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MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-16-2007, 07:18 PM
Summary: After Miley’s breakup with Jake Ryan (Achy Jakey Heart), Miley realized that she didn’t want him away from her life. Jake has the same thoughts, but when rumors spread that Miley is dating Oliver, (and yes, just rumors, none of them are true) Jake thinks is chances are over. Miley hears these too, and wonders who would spread these rumors.

Want more? I need 3 or more comments. This is gonna be good! I promise to ya!

HannahMontanaFan9463
09-16-2007, 08:13 PM
i do! please write it!!!!!!!

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-17-2007, 11:54 AM
Anyone else? I need at least 2 more comments!

HannahMontanaFan9463
09-17-2007, 03:48 PM
1. please
2. write it!

there those are 2 more comments!

atisdale01
09-17-2007, 03:54 PM
LOL^Hurry up write it

cutiepie7897
09-17-2007, 04:12 PM
more

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-17-2007, 04:34 PM
Ok, ok, calm down! lol


Chapter 1

Setting: Miley’s House

Robby Ray: Mornin’ bud, you ready for school after Labor Day weekend?
Miley: Yeah, whatever.
*Robby makes some pancakes with milk then asks Miley*
Robby: Have you heard in the news? “Jake Ryan’s going to New York the same time Hannah Montana has her concert in the Big Apple”!
Miley: Jake? Aw who cares!
Robby: Bud, I know that look.
Miley: What look???
Robby: The one you have plastered on your face when there’s something on your mind.
Miley: *sighs* Well, I know this is totally weird, but for some reason, I still have… some feelings for… Oh never mind!
Robby: Who?
Miley: I said, “Never mind!”!
Robby: C’mon, bud, you know you can trust your ole man!
Miley: I still… have some feelings… for… Jake.
Robby: I thought that you thought that he was too obnoxious.
Miley: Well, maybe I’ve been too harsh. Oh, who am I kidding?? Jake won’t like me after what I did!
Robby: Speaking of which, there’s a letter from a Lesley?
Miley: Gimme that!

Dear Miley,
I feel terrible about being so obnoxious. I don’t want to do anything like that again. I have someone that’s gonna help me be more like a normal person like you. I also plan to go to your school and act like a normal person. You should be able to recognize me. But if not, I will promise to let you know I’m there. I miss and hope to see you again.
Love, Lesley (Jake)

Miley: I’m gonna keep this one!

*Miley gets dropped off at school and then waves her dad good-bye*


Setting: Seaview High School
Miley: Hey y’all!
Lilly: Hey Miley! Guess what! We have a new student, and he looks freakishly familiar!
Oliver: Totally! It’s like we met him before!
Miley: I bet I know…
Oliver and Lilly: Who?!
Miley: *whispers* Jake.
Lilly and Oliver: WHAT?!
Miley: Shh!
Girl: Did you hear? Miley Stewart’s dating Oliver!
Boy: Really?
Girl: Yeah!
Amber: Oh, who would have thought Miley would choose such a weirdo!
Ashley: I know!
Amber and Ashley: It’s so, freaky! Oooo! Tsssssss!

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-17-2007, 04:35 PM
Tell me how y'all think of it!

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-17-2007, 04:42 PM
P.S. This is my first fan fiction, so if something doesn't makes sense, that's why.

xoxdestinynightxox
09-17-2007, 04:53 PM
Its soo cool colud u carry on plz plz

MileyCyrusRules943
09-17-2007, 04:56 PM
please more i luv it!!!!!
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Loverya56
09-17-2007, 05:41 PM
More:)
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AllisonTame
09-17-2007, 05:48 PM
More!!

Miley2vanessafan
09-17-2007, 05:50 PM
yeah hurry

Slashedx
09-17-2007, 05:59 PM
x] Continue!!

LotsaBigHearts
09-17-2007, 06:04 PM
That's really good!!

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-17-2007, 07:27 PM
Ok, ok, lemme just write Chapter 2! Sheesh! Haven't people forgotten about homework and stuff????? lol

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-17-2007, 07:31 PM
Ok, I need help on Jake's secret name for school. Any ideas? P.S. PLZ make sure it makes sense! lol P.P.S. It cannot be Jake Ryan, of course!

HannahMontanaFan9463
09-17-2007, 08:14 PM
hm, maybe John Lesley? IDK!!!!

please continue ASAP!!!!!!!!

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-17-2007, 08:34 PM
lol no way! TOO GIRLY! AAAH! lol

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-17-2007, 08:37 PM
Any more suggestions that are not girly? *looks at HannahMontanaFan9463 strangly*

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-17-2007, 11:16 PM
Oh, come on, people! Don't make me go with Josh Lesley! lol

megdolphinlover
09-17-2007, 11:18 PM
how bout ryan sumthing...idn ryan lesley...lol...idn

ryan smith lol

EDIT: new name lol.....taylor sumthing lol....taylor hmmmmm taylor jackson...no taylor hmm idn taylor johnson......idn must be taylor sumthing!!!! MUST BE TAYLOR SUMTHING!!!!

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-17-2007, 11:21 PM
Ok, people! no worry! I found a name! Now I can continue my story!

megdolphinlover
09-17-2007, 11:22 PM
i edited plz start it with taylor. plz plz plz taylor sumthing plz!

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-18-2007, 11:21 AM
How about um... Ryan Taylor? Don't worry Meg, it's got taylor in it! lol

xoxdestinynightxox
09-18-2007, 01:21 PM
C'mon u said u had 1 so write girl write

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-18-2007, 01:26 PM
Chapter 2
Setting: Ms. Kunkle’s Classroom

Skunkle (haha, I’m evil!): Class I know it’s a little strange for this to happen during the middle of the school year, but, please welcome our new student,Ryan Taylor.
Amber: Hey, cutie.
“Ryan”: Uh, hi. Bye.
Lilly: He sounds just like Jake.
Miley *whispers*: I told you!
*After class; Miley’s locker*
Lilly: I still can’t believe *whispers* Jake *not whispering* is at our school!
Oliver: I know! How’d you know there’d be a new kid that’s Jake?
Lilly and Miley: Shhhh!!!
Miley: Oliver! It seems like you can’t keep secrets except my “little” one.
Oliver: Sorry! That’s why mom likes me! Because I keep telling secrets!
Miley: Well you might as well have duct tape on your mouth, bub!
Lilly: That’s kinda funny! And is bub even a word?
Miley: No, pretty much, my dad and I invented it.
*Mr. Corelly’s classroom*
Corelly: Welcome class, I’m sure some of you have already welcomed our new student, Ryan Taylor.
Amber, Ashley, Miley, Oliver, Lilly, and Dandruff Danny: Yep.
Corelly: Well, back to work. Blah blach bladdidy blah… *pompous rambling, lol*
*At lunch*
Amber: Hey, Ryan, sit with us!
“Ryan”: Um, okay…
*Amber’s and Ashley’s eyes do their part to attract a boy*
Ashley: So, where are you from?
Ryan: Um… uh… San Diego, yeah. Um, *cough*!
Ashley: Oh my. Have you been to Sea World?
Ryan: Uh, yeah. Whatever.
Miley: I don’t understand what he sees in them! Aarg!
Lilly: Well, they’re pretty, popular…
Miley: Ok, we get it! Gosh!
Oliver: Why are you so ticked about that?
Miley: Well, I kinda… no! I’m a really miss Jake…
Some weird kid: Aw, Miley and Ollie, sitting in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G. First comes love, then comes marriage, then comes a baby in the…
Miley: Shut up Danny!
Dandruff Danny: Fine!
Lilly: What was that all about?
Oliver: Well, y’know how you were sick last week?
Lilly: Duh!
Miley: Well, since you were gone, Oliver and I were hanging out because you were gone, and we don’t have any friends except me, you, and Oliver and people thought we were dating ever since.
Lilly: So that’s why people are spreading rumors about that?
Oliver and Miley: Yep.
Ryan: What was that all about?
Amber: Well, last week, Miley and Oliver started dating, and they were hanging out all week.
Ashley: And that’s why.
Ashley and Amber: It’s really weird. Oooo! Tsssssss!
Ryan: Oookay…
*The bell rings for the end of lunch, Amber porously bumps into Miley, making her drop her tray*
Amber: Be careful where you’re going!
Ashley: Yeah!
Amber and Ashley: And ask your boyfriend to help you! Oooo! Tsssssss! Hahahaha.
*Jake gives Miley a sympathetic look, and then continues to follow Amber and Ashley*


Hope y'all likes this one!

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-18-2007, 03:39 PM
Ok, I need a little help for Chapter 3 for Jake's point of view and the rest of the chapter. Any ideas? Thanks!

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-18-2007, 08:31 PM
Come on, people! Don't be shy! I NEED HELP! Sheesh! lol

megdolphinlover
09-18-2007, 10:34 PM
ummm idn...lol...srry...more tho

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-18-2007, 11:47 PM
Ok. Lemme sleep on it. I promise, I'll get it up by tomorrow afternoon after I finish School.

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-19-2007, 12:14 PM
People! *Mimics Miley* Oh, come on! Don't be a little scardey cat!

HannahMontanaFan9463
09-19-2007, 03:58 PM
sorry! i havent been on for a while... :) anyways, i dont have any ideas. this is really good! continue ASAP!!!!!!!!

megdolphinlover
09-19-2007, 09:18 PM
more?

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-19-2007, 10:38 PM
Ok ok, here ya go! Gosh!

Chapter 3
Setting: Study Hall
Aw, man! I can’t believe Miley’s dating Oliver. I lost my chance. I might as well die. But then, what about Zombie High? Oh crud. I’m so stupid! Darn. Jake was trying to calm himself during Study Hall, but didn’t really work. He tried to look on the bright side of things, but no path there, either.
Why would people think that me and Oliver are dating? We only hang out because Lilly was sick and I had no other friend. Aw man, Jake might think that we are dating! If he still likes me, he’s lost his chance, or so he thinks.
Setting: Lilly’s house

Miley: Aw man! Lilly, how can I show Jake that Oliver and I never dated?
Lilly: Hm… have you even talked to him?
Miley: Acheeh... No.
Lilly: Exactly.
Miley: Lilly, focus and pay attention! Didn’t you see anything about Amber and Ashley being overly protective about him? Their all like, “Back off, woman! He’s mine!” It’s like he’s already dating them!
Lilly: Hey, how about we sleep on it, and present our ideas tomorrow?
Miley: Lilly, that’s why I love you!
Lilly: LYLAS?
Miley: LYLAS!



I know this chapter was short, but I couldn't think of anything! lol

megdolphinlover
09-20-2007, 12:29 AM
i no i sound stupid wats lylas mean? lol mores!!!

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-23-2007, 03:18 PM
LYLAS means Love Ya Like A Sister

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-23-2007, 03:19 PM
Sorry for not writing lately, WAY too much going on write now, but I promise to update ASAP!

hannahmontana_luver0320
09-24-2007, 08:48 AM
omg i use LYLAS all the time but when im tlkin to my guy friends i say LYLAB!!!!!!
ne way this is really good PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ continue

Vanessa*rox*my*sox*
09-24-2007, 11:02 AM
Great story!please continue and keep up the good work!

MileyWorld__Girl_05
11-02-2007, 05:11 PM
OK, I should have my story up by tonight! Sorry if I'm taking too long. At least this one isn't like those who hasn't updated their FFs for a year!