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destinysmiles!
09-16-2007, 12:09 AM
This is my first fanfic and wish you like it :)
Chapter 1:
At Ricos
Lilly: miley when r u going to give me the apple you owe me?
Miley: are you still mad about that?
Lilly: no, but i want that apple, and im hungry
Miley: ok, but i dont think ricos sell apples
Rico: we do now! If you r going to pay for them we sell them
Miley: how much?
Rico: well it wil cost you... 8 bucks!
Miley: 8 BUCKS!
Rico: hey im the unique apple provider in this piece of beach and she is hungry, buy and enjoy
Miley: no way, Lilly... no *miley shakes her head* is too expensive
Lilly: im hungry, please *makes puppy face* i want an apple
Miley: ok, *with an ush acent* im going to buy one apple *walks toward jackson*
Miley: one apple
Jackson: 8 bucks
Miley hands out the money.
Jackson: your apple
Miley: thanks
Jackson: tips
Miley: hey, it too expensive, why should i give you a tip?
Jackson: look this in my way... i buy fuel, i give a hot girl a ride, i marry her and your life is better
Miley: umm... NO
Jackson: how selfish you`re being
Miley rolls her eyes and left, gives the apple to Lilly
Lilly: thanks Miley
Miley: your welcome but next time i wont buy such a expensive thing, that little evil guy is such... evil!
Lilly: hey, be simple, just say he is evil
Miley shrugged
If you had any idea tell me or if you want to be on my fanfic only pm me and i`ll see.
I will post new chapters on weekends cause i cant be too much on the computer becuase of my grades :S
destinysmiles!
09-16-2007, 12:11 AM
:( hey guys please comment
at least say something
ilovedestinyhopecyrus123456789
09-16-2007, 12:26 AM
whats it about
destinysmiles!
09-16-2007, 12:32 AM
well is about a girl moving to malibu california, she meets miley and emily and that how my story starts (im that girl)
thanks for posting :)
destinysmiles!
09-16-2007, 12:50 AM
well i think that is no one post something i`ll post the first chapter tomorrow
HannahMontanaFan9463
09-16-2007, 10:02 AM
please write more!
~destiny~miley~
09-16-2007, 12:16 PM
more i like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
secretive_angel
09-16-2007, 12:26 PM
more pleaz
destinysmiles!
09-16-2007, 04:26 PM
Chapter 2:
Sara comes to the beach.
Sara: hi!
Lilly: hey Sara! What are you doing here?
Miley: yeah
Lilly: I mean *munch* why arent you *munch* reading to little kids *munch* or something like that? *munch*
Miley: Lilly, dont talk when eating
Lilly: *munch* sure
Miley gives her a look ¬¬
Lilly: starting now
Miley: sorry Sara
Sara: dont mind ;), well im here cause Im going to go to the mall to meet Hannah Roberts :P.
Miley: who is Hannah Roberts?
Sara: the newest singer! Wanna come? :D
Lilly: sure, im bored
Miley: ok
At the convention:
Woman: and here she is Hannah Roberts!
Hannah R.: hi guys! It a pleasure to come here! Today Im not going to sing...
Crowd: awww
Hannah R.: but tomorrow Im going to do a free concert!
Corwd: WOOOO!
Hannah R.: and other artists will come too! Like the Jonas, B5, Chris Brown, a lot of artists!
Lilly: Cool!
HannahR.: ...except Hannah Montana cause she have to do a family thing...
Crowd: awww
Hannah R. manger comes and whispers to her.
Hannah R.: hey people good news! Hannah will participate!
Crowd: Woooooooooooo!
Lilly whispering: why didnt you tell me that Hannah was going to do this?
Miley whispers: didnt know, i need to talk to someone...
Lilly: ok lets go
iamsassy15
09-16-2007, 10:17 PM
this is really good
destinysmiles!
09-17-2007, 12:33 AM
Chapter 3:
At Miley home:
Miley enters to the room, while Lilly found that Miley got a new HM game and sits in the couch.
Miley: DAD!
Robby Ray: hey honey, guess who is going to...
Miley interrupts him: ...be in a concert with Hannah Roberts?
Robby Ray: how did ya know? Have you been reading my messages?
Miley: yes, but there is nothings intesting on them, why didnt you tell me?
Robby Ray: have you been reading my messages?!
Miley: dont change the subject! Why didnt you tell me?
R.R.: ok lets talk about it later, but how do you know?
Miley: you didnt tell me
Lilly: SCORE!!
Miley: Lilly!
Lilly: what?
Miley: sshhhh!
Lilly: sure i`ll play more quietly... if you didnt have the new Hannah Montana game...
Miley: you never tell me until the las... what?! let me see *turns towards Lilly*
Miley: *turns face towards R.R.* daddy, are you sure you dont want to tell me another thing?
R.R.: they already launch the new game of Hannah Montana!, do you like it?
Miley: is not the right moment to ask me tha... I just LOVE IT!
R.R.: sorry Miles, is that i didnt wanted to tell you until i got ya a gift,... so here is it!
Hands out the gift.
Miley: thanks daddy!... um.... and sorry...
RR.: wasnt you fault J
Lilly: OMG! Im Hannah!
Miley gives her a weird look.
Lilly: in the game,... why are you looking me like that?
Miley: ¬¬
Lilly: what?
Sorry guys if this chapter isnt good, i didnt have a lot of ideas :lol: i need ideas, so please send me ones if you have :D
blovehannah
09-17-2007, 01:14 AM
This is too funny, keep doing this! hey you should put me in your fanfic! :lol:
blovehannah
09-17-2007, 01:44 AM
Just let your imagination fly i know you have so much great ideas!:bigwave:
destinysmiles!
09-17-2007, 11:38 AM
Chapter 4:
r.r. gives that gift to Miley, Miley hugs him
Miley: thanks daddy
r.r.: your welcome, but im going to wash my hair, it`s so frizzy! And change my password ¬¬
Miley: ok, jiji!
Lilly: miley, open your gift!
Miley opens her gift and founds...
I know, i know this chapter is too little, well its a piece of it, but i need ideas! :S so please send me your ideas, what is inside that gift? an animal? tickets? whatever only tell me :P i`ll credit you :D
blovehannah
09-17-2007, 12:55 PM
dont leave us in suspense please writte more!!
destinysmiles!
09-17-2007, 09:16 PM
Hey people please visit the fanfic of blovehannah is great! (of course without my help it`ll we horrible 8-), :lol: just kidding, she have great ideas!) Her Fanfic is: Costa Rica trip (not costa rico)
secretive_angel
09-17-2007, 10:17 PM
more pweaz
destinysmiles!
09-18-2007, 09:39 PM
i`ll write more on friday, sorry but i cant be one the conputer only weekends and today thanks to my friends :) i`ll promise more chapters!
destinysmiles!
09-20-2007, 12:22 AM
Chapter 4:
r.r. gives that gift to Miley, Miley hugs him
Miley: thanks daddy
r.r.: your welcome, but im going to wash my hair, it`s so frizzy! And change my password ¬¬
Miley: ok, jiji!
Lilly: miley, open your gift!
Miley opens her gift and founds...
...she founds a barbie of Hannah
Lilly: miley... i know maybe you like that thing...., but to be honest.... i think its horrible.
Miley: dont mind, dad never knows what to get me, but... well at least... i think i can give it away...
Lilly interrupts her: or tell him the true...
While in other room:
R.R.: hey jackson guess who brought you a new envelope!
Jackson: Jenny?!
R.R.: no... and by the way who is Jenny?
Jackson: an old friend
R.R.: jackson i think you are sick *hands out the envelope*
Jackson: *took the envelope* why dad?
R.R.: an old friend? Common almost every girl you know it was or it is a date, i mean almost cause Miley friends arent.
Jackson: believe me its only an old friend, anyways *looks at the envelope*... its from Aunt Max...
its only a piece of chapter 4 :lol:
destinysmiles!
10-02-2007, 12:44 AM
Chapter 4:
r.r. gives that gift to Miley, Miley hugs him
Miley: thanks daddy
r.r.: your welcome, but im going to wash my hair, it`s so frizzy! And change my password ¬¬
Miley: ok, jiji!
Lilly: miley, open your gift!
Miley opens her gift and founds...
...she founds a barbie of Hannah
Lilly: miley i know maybe you like that thing, but to be honest i think its horrible.
Miley: dont mind dad never knows what to get me, but well at least i think i can give it away...
Lilly interrupts her: or tell him that true
While in other room:
R.R.: her jackson guess who brought you a new envelope!
Jackson: Jenny?!
R.R.: no... and by the way who is Jenny?
Jackson: an old friend
R.R.: jackson i think you are sick *hands out the envelope*
Jackson: *took the envelope* why dad?
R.R.: an old friend? Common almost every girl you know it was or it is a date, i mean almost cause Miley friends arent.
Jackson: believe me its only an old friend, anyways *looks at the envelope*... its from Aunt Max...
The message was this: Dear Jackson
Like i new your b-day is going to be in few days i bought you a pony!
Your pony is in your backyard, feed her and play with her and... have fun!!
P.S. you dad still dont know you have a pony in the backyard i put her there in the morning. When i come back i`ll give u two kisses little boy.
When Jackson read: i`ll give u 2 kisses he make his face like: ew!! MG she is aunt MAX, just EW!!
Jackson took the pony to the house.
Chapter 5:
Jackson: DAD! LOOK AT THE GIFT AUNT MAX JUST BOUGHT ME!
R.R.: sweet niblets! She buy you a PONY!
Jackson: DAD DAD!! CAN I KEEP IT PAAAALEASE??!! *makes little kid face* *then makes puppys face*
R.R: sure, when you have enough food to fit him, and...
Jackson in terrupts him: WOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Look at this Aunt Max bring 6 bags of ponys food!!
And by the way he is her, her name is Lara, *talks to the pony* right Lara?
Now lets go, i have to comb your hair!
R.R: why? Why? Why?
Why did you decide to have a son?!
cutiepie7897
10-02-2007, 12:56 AM
more
blovehannah
01-05-2008, 02:39 AM
hey this is ur first ff this ff is so cool!!nick is mine!!!!!
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