, unsure on what had just happend.
Joe noticed her expression. "If you dont want to thats fine, dont do it just to like
humor me or somthing.."
hannah broke the tranze and looked at him. "No, no thats not it! its just being
away from home for that long would be hard for me.. but being away from
you would be even harder.." she said thinking. "Ok, i have to ask my mom but IF
she says yes, and i put emphasis on the if.... then yes ill go with you" she smiled at him.
He got a very big smile on his face and hugged her , he sighed. "That was really hard for me to ask"
she laughed. "i can imagine" he laughed too. Just then they looked at differnt
benches, it was obvoious kevin had just asked because Jenny had just about
the exact same face hannah did when joe had asked her. Kristin had obviously
already said yes, as hannah assumed she would have. she may no know her
very well, but she knew she would never pass up this opportuite.
They all got back in the limo and discussed it, they dropped hannah off and
drove around the corner, waiting for her to come tell them what her mom had said.
Hannah begged her mom, they both cried and laughed and hugged . Ultimattly her mom said she could as long as a tutor was there to help hannah
stay on top of her school work, and that hannah called home frequently.
hannah hugged her mom thanking her over and over and ran outside and
around the corner to the car. joe was standing outside the car and gave her a
'what did she say' sort of look. hannah smiled. "yes"
krrristin
09-25-2007, 10:41 PM
I Loooooooove It
Zanessa Fan1
09-25-2007, 10:43 PM
hehe thank you :P
1 more comment and ill post more
krrristin
09-25-2007, 10:46 PM
EEP! some one comment
smileyface93
09-25-2007, 10:50 PM
i luff it! too
secretive_angel
09-25-2007, 11:10 PM
more pleaz
Ashley Marie 1992
09-26-2007, 09:48 AM
More More More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Need More! :P
Zanessa Fan1
09-26-2007, 06:18 PM
Chapter 8: Hit the Road
Joe got a huge smile on his face and hugged her. Hannah smiled back at him.
He told her to meet them at the Royal Park Hotel, which was where they were
staying, at 8 to leave. She said ok and he got back in the limo and kristin and
jenny went home. Joe, Nick, and kevin went back to their hotel and packed
Hannah did the same, she packed everything she could possibly need and more
and her mom gave her tons of money to get things for her family, and get things
for herself on the trip. She got her stuff and her mom drove her to the hotel. They said their final goodbyes and hannah went to the back of the hotel where the
buses were. She looked around. Kristin ran over to her. "Hi Hi!" she said. she then went into a whisper "i cant beleive this is happening.." jenny walked over too, "its
so amazing!" hannah nodded agreeingly. The manager came out with joe,
kevin, and nick. "Ok so heres how this will work.." the guy said.
"Joe,Kevin, and nick will have that bus, and u girls will share that one" he said pointing to two differnt buses. "You guys can drive sometimes in eachothers, but
for now, lets start out this way"
joe just laughed and rolled his eyes. they put the girls stuff in their bus and
everyone got on their buses. the girls went to their bus, the guys to theirs.
Kristin ran into the back of the bus and closed the door after jenny and hannah
came in. "Ohmygosh" she said so fast it could be mis-taken as 1 word. "this looks
JUST like where they filmed those youtube videos!"
hannah looked at her like she was an idiot. "thats because the buses are
identical"
kristin pretended she knew that. "Pshh... i know" she said , lying. they all laughed.
"So..." jenny said. "whats happend between you and the boys..?"
And so the girl talk began.
Ironiclly, the guys were talking about the exact same thing on their bus.
Zanessa Fan1
09-26-2007, 06:20 PM
2 comments or more, and ill post the next chapter. ;)
krrristin
09-26-2007, 07:32 PM
I wanna know the conversation NOWWWW`
Zanessa Fan1
09-26-2007, 09:12 PM
I wanna know the conversation NOWWWW`
hehe 1 more comment from someone else and ill post the next chapter! :P
krrristin
09-26-2007, 09:13 PM
Grr fine!
smileyface93
09-26-2007, 09:17 PM
mor!! hehe
Zanessa Fan1
09-26-2007, 09:37 PM
Chapter 9: Best Friends
Jenny, Kristin , and hannah talked for hours , this is basiclly how the conversation went...
"So yeah what has happend with you and nick?" hannah said teasingly.
Kristin laughed. "nothing, he hugged me a few times but we just met yesterday"
"We ALL did" jenny said sarcasticlly . they all laughed.
Hannah started talking. "Yeah, he kissed my cheek once , this morning but thats it"
"Thats more than me!" jenny added, laughing.
Kristin laughed too. "Yeah same here.. i wonder what they're talking about"
MEANWHILE:
Joes POV:
Kevin , Nick, and i sat down on the couch.
not knowing the girls were having the same conversation, we started talking.
"Yeah, i kissed her cheek , i was going to kiss her tonight but because of the
whole seperate buses thing, i cant"
nick laughed. "Its not funny!" i said , yet i was laughing.
"What about you guys?" i asked
nick hesitated, "i really really like kristin, but i dont want to push it or anything,
you know? i mean we have the WHOLE tour, we dont have to go fast"
Kevin nodded, "Yeah thats what i was thinking, joe you move really fast with girls"
I laughed. "yeah i know... but thats just the way i roll" we laughed at my cheesie
line, quoting our song.
krrristin
09-26-2007, 09:47 PM
I Love It Bubbles!
Zanessa Fan1
09-26-2007, 10:54 PM
thanks, sorry the chapter was so short. it'll be longer tomarow morning, ill add the next chapter then ;)
Zanessa Fan1
09-27-2007, 08:10 AM
Chapter 10: Differnt Points of Veiw
Everyone was in their bunks, thinking to themselves...
---Nicks POV---
So i met this girl kristin the other day, yesterday actually. and i really like
her, she and 2 other girls are coming on tour with us, it should be extra fun
with them with us, instead of just the three of us like it usually is.
Anyway, i want to really get things going with her, but i dont want to push
to much and push her away. I think im going to ask Joe and Kevin what I
should do.. because im not so sure.
---Kevins POV---
Jenny and I really hit it off, she clames I was her favorite jonas brother but i
know the truth. It was joe.Dont get me wrong i DO think she likes me, she
just hasnt always. It seems all the fans favorites of Joe's or Nick's... not
mine. Every occasionaly there is one that im their favortie, but not very
often. I met this girl yesterday , too.. named Sarah, she's really nice.. the
guys dont know this yet but shes coming too. AS A FRIEND.. mabye. Ugh! i
dont know what to do! i like jenny but she liked joe until hannah got him and
settled for me! And Sarah ACTUALLY liked me. So sarah's mom is driving her
to the next hotel and then she is going to ride on the girl bus from then on.
I really dont know what im going to do.
---Joes POV---
Im not with kevin and nick anymore, were all in our bunks, just thinking.
Im thinking about hannah, she's so amazing. But like nick pointed out to me i
shouldnt go too fast, i dont want to scare her off.
But on the other hand i dont want to go to slow and make her think im not
interested in a relashionship. I dont know how im going to pull this off.
But anyway, hannah is so amazing! shes really nice, pretty, sweet, and she
laughs at my jokes, and understands our working scedule, which is good.
I think i can see a good future for me and hannah, i want to be her boyfriend eventually, but i really need to slow down. Well, what am i supposed to do???
Help me, cause i cant figure this one out...
---Hannah's POV---
So, joe kissed my check today. It was so amazing, im in love and i have been
for like ever with him! but now he might feel the same way, this is incredible.
Me and Kristin really hit it off. We are really good friends now, she is so nice,
and really funny! Jenny is pretty cool too. I wonder what the guys did all
night, mabye they played music or made a youtube video.. i dont know, but
anyway, im really nervous about joe . i like him so much, but i dont know how
he feels because he hasnt made a move.
Hopfully he will make one tomarow.
--- Jenny's POV ---
Ok, so me kristin and hannah just talked for like 3 hours about the guys.
It was good to know they feel the same way i do.. but i noticed this one car
following the bus. i wonder who it is..? it looks like a girl about my age, but i
wont obsess over it. Oh well, atleast one thing ive accompolished on this trip
so far, ive made two new best friends :D
--- Kristins POV ---
I think Nick wants to kiss me, i can tell, im good with these things.. but he
hasnt done anything yet. He's probubly nervous which i can totally
understand because im really nervous too. :P
Im wondering what might happen tomarow..? What will we be doing, where will we be going?
Its going to be an adventure thats for sure...atleast im not alone, i have hannah and jenny here with me, and nick kevin and joe. This trip will be the best trip of me life, i can feel it.
MEANWHILE!
Maria was in her room, ploting. Maria was a year older than kevin and very
protective of the jonas brothers, who were her younger cousins. She never
wanted to see them hurt. So she had a plan, to save them any possible
heart break.. muhaha :lol:
Zanessa Fan1
09-27-2007, 08:10 AM
told u it would be longer :P
Zanessa Fan1
09-27-2007, 06:36 PM
anyone...?
krrristin
09-27-2007, 06:45 PM
Kristin Loves It!
smileyface93
09-27-2007, 06:47 PM
i luff it!!
Zanessa Fan1
09-27-2007, 07:20 PM
Chapter 11: The First Full Day
Around like 1 in the morning they had arrived at the hotel and went to their
rooms. She had seen joe but everyone was too tired to talk. They were now
in ohio, she had been here before because she had cousins there. Hannah ,
Kristin, and jenny had to share a room, so did the boys. they got in their pj's
and fell asleep. Now, it was the next day. Their first full day on this trip.
They were majorly excited. Everyone was, actually.
everyone got dressed and ate breakfast in their rooms. they had slept in , so
it was like noon. they decided to check out the hotel. The only really
interesting thing was the pool,so they got in their bathing suits and went
down their, after thouroghly making their way threw the crowds of fans the
got into the pool. Joe pushed hannah in. She fell underwater and came back
up and gasped. "JOE!" she yelled teasingly, now pulling him into the water. he
laughed and fell in. they had a splash fight. Nick and kristin got into the pool,
along with jenny and kevin. And sarah came too. kevin had explained the
sarah situation and everyone said that was fine. everyone except jenny, she
felt kinda weird around her, since kevin had invited her the same night he
invited jenny.
--- MARIA's POV ---
Muhaha. since i live so close to the concert tonight i shall make my plan into
actions. I cant let them hurt my cousins, those girls who they just met. What have they gotten themselves into? well whatever it is, im going to get
them out of it. what ever it takes.
- - - - -
They swam and joe dunked hannah . she just laughed and chased him around the pool, paperazzi taking photos, but they didnt care. he kissed her cheek and he smiled. he took her hand and pulled her out of the pool and around the corner.
"Where are we going..?!" she said as he pulled her hand.
"What are we do-" she couldnt finish before joe has started kissing her.
They sepereated and she smiled at him.
he smiled back at her. "i didnt want to do that in front of the fans, people, and cameras.."
she nodded. "i understand" they kissed again until kristin came around the corner and bumped into them.
"Whoa, hello!" kristin said loudly, in shock as she had bumped into them, she turned around and went back to the pool. They did the same
(sry for short chap, 2 comments for more ;) )
krrristin
09-27-2007, 07:25 PM
hahah you must have enjoyed that huh?
I loved it
Zanessa Fan1
09-27-2007, 07:38 PM
hahah you must have enjoyed that huh?
I loved it
hehe thanks
1 more comment ;)
smileyface93
09-27-2007, 07:40 PM
me likey!! more moreeee
Zanessa Fan1
09-27-2007, 08:04 PM
Chapter 12: Shopping
They left the pool and the girls decided they wanted to go shopping. They
boys wined alittle but in the end agreed to go with them.
Kristin saw abercrombie and screamed. "Come on!" she ran in.
nick sighed and followed her into the store. he was mobbed by teenaged girls.
Kristin was starting to get jelous, but understood that this came with the
territory. She just ignored it, and pretended it was normal.
Nick finally, about 5 minutes later, got out of the crowd and over to kristin.
She was looking at a shirt.
"Hey" he said sneeking up behind her.
She looked behind her to see him and smiled. "hi" she set the shirt down and
turned around.
"Well that was an adventure huh?" she asked, motioning to the crowd of girls.
He laughed , alittle. "Yeah i know, its kinda crazy."
she just nodded , but still smiled at him. they left after she bought a shirt
and some flip-flops and met up with the others at the ice-cream place in the mall.
They all sat down and the boys put up their hoods and put on their sunglasses, helping the whole "fans" situation. It made it alot easier.
Joe smiled. "From now on, call me Enricay Eglasias" he said,
hannah laughed. "Joe he's famous too , thats not any better!" she laughed some more.
Joe thought for a second. "Oh yeah" he laughed.
Kristin held nick's hand under the table, smileing at him. he kissed her cheek
and she smiled. He hadnt done this yet, so she was happy and excited.
after a few minutes joe and hannah had finished but the others hadn't.
Hannah wanted to go to her favorite store of all time, called 'Urban Outfitters'.
Joe took her there and bought her an outfit. She thanked him and he took her away from the park to the playground. there were no young kids there,
no one there actually.
So he pulled somthing out of his pocket, a beautiful pure gold braclet with a few diamonds in it, it said J&H on it. he asked her to be his girlfriend.
her jaw dropped at the sight of the bracelet. but she smiled and said yes.
secretive_angel
09-27-2007, 08:49 PM
mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore
Zanessa Fan1
09-28-2007, 07:55 AM
1 more comment!
and ill post more today after school ;)
Zanessa Fan1
09-28-2007, 10:53 PM
WARNING!
IF UR A MILEY FAN THIS MAY BE OFFENDING! SKIP THE CHAP!
Chapter 13: Little Miss Cyrus
That night at the hotel Hannah ran in and showed her rist , with the braclet
on it, to show it to kristin and jenny. she got ready for the concert and so did
the others. Then, because they were on tour with miley, miley came into their
hotel room. None of them liked miley, but they had to tolerate her for the
tour.
The Jonas brothers didnt really like her either, but. they could only avoid her
as much as they could.Anyway, Miley walked in without knocking.
"Hello?.. ever heard of knocking..?" kristin said, she eispeccally didnt like
miley, because it was totally obvious miley wanted nick for herself.
Hannah just looked at miley, "Whats up?" she said, not inthuseasticly.
Miley sighed, "Just coming to see if you guys needed any help getting ready"
Hannah , Jenny, and kristin exchanged faces that clearley said 'wtf?' and
shook there heads at miley.
"were good thanks.." Jenny said finishing her hair.
miley's smile suddenly faded as she closed the door behind her. Once again
the girls exchanged looks.
"heres the deal" miley said, starting to walk over to kristin away from the
others.
"Nick is meant to be with someone of his class, someone he deserves,
someone who deserves him,and im famous so how much better can it get?"
said miley, bragginly and rudely.
Katie and Jenny gasped and walked over to miley. "Whoa" said
hannah."Kristins already way prettier than you"
Jenny nodded, aggreingly. "Yeah"
Kristin pushed them a bit. "I got this guys" she walked close to miley. "Look
'cyrus'... dont mess with me, i can get mad and you WONT like me when im
mad... and by the way, he isnt interested in you..he dosnt even like you. so
move on.." Miley stormed out.
Kristin closed the door behind miley. "whats her problem?"
hannah laughed alittle. "i think the real question is what ISNT her problem.."
Jenny laughed too. "And whats with her cover story, she wants too" she did
quote fingers " 'help us get ready', i mean COME ON! im older than she is
anyway!" they all laughed.
"Come on were going to be late" said kristin as they walked out and locked
the door behind them. They got in the limo with the boys.
krrristin
09-28-2007, 10:54 PM
katie, you can use the "summer camp" sig... since im not usingit
krrristin
09-28-2007, 10:56 PM
haha i liked it btw, it captures kristin at her worst
Zanessa Fan1
09-28-2007, 10:57 PM
katie, you can use the "summer camp" sig... since im not usingit
hehe ok thanks :D
Ashley Marie 1992
09-28-2007, 10:57 PM
WOW! This is the best chapter yet!
Zanessa Fan1
09-28-2007, 10:57 PM
haha i liked it btw, it captures kristin at her worst
Well its just supposed to show how mean miley is.
krrristin
09-28-2007, 10:59 PM
haha I know
but I do get like that when Im pissed haha
Zanessa Fan1
09-28-2007, 11:19 PM
haha I know
but I do get like that when Im pissed haha
hehe, im not writing more until u do , kristin. :P
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
09-28-2007, 11:21 PM
More! (BTW your avi is "flipping" hilarilous.)
Zanessa Fan1
09-28-2007, 11:24 PM
More! (BTW your avi is "flipping" hilarilous.)
(hehe thanks i found it on photobucket :P )
Zanessa Fan1
09-29-2007, 12:40 PM
Chapter 14: The Concert
---Kristins POV---
Ohmygosh, Miley is so ANNOYING! well, if she even thinks about nick one more
time i could hurt her. I mean she's just skin and bones. Ugh, enough about
miley.
We arrived at the concert and went backstage. I walked with nick, hand and
hand, to his dressing room and he kissed me goodbye, and i kissed him
goodluck. This was the first time we had kissed. I smiled and left him to get
ready. The others did the same.
I walked around the corner and saw miley, me hannah and jenny just walked
right past her to the seats backstage where we could watch the show from.
I told Jenny and kristin about it and we waited for the show to begin.
---
---Jenny's POV---
Great, its no official. Im the only one that hasnt kissed them yet.
Hannah is even DATING joe and i havnt even kissed Kevin yet, well
not for long, i will kiss him tonight after the concert. Im planning and hopeing
on it. I just have to wait, and enjoy the concert.
The Music began to play and the jonas brothers started singing 'SOS'.
---
Joe was singing, and hannah was watching him.. smileing. She knew she had to share him with all the fans, but not in the 'loving stalker-ish' way. in a differnt kind of love. And she was extremelly happy and excited about it.
After the Concert the boys came backstage.
Hannah kissed joe."Great Job" she said.
Nick kissed kristin. "How was the show, did we do ok?"
Kristin laughed. "okay? you guys were amazing!"
Jenny sighed and walked over to kevin. Kevin wanted to kiss her. He leaned in
slowly and kissed her , creating the perfect kiss. She seperated and smiled at him.
---Nicks POV---
So i asked kristin to be my girlfriend today, no one knows about it yet. We
got matching rings to prove it. Im going to tell my brothers tonight. Its offical
now. I cant even remember the last time i was this happy, i wonder why kevin
hasnt made a move on jenny yet..?
krrristin
09-29-2007, 12:42 PM
haha I love it!
will there be a twist?
Zanessa Fan1
09-29-2007, 01:01 PM
haha I love it!
will there be a twist?
:P MAYBE..
remember i brought in 2 other charecters? Sarah and Maria. Maria is their cousin and is trying to break them all up when they come to her town, which is the next town they go to.
And Sarah likes kevin, so kevin has to decide which he likes more, jenny or sarah. ;)
krrristin
09-29-2007, 01:10 PM
and will there be katie and jenny drama?
Zanessa Fan1
09-29-2007, 01:23 PM
and will there be katie and jenny drama?
hehe i dont think so, cause in this fanfiction jenny likes kevin. thats what she told me.
PursePrincess4eva
09-29-2007, 02:34 PM
I am SO Evil! MUAHAHA! :lol: LOL (Now I sound like katie. and no not you bubbles, my little she-devil sister) LOL I wanna come in already. =]
Zanessa Fan1
09-29-2007, 03:38 PM
I am SO Evil! MUAHAHA! :lol: LOL (Now I sound like katie. and no not you bubbles, my little she-devil sister) LOL I wanna come in already. =]
hehe ur coming in on the next chapter
1 more comment for more :P
secretive_angel
09-29-2007, 03:47 PM
more pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
PursePrincess4eva
09-29-2007, 04:49 PM
Can i be like all nice angel around the girls but when im with the boys, I tell them, that i dont that they are for them? lol. =]
Zanessa Fan1
09-29-2007, 06:18 PM
uhh idk.. ill post more later , guys ;)
Zanessa Fan1
09-29-2007, 06:26 PM
Chapter 15: The Cousin...
that night they drove to the next town. There was where they're cousin,
Maria lived. so she was going to spend the day with them. Sarah recegnised
the name but didnt know from where. Oh well, she thought.
They went in a limo to pick up maria from her house. Maria got in and when they introduced them all to her she freaked. "SARAH!, remember me? we
went to kindergarden through 4th grade together and then you moved...?"
she asked.
"OH YEAH!" sarah said, moving to sit next to maria.
Maria gave the other girls the evil eye. Kristin, Jenny, and Hannah exchanged
nervous looks.
---hannah's POV---
I dont know whats up with her, but i dont think it can be good. She seems nice
but she has a hannah montana shirt on to start with, she probubly wants
Niley together. I rolled my eyes thinking about that idea.
I do NOT get a good vibe from her, but shes their family, so i guess ill just
suck up to her, big time. And whats up with the Kevin, Sarah, Jenny love
triangle..? I totally think he likes both of them. But i dont want to get
involved, they're all my friends and i dont see that ending well.
----
They got to the mall they were going too. They were practiclly going
shopping in every location, just because well their girls and thats what girls
do! At one point Hannah was in a changing room, and Maria and Sarah were
in one next to them whispering. She listend, she didnt like what she heard.
Maria: "ok so heres what we need to do, you are awesome we need to break up jenny and kevin"
Sarah: "i dont know if i want to.. id feel bad shes my friend"
Maria: "Fine, then ill do it by myself.. and what about the others? will you
help me break them up..?"
Hannah stopped listening and her jaw dropped. She got back into her normal
clothese, she ran out of the dressing room to warn the others. She did and
they were all shocked. She didnt tell the boys though, after all, they wouldnt
beleive that their sweet inoscent cousin was a evil little brat.
PursePrincess4eva
09-29-2007, 06:36 PM
MUAHA! Im an evil brat! LOL =] more!
Zanessa Fan1
09-29-2007, 11:21 PM
MUAHA! Im an evil brat! LOL =] more!
a few more comments and ill post the next chapter ;)
niiro_tatsu
09-30-2007, 12:08 AM
its awesome! POST MORE
Zanessa Fan1
09-30-2007, 12:10 AM
i will in the morning ;) hehe thanks jenny
niiro_tatsu
09-30-2007, 12:11 AM
k cant wait
secretive_angel
09-30-2007, 04:30 AM
more please
Zanessa Fan1
09-30-2007, 11:18 AM
Chapter 16: The Plan
---Hannah's pov---
What am i going to do? if i tell joe, he will never beleive me, but if i dont tell
him , maria's plan might work! Theres only one thing i can do, i need to suck
up to maria and get her to like me, and leave our relashonship alone!
And then i can help save the other's...
I walked over to Maria. "Hey" i smiled at her, sincerly.
"Hi" she said, smileing sweetly.. and from what i could tell FAKELY.
"Look, im not sure if we got off to the best start, i never really introduced
myself. im hannah"
Maria was impressed, i could tell by her expression on her face, but it was
going to take more than this to get her on my side.
Maria smiled. "Yeah i didnt think we did either, umm im maria.nice to meet
you" she smiled, with innocey in her eyes.
wtf? I thought.
dang its going to take alot of effort to be able to tell if she's acting or telling
the truth. this girl is good!
"You too" i said back to her. "So , where do you live?"
Maria answered and we going into an actually, sivil conversation.
Maria actually liked me, but to make sure i was going to easedrop on her and
sarah's conversation again. i didnt want to, but it had to be done.
-----
Maria took Sarah into the dressing room and hannah quickly went into the
other one next to it. You'd think they would know they arnt in private.
hannah thought.
Maria: "Ok listen, Hannah's nice.. i like her, but i dont like the others. so lets
leave hannah and joe alone and work on beraking up kristin/nick and
kevin/jenny."
Sarah: "Look i already told you i dont want in on this!" she stormed out.
Hannah quickly left her dressing room so she didnt look suspicious and went
back to the others.
"Joe, me. kristin. jenny, and sarah need to go do somthing. its a suprise for
maria so keep her with you and away from us for a bit" she said, clearly lying.
Joe went along with it. "Uhh.. ok?" he said confused. Hannah nodded and
took Sarah, Kristin, and Jenny away from the rest to a place where they
could take privatly. She told sarah that she heard, and what she had heard.
Jenny and kristin were suprised, they hadnt really liked sarah until now, they
both looked at her with shocked faces and said in unicin. "Thanks"
Sarah laughed. "No problem, so what are we going to do about it..?"
Hannah nodded. "Well i made peace with her, so thats one down. She really
hates you guys so we'll have to try harder with them.. but we need a double
agent.. we need someone on her side, to tell us what she says.. "
Hannah, Kristin and Jenny all looked at Sarah, who just sighed. "Fine ill do it"
Hannah smiled. "Perfect.."
niiro_tatsu
09-30-2007, 12:30 PM
dun dun dunnnnnnnnn
POST MORE
secretive_angel
09-30-2007, 01:42 PM
more pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
PursePrincess4eva
09-30-2007, 03:52 PM
Dont make liek them so fast. And, when i do like them and we end this whole EVIL thing, can I also be a mian character? =]
Zanessa Fan1
09-30-2007, 04:18 PM
Dont make liek them so fast. And, when i do like them and we end this whole EVIL thing, can I also be a mian character? =]
You dont actually like her, u just knew she was listening and think shes ok . ;)
and yeah sure u will be :D
PursePrincess4eva
09-30-2007, 04:40 PM
MUAHAHA! So darn evil. LOL =] More!
niiro_tatsu
09-30-2007, 06:05 PM
More
Zanessa Fan1
09-30-2007, 11:39 PM
ill post more tomarow since i have no school tomarow ;)
marshmallows6565
10-01-2007, 01:15 AM
you have no school?!?!
lucky!
Zanessa Fan1
10-01-2007, 01:05 PM
you have no school?!?!
lucky!
hehe, i know
ill post more in a little bit ;) i just dont feel
like posting any right now ... hehe
Zanessa Fan1
10-01-2007, 06:51 PM
Chapter 17: Step 1
---Sarah's POV---
"I think Maria wishes best, she just is going about it all wrong. She dosnt
even know us, and yet she's turned against us. This would be so much easier
if we could just tell the boys whats going on, i think they're extremely
confused. Which, in joes case happens alot." I said, talking to the others back
at the hotel later that night.
I noticed hannah shooting me a look and stopped.
"Anyway..." I said. "What do we do first, hannah? You're the presidant of this
little operation"
"Ok well..." Hannah said , thinking. "Sarah, your the insider, she really has to
trust you, so tell her you will help her break up jenny and kevin,and we'll see
what she says, what she wants to do, because only when we know what she
has planned , can we stop it." Hannah concluded.
I nodded. "Alright well, ill talk to her tomarow"
"Uhh tomarow..?"Kristin wined. "im bored, lets start now!" she said jumping up.
We all just looked at her and then all started laughing.
"Ok" i stood up "ill go find her and report anything she has to say"
"Good" Jenny said, "and we'll stay here and plan what we need to do after this"
Hannah nodded, too. "I feel like a spy" she laughed. "Im thinking about letting
Joe in on this little plan of ours."
"WHAT!!!?" me, kristin and jenny yelled in unicon.
-----
"Well, we really need to tell them, dont you think they'll get suspicious!?"
hannah asked.
"Shhhhhh, you guys keep it down. Maria's only next door, she could hear you"
Jenny said, rationatly thinking.
"True.. good idea,thanks" hannah said. she repeated what she said before,
only in a whisper, "Dont you think they'll get suspicious?"
"Yeah i guess, but lets just tell joe and then see if he beleives us, and if he does we can tell the others.." kristin sugested.
"Ok, so heres the plan, Sarah. you go find and talk to maria, kristin and jenny,
stay here and investigate and plan what comes next, ill go talk to joe. " they
all put in there hands. "And. BREAK!"
they split up in differnt directions. Kristin axcidently went with hannah who
dragged her by the arm over to where jenny was , then left.
krrristin
10-01-2007, 07:20 PM
haha i like it
niiro_tatsu
10-01-2007, 07:42 PM
haha kristin u dork
PursePrincess4eva
10-01-2007, 07:46 PM
You should like make Maria hear everything. =] MORE!
Zanessa Fan1
10-01-2007, 08:40 PM
You should like make Maria hear everything. =] MORE!
No i already have like the next 5 chapters written in my head :P
shopaholicoxxo
10-01-2007, 09:03 PM
aahhhh more more more more :P
this is like, soooo good :D
-cough- maybe I could be another fan joe meets at a meet and greet that he invites on tour "as friends", but then he likes me and hannah and we have to fight for him? :P
hahaha jk. you don't have to do that. unless you want to. :P but it would be cool if I was in it somehow ;)
Zanessa Fan1
10-02-2007, 07:46 PM
aahhhh more more more more :P
this is like, soooo good :D
-cough- maybe I could be another fan joe meets at a meet and greet that he invites on tour "as friends", but then he likes me and hannah and we have to fight for him? :P
hahaha jk. you don't have to do that. unless you want to. :P but it would be cool if I was in it somehow ;)
Thank you =D
Posting more , now!
Zanessa Fan1
10-02-2007, 07:56 PM
Chapter 18: Step 2
Hannah went and found Joe. She wasnt sure how to break the news to him.
Chances were good he wasnt going to beleive that he had an evil, self
obssessed cousin who hated her, kristin, sarah, AND jenny... but it was true!
She just had to find a more-beleivable and nicer way to say it...
She sighed, bracing herself and walked over to him. There was alittle bit of
small-talk before she got to the point, she was nervous but just went out and
said it.
---Hannah's POV---
"Ok i have to tell you somthing, me and the other girls have been talking and
decided to tell you this.." I said.
"Okay..." Joe said, cautiously.
"Alright well, see" I looked around making sure maria was no where to be seen,I was afraid so i texted Sarah
You talking to her.??
I sent it and waited for a responce. "Hold on" I said, waiting still. Joe waited
patiently. Finally, Sarah responded... it said:
Yeah.. step 1 done, step 2 is talking to joe. go.
"Okay" I said closing my phone and looking back at joe. "Sorry, about that. um
where was i?" i asked, knowing very well where i was but precrastinating
because this was going to be hard to say beleivabley.
"You were about to tell me what you and the others want to tell me.." Joe said.
---Joe's POV---
My heart was racing. What could be THAT hard to tell me...? I dont know
whats going on. I thought FOR SURE she was going to break up with me. now
i sighed, bracing MYSELF.
"Its Maria" i heard Hannah say.
I suddenly felt better. "Ok.." i said waiting to hear more.
"She dosnt think that Me, Kristin, and Jenny are good enough for you guys so
she is planning to try and break us all up.."
I made a confused look. "Huh? How do you know..?" I asked.
"Well, i may have easdropped a bit in the dressing room at the store, but she
was trying to get sarah to help so sarah knows even better than i do, but
sarah dosnt want to help her. We just found out earlier today, and wearnt
sure if you would beleive me or not, so we wearnt sure how or even if we
should, tell you guys...You're the only one we have told for now so dont tell
your brothers.. if you dont beleive me, i understand" she finished.
"Wow" i mumbled. That was A LOT of information to take in , in one breath.
"I DO beleive you.."I said.
I saw hannah's suprised expression. "Dont look so shocked" we both laughed.
"Ok so, what do we do to stop her...?"
niiro_tatsu
10-02-2007, 08:07 PM
post more
Zanessa Fan1
10-02-2007, 08:16 PM
aahhhh more more more more :P
this is like, soooo good :D
-cough- maybe I could be another fan joe meets at a meet and greet that he invites on tour "as friends", but then he likes me and hannah and we have to fight for him? :P
hahaha jk. you don't have to do that. unless you want to. :P but it would be cool if I was in it somehow ;)
I'll add you to it, in a few chapters. But joe dosnt like you as more than friends :P
i have an idea, i wanted another back-up for the plan agains maria anyway, so this works perfectly.
PursePrincess4eva
10-02-2007, 08:45 PM
Eep! Joe is supposed to be my NICE cousin. Not the cousin with the girlfrined he just meet. LOL I've known him MUCH longer. LOL =]
Zanessa Fan1
10-02-2007, 08:48 PM
Eep! Joe is supposed to be my NICE cousin. Not the cousin with the girlfrined he just meet. LOL I've known him MUCH longer. LOL =]
YES but in the next chapter you will learn more about Maria and how she has always treated joe.. hmm.. :33: Think about it :P
PursePrincess4eva
10-02-2007, 08:51 PM
I dont wanna be THAT evil..=[
shopaholicoxxo
10-03-2007, 12:04 AM
I'll add you to it, in a few chapters. But joe dosnt like you as more than friends :P
i have an idea, i wanted another back-up for the plan agains maria anyway, so this works perfectly.
awewsomeness! :D thank youuuu! :P
oh and WRITE MORE!!! XD
Zanessa Fan1
10-03-2007, 08:01 AM
Ill write more after school, today ;)
And maria, sorry...idk mabye ill change it
Zanessa Fan1
10-04-2007, 09:07 PM
ill write more later, sorry its taking so long. i got alot going on right now.
secretive_angel
10-04-2007, 09:17 PM
more pleazzzzzzzzzzz
Zanessa Fan1
10-04-2007, 09:42 PM
If anyone wants to sugest ideas for this fanfic, pm them to me! ;)
Zanessa Fan1
10-04-2007, 09:53 PM
Chapter 19 (PART 1): Step 3
---Sarah's POV---
I looked at maria who was talking, i was trying to save everything she was
saying, in my head, so i could repeat it almost word for word for the others.
but it was hard. she was laying alot on me.
"Whoa, whoa , whoa.. slow down." i said, cautiously , trying to keep my cool.
maria looked confused. "huh?"
"this is a huge plan" i said "i need to remember it" maria nodded, and i
realized i had fixed my mistake.
"Alright i REALLY gotta go to the bathroom" i said standing up "ill be back"
"K" maria said, starting to file her nails as she waited. I ran to the bathroom in
our hotel room to find Kristin, Hannah, Jenny, and even Joe... siting in there.
Hannah shot up when i walked in. "what happend?" she asked.
before i could respond she started talking again. "New plan, here" she handed
me a microphone and whispered somthing to me. I nodded and ran into the bathroom.
-----end pov---
"she gunna do it?" Joe asked. Hannah nodded in responce and everyone smiled.
Meanwhile, in the bathroom, Sarah was doing as told. She had a small , and
when i say small i meen VERY small, microphone that she was going to put,
with a peice of small medical tape, on her stomach under her shirt, this would
save her the trouble of reapeating everything, and they could listen in.
She came back out and went back to where maria was. "Ok." she sighed
"where were we?"
Joe smirked along with the others.
Zanessa Fan1
10-04-2007, 09:54 PM
that was only part 1 of the chapter, more posted later tonight! =D
secretive_angel
10-04-2007, 10:09 PM
awesome more
Zanessa Fan1
10-04-2007, 10:22 PM
Chapter 19 (PART2):Step 3 Continued!
Maria looked at sarah. "All right, and you SWEAR not to tell anyone about this?"
"The words you say will NEVER leave my mouth" she said , honestly.
everyone who was listening started to laugh then got quiet so they could
listen to what they were saying.
"okay" maria began, again. "so i think they arnt good enough for them, hannah was being really nice today, so i dont know if she was just being honest, or is on to me. but for now lets focas on jenny and kevin... and on kristin and nick, lets see. who else can nick be with.. miley?"
"NO!" sarah yelled.
"NO!" everyone else yelled in unicon with sarah, but sarah couldnt hear them
maria looked confused. "why not?"
"i absolutly HATE miley cyrus" sarah said, cautiously.
"Oh, i love her" maria said shrugging "Alright well if not miley, then who?"
Sarah thought. "i dont know.. hmm" she said, pretending to think.
Maria really was thinking hard, trying to think of ANYONE better then kristin.
"What about emily... you know emily osment.?"
Sarah nodded, aggreingly. "Yeah, sure" she needed someone to agree on. So maria didnt suspect that she was supporting Kick. (nick/kristin).
---Maria's POV---
"Alright then." i said "Emily it is, so first lets start with working on kevin and jenny"
"Alright" i heard her say, she didnt seem very inthuseastic. i was a bit
suspicious but i knew she would do what i said, after all, everyone always did!
"Ok so what should we do first? Let's start with making jenny jelous. flirt with
kevin a little and then hopfully he will start falling for you even more than he already has .."
"what?" sarah asked, shocked, for real. "He hasnt fallen for me.." she said.
I leaned in, trying to be queit but I was really even closer to the microphone.
"okay, dont tell anyone this, but he dosnt even really like jenny, thats why he is being so slow with her, he brought you along too for a reason, sarah. And i swear thats the whole truth" I said with honesty in her eyes.
---Jenny's POV---
I was in shock. She didnt think we could hear with her, so what if she was
telling the truth!? I had my eyes closed, thinking . When i opened them i could
see that everyone else was staring at me, also in shock.
Joe had taken hannah's hand, nervosly. He knew the truth. He was mabye the only one who they could trust, but he couldnt tell anyone. He had promised his brother that much..
whos telling the truth? what is the truth? what will happen?
3 comments for more of my fanfiction! for ideas PM me!!! :D
shopaholicoxxo
10-04-2007, 10:25 PM
MOREEE please! :D
marshmallows6565
10-04-2007, 10:47 PM
wait?!?!?
joe knows the truth?!?!
what is the truth!?!?!
ahh
lol
and emily? what!?!?! actually emily did go to my school so i did semi know her... like she recognized me at the HM taping... lol
thank god i didnt agree to miley
lol
MORE
:D when you have time :D
Zanessa Fan1
10-05-2007, 08:10 AM
wait?!?!?
joe knows the truth?!?!
what is the truth!?!?!
ahh
lol
and emily? what!?!?! actually emily did go to my school so i did semi know her... like she recognized me at the HM taping... lol
thank god i didnt agree to miley
lol
MORE
:D when you have time :D
hehe, emily..
the next chapter introduces casey!
ill post it after school, today ;) thanks guys! :D
shopaholicoxxo
10-05-2007, 08:17 AM
yayyyy I'm in the next chapter. :P
Zanessa Fan1
10-05-2007, 05:06 PM
Chapter 20: Meet Casey/Step 4
"Alright, well im tired" Sarah went back to the others to see them all in as
much shock as she was.
Jenny ran over to Sarah and pushed her. "Dont steal my BOYFRIEND!"
Sarah gasped. "i didnt do ANYTHING!" she took of the microphone and set it down. Joe looked at hannah , who was on the phone with her mom, to see
her crying. She hung up. Joe walked over to her.
"Hey, whats wrong..?" he asked, sitting down next to her.
she sniffled. "im just a little home sick, thats all.. i miss my friends."
He suggested somthing and she hugged him tight. "You'd do that for me?"
"You are my girlfriend arnt you?" he laughed "Besides, your friends dont even
know were dating"
She gasped . "ohmygosh your right!" she hugged him one more time and went
back over to the phone. She dialed it and waited. She finally heard the voice she had missed so much. "Hello?" Casey said, at her house answering the phone.
"Case! Its hannah"
"Ohmygosh hannah? no way ive missed you soo much!"
"I know same here.. Joe said if we want you could meet up with us where we
are now, and then come with us for the rest"
they both screamed, causing joe , sarah and jenny who were still fighting,
and kristin all to look up and they started laughing. Hannah ignored them and
listened to Casey. "Well what do you say?" she asked, excidedly.
"Well ill talk to my mom, hold on a sec" she set down the phone and was gone
for like 5 minutes. when she finally came back she sounded sad.
"..hey" she said.
"oh no she said no?" hannah said, disappointedly.
"...no.." she went to a happy voice "SHE SAID OK!!!"
"Ugh Casey dont DO that to me! you always do that!" they laughed. "Ok ill see you tomarow morning then! bye!" she hung up and screamed and ran over
to joe who she kissed.
---Kristins POV---
"So, whos casey?" i asked curiously, trying to change the subject of the room, away from kevin.
"Well, shes my best friend" hannah explained "her and this girl alli, but her
mom is way protective and would never let her come.. but casey is going to
come with us because i missed her so much.." She finished.
"Oh thats cool" i said, genuanly.
"So who is her favorite jonas brother?" i asked , sitting down by joe and hannah.
I could tell hannah was being hesatent Oh no i thought. she finally responded.
"Uh... nick" she said cautiously. , i noticed she bit her lip. i had picked up the
fact that , that was a habbit she did when she was nervous, and she played
with her hair. i was a little nervous, but nick would never leave me... would he?
---Nick's POV---
I feel like everyone knows somthing i dont know, like everyone is hiding
somthing from me. It dosnt bother me very much, except that kristin hasnt
told me whats up and whats going on. I feel like she isnt holding up her part
in this relashonship, but she is staying on tour with us so i cant just break up
with her unless its a muteral decsision. I dont know what i could, or should
do. Well ill think about it more tomarow, right now im going to sleep.
shopaholicoxxo
10-05-2007, 06:11 PM
MORE! :D
promise you'll write more tonight?
Zanessa Fan1
10-05-2007, 06:16 PM
MORE! :D
promise you'll write more tonight?
ok i promise :P
hannah xo montana xo freak
10-05-2007, 06:16 PM
more more more more
shopaholicoxxo
10-05-2007, 06:44 PM
ok i promise :P
yay :P
awesomeness :D
krrristin
10-05-2007, 06:46 PM
loves it!
Oh did I mention I was sorry?
Zanessa Fan1
10-05-2007, 08:37 PM
loves it!
Oh did I mention I was sorry?
Yes :lol: why???
Casey i might have 2 write it tomarow ;)
shopaholicoxxo
10-05-2007, 08:56 PM
Yes :lol: why???
Casey i might have 2 write it tomarow ;)haha it's ok ;) just write soon. hehe.
Zanessa Fan1
10-06-2007, 12:08 AM
Chapter 21: Casey Arrives
Hannah woke up in a chair with Joe. They had been watching a movie and
apprently had both fallen asleep. She watched him, peacefully sleeping and
layed her head back on his chest , falling asleep again.
About 1 hour later, or so she thought, Jenny ran in and shook her.
"AHH!" she and joe both screamed at the same time, in shock.
"oh my god you scared me..." hannah said. Joe nodded, aggreingly.
"Sorry..." jenny said, cautiously. "But your friend just got here, shes in the lobby!"
Hannah smiled and grabbed joes hand and ran to the elevator. She realized
she had pajama pants on and a tank top, and her hair in a pony-tail. but she
didnt care.
"Uh, hannah" joe said "im in my pajamas.."
"So am i" she said like it was no big deal.
"Yeah, but what is theres paperazzi?" he said. "oh whatever" they heard it
make a 'bing' sound as they reached the lobby.
She saw her friend casey
sitting on the couch. She ran over to her. "CASEY!" she yelled , now hugging
her. Casey stood up and hugged her. "hannah!! i missed you!" she said ,
stopping hugging, noticing joe coming over to them.
nudges hannah as if hannah didnt know.
hannah laughed.Joe put his arm around hannahs shoulder and casey looked
confused.
"Joe, this is my best friend Casey.. Casey , this is my boyfriend joe" she
smiled.
Joe smiled and nodded. "nice to meet you, hannah can i please go change"
hannah looked at him and laughed. "go.."
"thank you!" he ran to the elevator and did a small wave as the doors closed.
"ohmygosh.. no way" casey said, they started happy dancing.
"We obviously have alot to catch up on" Casey said.
Just then she noticed maria walking in. "ugh.. you have no idea..."
shopaholicoxxo
10-06-2007, 12:13 AM
yay im arriving soon :P hahaa
Zanessa Fan1
10-06-2007, 12:15 AM
yay im arriving soon :P hahaa
ya, i wouldnt have posted it yet, but i axcidently clicked to post it, so i edited it now with the whole chapter. going 2 bed, ill post more tomarow!
nighty-night! :wave:
shopaholicoxxo
10-06-2007, 12:48 AM
awesome! :D cant wait for the next chapter
krrristin
10-06-2007, 12:57 PM
I like the edited version :)
Zanessa Fan1
10-06-2007, 12:57 PM
Chapter 22: Casey, If only you knew...
She turned and saw maria,who Hannah had been looking at. "What do you
have against her...?"
"Its a VERY long story, and ill explain it to you later, but right now.. you need
to meet the others, come on"
"Wait.. you mean" she smiled. "nick?"
"Case, theres a problem with that.. he's dating kristin.."
"who?"
"This other girl on tour with them.. shes nice"
Casey sighed. "thats alright, im luckier than Alli! Alli's at school right now" she
laughed.
Hannah laughed, too. "Yeah, come on" they went into the elevator to the right floor. the doors opened and hannah walked out, leading casey, carying one of casey's bags.
Joe saw them in the hallway, now dressed and out of his PJ's. He took the bags from them.
"Thank you" Hannah and Casey said in unicon.
Hannah opened the door so joe could go in. He set down Caseys things and all three of them walked inside.
There sat Sarah and Jenny, still fighting over kevin, and Kristin sitting on one side of the room, Nick on the other.
"Wheres Kevin?" i asked.
"Oh, he's eating breakfast in our room right now" Nick said standing up when he saw Casey. "Who's this?" he asked walking over to them.
Casey just smiled.
Hannah smiled, too. "Oh, sorry " she paused. "Everyone , this is my best friend Casey.. Casey, this is everyone. You already met joe, this is kristin, Jenny, Sarah" she said pointing. "And nick" she smiled. They all said hi to Casey.
"Hi guys, nice to meet you" Casey said, sitting down in a chair."Now, are you going to tell me about the girl in the lobby?"
Hannah gave her a cut it out look and everyone was shaking their heads, nick didnt know yet. "You know i think you said her name was maria?"
"Ahhh.. no" said kristin "this is not good"
casey looked almost as confused as nick did. "Huh?" she asked, cautiously.
Hannah sighed. "Ok well now we HAVE to tell nick..."
Kristin stood up, trying to cover for it. She went over to nick. "Well, its just that we really like her and wanted casey to meet her.."
Nick looked at her, not buying it but nodded. "okay..." he said still confused.
"im going to go talk to kevin.." nick walked out.
"Uh, yeah me too" Joe followed and they both went into where kevin was.
They sat down and poored themselves some ceral.
"Kristin, HOW can you lie to your boyfriend?" hannah asked, sitting down on
her bed. "I mean, i had to tell joe i couldnt stand keeping him out of it"
Before kristin could answer Casey chimed into the conversation. "Out of
WHAT? come on you said you'd tell me!" she said standing and walking over to
Hannah and sitting next to her. Jenny,Sarah,Kristin,and Hannah explained it.
They played the recording from the microphone for her and Casey understood.
"Ok i see..." Casey said, thinking about it.
MEANWHILE WITH THE JONAS BROTHERS:
"So kevin, why are Sarah and Jenny fighting over you..?" Nick asked, taking a bite of his ceral.
"WHAT?" Kevin asked, trying to hide somthing. "since when?"
"Since they found out you liked Sarah.." Joe said.
"Oh.. they found out?" Kevin said.
"Yeah, sorry dude" Joe took another bite of his ceral.
nick turned to joe. "So whats REALLY up with maria?"
Joe told both of his brothers the whole story, and told them they could hear the microphone recording later.
"Oh.. i cant beleive kristin lied to me!" Nick said angry, finishing his ceral.
"Sorry.. i would have told you in there but then krisitn would have yelled at me probubly" he said, finishing his.
"Wow..." kevin said, overwhelmed. "So, they know i like both of them..?ugh this is bad.."
"Yeah, it is" Nick said, chuckling. "Im going to go talk to kristin.."
He walked over there. The only person in there was Casey. "Oh, hey" he said smileing at her.
"Hi" she said walking over to him.
Zanessa Fan1
10-06-2007, 12:58 PM
I like the edited version :)
thank you! =D
krrristin
10-06-2007, 01:02 PM
I lied to my future hubby? Haha well that sucks
BUBBLES YOUR AN AWESOME WRITER!
You're like becoming one of the best!
Whoot
next chap... now :D
Oh and I'll put that one guy you like in my fanfic, the one from as the bell rings, okie dokie :04:
Yeah I'll write it soon if I have time
Zanessa Fan1
10-06-2007, 01:16 PM
I lied to my future hubby? Haha well that sucks
BUBBLES YOUR AN AWESOME WRITER!
You're like becoming one of the best!
Whoot
next chap... now :D
Oh and I'll put that one guy you like in my fanfic, the one from as the bell rings, okie dokie :04:
Yeah I'll write it soon if I have time
Cool, thanks kristin! =D
Ok im going to post some now...
Zanessa Fan1
10-06-2007, 01:32 PM
Chapter 23: Nacey vs. Kick
"So, ummm welcome to the tour!" he said, akwardly.
she laughed and smiled at him. "thank you, uhm so kristin seems nice!" she said, trying to make a conversation.
"Yeah she usually is..." he said sitting down next to Casey. "She just, hasnt been the same latly, shes been lieing to me, ignorning me, staying away from me...i dont know, its like im not good enough for her or somthing.."
Casey shook her head. "Nah, she dosnt know what shes missing, its her loss"
He smiled, thankfully. They both looked at eachother then looked away really quickly.
"Ummm" nick said trying to think of somthing to say.
"Yeah..." she said, akwardly.
they both looked at eachother. Then they kissed, they didnt mean to. i mean he was dating kristin, but they couldnt help it. They heard a squeal and both looked at the door. Kristin had a tear rolling down her cheek and ran out.
Nick sighed. "i should go" he went into his room and slammed his door.
Casey looked down, feeling bad about kristin. She went and found her.
"Look kristin.. im sorry i didnt mean too"
"No, its fine" kristin said. "I dont think its working out anyway..im just worried about whats going to happen if we break up, i mean how can we still be friends.?"
"Well i cant help you with that.." casey said. "You need to talk to nick about it"
"Yeah you're right." she went and found nick. "hey" she said.
"hey , look im so sorr-" He was cut of by kristin speaking.
"I think we need to break up..."She said.
he looked up at her. "what?"
"Yeah, i mean i want to be friends though."
he looked down trying to hide his hurt expression. he liked krisitn, he really did, he just liked casey a little bit too.
kristin could tell he was hurt so she left.
He slammed the door, locking it. He just wanted to be alone, by himself, no one else.
Hannah was standing in the hallway with joe. "what HAPPEND!?"
kristin looked sad too. "We broke up.." she walked away.
hannah and joe didnt even need to say anything. they just nodded as if they had discussed it mentaly with eachother , they said "dont get involved" and bolted in differnt directions. Hannah ran after Kristin, Joe knocked on nick's door. "Come on , dude open the door" He said knocking hard, he then realized he had a pass key and went inside. "We have to get on the buses..."they got their bags and went onto the bus where joe talked to nick. "Why did it happen?"
"i kissed Casey.." nick said "i like them both.. i dont know what to do.."
"Talk to kevin, simular situation.."he said watching sarah and jenny fight in the back of the bus.
Nick sighed. "i just want to be single for a while i guess.. figure things out"
Joe nodded. "Good plan.." he saw hannah sitting with casey and wanted to know what they were saying. "Do you mind if i-" he was cut off.
"No, go ahead" nick said, half smileing, but faking it.
"Thanks" he went back to them to hear this..
"Casey, you shouldnt of done that..." Hannah was saying.
"So what your taking HER side?" Casey said, sounding angry.
"im not taking any side im just saying they were dating, you cant do that!"
"Well fine, some sort of best friend you are" she said storming out, past joe.
Joe walked in and sat down next to her. "So much for not getting involved.."
"You too?" she asked.
He nodded. "Yep, how does this happen? Weve been on tour for a week and theres love triangles everywhere, next we know.. its us"
Hannah just shook her head and snuggled with him on the couch, overwhelmed.
Kevin was talking to Sarah... just casually when jenny walked in.
"Ugh! Sarah!" they started fighting again.
"OH MY GOD! you guys stop fighting over me!" kevin said. "Really , its making me like both of you ALOT less! you DONT want me to choose, one of you will hurt. but if i have to, fine i choose ______________ , ___________ i hope we can still be friends. ___________ walked out.
krrristin
10-06-2007, 01:37 PM
Haha cool...
kinda bummed that Kick died but thats ok lol
I would have been like, "You DONT kiss another girl! Thats the rule of relationships... remember thou shalt not commit adultry?"
haha yeah thats me... when Im mad... I go crazy, you know that xP
marshmallows6565
10-06-2007, 01:58 PM
did you post like 3 chapters last night or am i just lame and wasnt paying attention to you posting more?
lol
love it cant wait for more!!!
krrristin
10-06-2007, 01:58 PM
she posts 100000000 chapters a day lol
shes pro
marshmallows6565
10-06-2007, 02:02 PM
she posts 100000000 chapters a day lol
shes pro
haha
ya i havent posted in a few days...
im so bad lol
niiro_tatsu
10-06-2007, 02:13 PM
he prob choose sarah :P
Zanessa Fan1
10-06-2007, 02:15 PM
Haha cool...
kinda bummed that Kick died but thats ok lol
I would have been like, "You DONT kiss another girl! Thats the rule of relationships... remember thou shalt not commit adultry?"
haha yeah thats me... when Im mad... I go crazy, you know that xP
yeah i know, just wait until the next chapter, you dont keep ur cool
did you post like 3 chapters last night or am i just lame and wasnt paying attention to you posting more?
lol
love it cant wait for more!!!
i post ALOT, very frequently. so u have 2 keep up. lol
she posts 100000000 chapters a day lol
shes pro
hehe thanks
haha
ya i havent posted in a few days...
im so bad lol
haha, thats ok , but post more!
he prob choose sarah :P
*seals lips shut* im not saying until i post the next part
niiro_tatsu
10-06-2007, 02:19 PM
well post more!!!
krrristin
10-06-2007, 02:35 PM
post now please
im leaving soon
Zanessa Fan1
10-06-2007, 03:08 PM
Chapter 24: We need to talk
Kevin was talking to Sarah... just casually when jenny walked in.
"Ugh! Sarah!" they started fighting again.
"OH MY GOD! you guys stop fighting over me!" kevin said. "Really , its making me like both of you ALOT less! you DONT want me to choose, one of you will hurt. but if i have to, fine i choose Sarah ,Jenny i hope we can still be friends.Jenny walked out, her heart in many peices..
Kristin walked onto the bus and sat down. nick walked over to her. "we need
to talk, kristin he was about to say somthing else when she cut him off."Fine,
ill talk you listen. i kept my cool yesterday, but not anymore.." she sighed.
"Nick we've obviously grown appart, and I can see your not the least bit
intrested in mending our relationship since you kissed another girl WHILE we
were dating..." she finished , waiting for a responce or an explaination from him.
"Look, kristin... it was a mistake! i love you, and only you. its just you've been keeping things from me which made my question our relashonship thats all, i swear it didnt mean anything...when she broke up with me , my heart hurt... bad"
She had been looking down. She stood up and looked at him. "Good because now mabye you know how i felt when i saw you two kissing" she walked away. He considered following her but figured she'd rather be alone. he sighed.
Casey walked over to him. "hi" she smiled fliratiously.
"Just... just dont talk to me" he walked away and got into his bunk.
---Joe's POV---
"So, what are we going to do? Nick is upset, Kristin is mad, Casey is confused, Kevin is in a love triangle, jenny is upset, and sarah is mad..." I said, then sighed.
Hannah looked at me and shrugged. "i have no idea.. but one thing is for sure, the maria situation is going to be much harder..."
"I think she won, this is what maria wanted.. exactly what she wanted.."
"What did i want..?" maria asked walking in.
Hannah stood up and walked over to her, mad.
---Hannah's POV---
I could kill maria right now. It was her fault, Jenny and Sarah wouldnt know
about kevin if it wasnt for Maria, and Kristin wouldnt of had to lie to nick.. i
wanted to finish this, end all the fighting and go back to the fairytale as it
seemed a few days before.
But that was over, the war had begun and there was no turning back, not
until someone won. But one thing is for sure.. Theres NO WAY im going to let
that person be maria... and thats a promise.
shopaholicoxxo
10-06-2007, 03:22 PM
aww I was getting excited for Nasey for a moment xD but now he won't talk to me ):
there needs to be a huge catfight between me and kristin xD and then he needs to choose *cough*preferablyme*cough* :P I mean kristin LIED to him :o I never did anything mean to him...
anyways, post moorrreeeee!!!!!!!!
Zanessa Fan1
10-06-2007, 04:52 PM
aww I was getting excited for Nasey for a moment xD but now he won't talk to me ):
there needs to be a huge catfight between me and kristin xD and then he needs to choose *cough*preferablyme*cough* :P I mean kristin LIED to him :o I never did anything mean to him...
anyways, post moorrreeeee!!!!!!!!
ill post more later
PursePrincess4eva
10-06-2007, 05:11 PM
So evil! Muahaha! =] LOL post more! =] Ruining realtionships is my specialty. LOL =]
Zanessa Fan1
10-06-2007, 05:22 PM
Chapter 25: The Cat Fights
"Maria... we know all about your plan, to break us all up and let me too you it
isnt going to work, what did they do to you? You dont even KNOW us... and
yet you think you know whats best for all of us? Well let me tell you.. you
dont, i think you are just a shallow person who thinks they own what
everyone does and how they do it, well you DONT!" she had lost control. Joe
was calming her down. She could see a tear forming in maria's eye. She felt
kinda bad, she suddenly calmed down and saw maria run out of the room.
They got to their next spot in about 1 hour, since it was in the same state.
They all got off the bus and Sarah, Jenny, Kevin, Hannah, and Joe all walked
right in.
Casey was walking in when kristin stopped her, in the parking lot.
"Who do you think you are!? " she yelled. "Stealing MY boyfriend, and you dont even know him.. well , i do know him."
"Yeah well he obviously likes my better than you and thats why he kissed me"
"UGH!" kristin pushed her and casey pushed back. Kristin went inside, and
casey followed.
---Hannah's POV---
I felt bad about Maria. I ran after her when she ran into the hotel and finally
caught up with her. It turns out she just is jelous and dosnt like sharing her
cousins because they are basiclly the only family she has. Apparently, her
dad left her family when they were young so its just her, her mom, and her sister Katie. Then her cousins, so she just didnt want to loose them to other
people.
I ended up talking to her for 1 whole hour, just meeting her and hearing about her life. She learned about me too. And she promised to back off of everyone. I smiled approvingly and said goodbye. I left and told the others, who had managed to be in a room without fighting. At the beginning of the day there were 3 problems, the nick/casey/krisitn problem, the kevin/sarah/jenny problem, and the maria problem. 1 down, 2 to go.
Nick walked over to Kristin. "i REALLY need to talk to you.."
smileyface93
10-06-2007, 05:24 PM
more!!
shopaholicoxxo
10-06-2007, 06:23 PM
MORE MORE MORE! :D
(please. :P)
niiro_tatsu
10-06-2007, 07:21 PM
i knew he would choose sarah :p
PursePrincess4eva
10-06-2007, 08:15 PM
=] Yay! Im not evil anymore. IM still a main character though, right? =]
Zanessa Fan1
10-06-2007, 08:48 PM
=] Yay! Im not evil anymore. IM still a main character though, right? =]
hehe yes u are, in fact.. well u will find out :P lets just say cody linley is coming into the story, maria *hint-hint*
krrristin
10-06-2007, 11:04 PM
more!
Zanessa Fan1
10-07-2007, 11:07 AM
Chapter 26: All's Fair in love and war
Kristin sighed and looked at him. "i already told you what i have to say-"
"Well then this time ILL talk and YOU listen" he sat down next to her. "I didnt mean anything by kissing her, i love you kristin... and ive never said that about anyone other than a family member before.. but i really do, and i dont want to loose this because of my one stupid, stupid mistake.." he sighed.
Kristin had been looking down and away. she looked up at him. "what do you want then?"
"I want this to end, i want the constant fight to be over, and us just to be together again.."
she thought for a second. "ill get back to you on that.." she walked away and down to the pool deck to talk to hannah.
---Hannah's POV---
When i saw kristin coming i was worried, i dont want to get involved but how can i not? I mean i DO have an oppinion, but they are both my best friends. how do i choose? I cant.. i wont.
"Hey hannah" i heard kristin say as she sat down next to me.
"hi" i said back, sheepishly.
"Ok so i know you want to stay imparshel and not get involved-" i didnt let her finish.
"So much for that plan, im pretty much as involved as you are"
"What'd you mean? whos side are you on??"
"Well, im on nick's side, and Casey is pretty much confident that im on yours, just because i told her that she shouldnt have done that"
"thanks" kristin said, smileing now.
"no problem" i sighed "what were you saying before..?"
"Oh yeah!" she said, remembering. "Well, nick wants to get back together with me and i really do love him but i dont know if i should, i mean he really hurt me."
"Well, will you be happy without him?" i said , making a point.
"No..." she said, agreeingly. "ok you're right i wont, but what if he hurts me again?"
"Honestly, Kristin.. i dont think he will" Casey walked up and I left, mad at Casey.
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Casey walked over to Kristin. "hi... kristin" she said.
she sighed. "hey... casey"
"So i see you are turning nick down, its just as well. i mean he would just kiss me again anyway, its so obvious he likes me"
kristin laughed. "yeah right, the only way he would choose you is if i were gone"
"Well, sounds like a good plan to me" she said pushing her. Her ring caught on kristins shirt . making a whole in the bottom of it. Kristin gasped.
"i KNOW you didnt just make a whole in my new abercrobie shirt...." she said getting angryer.
"I didnt mean to i swear" Casey said, lying.
"Ugh!" Kristin stormed off, to where nick was.
"What happend...?" he asked, seeing the whole in her shirt.
She sighed. "Casey happend..."
eizy12306
10-07-2007, 11:17 AM
Awesome-Ness! :D
PursePrincess4eva
10-07-2007, 01:37 PM
Hehe! =] =] More!
krrristin
10-07-2007, 02:29 PM
Kristin get back together with Nick!
haha omg I love it! Write more PLEASEEEE
can me and casey be friends?
how is it gonna end :O
MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
IM BEGGING YOU!
shopaholicoxxo
10-07-2007, 05:11 PM
aww man.. I'm seriously not thaat evil. really. can't I like, apologize to her or something? I would have never done anything like that. lol. well I wouldve kissed him but then apologized and stuff and asked nick if we could be friends still.
anyways, write MORE! :D
krrristin
10-08-2007, 07:51 PM
bubleessssssssssssss post!
shopaholicoxxo
10-08-2007, 10:35 PM
KATIEEEEEE
post somethinggg :P
krrristin
10-09-2007, 06:24 PM
Ms.... Katie
you need to post
or I'll eat you :)
Zanessa Fan1
10-09-2007, 06:27 PM
aww man.. I'm seriously not thaat evil. really. can't I like, apologize to her or something? I would have never done anything like that. lol. well I wouldve kissed him but then apologized and stuff and asked nick if we could be friends still.
anyways, write MORE! :D
I just needed that to happen for that one chapter, i kno you would never do that. u will appologise. dont worry ;)
bubleessssssssssssss post!
hehe ok
Ms.... Katie
you need to post
or I'll eat you :)
*screams* ok, ok!
KATIEEEEEE
post somethinggg :P
hehe alright, POSTING MORE!
Kristin get back together with Nick!
haha omg I love it! Write more PLEASEEEE
can me and casey be friends?
how is it gonna end :O
MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
IM BEGGING YOU!
lol
Zanessa Fan1
10-09-2007, 06:36 PM
Chapter 27: Sorrys all around
---Casey's POV---
I walked to where Nick and Kristin were.I couldnt beleive what i had done, i mean that was
NOT like me. even ask Hannah! i was usually nice to EVERYONE, i think i just lost control...
But i was going to fix it, whatever it was going to take. First i needed to talk to krisitn.
"Hey Kristin.. uhmm can i talk to you?" i asked, innocently.
she sighed and walked into the hallway with me. "Look if your going to yell at me again
then-" she was cutt of by my talking.
"Your the one that should be doing the yelling" i sighed " im sorry this was all one big
mistake, im usually not like this at all, even ask Hannah... and i really dont want to fight
with you.. can we just forget this happend and be friends?"
Kristin sighed to herself. she nodded. "Ok" she smiled, peacfully. "Friends"
"Alright, well hopfully nick will forgive me" I said walking into where nick was.
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She walked into where nick was. "Ok, im going to tell you what i told krisitn. im sorry it
was a mistake, i hope we can be friends." she sighed, once more.
nick thought for a second. "Fine.. sounds good, now i need to go talk to kristin. ill talk to
you later"
"K bye" she said sitting down. Nick walked out.
Hannah entered right after nick left. "Ok, im sorry. i shouldnt of blamed it all on you.."
"No im sorry, i shouldnt of assumed you were against me just because you dis-agreeed
with me.." they hugged.
Sarah was walking through the hallway when she bumped into Jenny.
Neither one spoke, or made eye-contact.
Sarah sighed. "i stole him... and i feel terrible about it"
Jenny looked up. "Huh?"
"Kevin" she said. "I knew it was happening but didnt stop it" she shook her head. "I liked
him to much to think about who else it would affect.. and im sorry"
Jenny sighed. "yeah.. me too" she walked past her, upset still. Sarah just sighed and sunk
down in a chair.
Maria sat next to her and Sarah just left. Maria sighed.
krrristin
10-09-2007, 06:50 PM
post post post post post post post post post post post post
we need some couplesssssss
whoot whoot
Zanessa Fan1
10-09-2007, 06:56 PM
post post post post post post post post post post post post
we need some couplesssssss
whoot whoot
hehe ill post more later tonight ;)
and there will be couples, its just in that chapter i needed to fix all the fights
PursePrincess4eva
10-09-2007, 07:14 PM
Maria sighed.
LOL so dramatic, Bubbles! =]
krrristin
10-09-2007, 07:23 PM
haha makeups breakups!
all the best in a ff
shopaholicoxxo
10-09-2007, 10:15 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE! :D
hehe.
Zanessa Fan1
10-10-2007, 05:50 PM
Chapter 28: Cody Linley?
---Joe's POV---
Everything was good again, well ALMOST everthing, i should say. We still needed to fix the sarah/jenny/kevin problem and hope for the best when it comes to kristin and nick.
But the maria problem and hannah/casey problems were solved. even the kristen/nick/casey problem was. Things were looking good, for once, as me nick and kevin got ready for our concert.
Sarah was trying to talk to jenny but jenny was just ignoring her. Sarah seemed hurt, but i could tell the real hurt person was jenny.
I finished getting ready and got in the limo with hannah, without the others.
"It sure is taking them a long time" hannah said, looking out the window at the hotel waiting for the other girls and my brothers.
"Yeah, well it cant be easy to get ready when all this drama is going on, hard to concintrate i imagine" I said..
hannah laughed. "does it take that much consintration..?"
"point taken.." i said , laughing slightly. I was happy that through all this nothing was coming between hannah and i.
Just then maria came into the limo with us. "hey guys " she said, smiling at us. She sat down next to hannah.
"Hey" hannah said. i smiled at both of them.
"hi" i said, grinning. i looked out the window to see that the others were coming, except... where was nick and kristin?
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"Ok so what do we do know?" kristin asked... they were still in the lobby, the others all waiting for them in the limo.
"we go to the concert" nick said , picking up his guitar.
"Well, i know that" she said, impatiently. "i meant about us!"
"What do you mean? i though we just said that-" kristin cut him off.
"i know that we are back together, i just meant, what are we going to do tomarow..? you know for the date you said we were going to have?" she said laughing alittle.
"Oh" he laughed. "Right. you scared me" they got into the limo with the others and it started driving . it stopped at the place they were preforming at and they all got out and went in.
there stood Cody Linley. "what?" hannah said confused, looking at joe.
"Oh he's here, he's a friend of mileys"
"Oh so she has friends now..?" hannah and joe laughed a little and walked over to cody, holding hands.
Behind them, the rest walked in and saw him.
"Ohhh..." Casey Said, spotting him.
"My..." Jenny said, agreeingly.
"Gosh!" maria smiled to herself.
PursePrincess4eva
10-10-2007, 06:46 PM
Cody LINLEY! LOL.
I think you should make him like Maria, and then she should act hard-to-get. =]
Zanessa Fan1
10-10-2007, 07:00 PM
Cody LINLEY! LOL.
I think you should make him like Maria, and then she should act hard-to-get. =]
Actually you and casey. i dont know who gets him yet ..lol
PursePrincess4eva
10-10-2007, 07:02 PM
But remember i asked you about maria liking someone, and then you said cody linley, and then you said 'Wink Wink'
shopaholicoxxo
10-10-2007, 09:43 PM
OHMYGOSH CODY LINLEY :o *drools*
:P
i wuvv him.
holy shizz. :]]
he likes me! i get him! xD
hahhahaa.
secretive_angel
10-10-2007, 10:45 PM
more pleazzzzzzzzzzz
krrristin
10-10-2007, 10:54 PM
morezzz
Zanessa Fan1
10-10-2007, 11:26 PM
But remember i asked you about maria liking someone, and then you said cody linley, and then you said 'Wink Wink'
i dont remember that...
OHMYGOSH CODY LINLEY :o *drools*
:P
i wuvv him.
holy shizz. :]]
he likes me! i get him! xD
hahhahaa.
hehe
morezzz
dude, whats up with ur avvie? :o
Zanessa Fan1
10-13-2007, 02:58 PM
Chapter 29: We gotta keep this together..
---Joe's POV---
i saw Cody walked over to the girls . i felt lucky , and relived, that hannah didnt like cody.
But i still felt protective so i put my arm around her whenever cody looked at us, marking my territory.
It wouldnt hurt for Jenny to move on though, then Sarah and Kevin could be happy.
I saw everyone in their own corners of the room. Kevin and Sarah across the room from me and hannah, sitting in a few chairs.
Maria, Cody, and Casey sitting in another corner. Nick and Kristin sitting in another, and Jenny kinda wondering.
"Oh god... " i said "We have GOT to keep this together"
I heard hannah sigh, then she spoke. "what if we cant?"
i just kissed her forehead and held her, everything was falling apart and we were still in the second week of the tour. Who knew what was going to happen next?
Me, Kevin, and Nick went and got ready for the concert as Cody talked to hannah.
She was the only one who wasnt going totally crazy over him, thank god.
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---Cody's POV---
I was talking to Hannah. She could be a good friend, i think shes nice but shes taken. But ive got options, 3 girls all going crazy for me, all likeing me.
"This is the life" i said leaning back in my chair. as soon as the words came out of my mouth i realized it was a mistake.
Hannah gave me a very suspicious look just then, "Whats that supposed to mean?" she said looking rather uncomfortable now.
"Huh? what do you mean? " i asked, cautious and nervously.
"What you just said, what do you mean?"
"I um.. well, you know i ugh.. yeah" i said...hesitatingly.
she gave me an accusing look, "your TOTALLY enjoying this arnt you..? you cant string them along, we have enough trouble as it is without you in the middle"
"Fine, whatever" i said walking away. I noticed her rolling her eyes, i just ignored it , walking over to the girls.
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"Oh hey Cody!" Casey said, smileing at him.
"Hi. " he said, flirtatiously. "Uhm, do you want to go out after the concert tonight.. mabye" he said, nervously.
"Yeah id love to!" Casey smiled and Cody walked away. The Jonas Brothers started playing and everyone watched, everyone except Jenny and Maria. they were talking in the corner.
"He chose her" Jenny said, thinking.
"Yeah i know, you dont have to rub my face in it!" maria said.
"wait, what? i was talking about kevin.." she said. "what happend with you?"
"Ugh, i dont want to talk about it" maria said, watching cody from the other side of the room.
the concert ended and casey got in cody's limo instead of ours. We all went back to the hotel and they went out.
Joe and i went out to see the movie 'Across The Universe' with kristin and nick.
we sat down in out seats, but i couldnt stop thinking about how everything in our lives were falling apart.
PursePrincess4eva
10-13-2007, 03:53 PM
My cody is no more..=[ Eeep.
Zanessa Fan1
10-13-2007, 03:55 PM
My cody is no more..=[ Eeep.
dont sound so sure about it ;]
secretive_angel
10-13-2007, 05:13 PM
more ploeazzzzzzzzzz
shopaholicoxxo
10-13-2007, 11:48 PM
yayyy write MORE :Ddont sound so sure about it ;]noooo ):
i deserve at least one long term relationship
first nick lasted like ... an hour
and now cody will end too? grrr :P
Zanessa Fan1
10-13-2007, 11:49 PM
yayyy write MORE :Dnoooo ):
i deserve at least one long term relationship
first nick lasted like ... an hour
and now cody will end too? grrr :P
i didnt say that, did i? no.
i didnt REALLY answer either of your questions.
shopaholicoxxo
10-13-2007, 11:53 PM
i didnt say that, did i? no.
i didnt REALLY answer either of your questions.haha okkk :P
the suspense is killing me. xD
post more tonight?
Zanessa Fan1
10-13-2007, 11:54 PM
haha okkk :P
the suspense is killing me. xD
post more tonight?
probubly i wont be able to, since im going to bed in l ike 10 minutes
but ill post more tomarow! ;]
shopaholicoxxo
10-13-2007, 11:57 PM
probubly i wont be able to, since im going to bed in l ike 10 minutes
but ill post more tomarow! ;]oh, ok. ;]
looking forward to it! :D
Zanessa Fan1
10-14-2007, 07:33 PM
Chapter 30: Cant we see eye-to-eye?
---Jenny's POV---
great, joe's taken, kevin's taken, now cody's taken. ugh. no one likes me. i swear thats how it feels. The only person who i can even talk to anymore is Hannah. But still, its hard because i know whatver i tell her , im basiclly telling to joe, because she is going to tell him everything. Uggh, when did my life get so complicated...? oh yeah, the day of the jonas brothers concert... If i could change that day.. well, i wouldnt!
Wow, i just relized ive been sitting back watching Sarah steal kevin instead of trying to keep him! im letting this happen to me! I cant just give up, i have to fight back!
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---Kevins POV---
It's really late right now, everyone is sleeping, atleast i think so. I wouldnt be suprised if everyone is just thinking, not asleep.
I think we have to get on the bus soon. Casey got back not too long ago from her date with Cody, she seemed happy. i cant say im suprised.
I sighed, then relized i made a noise, when joe and nick both looked at me. "sorry" i said, rolling over and getting back to my mental conversation with myself.
i really do like jenny, alot. But i kinda like Sarah, too. I never wanted to pick one of them, i wasnt ready, it just slipped out and i was mad at jenny for freaking out, so i chose sarah! and i cant fix it without hurting someones feelings. i really dont know what to do, and i dont have anyone on my side, because im in the middle of a fight. I just wish things could go back to how they were before. When we were all happy and on tour together.
The worst part? We have a concert in cali tomarwo so we also have an interveiw tomarow with the girls coming too! apparently the interveiwer thinks people should know EVERYONE on the tour.
I cant imagine this going well. Oh well, tomarows going to be crazy, i should probubly get some rest. I fell asleep, just then.
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The next day everyone got up in California, apparently sometime during the night they had gotten on the bus, but because they were all so sleepy, they never fully woke up and didnt remember it. They woke up on the buses, which were parked somewhere, getting gas.
Hannah got of the girls bus in her pajama's and went into the gas station store. she bought a small box of cereal and payed for it, when she was walking out she bumped into joe. "oh hey" she smiled.
"hi" he smiiled too and both of them got on the boys bus. They started driving again, Hannah and the guys on one bus, the rest of the girls on he other bus.
They got to the hotel and went inside. They got ready for the interveiw and got in the car they were takeing. They started driving. Kevin was whispering to Sarah and Jenny at the same time. This made hannah nervous, not sure what they were saying.
They got there. "This should be interesting" joe whisperd to hannah., walking into the building , holding hands with her.
Hannah laughed alittle. she sighed. "Im not sure if id use the word interesting..."
krrristin
10-14-2007, 07:39 PM
morreeeeeee
shopaholicoxxo
10-14-2007, 08:01 PM
moreeeeeeeeeeeeee! :D
Zanessa Fan1
10-15-2007, 09:08 PM
Chapter 31: The Interview
---Joe’s POV---
We all walked into the interview, backstage together. It was Cody, Miley, Hannah , Jenny, Sarah, Kristin, Nick, Kevin, and I. First they called Cody and Miley on stage. They walked on smiling as I watched with Hannah from backstage. I squeezed her hand, nervously and she squeezed it back. We smiled at each other and then they called Me, Nick, and Kevin out so I let go of her hand and kissed her cheek. She wished me good luck and we walked out.
Then they did an introduction of the others that went like this…
“These next girls you will not know, they aren’t famous, they’re just normal girls like you and me” the interviewer said.
I tried not to laugh at this, but this person was like 40 or 50, way different than the girls, I stopped thinking about this and started listening to her again.
“They are on tour with the boys and Miley and good friends with them”
I noticed nick laughed a bit at the ‘good friends’ comment.
“Here they are, and they’re names are, Sarah” Sarah walked out and sat down next to Kevin.
“Jenny” jenny walked out and sat in the chair, the rest of us were on the couch. Kevin go the message she was sending and felt kind of bad, I could tell. “Kristin” Kristin walked out and sat next to nick, smiling. “Casey” Casey walked out and sat by Cody.
“And finally, Hannah” I smiled at the sound of her name and watched her come out. She sat next to me and I took her hand. Some people made whistling sounds and we both blushed a little.
The interviewer asked Kevin some questions and me and nick, just in general about the band. The normal questions we always get like ‘are you really brothers?’. That question is ridiculous but, whatever.
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The interviewer then looked at Joe and Hannah. “well, you too seem cozy ”she said with a smirk on her face.
They both blushed again. Then they both laughed, a little nervously.
“Ummm, yeah we are” Joe said.
Hannah nodded, agreeing. “Yeah.” She smiled at Joe and he smiled back.
People made noises from the audience, they’re faces bright red.
She then moved on to Kristin and Nick. They blushed. “So..” she began.
We all laughed a little.
krrristin
10-15-2007, 09:11 PM
loves it
more now
missxheadstrong
10-15-2007, 09:16 PM
OMG i love this.
(:
great job.
Zanessa Fan1
10-15-2007, 09:24 PM
loves it
more now
I'll post more later tonight or tomarow. ;]
PursePrincess4eva
10-15-2007, 09:34 PM
When is me in it? =[
More!
Zanessa Fan1
10-15-2007, 09:48 PM
When is me in it? =[
More!
hehe, ur in the next chapter, dont worry. ;]
munchkingirl822969
10-16-2007, 12:49 AM
Okay......when are you going to write more??:D:D:P:P
shopaholicoxxo
10-16-2007, 08:17 AM
awwh I'm not in the interview :P hehe.
well WRITE MORE!!!
Zanessa Fan1
10-16-2007, 04:25 PM
awwh I'm not in the interview :P hehe.
well WRITE MORE!!!
uhm.. yeah you are. lol read it , again.
and im writing more later today
munchkingirl822969
10-18-2007, 07:31 PM
good.:D
munchkingirl822969
10-23-2007, 02:26 AM
You said you were going to write more.It's pretty good.Can't wait till you write more.
Zanessa Fan1
10-23-2007, 08:00 AM
its cause i started a new fanfiction so this one is over ;)
MileyWorld__Girl_05
10-24-2007, 12:09 PM
Aw man! CURSE YE!
secretive_angel
11-03-2007, 04:05 PM
more pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Zanessa Fan1
11-03-2007, 04:08 PM
please dont bump old threads. ;)
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