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gilmore1
09-03-2007, 09:37 PM
Intro-
Haley (me) goes on a 2 week cruise to Alaska, where she meets a ton of good friends! Even the Jonas Brothers. Haley ends up falling for Nick.

4 comments and i will start.

chapter 1 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1337250&postcount=5)
chapter 2 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1337414&postcount=9)
Chapter 3 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1337471&postcount=13)
Chapter 4 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1342659&postcount=21)
Chapter 5 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1343072&postcount=25)
Chapter 6 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1344858&postcount=28)
Chapter 7 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1344929&postcount=29)
Chapter 8 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1344929&postcount=29)
Chapter 9 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1353269&postcount=53)
Chapter 10 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1361449&postcount=63)
Chapter 11 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1369943&postcount=70)
Chapter 12 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1377244&postcount=79)
Chapter 13 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1377244&postcount=79)
Chapter 14 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1399717&postcount=99)
Chapter 15 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1399828&postcount=103)
Chapter 16 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1402556&postcount=109)
Chapter 17 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1403010&postcount=110)
Chapter 18 (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1403154&postcount=114)

LotsaBigHearts
09-03-2007, 09:40 PM
Nice. I'm a waiting!!

smiley_smiley_miley
09-03-2007, 09:46 PM
Sounds Great!!! =)

gilmore1
09-03-2007, 09:59 PM
i will start now

gilmore1
09-03-2007, 10:12 PM
Chap 1.

So we were going on a cruise i coudn't wait. i had never known what to expect. right now i am sitting in my cabin with megan, my sis. we are going through all the activities to do. we saw that we were in different teen clubs so i (14) would have to go at 10 at night till 2 in the morning.

Meg- I hope i meet a ton of friends
me- me 2. then my iphone started bussin.

dad- start gettin ready for dinner
me- kay, luv ya. do we get our own table?
dad- i dont think so
me- i hope the people have kids our age

so i started geting ready. remembering always to look my best, not know knowing who i would meet.


My family and i were all sitting at our table. Then suddenly a group of people started talking to my dad. i was reading my menu and didnt look up. then my dad started talkin bout me, so i decided to pay attention

dad- so this is haley, nick she is ur age
haley- nice to meet... (then sees how familar nick looks) Oh my Jonas!!! it is the jonas brothers
Nick- nice to meet u
joe- hi i am joe
kevin- hi i am kevin
megan- and i am megan
then nick sits next to haley and they start talking to each other

nicks pov
whoa she is soooo cute i want to hang with her a lot....maybe if i asked her hang later at the teen club.
haley- so are you on break from tour right now?
nick- yah and hey, joe, kevin i gotta pee, will ya guys walk with me to the room
joe and kevin- yah


haley pov
well i must have said sometthing bad. what did i say? he totally left me!! i must have a pimple or something. I should go to the room and check. maybe look a little nicer
haley- dad, i will be right back
dad- kay
haleley- hold the elevator
walks in to see the jonas bros blushing at her...................




okay not muchh of cliff hanger, i write more 2morrow

gilmore1
09-03-2007, 10:13 PM
srry bout the typos, keybod is messed up

xoxo Babii xoxo
09-03-2007, 10:18 PM
Lol its okay!
Write More
"Yeah and Joe and Kevin I gotta pee, will you guys walk with me to the room?"

AHH! LOL!
sooo funny!

gilmore1
09-03-2007, 10:26 PM
thxs, i ll write after i take a shower tomorrow after v-ball

gilmore1
09-03-2007, 10:54 PM
chap 2

joe pov
whoa! haley is soo perfect for nick!! i should set them up!!!

haley pov
haley- hey guys, 12 please
kevin- no way we are on the same floor
haley- oh my jonas!!
all three of the bros- what????
haley- oh nothing
then they get off and haley and the bros start going the same way
haley- uh guys, u dont have to walk me to my room
joe-were not little chikadee, we are goin to our room, wait we are next to u!
haley thinks... oh great, now nick will be akward with me even more. all the time 24/7


nick pov
thinks, haley must love joe not me i dont talk

in boys room
nick goto sit on bed
kevin- i thought u had to take a pee
nick- no stupid i am love with that girl haley and i dont know what to do.
joe- ask her to go get a coke with u and tell her that u likeher and want to hang out
nick- maybe tonight could cowith me and we could go to the teen cland we could all hang out get to know her and maybe i wil text her and see how she feels....

not much i k, will write more in a min

YouKnowYouLoveMe
09-03-2007, 10:57 PM
chickadee made me laugh soo hard

gilmore1
09-03-2007, 11:01 PM
really????? i love that word

smileyface93
09-03-2007, 11:08 PM
more its great

gilmore1
09-03-2007, 11:13 PM
chap 3

still in the boys room

nick- guys, i really like haley. how should i tell her? oh wait, joe, u or kevin could text her and see if she likes me
j and k- yah dude
nick- we should see if she is in her room and walk her back

haley pov
thinking... should tell him i like him? should i talk to him? is my makeup look okay?? do i look like a fart face or a grandma??? i hope not!! oooo someone is knocking
nick- hey haley or shoud i call u chikadee??
haley- i think haley is good
nick- okay if u insist
haley- y'all ready??
boys- we are, are u man?
haley- i prefer dude or woman onything besides bein called guy
ooh this is an SOS ....
haley- i think i am buzzin

dad- where r u?
haley-comin

ooh this is an SOS...
haley- me again???
kevin- nope it is me, gosh our pares must have really bonded.
haley- i bet frankie and megan will hang out 2!
joe- i forgot somethin in the roo, kev come with me, nick u andd haley go back we will meet u there
nick gives joe and kevin a mean look
haley- u sure?
joe- yah chikadee
haley looks at nick- u didnt tell him?


they start walkin back
nick- haley i think i like u
haley- i really like u 2! i have liked u since i first saw u a long time ago on tiger beat magazine.
nick- will be my gf?
haley- ...................

more will come after 2 comments

gilmore1
09-03-2007, 11:40 PM
comment please

secretive_angel
09-03-2007, 11:54 PM
more pleaz

gilmore1
09-04-2007, 09:26 AM
i will do morwhen i get 2 more comments

xoxo Babii xoxo
09-04-2007, 09:40 AM
more please!





NOWWWWWW!

gilmore1
09-04-2007, 09:13 PM
1 more

gilmore1
09-05-2007, 01:17 AM
if i get 1 comment i will post more tomorrow

YouKnowYouLoveMe
09-05-2007, 09:17 PM
mas!

gilmore1
09-05-2007, 10:12 PM
Chap-

Haley- YES
Nick leans in and kisses her for 10 seconds
Haley- I have liked u for a long time
Nick-and i have liked u since i saw u, which would be 20 minutes ago
Then Joe and Kevin come in cheering. They had been spying.

Nick POV
I was totally embaressed that joe and kev came in, but i was so happy to going out with haley
Haley- so should we get back
Joe- uh yah mom will be mad
Haley-and so will my dad and stepmom
So then haley and i held hands as we walked back to there table. Whn we got back to our table haley talked to me about the coolest stuff. like that she plays volleyball and that she likes to run and work out. Our parents bonded too. they all decided that al our activities we did would be together.

Haley-hey guys anyone wanna come to the gym with me tomorrow??
Bros- yeah what time?
Haley-6
Bros- whoa!
Haley- well, i train for 90 min,then i swim then i eat breakfast than we will hang out or go play ping pong or somethin
Nick- i will go, sounds fun
Kevin and Joe- we'll try
Haley- great so tomorrow, we will meet at the track go on a warm up jog in the cool air, then go do weights, the bike, then more weights, and lots of sit ups and push ups and then well yoga then swim and then we ceat or order room service or something
Boys: WHOA!! sounds really intense
Haley- you can do it!! oh well i am going to change into something more comtable, anyone wanna go dance in the night club or something? ooo there are free cocktail in the teen club we could meet some people!!!!!
Nick- kay we will meet u at ur room 45 min.


So haley went and changed into skinny true religon jeans, ugg boots, and a cute hollister top.
Ding-dong
Nick- hey we are here
Haley- be there n a sec
Haley walks door and kisses nick.
Nick- u look great
Haley- so do u!! Wanna go?
J and Kev- yah
Haley hadnt even seen them behind nick
Haley- lets go!!!!!!
they walked around the ship a bit hen went to the teen room


Teen Club-
People start starin

Haley- whoa this place looks fun (still holdin nicks hand)
Boys- yah it does
Nick- haley lets go sit there we can share a bean bag
Joe- what am i?? a piece of bacon?
kevin- when it comes down to it.....yah.... and especially when he is with haley
Joe- we can sit there
Nick- so hi people
Haley- yah hi peeps
Joe- wasup
Kevin- hi
People havent said a word
Haley- oh my jonas say something people
Boys- what???
Haley- o nothin
Girl- Hi i am kellly
haley-hi i am haley and this is my boyfriend nick and his bros joe and kevin
boys- sup
Haley-Wanna hang out??
Kelly- uh yah!
Haley- i am from the oc
Kelly- me 2!!!! (thinking-kevin is sooooo hot)
Haley- How old are you?
Kelly- I am 18
Haley- lets go play ping pong
Nick- lets go
They hang outside playin ping pong then haley starts to shiver
Nick- haley r u ok???
Haley-yah i am fine (still shivering)
Kelly starts to shiver
Nick-haley want my jacket
haley- no u must be freezing
Nick- i am from jersey,this is normal, u r from the beach in california
Haley- u have a point -taking the jacket
kevin- (thinking Kelly is so pretty) Kelly, want my jacket
Kelly- sure
ooh.. this is an sos
Haley and all the boys reach for their phones
Haley- one of us has to change their tone
Boys- it isn't me
Haley- it is me

Haley- hi mom, we are on the cruise, yah it is fun. what? is she ok? omg!!! where did it happen? should i come back? o love u 2 bye!

Haley starts to cry.
Haley- i will be back
Nick-thinking- i will go
Nick-i will come with you
Haley- thxs, u dont have to -starting to cry
Nick- what happened?
haley- my best friend accidently drank some poinson. My mom said that she was cleaning the car and hsister Emily and her started to spray tcleaning product stuff at eachher. Sammi inhaled way to much and she isnt doing very good. they dont think she will make it
Nick just starts to hold haley
She is still crying
Hale-Nick u r the best, i love u
Nick- i love u to
he just holds her
Haley- i don't want to go dancing i want to go watch a movie in my room you can go though. i am fine
Nick- i will 2 if u want
haley- sound good to me
Nick- i will tell my bros, wait here
he leaves and haley just starts to bawl like crazy. he comin and sees she is sad, he doesnt know what to do.. neither does she.
Haley- u know i want to wallow, i need to release angryness, i am going to go jog a couple miles then i will go watch a movie.
Nick- i will run
Haley-dont have to, i run really fast, u could wait
Nick- no, i am comin, besides, i need too (he pats tummy)
Haley-i'll change
Haley wears her hair and a pair of spandex shorts and a v-ball shirt
Haley and nick walk in silence holding hands to the track
haley-Okay let me set my timer, ready? go!
Haley- starts sprinting
Haley could tell nick was having a really hard time and knew she should slow down but couldn't she was to sad and had to run away from the fear of losing her best friend
nick understood, but he knew she needed comfort and coudn't slow down
finally they stoped,
Haley- whoa!!! 6 miles in only 30 min!! Good job! as she started to cry nick knew what to do. they would go to her room and cuddle and order tons of chocalate chip cookies ad milk...........................................tha ts always helps


To be continued. took forever to write. wil post later tonight

gilmore1
09-05-2007, 10:31 PM
3 more comments and i will post more

secretive_angel
09-05-2007, 10:38 PM
AWESOME and sooooooooooo sad but more Pweaz

gilmore1
09-05-2007, 11:21 PM
could u guys tell people to read please, if more people dont read i willstop u wont be able to hear how it ends

gilmore1
09-06-2007, 12:00 AM
Kay, guys i will write a bit of the new chap. it wont be long though i may have to leave part way through not sure

Chap.

So nick told Haley about his idea. She loved it. Then she got another call.

Hello mom? What??? oh, oh oh, i cant talk right now mom i will call u in the mornin or later. gosh this is horrible!

Haley started to cry harder than she ever cryed before.
Nick- what happened? is your friend ok?
Haley- crys, she didnt make it she, she she she she
Nick really had no clue what to do. he kissed her cheek and held her. she had already fallen to the ground and just sat there
Haley- sammi was the best person ever, i i i i i i, i think i should go back for her funeral. it is a week away so i woudnt have to leave right away.
Nick sat there looking really sad, still holding her.
Nick- what can i do?
Haley- o nick i have known u what like 5 hours and u have already become one of my best friends (nick knew this was a lot to say, seeing how sad she was about her best friend) i dont know how i could do this without u
Just then everyone else walked by the track and kevin and kelly were holdin hands.
Joe- whats wrong??
Just then haley got up and ran away to her room
Nick- look what u made her do
Kevin- dude what happened?
Nick- her best friend died
Kelly, Kevin, and Joe- What?
Nick- yah and she is really sad
Joe- can i do something for her?
Nick- i really dont know, cause to tell u the truth, i dont know what to do, i mean i can be sensitive and all but i just dont know what to say
Kevin- u should go check on her, she needs u
Nick- maybe i should play her a song
Joe- yah, but i would wait and do it tomorrow, she is really sad
Nick- i need to go see her
Kelly- nick can u tell her i said i am sorry and my dad just died and if she needs support i will be there for her
Nick- yah of course
Joe- same with me
Kevin- and me 2
Nick- yes and yes
Nick goes to find haley. he finds her sitting in a corner. crying. he had to do something.
Nick- hey haley why dont we go to my room or your room and watch a movie
Haley- kay, i want to watch bridge to teribethia
Nick was a little curious why, but he just nodded.
They went to her room. and layed down on her bed and watched the movie. she cryed a lot. but he knew she was sad and that made him sad. They called the kitchen and had them deliver a ton of cookies and milk. when they were finished watching the movie haley said she was tired and wanted to go to bed.
Nick- Haley, joe, kevin, and kelly would love to talk to you if u r feeling up to it tomorrow
haley- kay and dont frget 6:00 meet me on the track instead of here i may get up earlier and explore, and maybe even run
nick- okay, good night, love you
haley- love you 2 and thank you so much for being there for me

Nicks Room

Joe- so dude what happened with haley
Nick- well her best friend accidently drank some poison and couldnt make it. Haley was heart-broken. she wants everythin to be pretty normal. so dont bring it up if she doesnt first. and meet her at 6. o and kev what happened with kelly?
kev-o well she and i are kinda goin out. now.
nick- cool, well i am tired so i am goin to bed nite!

Track
Haley had not slept at all that night. she knew she had to go home but didnt know how to tell nick or her parents. she had gotton up at 5 and walked the track as a warmup just waiting for the boys. when they finally got there she was ready to tell nick.
Haley- hi guys, ready to run?
Nick- yah, ready?
haley- yah i am
they all looked tired
nick- ready?
Haley- well lets go
haley started runnin faster thn she had run the night before and nick ran next to her when they stopped they were waiting for joe and kev who were way behind sso haley and nick sat down to talk.
Nick- haley r u ok?
haley- i am whatever right now. but i have to ay something. i have to leave in 5 days unless something else happens. i cant miss the funeral.
nick sat there listening absorbing everything haley said.
nick- can i ask u something?

xoxo Babii xoxo
09-06-2007, 09:04 AM
more!

gilmore1
09-06-2007, 09:04 PM
kk i will post in a few min.

gilmore1
09-06-2007, 09:43 PM
Chap

Haley- Yes
Nick- what will happen to us?
Just then Joe & Kevin came up to them looking tired.
Joe- u ready for gym?
Nick- (givng Joe a mean look, obviously mad about the interuption) uh,yeah dudes
Joe- ok dudes and little chikadee
As they walked Haley and Nick held hands, and Joe put his hands on Haley's shoulders, giving a big brother feel

Nick POV

When we got to the gym haley did about a million push ups and about a million sit-ups. Then she did weights, she could do a lot even more than me. I really wanted to ask her about us again. I knew though that she would talk to me when the time is right. Then she went over and talked to Joe while ding the bike.

Haley POV

Joe- Hi Haley whats up? u know u are a very good athlete for someone so tiny. (refering to my 5 foot height and no body fat.)
Haley- thxs, u are pretty good at the bike. but that is not why i am here
Joe- I know what happened, Nick told me. He really loves you, you know. o and i am sorry about your friend
(Haley starts to cry)
Haley- I dont know what to do. If I stay here I with love being with you guys but i will hate myself for missing the funeral. But if I go I will be at the funeral and miss u guys to death (still cring but harder, nick looked over to make sure haley was okay, but he saw she was in good hands)
Joe- Haley, I know it will work out in the end. I dont think Jesus would put a chikadee like yourself through so much pain.
HAley- thank you, (gets off bike to do yoga)
(Nick follows HAley over)
Nick- so will your whole family leave?
Haley- no just me. but someone will pick me up at lax when i get there. but i havent even told dad anything about sammi yet, i dont know when to tell him
Nick- well, what if some guy were holding you on the way home
Haley- o my jonas
Nick- huh?
Haley- o ill tell u later
Hey- i would not let some random guy hold me! (laughing for the first time)
Nick- i missed ur laugh, but what if that guy were me?
Haley-(very serious again) No! No! you cant leave early,I have already ruined part of your cruise
Nick- well the whole thing would be ruined if you left without me
Haley- we would see each other still, you have loads of LA concerts, i could go to all of them. Also, we could go to disneyland together.
Nick- we could still do all of that, but i wont let you leave here without me
Haley- if you really dont mind, i guess i would love the company. and we could talk to our parents at the same time, besides i dont think we could spilt them apart
Nick- sounds good to me
Haley- i wsh i could just be happy and have fun now, ill try (Nick kisses eand goes to talk to his bros so she could do her yoga.)
A girl then walk who looks about haleys age
Haley- Hi i am haley
Girl- I am Sarah
Haley- nice to meet you,wanna join me?
Sarah- sure, who was that boy who kissed you, was he Nick Jonas? (Then Haley started to cry cause s figured out that Jesus hadnt done so much bad to her, he had given her Nick)
Haley- uh, yeah he is
Sarah- he is cute!
Haley- uh sorry sista, he is mine!
Sarah- oh yeah, why r u crying?
Haley- IDK!!!
HAley- actually i have to go (sensing a convo she did not want to have with some girl she had just met)
Sarah- o, ok see you around!
Haley- Boys, r u ready??
Boys- yes!!! (sounding relieved)

gilmore1
09-06-2007, 10:04 PM
POOL

Haley wore a cute, but very simple blue o'neill bathing suit. The boys were really tired and not used to s so haley decided to give them a break and not do the laps she wanted to do.They all relaxed in the spa.

Haley- so what do you guys want to do today?
Nick- i am hungry
Haley-- o all right, lets go change and i want waffles so lets go!!!
They all raced back to the room.


Breakfast Buffet

The boys were amazed at how much Haley could eat. She ate a ton of fruand like 4 waffles.

Haley- u want to go play ping pong?
Joe and Nick- sure
Kevin- uh dudes and chikadee i am gonna go find Kelly
HAley- u know we should prably go see our parents first
Nick- i totally agree
Joe- Haley i saw a volleyball court earlier wanna play tonight or someme?
Haley- of course
Ooh this is an sos....
Haley- the happy hotline
Hello? Oh my Jonas, Hi amanda! yah i heard, I know. (Starts to cry) I am on a cruise wth some friends right now, this why i havent been at school, oh nick, kevin, and Joe. o i coming i think, nick may take me. ok bye

Haley hangs up looking sad.
Joe- what was that about?
Haley- o my friend amanda was making sure i had heard about sammi
Nick- ok

Ooh this is an SOS....
HAley looks the caller id looking confused.

Hello? Hi Austin, uh i havent heard from u in a while, i heard, i will be there, on a cruise, What?, u want a date for a funeral? No, and i am bringing someone already! bye c u there!!!!

Haley looks mad as she hangs up and Nick looks aost jealous.
Nick- who is austin?
Haley starts to cry
HAley- uh this stupid guys was in love with last year, and he thinks that a funeral is just a to up his popularity, an asks me to be his date. how rude! it is like he doesnt carabout sam at all. like sam wa not even his friend or my best friend. o and when i said no he said i am a pathetic loser! that is the only reason i said u were coming nick.
(haley crys)
Haley- i just miss her so much, she was the best friend ever. (nick just holds her)
Nick- i will be there, dont worry
HAley- u dont have to, my friends all love u and it would be like a concert, watch i bet someone wil make u sing
Nick- that should be the last thing n your mind
Haley-ok, what should we tell our parents?
Nick- everything
Haley- smart man
So they explained eeverything to there parents and the parents decided to let them go. they had 5 more days till they left

gilmore1
09-08-2007, 01:41 AM
please comment, 2 comments to get more

gilmore1
09-08-2007, 03:12 AM
Chap

Ping Pong
So nick and joe were playing ping pong while haley sat next to the table, just watching. Haley was wearing nicks jacket it looked like this
Jacket (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10251_10201_357339_-1_12555_12551)
but she was mainly wearing it for comfort instead of warmth.
Haley- uh, guys i am gonna take a walk meet me at my room in a half hour
Nick- i will come
joe- me 2
Haley- no u 2 keep playin i will play vball with u later. i need some time to think about everything and some other stuff 2
Nick- ok love u
haley- love u 2
So haley walked around a lot just thinking about everything. Since it was October she had to go to school right when she got back or she would be in trouble with school. She didn't know how to tell nick and wondered if he would want to stay home all by himself while she was at school. When she had finished walking around so she walked to her room and grabbed her guitar. She played a lot of songs. Here are all the ones she sang:
Missing You- By Taylor Swift and Tyler Hilton
Miss You- By Miley Cyrus
Tied Together With a Smile- By Taylor Swift
and more

Nick POV

Me- So dude what are me doin tomorrow??
Joe- uh IDK my bff jill?
Me- LOL, but seriously
Joe- I think we dock so we are sea kayaking
Me- oh, well i know haley is athletic and all, but do u think she will want to do that???
Joe- idk
Me- i will go talk to her i think it has been a half hour
Joe- kk

So i walked to HAley's room and i heard herr singing, she was good and had a really pretty voice. she was singing one of our songs, Hold On.

Me- Hi Haley
HAley- Oh MY Jonas!
I could tell Haley had been crying cause she looked sad, if only there was a way to make her happy, I had an idea
ME- so haley what were u singing? and what do u want to do tomorrow?

sorry it is so short, i need more comments u guys i really do!

FutureWendla04
09-08-2007, 01:46 PM
I love it! u are a great writer more please

gilmore1
09-08-2007, 07:30 PM
thxs

secretive_angel
09-08-2007, 07:54 PM
awesome MORE

gilmore1
09-08-2007, 07:57 PM
hey is there anything i counld add to make this ff better? if so pme and tell me! thxs!

Miley is Smiley
09-08-2007, 08:26 PM
Thanx for putting me in ur ff and More!

gilmore1
09-09-2007, 02:33 AM
np, i will do what wtalked about, we need to make ming nick jonas sets

Miley is Smiley
09-09-2007, 11:17 AM
What is ming Nick Jonas sets?

gilmore1
09-09-2007, 12:07 PM
*matching, sorry

Miley is Smiley
09-09-2007, 01:28 PM
oh its kk and that be cool!Post More Soon Haley!

MileyCyrusRules943
09-09-2007, 01:33 PM
i want to i love the gilmore girls there awesome!!!!!!

http://www.mymostwanted.com/gallery/data/2430/thumbs/emily_osment_dot_org_wallpaper_bymileycyruslover_1-0001.jpg
i love the bend its by me!!!

gilmore1
09-09-2007, 03:00 PM
ok

Nicole Fairway
09-09-2007, 03:26 PM
More!!!!!!!!!

Nicole Fairway
09-09-2007, 03:26 PM
More!!!!!!!!!

gilmore1
09-09-2007, 04:27 PM
thxs, i will pot later, o and i like ur blend ^

Miley is Smiley
09-09-2007, 05:23 PM
More More More!!!!!!!

gilmore1
09-09-2007, 05:24 PM
thxs!!! i will post later tonight

gilmore1
09-09-2007, 05:25 PM
thxs!!! i will post later tonight

gilmore1
09-09-2007, 05:25 PM
thxs!!! i will post later tonight

MileyFan_4_Ever
09-09-2007, 05:29 PM
Not Bad =) I Just Went And Read All Of This. And It's Pretty Good.
But Maybe Try And Work On The Spelling A Little Bit, Cuz I Was Confused At Some Parts When I Didn't Know What The Word Was Supposed To Be.
Other Than That, It's Pretty Good.

gilmore1
09-09-2007, 05:42 PM
thxs so much, my keyboard is kinda messed upp so i may press a letter and it wont show up

gilmore1
09-09-2007, 10:35 PM
i will post after i eat dinner

gilmore1
09-10-2007, 12:37 AM
Haley- o, i was just singing some songs.
Nick- u are one of the best singers i have ever heard. I think u are better than Miley
Haley- no way, u are just saying that
Nick- no i am not. Hey u should be in the teen talent show tomorrow night.
Haley- no, u and your brothers should
Nick- what if you were to sing with me and my brothers, like another part of the band? like a sister
Haley- i love that idea, but we would have to practice a bunch!!!
Nick- ok we will
Haley- I have to run something by u
Nick- okie dokey
Haley- I go to a privete catholic school in the OC and they are very strict about missing school so my mom wants me to go back right when i get back to cali
Nick- ok
Haley- well there is a problem, do u want to go to school with me or do u want to hang out while i am gone. I would go to school like a day or 2 after the funeral. So, we could hang out a little bit
Nick- would it be okay if i went to school with you? i have never been to school before
Haley- of course, i was hoping u would say that. i will email my mom later and tell her to register u. we will pick up ur uniform when u get there
Nick- o i have something to ask/tell u 2. Well, the only reason my family is on this ship is cause we are shooting a music video. The song is called SOS. We need three girls to be in it. We want u, kelly, and someone else to do it. But have u met anyone else?
Haley- well, actually, i did meet someone earlier today at the gym. Her name is Sarah. She actually was telling me how cute u are. I could ask her, but when is the video?
Nick- we are gonna shoot it tomorrow after we get back. which brings me to my next question. do u want to sea-kayak tomorrow or go shopping? they have a cool mall.
Haley- SHOPPING!!!!!
Nick- sounds good to me 2, u are so much like miley!
Haley- oo, thxs. Did u date her?
Nick- no, just gossip, but we are doing a tv show with her soon
Haley- whats it bout?
Nick- we want her dad to hang with us and she gets jealous. basically. o and in the show they call it a joe-bro-mance
Haley- that is what we are having!!
Nick- LOL!!!



That is it for now, the hannah epi with the joes just came on, g2g

Gabriella Read
09-10-2007, 03:09 AM
it's good....I like it very much....more more....write more.

***Miley morgan***
09-10-2007, 06:38 PM
thats good

gilmore1
09-10-2007, 08:48 PM
i will post later, i am still writing more and i will make this one longer

Miley is Smiley
09-10-2007, 10:57 PM
Omg More MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moreeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!

Miley is Smiley
09-11-2007, 08:45 PM
C'mon Haley MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

gilmore1
09-11-2007, 11:38 PM
i will post either tomorrow or the next day, i have been really busy, but will post a bunch this weekend!! thxxs for the comments, this chap is really good!!! i am writing it still and will be long

xoxdestinynightxox
09-12-2007, 12:42 PM
PLZ PLZ MORE PLZ I NEED MORE

Miley is Smiley
09-12-2007, 08:31 PM
Can't wait Haley!

gilmore1
09-13-2007, 09:07 PM
okay i will post a little now and i will post a lot more tomorrow!!!!!! kkk??? i am so sorry i havent posted in a while i have had a ton of hwrk and volleyball!!!!

gilmore1
09-13-2007, 09:54 PM
A Couple hours later

Nick and Haley had been walking around the ship talking about just about anything they could think of. He kissed her a couple times when she got sad, but Haley was getting happier.

Nick- So, tell me about your school. What kind of grades do you get? If you are a dummy I will have to break up with you.
Haley starts to laugh really hard.
Haley- Well, I have straight A’s. Okay so, want me to tell you what I do everyday?
Nick- yah sure
Haley- ok, I get up at 5 every morning, and then I get ready. We have to wear a uniform, but it isn’t butt-ugly. I eat breakfast. Then I get my laptop, sports bag, lunch, and then I primp one more time.
Nick- 5 in the morning???
Haley- well actually, I get up earlier, I lied, I get up at 4:30 and exercise.
Nick- I am going to sleep early
Haley laughs
Haley- then my neighbor Kristopher gives me a ride to school. He is 2 years older then me, but our school is middle school and high school combined so it works. He also gives me private volleyball lessons everyday after practice.
Nick- okay, go on
Haley- Then, I go to school. I usually hang with my friends before the warning bell rings. Then I go to my classes. I am in honors classes. I go to language, then history, and then we have a break. I usually hang with my friends and get my books and eat a snack. After that I go to PE, we usually run or do some kind of sport. Then I go to science, and after that I have lunch. I then go to math and then yearbook.
Nick- and then you go home
Haley- not quite, I have volleyball for 2 hours after school. Then Kristopher will pick me up at 4:45. I go to a sports training facility, we train for 30 min. Then he takes me home, I eat and do h-wrk. Then I get everything ready for the next day.
Nick- you are a busy girl.
Haley- o and my mom requested we have all of our classes together.
Nick- good cause I don’t know anyone!
Haley- my friends are all obsessed with you
Nick cracks up
Nick- I can take him
Haley- and some of my ex-boyfriends may give you some mean looks, but don’t worry. They always do that to any guy I go out with.
Nick- how many ex’s do u have?
Haley- 2 many to count

Nick and Haley keep walking in silence

Haley- Nick, I don’t want to be treated special cause of Sam
Nick- okay
Haley- I want everything normal and I want to be happy.
Nick- if that is what you want
Haley- yes, just I want to be happy
Nick- okay what do you want to do tonight?
Haley- idk, why don’t we talk about it at dinner, I want to find Sarah, and get to know Kelly a little bit.
Nick- we can try to get her to separate herself from kev.
Haley- LOL
Haley- oh my jonas!
Nick- what?
Haley- we have to get ready for dinner
Nick- race ya to the room


Haley was texting her friend Chloe while she got ready
Chloe- How is your vaca?
Haley- it is soooo much better
Chloe- so, you heard about Sam?
Haley- yah, but I did meet some nice people who helped me get through it
Chloe- Names??
Haley- Nick (my boyfriend), Joe, and Kevin
Chloe- sounds familiar, oh my Jonas!
Haley- how did you guess so quickly?
Chloe- you kind of told me that you have a boyfriend
Haley- so you know that they are the Jonas Brothers?
Chloe- OMJ! I didn’t see that one
Haley- Don’t get to happy!! Nick is coming back with me and Joe and Kevin aren’t coming back, they are gonna stay for the rest of the cruise
Chloe- So will Nick come to the funeral?
Haley- if he wants to

Ooh….this is an SOS

Haley- (still with Chloe) I have to go got another call

Haley-Hello?
Dad- Hi haley, how are you?
Haley- I am good
Dad- me, deb, and Mr. and Mrs. Jonas will not be at dinner, we are going to go to a wine tasting dinner.
Haley- okay what about megan and the bonus Jonas?
Dad- they will be at the kids club dinner
Haley- k, luv u bye!

Haley decided to text nick and tell him.

NICK POV

I was in my room with my brothers getting ready and talking about Haley and Kelly and everything we had done on the cruise. I was telling them about school. I was so scared, I had never been to a real school before.
Hello Beautiful…how’s it going?

Joe- who is that???
Kevin- probably Haley
Nick blushes
Nick- it is a text from Haley
Haley- Did you hear we get to have dinner with no parents? I am starting to forget what my dad looks like
Nick- Ya, my mom just called me
Haley- ooooo good, pick me up in 30 min, I am almost ready. Uniforms make everything o much easier!
Nick- lol, c u there!

Haley finally decided to wear this

Dress (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod2850045&parentId=cat110&masterId=cat104&cmCat=cat000000cat301&index=7&tid=P6)

Coat (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod2790067&parentId=cat6701&masterId=cat104&cmCat=cat000000cat301&index=10&tid=C6)

shoes (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod2940002&parentId=cat122&masterId=cat103&cmCat=cat000000cat301&index=0&tid=P9)



Okay guys, that is all for now! comment

gilmore1
09-14-2007, 08:59 PM
no comments??? no more chap then, post if u want more!

Miley is Smiley
09-14-2007, 09:40 PM
More Haley!I ♥ Ur fan fic!I cant wait till Im back!Lolz

gilmore1
09-14-2007, 11:23 PM
i need more comments, wil post ie morning i guess maybe in couple hours it is only 7:30

gilmore1
09-15-2007, 09:22 PM
i will post laterf there are more comments

secretive_angel
09-15-2007, 10:30 PM
awesomeness more

gilmore1
09-16-2007, 12:10 AM
thxs i will post more tomorrow if i can, i have a lot of hwrk, o and if u want to be in this ff or u would like to send me ideas just pm me

gilmore1
09-16-2007, 05:21 PM
Chap-

Nick- Hi, you look amazing
Haley- Thank you, u look good. Hi Joe, hi Kevin
Joe and Kevin- Hi Haley, was sup?
Haley- o not much
Joe- we should start walking down
Haley- okay, let me grab my bag
Haley’s bag looked like this
Bag (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod2540006&parentId=cat111&masterId=cat103&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat111&index=14&tid=P9)
Nick- you really do look gorgeous
Haley- aww, thanks.
Ooh... this is an SOS
Kevin- who is it?
Haley looks at her phone
Haley- oh, my friend Cam
Haley- Hi Cam
Cam- Hi, how are you? I am sorry about Sammi, I know you two were like the best friends
Haley holds back her tears
Haley- Thanks, but you know I am on my way to dinner, can I call you back later?
Cam- yah sure
Haley- okay thanks, say hi to Derrington, Josh, Kemp, Chris, and The Pretty Committee, and everyone at school.
Cam- will do, bye
Haley- bye
Joe, Kevin, and Nick were all kind of surprised about how names she read off.
Kevin- who are The Pretty Committee?
Haley- my friends, we are kind of our own clique, my some of the guys made up that name
Joe- who is Cam?
Haley- a guy who goes to school with me, he is going out with my friend Claire. They are soooooo cute together
Nick- who are all the other guys you named?
Haley- just some guys who go to school with me, you will get along with them great
Nick- okey-dokey
Haley- well let’s head down

They all walk down to dinner

sorry i can only post this much right now, i have to finish my h-wrk

gilmore1
09-16-2007, 08:28 PM
no comments?

smileyface93
09-16-2007, 08:48 PM
more!! =]

gilmore1
09-16-2007, 08:50 PM
thxs

gilmore1
09-16-2007, 11:36 PM
okay all u little chikadees, i cant pt tonight cause................i am still writing it! it will e up tomorrow i hope, o and i need some more ideas!!

luv ya!!!

secretive_angel
09-17-2007, 10:24 PM
more pleazs

gilmore1
09-18-2007, 12:03 AM
thxs, had vball game today so i will post tomorrow

gilmore1
09-19-2007, 09:33 PM
i will update soon i promise!

Miley is Smiley
09-19-2007, 09:37 PM
More!

gilmore1
09-19-2007, 09:46 PM
Chap

The Brothers and Haley were all sitting down at the dinner table. They were skimming their menus. The waiter came by and took their orders, when he left they started to chat.

Kevin- So, what do you guys want to do tonight when we are done with dinner?
Haley- Change these clothes, and have some fun. I want to get to know all of you guys better and I want to hang out with Kelly. Ooooooh yah, I want to see if I can find that Sarah girl.
Joe- that sounds good to me
Nick- I think that we should go to the night club and go dancing. They are having a teen hour tonight, so that should be fun.
Haley- we should see if the teen club has anything fun going on.
Joe- I think we could do all of that.
Haley- What is up for tomorrow?
Nick- We are going to go shopping and they are all going to go kayaking.
Haley- What time are you going to get up?
Nick- I don’t know, what time are you going to get up?
Haley- I will get up at 5, and then I will go exercise for an hour. I will come back and change. I will go to breakfast, and then we can leave. We could go to the touristy places first, because the mall doesn’t open until later that day.
Nick- Okay sounds great
Haley- did you tell them about the talent show?
Nick- no, not yet; But why not now? Joe, Kevin, we have added a sista to the joe bros! Haley will be doing the show with us. She is an amazing singer and a rocker on the guitar!
Kevin- sounds good!!! What do you want to sing?
Haley- anything
Joe- Um, well, um Nick, Haley, while you two were out walking together, some guy who works with entertainment came to our room and asked us to do a full concert for the talent show. And I kind of agreed.
Nick- dude!!! Why would you do that?
Kevin- what is your problem?
Haley- you guys don’t need to be mean to him. He didn’t know! Guys its fine, I can perform by myself. I even know some songs I can sing.
Nick- you sure?
Haley- of course! Am I ever unsure?
Kevin- she has a point.
Haley- I am fine
Joe- haley u pwned us!!!

Their food then arrived and they ate really fast, because they were super excited to go to hang out.

While they were walking back to their rooms to change, Haley spotted someone familiar looking. The girl was Sarah.

Haley- Hey Sarah, wait up!
Sarah- What?
Haley- Hi, you probably don’t remember me, but I am Haley, we met this morning at the gym. I was the grumpy girl you did yoga with.
Sarah- I remember you, how could I forget you?
Sarah then looks next to Haley and sees the Jonas Brothers.
Sarah- AHHHH!! Oh my goodness, you are the Jonas Brothers!
Joe- whoa you are a loud one!
Nick- I think I popped an ear drum
Haley- I’m good, I am a girl
Kevin- well lucky you, I can’t hear anything
Sarah- oh my Jonas! What have I done? I have ruined their ears!
Haley- oh don’t worry about them they are fine. Do you want to hang out?
Sarah- um, sure, but I have to go change. I actually was on my way back to the dining room when I saw you. I left my purse in their. Want to meet somewhere?
Haley- Sure, we can meet at the teen club in 30 minutes.
Sarah- I will be there
Joe- hey, wait I left my key in there to.


The two walk off together leaving Haley, Nick, and Kevin. They all walk back to the rooms and change Haley wears:



Nick- hi girly!
Haley- hi dude
Nick and Haley kissed for 8 seconds.
Kevin- okay u love birds, let’s go get Kelly. I just talked to Joe. He is in love with Sarah. He is going to dance with her tonight, he hopes.
Nick- cool, is he gonna meet us there 2?
Kevin- yah, he is walking Sarah there
Haley- well, what are we waiting for? Lets go dudes!!!
Nick- okie dokey!
Haley- what floor (as she pushes the button in the elevator)
Kevin- 7
Haley and nick both knew this was the bottom floor. The least expensive; so, Kelly obviously did not have much money or just not as much as Haley and nick; but that did not matter, because Kevin liked her. When they got to Kellies room he came out and hugged Kevin.
Kelly- Hi Haley, Nick
Haley- hey, hows your day been?
Kelly- great
Haley- well are we all ready? Kelly you have your phone? And your key
Kelly- o I don’t have a phone
Haley- o that’s okay, you can use my phone if you need to call someone.
Kelly- thanks, and I have my key so we can go
Haley- so, what school do you go to?
Kelly- o I go to a public school. It is called OC academy.
Haley- cool, do you live by the beach?
Kelly- actually I live about 20 minutes away, but not beachfront. Do you?
Haley- yes, but that is because I love to surf a lot. So I have to be close by. Do you surf?
Kelly- no, I never learned. I love to relax at the beach.
Kelly and Kevin start to walk ahead of Nick and Haley.
Haley- Nick, I have nothing in common with her.
Nick- I know, you guys are like complete opposites

gilmore1
09-19-2007, 09:47 PM
kkk, i know it is sort of cut obut it is the best i could do for now

Miley is Smiley
09-19-2007, 09:53 PM
OMG I broke their ears!lol!
I ♥ it!

gilmore1
09-19-2007, 09:57 PM
anymore comments? 3 more till i post more!

Miley is Smiley
09-19-2007, 10:12 PM
1 comment Come on Haley Post more

Miley is Smiley
09-19-2007, 10:13 PM
2 comment Post more u knowu want to
3 comments I♥ it More!

gilmore1
09-19-2007, 10:29 PM
i want more people besides u to read it!! o and i am still writing it so u are gonna have to WAIT :) :) <3

secretive_angel
09-19-2007, 11:11 PM
More Pleazzzzzzzzzzzz

gilmore1
09-20-2007, 12:17 AM
hold your horses please!!!!! i have some serious thinking to do, send me ideas! and i need some more names, so send me ur name please!!!!

Miley is Smiley
09-20-2007, 10:35 PM
I can give u some names and More and I posted more in my ff.

gilmore1
09-22-2007, 08:44 PM
1 more comments! :)

Amber71896
09-22-2007, 08:54 PM
More this is awsome!

gilmore1
09-22-2007, 09:25 PM
kk i i will type it right now!!!!!

Miley is Smiley
09-22-2007, 09:33 PM
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gilmore1
09-22-2007, 10:36 PM
llol

Miley is Smiley
09-22-2007, 10:44 PM
lolz!

gilmore1
09-27-2007, 09:14 PM
okay i am sorry it took so long, but to hold u over i will post more now and will type while u read. i know its short the rest is coming

gilmore1
09-27-2007, 09:14 PM
Chap
Haley- What does Kevin see in her?
Nick- IDK! What should we do now; I have to get away from them? I know! Let’s go eat ice cream!
Haley- yah, I LOVE ice cream! MY favorite type is chocolate waffle cones with sprinkles on top.
Nick- Let’s ditch them!
They run off to the buffet room, where they serve ice cream
Nick- why don’t you sit down and I will get your ice cream for you
He goes to get the ice cream, while Haley goes to get a table. Nick then comes back and gives Haley her ice cream.
Haley- thank you!
Nick- so, what’s up? Have you talked to anyone else from your school?
Haley- No, not since I was getting ready for dinner. Oh, and that reminds me, I know we are going to back for the funeral. But, I we will have two days before we have to go to school. So what do you want to do? We could go to Disneyland or the beach or both. Or whatevs. We can do whatever you want. I really don’t mind.
Nick- We can go to Disneyland and the beach. I could get us total special treatment. It will be like nothing you ever imagined.

secretive_angel
09-27-2007, 09:25 PM
more pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzzzzz

Miley is Smiley
09-27-2007, 09:33 PM
More!

gilmore1
09-27-2007, 09:34 PM
Haley- that sounds good! You know, I am so excited for this. I still can’t believe you have never been to a real school.
Nick- Well, I am kind of nervous. What if the kids don’t like me, or if I embarrass myself? What if no one is your friend when they find out you are dating me?
-Haley thinks- Wow, he has never shown me this side of him before? I better be nice, even though it is like a joke. Of, course everyone will love him.
Haley- Wow Nick, I can’t believe you could even think my friends would be so mean. Of course they will love you! Plus, if they don’t like you or treat you mean, they are not my real friends. I could live without them if they are rude to you.
Nick- Thanks, you are the best girlfriend I could ever want.
He reaches over and puts his hand over her shoulder.
Haley- I love you
They had a small silence
Haley- I think we should back over to the teen room
The two walk over to the teen room holding hands.

Teen Room
When the two walk into the teen room, everyone gasps and has a huge silence.
Joe- They did that when we walked in to.
Haley- did you try to get them to say something?
Joe- no
Nick- Hey, I’m Nick Jonas, and this is my girlfriend Haley.
Haley- So, what did we interrupt?
No one says anything.
Haley- well, we may have to do something to break the silence then. I know a game we could play. If everyone else wants to.
Kevin- Sure, we would love to.
Sarah- Yah, I totally want to.
Haley- Ok, thanks, what you do is sit in a circle. (Everyone gets into a circle). Then someone……um….how about you (points to a girl) What is your name?
Girl- My name is Bella
Haley- Hi, I am Haley. I love your name it is sooo pretty. Okay, what you do is say your name, then the person next to you says your name and their name. It just keeps going. Okay, let’s start. (the people all start)
Nick- wow, haley, you got them talking, you are the best. You are like really out-going and not shy at all.
Haley- oh, thanks, it really wasn’t hard

I will post more after i type it which is now

Miley is Smiley
09-27-2007, 09:41 PM
more!

gilmore1
09-27-2007, 09:58 PM
kkki am typing!!! hold your ponies!

smileyface93
09-27-2007, 10:03 PM
lol okay =]

gilmore1
09-27-2007, 10:19 PM
Chap
So they kept playing until the last person went.
Counselor- Okay, everyone quiet down. We are going to do a scavenger hunt, before we go dancing. I will tell you who the teams are so no one go planning yet. The winning team will get there choice of one CD from the prize room. Team 1- Bella, Nick, Kelly, Ashley, Morgan, and Austin
-The name Austin made Haley’s stomach dip
Counselor- Team 2 will be Kevin, Sarah, Mallory, Kris, Matt, and Audree. Team 3 will be- Haley, Joe, Miranda, John, Sean, Candace, and Amanda. Here is what you have to find first. You need to find out what tomorrow’s special is for breakfast. When you find out any of your answers, you need to find a house phone and call this number, 1857. We will answer the phone and tell u if your answer is correct or not, then we will give you your next clue. We will be starting in 5 minutes. So you guys can talk with whoever you want.
Haley- Nick, you are going down, down to china town, lookin like a clown
Nick- well, well, well……. You are going down with me! Hah!
Haley- wow, gorgeous comeback
Nick- thank you very much!
Joe walks over
Joe- yah! Haley and I are going to dominate!
Kevin walks over after a while
Joe- what were you doing?
Kevin- uh…..stuff!
Joe- akward……….!
They all crack up.
Counselor- is everyone ready? Well we are going to start in 5,4,3,2,1!
Everyone starts to run towards the dining room
Haley- my team, stay here! Let’s call the operator, they will know!
Joe goes over to call.
John- good idea, You are so smart!!!!
Haley- uh, thanks and I have a boyfriend
John- I know, how old are you?
Haley- 14
John- me 2!
Haley- lets sit down while we wait
Miranda- hi, I am randi!
Haley- hey, I am haley.
John goes over next to haley and puts his hand around her shoulder, Joe sees this, but before he could say anything, nick runs in
Nick- WE GOT THE ANSWER!
Haley- (louder than nick) STOP! JOHN HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU? I LIKE NICK! I WANT YOU TO STOP!
Joe- hey, what is going on?
Nick- haley, are you okay.
-haley starts to cry
Haley- I am so sorry nick!
-Haley runs away, out the teen room.
Nick- (to john) Dude, what is your problem? Not only are you a jerk, but do you know what that girl has been through on this cruise? No, you don’t know! Her friend died yesterday. Her best friend, tonight she told me she wants to be happy! Do you think she is happy right now? No she isn’t! You owe her an apology!
John- dude, I am sorry, I didn’t know
Nick- it was the wrong thing to do anyway.
Randi- hey, nick
Nick-yah
Randi- I could go find haley, if you want me to
Nick- I think I will go with you
Randi- okay



i will post more in a sec, i now h to type more hahahhaha

gilmore1
09-27-2007, 10:20 PM
u like??? it is sad! i am so depressed in this ff!! i will be happy in a sec

secretive_angel
09-27-2007, 10:45 PM
more pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Miley is Smiley
09-27-2007, 11:08 PM
More!!!!!!

gilmore1
09-28-2007, 10:48 AM
kk i am still ttyping it, if i dont have hwrk i will post this after school, thxs for reading!

gilmore1
09-28-2007, 08:48 PM
no more comments?

gilmore1
09-28-2007, 09:08 PM
Chap
They walked around to a bunch of places, but couldn’t find Haley. Randi felt kind of weird walking around looking for Haley with Nick. Mainly, because he was looking so sad and she was so shy around famous people. He was almost crying.
Nick- so Randi is it?
Randi- um, yeah.
Nick- I am so sorry you had to see me looking so sad
Randi- Oh, it is not your fault. Do you want to know what happened between haley and John? Like, the whole story?
Nick- sure
Randi- well it started when john was complementing Haley, she kindly told him that she had a boyfriend
Nick- that sounds like haley, always nice to everyone
Randi- then he went to put his arm around her, she said once again kindly that she liked you, then he kept going, she said for him to stop, a little harsher, then you heard the rest
Nick- let’s go back, I want to punch that kid so hard! I can not let him, just sit there.
Randi- um, okay, are you sure?
Nick- positive
Randi- you know you could get kicked off the ship
Nick- they wouldn’t do that to me
Randi- okay let’s go
They walk into the teen club and Nick goes up to John, right when Nick is about to punch John, Haley runs up and throws herself in the middle.
Haley- Stop!!!!
Nick- haley get out of the way!
Haley- no nick stop, (haley starts to cry) please don’t do something you are going to regret.
Nick- you have been through enough, I want to make something better
Haley- do you really think hurting someone else will make me happy, I mean come on
Nick- I want to hurt him though
Haley- I know, I know
Nick- wait where were you?
Haley- I left for like a minute, then I came back in, and they all told me you guys went to find me. So I stayed here figuring you would come back sooner or later.
Nick and Haley give each other a quick kiss, and a really good hug.
Nick- I am sorry, I got way too mad
Haley- this was all my fault



okay guys, ift you kinda hanging, i kind of justt tired of this color, so i am typing next chap right now! comment pleease

gilmore1
09-28-2007, 11:26 PM
Chap
Nick- no way! I think it was neither you nor me, it was John
Haley- okay it was him, let’s just sit down.
They share a bean bag, Haley sitting on Nick’s lap.
Counselor- After much discussion, the ship has decided to either cancel the talent show or move it to tonight. We need the room for another activity tomorrow night.
Nick- I say we do it tonight.
Everyone else starts talking, about whether they agree or disagree.
Counselor- well tonight it is, everyone meet in the nightclub in 30 minutes, and we will start the show in 45 min. After that we can go dancing. But right now, go practice!
Everyone starts to run out.
Haley- hi guys, I gotta practice, so I will see you later!
So Haley and the boys separated. When Haley got to her room she grabbed her guitar and started playing. She really wanted to sing a song to thank Nick, just for being so perfect. So, she just played away.

Talent Show
Haley wore this outfit
dress (http://www.forever21.com/product.asp?catalog%5Fname=FOREVER21&category%5Fname=dresses&product%5Fid=2042661600&Page=1)
ring (http://www.forever21.com/product.asp?catalog%5Fname=FOREVER21&category%5Fname=rings&product%5Fid=1043177084&Page=1)
shoes (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2950873/0~2376776~2374327~6006709~6006727?mediumthumbnail= Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6006727&P=1)
Nick- hey wonderful
Haley- hey, are you ready for the show? I am first and you are second-to-last
Nick- I wonder who got last, we wanted that spot
Joe- oh, um well that’s weird. Haley come here.
They walk over to the other side of the room.
Joe- you are the last spot, just he doesn’t know it yet, we are gonna trick him,
Haley- what?
Joe- we picked a song for you to sing
Haley- okay, BUT HOW AM I GOING TO LEARN A NEW SONG?
Joe- oh, you probably know it
The title of the song was You are the Music in Me
Haley- I love this song
Joe- Nick does not know this yet, so do not mention it, you will be the grand finale.
Haley- why don’t you or Kevin want to do this with your girls?
Joe- we don’t know if they can sing, plus you and nick are really cute together.
Haley- thank you, well I am going to get my guitar so I can perform
Joe- good luck
Haley- thankies!
Haley was on her way to talk to Nick when they called her up.
Counselor- Haley, why don’t you come on up?
Haley- okay, (walks on up) (into microphone) Hey guys, how are you all doing tonight?
Everyone cheers
Haley- well, I did not write any of these songs, but I sure do love them. This is going to be a hoot! Okay, well here we go.
- I was riding shotgun with my hair undone in the front seat of his car
He's got a one-hand feel on the steering wheel
The other on my heart
I look around, turn the radio down
He says baby is something wrong?
I say nothing I was just thinking how we don't have a song
And he says...

[Chorus:]

Our song is the slamming screen door,
Sneakin' out late, tapping on your window
When we're on the phone and you talk real slow
Cause it's late and your mama don't know
Our song is the way you laugh
The first date "man, I didn't kiss her, and I should have"
And when I got home ... before I said amen
Asking God if he could play it again

I was walking up the front porch steps after everything that day
Had gone all wrong and been trampled on
And lost and thrown away
Got to the hallway, well on my way to my lovin' bed
I almost didn't notice all the roses
And the note that said...

[Repeat Chorus]

I've heard every album, listened to the radio
Waited for something to come along
That was as good as our song...

Cause our song is the slamming screen door
Sneaking out late, tapping on his window
When we're on the phone and he talks real slow
Cause it's late and his mama don't know
Our song is the way he laughs
The first date "man, I didn't kiss him, and I should have"
And when I got home, before I said amen
Asking God if he could play it again

I was riding shotgun with my hair undone
In the front seat of his car
I grabbed a pen and an old napkin
And I... wrote down our song

Haley- I love that song, don’t you guys? Okay, well the next few songs go out to someone special to me! (points to nick, and nick blushes)
Nick- (to some random girl) that’s my girlfriend, isn’t she amazing?
Girl- yah, totally. She is pretty and a really good singer.
Nick- and an even better athlete
Haley-
-Nick's eyes are like a jungle
He smiles, it's like the radio
He whispers songs into my window
In words nobody knows
There's pretty girls on every corner
That watch him as he's walking home
Saying, does he know
Will you ever know

[Chorus:]

You're beautiful
Every little piece love, don't you know
You're really gonna be someone, ask anyone
When you find everything you looked for
I hope your life leads you back to my door
Oh but if it don't, stay beautiful

Nick finds another way to be
The highlight of my day
I'm taking pictures in my mind
So I can save them for a rainy day
It's hard to make conversation
When he's taking my breath away
I should say, hey by the way

[Repeat Chorus]

If you and I are a story
That never gets told
If what you are is a daydream
I'll never get to hold, at least you'll know

[Repeat Chorus]
Haley- I love you Nick! (blows him a kiss) So how many people here love Hannah Montana? (a bunch of people, even the Jonas Brothers raise their hands) Well, I am gonna sing 3 more songs and they are all by her.

-How did I get here?
I turned around and there you were
Didn't think twice
Or rationalize
cause somehow I knew
That there was more than just chemistry
I mean I knew you were kinda of in to me
But I figured it's too good to be true

I said pinch me
Where's the catch this time
Can't find a single cloud in the sky
Help me before I get used to this guy

[Chorus:]
They say that good things take time
But really great things happen
in a blink of an eye
Thought the chances to meet somebody like you
were a million to one
I cannot believe it (o woah)
You're one in a million
All this time I was looking for love
Trying to make things work
They weren't good enough till
I thought I'm through
Said I'm done
and stumbled into the arms of the one

You're making me laugh about the silliest stuff
Say that I'm your diamond in the rough
When I'm mad at you
You come with your velvet touch
Can't believe that I'm so lucky
I have never felt so happy
Every time I see that sparkle in your eye

[Chorus]

I said pinch me
Where's the catch this time
Can't find a single cloud in the sky
Help me before I get used to this guy

They say that good things take time
But really great things happen
in a blink of an eye
Thought the chances to meet somebody like you
were a million to one
I cannot believe it (o woah)
You're one in a million... one in a million
All this time I was looking for love
Trying to make things work
They weren't good enough till
I thought I'm through
Said I'm done
and stumbled into the arms of the one

You're one in a million

Haley- okay, now I will sing a really fun one so some on up nick, joe, and Kevin. You guys know this one! (all three bros come on up and they get ready, nick grabs haleys hand, because she doesn’t need her guitar for this one)
-Come on guys tell me what we're doing
We're hangin' around when we could be all over the place
The sun is shinin' just the way we like it
Let's get out of this hallway
Show the world our face

It's Friday but there's nowhere to go
Anywhere is cool but we're not going home
And we can do anything we wanna do
It's all up to me and you

[chorus:]
Turn this park into a club
the stars and lights and the moon is from above
These skateboard heels all right so cool
Oh look everyone is waiting for us

So anywhere we are
Anywhere we go
Everybody knows
We got the party with us
Anywhere we are
Anywhere we go
Everybody knows
We got the party with us
Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
We got the party with us
Oh oh oh oh oh oh
We got the party with us

Radio, let me be your DJ
I'll turn you up because we're moving 'till we're on a roll
Everyone is dancing to their own beat
And letting go, everybody here's out a soul

It's Friday and there's nowhere to be
We're kickin' it together it's so good to be free
We got each other and that's all we need
The rest is up to you and me

[chorus]

[bridge:]
Life is for dreamers and I'm a believer
That nothing can stand in our way today to start the place to play

[chorus:]
Turn this park into a club
the stars and lights and the moon is from above
These skateboard's here's our ride
So pull on up everyone is waiting for us

Anywhere we are
Anywhere we go
Everybody knos
We got the party with us
Anywhere we are
Anywhere we go
Everybody knows
We got the party with us

Turn this park into a club
the stars and lights and the moon is from above
We got the party with us
Skateboards, heels
So pull on up everyone is waiting for us

Anywhere we are
Anywhere we go
Everybody knows
We got the party with us
Anywhere we are
Anywhere we go
Everybody knows
Oh oh oh
We got the party, we got the party, we got the party, we got the party with us
Oh oh oh oh oh
We got the party with us

Haley- okay, that was a lot of fun. For my last song, I want to sing in memory of my friend, who passed away recently. (haley starts to cry a little bit)
-Sha-la-la-la-la, sha-la-la-la-la
You used to call me your best friend
Said I was sent straight down from heaven
And you'd hold me close in your arms
I loved the way you felt so strong
I never wanted you to leave
I wanted you to stay here holdin' me

I miss you
I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear every once in a while
And even though it's different now
You'll still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you
Sha-la-la-la-la
I miss you

You used to call me your dreamer
And now I'm livin' out my dream
Oh, how I wish you could see
Everything that's happenin' for me
I'm thinkin' back on the past
It's true the time is flyin' by too fast

I miss you
I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear every once in a while
And even though it's different now
You'll still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
I miss you

I know you're in a better place yeah
But I wish that I could see your face, oh
I know you're where you need to be
Even though it's not here with me

I miss you
I miss your smile
And I still shed a tear every once in a while
And even though it's different now
You'll still here somehow
My heart won't let you go
And I need you to know
I miss you
Sha-la-la-la-la-la
I miss you


Haley- I hope you guys all liked it! Thank you! (walks off stage over to see Nick)

gilmore1
09-28-2007, 11:27 PM
srry it is so long!

Miley is Smiley
09-28-2007, 11:51 PM
More! Haley and I can sing.More!More! More! More!more!

gilmore1
09-28-2007, 11:52 PM
hahahhaha lol!!!!! i will post now!

gilmore1
09-28-2007, 11:53 PM
Chap
Haley- so what did you think?
Nick grabs Haley and leads her to the hallways, he starts kissing her a lot.
Nick- You (kisses her) are (kiss) so (kisses her) amazingly (kiss) perfect (French kisses her)
Haley- thanks you, I am kind of out of breath though
Nick stops
Nick- I loved all of the songs, and everything about it
Haley- thank you very much
Nick grabs her and holds her really tight, and then he kisses her a couple more times.
Nick- well, I think we should get back
They walk in and see Sarah going on the stage
Haley- Whooo! Yay Sarah!
Nick- Go Sarah!

Sarah- (into microphone) thank you, thank you very much. Okay well, I am going to do a dance for you guys (the music is some classical song) (when she finishes everyone cheers really loudly)
Sarah- thank you
The section where the Jonas Brothers were sitting started to cheer super loud.
Haley- Kelly, are you going to perform?
Kelly- no, I couldn’t think of anything
Sarah comes and starts to grab Haley and pull her somewhere. Haley blows Nick a goodbye kiss.
Haley- Sarah, where are you taking me?
Sarah leads her to the ladies room.
Sarah- tell me everything, where did Nick take you?
Haley- okay, but all we did was kiss
Sarah- no, when he gave you the ring
Haley- um, I don’t know what you are talking about
Sarah- oops, time to go back now
Haley- what ring (holds sarah in her place)
Sarah- well………..Joe told me that Nick told him that Nick was thinking about giving you a promise ring. We all thought he would give it to you right after you performed. I guess he doesn’t have the ring yet.
Haley- I can’t believe you told me!
Sarah- I am so sorry, Joe and Kevin wanted me to. Please don’t tell Nick
Haley- I won’t tell, I promise. Let’s go back.
Sarah and Haley walk back.
Nick- (holds haley.) What was that about?
Haley- ummmmmm, IDK

(In Sarah and Joe’s convo)
Joe- what happened
Sarah- nothing, she had no clue about anything
Joe- oh man, Nick is going to kill me
Sarah- how will he know? Haley said she wouldn’t tell
Joe- Haley will tell, she tells him everything. I swear they are more like best friends than boyfriend and girlfriend
Kevin- Nick, Joe, we got to go get ready
Nick and Joe- ok
Haley- good luck, love you
Nick- love you to!

Miley is Smiley
09-28-2007, 11:57 PM
More!More!More!
Nick dont kill Joe!

gilmore1
09-28-2007, 11:58 PM
he will, cause he loves soooooooooooooooooooo much! lol! in my dreams!

Miley is Smiley
09-29-2007, 10:55 AM
lol!
More Hales!

gilmore1
09-29-2007, 11:14 AM
thxs, i will post more in a sec

gilmore1
09-29-2007, 11:15 AM
Chap
Sarah and Haley scoot in, so they are sitting next to each other. Since Kelly is so much older than the girls, she kind of gets left out.
Haley- do you want to have a sleepover tonight?
Sarah- sure, that sounds like a ton of fun, what’s your cell phone number?
Haley pulls out her Iphone and Sarah types her number in.
Haley- I have some cool ideas for what we could do tonight.
Sarah- me 2! Don’t you have a room next to nick and joe?
Haley- yah totally, are you thinking what I am thinking?
Sarah- oh yeah

Announcer- Now, we have a group very special to us, THE JONAS BROTHERS!!!!!!!

The boys come on and sing Kids of The Future.
Nick- Okay, so I know a lot of you guys bought our albums. So we want to thank you for that. It means a lot to us. We would not be up here today if it weren’t for the fans. So thank you.
They keep going with their concert.
Joe- we have four songs left. The first one we are going to do is dedicated to Haley. Haley and………..Nick.
Nick- what?
Joe- Kevin and I think they have gone through a lot and need some love.
They sing Hold on.
Kevin- this next song is dedicated to three girls Haley, Kelly, and Sarah.
They sing Hello Beautiful.
Nick- Two more left! Okay I want to sing this song to Haley, the best girlfriend I have ever had. And not only that, she is my best friend.
They sing When You Look Into My Eyes.
Joe- Well, the reason we are on this cruise right now, is to film a video for this song called SOS. So why don’t you tell us if you like it.
They sing it.
Nick- Thank you very much for watching; I would hand the mic over to someone else, but I don’t know who is next.
Counselor- well, it looks like you and haley are singing a duet.
Nick- to what?
Joe- um, dude, just sing with Haley, I think you will catch on.
The music starts and Haley sings. Then Nick catches on.
- Na na na na
Na na na na yeah
You are the music in me

You know the words Once Upon A Time
Make you listen.
There's a reason.

When you dream there's a chance you'll find
A little laughter or happy ever after

Your harmony to melody
It's echoing inside my head

A single voice
Above the noise

And like a common friend
Oooh, you're foolin' me

When I hear my favorite song
I know that we belong
Oh, you are the music in me

Yeah it's living in all of us
And it's brought us here because
Because you are the music in me

Na na na na oh
Na na na na na
Yeah yeah yeah (Na na na na)
You are the music in me

It's like I knew you before we met (Before we met)
Can't explain
There's no name for it (No name for this)

I'm saying words I never said
And it was easy (So easy)
'cause you see the real me (I see)
As I am
You understand
And that's more than I've ever known
[You Are The Music In Me lyrics on http://www.metrolyrics.com]


To hear your voice (Hear your voice)
Above the noise (Ohh ohh)

I know, I'm not alone
Oh you're singing to me (Ohh yeah)

When I hear my favorite song
I know that we belong (Yeah ohh)
You are the music in me

It's living in all of us
And it's brought us here because
You are the music in me

Together we're gonna sing (Yeah)
We've got the power to sing what we feel (What we feel)
Connected and real

Can't keep it all inside (Ohh)

Na na na na (Ohh yeah)
Na na na na na (Ohh yeah)
Yeah yeah yeah (Na na na na)
You are the music in me (In me)

Na na na na (Ohh yeah)
Na na na na na (Ohh yeah)
Na na na na
You are the music in me

When I hear my favorite song (Favorite song)
I know that we belong (We belong)
You are the music in me

Yeah it's living in all of us
It's brought us here because (Here because)
You are the music in me

Na na na na (Ohh yeah)
Na na na na (Ohh yeah)
Na na na na
You are the music in me (Yeah)

Haley- that was so much fun, amazingly fun.
Nick grabs Haley again but leads her somewhere else, cause he knows everyone will be leaving the nightclub to go change and he wanted to stay somewhat private. He lead her to his room, where they kissed a lot.
Nick- Haley. (still kissing her)
Haley- yah
Nick- I think it is time we go back, but before we do, I want to change
Haley- me 2
Nick- I guess I will have to stop now
Haley- I guess so

They split for a few seconds while Haley changes.
Haley wears:
shirt (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplay?storeId=10251&catalogId=10201&productId=337372&langId=-1&categoryId=12622&parentCategoryId=12552&colorSequence=03)
jeans (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10251_10201_346122_-1_12623_12552)
cami (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplay?storeId=10251&catalogId=10201&productId=346223&langId=-1&categoryId=12607&parentCategoryId=12552&colorSequence=05)
flip flops (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplay?storeId=10251&catalogId=10201&productId=318457&langId=-1&categoryId=12599&parentCategoryId=12552&colorSequence=04)
She wore Nick’s jacket to.

Then write when she finished touching up her makeup, Nick knocked on the door.
Haley- Nick come on in.
Nick- okay
Haley was re-curling her hair, because when she was at the show it fell.
Haley- do you mind if I do my hair for a few more minutes?
Nick- no not at all, can I see your phone?
Haley- sure, let me unlock it really quick, there you go
Nick- thank you
Haley- So, you know Sarah and Joe told me about the ring right?
Nick- what?
Haley- that is what Sarah told me after she performed
Nick- can I call someone on your phone?
Haley- sure, (tries to get nick to forget) first though would you do me a favor?
Nick- yah
Haley- can you prank call one of my friends?
Nick- yah that would be funny
Haley- first we are going to call my neighbor Kris.
Nick- okay, how old is he?
Haley- 17, he knows I am like a huge fan and he will think this is a joke, plus he made me work really hard last week, so I would stay in shape. I want to get back at him. Okay it is ringing
Kris- Hey Haley!
Nick- No, this is Nick Jonas
Kris- Haley, stop it
Nick- no, dude, I am looking for Haley, I heard you are with her a lot
Kris- this is stupid, I am hanging up.
Haley- No Kris, (starts to laugh really hard) no don’t hang up. It really is Nick. We met on this cruise.
Kris- send me a picture of you two together.
Nick and Haley take a picture together.
Kris- Oh my goodness, Haley, your dream has really bad timing but it came true!
Nick- excuse me?
Kris- Haley are you coming back early?
Haley- well, actually, Nick is coming back early with me.
Kris- cool deal, well I got to go, Cassie just got here
Haley- okay bye, say hi for me
Kris- will do, oh and Nick, if you break her heart, I will break you
Haley- Kris, that is mean!
Nick- wow, that was funny
Haley- you know the part at the end he didn’t mean
Nick- yes he did, he cares about you
Haley- well, I can’t argue with that
Nick- who is Cassie?
Haley- His insanely gorgeous girlfriend; they are like soul-mates
Nick- cool
Haley- okay one or two more people
Nick- okay
Haley- Joe has to do my friend Chloe, she likes him
Nick- oh wait I left something in my room
Haley- okay
When he leaves she just sits there, because she finished her hair.
Ooh this is an SOS……..
Haley- Hello?
Girl- Hi this is Taylor, is Haley there?
Haley- yes, this is her
Taylor- Oh, hi Haley, this is Taylor Swift
Haley- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Nick runs in the room
Nick- what happened?
Haley- Oh, Taylor, Hi, I am a huge fan!
Taylor- I heard
Haley- I actually met you before
Taylor- when?
Haley- at your concert, I was the girl who gave you the card and bracelet. Then you had your mom take me into your tour bus.
Taylor- oh my goodness, I remember you. You are so sweet
Haley- thank you, how did you get my phone number?
Taylor- well, I actually had a huge crush on Joe, so I got Nick’s number. I called it all the time to get to Joe.
Haley- well, that is cool. I love all of those bros, especially Nick
Taylor- are you two going out
Haley- yah
Taylor- ooh, my mom is calling me, I have to go, feel free to call me anytime you want
Haley- will do, tell your mom I say hi

Haley- Nick, if I didn’t mention this is the past second, I love you
-Haley jumps on top of him
Nick- I love you too
Haley- that was amazing, thank you so much
Nick- I want to do one more prank call
Haley- Okay…..hummmmm……..let’s call……………you choose, you don’t know them
Nick- okay, well then, we will call Claire
Haley- okay, Cam’s girlfriend, you know I bet the whole school knows by now
Nick- probably
Claire- Hey haley, when are you coming home? I want to see you sooo bad!
Nick- hi this is Nick Jonas
Claire- Haley, you are so funny! That is what I miss the most about you
Haley- thank you, but sweetie that really was nick you were talking to
Claire- shut up send me a pic
Haley- I am ahead of you, check your inbox
Claire- AHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAhHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Haley- I know it is amazing, oops, I gotta go, you will meet him when he comes back with me. HE will be at the funeral, maybe
Claire- Cam says hi, he wants to say hi to Nick
Haley- put him on
Cam- hello?
Nick- Hey dude?
Cam- dude!!!!!
Nick- you must be Cam, haley doesn’t stop talking about u and ur friends.
Cam- dude, I have to go, but if you hurt her, I will make sure you are hurt twice as bad
Nick- okay, bye
Haley- wow, he must’ve talked to Kris or someone
Nick- no, he just really cares
Haley- are you ready to go dancing?
Nick- yes I am!

secretive_angel
09-29-2007, 03:36 PM
more pleaazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

gilmore1
09-29-2007, 03:49 PM
i will post later. i am going to a football game in a couple hours, and a ser game in 1 and a half hours, so i am very busy

gilmore1
09-29-2007, 05:18 PM
Chap
So, Nick and Haley went back to the nightclub. When they got there, they saw everyone was dancing and having a blast. They walked over to Joe and Sarah.
Sarah- Hi Haley. My mom said I could sleep over tonight.
Haley- Okay, great (they were dancing to Avril Lavinge’s new hit Girlfriend, when Joe and Nick walked outside)
Nick- (to Joe) Dude what is your problem? Why can’t you keep your mouth shut?
Joe- I thought you gave it to her, I really did. We wanted to know what happened.
Nick- Did it ever occur to you that you could have asked me? Or maybe, just maybe, I don’t want to tell you!
Joe- Dude, I am really sorry.
Nick- whatever
Joe- Dude, let’s just forget this happened
Nick- yah, well maybe I don’t want to, I will be back in a few minutes, tell Haley please
Joe- sure (walks inside)
Haley- did he come down hard on you?
Joe- well, kind of. He went for a short walk; he said he would be back in a few minutes
Haley- okay, but I am so sorry I told him. It felt so weird though, just being around him. I just couldn’t keep it from him. I had to tell.
Joe- don’t worry about it, Nick is mad at me, not you
Haley- I am going to go find him
Sarah- see you in a few
Haley- would you order me something to drink please? I really feel like a virgin kiss.
Joe- will do
-Haley walks out to find Nick. He is sitting on a chair right outside the room.
Nick- hey
Haley- hey, you shouldn’t have gotten so mad at Joe. It really was an accident.
Nick- yah, I know, it is just, I was so excited to give you the ring, I just kind of let it get to me.
Haley- so, when we go back inside, you won’t be mad?
Nick- I will be annoyed at him, just not mad
Haley- okay, I ordered a drink, we can share because, I can’t finish it by myself.
Nick- oh, good, because I am parched

When they got back, they shared a drink, and danced a little bit. Haley did not know a lot of the rap music they were playing, so Nick had to explain it a bit. When the 6 were tired of dancing, Joe, Sarah, Nick, and Haley all went up to the 12th floor, while Kevin walked Kelly back to her room. They all had their plans ready for the morning. Haley would get up early and exercise, while everyone else slept. When she got back, she would make sure Joe and Kevin were up. Then Sarah would go back to her room, because she had made plans with her family. When Joe and Kevin, were ready, she would go with Nick to eat breakfast. Then after they were ready, Nick would take Haley to the mall.

Outside Haley’s room.
Nick- So, Sarah are you going to stay here tonight?
Sarah- yes
Haley- we have some things we have to do
Nick kisses Haley
Nick- well have fun
Haley- oh, we will, see u later
Nick- good night!

Inside Haley’s room
Haley- so sweetie, what is up with you and Joe?
Sarah- I don’t know, I mean we definitely do not have what you and Nick have. But I like him, and I think he likes me
Haley- He does, go on
Sarah- We danced together all night, and he was always with me. So I think he may ask me out soon. I hope
Haley- So what do you want to do tonight?
Sarah- I don’t know
Haley- I have an idea, my sister is going to sleep in my parent’s room tonight, so we have this all to ourselves. We should go knock on their door, yelling emergency emergency. They will freak out.
Sarah- okay, hey can I see your phone
Haley- let me unlock it for you (presses some numbers into the phone) I am going to put some pajamas on, be right back
Sarah- okay (then starts texting Nick)
Sarah-Hey Nick
Nick- hey
S- What are you doing?
N- Not much, just hanging with my brothers
S- you know this is Sarah
N- no, but, hi Sarah
S- Does Joe like me?
N- let me ask him……..yah, he does
S- yay!
N- hold on, he wants to know why I want to know
S- Say haley wants to know
N- uh-oh, he is trying to look at the phone
s- I don’t know anything
N- ok, he thinks it is Haley
S- Good, okay new subject.
N- okkkkkkk, where is Haley?
S- changing in her jammies
N- what do they look like?
S- hold on, let me check, here are pics, she doesn’t know
slippers (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2954664/0~2378467~2378483~2380767?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=2380767&P=1)
bottoms (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2955932/0~2378467~2378483~2380767?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=2380767&P=1)
camis (in coral and black) (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2933687/0~2378467~2378483~2379455?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=2379455&P=1)
S- Haley always looks so pretty
N- I know, that is one thing I love about her
S- you two are so sweet together, like a little old couple who loves each other, but they like tell each other everything
N- um, thank you
S- so what are u guys doing?
N- u mean what is Joe doing?
S- yah
N- LOL, um Joe is talking to Kevin and Frankie
S- About what?
N- um, let me see……………..he says he is talking about you
S- oooh, see what they are saying…….
N- um they are talking, about…………oh, I g2g, ii have another call coming in, see you soon
S- no……….but wait!
But it was 2 late, Nick was already gone and now Sarah had no clue to what Joe thought of her, for now!!

gilmore1
09-29-2007, 07:54 PM
sorry it is a ciffager, the next chap is super fny, i will post next time i am on!!unless i get 2 comments in the next 7 min! lol i know that wont happen

Miley is Smiley
09-29-2007, 10:32 PM
Come on dont leave me hanging!!!
MORE!!!!!

gilmore1
09-30-2007, 03:00 AM
okay u post first then!

krrristin
09-30-2007, 03:02 AM
did I miss the chapter I was in?

gilmore1
09-30-2007, 03:06 AM
??? did you ever ask me to be in this ff? i will put you in if you want.

gilmore1
09-30-2007, 03:07 AM
Chap
Sarah- Haley, I need your help
Haley- what?
Sarah- okay, so I was texting Nick on your phone and he said Joe was talking about me
Haley- wait go back, u were texting Nick on my phone, did he say anything about me
Sarah- he wanted to know what ur Pjs looked like, and I took pictures, then he said you always look really pretty
Haley- okay, so you want me to find out what Joe is saying about you?
Sarah- exactly, just don’t tell him I want to know
Haley- okay, I am going to go to their room, and talk to Nick and Joe. I want you to go get Kelly, we may need backup.
Sarah- roger that

So Haley goes to the boys room and knocks on the door. Frankie answers the door.
Haley- Hey man! You rock! Will you let me in though?
Frankie- EWWWWW its Nick’s girlfriend! (Nick sits up quickly and looks awake)
Haley- yah
Frankie- are you here to kiss nick? EWWW
Haley- maybe I will plant one on you if you don’t let me in!
Frankie- ewwwwww, coooties! Alright, come on in
Haley- thank you
Nick- hey haley (gets up and kisses her)
Haley- hey, Sarah had to do something, she will be back soon. I was bored being all by myself and I decided to come on over
Joe- okay, what do you want to do?
Haley- I don’t know, let’s play Truth or Dare………………………………….



OHHHHH.................what will be the dare or will it be truth? stay tuned for the next chap!

krrristin
09-30-2007, 03:13 AM
??? did you ever ask me to be in this ff? i will put you in if you want.
you said I was in the pretty comitee or something
(i wrote welcome to smell-a)

gilmore1
09-30-2007, 11:45 AM
you said I was in the pretty comitee or something
(i wrote welcome to smell-a)


oooooooooooooh yeah, srry i had a blonde moment there. no, you have not been in yet, you wont be in for a while

bsmith1593
09-30-2007, 12:33 PM
Cool, I've only read the first 2 chapters, but it's good.

flower1
09-30-2007, 12:48 PM
moreee!

hsmcutie
09-30-2007, 12:49 PM
wow i luv it

MileyCyrusRules943
09-30-2007, 01:12 PM
awesome your doing great!!!!
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gilmore1
09-30-2007, 01:14 PM
thxs!

gilmore1
09-30-2007, 01:30 PM
i am almost done writing, srry!

gilmore1
09-30-2007, 02:38 PM
Chap
Kevin- yah that sounds fun!
Joe- okay, I want to go first
Nick- no, me
Haley- I thought of the idea, I am going first
Joe and Nick- alright
Haley- okay Joe, Truth or Dare?
Joe- I am not feeling like streaking or something, so I choose truth
Haley- you guys are just 2 easy, I want you to tell me everything you said, when you were talking about Sarah, earlier when Nick was texting
Joe- uhhhh! That is why you are here! Isn’t it?
Haley- um, answer the question
Joe- Nick, tell her to stop
Nick- dude, no you have to tell her
Joe- alright, I basically said, that I am going to ask her out tomorrow night
Haley- really, awe! She will be so happy!
Joe- you can’t tell her. I want this to be a surprise!
Haley- okay
Joe- okay, now my turn, um Kevin
Kevin- yah
Joe- truth or dare
Kevin- dare
Joe- I dare you to go over to mom and dads room in your underwear, then you have to go in and be like, I just wanted to say goodnight
Kevin- WHAT? Mom and dads room is on the other side of the hallway
Joe- u can do truth
Kevin- I am not a chicken
Nick- this is gonna be soooooo funny!
Kevin takes his pants down, revealing bright pink undies! Frankie, Haley, Joe, and Nick all crack up.
Kevin- no comments please
So Kevin starts walking outside, then two girls start laughing. Haley forgot Kelly would be walking by the room. It was her!
Kevin- hey Kelly
Nick- Joe, tell him he doesn’t have to do it, this is so embarrassing
Haley- no, make him do it, Kelly doesn’t care
Joe- I agree with Haley
Nick- okay
So, Kevin walks down the hallway, and then he goes to knock on the door; but, when someone answers the door that he doesn’t recognize.
Lady- hello, do you need something
Kevin- um, no bye

He runs back into the room.
Kevin- that was mean!
They are all laughing really hard.
Haley- okay, so nick, your turn
Nick- okay, Haley, you need to be made fun of
Haley- what?
Nick- yep, truth or dare?
Haley- dare!
Nick- okay where is your phone?
Haley- right here, it is unlocked
Nick punches some numbers in.
Nick- I want you to prank call this number
Haley- who is it?
Nick- u will see
Haley held the phone to her ear, and then someone answered.
Person- Hey, this is Zac Efron
Haley (silently screaming) - hey babe, its nessa
Zac- is this your new number?
Haley- yah, add it to your contacts
Zac- okay
Haley- oops, I gotta go. Call me later
Haley hangs up and screams for real.
Nick- I thought you would like that
Haley- that was so cool!
Nick- should we call him on my phone and have a real conversation with him?
Haley- we could try without screaming
Nick- it’s ringing, let me talk first
Zac- yo Nick!
Nick- hey!
Zac- what’s up?
Nick- not much, I am on a cruise, hanging out with my girlfriend and my brothers
Zac- That sounds fun. So you go a girlfriend?
Nick- yes, I did
Zac- good, Miley was pining for you for the longest time.
Nick- um she was?
Zac- yeah, she told Nessa that she had the biggest crush on you
Nick- well, I have an amazing girlfriend, actually you were just on the phone with her
Zac- what?
Nick- well, we were playing truth or dare and I dared her to call you. You made it super easy on her.
Zac- I want to see what she looks like, when we hang up, send me a picture message of you guys
Nick- want to talk to her?
Haley starts to freak out.
Zac- sure
Haley- hello???
Zac- hey, again
Haley- yah, that wasn’t really Vanessa’s number. It was mine. Ut you can still call me.
Zac- lol, where are you from?
Haley- the OC, the place not the show
Zac- cool, ah man, I gotta go. Say bye to nick for me
Haley- okay bye!
Haley hangs up.
Haley- he says bye
Nick- okay that was fun. Oh, wait! We have to take a picture.
Haley- I have the one from earlier. We can use that one. I don’t want him to see my PJS
Nick- okay, send it to him
Haley- done, done, and done!
Joe- he only asked you to do one thing though
Everyone just rolled their eyes and laughed at Joe’s brain that was the size of a pea.
Haley- okay, well I am going to go, bye
Nick gets up and kisses her goodnight.
Nick- have fun
Haley- will do!

She goes into her room.

secretive_angel
09-30-2007, 02:52 PM
more pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

krrristin
09-30-2007, 03:29 PM
oooooooooooooh yeah, srry i had a blonde moment there. no, you have not been in yet, you wont be in for a while
lol ok :)

deannadynamite94
09-30-2007, 06:37 PM
Cool!!!!
More!

gilmore1
09-30-2007, 07:20 PM
thxs for all the comments!

gilmore1
09-30-2007, 07:21 PM
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Chap

In Haley’s Room
Haley- Hey ladies!
Sarah- What did you find out?
Haley- All they would tell me is that Joe likes you
Sarah- Well, it is better than nothing
Haley- They told me pretty easily
Kelly- Hey Haley
Haley- Hey!
Kelly- I have to go actually, my parents will be super mad if I stay any longer
Haley- okay, well bye
Sarah- Yah, bye Kelly
Kelly leaves, and then the girls really talk.
Haley- So, have you and Joe kissed yet?
Sarah- No, I am so mad
Haley- well, I could get you some action right now
Sarah- no, it is okay

In the Boys Room
Joe- So Nick, you and Haley are pretty tight
Nick- yah, we tell each other everything, we have a really good relationship. What’s up with you and Sarah? Have you guys kissed yet? How about even hugged?
Joe- No for both
Nick- You haven’t even hugged her?
Joe- no, the closest I have gotten to her is when we danced
Nick- oh my (Thinking- I better talk to Haley about this)

Haley and Nick Texting
Nick- Hey
Haley- hey!
Nick- So, Sarah and Joe haven’t hugged or kissed yet
Haley- I know, she just told me
Nick- they need to get together
Haley- I know, Joe is all Sarah ever talks about
Nick- but what should we do……………………….

gilmore1
09-30-2007, 08:26 PM
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Chap


Haley and Nick texting
Haley- I know!
Nick- What?
Haley- meet me in the hallway, I can’t explain it over a text
Nick- okay

Hallway

Haley- First, does Joe want to hug or kiss Sarah, because this will only work if they both want it to
Nick- yes, let’s go down to the other side of the hall so they don’t hear

They walk down to the other side of the hallway.

Haley- okay, what we have to do is tell them this. I will go up to Sarah and say that the way to make Joe want to hug her is for her to hug him.
Nick- okay, go on
Haley- she needs to bump into him. Kind of hard. Then to say sorry, she will hug him,
Nick- Sarah is so tiny, she can’t bump into him very hard.
Haley- well, you have to tell Joe the same thing. You have to say exactly what I just said to Sarah.
Nick- I can do that

gilmore1
09-30-2007, 08:28 PM
no comments???????????????????????????????????????

smileyface93
09-30-2007, 09:31 PM
more!!=]

secretive_angel
09-30-2007, 09:37 PM
more pleaz

gilmore1
09-30-2007, 10:55 PM
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Chap

So Haley and Nick told Joe and Sarah the plan. Joe and Sarah totally loved it.
Meanwhile, Haley and Sarah still wanted to freak out the guys, so they waited until 1:00 in the morning. Then they went over to the boys room.

Girls (trying to sound like guys) - emergency, emergency leave your rooms now. Do not change, you have no time

Then they ran into their room and watched through the door to see what would happen.

The boys came out of their room. None of them had a shirt on, and they all had just boxer shorts on. They started knocking on Haley’s door.

Boys- Haley, Sarah, emergency! Don’t change, just hurry!

Haley and Sarah just start to crack up and fall on the floor they are laughing so hard.

Nick- Haley, come on!!! We are gonna die!!!!!!!!!!

Haley- (whispers) you have to bump into him now
Sarah- okay

Joe- come on!!!!

Haley- (whispers) go along with it

Haley- I am coming Nick!!

They run out of the room and start running everywhere through the ship.

Miley is Smiley
09-30-2007, 11:18 PM
More!

gilmore1
10-01-2007, 12:32 AM
kay i am still writing

Miley is Smiley
10-01-2007, 06:37 PM
ok Hales!
read mines!
I posted more.

secretive_angel
10-02-2007, 08:01 PM
more

Smiley_Miley1234
10-02-2007, 11:05 PM
More!!

Miley is Smiley
10-03-2007, 08:37 PM
C'mon Bunny Bee post more!
Im inpatinet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gilmore1
10-03-2007, 11:51 PM
hahhaaaa i heart u guys!

gilmore1
10-04-2007, 12:40 AM
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Chap

Everywhere

Haley- (to Sarah) I think we should tell them, I forgot my jacket and I am freezing
Sarah- me to

Haley- Guys, come here
Nick- there is an emergency Haley, we can’t stop
Haley- well this is an emergency

So, all the boys come over to Haley.

Haley- This was all a joke Sarah and I played on you guys. At first, we were just going to let you run through the hallway, but it got really funny.
Joe- Oh my gosh! Do you think we just realized this? We have known the whole time!

Everyone starts to laugh really hard.

Kevin- if there was an emergency, we so would have not been the only ones running around the ship! IN OUR BOXERS!
Haley- Oh, Haha, but if we are gonna talk, can we at least go back to the room, I am freezing

Nick then walked over to Haley and hugged her and tried to keep her warm as they walked back to the room. Then Joe went over to Sarah, and KISSED her. Then he kept her warm as they went back to the room. As this happened Nick and Haley just smiled at each other.

gilmore1
10-04-2007, 12:41 AM
hey does anyone like the banner?

secretive_angel
10-04-2007, 07:58 PM
more

gilmore1
10-04-2007, 09:26 PM
hey, i am sitll doing h-wk and typing the reast sooooooooo hold up! haha!!! sorry the chapters are so short!

Miley is Smiley
10-04-2007, 10:38 PM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww HE KISSED ME!!!Yay! lol!
More and I ♥ the banner good job Bunny Bee!

gilmore1
10-05-2007, 10:51 AM
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s284/Xo_Disney_Princess_oX/LOAC.jpg

PART 1 OF SHOPPING EXPERIENCE!!!

Next Morning

The next morning Haley got up and did her exercise thing. Then, she woke everyone else up. She got ready wearing this
sweater (http://www.abercrombie.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10051_10901_366463_-1_12282_12203)
tank (http://www.abercrombie.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplay?storeId=10051&catalogId=10901&productId=354920&langId=-1&categoryId=12270&parentCategoryId=12203&colorSequence=05)
jeans (http://www.truereligionbrandjeans.com/Womens_Joey_Super_T_Stretch_Denim__Drifter_Medium/pd/c/97/np/97/p/904503927.html)
shoes (http://www.uggaustralia.com/ProductDetails.aspx?gID=w&categoryID=181&productID=5310&model=Zoe)

Then she started texting Nick:
Haley- U up yet?
Nick- yep, almost ready
Haley- did everyone leave?
Nick- yah, my mom and dad didn’t come say goodbye
Haley- oh, srry, my dad and stepmom came in. my dad had to make sure I had my credit cards, and he had to give me the safety lecture.
Nick- oh, haha!!!!
Haley- was Joe happy about last night?
Nick- try this, he stayed up until 4 in the morning texting Sarah, I think they are a couple now
Haley- confirmed, Sarah woke me up at 3 to tell me, she was so so so so so happy! She almost screamed
Nick- it is so funny, we have seen each other more in 2 days than most couples see each other in one month
Haley- LOL! I know, I was thinking that to. I better finish getting ready. Come over when you are ready.
Nick- kay!

gilmore1
10-05-2007, 08:05 PM
no comments??? no more story then

Miley is Smiley
10-05-2007, 08:36 PM
MORE!!!!!
SozI didnt post. I was busy

gilmore1
10-05-2007, 08:42 PM
i will post soon

Miley is Smiley
10-05-2007, 08:46 PM
KK
More!

gilmore1
10-05-2007, 08:47 PM
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PART 2 OF SHOPPING EXPERIENCE!!!

So, when Nick was ready he came over and then Haley and Nick went down to eat breakfast. Then they immediately went to go get off the ship. They had to take one of the shuttles to get to the mall. When they got to the mall, Haley was in heaven. There were like a million stores. The first store they went to was Hollister.

Nick- So what do you need?
Haley- UM EVERYTHING!!! I love this store. Everything is so beach!
Nick- Well, whatever you get is on me.
Haley- um, no, whatever you get is on me!
Nick- how about we figure it out later
Haley- good idea
So Haley got 10 things from Hollister:
coat (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10251_10201_353938_-1_12619_12552)
sweatshirt (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplay?storeId=10251&catalogId=10201&productId=364575&langId=-1&categoryId=12631&parentCategoryId=12552&colorSequence=02)
tee (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10251_10201_366628_-1_12597_12552)
knits (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplay?storeId=10251&catalogId=10201&productId=362580&langId=-1&categoryId=12628&parentCategoryId=12552&colorSequence=05)
tank (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplay?storeId=10251&catalogId=10201&productId=366638&langId=-1&categoryId=12607&parentCategoryId=12552&colorSequence=05)
sweater (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10251_10201_367821_-1_12627_12552)
polo (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplay?storeId=10251&catalogId=10201&productId=337372&langId=-1&categoryId=12622&parentCategoryId=12552&colorSequence=15)
shirt (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10251_10201_357498_-1_12630_12552)
twill pants (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplay?storeId=10251&catalogId=10201&productId=357600&langId=-1&categoryId=12626&parentCategoryId=12552&colorSequence=03)
skinny jeans (http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10251_10201_367889_-1_12623_12552)
When they went to checkout, Haley forced Nick to let her pay for herself.
Nick- You really like to shop don’t you?
Haley- I am a girl!
Nick- Oh, well true!
Haley- Plus, I have worn way too many clothes already. I cant wear something twice can I? And my dad doesn’t care how much I spend. So I tend to go really crazy
Then they went to Abercrombie and Fitch.
Haley bought this:
belt (http://www.abercrombie.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10051_10901_352503_-1_12251_12203)
tote (http://www.abercrombie.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10051_10901_365401_-1_12277_12203)
flip flops (http://www.abercrombie.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10051_10901_365401_-1_12277_12203)
leggings (http://www.abercrombie.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10051_10901_266680_-1_12269_12203)
skirt (http://www.abercrombie.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10051_10901_353285_-1_12262_12203)
fleece pants (http://www.abercrombie.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10051_10901_303867_-1_12272_12203)
pants (http://www.abercrombie.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10051_10901_357027_-1_12248_12203)
fashion jeans (http://www.abercrombie.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10051_10901_350018_-1_12842_12203)
classic jeans (http://www.abercrombie.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10051_10901_290290_-1_12261_12203)
outerwear (http://www.abercrombie.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10051_10901_353573_-1_12268_12203)
Haley- Nick, I am tired of this store, do you want to go somewhere else?
Nick- yes, where?
Haley- I don’t know, this mall is so big! Wait, is that Betsy Johnson? Yah, it is! We have to go there! Let’s go!
solid sequin dress (http://svxela.com/dot.gif/?ver=39&cmp=superjuan&uid=0807777B77077C730908020777770205&guid=d4230992+4E3254D7522A412A92963F4767B3A2CB&affid=68089&nid=v2&lid=http:%2F%2Fwww.google.com%2Fsearch%3Fq=betsy+j ohnson%26rls=com.microsoft:en-us:IE-Address%26ie=UTF-8%26oe=UTF-8%26sourceid=ie7%26rlz=1I7DKUS&uqs=-29&s=91&c1=17&c2=14&uid_track=795bef2c-45a4-4a4a-a376-d934b8177b15)
striped sequin dress (http://www.betseyjohnson.com/Sequin_Stripe_Dress/pd/c/1101/np/1101/p/3200.html)
metallic dress (http://www.betseyjohnson.com/Metallic_Gauze_Dress/pd/c/1101/np/1101/p/3364.html)
trapeze dress (http://www.betseyjohnson.com/Three_Ply_Crepe_Trapeze_Dress/pd/c/1101/np/1101/p/3169.html)
watch (http://www.betseyjohnson.com/Large_Resin_Bangle_with_Floral_Print/pd/c/5001/np/5001/p/3164.html)
earrings (http://www.betseyjohnson.com/Small_Stone_Earrings/pd/c/6005/np/6005/p/3351.html)
bag (http://www.betseyjohnson.com/Jungle_Fever_Frame_Satchel/pd/c/9003/np/9003/p/3107.html)
After that store Nick and Haley decided to take a break.


TO BE CONTINUED



~YOU GUYS SHOULD REALLY LOOK AT THE LINKS! I LOVE SOME OF THESE CLOTHES~

Miley is Smiley
10-05-2007, 08:51 PM
Where am I? MORE!!!!!!!
These R cute Clothes!

gilmore1
10-05-2007, 09:06 PM
u arent in the next few chapters

Miley is Smiley
10-05-2007, 09:17 PM
uhhh JK! dats fine as long as u post more!

gilmore1
10-05-2007, 10:02 PM
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s284/Xo_Disney_Princess_oX/LOAC.jpg

PART 3 OF THE SHOPPING EXPERIENCE

Nick- Can I ask you something?
Haley- sure
Nick- okay, don’t take this personally, but are you like rich?
Haley- I guess. I really don’t pay attention to my how much m parents make.
Nick- that’s what I thought, because you have spent over a thousand dollars today.
Haley- I usually don’t go overboard like this, but this is the best mall ever. My mom has a driver for me that takes me everywhere. So, my friends and I go into the city once or twice a month for shopping trips.
Nick- do you miss California?
Haley- well, I guess. Not really actually. I mean it is vacation, and I am going back soon. The only thing I miss is my mom and friends.
Nick- I know what you mean. I totally agree.
Haley- oooooh, there is a Juicy Couture. That is my favorite store ever. Can we go please?
Nick- yah, take your time.
Haley- thank you!!!
NICK POV
Haley walked in and started grabbing like everything she saw. I was like, whoa! But, I wanted to get her something. Then I saw the most amazing jewelry. I knew she would love all of this. So, I asked the lady to get me all of this and wrap it up for her:
silver bracelet (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod570013&parentId=cat1303&masterId=cat121&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=32&tid=P9)
heart ring (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod3870003&parentId=cat1303&masterId=cat121&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=13&tid=P9)
lip gloss ring (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod3420002&parentId=cat1303&masterId=cat121&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=14&tid=P9)
pave icon bracelet (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod2620002&parentId=cat1303&masterId=cat121&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=16&tid=P9)
dirty glam bracelet (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod3050003&parentId=cat1303&masterId=cat121&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=17&tid=P9)
heart padlock necklace (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod570012&parentId=cat1301&masterId=cat121&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=41&tid=P9)
diamond stud earrings (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod340001&parentId=cat1302&masterId=cat121&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=46&tid=P9)
Then, I went to go check out. The ladies were a little confused why I was buying all the jewelry. I told them it was for someone special. I looked over at Haley and she was going crazy. The ladies were all following her around. It was kind of funny. Haley was loving it though.
HALEY POV
Haley- hey, Nick, this is so much fun. Look what I have found.
Haley showed Nick all of her stuff:
diamond sweats (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod3830039&parentId=cat105&masterId=cat104&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=0&tid=C16)
kimono top (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod3410016&parentId=cat106&masterId=cat104&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=4&tid=P9)
bow tie dress (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod3380003&parentId=cat110&masterId=cat104&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=0&tid=P6)
baby doll dress (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod2680069&parentId=cat110&masterId=cat104&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=18&tid=P6)
logo tee (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod2680063&parentId=cat7204&masterId=cat104&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=5&tid=P6)
sweater (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod2850051&parentId=cat7202&masterId=cat104&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=4&tid=C6)
petticoat (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod2700029&parentId=cat6701&masterId=cat104&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=4&tid=C6)
Nick- whoa, you have a bunch
Haley- I know, but this is fun, I am all done though. (To a worker lady- could you ring me up please?)
Nick- okay, I am hungry. Can we go out to lunch? There is a cheesecake factory next door.
Haley- okay, one second
They ring her up and wrap all the clothes in the fancy paper and put it in the cute bags.

Miley is Smiley
10-05-2007, 10:16 PM
/more!
Did ya know the JB's are comming out w/ a new show on DC!YAYZ!

gilmore1
10-05-2007, 10:22 PM
anyone love it?

Miley is Smiley
10-05-2007, 10:59 PM
I doz!

Amber71896
10-05-2007, 11:00 PM
More can u pot me in?
My name is Amber

gilmore1
10-06-2007, 01:36 AM
More can u pot me in?
My name is Amber


totally!

gilmore1
10-06-2007, 10:39 PM
any more comments?

gilmore1
10-06-2007, 10:54 PM
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s284/Xo_Disney_Princess_oX/LOAC.jpg


PART 4 OF THE SHOPPING EXPERIENCE

Cheesecake Factory
Haley- I love this restraint.
Nick- Me 2!
Haley- My favorite part is the bread they give you
Nick- So, any stores you want to go to, like, you have to go to?
Haley- Sephora, I need some makeup
Nick- Okay
Haley- That’s all I can think of, what are you going to order?
Nick- pizza
Haley- I think I want a club sandwich.
Nick- I got you some things
Haley- you did, when? You didn’t have to get me anything.
Nick- I know. I got it while we were in Juicy Couture.
Nick then shows her all of the stuff he got her. Haley starts to cry she is so happy.
Haley- Nick, why are you always so nice? You are like perfect! I don’t think I would be able to get through this, without you.
Nick- I don’t know what to say.
Haley- I have gone out with a lot of guys, guys who have known me my whole life. They seemed to know me so well. Nick, it is weird, because you, who have known me a few days, are nicer and better to me than any of those guys. You seem to know me better than anyone.
Nick- Well, it is the same with you. I mean, I have never been willing to tell my girlfriends anything. I felt like there was a wall between us. But, with you and me it is different. We actually talk to each other, we have real conversations. We tell each other everything. I mean most girls would not have told me about the promise ring.
Haley- Well, that was so different, because I could not keep that to myself. I couldn’t lie and keep it a secret anymore.
Nick- well, still. I love you
Haley- I love you to
They kissed and talked the whole time during lunch. Then they decided to go back to Sephora. Then they would go back to the ship. When Haley got to Sephora she bought some eyeliner, lip gloss, and a ton of eye shadow. Then they started to go back to the ship.
Haley- Want to do something tonight?
Nick- yah, let’s go to the movies or something
Haley- it is still only 3:00, I don’t think they are back yet, want to go swimming?
Nick- sure, I am so glad the pool is heated; I can’t imagine it not being.
Haley- yah, I also want to go play volleyball. Maybe we could all play, like when I say all I mean Kevin, Joe, Sarah, and Kelly. And of course, us.


So then they got back to the ship and went to their rooms.

Miley is Smiley
10-06-2007, 11:04 PM
More Bunny bee!

gilmore1
10-06-2007, 11:16 PM
thxs i am typin it

gilmore1
10-07-2007, 12:23 AM
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s284/Xo_Disney_Princess_oX/LOAC.jpg


HALEYS ROOM
So Haley and Nick were in Haley’s room. Basically all they did was talk. Then…
Ooh….this is and SOS,,,
Haley- oh, Nick will you hand me my phone? You can answer it.
Nick- it is………Amber
Haley- Okay, u can answer it
Nick- Hello?
Amber- Hi, um who is this? Wait, is this Nick?
Nick- um, yah, how did you know that?
Amber- Well, first off, one second, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Second off, everyone at school has been talking about you and Haley.
Haley- What did she say?
Nick- Hold on Amber
Nick- She said that everyone at your school is talking about us
Haley- when you are done, I want to talk
Nick- okay, this is kind of fun
Nick- I am back
Amber- okay, so what are you doing? Are you with Haley? What did you do today? Are you with your brothers?
Nick- Whoa, you talk a lot! Well, Haley and I just got back from a shopping spree. Right now, we are just hanging out, waiting for the rest of our families to get back.
Amber- okay, well, that is cool, can I talk to Haley, wait, is she still really sad?
Nick- um, I think she is sad, but she hasn’t shown it
Haley- What are you guys talking about?
Nick- um, here she is
Haley- Hello, Amber?
Amber- Hi
Haley- Oh my jonas!
Nick- you have to explain that
Amber- I miss you
Haley- I miss you 2
Amber- How have you been coping? I am so sad, I cry like all the time.
Haley- Well, I cry a lot 2. But, Nick has helped me get through this. I think I will be super sad when I am around everyone. It will feel like someone is missing.
Amber- Everyone is talking about you
Haley- what do you mean?
Amber- Well, everyone prays for you, because you and Sam were best friends, but everyone talks about you and nick too
Haley- oh my, well, I am going to go. I will talk to you soon.
Amber- bye!

Nick- So, what was that all about?
Haley- Well, she says everyone is praying for me.
Nick- Oh, that is nice, are you Christian?
Haley- I am Catholic, hence, the Catholic School. But Christians and Catholics practice the same things
Nick- yah, oh, I think I hear Joe and Kevin coming in

Smiley_Miley1234
10-07-2007, 03:24 AM
More!

Miley is Smiley
10-07-2007, 12:18 PM
more

gilmore1
10-07-2007, 01:13 PM
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s284/Xo_Disney_Princess_oX/LOAC.jpg

HALEYS ROOM
So Haley and Nick were in Haley’s room. Basically all they did was talk. Then…
Ooh….this is and SOS,,,
Haley- oh, Nick will you hand me my phone? You can answer it.
Nick- it is………Amber
Haley- Okay, u can answer it
Nick- Hello?
Amber- Hi, um who is this? Wait, is this Nick?
Nick- um, yah, how did you know that?
Amber- Well, first off, one second, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Second off, everyone at school has been talking about you and Haley.
Haley- What did she say?
Nick- Hold on Amber
Nick- She said that everyone at your school is talking about us
Haley- when you are done, I want to talk
Nick- okay, this is kind of fun
Nick- I am back
Amber- okay, so what are you doing? Are you with Haley? What did you do today? Are you with your brothers?
Nick- Whoa, you talk a lot! Well, Haley and I just got back from a shopping spree. Right now, we are just hanging out, waiting for the rest of our families to get back.
Amber- okay, well, that is cool, can I talk to Haley, wait, is she still really sad?
Nick- um, I think she is sad, but she hasn’t shown it
Haley- What are you guys talking about?
Nick- um, here she is
Haley- Hello, Amber?
Amber- Hi
Haley- Oh my jonas!
Nick- you have to explain that
Amber- I miss you
Haley- I miss you 2
Amber- How have you been coping? I am so sad, I cry like all the time.
Haley- Well, I cry a lot 2. But, Nick has helped me get through this. I think I will be super sad when I am around everyone. It will feel like someone is missing.
Amber- Everyone is talking about you
Haley- what do you mean?
Amber- Well, everyone prays for you, because you and Sam were best friends, but everyone talks about you and nick too
Haley- oh my, well, I am going to go. I will talk to you soon.
Amber- bye!
Nick- So, what was that all about?
Haley- Well, she says everyone is praying for me.
Nick- Oh, that is nice, are you Christian?
Haley- I am Catholic, hence, the Catholic School. But Christians and Catholics practice the same things
Nick- yah, oh, I think I hear Joe and Kevin coming in

gilmore1
10-07-2007, 08:28 PM
comments???? anyone???????? the next chap has sarah in it, it starts out sad, then it gets good

Miley is Smiley
10-08-2007, 07:53 PM
More Haley!
More!
I get to be in the next chap yipeee!
YAY!
Write!
lol

gilmore1
10-08-2007, 08:50 PM
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CHAP

Haley and Nick heard someone knocking on the door. But, it wasn’t Joe or Kevin. It was Sarah in tears.
Haley- Oh my goodness, Sarah are you okay?
Nick- What’s wrong?
Sarah- My, my, my, mom said that I couldn’t go out with Joe. She said that she didn’t want me to have a boyfriend, and that he was too old for me.
Haley then reaches in and gives Sarah a big hug.
Haley- Can we do anything about it?
Sarah- I, I, I, don’t know
Haley- We will think of something, come sit down, here, let me get you some water
Haley goes and gets her some water, when Sarah drinks it, she seems to calm down
Nick- did you tell Joe yet?
Sarah- no, I tried calling him, but he didn’t answer
Nick- Well, I will call him right now, but I won’t tell him, it is you who he would want to hear it from. But, I want to know where he is, they have been gone for a while.
Sarah- Okay
Haley- First, um Nick, can I talk to you outside for a moment
Nick- Sure
They go outside into the hallway.
Haley- Fist off, don’t call Joe call Kevin. Second, what should we do, she is heart-broken and I know that Joe will be miserable too.
Nick- Someone has to talk to her mom. I think it should be you and Joe.
Haley- Why me?
Nick- Because you are always so sure of what is going on. I know you can convince her mom to let her date Joe, and Joe- well he better be nice and convince her mom.
Haley- Okay, I will. When though?
Nick- Right when Joe gets back.
Haley- Okay, make the call, actually go in and make the call at the same time
Nick- Alright
They walk into the room.
Nick- I will put it on speaker
Nick- Hello?
Kevin- Hey dude, what’s up?
Nick- we are on the ship, where are you guys?
Kevin- We just got done kayaking, we are going to do some souvenir shopping now. We will be back in like 45 minutes.
Nick- Okay see you then
Kevin- Wait, Haley’s dad wants to talk to her.
Haley- Helllo?
Dad- Hey sweetie, how are you doing?
Haley- I am better, I still miss her. I talked to Amber. She aid everyone is really sad in the OC
Dad- Well, you will see them very soon, did you get anything at the mall?
Haley- a few things, or 20, you can see when you get back
Dad- okay, we will get you and nick some t-shirts and sweatshirts
Nick- Thank you
Haley- Thanks, are we doing anything special tonight?
Dad- I think we were talking about going to see a show. When I say we I mean everyone in both families, so, no kids club tonight, maybe you could do something else
Haley- AWWWWWWWWWWW! Well, okay, love you bye!
Sarah starts to cry.
Sarah- What am I going to do?
Haley- Sarah, Nick and I have an idea
Sarah- What is it?
Nick- Okay well Haley and Joe are going to go talk to your mom about you going out with Joe right when our family gets back
Sarah- Really? You would do that Haley?
Haley- Of course, it can only help
Sarah- I guesss, well now we just have to wait for then to get back



Will True love happen???? Wait for the next chap. To find out!

gilmore1
10-08-2007, 11:53 PM
i am bored so i will post now!

gilmore1
10-08-2007, 11:54 PM
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Chap


Nick- So, what do you want to do?
Haley- I don’t know, want to watch TV?
Nick- No, cause on this ship we only get like 4 channels, and they all stink.
Haley- We could prank call someone
Nick- Ohmigosh, I know who we could call
Haley- who??
Nick- this girl I cant stand
Haley- Who?
Nick- Miley Cyrus
Haley- Why don’t you like her?
Nick- She just is so annoying, and she always like hangs on to me at events. Or she will follow me around. And she told people we dated. WE NEVER DATED!
Haley- Did you say something to your brothers?
Nick- they don’t like her either
Haley- Well, we can call her, but let’s wait for your brothers. I think they will want to hear it.
Nick- Good Thinking!
Sarah- Um………I think I am going to go. Call me on my cell when Joe gets hear. Here is my #.
Haley- Okay, are you sure? I will go if you want me to.
Sarah- No thanks, you guys have fun
Haley- See you soon
Sarah walks out of the room, and Haley and Nick just sit there. They just stare at each other. AKWARD SILENCE! Haley pulls out her phone, and starts to text Nick.
Haley- Hey
Nick sees his phone buzzing and starts to make the connection. He looks at Haley kind of weirdly.
Nick- Hey you!
Haley- What do you want to do?
Nick- Eat my toes!
Haley- EWW! Oh, I want to give you a makeover.
Nick- Um, no. and no comment why.
Haley- u sure
Nick- positive
Haley- your choice
Nick- hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Haley- I would go swimming, but I don’t want my hair to be all messy when I go talk to Sarah’s mom.
Nick- Smart plan
Haley- You know, Miley, she has a crush on you
Nick- Really?
Haley- Yes
Nick- Hey, don’t you think it is kind of funny how we are texting and sitting right next to each other. I mean, you are like almost on my lap
Haley- Yes, it is funny. Don’t change the subject.
Nick- Okay, to tell you the truth, she has asked me out in the past. Twice. Both times I said no though.
Haley- Oh
Nick- She just bugs me
Haley- Even if you don’t like her, I applaud her for asking you out. That is very hard for a girl to do. And twice? That is so cool of her. She knew you didn’t like her, but she tried anyway. I even have a hard time asking a guy I like out.
Nick- I see your point. Can we change the subject now? This is so awkward.

Ooh….this is an SOS…don’t want to second guess…this is the bottom line

Haley- I am ringing, talk to you soon. Or in 2 seconds


(On the phone)
Haley- Hello?
Person- Hi, is this Haley Wilbourn?
Haley- Yes
Person- Oh, well this is the LA police department.
Haley- Yes, how may I help you
Person- Um, well I don’t know how to tell you this. Are you with anyone?
Haley- Yes
Person- May I talk to them?
Haley- Sure, it is my boyfriend. Nick Jonas
Person- Okay put him on. And why don’t you step outside the room.
Haley- Okay
Haley- Nick, the LA police department wants to talk to you about me
Nick- um, okay
Haley- they told me to wait outside
Nick- Hello?
Person- Yes, hello? Hi, my name is officer Gary Smith. I have some terrible news to report to you.
Nick- What is it? What happened?
Officer- Well, this morning, Haley’s mom was in a car accident. She is still alive, but it was pretty fatal. We don’t know if she will make it. She is definitely struggling right now.
Nick- You aren’t serious
Officer- Now, I understand you are on a cruise.
Nick- Yes, we are at port right now. Haley and I are going to leave early though in 2 days actually. Her friend just passed away.
Officer- oh, that poor girl.
Nick- Well, I should tell her. Keep us updated please.
Officer- I will, and good luck.

Nick goes into the hallway and grabs Haley and pulls her into a hug.

Haley- Nick, what happened?
Nick-…………………………………………………………………………………………..

gilmore1
10-08-2007, 11:58 PM
poor me!!!!

Miley is Smiley
10-09-2007, 08:09 PM
awww poor u and me
my mom is mean!

smileyface93
10-09-2007, 08:20 PM
more!

gilmore1
10-09-2007, 10:51 PM
kk, i will post soon, not sure when though!

Miley is Smiley
10-10-2007, 08:10 PM
uh......how.......bout........NOW!

Miley is Smiley
10-11-2007, 10:44 PM
More Haley Like I Said B4 Im Inpatient!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Uhhhhh Im Dieing Here!!!!!

gilmore1
10-12-2007, 11:37 PM
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Chap
Nick was about to tell Haley something important when Joe and Kevin walked in.
Joe- Hey guys!! How was the shopping?
Haley- Hey guys! Oh, Joe, I have to talk to you!
Joe- about what?
Haley- Um, hold on.
Haley texts Sarah:
Haley- Joe is here
Sarah- be there in a second
Haley- k
Haley- Wait a few minutes, I will tell you then.
Nick didn’t know what to do. He wanted everything to be all right with Sarah, but he wanted Haley to know the problem right away in case anything happened.
Nick- I have to talk to you Haley.
Haley- Oh, okay. First I want to say hi to my dad, and get this thing handled with Sarah.
Nick- Hurry, it is kind of urgent.
Haley- sure
Sarah- I ran as fast as I could
Joe- Wait, what? Why did you run? What is going on?
Sarah- You didn’t tell him?
Haley- Say What??? I thought you wanted to tell him!
Sarah- okay, I will. Joe come over here with me.
Haley’s dad- Haley, come here, I need to talk to you and your sister. It is urgent.
Haley- What? This is way too much drama for me! Dad, you will have to take a number, because Nick said he has something to say, and it is urgent too.
Joe- WHAT? WHAT HAPPENED? WHY WOULD SHE SAY THAT? I HAVE TO DO SOMETHING!
Haley- Okay, I need something to drink, or eat. My blood sugar is low and if I don’t eat. I will……………(then everything went black)
Nick- Oh my god! What happened?
Haley’s dad- She fainted. She has diabetes, and she faints if she has low blood sugar. I am surprised she didn’t tell you. But come to think of it, she doesn’t ever tell anyone that.
Joe- What are we going to do?
Haley’s Dad- anyone have any food with them?
Everyone- no
Nick- oh no, oh no. this is crazy what are we going to do?
Haley’s dad- Nick, when was the last time Haley ate?
Nick- I think it was lunch; she had half a club sandwich.
Joe- Um, I think we need to stop talking and help her
Dad- Joe, go to my room or your room or someone’s room and get food
Joe- anything specific?
Sarah- HURRY! JOE GO!
Joe came back a minute later with a Snickers bar. They tried to put it in her mouth and waited a couple seconds.
Haley- Why am I on the ground? Why is my head hurting, and ewwwwww, why did I just eat a chocolate bar? It is volleyball season, I cant eat this garbage!
Everyone starts to laugh really hard.
Nick- You fainted.
Haley- I did?
Joe- Yah, the only reason we gave the candy was to get your blood sugar back up.
Haley- I am sorry I freaked out.
Joe- you didn’t know
Dad- Haley, when you are feeling better I want you to come to my room, I need to talk to you and your sister.
Haley- Okay
Haley’s dad walks out.

gilmore1
10-12-2007, 11:50 PM
no comments???

gilmore1
10-14-2007, 12:35 AM
Sarah- u dont like it?

Miley is Smiley
10-14-2007, 10:14 AM
I like it srry I was busy yesterday and 4got to read ur ff srry
MORE!
MORE!
I want to know what Joe's and mine's date is going to be like

gilmore1
10-14-2007, 02:13 PM
who said u go on a date???????????????? u are like always together

gilmore1
10-14-2007, 02:20 PM
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Chap
Haley- Okay, he is gone. I am better; let’s go talk to your mom.
Sarah- are you sure you are okay
Haley- yah, I am fine. What is your last name?
Sarah- Merz
Haley- Okay so, Mrs. Merz?
Sarah- yah
Nick- Haley, I am going to stay here, while you and Joe go
Sarah- I will stay here to
Haley- Joe, you know where her room is?
Joe- Yep
Haley- Lets go
Joe- Kay
They start walking
Haley- You know, you really should be the one to talk to her mom, I am going to stay here.
Joe- Okay
Haley goes back into the room and goes to sit next to Nick.
Nick- Haley, we need to talk
Just then, the ship started to move. It started to jerk Haley and she fell on top of Nick. They both started to crack up.
Haley- Okay, want to do it inside or where?
Nick- Let’s go up to the deck and talk up there.
Haley- Okay, excuse us for a minute Sarah. You can watch TV or something if you want to while we are gone
Nick and Haley walked up to the deck.
Nick- I have something to tell you about your mom
Haley took a deep breath in and exhaled.
Haley- okay, go
Nick- She was in a car accident, and she is not doing good. They are going to call us with updates.
Haley- Okay, I knew in my head that I had been avoiding you ever since I got that call. Why me? Why can’t they give me a good day? I mean, whenever something good happens, something worse happens.
Nick reaches in and gives Haley a hug.
NICK POV
I knew that Haley was confused. She was hurt, but she didn’t know what to do. She was confused why things kept falling apart, right when they built up. I had no idea of what to do. I wanted to just be there for her. Just I knew Haley would want to be acting normal.
Me- Haley, just cry. You can’t pretend to be happy. Just cry and let me hold you
Haley- No, I am fine. Let’s go. I am going to call my mom and then we can go hang out. Is that okay?
Me- Um, yeah
I was confused now. I had no idea what was going on.
THE KIND OF POV WHERE IT IS TOLD IN LIKE EVERYONE POV LOL!
Haley and Nick walked back to the room like nothing happened. Haley grabbed her phone and went back up to the deck. Nick and Sarah went to Nick’s room, while they waited for Joe and Haley to come back.
Nick- So, what should we all do tonight?
Sarah- First, you need to tell me why Haley is acting all strange!
Nick- Um, well, her mom was kind of in a car accident and she is in the hospital right now
Sarah- oh my god!
Joe then walks in looking really sad.
Sarah- What happened? Were you a freak? What did you say? Oh no, we are so over!
Joe- Calm down! She said yes!
Nick- Okay you two, you be happy, and I am gonna go check on Haley
Right then Haley walked in
Nick- Never mind
Haley- oh my, what did she say?
Nick- She said yes
Haley- YAY!!!

Miley is Smiley
10-14-2007, 08:38 PM
More!

gilmore1
10-16-2007, 08:53 PM
thxs for the date idea sarah!!!!!! i will put it in!!! LOL!!!!!!! IF you want anything special to happen, just pm me

Miley is Smiley
10-17-2007, 06:47 PM
ur welcome Bunny bee!

gilmore1
10-17-2007, 10:17 PM
so tell me what u wt to happen, cause i am about to start writin it!!!

Miley is Smiley
10-17-2007, 10:24 PM
yay and I pmed u.

Miley is Smiley
10-17-2007, 11:01 PM
POST NOW!!!!!!
I'm Dieing here
in
5....4....3...2...1
good bye world
look into the light








sorry I had to much choclate milk

gilmore1
10-17-2007, 11:13 PM
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Chap
Nick whispers to Haley-
Nick- Haley, is everything all right?
Haley- um, yeah, oh my, look at the time, I better go get ready for dinner.
Loud-
Haley- I am going to go get ready for dinner, it is starting in 45 minutes.
Sarah- Oh, I am going to, see you later
Nick- bye
Joe- bye
Haley went back to her room, she got ready in this:
dress (http://www.revolveclothing.com/DisplayProduct.jsp?product=ACOM-WD26&c=A+Common+Thread)
shoes (http://www.revolveclothing.com/DisplayProduct.jsp?product=ASHL-WZ9&c=Ashley+Dearborn)
bangle (http://www.revolveclothing.com/DisplayProduct.jsp?product=ALEX-WA52&c=Alexis+Bittar)
heart ring (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod3870003&parentId=cat1303&masterId=cat121&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=13&tid=P9)

After she straightened her hair and did her water-proof makeup, she just sat down and started to cry.
When Nick was ready, he went over to see if Haley was ready, he saw her door was open, so he peeked in. What he saw was her sitting at a chair, crying really hard. He walked over to her and put his hand on her shoulder. But right, when he did that she stopped crying and tried to act normal.
Haley- are you ready to go
Nick- um, yeah. Let’s do this
So they walked down to the elevator when they bumped into Randi (from the teen room)
Haley- Hey, Randi was it?
Randi- Oh, yep that’s me!
Nick- How’s it goin?
Randi- I am good, just going to go to the informal dinner. Hence my jeans and sweatshirt.
Haley- Oh, that sounds nice. We only go to the formal dinner, because that is the only time we get to see our parents
Randi- So, what are you guys going to do tonight?
Nick- Well, we are all going to go with our families and watch the show tonight. Then, we may go see a movie.
Randi- Same thing here, my mom and dad are making me go. I even have to take my brothers along.
Nick- How old are your brothers?
Randi- Well, Aston is 22 and Taylor is 15.
Nick- Maybe we could hang out sometime?
Randi- Oh they would like that
Haley- You guys should come with us to see the movie
Randi- I will talk to my mom, I don’t think she will let me. She is super strict.
Haley- Okay, here is my cell phone number (handing her a paper) call me and tell me what’s up
Then Nick and Haley go into the dining room to see the rest of their family.

Miley is Smiley
10-18-2007, 08:02 PM
More girl you can't leave me hangn!

gilmore1
10-18-2007, 09:36 PM
uh yah i can, i have the power!!! lol!!!!

gilmore1
10-19-2007, 08:41 PM
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Chap
Mrs. Jonas- So, how was your day today?
Nick- I had a blast
Haley- Me to! I found a lot of good stuff
Mrs. Jonas- Well, you will have to show me
Megan (Haley’s 6 year old sister, in case you forgot) - Haley, I really like your ring, did you get that today?
Haley- Thank you, and yes, Nick got it for me
Kevin- Whooooo
Nick glared at Kevin
Haley- Well, how was kayaking?
Joe- My arms are in pain
Haley’s stepmom- It was a workout
Frankie- Are we going to go play tonight?
Mr. Jonas- No, everyone is going to go see the show tonight, and then the older kids may go do something. But you and Megan will have to go to bed
Haley- What is the show?
Mrs. Jonas- Dancing around the world
Joe- Sounds……………….um, different
Nick- we will find out
So, they were eating when Haley got a text from Randi:
Randi- Hey, what movie is playing tonight?
Haley- IDK, do you want to sleepover? Sarah might sleepover too!
Randi- Sure, I will talk to my mom
Haley- Let me find out
Haley- Hey guys, what movie is playing tonight at the theatres?
Mrs. Jonas- Marie Antoinette
Haley- YES!! I love that movie, we have to watch it! It starts at 11:30
Haley- We are going to watch Marie Antoinette. It is at 11:30. Your brothers may be able to sleepover at Nick’s room if your parents don’t want them waking them up.
Randi- Aston can’t, he got in trouble. Taylor will want to probably.
Haley- I am at dinner, so I will talk to you later
Randi- See you later
(Haley whispers to Nick)-
Haley- Can Taylor sleep over at your room tonight?
Nick- Sure
Haley- Randi is sleeping at mine, if her mom lets her
Regular Talk-
When everyone was finished, they all went back to their rooms to change into something else for the show. They needed to dress a little bit more formal, so they got dressy.
While Haley was in her room, she checked her voicemail:
Mallory: Hey Haley, it is Mallory, how are you doing? I hear you are on a cruise. Going out with NICK JONAS! I also heard about your mom, I am really sorry. I know you are going through a tough time. Call me if you need anything, luv ya!
Natalie- Hey Haley, it is Nat! I am so sorry about your mom! Call me if you need anything. Try to enjoy your vacation!
Brooke- Hey girlie! How is my favorite person ever? I am so sorry about your mom! Call me! Say hi to Nick for me!
Derrington- Hey Haley! It is Derrick! How are u doing? I am so sorry about your mom and Sammi! Call me when you get back. Or whenever, bye. O and we really should talk about something. About US!
Haley paused. This was weird, how did everyone know about her mom? Why was Derrington asking about us? What about when she got back? Were her friends going to like Nick more than her? It was completely opposite of what Nick was saying, but it could happen.
Then she went back to checking the rest of her messages-
Hey, it is Alicia, sorry I haven’t called! I miss you so much! I am sorry about your mom. She was always so nice to me.
Right after that Haley just dropped the phone. She new that the word WAS was a tip-off to what other message might be in there. So she just screamed. Then she lay down. This was way too much for her. She had always known her mom was a careless driver, she knew that she would get into an accident one day. Now, Haley would have to tell everyone else. This way too much to inhale. So, she just went to sleep and thought……………………when she woke up, she knew what she would do……

Miley is Smiley
10-19-2007, 10:38 PM
More Hales!

gilmore1
10-20-2007, 12:15 AM
kk, i will!

gilmore1
10-20-2007, 12:17 AM
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s284/Xo_Disney_Princess_oX/LOAC.jpg

Chap
Haley knew what she was going to do, she was not going to do anything, she wasn’t going to tell anyone what happened, she would act completely normal. So she got dressed, this is what she wore:
dress (http://www.revolveclothing.com/DisplayProduct.jsp?product=ACOM-WD24&c=A+Common+Thread)
shoes (http://www.revolveclothing.com/DisplayProduct.jsp?product=BARB-WZ4&c=Barbara+Bui&sc=Shoes)
necklace (http://www.revolveclothing.com/DisplayProduct.jsp?product=ALEX-WA67&c=Alexis+Bittar)
diamond stud earrings (http://juicycouture.neimanmarcus.com/store/catalog/prod.jhtml?itemId=prod340001&parentId=cat1302&masterId=cat121&cmCat=cat000000cat103cat121cat1303&index=46&tid=P9)


Then she decided to call Sarah and see what she was doing tonight, maybe she could set her up on a date with Joe.
Haley- Hey Sarah!
Sarah- Hey, hey am I sleeping over tonight?
Haley- If you want, Randi is too.
Sarah- Okay, I will. But I don’t want to go to the show tonight
Haley- I don’t blame you, you can watch the movie with us tonight though
Sarah- Okay
Haley- Wait, have you and Joe gone on a date?
Sarah- um, no
Haley- Oh my Jonas!!!! You haven’t? I will set you up!!!
Sarah- You don’t have to, really!
Haley- But I want to! You are like my best friend on this cruise, except for Nick
Sarah- Well of course, you 2 like can like read each other. It is almost creepy how perfect you two are for each other!
Haley- Thanks, now don’t change the subject! I am going to three way Joe, but you need to be quiet the whole entire time, he can’t know you are there.
Sarah- okay, I will be silent!
Haley three ways Joe
Haley- Hey Joe
Joe- Hey Haley, Nick is getting ready, and we ready to get ready to and there is only 1 bathroom, so he can’t talk.
Haley- um, okay, but I called to talk to you
Joe- about what?
Haley- Well, Sarah is a little wierded out that you haven’t asked her out, I think you may want to talk to her
Joe- But I see her like all the time, why would she say that?
Haley- I don’t know, you should talk to her
Joe- I will call her now, thanks for telling me, wait what should I say?
Sarah- Ask her out for a late snack, like ice-cream or something. Then say you want to walk around or something. I don’t know, go instead of going to the movie. That way after the show, she will have time to get ready, and I want to see what she is wearing
Joe- Okay, I will call her right now…………………………………………

Miley is Smiley
10-20-2007, 05:22 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gilmore1
10-20-2007, 09:17 PM
sarah i like ur new set

gilmore1
10-21-2007, 11:30 AM
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Chap
So, Joe is about to call Sarah. But he has hung up with Haley.
Haley- Okay Sarah, when he calls you, keep me on the line
Sarah- Okay, OMJ he is calling
In Sarah and Joe’s convo:
Joe- Hey sarah
Sarah- Yo Joe, oh my, that rhymes!! Well, haha, what’s up?
Joe- I was wondering if you wanted to go on a date tonight with me after the show cause Haley wants to see your outfit, maybe we could get ice cream
Sarah- Um Joe, you are kind of babbling and I would love to go on a date tonight. How about we meet at 11
Joe- Perfect meet me at my room, cause you will probably be with Haley
Sarah- See you then
Joe hangs up leaving Haley and Sarah
Haley and Sarah- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Haley- omg that was really loud. Okay so when you are ready come to my room. It is 7:45 and the show starts at 8, I better get going. The show should be over by nine, I think when I get back I will put some comfy clothes on and some boots, then I am going to take a nap. So I will leave the door open, so just come on in
Sarah- see you then, uh-oh, my mom is asking questions she heard me scream
Haley- see you
Haley went to check the rest of her messages:
Sean- Hey Haley, how is it going? I mean that is a stupid question, your mom is a lot better though, but Sam. Oh well we can talk later. If things don’t work out between you and Nick, I have a shoulder for you to lean on. Call me, well, c you later
Haley screamed, her mom was a lot better, Alicia was an airhead! And not only that, the cutest guy asked her out! Even though she had a perfect boyfriend, it was nice to think about. She was so happy now. No more messages, they could be to depressing. She decided to call Sean back and say thanks. But she got his voicemail.
Haley- Hey Sean, its me, Haley. Thanks for calling me, call me back and we can talk. C u later!! Or talk, whatever, bye!
Haley then went over and knocked on Nick’s door, hoping they were ready.

gilmore1
10-21-2007, 11:30 AM
COMMENT!

Miley is Smiley
10-21-2007, 11:53 AM
More and thanks I just made my set

gilmore1
10-21-2007, 12:13 PM
coolness!!

gilmore1
10-21-2007, 12:17 PM
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s284/Xo_Disney_Princess_oX/LOAC.jpg
Chap
Haley is at Nick’s door, she is about to knock.
Knock, Knock
Kevin Answers:
Kevin- Hey Haley
Haley- Hey, and are you guys ready, cause we kind of have to be down there like now.
Kevin- Aw man, we are running so late, come on in. We are almost ready
Haley- Okay
Haley walks in and sees a pig-sty.
Haley- Um, you guys know that Randi’s brother is staying the night in here
Joe- Uh, yeah we know
Haley- So what is up with the mess?
Nick walks out and sees the mess; he has a Year 3000 face
Nick- Oh my! Dudes! What is going on in here? I went into the bathroom, and I left the room clean! We have company coming later.
Joe- Here comes Mr. Clean
Kevin- Haley, he is over obsessive with keeping everything clean.
Haley- Well me to. You guys need to clean this up, I will help. Wait, no. You guys get ready while I clean this up. When you are ready, you can help.
Nick- I am ready, they were watching TV and they didn’t get ready.
Haley- Okay, oh and (she goes over and kisses him) hey
Nick- (kisses her back) hey to you too.
Haley- Let’s get cleaning, JOE, KEVIN- We are leaving in 10 minutes.
Haley and Nick get cleaning, Haley thought it was kind of disgusting, I mean, gross, guys clothes. This was definitely something she had never done for any of her boyfriends.
Haley- 2 more minutes!
Nick- You look really pretty, are those the earrings I got you?
Haley- you noticed!
Nick- of course I did silly
Haley- OKAY WE ARE LEAVING!
Joe- I am good, does my hair look okay?
Kevin- how do I look?
Haley- Like you left a mess in your room and watched TV while you were supposed to be getting ready, let’s go!
Joe- Yes bunny bee!
Haley- What?
Joe- I don’t know, you just look like a bunny bee
Haley- okay
They all walk down to the show to meet the rest of their family.

Miley is Smiley
10-21-2007, 12:21 PM
Bunny Bee!More

gilmore1
10-21-2007, 12:22 PM
oooook

gilmore1
10-21-2007, 12:23 PM
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Chap
Haley’s Dad- Hey sweetie
Haley- Hey guys!
Haley’s Stepmom- You look so pretty as always Haley
Haley- Thanks
Since they are already sitting down, they have to order their drinks and desserts. Once they did, the show started when Haley’s phone started buzzing. Good Thing she had put it on vibrate. It was a message from Sean:
Sean- Hey, what’s up?
Haley looked around to make sure no one was watching, Nick was, but who cares.
Haley- Nm, u? I am at a show on the cruise with Nick
Sean- Did you get my message?
Haley- Yah, thanks for telling me my mom is doing better.
Sean- Do you want to go out with me?
Haley looked over at Nick, he looked really tense, and he had his fists clenched.
Haley- No, I really, really like Nick. Maybe if you had asked me when I had liked you at school.
Sean- Yah, I know. I have always liked you, but I thought you liked Austin. He liked you and I couldn’t steal you from him.
Haley- FYI- I liked him 2! And if we aren’t going out I am not his girl.
Sean- You are right. Did you hear that Ryan and Chloe are going out?
Haley- No, I don’t really like Ryan, he is kind of a jerk and he looks like a monkey.
Sean- LOL
Haley- Well, I got to go, see you soon, say hi to peeps for me!
Sean- Will do, see you
Haley went back to watching the show. So she put her head on Nick’s shoulder and went to sleep.

Miley is Smiley
10-21-2007, 12:40 PM
More

gilmore1
10-21-2007, 12:56 PM
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Chap
Nick- Haley wake up, it is finally over.
Haley- Huh? Oh my, how long was I asleep for?
Nick- like 40 minutes. It is 9:00
Haley- Okay, let’s go up to the room.
Nick- Okay, but first we need to talk
Haley- okay
Nick- let’s go out to the deck, it is way too crowded in here.
They walk out to the deck.
Nick- Hey, what did that sean guy ask you?
Haley- Um, to be his girlfriend
Nick- What did you say
Haley- Um DUH! Of course I said no. I said I really really like you. I told him if he wanted me to be his gf, he should have asked me when I liked him.
Nick- okay
Haley- Nick, of course I said no.
Nick- I know! Why would you say yes? And I was just trying to freak you out.
They both start laughing.
Haley- Okay, let’s go back
They walk up to Haley’s room.
Haley- I think I am going to change into comfy clothes. Then I may watch some Gossip Girl and Ugly Betty. Maybe Desperate Housewives.
Nick- Okay, can I stay. Joe is freaking out about his date. He has 2 hours until she is here.
Haley- um, sure.
Then there was a knock on the door.


Who could it be?

Miley is Smiley
10-21-2007, 12:59 PM
More Haley!I gotta know!Don't leave me hangin

gilmore1
10-21-2007, 01:04 PM
okay, i guess i could post more now

gilmore1
10-21-2007, 01:05 PM
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s284/Xo_Disney_Princess_oX/LOAC.jpg

Chap
Haley- come on in
Sarah- It is me
Haley and Nicks jaws drop.
Haley- What are you wearing?
Sarah is wearing a full jean dress. Not fashionable at all.
Haley- What happened?
Sarah- My mom
Haley- Stop there!
Sarah- Can you help me?
Haley- Sure, let me change and we will fix you up
Nick- Should I go?
Haley- no, you will be our Joe, you can tell us what you think
Nick- okay
Haley turned on some Gossip Girl (for ideas) and she changed
Haley wore this:
sweatpants (in black) (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2944658/0~2378467~2378483~2381316?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=2381316&P=1)
tank (in white) (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2943037/0~2378467~2378483~2379455?mediumthumbnail=Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=2379455&P=1)
sweatshirt (in blue) (http://store.cstv.com/marketplace/store_contents.cfm?cart_id=08394548285677665661142 160720071910&store_id=117&partner_id=13968&dept_id=7644&product_id=109750)
Haley- So, Sarah what do you want to wear? Simple, Sexy, what?
Sarah- I am up for something Joe will never forget
Haley- Will do!
Haley started rummaging around in her closest and pulled out 5 different dresses.
Haley- Okay, we will try each one on and then decide.
Sarah tried on the first one:
1st dress (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2956293/0~2378467~2378483~2377032~6008190?mediumthumbnail= Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6008190&P=1)
Haley- Umm, it is okay. Not my favorite, at least on you. Nick, what do you think?
Nick- I am a guy! I don’t really know. I guess it looks not the best.
Sarah- I agree, let’s try on the next one.
2nd dress (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2952979/0~2378467~2378483~2377032~6008190?mediumthumbnail= Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6008190&P=1)
Haley- I really like that one. You look amazing.
Sarah- I like it too.
Haley- okay, this dress is going in the maybe pile. Let’s try on the rest.
3rd dress (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2953856/0~2378467~2378483~2377032~6008190?mediumthumbnail= Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6008190&P=1)
Sarah- I don’t like this one, it is way too short.
Haley- It fits me perfect, but since you are way taller than me it is short on you. Try on this one:
4th dress (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2958878/0~2378467~2378483~2377032~6008190?mediumthumbnail= Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6008190&P=1)
Haley- NO!
Sarah- Next
5th dress (in sapphire) (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2860036/0~2378467~2378483~2377032~6008190?mediumthumbnail= Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6008190&P=1)
Haley- It is either this one or the second. You choose. Nick what do you think?
Nick- I like them both
Sarah- The second one.
Haley- Okay, now let’s get you ready. Take that dress off and grab some sweats. I have to do ur makeup.
Sarah- Okay
Nick- That was really nice Haley.
Haley- Why thank you! Sarah I picked out some shoes for you.
shoes (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2944683?refsid=204639&refcat=0%7e2378467%7e2378483%7e2377032%7e6008190&SourceID=1&SlotID=1&origin=coordinating)
bracelet (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2953589/0~2378467~2378483~2377034~6007304?mediumthumbnail= Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6007304&P=1)
marc jacobs bag (http://shop.nordstrom.com/S/2941228/0~6006558~6006559~6007258~6007261?mediumthumbnail= Y&origin=category&searchtype=&pbo=6007261&P=1)
Haley did Sarah’s makeup and her hair. They chatted. Haley felt bad because Nick was kind of left out. But it was girl time.
Haley- Make sure you take care of my bag. I want it to stay white. I was one of the first to get it and I didn’t have to be on a waiting list. I got it before Dakota Fanning, she modeled the bag. So do not ruin the bag.
Sarah- Okay. I am off.
Haley- Have fun, you look really pretty. Text me whenever you can and tell me how it is going.
Sarah- Okay, I will be back here when we are done, cause I am sleeping over.
Haley- Got it sista!!!
Then Sarah went over to find Joe.

Miley is Smiley
10-21-2007, 01:14 PM
More!I need to know about our date!I look fabulous!

gilmore1
10-21-2007, 10:13 PM
u look very pretty!!!

gilmore1
10-22-2007, 01:04 AM
hey guys, i am startin to put all of the earlier chaps on the front, i am putting them in order, in case u want to go back or u get confused when u see the first pg!!!

Miley is Smiley
10-23-2007, 06:51 PM
okk

gilmore1
10-24-2007, 10:14 AM
lol

gilmore1
10-24-2007, 09:15 PM
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s284/Xo_Disney_Princess_oX/LOAC.jpg

Chap
Haley and Nick were sitting in Haley’s room. They were kind of bored.
Haley- Well, what do u want to do?
Nick- I don’t know, what do you want to do?
Haley- I don’t know what to do you want to do?
Nick- let’s do nothing!!
Haley- Well, okay. The movie starts in 20 minutes, as of now. I guess I should change, because you would be embarrassed to see me in these clothes
Nick- I would never be embarrassed to be seen with you
Haley- AWWW, thank you. Wait. I should call Randi. We need to find out what is up.
Nick- Okay, why don’t we just go down to their room and see them in person?
Haley- Alright, good idea. Let me grab my phone, and my key, and my wallet.
Haley grabbed her stuff and put it in her sweatshirt pocket. Then her and Nick walked on over to Randi’s room.
Randi- Hey Haley!
Haley- HEY!
Randi- Hey Nick, omg come on in you guys. Nick and Haley, I want you to meet my brother Taylor.
Nick- Sup, dude!
Taylor- Sup!
Haley- wow a full conversation in less than 5 words
Randi- What a moving conversation
Haley- so you 2 coming over 2night?
Taylor- Yeah, were going to the movie right?
Haley- Yes, I am so excited, because I get to see my favorite movie!
Randi- You are kidding right, it is like the most boring movie ever.
Nick- I am proud to say I haven’t.
Taylor- Same here
Haley- So are you two ready?
Randi- Yes we are
Haley- Let’s go
They all walk down to the movie theatre.



Sorry So short!!!! Next chapter will have lots of DRAMA!!!! and everyone knows i love a good cat-fight!

gilmore1
10-24-2007, 09:16 PM
okay, i have been watchin way 2much gossip girl

smileyface93
10-24-2007, 09:29 PM
more!! =]

gilmore1
10-24-2007, 09:38 PM
Hey guys, i changed one thing, the haley lives in malibu!! not orange county. only a couple more chapters until the sequel!!!

gilmore1
10-24-2007, 11:17 PM
comments?

gilmore1
10-24-2007, 11:23 PM
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(Sarah Joe POV)
So Joe and Sarah are just starting their date
Joe- Sarah, You look so pretty
Sarah- Thank you. But will you please tell me what we are going to do?
Joe- Nope, it is a secret.
Sarah- Well I guess I can wait.
So they walk over to the dessert buffet room. But it would usually be closed this late.
Sarah- What are we doing? It is closed
But when they get there, they see about ten workers. They are all dressed nicely. One person runs up to them and seats them.
Sarah- Oh my goodness, Joe!!! This is so cool. Did you do this for me?
Joe- oh course I did!
Sarah- This is so romantic
Joe- Thank You, you are beautiful, so I thought that you would like it
So Joe and Sarah chatted, they got a lot of dessert. Then they went to take a walk.
The Movie:
Nick, Haley, Randi, and Taylor were sitting in the theatre. They were all kind of talking. Waiting for the movie to start.
Haley- So Nick, what are we doing tomorrow?
Nick- Actually, since we are leaving early, we are shooting the music video tomorrow.
Haley- Seriously?
Nick- Yep!
Haley- Oh my!! I am so excited. What part am I?
Nick- Well, you and Sarah will have 2 parts. Kelly, only one. Randi, you can be in it too.
Haley- What am I doing?
Nick- Well, in the beginning, you will look totally different. You will wear a wig and a ton of heavy makeup. You will be kind of a jerk. You bring your friends on a date. Randi, you can be one of the friends.
Haley- Sweetness!
Randi- that is so cool!!!!
Haley- I am tired!!!
Nick- Me too.
Haley- Okay, don’t fall asleep.
Nick- You will!
Haley- I always fall asleep!
Nick- You know, tomorrow is our last full day on the ship
Haley- I know, I am sad.
Nick- Are we all set to go home?
Haley- Yes, my dad got the tickets all set. They changed their dates, so our families stay 5 extra days in Vancouver.
Nick- Whoa! We already stayed in Vancouver for 3 days before the cruise started.
Haley- Us 2! But we didn’t do much; all we did was stay at the hotel. It was raining outside. I really wanted to go to the aquarium.
Randi- Wait, you guys are leaving?
Nick- Yah, but where do you live? Maybe we could see you
Randi- I live in Canada.
Haley- Well, we could email.
Randi- Sure
Haley- You don’t have to be so rude. I mean, I am nice to you. I invite you to sleep over. You are in my boyfriend’s music video tomorrow. What is your problem?
Nick was a bit shocked Haley got mad at Randi. But Randi was being rude.
Randi- You are the one with the problem. And Nick, why would you date a girl like her? She is a brat. Nick, you are the only reason I am here. Now I am leaving.
Then she and Taylor left the theatre.
Haley- I guess she isn’t sleeping over.
Nick- Well that explains why she wanted to help me look for you last night.
Haley- What did I do to her?
Nick- Idk!
Back To Joe and Sarah’s Date
Sarah and Joe were walking around, they were just staring into each others eyes. Then Randi came up to them.
Randi- Hey guys!
Joe glares at her, but pretends he is not mad.
Joe- Oh not much, just out on a DATE!
Randi- Well, mind if I crash.
Joe- ummm….
Randi- Good. So tell me about Haley and you brother.
Joe- Well…………
Sarah- No Joe, don’t talk to her. Randi you need to leave. This is my date. Go find your own boyfriend. Oh wait, you cant, you are too self-centered.
Randi- You are so rude.
Then she runs off.
Joe- Good job.
Sarah- Thank you, now where were we?
Joe- I know…….
Then he leans in and kisses her.
Sarah- Ahhh!!! I just kissed Joe!!!!!! OMG!!!!!
Joe- What?
Sarah- Wait? Did I say that out loud? Oops, a little bit of a fan moment.
Joe and Sarah start laughing.
Sarah- What should we do now?
Joe- Hmmm. Well. We could crash Nick and Haley’s date. I guess they are alone now.
Sarah- Oh, let’s spy!!!
Joe- OOO, u bad girl!
So, they went over to spy on Haley and Nick.

gilmore1
10-24-2007, 11:32 PM
uh people comment!!!!

gilmore1
10-25-2007, 11:43 PM
Comment Gosh

Miley is Smiley
10-26-2007, 07:16 PM
Sorry I haven't commented.More!I ♥ Our date!
Me and Joe sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G lol!
MORE
Randi is rude!
A sequel cool!

gilmore1
10-26-2007, 09:10 PM
lol, i have to check my pms and i will post the rest

Miley is Smiley
10-26-2007, 09:11 PM
oooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkie dokie artichokie!!!!

gilmore1
10-26-2007, 09:28 PM
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Chap
So that night Joe and Sarah were spying on Nick and Haley. They saw Nick and Haley kiss a lot. Then Haley fell asleep. She woke up, and then Nick fell asleep. When the movie was over, everyone went to sleep. The next day was the music video shoot. The video didn’t start until 10:00 in the morning, but they all had to be in hair and makeup by 8:00.
Sarah, Haley, and Kelly were so happy. They had never done a music video before.
Haley- So Nick who else is in the video?
Nick- well, we put an announcement out for extras. So any girl on the ship can be an extra and I think we have one celebrity coming.
Haley- Who?
Nick- Have you seen Hannah Montana?
Haley- yes
Nick- Well, you know him as Rico.
Haley- Cool, that dude is funny.
Nick- He is late though. I told him the ship docks at 7:30 and he needs to be here at 8, it is 8:15.
Haley- Don’t worry!
Rico (I don’t remember his name, so we are going to call him Rico) - Yah Nick, don’t worry! Hey toots, I am Rico!
Haley- Excuse me?
They all laughed, then they started filming the video. You know how the video was, so I don’t really need to explain what it was.
The next chapter will be the next chapter in this Fan Fiction. Then my next fan fiction will be called “Love in Malibu.”



If I get 3 comments (idk if they are the same person, just 3 different posts) i will put up the last chapter.

gilmore1
10-26-2007, 09:33 PM
no comments? SARAH!!

Miley is Smiley
10-26-2007, 11:14 PM
MOREZ!His name is Moises.I have no idea how to spell it though.
Squel!

gilmore1
10-26-2007, 11:41 PM
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Chap
That night:
Nick- Hey that video turned out really nice!
Haley- Yah, you guys did a really good job.
Kevin- Thanks
Haley- I cannot believe that it is our last night.
Nick- I know. What time do we have to be at the airport tomorrow?
Haley- 11 in the morning.
Joe- We are really going to miss you guys.
Haley- I propose that we make this night a ton of fun. No drama, nothing. Just dance the night away.
Nick- Sounds fun.
Haley- let’s go!
They all raced to the night club. It was already 10 at night because the shoot went so late. Sarah and Kelly were with them.
They danced all night. Well at least until 12, then they went back to Haley’s room and watched Ugly Betty and Heroes until 3.
Haley- Time to go to bed. We have a big day tomorrow.
Nick- yah, are you packed?
Haley- Yes I am.
Nick- Me 2. See you in the morning.
Haley- Hey nick.
Nick- Yah?
Haley- Thank you.
Nick- your welcome.

gilmore1
10-26-2007, 11:42 PM
okay!!! l will see u in my new ff!

Miley is Smiley
10-26-2007, 11:46 PM
ok!!!I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!
Yay HAley is making a sequel! Yay yay yay yayayayayayayayayayayay
I'm HYPER!

gilmore1
10-27-2007, 11:18 AM
okay, i put up the sequel!