My First FanFic...Miley? A Shadow Child.

[violared21]

This FanFic is based on the Shadow Child Seires......those of you who have read them will know what im talking bout, but this story will be about miley being a third child in a society that only allows two children in a family and her struggle being hannah montana and a thrid child. How can she do it without exposing herself......the law is made 13 years after miley's birth....

PS~It wont be exactly like the books but it will go along the same thing really....

Chapter One
(Miley is born,this is before the law came so the first part is completly off the point)

Dad:Awwwwwwww, what a beautiful baby.....nothing can go wrong with her. I know she will grow up to be succsessful.

Jackson:(He's 4 years old):yeah dad she does.

Liz:(6 years old):Cool I have a younger sister, wait tell i tell everyone.....


13 YEARS LATER
(Miley is Hannah Montana)

Hannah is just finishing her concert when an official came and took the mic from her ready to make this big announcment..

Official:Are you all ready for the big announcment?

The Crowd-YEAH!!!!!!!

Official:Well here it is.....The government has decided that for the sake of our country.... ALL THIRD CHILDREN ARE ILLIGELL (sp)

(The crowd goes quiet and then all of a sudden everyone sreams and tries to run home, meanwhile miley and her family try to get away, while the official takes out a gun and shoots it in the air. Everyone stops in their places.)

Official:Those of you who are third children step forward or i'll shoot....

(Nobody moves)

Official:Oh really now......(and starts shooting everywhere)

(At the Stewart Home, its quiet and noone is talking, all too stunded by the news)

Dad:I cant believe it, what are we going to do/

Jackson: We are going have to hide her.

Miley:What about Hannah Montana?

Liz:Jackson's right Miley your going to have to hide, or its your life....

~I'll try to write more later. So what do you guys think so far? I know its relly bad but be honest.....Id like some advice.

[Secretpopstar1]

more!!!

[xxmileyluverxx1234xx]

More!! I read two of the Shadow Child Series books for school, I loved them. I like your story.

[HannahMontanaFan9463]

please continue! this sounds like 'Among the Hidden' book that I am reading in school right now... :)

[xoxo Babii xoxo]

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[violared21]

please continue! this sounds like 'Among the Hidden' book that I am reading in school right now... :)

Yes, I'm writing this story based on the Shadow Children Seires.

[LotsaBigHearts]

Sweet she's going in hiding!!

[sweet_smile]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[HannahMontanaFan9463]

Yes, I'm writing this story based on the Shadow Children Seires.



oh, is that the Shadow Children Series? i never knew that... :D continue ASAP

[gilmore1]

i love it!!!!! will u read mine and comment please?

[violared21]

i love it!!!!! will u read mine and comment please?

Yes send me the link and i'll read it. I'm glad you like the story.

[violared21]

Chapter 2

Miley:It's not fair dad.....

Robbie:I know hun, but its the best we've got now.

Miley:Easy for you to say, your not the one who has to hide

(Knock on door)

OPEN UP POPULATION POLICE!!!!

Robbie:Go hide. In your room.

(Miley rushes up to her room)

Robbie:Yes.

Officier:I've come to inspect the house of third children.

Robbie:Ok, if you insist.

Officier:You seem calm.

(Robbie shrugges and follows the officer while he checks the house finally going up to miley's room. he's already seen jackson and liz)

Officier:This room seems like its someone, maybe a third child of yours.

Robbie:Nope its our guest room.

Officer:Than why are there clothes in the drawers and closet.


~I'll try to write more as soon as i can~

[xoxo Babii xoxo]

more!

[xoxdestinynightxox]

More plz plz more

[HannahMontanaFan9463]

please continue!!!!!!!

[violared21]

Robbie:those are liz'z, just to tell you i spoil my TWO children too much.

Officer:Ok, whatever, looks like everything is ok here, btw i heard that you manage hannah montana, my daughter loves her, when is her next concert?

Robbie:Uhhhhhh....next week.....on September 20th.

Officer:Dont bail out on me or im taking the kids.

Robbie:Ok.

(The officer leaves the house)

Robbie:Ok Miley you can come out now.

Miley:Dad, I cant belive you did that, how could you?(Shouting)

~Sorry its short ill write more later.~

[HannahMontanaFan9463]

please continue!

[LotsaBigHearts]

Oh.. wow!!

[violared21]

Robbie:I'm sorry, but we'll try our best, besides he only thinks i manage you.

Miley:That's a good point.

(Liz and Jackson walk through the door)

Liz:What just happend? We heard loud voices.

Jackson:And population police voices.

Miley:Yes, but thankfully they didnt find me. and apperantly i have a concert next week.

Jackson and Liz:DAD!!!!!

Robbie:Its ok the officer only thinks i manage hannah not that im her father.

jackson:well thats a relief.

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the day of the concert

Robbie:Ok Miley this is it, dont freak out k.

Miley(as hannah):ok dad

(Little did she know there was an officer hiding, Hannah goes out and performs a few songs)

Robbie:I'm glad thats over now lets go home.

Officer:Stop, we know your secret.

Robbie:

Sorry its short and that i havent been on for a while. I dont know how long it will be till im on next time.

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Robbie:What secret?

Officer:That this is your third child.

Robbie:You have no proof of that.

Officer:Oh yeah....officers.

(two officers come in dragging liz and jackson)

Officer:Are these your children.

Robbie:Nope.

Officer:You sure bout that.

Robbie:Am i hesitating (sp)?

Officer (with a suspicious glare):Ok, but i'm watching you.

Robbie:ok.

(The officers leave and the family goes home in silence)

Liz:Great dad, I cant believe you got through that.

Jackson:agreed.

Robbie:thanks but what are we going to do now that there are on to us.

Miley:Im going to have to go into hiding.

Robbie:

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Robbie: Thats the best idea youve had all day.

(They go home in silence)

Jackson: I dont believe they passed this law, im going there and giving them a piece of my mind

Liz: no jackson, u might get us in trouble.

Robbie: She's right you know.

(Jackson calms down)

Miley: So how are we going to do this?

Robbie: Simple, we're not going to let anyone see you.

Miley: What bout hannah montana?

Robbie: we'll see bud

(Knock on door Robbie goes to answer and its an officer)

Officer: I knew it, i knew you were hiding a third child here.

Robbie: and how do you know that for sure

Officer: We've had a bug on your wall since the day another officer came and suspected you. So I'll talk your child now.

Jackson and Liz: NO!

Robbie (quietly): Miley.

(miley walks to her doom, with the officer, crying)

Robbie: I'm sorry Miley, we tried.

Officer: Let's go kid.

Miley: It's ok dad, you tried. I guess i'll never see you anymore.

Officer: darn right you wont see your family again. Now go in the car with the other illegals.

(Miley goes into the car........)




~ENJOY~

[Destiny9910]

Miley Nooo She Cant Die No It Cant Be True No No No What About Her Life Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

[Secretpopstar1]

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Destiny9910]

i kinda made my own versoin of ur fanfic and posted it but I gave u 99.9% of credit and .1% of me

I hope thats ok tell me if it's not

[violared21]

Officer: Miss your daddy (sarcastically)

Miley:Shut up

Officer: talk to me like that again and you'll be worse off than you are right now.

miley: oh well.

Officer: We're here at Population Police headquarters. I'm taking you to the execution dugeon.

Miley: Whatever.

Officer: You seem pretty confedent. We'll (me and the other officers) decide when we should kill you and how we should kill you.

Miley: If you say so.

(Officer shruggs and leads her to the execution dugeon where all the other illeagal kids are.)

Officer: Here we are, you'd better stay put or else.

Miley: Ok whatever.

(the kids admire her bravery. the officer leaves and its time to sleep)

(the next morning.....)

Officer: New girl, we have decided when we should kill you.

Miley: Oh yeah whens that....

Officer:

[violared21]

yes destiny9910 it's totally fine. Can you send me the link so i can read it.

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Officer: We have decided to kill you at dawn.

Miley: Big whoop

Officer: You seem pretty confident

Miley: Do I?

Officer: I'm glad we're killing you soon.

Miley: Good for you.

Officer: Get some sleep you good for nothing children, and I'll see you tomorow princess.

Miley: See you.

(Miley waits until the other children are asleep then talks into her hidden mic.)

Miley: Did you get all that?

Robbie: Yes, honey, your brother and sister are on the way. They should be there now.

Miley: Oh I see a light that might be them.

(She goes to check and sees.......)

Enjoy, sorry I havent written anything in a while, I havent gotten a chance to get on for a while.

[Destiny9910]

more i mean it is great!

[violared21]

Miley: Yep thats them. What should I do?

Robbie: They will break in at dawn disguised as officers and pretend to be the officers to kill you then they will sneak you out.

Miley: So what do i do?

Robbie: Just sit tight ok.

Miley: Ok. I'll be waiting.

Robbie: Ok I'll keep you company.

(the next morning at dawn, two officers walk in to take Miley.)

Officer 1: Come with us miley.

Miley: Are you....

Officer 2: Just come with us.

(Miley gets up and walks out with the two officers)
(5 minutes later and they are out the front door and in the car Miley saw at night)

Miley: Whats going on, where are you guys taking me?

Officer 1: We are going to kill you in front of you father.

Miley: But.....

Officer 2: So he can learn to obey the law.

Miley (silently crying): ok

(they make it to the house.)

Officers: IN THE HOUSE NOW!

Miley: Ok, then will you tell me whats going on.

Officer 1: Just get in the house.

(Once they enter the house....officer 1 and 2 take off their officer costumes)

Miley: Jackson? Liz? That was you?

Liz: Didn't dad tell you the plan?

Miley: He did, but I must've forgoten.

Jackson: I'm just gald we got you out. By the way you have a concert planned for tomorow.

Miley: What am I going to do?

Jackson: I'm just kidding, Dad rescudeled it.

(Robbie comes down the stairs)

Robbie: I thought i heard....

Miley: DAD!!!!!! THANK YOU!

Robbie: Any time.

(They hold each other and cry because they are back together)

THE END!!!

SORRY THE STORY IS SO SHORT BUT THAT IS THE END OF IT. HOPE YOU ENOYED THE WHOLE STORY.