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Jasmine
09-06-2007, 05:00 PM
Ok guys this is my first fanfiction I am gonna just be doing a little but then once I get a few complements I will start up again and edit more. I do think I will be doing alot more soon and I hope I will be. I appreciate support and future ideas for the fanfiction. Sorry i didnt get any gfx or anything but i will and Ill edit things in.oh and typos that are found will be edited. Ok so I appreciate all coments that anyone gives.

Who cut my Hannah Hair?

Scene 1
Miley walks down the hall and goes to her locker Lily walks in

Lily: Hey Miley, Whats up? That Hannah Party was great last night! Who knew that Rihanna could do such good Karioke!
Miley: Yea go figure!
Lily: So anyway did you hear about Ashley?
Miley: No what happened
Lily: Her mom sent her to a different school
Miley: Why?:D
Lily: Nobody knows but Amber and she won't say a word I guess for the attention
Miley: Well then who will she dominate the school with?
Lily: I dont know I mean she cant do it by herself ,;)
Miley: Oh not the face :S what is it bathroom again?
Lily: No I just got a good idea
(bell rings)
Miley: well see after class oh and dont forget about (whispers) Tracy's Annual Slumber Party tonight there is gonna be makeovers and so much fun!

After Class
(Miley Walks in the house Billy Ray is on the couch reading the paper)
Miley: Hey dad
Robby Ray: Oh Hey Miles
Miley: I have to go get ready for the party tongiht
Robby Ray: Ok go ahead just be careful tonight dont go crazy darlin'
Miley: :|fine daddy whatever you say

(Miley walks upstairs)

Jackson walks in

Robby Ray:Jackson where have you been! You said after work you'd drive Miley and lily to the party.
Jackson::54: Well Coop and I went to see a movie with two hot twins that we met at Ricos so I took off work and went and well I lost track of time. But i still will bring her and lily to the party
Robby Ray: Just go get ready to bring them I dont want them to be late
Jackson: Fine I'll get ready

(Jackson leaves)


Scene 2
Hannah and LIly walk in to tracy's party

Tracy walks up to them

Tracy: Hannahhh How are you?
Hannah: Hey Trace
Tracy: So were gonna do makeup have a few snacks and do MAKEOVERS!
Hannah: Sounds fun:D can't wait

Tracy walks away
Lola(lily):So.....I'm gonna go check out the snacks...wanna come?

(Hannah spots a group of girls crowded)

Hannah: no thanks I'm gonna go see whats going on over there.
Lola(lily): Cool

Hannah walks up to the girls

The group:Hey Hannah
Hannah:Hey girls:57:
the group:Wanna get some makeup
Hannah: Sure why not!

(she quickly gets pushed into the ceter of the group and they all do her makeup)

Hannah walks out when they are finished She walks up to Lola

Hannah: Hey lola how does it look?

Lola: Great!

They walk around together

Hannah: I just hope they dont try to cut my wig.
Lola: Well yea i guess so.
Hannah: No Lola you dont understand if they form a mob like that again I cant see if someones trying to pull my wig off or cut my hair!
Lola: Dont worry you'll be fine plus you already had a makeover;)
Hannah: Yea I know but I'm Hannah Montana of course there gonna mob me like that again!
Lola: Well at least......
Hannah:What?
Lola: just watch out for them!
Hannah: thanks for the genius advice:|
Lola: Oh come on were in the pent house of the Malibu Resort Hotel have some fun! Stop worrying about those people trying to cut your hair or take off your wig!
Hannah: whatever just go have more shrimp!
Lola: :o..FINE I WILL 8-)

Scene 3
Hannah is on the couch talking to some girls

Hannah: So girls whats up
One girl: Hannah want another makeover
Hannah: :S:S No thanks I'm good
another girl: (feeling hair) Have you ever thought of dying your hair
Hannah: :|No why??
another girl: Hannah you wanna go watch the movie with us I hear there playing some really good movies!:D
Lola walks up to the couch
Hannah: Hey Lola, no thanks girls maybe ill see ya'll later!:57:

eizy12306
09-06-2007, 06:47 PM
Its pretty good =)

EmilyJordanOsment
09-06-2007, 06:51 PM
Billy Ray - Robby RAY!
its good..

alykittens
09-06-2007, 07:08 PM
keep goin!! I WANNA KNO WHAT HAPPENS!! CMON PPL POST!

xoxo Babii xoxo
09-06-2007, 07:11 PM
write it

Jasmine
09-06-2007, 09:04 PM
Its pretty good =)

thanx alot I knbow its only my first so hopefully ill get better

Jasmine
09-06-2007, 09:06 PM
Billy Ray - Robby RAY!
its good..

oh wow thanks ill edit right away I just get so confused with those names and I cant tell wich one is the real one and which isnt thanx!

mileyfanforever101
09-06-2007, 09:08 PM
more!!

Secretpopstar1
09-07-2007, 04:09 PM
more!!

xxmileyluverxx1234xx
09-07-2007, 05:13 PM
more.

eizy12306
09-08-2007, 01:42 AM
I think its really good for your first! :D

LotsaBigHearts
09-08-2007, 11:04 AM
It is really good!!

HannahMontanaFan9463
09-08-2007, 11:22 AM
its good!!!

gilmore1
09-08-2007, 08:02 PM
i love it!!! will u please read mine and comment please

secretive_angel
09-08-2007, 08:08 PM
more

Jasmine
09-15-2007, 11:32 AM
thanks everyone and thats all I have for now but i will be doing a lot more soon

MileyWorld__Girl_05
09-15-2007, 11:56 AM
We can't wait! do they accidently pull off her wig? do they cut it? do they dye it? TELL US!

xoxdestinynightxox
09-15-2007, 12:18 PM
PLZ PLZ more i wanna know what happens plz more i need more i want more

Jasmine
09-16-2007, 10:10 AM
Ok you'll have to see what happens Ill edit more this week but there wont be much today

iamsassy15
09-16-2007, 09:48 PM
make more! o and check out my fanfics if u can they r in my signature!

Jasmine
09-19-2007, 09:03 PM
sorry guys i really am busy but Ill try to see some of yours soon and edit mine keep checkin back

cutiepie7897
09-28-2007, 04:31 PM
more come on ppl more more more

atisdale01
09-28-2007, 05:53 PM
more and i get confused with his name!

mileysfan01
09-29-2007, 12:55 AM
really good..more!

Aimeedapinkpanther
10-05-2007, 01:40 AM
please post more!

bart
10-13-2007, 11:09 AM
thats really good! add more

Aimeedapinkpanther
05-18-2008, 02:20 PM
Please continue this fanfic!!!! I wanna kno what happens!!!