View Full Version : Welcome to Smell-A [A JB FanFic]
krrristin
09-06-2007, 01:26 AM
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^SupaStaRrMiley92 ^
Table of Contents:
CH 1: MOVING DAY (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1343186&postcount=3)
CH 2: MEETING MR. JONAS (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1344136&postcount=15)
CH 3: SO THE RUMORS ARE TRUE? (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1344898&postcount=35)
CH 4: SO GROUNDED (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1346323&postcount=58)
CH 5: THE "GREAT" ESCAPE (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1349175&postcount=74)
CH 6: CAN'T CATCH US (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1353359&postcount=94)
CH 7: THIS IS MY CURRENT SINGLE STATUS; MY DECLARATION OF INDEPENDANCE (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1354903&postcount=110)
CH 8: NEW KIDS ON THE BLOCK (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1355392&postcount=126)
CH 9: TAKE YOUR LOVE AND HIT THE ROAD (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1355584&postcount=132)
CH 10: WE'RE GONE, SO GONE (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1356931&postcount=149)
CH 11: YOU HAD A BAD DAY, YOU TAKE IT ONE DOWN (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1357368&postcount=168)
CH 12: MY ENEMYS ENEMY IS MY FRIEND (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1358838&postcount=181)
CH 13: TOO LATE TO APOLOGIZE (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1359489&postcount=212)
CH 14: LETS GET THESE TEEN HEARTS BEATING FASTER FASTER (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1360692&postcount=249)
CH 15: RUMORS AND TABLOIDS (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1362083&postcount=332)
CH 16: ALL IS FAIR IN LOVE AND WAR (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1362990&postcount=378)
CH 17: I GOTTA GET OUT OF HERE (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1363843&postcount=396)
CH 18: I CAN FEEL THE PRESSURE; ITS GETTING CLOSER NOW (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1368203&postcount=440)
CH 19: KEEP COMING BACK FOR MORE (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1372305&postcount=467)
CH 20: THESE THINGS I'LL NEVER SAY (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1376623&postcount=498)
CH 21: A SUDDEN STOP (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1379116&postcount=517)
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MAIN CAST: Kristin (Me), Jenny (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/member.php?u=23812), Ashley (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/member.php?u=14797), Aly (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/member.php?u=5653), Sarah (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/member.php?u=5220), Nick Jonas, Joe Jonas, and Kevin Jonas
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Just post your name! And I'll add you eventually :P
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updates:
ok so I know Im like the only FF writer that has updates, but I just wanna keep you informed ;-) plus, its snazzy
9/16: Ok, so not only is it Nick Jonas' birthday... it is also the day I start adding banners and theme songs to my Fanfics x)
Theme songs, have a link to a song located in their title. While you read it you can play it. Totally optional
Oh and about the banners, I just started doing graphics, so the first banner was on chapter 18. And Jordin, I think your name was will be mentioned in the next chapter. Sorry I forgot to include in the last one. Oh and you guys can comment tips, they are always appreciated!
niiro_tatsu
09-06-2007, 01:30 AM
haha awesome!
krrristin
09-06-2007, 01:33 AM
Moving Day!
"Kristin time to go!" my mother yelled from outside, while I stood in my empty room. The boxes had been moved, the furniture gone, and the walls had been repainted. I forced my self out of my room, but still stared at it from the hallway. It, being my room, was very sentimental to me, it WAS my room for years and years.
My mother yelled again, this time threatening me, "Ok mom, I'll be right there!" I yelled back while turning around and heading down the long hallway. I finally exited my house after many pit stops along the way. On my way to the car, I kicked the sold sign on the house down then opend the car door.
I squeezed myself into the cramped back seat of our sadan, while my parents shoved the last of our baggage into the trunk.
"Comfy Girls?" my mother asked while my dad started the car
"Oh yeahhh" I said sarcastically holding a box on my lap, "Just swell back here!"
She glared at me then looked at my sisters, who as usual, just sucked-up my parents.
"So comfy!" my little sister said in delight
"very!" the oldest agreed
Finally the car started, and it wheezed as we backed up, "Full tank, luggage, kids, I think we are ready to go!" my dad laughed
I rolled my eyes, and watched as the faint image of my house dissapeared in the distance as we rolled along the damp streets. A tear formed at my eye, but I quickly wiped it off, I didnt really feel like being an emotional wreck at the moment, I decided I'd save that for later.
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TWO HOURS LATER
The car came to a grinding hault, "Hey girls we're in LA!" my mom smiled and looked around
I wiped my mouth, I had just woken up, and looked at the new surroundings, "You mean Smell-A?" I corrected her while looking at the Smog Smothered Sky, "At the old house, we actually had BLUE skies, not brown."
"You'll get used to it!" Jessica, my older sister sighed, "The place where dreams come true!"
I rolled my eyes, that was incredibley cheesy!
"Kristin, stop being a party pooper!" My dad scolded me while he turned a corner
"okiee dokie!" I sighed and looked back at the window and watched a blur of cars raced pass us. But soon we met up with the cars again, this time all the cars, including ours, stood still.
"Hey mom, I guess this is our house warming suprise right? LA traffic?" I laughed and sat back down, still angry about leaving the old place.
"Kristin, stop being impatient the house is around the corner..."
Infact, the WAS around the corner, it just took us 30-40 minutes to get there.
We all unpacked placing all marked boxes in each corrasponding room.
"Not bad!" I nodded walking into the house, "Its a million times bigger than the old one!"
"It better be for what I paid for it!" my dad muttered
"Well this is MY last box, so I'm gonna set my room up kay?"
"Kristin, before you go, remember school tomorrow!"
I nodded and headed off to my new room which was about 3 times the size of my old one. The movers had already fixed everything up, I just had to put stuff away.
I slammed the box on the floor and jumped on my bed, sprawly my self out and staring at the ceiling... before I knew it I was asleep.
The Next Day
"hah, your kidding me right?" I said staring at the clothes my mom laid out on my bed, "Uniforms? Mom, thats SO 3rd grade...."
"Kristin Raena! Go put it on!" she yelled storming out of my room
I stared at myself in the mirror, playing with the skirt, and fixing the vest. "I look like a catholic school girl scout!" I sighed and looked for my mom, who snorted and laughed, "Its NOT funny!" I said frustrated and crossed my arms
"Well..." she paused holding back her laughter, "I should drop you off now, so you can get your..." she chuckled again, "schedule"
"haha, soooo funny!" I said sarcastically opening the door to the garage.
I made myself cozy in the passenger seat while I messed with the knee high socks the school gave me. "these are hidious!" I sighed leaning back
My mom hopped in the car and drove me to the school
It was pretty fancy. Even being near West Hollyhood, it was more spectacular then what I thought.
"Holy...." I stared in awe
"Watch your language!" my mom cut me off
"Right right!" I said shaking my head as I walked out and made my way into class, before I stumbled on my shoe lace, "Awww man!" I said knealing down to tie it, I hummed the bunny goes under the tree riddle while I did it, just for kicks. I got up and hit my head on something hard, books flew everywhere.
"Ow" I touched my head! "Yeah, that hurt!" I rubbed the back of my head, "Oh and sorry!" I sighed picking up the books, and handing them to the person
"Hey, thanks! Im Ashley!"
"Kristin" I introduced myself, "Way to make an impression on a snobby school eh?"
"Thats ok... No ones that great here anyway." she shrugged, "Whats your next class?"
"Um physics!" I said grabbing my schedule
"Oh my friend Jenny is in that class too, I'll introduce you to her!"
"Um, ok!" I said excitedly
Ashleys Point of View
Poor new kid, although it was kinda of funny to watch the books fly everywhere, I did feel bad for her. I glanced at her binder, a small tear of a Jonas Brothers Poster showed, "So you like the Jonas Brothers?" I asked raising an eyebrow
"Yeah," she laughed
"I like em too... actually, if your not busy after school, I have a suprise for you!"
Kristins Point of View
As odd as it was, bieng new and someone ALREADY having a suprise for me, I still agreed.
So after school, Ashley took me to her house, then to the house next door...
"There are some people I want you to meet..." she smiled and rang the door bell, "knock knock?"
The door creeked open.
"Oh My GAWD!" I screamed
Is it good? Its my first fan fic! Couple comment please :)
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-06-2007, 07:27 AM
Awesome! I Loves It! And It Seems As If The Whole "Doorbell - Knock Knock" Thing Is Catching On lol
WOO! And This Completely Invlolves My FanFic. That's Awesome! Loves It!
WRITE MORE YOU POOR NEW KID!!!
xoxo Babii xoxo
09-06-2007, 08:53 AM
more!
mileyfanforever101
09-06-2007, 09:00 AM
Moreeee.
krrristin
09-06-2007, 10:25 AM
i'll write more after school
krrristin
09-06-2007, 06:05 PM
couple more and I'll post the next chapter
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-06-2007, 06:24 PM
HURRY UP AND WRITE IT KRISTIN!!! lol
This Is Seriously Awesome!
krrristin
09-06-2007, 06:28 PM
thank you :D
eizy12306
09-06-2007, 06:37 PM
its great!
Ashley Marie 1992
09-06-2007, 06:42 PM
:( no meghan? but anyway THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
marshmallows6565
09-06-2007, 07:09 PM
I wish that when I meet new people they would give me cool surprises
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-06-2007, 07:18 PM
I wish that when I meet new people they would give me cool surprises
For Sure! Especially One As Awesome As The One That Kristin Got! lol
krrristin
09-06-2007, 07:25 PM
Meeting Mr. Jonas
The door opend and I held my breathe. Jenny and Ashley looked at me and laughed they'd probably been used to all this. The door opend and I looked in the house,
"Down here" a little voice called, "hey Ashley, Jenny, and new person"
"Hey Frankie!" Ashley laughed knealing down to hug him
"Know where your brothers are?" Jenny asked
"Yeah, um want them?" Frankie asked scratching his head
" 'Course!" Jenny said peering into the house
"They are getting ready for the concert, aint here" he shrugged
"Ok, well were are gonna go see them ok?" Ashley smiled and turned around, we heard the door shut
"He is soo cute!" I laughed heading toward the drive way
Jenny nodded, "Seriously, the cutest little boy!"
"Wait can any of you drive?" I asked when Ashley unlocked a car
"I can... I have my permit." Jenny laughed stepping into the driver seat of Ashleys car
"Ok!" I hopped into the back seat, "Can't believe you guys know them!" I was still astonished, "This is amazing, glad I moved here!"
"You should be," Ashley said looking at the back seat
Jenny backed out of the driveway and headed toward the concert area,
I could feel my heart beat a thousand miles an hour
Finally the car stopped and we all got out, Ashley and Jenny flashed their passes to the secruity guards and we walked in, hearing the trio warm up their voices.
"Am I being punked?" I bit my lip while walking backstage
"Nope" Jenny laughed pulling me toward the stage
"Hey guys!" Jenny and Ashley waved at the three while I peaked from the curtain and walked out, "Oh my... GOD!" I jumped and sqeaked but then calmed myself down, "I...I...mean, hey!" I waved still a little embarassed
All three got up, "Hey, your Ashley and Jennys new friend?"
"I like to think so" I said out of breathe not really believing they were there
They all gave me a hug, and ofcourse, Nick gave the best hug, in my oppion at least
"So wanna sit down?" Joe asked, "Or just stand there?"
"Oh, I'll sit!" I smiled and grabbed a stool from backstage and came running back
"This is amazing! I never thought in a thousand years I'd meet THE Jonas Brothers..." I laughed
Kristin SHUT UP your sounding like an obsessed fan! I thought, and forced myself to be quiet
Suddently before we could start a actual conversation the sound of clacking heals filled the empty stadium, "Whats that?" I asked looking around as the sound grew louder
"You'll see" Jenny said
A sparkley and rhinestone covered blonde walked onto the stage and sat on Nicks lap, "Hey Hunny!" she kissed his cheek
"Wow there" I said shocked
sorry its really short!
Was running out of ideas lol
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-06-2007, 07:45 PM
WOAH! :O BLONDIE BETTER STEP OFF lol
Anyways, Great Chapter. And Cool! I Have A Car! haha
LOVES IT!
krrristin
09-06-2007, 07:46 PM
haha, Im not too big of a fan of the blonde myself lol
any idea who it is?
eizy12306
09-06-2007, 07:49 PM
I Dont Know, I Might! Lol!
Great Chapter :D
tricia1228
09-06-2007, 07:55 PM
More!
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-06-2007, 07:56 PM
haha, Im not too big of a fan of the blonde myself lol
any idea who it is?
Of Course I Know Who It Is... But I Say You Post More Really Soon!
After All, In JBA, You Did Say That Chapter 3 Would Be Easy =D
krrristin
09-06-2007, 07:59 PM
lol it will be hah! :)
I'll post later on tonight!
EmilyJordanOsment
09-06-2007, 08:01 PM
LOL THIS ROX MY SOX THEY ARE FLYING LIKE HIGH IM LIKE OMG COME BACK SERIOUSLY!LOL
BUT WRITE MOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
- Ava
niiro_tatsu
09-06-2007, 08:06 PM
woooooooooah
Ashley Marie 1992
09-06-2007, 08:17 PM
Write more!!!!!!!! MORE MORE!!! (I wonder who it is! )
EDIT: That Blondie betta back offa my man! lol.
PursePrincess4eva
09-06-2007, 08:18 PM
Hannah Montana! Write more!
krrristin
09-06-2007, 08:18 PM
lol ok ok will soon :)
marshmallows6565
09-06-2007, 08:22 PM
haha ya i def think its hm
but seriously I wish I would meet someone and have them bring me backstage at a jb concert to meet them
niiro_tatsu
09-06-2007, 08:22 PM
Of Course I Know Who It Is... But I Say You Post More Really Soon!
After All, In JBA, You Did Say That Chapter 3 Would Be Easy =D
yeah and ur stupid enough to trust me to fight it! haaha
Ashley Marie 1992
09-06-2007, 08:23 PM
I want it to be me but its ur story and I ain't blonde so I know it ain't me.
krrristin
09-06-2007, 08:24 PM
huh?
Ashley Marie 1992
09-06-2007, 08:26 PM
No body gets me but WRITE MORE WOMAN!
mileyfanforever101
09-06-2007, 08:45 PM
maybe Sharpay or Hannah Montana
krrristin
09-06-2007, 08:46 PM
haha ok I'll start typing soon :)
hannah xo montana xo freak
09-06-2007, 09:10 PM
thats really good
krrristin
09-06-2007, 09:52 PM
So the Rumors are TRUE?
I sat dumbfounded at what just happend, "You two are?"
"yup" the blonde said
Jenny leaned over and whispered, "Nick and the Hic"
I laughed but stopped, knowing it was 'impolite'
"So Miley, when did you two become..." I gulped, "an item?"
"When the tour started!" she laughed and hugged him, "Ok well HANNAH will be going to her dressing room to get ready, are you all staying for the concert?"
"I dont know, am I?" I asked Jenny and Ashley
"Well, I am!" Jenny laughed glancing at Joe then looking away
"I guess I will too" Ashley agreed
"then I'll stay too!" I laughed
Miley stopped and looked back, "Good, I can tell we are gonna be GREAT friends!" she walked away to her dressing room
I wore a pink abercrombie top with a white minnie-skirt, "Im soo not wearing concert clothes though, but good thing I changed out of the uniform." I sighed
"Backstage..." Ashley whispered, "Jennys got the hookup!" she laughed and looked at Jenny who was talking, or shall I say flirting, with Mr. Joe Jonas.
"Lucky gal!" I joked, "Oh and Lucky us too for being backstage!" I sqealed, "Smell-A is freakn' awesome!"
After the Concert
Miley held Nicks hand while everyone talked about how awesome the crowd at concert was.
"Did you see that girls face when we sang to her?" Joe laughed
"Kind like this!" Kevin said impersinating the shocked audience member
Jennys Point of View
They all laughed about their favorite part of the night, my favorite?
Joe had his arm around my waist!
I bit my lip but did my best to act 'coool'
"Kristin, enjoy yourself?" I asked, I already knew her answer though
"Oh YEAH! Best night of my life!" the spunky 15 year old laughed
"Good, glad you did!" Ashley said, eying miley and nick
"Did you have fun?" Joe said looking down
"Uh huh! Lots" I giggled, I was starting to make a fool out of myself with all the giggles.
"Shall we go out tonight?" Kevin asked rubbing his tummy
"Love too! I just need to call my mom!" Kristin walked outside with her phone, we could hear her argue with her parents about how she didnt call earlier and how they were all 'so scared'
but she walked back saying it was cool
"Where are we gonna go?" I asked Joe
"Dunno? Any ideas?" he asked the crowd
"Oooo Olive garden!" Kristin added, "That place is awesome!"
"Olive Garden it is!" Kevin lead the way to the tour bus
"Hey do you think they'll let us park, or shall we have vallet park it?" Joe joked
"I dont think they HAVE vallet at the olive garden joe"
"right right" he laughed
Kristins Point of View
We got out of the bus and headed to the guy who assigns tables,
unfortunately, he had never heard of "the jonas brothers"
So we waited a little longer while crowds swarmed the celebraties we parties with.
"Guys we got our table" I called following the waiter, they all soon formed a line and followed me.
the order of who sat near who on the round table:
Joe>Jenny>Ashley>Me>Nick>Miley>Kevin>
"Bread please" I asked Nick, the bread was near his hand
but he was too pre-occupied with Miley, who blabbed on & on about the concert.
"Ahem, Miley?"
no answer
"Miley... or Nick?"
still no answer, I think it was the fact they ignored me, the fact I couldnt get the bread, or the fact that I was somewhat jealous of Miley that made me so angry.
I rolled my eyes and grabbed some salad instead
atleast its healthier I convinced myself
Nick checked his blood surgar after having the bread and was "good to go" the only word he said to the whole table since we got here.
Ashley and I began to talk about what we were gonna do when we grew up, "Ehh, Im wanna be a vet. Always wanted to be, I took this medical class so I could get a medical scholorship, so now Im CPR, AED, and First Aid certified" I laughed, trying to make myself seem smart
"Cool-Oh my god JOE!" Ashley screamed
I stared at Joe who apparently attempted to impress Jenny by catching a cherry when he threw it. His plan backfired BIG time.
"You said you were medical trained right?" Ashley said pulling me out of my seat
"Did I mention I failed that part? The choking part?" I said panicing
"SOMEONE CALL 911!" Jenny yelled
"Ok..." i walked over trying to remember what to do, "Can I help you?" I asked requesting permission to help
he nodded and I asked him to cough... he couldnt
"crap, himeleck manuver!" I sighed and ran to Joes back and performed the manuver a few times.
*COUGH*
the cherry flew in the air landing in Mileys drink
"GROSS!" she sighed
hannah xo montana xo freak
09-06-2007, 09:58 PM
that was good.
awesome job.
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-06-2007, 10:07 PM
Poor Joe! GRR! MILEY!
Write More!!!
niiro_tatsu
09-06-2007, 10:07 PM
haha i am laughing soo hard right now!
i liked the vallet part then the cherry part... then i was all serious when i saw joe was choking, then i was laughing when it landed in mileys drink!
krrristin
09-06-2007, 10:10 PM
glad you like it! :)
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-06-2007, 10:19 PM
They all laughed about their favorite part of the night, my favorite?
Joe had his arm around my waist!
I bit my lip but did my best to act 'coool'
That Right There Has Probably Got To Be My Favorite Part :P
niiro_tatsu
09-06-2007, 10:20 PM
They all laughed about their favorite part of the night, my favorite?
Joe had his arm around my waist!
I bit my lip but did my best to act 'coool'
That Right There Has Probably Got To Be My Favorite Part :P
hey are u making fun of me trying to act cool?!?!? haha
krrristin
09-06-2007, 10:23 PM
lol hah
cooool
tricia1228
09-06-2007, 10:31 PM
More!
smiley_smiley_miley
09-06-2007, 10:34 PM
Thank goodness they cherry landed in miley's drink, lol. It should have it her in the face, that would have been HYSTERICAL!! also miley needs too back off my man!! lol.
krrristin
09-06-2007, 10:35 PM
lol! ^^
wow I feel so popular lol
mileyforever
09-06-2007, 10:46 PM
Nick's hand should of hit miley's face...nuff said..
Ashley Marie 1992
09-06-2007, 11:24 PM
Thank goodness they cherry landed in miley's drink, lol. It should have it her in the face, that would have been HYSTERICAL!! also miley needs too back off my man!! lol.
Uh, HE'S MINE!! Anyway It shoulda landed in Miley's mouth and let her choke on it (Just spitballin ideas) And it coulda hit her in the eye.
EmilyJordanOsment
09-06-2007, 11:28 PM
*COUGH*the cherry flew in the air landing in Mileys drink
"GROSS!" she sighed
LOL!!
krrristin
09-06-2007, 11:28 PM
lol Haha... ideas for next chapter?
Ashley Marie 1992
09-06-2007, 11:29 PM
lol Haha... ideas for next chapter?
Miley and Nick have a fight and break up and he crawls to me?
krrristin
09-06-2007, 11:32 PM
lol! For right now, the friend characters are just going to be me, ashley, jenny.. and possibley aly
Ashley Marie 1992
09-06-2007, 11:35 PM
Can you make me a character later but as a little older new girl
krrristin
09-06-2007, 11:37 PM
depends...
Ashley Marie 1992
09-06-2007, 11:38 PM
mkay!
krrristin
09-06-2007, 11:39 PM
im tempted to write another chapter... :)
Ashley Marie 1992
09-06-2007, 11:40 PM
PLEASE WRITE ONE, i need it!
krrristin
09-06-2007, 11:54 PM
I need help picking a new name for this FF
if you like it, just say keep it
if you dont, give me examples of awesome names from what you've just read
krrristin
09-07-2007, 07:01 PM
So Grounded
Jessica's, Kristins sisters, Point of View
We all sat around the TV, as American Idol ended. We started to gather all our things and head to our rooms when Ashley, my little sister yelled, "Look its Kristin!" My dad spun around and stared at the tube.
"A young woman saves the life of famous lead singer, Joseph Jonas, when he choked at a local restaraunt!" the reporter said before commercials hit the screen
Kristins Point of View
I just walked up to the doorstep, everyone was behind me, they wanted to meet my family.
I turned the key and opend the door to a household waiting at the entry.
"Um hey?" I said nervously seeing my fathers expression
"You said you were with friends, not partying with rock stars... TEENAGE BOY ROCKSTARS!"
I heard the shuffling of feat and turned around watch Joe, Kevin, and Miley jump into the convertable and drive off
"Your on your own bro!" Joe laughed speeding down the street, he purposley sang a note off key and yelled, "Thanks for saving my singing voice Kristin!"
Jenny, Ashley, Nick and I now sat at the dining table, my dad lecturing us all..
HOW EMBARASSING
"You should never have a teenage girl with teenage rockstars, unsupervised" he blabbed on while I stared at the ceiling.
My mothre walked up, "Kristin you never listen to me... everything we say goes one ear and out the other...you should never party with boys... or the famous." Then she went on to say how I was disobient and how I never listend to anyone but my friends... or something like that, wasnt paying attention.
I was sentenced to 6 weeks of grounding, no friends, no phone, no internet.
3 weeks after the whole incident, I was half way through my grounding. And Ashley, Jen, and I would talk about it ALL the time.
"Ugh, I miss my freedom!" I sighed, raking the cafeteria "food" with my spork, "I just wanna go out, but cant cause my dad basically gaurds the front door
Jenny and Ashley looked at eachother and laughed, "Dont worry soon you might!" Jenny said
That night I wondered what they meant by that, I opend a book, by Edgar Allen Poe. Since I couldnt do anything why not read!
I was into the 7th chapter when I heard something
*tap* *tap*
I got up and looked around
*tap**tap*tap*
"Is something over heating?" I felt the TV and computer monitor, "Nope, it was more of a tap, than a pop"
*tap tap tap tap tap*
I followed the noise to my window, and opend it
In my front lawn was Nick and Jenny holding a sign, "We're Rescuing You!"
sorry, ugh Im grounded, so I wont post much maybe
unless I get my laptop back
till then I'm using my sisters computer
krrristin
09-07-2007, 07:12 PM
Ok, I want to re-write it... should I?
I dont like it very much
worst Ive done In my oppinion
niiro_tatsu
09-07-2007, 07:18 PM
i thought it was good!
krrristin
09-07-2007, 07:19 PM
I think its bad lol... oh well next chaoter WILL be better, since Im not in the "zone" since Im not on my laptop
Plus, I jumped around a lot
niiro_tatsu
09-07-2007, 07:28 PM
i liked it
cant wait till u post mroe!
YouKnowYouLoveMe
09-07-2007, 08:14 PM
i just read all you have so far....
more!!!
its really good and not what i expected!
marshmallows6565
09-07-2007, 08:40 PM
I like it
its a little jumpy or something but its still good
I think that nick is def. going to break up with miley... she obviously doesnt care about him that much if shell bail on him with his brothers
hehe
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-07-2007, 10:32 PM
It's Fine Just The Way It Is Kristin! I Actually Really Liked It!
I'm Telling You, Writer's Could Absolutely Hate A Chapter That They Write, But The Readers Will Practically Adore It lol
Happens To Me All The Time!
Anyways, Have Fun With The Grounding, And I Hope You Get off Soon.
And Post More Soon!!!
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And That Would Be Totally Cool If You Got Grounded For Saving Joe! But I Think Your Parents Should Cut You Some Slack, I Mean You Saved A Life For Joe's Sake!!! haha
hannah xo montana xo freak
09-07-2007, 10:40 PM
wow thats was good.more.
krrristin
09-07-2007, 11:44 PM
thanks everyone! :)
haha I got grounded over a dollar today :P
YouKnowYouLoveMe
09-07-2007, 11:53 PM
well you should have plenty of time to WRITE i guess now wont you!
LotsaBigHearts
09-08-2007, 11:26 AM
We shall wait for you Kristin!! I love your name cause it's mine!! Great fan fiction!!
krrristin
09-08-2007, 07:20 PM
IM typing up my next chapter.... I actually like this one, for now :)
niiro_tatsu
09-08-2007, 07:22 PM
yay cant wait!
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-08-2007, 07:24 PM
WOO! I CAN'T WAIT!
mileyforever
09-08-2007, 08:08 PM
lol! For right now, the friend characters are just going to be me, ashley, jenny.. and possibley aly
me! oh my! yay!! haha
krrristin
09-08-2007, 08:25 PM
The "Great" Escape
I looked at the window and stared at the sign.
"We're Rescuing You!" was written in big bold black marker, on notebook paper.
I held my index finger up, telling them to hold on while I "checked" the scene, I turned around and motioned toward the door. I hesitated before grabbing ahold of the door knob but grabbed it and turned it. The hallway was black, all the bedroom doors were closed and everything was quiet. I crept down the stairs, and once again everything was black. They must be asleep I thought creeping back up towards my room. I ran in and slowly closed my door, since the alarm down stairs was on, I decided to sneak through my window.
I opend the window, taking in a deep breathe, and I crawled out and closed it. Ok hard part done... I assumed they had a ladder or something, so I walked over to the edge of the roof, "What now?" I asked
They both pointed to the lattice.
I looked at what I wore, hollister shorts and white tee. "really?" I mouthed
they nodded and I walked over grabbing ahold of the rickety bougenvillia covered peice of wood. It jerked back, "Ahh-ee" I screamed covering my mouth with my free hand.
The two on the ground laughed as I continued to climb down, about half way I grabbed two large thorns-I let go, shocked, and fell to the ground.
"Ok that REALLY hurt!" I grabbed my lower back and pushed myself up, "Ok Im here, what now?"
"Car is around the corner, we didnt wanna wake your folks..." Jenny laughed pulling me off the lawn
"Well thats one way to get down." Nick laughed following us
About half way down the street I saw a big black SUV, "That it?" I asked pointing
"Yup!" Jenny opend the front door and sat in the passenger seat
Miley, Kevin, Joe, and Ashley were waiting for us.
"we're gonna have fun tonight!" Ashley said
Joe looked over from behind the wheel, "Can you say bowling?"
"AWESOME!" I laughed
He put his shades on, "No I asked if you could say bowling not, 'awesome'!"
I laughed again and buckled myself in, the car began to start.
I stared out the window, thinking about the massive consenquences I'd have to deal with if I was caught.
*Beep Beep*
I jumped up hitting my head on the top of the car, "Ow, that hurt too!" I grabbed my head
"We're here silly!" Ashley said looking into the window, everyone was out of the car.
"Oh, Oh yeah!" I jumped out and shrugged the thought away
We walked in, the sound of falling pins, and rolling balls echoed throughout the building. Kevin walked to the counter, "Get an alley"
"I'll do it!" Miley said running down a short flight of stairs. "Found it!" She stopped infront of the only alley not being used.
We all picked out out a bowling ball and sat down, Joe came over, "Rental Shoes!"
I grabbed a pair and put them on, then forced myself to ask a question, I felt I needed too.... "Can we bumper bowl?"
Everyone laughed
"Oh my god, your serious?" Ashley asked
"Yeah I cant bowl... at all" I sighed picking the 7lb ball up
"I'll help!" Nick said, he sat on the table near the computer
"what?" Miley asked scooting toward him
"Just gonna teach" He smiled
I looked at the two "Um ok?"
Nick got up from his seat and walked over with a bowling ball, "Ok, go like this" he pretended to through it, "Ok?"
"Yeah yeah got it" I said and threw it, obviously I didnt because it bounced off our alley to the alley next to us, then into the other alleys gutter.
"Gutter Ball! Goodjob!" Joe laughed
I turned around, "Haha!" I said saracastically but not really caring
Then I heard the faint sound of a familiar laugh... an obnoxious laugh...
I spun around to where the noise was coming from, near the vending machine
"Oh my..." I sighed staring at who stood about 10 feet away
"I guess Smell-A is smaller than I thought" Nick said walking up
"Uh-oh!" Jenny looked over
secretive_angel
09-08-2007, 08:35 PM
awesome more
krrristin
09-08-2007, 08:51 PM
like it?
eizy12306
09-08-2007, 09:07 PM
love it!
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
09-08-2007, 10:23 PM
"No I asked if you could say bowling not, 'awesome'!"
Haha! Lovin' it!
monkey-money_luv
09-08-2007, 10:41 PM
Wow! I just read all of this, and it's amazing!
I want more!!! Please post!
YouKnowYouLoveMe
09-08-2007, 10:45 PM
:o must know who that is!
smileyface93
09-08-2007, 11:07 PM
omgggggg love the chap!! =]
Ashley Marie 1992
09-08-2007, 11:16 PM
Omg I WANT MORE!!
hannah xo montana xo freak
09-08-2007, 11:44 PM
more!
secretive_angel
09-09-2007, 12:15 AM
more
krrristin
09-09-2007, 12:36 AM
I have the first half written down... now gotta think of the rest :)
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
09-09-2007, 01:01 AM
Ooo I bet it's Kristin's older sister! (Yeah wierd guess.)
niiro_tatsu
09-09-2007, 02:35 AM
oh no, who is it?
tricia1228
09-09-2007, 10:39 AM
More!
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-09-2007, 01:45 PM
KRISTIN! POST MORE!
best_of_both_worlds16
09-09-2007, 05:53 PM
hey this is good! post more!
( soulmates )
09-09-2007, 06:40 PM
who is it?
WHO IS IT?!
flower1
09-10-2007, 01:23 AM
more
Cutiegril123
09-10-2007, 01:54 AM
This is great kristin I LOVE it! Post more muy soon-o (haha me and my moms knockoff spanish u just add o after words hehe) any way. More!
krrristin
09-10-2007, 02:13 AM
Can't Catch Us
I was sitting under the table, watching feet shuffle around me
"Kristin, I thought you said they were asleep" Ashley asked peeking under the table
"I thought they were" I explained
"Well, the whole family is here.... what do we do?" Kevin asked, "Looks like our plan backfired"
I laughed, trying to lighten up my mood, "Dont worry, my dad already thinks your bad examples to me... whatelse would he think of you all!"
"Haha very funny" Jenny said looking around, "But now we have to think of a way to get you out?"
"Safely?" I asked
"Ofcourse!" Nick laughed
"Or we can throught the vents!" Joe chuckled, "Um its your turn now Kristin... you gonna bowl?"
I looked at him like he was crazy (even though he is lol) "Have you missed the whole conversation? I cant get out from under the table or else my parents will see me... take my turn" I shooed him away and heard him say:
"Gutter ball.... gutter ball again, just like what you'd do!"
Ofcourse it was funny... but I did my best to keep my mind on escaping
"Any ideas guys?"
"Here" Nick handed me his jacket
"Oh yeah here" Kevin handed me a scarf and cap
"Dont forget these bad boys" Joe gave me his shades
Ashley laughed, "She looks like a criminal on the run!" Jenny nudged her, "Its the best we can do, now lets go people!"
She pulled me up
I bit my lip, and ran with them
"But what about the..." Joe asked
"We'll come back to play again..." Nick said
"Forget bowling Joe, hop in the car!" Jenny laughed pulling him along
Some sound caught my attention, "Hey mom look its the Jonas Brothers!"
Oh no! I thought
Just then, a swarming crowd blocked the doors and encircled us, I heard my little sisters screaming, "THE JONAS BROTHERS! AND MILEY"
"Great what do we do now?" I whispered and covered my face
Miley looked around, "Hey guys! There are more people than I thought here..."
"Do something Miles" Nick whispered
"Ummmm Hey guys... line up and get an autograph!" She yelled to the crowd
"Phew thanks!" I ran outside, a line formed infront of Miley and the Jonas Brothers while Jenny, Ashley, and I left.
I sat in my room and heard the door slam shut. I closed my book and hopped down the stairs, "hey guys? Where've you been?" I asked pretending not to know
My mom hung her coat up, "Bowling..."
"Without Moi?"
"Yeah, we saw Miley and the Jonas Brothers!" my little teased
"No! Really!" I acted in disbelief
My mom laughed, "Too bad you were grounded"
My dad looked at me, "Yeah, but you already know those snotty kids."
"Yeahh" I laughed and changed the subject, "Well, Im gonna go to bed... sooo... NIGHT!"
I sprinted up the stairs and jumped on my bed, "That was a close one!"
At School The Next Day
"You're ALIVE!" Jenny laughed as I walked over
"Yeah, I know..." I sighed and sat down, "Anything amazing happen when you guys came back?"
Ashley smiled, "maybeee"
Jenny nodded, "Nothing big for either of us..."
"Nothing big?" She asked, "No... well, lately Nick and Miley have been on the rocks and..."
"And what?" I asked awaiting the "big" news
"Nick held my hand! He looked at me, and grabbed my hand..." Ashley said with a HUGE grin
"Ohhh" I said somewhat dissapointed
"Yeah, this happend the second time we got swarmed..." Jenny explained, "Its her 'big' news"
"Yeah....great....awesome" I sighed
Cutiegril123
09-10-2007, 02:18 AM
:o more! :)
krrristin
09-10-2007, 12:09 PM
:D Thank you!
I'll write more today :P
tricia1228
09-10-2007, 05:26 PM
More!
( soulmates )
09-10-2007, 06:21 PM
ooh good chapter
I'm glad she didn't get caught. =P
krrristin
09-10-2007, 06:22 PM
lol... :)
Hmmm I might put new people in the fanfic :D
hannah xo montana xo freak
09-10-2007, 06:51 PM
more =P
( soulmates )
09-10-2007, 07:31 PM
lol... :)
Hmmm I might put new people in the fanfic :D
ooh ooh me!
haha
krrristin
09-10-2007, 08:18 PM
name please? :D
eizy12306
09-10-2007, 08:24 PM
me me me! :P
if you want hehe. my names erin :P
niiro_tatsu
09-10-2007, 08:24 PM
hey kristin u wanna post more? haha
( soulmates )
09-10-2007, 08:43 PM
name please? :D
me?
adri!
mileyforever
09-10-2007, 08:54 PM
hey yo put me in it!!! hehe
krrristin
09-10-2007, 08:55 PM
lol! I will :)
krrristin
09-10-2007, 09:26 PM
I'll write the next chapter soon
PursePrincess4eva
09-10-2007, 09:34 PM
I wanna be in it too! You know my name. (Maria) But you can call me RIA! :D
krrristin
09-10-2007, 09:58 PM
erin adri aly & maria will be in the next chapter
This is my current single status my declaration of independence
"Hey, we should all go out tonight!" Ashley called me
"Again?" I asked
"Yeah... aren't you off 'probation'?" she laughed on the other line
"You mean grounding? Yeah"
"Then we should celebrate!" she laughed
"Ok, as long as I dont get into trouble again!"
"OK, I'll call everyone!"
I hung up and doodled in my notebook... I was supposed to be doing homwork
Later that Night
"bye dad!" I waved and walked out, the black SUV was parked in the driveway
"Hey guys!" I waved and opend the door, "Where are we going now?"
"Kareoke!" Miley yelled
"What?" I asked shocked, "I thought this was supposed to be fun, not humiliating!"
"Oh trust me... It'll be both!" Joe laughed and started the car
Nick sat next to Miley and Ashley, he was in the middle of both
We drove down the bumpy roads, "We're hereeeeeeeeee" Kevin said in a creepy voice
"Shut up! This IS scary!" I laughed
Nick opend the door, "Singing? Nahh... we do it everyday!"
"Not me!" Jenny laughed
We walked in, the sound of tone deaf ammatures attemping to sing, was well deafing for lack of a better word.
"Ok, we need to show these people HOW its done!" Joe jumped onstage, "Sup... Im gonna sing... this song. Dedicated to ya!" ya pointed to Jenny, she laughed, and sang a Elvis song... every once in a while he'd break out in some riduculous Elvis dance move.
Nick laughed, "ok my turn" he scrolled through the songs, he chuckled "I cant believe this song is on here" he pushed a button and the song started
"There she goes again...
the girl Im in love with
its cool we're just friends..."
Miley and Ashley sat next to eachother and he looked at both when he sang
"This is trouble!" Jenny laughed, but looked up to Joe who stood next to her, "Kristin YOUR turn!" she pushed me onto the stage
"Nicks song is over already?" I asked shocked
"Yeahh..." Nick laughed
"Now SING!" Jenny said
"Um ok..." I scrolled through the song choices
and picked one.
I stared at the screan, "ummm"
the words passed really fast, and I stood with my mouth open staring at the words
This is my current single status
My declaration of independence
There's no way I'm tradin' places
Right now a star's in the ascendant
I'm single
(Right now)
That's how I wanna be
I'm single
(Right now)
That's how I wanna be
"Umm" I stuttered, the mike made a whistle sound, "Ummm"
Jenny stared at me, "sing" she mouthed
"Im sorry I cant do this!" I ran off stage
PursePrincess4eva
09-10-2007, 10:14 PM
Poor her! :( But im gonna be in the next chappie! ;)
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-10-2007, 10:17 PM
Oh Darn... You Left! Why?! SING WOMAN! lol
Oh Man, Someone Has To Have Some Serious Cat Fights In Their FanFics.
I Mean They Always Put Me & Miley Together :P
Anyways, Write More!
( soulmates )
09-10-2007, 10:20 PM
come on! you can do it! you can sing! =P
more or i will steal your pants
krrristin
09-10-2007, 10:20 PM
lol!
niiro_tatsu
09-10-2007, 10:46 PM
noooooooooooooooo
haha joe i can imagin him doing the elvis hip move BAHAHA
krrristin
09-10-2007, 10:50 PM
yes, I try to keep Joe... Joe-ish
eizy12306
09-10-2007, 11:10 PM
Ohh i loved it :]
mileyforever
09-10-2007, 11:29 PM
More! Haha
krrristin
09-10-2007, 11:30 PM
a few more comments then I'll type
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-10-2007, 11:32 PM
Like How Many Comments Would You Need? Cuz I Really Want You To Write More, And I'll Wirte A Million Times If You'll Post More!
niiro_tatsu
09-10-2007, 11:33 PM
haha yeah commenting whoo BUFF BUFFF BUFFFFFFFF ahhh
flower1
09-10-2007, 11:36 PM
can u put me in?
HUMPH! i wont ask again then!
secretive_angel
09-10-2007, 11:37 PM
more
krrristin
09-10-2007, 11:40 PM
Like How Many Comments Would You Need? Cuz I Really Want You To Write More, And I'll Wirte A Million Times If You'll Post More!
Whooo I'll type now :)
haha yeah commenting whoo BUFF BUFFF BUFFFFFFFF ahhh
Haha silly duck!
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-10-2007, 11:49 PM
Whooo I'll type now :)
YESH! YOU ARE WRITING! WOO!
Haha silly duck!
lol Correct Term For Duck - WATER CHICKEN
krrristin
09-11-2007, 12:03 AM
The New Kids On the Block
I ran into the bathroom, In real life was I shy? Uh no... but I did suffer from stage fright... MAJOR stage fright.
My heart was beating a thousand miles an hour and I leaned against the sink, "You just made a complete fool out of yourself!" I told myself and splashed some water on my face.
I think it was being scared of singing or that I ran off the short stumpy stage infront of actual celebraties that made have an anxiety attack.
A group of people walked into the bathroom
"The Jonas Brothers are here..." one said walking in
"I know, I need to look good before I talk to them!" another said
They turned the corner and looked at me, "Oh thats the girl that ran off stage!" they whispered to eachother
I wiped my face off and looked at them, "Im right here, I can hear everything you're saying" I laughed, "But I know... I made major headlines right there"
"Not major headlines... just teeny tiny ones... by the way I'm Erin!" she waved
"And I'm Adri... so you know the Jonas' huh?"
I nodded, "Yeah..."
"Tell me about them... or I'll... steal your pants!" Adri Joked
"Whats Nick like? Oh yeah Im Ashley, you can call me Aly"
I laughed seeing as how they changed the subject from my kareoke meltdown to 'what are the Jonas Brothers like?'
"They're nice I guess... Joe is always silly, Kev-o is kinda silly, and Nick is a more serious sarcastic kind of silly." I explained
"Well, that sounds intresting!" Aly laughed
"Well, since they are singers you need to show them how well YOU sing!" Adri laughed, "Can you sing well?"
"Uhh I guess, better than most in my family" I shrugged
"Good, your gonna perform then!" Aly said grabbing my hand and pulling me to the door
"dont look at the crowd!" Erin said pushing me out of the bathroom
"Guys no!" I pushed my feet to the ground stopping them, "There's a reason I ran off stage! I have stagefright!"
Aly crossed her arms, "Trust me, we noticed... and theirs only ONE way to get over it."
"Im afraid to ask what" I closed my eyes
They all laughed, Erin said, "to Sing... at this Kareoke place!"
I walked back to the sink, "I'd rather not..." and rinsed my face again
Ashley walked in, "Hey you water chicken... whats going on? They're asking about you!"
I looked at her and grabbed a paper towel wiping my face, "Is that a good thing?"
"Yes!" she laughed, "Help me get her out!"
"No no no no! Please!" I begged
All four grabbed my hands (2 holding each arm) and pulled me out
"But I dont wanna!" I sounded like a little kid
"How will you ever get over your fear?" Adri asked, "C'mon or I'll steal your..."
"Jacket!" Erin finished
"I'll sing with you" Ashley pulled me to the stage
I grabbed a mike and looked at my feet
"What song? How about 'Leave the Peices'?" she asked scrolling through the songs
"Um sure..." I shrugged
"ready?"
I swallowed and bit my lip, "Yeah!"
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-11-2007, 12:18 AM
Oh Great! You Water Chicken, You Just Had To Bring Me Into This Didn't You!? lol
Anyways, Great Job! More Please!
krrristin
09-11-2007, 12:20 AM
haha silly goose
what do you say about that huh? lol
Goose=water _____
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-11-2007, 12:33 AM
haha silly goose
what do you say about that huh? lol
Goose=water _____
Um... Um...
A Goose Can Be A Water Turkey!
haha
But I Still Want More!
Post It Now!
krrristin
09-11-2007, 12:34 AM
thats sooo cute
I like water turkey!
krrristin
09-11-2007, 01:00 AM
oK I dony like that chap so Im gonna write one right now lol
krrristin
09-11-2007, 01:32 AM
Take Your Love and Hit the Road
With all Honesty, singing, was the farthest thing from fun.
After belting the notes, and singing my heart out, I just wanted to leave
I jumped off the stage, That was humiliating! I thought
"Great job you two, you should be ROCKSTARS!" Joe laughed
"Yeah well, we should get home..." Nick said, somewhat depressed at the moment... or confused
"Whatever you say man!" Kevin shrugged, "You all ready?"
Jenny and I nodded
"Sure!" Ashley said running to the car
"But I didn't get to sing..." Miley said
"Miley, you sing all the time, we just want to get home" Nick sighed
Mileys jaw dropped
Nararators (sp?) POV
The car rolled down the bumpy street once more, but all was quiet.
Miley was hurt, Nick was sidetracked, Kristin embarassed.
The whispers between Jenny and Joe were the only audible noise
The car stopped, "Ashley heres your house!" Kevin unlocked the doors to the SUV
"Thanks guys!" she walked out, and Nick looked over at her leave
"Nick!" Miley pulled him to her, "Whats wrong?" she shook her head
"Umm nothing nothing, we can talk about it later" He brushed her hand off his shoulder
Jenny and Kristin looked at eachother, "Is Nick and the Hic coming to an end?" Jenny whispered
"Think so" Kristin responded
Mileys POV
A lot of people think living in MY life would be wonderful.... but the perfect boyfriend, seemed like he didnt want ME anymore.
I sighed and looked around, "Kev are we near MY house?"
"Sorry Miles, I keep thinking you still live near us!" Kevin laughed
Kristin looked around, "So if you guys are neighbors with Ashley now... why'd you drop her off first?"
Nick looked over and whispered, "with the place I'm in... i'd be awkward"
She nodded and leaned back
"Miles heres your stop!" Kevin yelled
I got out, so did Nick, I guessed he was walking me to my door or something romantic, like the good boyfriend he used to be...
But I guess I was wrong
The walk to the front door was a long and quiet one, seemed like it lasted a lifetime
He stopped at the door step, and I leaned in for the goodbye kiss.
He turned away
"You ok?" I asked recovering from the "rejection"
"Miles...Miley, we need to talk" He sighed
Those are the four worst words a girl could ever EVER hear
"Wh-What?" I stuttered nervously already knowing my fate
"I think we should just be friends Miles...I just... dont think of you in the way I used to you know?"
Tears welled up in my eyes, "Your dumping me?" I screamed
"Shhh Shh" he said, trying to keep it hushed
I stopped and thought, ofcourse! I wrinkled my nose, "For that Ashley right???" I crossed my arms
"Well, no... sorta... its just!" He tried to explain
"You two timing little pig!" I screamed again
"Miley you have to understand, Did you really think we were gonna get married? You should have known this wouldnt last forver" He attempted to explain again
Ofcourse I wouldnt let him, I grabbed the hose and pointed it at him, "threee..."
"Miley what are you doing?" he put his hands in the air
"twoooo..." I aimed
"Miley stop..."
"One!" I pulled the hose, spraying and soaking him from head to toe, "Give that to Ashley for me kay? Tell her its a thank you present for getting the nasty two timing twirp away from me!"
Nick stared at me in disbelief, "Go" I muttered and walked into the house
Jennys POV
Joe and I were talking again... Joking... OK you caught me flirting, but that all stopped when we heard Miley scream
"What the..." Kristin sat up and looked at the window
"Should we...?" I asked Joe reaching for the door
He laughed, "Nah, I have a feeling I know whats happening..."
"Oh my god look, is that Nick?" I pointed at the window at a wet boy with a fro
He knocked at the door and we opend it, we all laughed
"Dont... say... a word!" he sighed and got in the car
"Dude leather seats!" Kevin said looking back
"JUST DRIVE!" He yelled and crossed his arms
Mileys POV
I ran up the stairs into my room
"That stupid, back stabbing, horse spit girl!" I yelled grabbing a scrapbook from under my bed
"Mrs. Nick Jonas" it read I grabbed it and tore the pages, ripping each one into tiny snowflakes... I tossed the mess near the other scrapbook, "Mrs. Cody Linely"
I jumped onto my bed, "ARG! BOYS SUCK!" I layed down and stared at the ceiling...
*bing*
I sat up again with a bright Idea... "No one makes a fool of Destiny Hope Cyrus... No one."
I lifted an eyebrow, "Im gonna get back at them... Miley is Smiley no MORE!"
niiro_tatsu
09-11-2007, 01:49 AM
dun dun dunnn
haha i liked the "ok you caught me flirting" part hah
krrristin
09-11-2007, 01:50 AM
lol thank u
I liked how she had a "Mrs. Cody Linely" scrapbook lol
hannah mon mad
09-11-2007, 05:11 AM
lol me too
more :D
eizy12306
09-11-2007, 05:13 PM
loved it :D
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-11-2007, 05:21 PM
OMJ! Nick & The Hic Are Over! And Maybe Sorta For Me =D
But What Is She Gonna Do??? Hope She's Nicer Than Jaclyn Was :P
WRITE MORE!!!
krrristin
09-11-2007, 06:05 PM
yes, she has a reputation to keep so she wont be AS meen as Jaclyn... every story needs a wicked queen lol
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-11-2007, 06:14 PM
yes, she has a reputation to keep so she wont be AS meen as Jaclyn... every story needs a wicked queen lol
lol True...
WRITE MORE NOW!!!
krrristin
09-11-2007, 06:17 PM
lol I will later when Im
"in the zone"
thats when I get my ideas :)
like the other chapter in the girls bathroom (kareoke), I was NOT in the zone
resulting in a bad chap lol
niiro_tatsu
09-11-2007, 06:30 PM
haha "in the zone..." haha
ok post more!
PursePrincess4eva
09-11-2007, 07:04 PM
You said your were oging to include me! But I do wanna be in a another chappie though. Write more! ;)
krrristin
09-11-2007, 07:56 PM
read the chapter before that one...
PursePrincess4eva
09-11-2007, 08:05 PM
The New Kids On the Block
I ran into the bathroom, In real life was I shy? Uh no... but I did suffer from stage fright... MAJOR stage fright.
My heart was beating a thousand miles an hour and I leaned against the sink, "You just made a complete fool out of yourself!" I told myself and splashed some water on my face.
I think it was being scared of singing or that I ran off the short stumpy stage infront of actual celebraties that made have an anxiety attack.
A group of people walked into the bathroom
"The Jonas Brothers are here..." one said walking in
"I know, I need to look good before I talk to them!" another said
They turned the corner and looked at me, "Oh thats the girl that ran off stage!" they whispered to eachother
I wiped my face off and looked at them, "Im right here, I can hear everything you're saying" I laughed, "But I know... I made major headlines right there"
"Not major headlines... just teeny tiny ones... by the way I'm Erin!" she waved
"And I'm Adri... so you know the Jonas' huh?"
I nodded, "Yeah..."
"Tell me about them... or I'll... steal your pants!" Adri Joked
"Whats Nick like? Oh yeah Im Ashley, you can call me Aly"
I laughed seeing as how they changed the subject from my kareoke meltdown to 'what are the Jonas Brothers like?'
"They're nice I guess... Joe is always silly, Kev-o is kinda silly, and Nick is a more serious sarcastic kind of silly." I explained
"Well, that sounds intresting!" Aly laughed
"Well, since they are singers you need to show them how well YOU sing!" Adri laughed, "Can you sing well?"
"Uhh I guess, better than most in my family" I shrugged
"Good, your gonna perform then!" Aly said grabbing my hand and pulling me to the door
"dont look at the crowd!" Erin said pushing me out of the bathroom
"Guys no!" I pushed my feet to the ground stopping them, "There's a reason I ran off stage! I have stagefright!"
Aly crossed her arms, "Trust me, we noticed... and theirs only ONE way to get over it."
"Im afraid to ask what" I closed my eyes
They all laughed, Erin said, "to Sing... at this Kareoke place!"
I walked back to the sink, "I'd rather not..." and rinsed my face again
Ashley walked in, "Hey you water chicken... whats going on? They're asking about you!"
I looked at her and grabbed a paper towel wiping my face, "Is that a good thing?"
"Yes!" she laughed, "Help me get her out!"
"No no no no! Please!" I begged
All four grabbed my hands (2 holding each arm) and pulled me out
"But I dont wanna!" I sounded like a little kid
"How will you ever get over your fear?" Adri asked, "C'mon or I'll steal your..."
"Jacket!" Erin finished
"I'll sing with you" Ashley pulled me to the stage
I grabbed a mike and looked at my feet
"What song? How about 'Leave the Peices'?" she asked scrolling through the songs
"Um sure..." I shrugged
"ready?"
I swallowed and bit my lip, "Yeah!"
Im not in that chapter. I dont see meh name.
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-11-2007, 08:28 PM
Kristin! Are You In The Zone Yet?! I Need To Know What Happens!
krrristin
09-11-2007, 08:39 PM
lol ok Ashley
sorry I forgot Maria...
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
09-11-2007, 09:11 PM
1. I can totally see Miley's point.
2. Nick could've been a little nicer, but it was okay.
3. Way to go with hose! She's got some good aim! That's giving me an idea...
hannah xo montana xo freak
09-11-2007, 09:25 PM
woah..more
krrristin
09-11-2007, 09:26 PM
We're Gone, So Gone
Ashleys POV
After being dropped off:
I had just been dropped off by Nick, Joe, and Kevin and I walked up to the front porch of the house, "Knock Knock!" I said after ringing the doorbell
after a couple of minutes I rang it again
"KNOCK KNOCK!"
Once again no answer.
"This is ridiculous!" I sighed and sat on the chair near the door and noticed a yellow paper in the corner of my eye. I grabbed it and read it:
"Hey Hun, dont have too much fun while you father and I are gone ok? Stay at the Jonas' til we come back from 'clubbin' as you teens call it
love you tons, mom and dad!"
"Clubbing?" I crumpled the paper and threw it on the lawn, "This is going to be intermidable!" I sighed, and rested my head in my hands trying to locate the Jonas' black SUV. I was expecting them to come in about 15 minutes...
"There thats it! That was fast" I rushed over to a black car that just parked
the window rolled down
"Hey sweet thang! Need a ride?" a pudgy middle aged man asked pulling his shades down
I stopped dead in my tracks, "Uh no no no... Im ok. My BOYFRIEND is gonna pick me up... he's a.... cop!" I did my best to make it sound believable
"Ay Ok Barbie... call me if need anything!" He winked and rode off
"Ew ew ew EW!" I shook the image from memory
and sat down on the chair, concealing myself with the hedge near me
Nicks POV
"Bye Water Turkey!" Kristin said to me as she walked out of the car
I said sarcastically, "Haha, so funny! Bye Krist"
she waved and got out
"That was the last of em... now lets go! Im pooped!" Joe sighed, reclining the seat
"Yeah lets just go home!" I ran my fingers through my wet hair, "its cold!"
Narrarators POV
Ashley waited by the stoop, watching the same black car pass bye several times.
"This is a NIGHTMARE!" she muttered to herself, seeing the outline of the man in the front seat roll by for the seventh time
"Please, help me make it out here alive... PLEASE!" she begged the things around her, she was basically talking to herself.
"Plea.... Oh whats that?" she sat up and heard the familiar sound of rock music blasting in the distnace, "the're here! They're here!"
Her heart jumped at the sight of the original black SUV park in the drive way, "They're HERE!" she exclaimed in delight
she saw two figures walk out, Joe and Kevin.... then she saw Nick.
"Im saved!" she laughed and ran over, the fear of the old guy earased from memory.
And in the overwhelming state she was in she couldnt help herself
she rushed over to Nick, wrapped her arms around him, and kissed him.
My hero!
happily ever after?
Maria, you can be in the Next chap :)
There... not what you expected but a twist lol :D
( soulmates )
09-11-2007, 09:29 PM
(three chapters back)
yay! I feel special!
haha I'll steal your.... JACKET!
good chapter. =]
aww so cute
hannah xo montana xo freak
09-11-2007, 09:30 PM
that was good.lol
more
niiro_tatsu
09-11-2007, 09:31 PM
haha ewwwwww old dude... GROSSSSS
krrristin
09-11-2007, 09:32 PM
wow you guys came fast! lol
krrristin
09-11-2007, 09:34 PM
jenny, adri, and maria... since you guys werent in here you will be mentioned a lot in the next chapter... I think, I dont prewrite it so I just go with the flow lol
niiro_tatsu
09-11-2007, 09:40 PM
yeah i go with the flow also
and yeah i was seeing if i missed anything like if u posted and i was in school or something.. then i went to the next page and there was the new ch
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-11-2007, 09:55 PM
AHHH! CREEPY OLD GUY! GO AWAY!
YAY! I KISSED NICK! WOO!
You Are My Hero Kristin =D
krrristin
09-11-2007, 09:57 PM
Haha...
:)
mileyforever
09-11-2007, 10:13 PM
post more...post more...or i'll be forced to spam your fan fic...even ask jenny what i could do.
mileyforever
09-11-2007, 10:13 PM
muah haha
krrristin
09-11-2007, 11:51 PM
lol! I might... but I need to think of a plot :O
niiro_tatsu
09-11-2007, 11:53 PM
ughhh ok
gotta get off for homework
krrristin
09-12-2007, 12:06 AM
OK im in the zone :)
Ill start to type :D
YAY Ashley haha
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-12-2007, 12:08 AM
YESH! YOU ISH GONNA WRITE MORE!
I Probably Won't Be Able To Read It Until Tomorrow, But Yeah...
niiro_tatsu
09-12-2007, 12:35 AM
ugh yeah i came to check if u posted... but ur writing! so thats good@
krrristin
09-12-2007, 01:19 AM
sorry my mom took my laptop away for an hour to snoop through my myspace lol
krrristin
09-12-2007, 01:20 AM
Ahh Stupid Internet! It Deleted What I Wrote! I Pressed "preview Post" And It Erased It
Cutiegril123
09-12-2007, 01:38 AM
:o oh no thats horriable!!!
krrristin
09-12-2007, 01:48 AM
you had a bad day, you take it one down
Nicks eyes opend but decided to go with the flow
Joe and Kevin stared at the two, "Woah... where did THAT come from?" Kevin laughed
"No idea!" Joe put two fingers to the edge of his lips and whistled a loud and high pitched note Weee Whewww!
They seperated and looked at Joe, then Ashley looked at Nick, then at her feet.
"Oh, Im sorry... there was this guy... and he was a creep... then you came came... and I didnt know what I was doing.. and..." she was stopped, Nick lifted her chin so he could see her face and kissed her lips gently
"its OK" he laughed and grabbed her hand
she bit her lip
The Next Day At School
Kristins POV
I was panicing, and scrambling to the lunch table before 1st period, "Cant believe I forgot to do my home... AGAIN!" I scribbled random answers down on the worksheets
"Tsk tsk... Kristin" Jenny laughed coming over
"Not now please" I wrote down:
Honest Abe
George Washington
3.14
5*5=123456789
"Woah, someone had a bad day!" Jenny poked the worksheet
I let out a sigh, "Try starting your day with a manic dad, and a self richeous little sister! Oh and then remembering you had homework right when you reached the school gates!"
"Oh trust me... the whole homework thing, thats happend to me too!" Jenny laughed, "Where is Ashley anyway?"
"I have no-what the?" I looked up hearing the obnoxious humm of merry music
Ashley skipped into sight, picking blossomed flowers and walking over to us, "Hmmmmhmmm ahmmmm" she twirled in a circle, "Bestt day of my life" she laughed dacing with some invisible being
"Lucky you!" I sighed and burried my face in my hands, "I'd KILL to be you right now!"
"Killing is a no no my dear" Ashley said and finally stopped dancing, and put a flower near my ear, "Peace be with you"
3rd Period Geometry Class
"Kristin homework?" the teacher called
"Woah wait what?" I sat up, waking from my hourly class nap, I wiped my mouth, "Oh yeah that!" I grabbed my binder and ripped some pages out, "here" I held the paper up and the teacher grabbed it
"You ok Kristin?" the kid sitting next to me asked
"Yeah Maria, Im fine..." I sighed, "Just having a bad day..."
"Well, if it helps Im having one too" she laughed
"Actually it doesnt but thanks anyway..." I giggled and wrote down the notes I missed
Later that day
Miley sat in the back of a limo, watching the six of us with her binoculars.
Ashley walked up the Jonas driveway, "Hey guys!" she laughed and kissed Nick, "Gardening?"
"Yup" Nick smiled and had his hand around Ashleys waist
Joe looked me and Jenny, "Actually, its the hole we are buring you two in!" He ended the sentance with a evil laugh BWAHAHAHA
"Mom wants us to plant the daisys I guess..." Kevin explained
"wait you two are a couple?" I asked in shocked
Ashley blushed "As of yesterday"
Jenny cooed but I stared at Nick and Ashley
I turned away and looked at the corner, a little jealous
"Thats it! I dont even have to do any of the dirty work... SHE CAN!" Miley laughed pointing to me from inside the car, she lowered he binoculars, "And I can still keep my rep. Never mess with America's sweet heart!"
krrristin
09-12-2007, 01:52 AM
yes it finally worked WOOO
Cutiegril123
09-12-2007, 01:53 AM
WOO! Great Chapter! More! :) Evil Miley grr.
krrristin
09-12-2007, 01:54 AM
HAha glad u like it!
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-12-2007, 04:36 PM
Oh Wow! Was Miley Stalking Us?! :P
PLEASE DON'T BE TO MAD AT MOI!
I Was Just Escaping The Creepy Old Guy, Nick Did The Rest haha
POST MORE KRISTIN!!!
hannah xo montana xo freak
09-12-2007, 05:56 PM
more
PursePrincess4eva
09-12-2007, 06:01 PM
Oh yeah! I was having a bad day! LOL Write more!
krrristin
09-12-2007, 08:03 PM
next chapter will be called
My Enemys, Enemy is My Friend
mileyforever
09-12-2007, 08:08 PM
don't make me spam....haha
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
09-12-2007, 08:08 PM
"Actually it's the hole we're going to bury you in."
Haha. More soon 'K?
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-12-2007, 08:46 PM
My Enemys, Enemy is My Friend
Okay, Well First off, You So need To Post More Really Soon!
Two, I Totally Love The Title's You Come Up With! They Are So Clever =)
And Three, Is Your Enemy Miley? Is Her Enemy Me?
HURRY UP AND POST SO I CAN KNOW! AHH!
I'm Like Freaking Out Here! You Should Have never Posted The Title!
Just Makes Me Want The Chapter More!!!
krrristin
09-12-2007, 08:48 PM
haha!
krrristin
09-12-2007, 08:50 PM
im writing it right now
krrristin
09-12-2007, 09:33 PM
My Enemys Enemy is My Friend
A lot of emotions raced through my mind, jealousy, loyalty, confusion.
I stared at the corner of the lawn, away from the group of people. All of a sudden a hand appeared infront of my face snapping wildley.
"Woah-what?" I took a step back and fell out of the trance I was in
Jenny laughed and pulled her hand away from my face, "Don't worry guys, shes been doing that ALL day"
Ashley laughed and squeezed Nicks hand, "I have those days too!"
I looked over at them and smile, "Yea! I think everyone does" I put aside my jealousy... besides she DID introduce me to the jonas'
The two looked at eachother and smiled... they really did make a cute couple, and I accepted that... Really I did!
School The Next Day
Ashley arrived happier than the rest of the student body put together, again.
I stuffed my books into my locker, "Hey! How are you and Nick?" I asked with a smile
"Good... no... GREAT!" She smiled and opend her locker, which was near mine
"Thats cool..."
"Oh guess what, you know how tomorrow we get to bring someone we know to school like a parent or something?"
"Yeah PAC day... Parents Accompany Children" I shrugged, "No way Im bringing MY parents, can you say embarass?"
"Yeah, but I heard we could bring someone like... lets say a Jonas?"
I stopped messing with my locker and looked at her, "Really?!"
"Yeah, Jenny is bringing Joe, and my parents INSIST on coming so can you take Nick for me?"
I hesitated, "I dont know..."
"Please please please! I'll take him off your hands during break and stuff, the classes he's with you, no big!" she begged
I gave in, "Fine fine... you win. I'll take him to school tomorrow" I laughed, "So tomorrow right?"
she nodded and we heard the bell ring... we waved to eachother and went to our next classes
To my suprise Miley texted me, I opend my sidekick to see what it said
The VP stopped me and held her hand out, "I want that phone"
Being a total dumby I responded, "Oh yeah, you should get one... it rocks" I tried to walk past her
"No, I want THAT phone"
"But this is mine, I pay for the bills... you should get your OWN" I attempted to walk past her again
"You dont understand do you?" the Vice Principal rolled her eyes, "No phones allowed in school, gimme"
"ohhh... wait" I had a confused look on my face
She grabbed the phone from my hands, "You can pick it up at PAC day tomorrow" she walked away
PAC Day At School
PAC day, I definately put Nick to work, "Beware, girls wil be chasing you" I said handing him my backpack and books, "So, stay strong and dont drop those"
"Gee thanks Krist" he laughed
"Ok, lets go" we stepped out of the car and onto the campus, "where IS everybody..." I asked looking around the deserted campus. Just then, Jenny ran over, "Hey guys... Joe needs your help."
"Ohhh I'd rather not" Nick laughed, "I dont think I could manage books and a school full of girls at the same time"
"Yeah so we're just gonna go this way" I laughed pretending to go the other way
Jenny crossed her arms, "hah! No not funny lets GO!" she grabbed our arms and pulled us to a crowd, "HEY GUYS ITS NICK JONAS!" she yelled pointing to Nick and I
"Uh oh!" We said in unician and half of the girls charged toward us "RUN!"
We reached the safety of out first classroom, and I leaned against the door, "That is Madness..." I looked at the room full of parents and kids, "Hey there! Um, we'll just get seated...."
we both sat down in the front of the classroom, the teacher walked up, "So Kristin, you decided to bring your rockstar boyfriend?"
I wrinkled my nose, "No no! My friends boyfriend... but rockstar none the less!" I leaned into my seat and turned bright red
That question was asked in each of my classes and each time, I turned an even birghter color of red.
Lunch Time!!
I left Nick with Ashley while I went to recieve my sidekick, "thanks!" I grabbed my phone from the VP and hugged it, "My babies back!"
I noticed a little mail sign blinking on the front screen, "Oh yeah I have a text!"
SmileyMiley: Hey, I heard Nick and Ashley were together... What kind of friend is she? Nick said he was breaking up with me for YOU! I think she heard about it and decided to keep him for herself.
I stared at the text in disbelief, "What?"
Mileys POV
I shut my phone and looked out the window from the Hannah Montana set, although I was sweet... I stood by the saying
"There is no hell like a woman scorn"
krrristin
09-12-2007, 09:43 PM
the cell phone thing actually happend to my BFF morgyn lol
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-12-2007, 09:45 PM
AAAHHHHH! MILEY! NO!
WRITE MORE KRISTIN!!! LIKE NOW!
mileyforever
09-12-2007, 09:53 PM
Omj!!!!! More
krrristin
09-12-2007, 09:54 PM
maybe tonight... or I might let you suffer and wait a couple days HAHA
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-12-2007, 09:58 PM
A COUPLE DAYS?! WHAT!?! NO!!!!!
I Can Understand Until Tomorrow, But A Couple Days?! I Think Not Missy!
Jenny Does Enough Of That Already :P
niiro_tatsu
09-12-2007, 10:06 PM
A COUPLE DAYS?! WHAT!?! NO!!!!!
I Can Understand Until Tomorrow, But A Couple Days?! I Think Not Missy!
Jenny Does Enough Of That Already :P
hey u talking about me behind my back again?!?!? lol jk
POST MORE KRISTIN AHHH
and why did joe need our help?
krrristin
09-12-2007, 10:07 PM
HAH! You post... then I will :)
krrristin
09-12-2007, 10:07 PM
hey u talking about me behind my back again?!?!? lol jk
POST MORE KRISTIN AHHH
and why did joe need our help?
he was being swarmed by girls
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-12-2007, 10:10 PM
hey u talking about me behind my back again?!?!? lol jk
POST MORE KRISTIN AHHH
and why did joe need our help?
I Think Joe Needed Help Because Of All The Fan Girls :P
And Hey! You & Aly Had A Whole Conversation About Me! haha
So I Wouldn't Be Talking Mrs. Joe Jonas!
HAH! You post... then I will :)
You Talking To Me? If So Then Fine!
Maybe I'll Cut My Chapter Short So I Can Post, And So Can You :P
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
09-12-2007, 10:12 PM
he was being swarmed by girls
Wow...shocker. Nah, I'm just playing. Anyway I liked the chapter, but can you say like Kristin's POV. Cause it took me forever to figure out who was who. ('Cept Miley.)
niiro_tatsu
09-12-2007, 10:15 PM
he was being swarmed by girlsthats what i thought haha. i take karate i can take 'em!
I Think Joe Needed Help Because Of All The Fan Girls :P
And Hey! You & Aly Had A Whole Conversation About Me! haha
So I Wouldn't Be Talking Mrs. Joe Jonas!
You Talking To Me? If So Then Fine!
Maybe I'll Cut My Chapter Short So I Can Post, And So Can You :P
yeahhhhhh but it was a good conversation... Mrs. Nick Jonas!
and i have a proposition.... for the both of you.
make a good long chapter (with some jenoe/jonny/other couple name action... yeah thats umm jenny and joe if u didnt know haha wow that rhymed lol)
anyways if u two post more... a good long chapter with some J/J action... i'll post one tonight also! :P
krrristin
09-12-2007, 10:25 PM
thats what i thought haha. i take karate i can take 'em!
yeahhhhhh but it was a good conversation... Mrs. Nick Jonas!
and i have a proposition.... for the both of you.
make a good long chapter (with some jenoe/jonny/other couple name action... yeah thats umm jenny and joe if u didnt know haha wow that rhymed lol)
anyways if u two post more... a good long chapter with some J/J action... i'll post one tonight also! :P
haha! Ok I'll get to thinking about what can happen next lol
Wow...shocker. Nah, I'm just playing. Anyway I liked the chapter, but can you say like Kristin's POV. Cause it took me forever to figure out who was who. ('Cept Miley.)
yeah I will sorry :) I thought people knew i was main narrarator
I Think Joe Needed Help Because Of All The Fan Girls :P
And Hey! You & Aly Had A Whole Conversation About Me! haha
So I Wouldn't Be Talking Mrs. Joe Jonas!
You Talking To Me? If So Then Fine!
Maybe I'll Cut My Chapter Short So I Can Post, And So Can You :P
Yeah you should :)
ANYONE KNOW HOW TO VIEW A SINGLE POST? CAUSE i NEED IT FOR WHEN I WRITE THE TABLE OF CONTENTS :)
hannah xo montana xo freak
09-12-2007, 10:28 PM
that was good moremore..
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-12-2007, 11:01 PM
haha! Ok I'll get to thinking about what can happen next lol
yeah I will sorry :) I thought people knew i was main narrarator
Yeah you should :)
ANYONE KNOW HOW TO VIEW A SINGLE POST? CAUSE i NEED IT FOR WHEN I WRITE THE TABLE OF CONTENTS :)
For A Single Post, You Click The Little Number Thing In The Corner Of Your Post...
Do You Know What I Mean?
-----
And I'm Gonna Try And Think For A Bit Longer, And If I Can't Think Of Anything, I'll Post.
krrristin
09-12-2007, 11:03 PM
I Have 12 Chapters Whhoooo
Table Of Contents Is Up :]
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-12-2007, 11:24 PM
HIPHIPHOORAY FOR TABLE OF CONTENTS!
But You Need To Hurry Up And Post So Jenny Will!
HeeHee
marshmallows6565
09-12-2007, 11:37 PM
hey... I was wondering if since no one is with kevin maybe I could come into the story and date him? :D
and its really good so far I really like it!!!!!!!!
krrristin
09-12-2007, 11:44 PM
name? sorry :)
krrristin
09-12-2007, 11:44 PM
kk I'll start typing now :)
marshmallows6565
09-12-2007, 11:47 PM
Sarah
if you put me in thanks!
krrristin
09-12-2007, 11:47 PM
but before I do... I need your name :)
marshmallows6565
09-12-2007, 11:48 PM
sarah is my name
krrristin
09-12-2007, 11:48 PM
ok sarah! thanks! Next chapter will be called
"didnt think I'd turn around and say its too late to apologize"
marshmallows6565
09-12-2007, 11:49 PM
can't wait to read it!!!
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-12-2007, 11:50 PM
STOP POSTING THE CHAPTER NAMES BEFORE THE CHAPTERS!!!
IT MAKES ME GO CRAZY!!! AHHHH! I'M FREAKING OUT AGAIN!
niiro_tatsu
09-12-2007, 11:56 PM
ahhhhhh i wanna help
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-13-2007, 12:09 AM
FASTER WOMAN! FASTER!!!
lol haha
MORE!!!
krrristin
09-13-2007, 12:16 AM
I rele like this chapter It'll be done soon :)
niiro_tatsu
09-13-2007, 12:17 AM
eeeek ok i am doing theo. but still wont be able to post tonight sorry
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-13-2007, 12:24 AM
YAY! But Please Hurry... I Gotta Go Soon...
krrristin
09-13-2007, 12:24 AM
Its Too Late to Apologize (http://youtube.com/watch?v=h8oBykb_Pqs)
Kristins POV
I continuasly re-read the text. "What?" I raised an eyebrow, "This cant be true" I shook my head, although part of me KNEW she would never do such a thing the other half... the jealous half, wanted to believe it.
I shut the phone and slowly walked down to our table
"Hey! You ok?" Ashley asked looking up from her conversation with Nick and her parents
I hesitated, was my relationship with one of my best friends really going to be ruined because of a rumor and a boy? No... I didnt want it too, but I spoke before I could think
"You lied... I... I cant believe you would... UGH!" I grabbed my bag and stompted into the hallway, I turned around and could see Ashleys shocked and confused expression, she got up and chased after me.
Whats wrong with you Kristin? Did you really just make a fool out of yourself? I took a deep breathe and stopped, hearing her footsteps, and turned around
"How DARE you make me look like someone I'm not infront of my parents and boyfriend!" Ashley yelled pointiing to the table
"Oh, excuse me for being dissapointed when I found out my best friend really isnt a friend!" I turned and started to walk away.
"Not so fast!" she grabbed my shoulder and spun me around, "What exactly ARE you accusing me of?"
I scoughed, "Act like you dont know? Ask Miley!"
I rushed into a class rooom and shut the door.
Ashley stood silent, staring at the door, and wondering what JUST happend
After a few seconds, deciding what to do... whether to pound on the door or talk to her parents, Ashley turned around facing the table and walked over. Her head hung down and she sat near her parents. Resting her head on her mothers shoulder, "and to think I trusted her..." she mumbled and looked at the sky
I saw her walk back, peeking through the blinds of the classroom, I sighed, "What in the world have you done Kristin" I slipped of the counter and hid in a corner til the lunch bell rang, "stupid stupid STUPID!" I said while banging my head against the wall
Ashleys POV
Jenny sighed leaning her head against Joes chest, "What just happend"
"I have NO idea babe... I mean hun... I mean Jenny" Joe sat up confused, and changed the subject quickly before Jenny could say anything, "Hey Ash, wanna explain?"
I looked over, it was comforting to see that SOMEONE was actually having a romantic time while all this drama unfolded,
"Do I wanna explain?" I stabbed the peices of food left in my fruit cup, "No... not really..."
I looked down then at the class room and back at my fruit cup
Later that day.... I barged into the house and grabbed the phone
"hunny what are you doing?" My dad asked walking into the house
"Calling that back stabbing Hill...Billy Rae! Hey Can I talk to miley?" My voice changed from angry to sweet in a millisecond, and I waited for Miles to answer the phone
"Howdy!"
"What did you say to her?" I asked/yelled into the phone
"What are you talking about" she laughed on the other line
"You know... what did you tell Kristin?"
"Oh that!" she giggled, "You got what you deserved Ashley..."
"What I deserve? For what?"
I could hear Mileys friends laughing in the distance she whispered into the phone, "Lets just say, atleast I dont go for sloppy seconds" she was referring to me dating her ex
"Excuse me? But HE broke up with YOU, all this anger is intended for him NOT me. So WHAT did you say to her to make her so mad?"
Miley groaned, "That..." she tried to make something up, "That you talked about her behing her back! Yeah thats it!"
I hung the phone up, and called Kristin just as quick
"Hello?" she asked timidly
I bit my tongue keeping my temper low, "Kristin I never said anything about you! never!"
"What ARE you talking about?" she asked in a confused tone
I rolled my eyes, "I called Miley, do you really think I'd tell rumors about you?"
"She never told me that she said that..."
"What?" I demanded and held onto the chair near me, I felt like I was going to break with how hard I gripped it
"That Nick broke up with her for... me and that you found out and tried to get him for yourself, and it made me question our..."
"Friendship?" I finished her sentance, pissed. I shook my head, "Do you really think I'D do that? You obviously dont know me!"
"Wait!" she pleaded
"No... friends who turn their back on me... I dont need" I shook my head and hung up
The Next Day
Kristin POV
I knocked on Mileys door, Billy Rae opend it, "Hey Mr. Cyrus is Miley here?"
"Yeah sure.... Hey bud... your friend is here to see you!"
she ran down, and stopped reaching the door, "Oh..."
She stepped out and closed the door
"You LIAR! I made a complete fool of myself because your a pshyco ex girlfriend?" I screamed
She sighed, "No you dont understand! Im not a bad person!"
"I know Miley, and your bettter than that." I shook my head, "I HAVE no friends because of you..."
"You have me, Im your friend still right?" she asked
"You know what? Its friends that turn their back on me... I dont need" I quoted Ashley and walked off her property and into my moms car
sorry Jenny more Joenny drama in following chapters
krrristin
09-13-2007, 12:24 AM
Posted! Whoo
niiro_tatsu
09-13-2007, 12:29 AM
yayyy there was some jenoe action or joenny as u call it.. i like both hmmm I LIKE IT
Fav part:
Jenny sighed leaning her head against Joes chest, "What just happend"
"I have NO idea babe... I mean hun... I mean Jenny" Joe sat up confused, and changed the subject quickly before Jenny could say anything,
OHHHH YEAHHHHHHH
haha cant wait till more chapters!
once again sorry i couldnt post. i'm going to bed
krrristin
09-13-2007, 12:30 AM
night!
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-13-2007, 12:31 AM
I LOVES IT! POST MORE!
krrristin
09-13-2007, 12:32 AM
well I hope you all like it
worked hard and fast
little jumpy but I liked it
krrristin
09-13-2007, 12:41 AM
Ive decided next chapter will be called
Lets get these teen hearts beating FASTER FASTER
EDIT: I take bits from songs :P
anywhoo bitter fued=disaster
niiro_tatsu
09-13-2007, 12:44 AM
OMG i love that song.. by panic! at the disco
haha
anyways... next chapter sounds great... maybe a little jenoe/joenny romance action going on?
eh eh *nudges kristin* EH????
hah
krrristin
09-13-2007, 12:45 AM
haha lots of it!
OO Im in the zone!
should I write? should I?
niiro_tatsu
09-13-2007, 12:45 AM
yes YES!!! if u write will u post tonight?
haha that rhymed!
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-13-2007, 12:46 AM
YES YOU SO TOTALLY SHOULD WRITE!!!
AND STOP POSTING THE CHAPTER NAMES! AHH!!
POST MORE RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
niiro_tatsu
09-13-2007, 12:49 AM
UGH I KNOW!!! oops caps lock ahah
krrristin
09-13-2007, 12:51 AM
Nah, I'll save it for tomorrow lol :)
want clues?
just ask...
party
Aly & Sarah become MAIN characters
and more Kristin & Ashley drama over Nick
for the time being, and for a couple more chapters they wont be friends lol y? You'll see
and a new couple, is born
anywhoo...d
do not quote this message please :)
niiro_tatsu
09-13-2007, 12:52 AM
YES!!!
wait no it'll spoil
WAIT YES cause i wanna--
noo.. but
JOENNY/JENOE ACTION!!!! AHHH
ok YES
krrristin
09-13-2007, 12:53 AM
:D Jenny read the post above, thurowly (how do you spell that word)
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-13-2007, 12:54 AM
WHAT?! NOW WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO AND TELL ME WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN!?
YOU NEED TO POST TONIGHT! I BEG OF YOU!!! I'LL BE ETERNALLY GRATEFUL!
krrristin
09-13-2007, 12:55 AM
will you read it tonight? :D
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-13-2007, 12:55 AM
:D Jenny read the post above, thurowly (how do you spell that word)
Yes Jenny... Read More Carfully ;) There Is A Reason We Are Not Supposed To Quote The Comment lol
And The Word Is Spelled - Thoroughly I Believe.
krrristin
09-13-2007, 12:57 AM
oh well... I cant spell haha
and WILL you read it... I will only type and post tonight if you two read it :P
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-13-2007, 12:57 AM
will you read it tonight? :D
Um... If I Say Yes Will You Post It?
But I Probably Won't Be, Cuz It Is Practically Midnight Here Where I Live...
But Either Way, You Have Other Fans! POST IT PLEASE!
niiro_tatsu
09-13-2007, 12:58 AM
well it wasnt there before.... i think i dunno
well what:
and a new couple, is born
EEEKKKK a new couple.. could this be the joenny/jenoe couple i have been waiting for?!??!! EEEKKKK
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-13-2007, 12:59 AM
Oh, But If You Can Get It Done Sorta Fast, I Will Read It!
I Might Not Go To School Tomorrow Anyways Cuz I Feel Like I'm Gonna, Well, Ya'll Don't Wanna Know...
But PLEASE Post It!
niiro_tatsu
09-13-2007, 12:59 AM
oh well... I cant spell haha
and WILL you read it... I will only type and post tonight if you two read it :Pof course!
i will stay up late and get sicker just to read it!
cause now i know a new couple is formed eeeekkkkk and i am hoping its jenoe/joenny
ok i need to choose one or the other....
jenoe
or
joenny
i like joenny YUP! haha
krrristin
09-13-2007, 12:59 AM
haha! I feel happy!
so I've thought of the concept now I must type :)
ttyl
happy ash & jen?
Hmm mufasa and king of the land confuse me
so I shall call
ashley: water chicken
and
Jenny: water turkey :)
more fun
silly ducks
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-13-2007, 01:03 AM
haha! I feel happy!
so I've thought of the concept now I must type :)
ttyl
happy ash & jen?
Hmm mufasa and king of the land confuse me
so I shall call
ashley: water chicken
and
Jenny: water turkey :)
more fun
silly ducks
haha :P Those Ish My Words
And That last Line, It Should Not Read "Silly Ducks"
It Should Be... Um... Silly Ashley! haha
And You're Lucky, I'm Gonna Stay Up Later To Read Your FanFic,
But Also Cuz Home Improvement Just Started :P
mileyforever
09-13-2007, 01:07 AM
Need More Now
krrristin
09-13-2007, 01:08 AM
YAY
*writes faster*
krrristin
09-13-2007, 02:06 AM
30 minutes of my life were just wasted on that chapter, and MMW was like down for 15 minutes and it erased my chap again... Oh well, sorry guys no new chap tonight tomorrow at around 2 PST ok? sorry blame MMW lol
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-13-2007, 02:10 AM
WHAT?! NO! RAWR!
Mufasa Will Eat Your Soul
Kristin!!! I Stayed Up Very
Late For That! WAHH!!!
-----
Oh Well... I Just Need To Know What
Time It Will Be For Me When It Is 2
PST For You... Um... I Don't Know :P
krrristin
09-13-2007, 10:08 AM
lol not my fault!
:P blame MMW, IT Erased it Again
niiro_tatsu
09-13-2007, 02:45 PM
ugh sorry i didnt stay up my mom made me get off and when i tried to sneak back onit wouldnt work....... so yeah. but i am at home sick with a cold....... so i'll be online ALL DAY
krrristin
09-13-2007, 05:59 PM
well that sucks, I can feel my throught going crrrrrrrazy
so im guessing i'll be sick aswell
PursePrincess4eva
09-13-2007, 06:04 PM
Hoep you feel better!
Write mroe!
PursePrincess4eva
09-13-2007, 06:20 PM
I wnana be a main character! =[
MileyFan_4_Ever
09-13-2007, 06:22 PM
Well MMW Works Now!
POST IT! PLEASE!
krrristin
09-13-2007, 06:53 PM
almost done :)
niiro_tatsu
09-13-2007, 06:59 PM
yay cant wait!
krrristin
09-13-2007, 06:59 PM
let's get these teen hearts beating FASTER FASTER (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8AZxUtZ2ZgI)
Kristins POV
It was a week after the fight, and it was official - I was a loaner.
I sat alone at a table eating my peanut butter sandwitch, staring at my former friends.
"I can't live like this!" I sighed and gazed around the lunch room, "Even the geeks have more friends than you... and you know whats even cooler? That you're talking to yourself!"
I could feel people staring at me, they probably thought I was a pshyco. I ignored their stares and pulled my ipod from my backpack, and listened to the music playing... oh the irony... the music basically sang to me.
I think about what you did, and how I hope to God he was worth it...
The song played, that very line. Although, the rest of the song had nothing to do with my predicament, I felt like thats what Ashley was thinking that very line.
And oh, how I regreted the words that spilled out of my mouth the week before.
I didnt derserve their friendship, and I definately didnt deserve to meet THEIR friends... the Jonas'.
At Home
I opend the door, and sluggishly walked in. But before stepping onto the stairs I heard giggling.
My heart jumped, Have they already forgiven me? I turned around but to my dissapointment It was my mother.
"Oh hey mom... I'm just gonna upstairs." I pointed to the second story and started to turn
"Not so fast Missy! Your cousins Aly and Sarah are here. You gonna say 'hi'?"
I took a deep breathe, "Hey Aly... Sarah... sorry Im not feeling so well, so Im just gonna go" I ran up the stairs before my mother could say another word.
Finally reaching my door, I threw my backpack onto the ground and shut my door.
I didn't get along much with my family, so I basically lived in my room.
I flipped open my laptop and spotted an IM, I raised my eyebrow
SmileyMiley: Party @ 12 my house. tomorrow (saturday). Come? Im rele sorry... please!
I stared at the text on the screen, "Well, you COULD get more friends.... but... no she lied to you... but she can fix it so yeah!" without even bothering to reply U closed the laptop and jumped to my closet, picking an outfit out for tomorrows big day.
The Day of the Parteh
"Mom, do Aly and Sarah REALLY have to come?" I whispered staring at the backseat, where my two cousins, whom I haven't talked to for YEARS, sat.
"Yes, they didnt come for me to babysit them" she replied turning into Mileys street
The two held their breathes as we approached the hedge covered gates.
I reached out the window and pressed a button, and the gates opend.
"Woah!" my cousins said at the same time
I rolled my eyes, and soon our car came to a stop at the top of the drive way
Alys POV
Kristin was very serious and grumpy at the time.
The car came to a hault and Kristin stepped out. Followed my Sarah... then me.
"Oh my! Its gorgeous!" I stared at the ivy covered walls, and cobblestone paths of Mileys house, "Its so European and classy!"
Kristin rolled her eyes again, "If you think last years dying mistletoe still hanging around the house is classy? Sure... Oh and last halloweens decorations are still up"
"Oh I see them now" Sarah said pointing at a pumpkin
Kristin turned around and faced us, "Don't riun this for me ok? My life is a mess as it is,,," she sighed and walked over to Miley
"Its Miley!" I sqeaked, "And Joe Jonas, Oh and theres Nick... and theres..."
"KEVIN!" Sarah said pointing to Kevy bear
"Yea, I feel like a celeb myself!" I pretend to 'strike a pose'
Sarah gave me a weird look, "Dont embarass yourself!" she laughed, "Now lets go inside!"
She pulled me into the living room, where we sipped fruit punch
"Actually Sarah... this isnt very fun" I gulped down the rest of the punch and got up, "Actually... that right there seems kinda intresting!" I pointed to the window
Narrarators POV
Joe pulled Jenny into the backyard, "its WAY too crowded out there"
She laughed, "There are like what, 10 people in the front lawn? And why is too crowded?"
He ran his fingers through his hair nervously and looked at her, "Cause I need to ask you something"
Already expecting it, Jenny bit her lip, "Ask me something? What about?"
"Eh...erm...um.... will be my..."
ACHOO! Sarah sneezed from inside the house, and was pushed into a corner by her sister Aly.
"Shhh SHHHH!" Aly said holding her index finger to her lips
Joe was startled but noticed no one in clear view watching them, "Will you... be mine?" he asked nervously
Jenny smiled, "OFCOURSE!" she went to hug him but saw something that caught her attention, "Joe look" she pointed above her at last years christmas decoration... the mistletoe
"You know what that means... and I hate to break Christmas tradition" Joe laughed
"Its not even summer..." she giggled
"What the heck."
They kissed under a mistle-toe on a summers day
Meanwhileeeeee Kristins POV
"Oh no... no need to apologize Miley... its fine" I laughed, "Everything happends for a reason right?"
Miley nodded
"Ok well, Im babysitting my cousins so I'll be right back, need to check on them" I turned around heading toward the front door when....
a cup full of punch landed on chest, covering my shirt in red liquid
"Im sorry I didnt mean.... Oh its you" Ashley grabbed the cup
I stared at my shirt and back at my former friend, "wha...you...i mean.... why...UGH!" I groaned and ran to the side of the house
"But I didnt mean too!" Ashley sighed, knowing it was no use
Nick sat up, "I'll talk to her"
"you sure?" she asked
"Yeah yeah no big" he walked to the side of the house, seeing me at my worst, "You ok?"
I glared at him and sat up walking over, "Yeah just peachy"
"listen she didnt mean too... you really need to work this out with her or your friendship will be trashed"
I corssed my arms and rolled my eyes, but like Jenny, noticed something hanging above me...
a pathetic excuse for a plant, hung over me, its dried up leaves had yet to fall off.
"Nick..." I pointed up at the mistle toe
"what... no?" he said
I laughed, "joking, and I'll talk to her as soon as possible... this fued is driving me crazy"
"good" he gave me a hug
Just then Aly walked around the corner, "Sarah is flirting with Kevin, and Joe and Jenny kissed! Their still going at and its been like 10 minutes! Without coming up for air, you know they've been kissing for a while!" she looked at me, "What do you think your doing"
she definately caught me at the wrong moment
krrristin
09-13-2007, 07:00 PM
My Longest Chapter!
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