View Full Version : I'm actually in love with........................
MileyRox4
08-28-2007, 10:22 PM
I'm Actually In Love With.........
Chapter 1
Nick Jonas calls Hannah
Hannah:Hello
Nick:Dinner
Hannah:Yup
At dinner.............
She runs into Joe who also has a crush on her
P.s I'll finish l8r!
mileysbestpal164
08-28-2007, 10:28 PM
thats really good!
Emma27
08-28-2007, 10:29 PM
more! this sounds like a good story (But Joe is MINE! lol)
secretive_angel
08-30-2007, 01:31 AM
cool more
Gabriella Read
08-30-2007, 03:52 AM
more...more...
LotsaBigHearts
08-30-2007, 09:29 PM
nice start!!!
xoxdestinynightxox
09-14-2007, 01:09 PM
More we want more c'mon more plz more
gilmore1
09-14-2007, 09:05 PM
it is pretty good, nick is mine! i am haley, please read mine 2!!!! i cant wait for the rest of urs!
krrristin
09-14-2007, 09:06 PM
you might want to work on not skipping around so much
and adding more detail
but good story line
SmileyMiley11
09-14-2007, 09:57 PM
Nice Start! When are you gonna finish it?
new_york_girl
09-16-2007, 01:16 AM
good update
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