View Full Version : Someone is living in your love...DUN DUN dUUN
Amy Lee Fan
09-10-2007, 12:40 AM
Ok. I am making a new fan fic. I got really mad because my other one was so stupid!! Well, here ya go.A little background:Ami is a 14 year old girl who comes to visit her grandparents a lot. She meets a great guy but little does she know he has been killing people for years.It might get a little weird but she makes it out alive. I think. But yea, hope you enjoy. I will write my first chapter right now.chapters> sorry my chapters got all messed up. I will fix them soon.
Amy Lee Fan
09-10-2007, 12:44 AM
Chapter 1.
"Hurry up. Your going to be late!" My mom hollered from the kitchen where she was previously cooking eggs on the hot pan.
I was still in my pajamas so I threw on some clothes. These to be exact: pants (http://www.levisstore.com/product/index.jsp?productId=2734157&cp=2069959.2075212.2075226&parentPage=family)>shirt (http://www.bluefly.com/pages/products/detail.jsp?PRODUCT%3C%3Eprd_id=2058326523&FOLDER%3C%3Efolder_id=897&cm_mmc=ca_yahoo-_-na-_-womens_sweaters-_-2095534&referer=ca_yahoo)>shoes (http://www.shoebuy.com/new-balance-ww811/32810/32811)
It was only 9:25. I had to be in the car by 9:40 and on my way to my grans by 9:50 so I rushed down stairs, sat down at my place at the table and ate this meal:meal. (http://images.jupiterimages.com/common/detail/16/22/23032216.jpg)
By the time I was finished It was 9:37.
"Mom, I'll grab my suitcase. Then we can head to the car."
I ran up stairs, grabbed three of my suitcases I would be needing for my 2 week vaca and ran back down stairs slowly because of all the extra weight I was carrying. I grabbed my baseball cap and through it over my head. I had the cowboys sign on it. I wasn't a huge fan of the team but I liked the hat a lot. I asked my mom to open the trunk. I flung my luggage in the trunk, shut it with a BANG, and opened the passenger door. I asked my mom "How far away is the house?"
She replied with, "About 40 minutes."
"Ugh." I said in dismay. I was frustrated. I wanted to see my grand parents as soon as possible. It was going to be there in 40 minutes. I listened to my iPod for about 20 minutes and then fell asleep.
As I reached the grants' house my mom shook me, "Wake up. You're here."
"wa-?" I questioned half asleep. "Oh...hi grandma."
"Hey. How is my grand daughter been? You look thin. Let me make you a omelet."
She strode off into the house. towards the kitchen I'm guessing. I grabbed 1 suitcase and walked to the door. I opened it and the awakening aroma of eggs filled my nostrils and gave me the energy I needed for my hours of unpacking.
"Well, I better be off now." my mom said as she started up the car. We had a mini-van that looked like this:van. (http://ranchochase.com/images/silverpearlody.jpg)
My mom only comes to drop me off. Then she leaves.
When I finished putting my bags down in the room I would be staying in I went to the kitchen where a freshly made omelet was lying with a big glass of orange juice.
"So, how was your trip?" my grama asked.
Hope ya like it so far. 3 comments till' next one.
Amy Lee Fan
09-11-2007, 12:57 AM
Chapter 2.
"It was pretty boring actually." I said as I chewed on my pulpy orange juice.
"Oh, well it is going to be an exciting vacation. First we are going to lunch today and then go to a movie." My grama said as she finished cooking a omelet for her self.
"What are we doing tomorrow? If nothing, then I am going shopping for a new bathing suit." I said as I finished the last of my omelet.
"Well I don't really have anything planned. Your cousin will be coming down for a few hours while I take her dad out to lunch." My grandma said as she poured me another glass of orange juice and one for herself.
"Maybe she can go shopping with me? She doesn't have to but anything. I just want some company." I said as I finished off my juice and jumped down from my chair.
My grama didn't reply. she just nodded her head with a look like 'I understand'.
I didn't understand what that ment. I looked away as if I didn't see it. I went into my 'room'.
3 comments till' next chapter I guess.
Amy Lee Fan
09-22-2007, 02:50 AM
O.K. I guess I will keep posting chapters untill' someone says something.
I walked in the living room. I saw a bus ticket for three rides on a trolley.
I had an idea. I was on the hunt for boys.
I grabbed my bag with the following items. : towel (http://www.meandmomcleaning.com/rentals/images/beachtowel.jpg)
top (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=121117916&ctg=085_Girls_Swimwear_010_Swimsuits&parentctg=085_Girls_Swimwear&rank=3&size=-1)
bottom (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=121414916&ctg=085_Girls_Swimwear_010_Swimsuits&parentctg=085_Girls_Swimwear&rank=4&size=-1)
clothing 1 (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=124600150&ctg=010_Girls_TeesTanks&parentctg=010_Girls_TeesTanks&rank=11&size=-1)
leggings (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=128592100&ctg=068_Girls_Leggings&parentctg=068_Girls_Leggings&rank=1&size=-1)
skirt (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=124513811&ctg=060_Girls_Skirts&parentctg=060_Girls_Skirts&rank=111&size=-1)
I was looking fine when I walked out. I had makeup on. Cute clothes. And my lucky star necklace. I grabbed a pair of socks out of the little sipper in the first layer. I grabbed a pair of shoes with a white skull on them. I pulled them on and ran for the trolley that looked packed I was able to make it in on time and get a place to sit. I was to get off after 4 blocks then walk over to a nice restaurant. It was always full of boys! By the way, I was starving, I hadn't eaten in 2 hours since breakfast. I got off after 4 blocks. I grabbed my bag off the seat next to me.
I sat down on a bench and started texting my friends since I hadn't seen them in along time.
[ME Kelsy.]
How R U Kelsy?
Good. U?
Not to much. I am about to enter a restaurant packed with boys! :)
Lucky. I am selling t's for charity money. They say: HELP SAVE THE POOR! I thinkit's retarded but my mom thinks it's NICE. PSH.
Well I g2g. See ya soon. I hope.
Byeee.
I was still not happy.
I got my sidekick back out and started texting Alex.
[ME Him]
Hey Alex. U bored?
Not really. I am playin' catch with my bro.
Oh. I am really tired and bored.
Oh. well I will talk to you as soon as I can. Bye.
Bye...
I liked him alot but he had a girl friend named Synthia. I hate her. She is so PREPPY and BORING!!
My phone started beeping. I thought it was Alex just kidding with me.
"Hello?" I asked as most people do when they answer a phone.
"Hi Honey. " My annoying mom replied in this stupid voice.
"I'm fine. Now please leave me alone until I come home!"
I shut my phone even though it was beeping again.
I walked in the restaurant. I saw a lot of guys so I started with the one at the stand, waiting for a table.
I tripped over my shoe lace when I forgot to tie it and bumped his arm.
"umm..hi." he said as he helped me to my feet.
"oh..sorry." I said as I got lost in his beautiful eyes. He had clear skin and an amazing voice.
"It's fine. Can I have you sit with me." He said as he pointed to a table lit with candles like all the rest.
"I---uhh---sure." I said as he dragged me to a seat.
"My name is Caleb, by the way." Caleb said.
"I'm not supposed to talk to strangers." I thought as I sat down."
"May I get you a drink Ma'am. I am your waiter this evening. You may call me Isac." The waiter said as he grabbed my hand and kissed it.
I pulled away.
"Keep your hands off!" Caleb said as he pushed Isac off of the table.
3 comments till next chapter. :)
Shenae Grimes Fan
09-22-2007, 06:44 AM
Ohh! Thats really really good! Keep writing more.
And our characters will probably meet in my next chapter.
Keep up the good work!!
Amy Lee Fan
09-22-2007, 07:03 AM
Chapter 4:
I blushed.
"Can we please go somewhere else?" I said as I grabbed his hand and headed for the door.
"yea. We can get out of here." He said as he was now walking side-by-side.
"Thanks."I said blushing again.
"Some guys just keep stay away from such attractive girls." he said as he held my hand.
"Your really a good guy. I want to get to know you." I said as I got a little closer to him.
We sat down at a near by bench. We started talking about personal stuff.
"Why did you ask me to sit with you?" I said as I tucked my hands in my pockets to make them warm.
"I was lonely and I saw you weren't with anyone--"He got cut off.
"So you assumed I wasn't taken?" I said with pursed lips.
"Well I mean if you aren't that is ok..."
"Good guess. And if this is your way of saying do you want to start dating, yes."I said and I leaned in for a kiss. He leaned in too.
I missed and got his nose. We both laughed.
3 comments till next chapter. :) [or 1 or 2 or.......]
Amy Lee Fan
09-22-2007, 08:16 AM
Chapter 5:
We got up and went for the city. In Lake Tahoe it was always pretty packed, especially in North Shore Marina. We saw people fishing, little markets to bye suiveniers. Caleb bought me one that said:
My Love. I felt like such an idiot since I kept on blushing at every move he made. He was only trying to impress me. I liked it. I saw a paper that said something about a new killer on the loose. Caleb took it from my hands and threw it in the trash. He said it was nonsense to read the newspaper.
I guessed he was right. I was getting hungry so I started looking for a place to eat.
"Do you see any place that seems appealing? I'm hungry." I said as I looked at him hoping for an answer.
"There is a place a little further up. We can stop by there and get a hot dog, sandwich, sub, or hamburger. They have salads too. On me. $"He said as he pulled his wallet out of his dickies pocket.
He counted the dollars out on his fingers. "$37.45. That is a lot, knowing that they are only like 99cents."
I was felling hungry when I saw the stand. I hurried over to the table where you order. He was right. They are only like 99 cents. "uumm..I will get a sub, a chicken salad,and a medium pepsi. I pulled my wallet out and slammed a five dollar bill on the counter before Caleb had a chance. He looked at me with wide eyes.
I got my food and sat down at the table. The food was really good.
"I wold have bought you something better and more expensive but this was one of the closest places and the food isn't too bad." He said as he put his food down on the table.
"It doesn't matter what food or where I get it. I just don't want to be sick after-wards." I said after I swallowed the last of my salad.
We both had a little laugh.
"You have some ranch on the corner of your mouth." Caleb wiped his napkin over it.
"Is it gone?"I asked wiping my sleeve over it.
"Yea. It's all gone." He said when he laughed.
I finished the last of my Pepsi and then said good-bye. I got his number. Gave him a kiss. and then started my walk home.
I didn't know how exhausted I was until I figured I had to walk 9 blocks before I would see my trolley.
I saw a candy stand on my way.
It was only 27 cents for 7 tootsie pops!
I ate two of them before I saw my bus stop.
"yes!"I said as I jumped on an open seat. I had my backpack with me so I figured I would go to the lake for a little bit.
I got off at a rather near place to my home so I figured I would save the extra ticket for when I needed it.
I got off the trolley. I went to a changing booth and got in my swim suit.
I put my clothes on top.
I just got up to my knees. It felt cool and refreshing.I spent 7 minutes in the water. Then I wanted to make a sand castle so I tried to get the softest sand I could. I made a pretty awesome sand castle.
I figured that there wasn't much to do by myself. I packed up my things and then headed back to the changing booth. I did everything you usually do. Put on your clothes, put your stuff in the bag, you know?
I started walking. I felt I had enough energy to get my self home on my two feet. I saw the house and ran up to the door. There was a note that read:
http://i12.tinypic.com/4pnrfa0.png
"She is going to be gone so I am home alone!" I thought I was so lucky but it got better.
I opened the door and on the back of it was $57 for anything I needed why she was gone!
I changed into something warm and cozy:shirt. (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=125327100&ctg=010_Girls_TeesTanks&parentctg=)
pants. (http://www.tillys.com/tillys/variants.aspx?ctlg=020_Girls&prod=129478115&ctg=070_Girls_Pants&parentctg=070_Girls_Pants&rank=0&size=-1)
I felt better.
I looked in the coboard. I didn't find too much. I made Mac & Cheese. I had a glass of Orange Juice. I had an apple to top it off.
I turned on the T.V. and I found something to watch. It wasn't very interesting but I was really tired and didn't care.
I got my sidekick out and texted Caleb.
Me Caleb
Hey.
Hey U bored?
Kind of. It was fun when I was with you.
Really? It was? Well I g2g. It is l8.
Ok. Bye. I love you.
I love you too.
Convo. Ended.
1 or 2 or 3 or even 0 comments till next chapter.
Amy Lee Fan
10-08-2007, 11:19 PM
I am going to stop writing becuase no one wants to write comments. Well for now I guess loook at the other fan fics.
vBulletin® v3.8.4, Copyright ©2000-2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.