OLIVER... OKEN... MUST... DIE! {A Hannah Montana Fanfiction} [age 12+]

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Plot: Oliver Oken is the most popular boy in Seaview High School. He says hes not allowed to have a girlfriend, due to Basketball season, so he just hookes up with a lot of girls. you will see, ill start writing it tommorow. Is anyone intrested? Its off the movie "John Tucker Must Die" the greatest movie of all time! lol

[Miles Of Smiles Rock]

More! Pweaz :bluesad:

[megdolphinlover]

sounds kewlnesssssed

[hannahmontanarulz55]

thanks guys, im going to write it tommorow, cause my moms making me getting off as soon as i upload all my new brushes into my psp9

[tricia1228]

Sounds great! Start it!

[megdolphinlover]

ok kant wait!

[Best_Of_Both_Worlds]

Can't waaaaaaaait!!! :o:o:o:o

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Sounds great! Start it!

ok!

ok kant wait!

yup, im excited to. lol

sounds kewlnesssssed

thanks!

More! Pweaz :bluesad:

aww thats the cutest smiley ever! lol

Can't waaaaaaaait!!! :o:o:o:o

cool!

[EmilyJordanOsment]

:( PWEASE * Holds up 485345347593 Dollars *
- Ava

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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Made By Me!


Please remember...NOT FOR YOUNGER EYES!!!

Chapter 1: Meet Oliver Oken

Oliver Oken, captian of the football, basketball, and wrestling team, did'nt have girlfriends. He was to busy with the sports, so instead he just hooked up, and dated. He currently is dating 3 girls- Amber Adesen, Becca Weller, and Lilly Truscott. The thing, is, each girl hates each other, and they are from 3 differnt social groups, so none can figuare out that they are dating the same boy. Amber Adesen, the slut, she sleeps around with any and every boy. Becca Weller, the school's morning news anchor. And Lilly Truscott the captian of the cheering team. Oliver walks into Seaview High School.
"Oliver Oken! Your the man!!!" a passing guy said.
"Yo..Oliver!" Oliver and another guy high five.
"GREAT GAME LAST NIGHT!" Another yelled.
"Thanks." Said Oliver. "Now, if you excuse me, I got to go say hi to my gals..." He laughed and continued down the hall.
"Amber!" He went over and hugged her, and kissed her, then countiued to go down the hallway. "Becca...wonderful job as always-" he kissed her on the cheek, since she was working on a video project. Then Oliver saw his last girl. "Lilly!" She was in the middle of a cheer.
"Hey you."
"Hey." He kissed her, and went into home room.


4 comments for the next chapter please.

[123_abc]

omg oliver MUST DIE hehe..moreee

[inluv]

i was planning on doing something like this except Lilly weould be the girl that used him.the one the he REALLY fell for.anyway,keep writing!

[tricia1228]

More!!

[mileyfanforever101]

Moreee.

[hannahmontanarulz55]

omg oliver MUST DIE hehe..moreee

lol. yup!

i was planning on doing something like this except Lilly weould be the girl that used him.the one the he REALLY fell for.anyway,keep writing!

lol, thats funny, but yea, im a moliver lover. lol

More!!

ok, ill make a blend for chapter 2 then write!

Moreee.

ok!

[secretive_angel]

more

[XxarlimeXx12]

more its great

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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Made By Me!

Chapter 2: Meet Miley Stewart

"But dad!" complained Miley.
"I said no Miley, now don't argue, I'm getting ready for my date."
"Just skip her...UGH!" Miley rolled over on her bed. She has been moving everywhere, becuase her dad dates a girl, then they dump him, and we move. Miley Stewart is'nt a normal girl, she just happened to be the pop sensation "Hannah Montana", but by day shes the invisable Miley Stewart. Miley heard her father leaving with his new date.
"I'm going!" Miley yelled, and tore to her Hannah closet, which was behind her regular closet. She got on this (http://hannahmontana.net/gallery3/displayimage.php?album=109&pos=188)outfit. Miley walked over to the new resturant across the street, witch was having its Grand Opening tonight, and Hannah was invited to sing there.
"HANNAH!" said the manager. "Welcome!" He led her to a table, just as Oliver Oken and his first date, Lilly Tresscott walked into the door.
Miley sat down, and saw this guy. Oh gosh hes cute! thought Miley. Oh well.
****
After Hannah finished eating she looked up, but that boy was'nt with the same girl...it was a differnt on. Miley thought, player.
****
After singing a few songs, and getting ready to go home, before her dad caught her, that same boy, was yet on another date. He looked up and caughts Miley's eye, and winked.

5 comments for the next chapter please.

[v.a.h.fan]

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[hmfhannahmontanafan]

omg, this is really good!!!! more!!!!!!!!!!!!

[tricia1228]

More!!

[mileyfanforever101]

More!!!!

[friendsaddict4ever]

more more more more more more more!!!! this ish soo good and i luv the the blends u put at each chapter!! moreeeeeeeee

[hannahmontanarulz55]

more more more more more more more!!!! this ish soo good and i luv the the blends u put at each chapter!! moreeeeeeeee

thanks, and thanks so much! i also do blends for my other fan fiction "Hannah Enchanted"

More!!!!

ok

More!!

let me make a blend then i will!

omg, this is really good!!!! more!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks, ill make a blend now then ill write!
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[friendsaddict4ever]

[quote=hannahmontanarulz55;1312405]thanks, and thanks so much! i also do blends for my other fan fiction "Hannah Enchanted"
quote]
cool i'll go check it out!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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Made By Me!

Chapter 3: The Gym Class

It was Miley's first day at Seaveiw High School. She went into her chemisty class.
"Aw yes, our new student, please come here." The teacher called, and Miley walked up to the front of the class. "Class, this is Miley Stewart! Miley, you can go take a seat next to Rico Oken." she said. Miley moved over to the boy that the teacher pointed too.
"Hey babe, what's up?" he asked winking at her.
"Not intrested..." Miley said, mostly cause he looked like he was 12 years old.
******
Soon it was time for gym class, and unfortunatly the classes were combined to play volly ball. Miley noticed, at once, the 3 girls that guy was on a date with. Oh this can't be good, she thought.
"So why could'nt you come to my party?" Asked a girl named Sarah.
"Because," Becca said, and whispering, "I was on a date with Oliver Oken!"
"Really?" but then Becca was struck on the back by a volly ball.
"OWW!" cryed Becca.
"OLIVER'S MINE!" Said Lilly, who was the one who threw the volly ball.
"WHAT?" said Amber all of a sudden, getting up and joining the other two. "I'm dating Oliver Oken!"
"WHAT?" Becca started pulling Amber's hair. Then Lilly started pushing Becca, and soon a cat fight broke out.
"GIRLS!" cryied Miley. "GIRLS! UGH!" Miley went over to the gym teacher who was clearly not paying attention. She took the whisle, which was lying on the chair, and blew it. The three girls immidetly stoped.
"GIRLS, what are you getting mad at each other, Oliver Oken is the one who was lieing to you!!!!!"
At the end of the class, Becca, Amber, Lilly, and Miley got dentention. Miley did'nt know why she got dention though, she did'nt do anything, but the teacher, like I said, did'nt know who or who wasn't involeved, so they all go dentions.

5 comments for the next chapter please.

[AllisonTame]

:o more!!!

[mileyfanforever101]

MOREEEE.haha.

[tricia1228]

More!! I love your fan fics! I wish you would keep writing your old ones you never finshed

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

:o more!!!

ok, 1 more comment

MOREEEE.haha.

lol

More!! I love your fan fics! I wish you would keep writing your old ones you never finshed

aww thanks. yea i wish i did too, but its just to late now, but i promise ill finish this one and hannah enchanted!

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!

thanks, 1 more comment to continue

[XxarlimeXx12]

love it more

[tricia1228]

aww thanks. yea i wish i did too, but its just to late now, but i promise ill finish this one and hannah enchanted!


Yay! and write more!

[I_<3_Him_1020]

this is a really good one!!! but when i first read the title i was thinking "OH NO!!!! SHE IS NOT GOING TO KILL OF MY MAN!!!" lol. great job though. more!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

love it more

thanks, and ok

Yay! and write more!

ok, im making the blend now!

this is a really good one!!! but when i first read the title i was thinking "OH NO!!!! SHE IS NOT GOING TO KILL OF MY MAN!!!" lol. great job though. more!

aww thanks, and lol, and u mean MY man, oliver (well mitchel) is totally MY guy! lol, but thanks, im going to write more in a few :)

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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Made By Me! I know it lookes weird, please don't be mean!

Chapter 4: Detention

Miley could'nt believe her luck. First day at school, and she had detention, with a cheerleader, a super school-obessed girl, and a slut, she did'nt even do anything wrong! In detention, the girls kept fighting.
"Guys..." Miley said. "Don't get mad, get even..." The girls stopped what they were doing, and turned there attention to this girl.
"What's your name?" asked Amber.
"Miley...Miley Stewart..."
"Intresting." Said Becca, rolling her eyes.
"Look...this guy was cheating on all of you, and your beating the crap out of each other, when you should be trying to break down him." said Miley.
"Your right." said Lilly.
"We should humilate him!" Said Amber.
"Yea..but we are suppose to hate each other...remember." Lilly said while rolling her eyes.
"Yea but you guys can meet in secret!" said Miley.
"Great...Your house, tonight...we will come up with a plan, now where do you live?" Amber said.
"Oh, I don't know if thats a good idea...see my dad doe'snt like people over..." said Miley.
"Oh come on..." Said Becca. "Listen I'll bring my video camera. Now where do you live?" Miley wrote down her address for the 3 girls, and prayed her father was going out with Skip tonight.

******

Miley opened the door at 7 o'clock, and Skip was there, she shut the door, as her father came down the stairs. "I can't beleive your going out with Skip again..."
"Don't call her that, her name is Kate, and shes super nice...I'll be back later!" Robby Ray kissed his daughter and went out the door. An hour later, Becca, Lilly, and Amber arrived.
"Ok...lets go to your room." said Lilly, and Miley led the way to her room.
"Now what's the plan?" asked Amber, as Becca got a video camera out and started to record the conversation.

5 comments for the next chapter please.

[tricia1228]

More!!!

[Cheerleader111]

More!! More!! :)

[friendsaddict4ever]

1.more
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there that's five next chapter plz!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

More!!!

2 more comments plz

More!! More!! :)

thanks Lex for reading!!

1.more
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there that's five next chapter plz!!!

lol, thats funny, 2 more comments plz

[xoxo Babii xoxo]

MORE!






pwease...

[huskerrich]

lol, more, just realized I just watched this movie this weekend,

[hannahmontanarulz55]

MORE!






pwease...

lol ok

lol, more, just realized I just watched this movie this weekend,

thats funny, ok ill make a blend in a while then write the next chapter

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

more!!!!!!!!!!!

[Cheerleader111]

More silly! More! :P

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ok, i need to make a blend still, im sooo sry i didnt add more last night, i was watching john tucker must die on tv, i totally skipped some parts but oh well. lol

[secretive_angel]

o well more

[numba1puppyluva]

haha
AWESOMEE!
I saw the movie 'John Tucker Must Die'
it was pretty funny!
But at times innapropriate.. but at majority funny :P
lol

[XxarlimeXx12]

love it write more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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Made By Me!

NEXT SECTION SHOULD NOT BE READ IF YOU ARE UNDER 12 YEARS OLD!

Chapter 5: Don't Get Mad - Get Even

"Miley, nice room." Said the girls when they got upstairs.
"Thanks."
"Oh, Hannah Montana!" Lilly said, spotting a magazine, and rolling onto Miley's bed.
"Yea...I'm kinda a fan." Miley said, biting her lip, praying the girls would'nt go into her closet.
"Ok, so how are we going to get even?" asked Becca sitting on the bed looking at the magazine over Lilly's shoulders.
"Oh...I got an idea!!!" said Amber all of a sudden.
"What is it?" said the 3 all of a sudden.

*****

"Don't worry. This guy has been taking my picture since middle school, he is the best photographer mommy and daddy can by." Said Amber to Oliver, who had his shirt off and by some bushes.
"Are you sure about this?" said Oliver.
"Positive! You make such a hot model!" she said.
All of a sudden the photographer started taking pictures.
Amber went of a little and called the other 3. "Plan- Oliver Oken Must Die is a go!" she closed her phone.

*****

A few days later Oliver was on a date with a girl he just met. They went to the movies, and sat down.
"Oh look!" said the girl. "Is that you?" she pointed to the screen, where a photo of Oliver Oken was.
"Yea...I do some part time modeling." he said. Then the girl screamed, and Oliver looked at the screen.
"You have Herpeys!!" she yelled, cause on the screen it said he did. "EWWW!" she got up and ran.
"I don't have herpeys!!!" he said it a little to loud, and people started throwing popcorn at him. Up on the balconiy of the movie theater the 4 girls were watching.
"Oh yea!!!!" they said giving high fives.


4 comments for the next chapter please.

[Cheerleader111]

lol more! it's just like the movie!! :P

[XxarlimeXx12]

lol its so funny,more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

lol its so funny,more

lol, thanks, 2 more comments

lol more! it's just like the movie!! :P

yup! lol, its going to be differnt though, cause mileys not going to fall for the other oken (cause in this fanfiction, rico is the other oken, lol)

[numba1puppyluva]

lol
Im under twelve and I read it anyway =P
I saw the movie so, yeahh.
But I think you should make the fanfiction a little more different than the movie.
Throw in some new ideas ;)

[hannahmontanarulz55]

lol
Im under twelve and I read it anyway =P
I saw the movie so, yeahh.
But I think you should make the fanfiction a little more different than the movie.
Throw in some new ideas ;)

yea, its going to be differnt, highlight for spoilers of how it will be differnt: like hannah will have a concert (and they r going to be on a date at the same time :lol:,) um, miley will not be ending up falling for olivers brother, um other suprises too! lol but thanks hanna for reading!

[numba1puppyluva]

oh, okies.
I read the spoiler and I dont caree :P
lol

[tricia1228]

More!!

[Ashley Marie 1992]

Omg More!!!!!!!!!!!!

[v.a.h.fan]

More <33

[secretive_angel]

more

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ok i have gymnastics and work today, so ill write more when i get home :)

[sweet_smile]

more!!

[sweet_smile]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

[sweet_smile]

More++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++!!!!!! !!

[gmv45]

More!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

i love it!
If you need help with gfx i am more than happy to help!
:D

[hannahmontanarulz55]

more!!

ok!

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

kk

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

im writing right now!

More!!

ok

i love it!
If you need help with gfx i am more than happy to help!
:D

aww thanks! um thanks, but i <3 making graphix, so ill be ok, but thanks anyway!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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Made By Me!



Chapter 6: The Game

The next day at school, Oliver got an award for talking about his "herpeys."
"All we did was making him get an award!!!" said Becca.
"Yea.." said Miley.
"I know..." said Amber.
"I GOT IT!."
"What Lilly?"
"Look...why don't we make him...um girly...you know, cause he such a macho man and all.."
Grins appeared on all the girls faces.

*****

Before the basketball game, Lilly put Estragin (sp?) pills in Oliver's energy drink.
"Hey boo." she said when he came over to her.
"Hey."
"Good luck at the game tonight!" She kissed him on the cheek and ran away. Oliver drank his drank.

*****

At the game, the girls were in the stands, and Becca was recording the whole thing.
"Pass the ball!!" yelled Oliver's teammate.
"MOVE OUT OF THE WAY!" yelled Oliver to the oppenet.
"Whatever." Oliver passed the ball to his team mate, but the other team got it first.
"Look what you made me do-" as he ran into another play. "OW." he yelled from the floor. The coach ran onto the court.
"Are you able to play?" he asked as Oliver got up.
"No!"
"No?"
"Yes no, I hurt bad, I can't do this anymore!!!" he cryed and ran off to the locker room.
On the sidelines the 4 girls looked happy.


I'm going to make the next chapter now. Don't worry, next chapter it will start not being like the movie. :)

[secretive_angel]

cool more

[Loverya56]

so gotta watch this movie now
haha.its the best ever


i love,love,love your fan fic:)

[krrristin]

its like watching John Tucker Must Die all over again
LOVEEE IT

[HannahMontanaX3]

More More More!!! Gah Hyper !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

cool more

ok, im posting it now

so gotta watch this movie now
haha.its the best ever


i love,love,love your fan fic:)

you havnt seen this movie???? its the BEST!!! but thanks, just to warn u, then next parts are not the same as the movie :)

its like watching John Tucker Must Die all over again
LOVEEE IT

lol, yup! thanks!

More More More!!! Gah Hyper !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol, writing now :)

[sweet_smile]

MORE,i see u!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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Made By Me!




Chapter 7: Rico Oken

Miley walked into Chemisty class the next day, felling very happy at what happened at the game last night. There plan worked perfectly, no guys were talking to him. Rico, Oliver's younger brother sat next to Miley.
"Hey." He said.
"Hi." said Miley.
Rico noticed her notebook, it had a Hannah Montana picture on the front cover. "You like Hannah Montana?" he asked.
"Yea. She's my favorite singer." Miley said.
"She's about everyone's favorit singer." He said. Miley smiled. "So is that the only thing your into?" he asked.
"No, I like the classics, and rock music too." she laughed.
"Cool."
"So are do you have a lab partener?" she asked him.
"No. Want to work together, cause I'm about the smartest kid in the room."
"Sure, just one question...how old are you? Cause you don't look like you should be in the 11th grade."
"I'm 13...I skipped a few grades. So...how about getting to this assignment..." he started working.
Meanwhile out in the hallway, girls were going up to Oliver, saying they liked how he was manly enough to show his emotions on the court.
"UGH." Said Becca slamming her locker after witnessing this.

*****

3 class periods later, Oliver went up to each of his 3 girlfriends, seperatly, and told them:
"Listen, we had fun, and you know theres only one girl for me...but thats not you...were breaking up." And each of the 3 girls hit him, and walked away.

*****

Later at Miley's house, the 3 girls came in saying he broke up with them.


I'm really enjoying writing this, so I'm going to add another chapter now. I just can't wait for the Hannah Montana concert scene...opps gave that away, oh well. lol :D

[huskerrich]

i'm a little surpirsed that part went to Rico, but this is going to be good

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o fan freaking tastic!
i am wondering how hannah montana is going to fit in here,
sooo im freaking hooked!
There is sooooooo much possibility with this!
:D Cant wait to read more!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

i'm a little surpirsed that part went to Rico, but this is going to be good

yea, lol, but thanks, writing more now!

:o fan freaking tastic!
i am wondering how hannah montana is going to fit in here,
sooo im freaking hooked!
There is sooooooo much possibility with this!
:D Cant wait to read more!

ohhh yea! lol, thats my goal in life, but yea, i know how hannah montana's gonna fit in here, lol, so u r just going to have to wait! LOL

[numba1puppyluva]

I remember this part in the movie :P
I laughed to tears.
haha
MORE!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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Made By Me!

Chapter 8: You Guys Say What?

"I could'nt even enjoy the break up sex!" said Amber, sitting on her bed. "What?" she asked as the other 3 stared at her. "Oh my gosh, I'm such a slut-ow!" she said as she hit her head against the backboard of the bed.
"Now what are we going to do?" asked Miley. "We can't destory him, since he broke up with all of you..."
"Not all of us.." Becca pointed out.
"Huh?" Lilly said.
Becca turned in her seat and faced Miley. "He has'nt dumped you..." she said.
"No...He does'nt even know me..." Miley said. "Besides I don't even like him."
"Good." Said Lilly catching on. "Because you really won't be dating him...its perfect."
"Yea...you will be Oliver Oken's new girlfriend." Said Amber finially catchin on too.
"You guys say what???" said Miley. "I can't be his girlfriend, I don't know how--"
"Its fine--- its perfect! We will use all our powers, and influences to have Oliver Oken notice you. Starting with you being a cheerleader." said Lilly. "Oliver loves cheerleaders."
"But I hate cheerleaders---no offence."
"Well you won't really be a cheerleader. You will just pretend, or act." said Becca, while recording everything.
"I can't, you guys..." said Miley.
"Ok." Said Amber, packing up her stuff. "I guess we came to the wrong girl." As the other 2 started to leave.
"WAIT!" said Miley, thinking that she did'nt want to lose her new friends. "I'll do it!" she bit her lip.
"Ok great!" they said plopping back onto her bed.


Ok 3 comments to continue.

[numba1puppyluva]

haha
BUt i dont think the... uh... you-know-what
was in the movie :P
Stilll awesome!!
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[I_<3_Him_1020]

fantastic!!! great stuff. more please!

[tricia1228]

More!!

[Loverya56]

more,more,more:)

[secretive_angel]

more

[HannahMontanaX3]

more more more! Wait I think it should end miley falling for rico. it would be kinda cute you know. ANYWAY.... MORE

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

ok i think there has already been three comments
but..........
MORE!

[sweet_smile]

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[Ashley Marie 1992]

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

haha
BUt i dont think the... uh... you-know-what
was in the movie :P
Stilll awesome!!
MORE!

yea, i know, but i promise it will be differnt soon!

fantastic!!! great stuff. more please!

thanks

More!!

ok

more,more,more:)

lol, ok, ill make a blend then write

more

kk

more more more! Wait I think it should end miley falling for rico. it would be kinda cute you know. ANYWAY.... MORE

lol, i guess but i dont see them as a couple AT ALL! lol

ok i think there has already been three comments
but..........
MORE!

i know! i leave for a party and there is like 9 comments!!!

more+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++= =

ok

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok

[HannahMontanaX3]

lol, i guess but i dont see them as a couple AT ALL! lol


but then its unique-ish. and please check out my new fanfic, A Hannah Cinderella Story.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

heheh i voted in the poll...
mas!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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Made By Me!

Chapter 9: Miley The Cheerleader

The next day Lilly recruted her to the cheer squad. "Ok, as head cheerleader." she started, "I recurted Miley Stewart as Sarah's replacement."
"What?" Sarah said.
"Well you have that surgry a few months ago.."
"But the doctor said I'll be back in a week." she started.
"Better not risk it...mabye next year. Bye." she said. "Ok, Miley you can go on top."
"What? I don't think so...I stumble on the ground." Miley said.
"But Oliver likes the girls on top---of the pyramid! Ok...1,2,3 UP!" Miley started to climb to the top.
"I DID IT!" She said then Miley fell.
"Great, if you can crash Oliver like you did this stunt, you will be a ledgen." She said helping up her friend.
"Thanks."

*****

The two went into the hallway after pactice.
"Ok...walk with aditude." said Lilly. "Like this."
"Oh I can do that." Said Miley, and she walked like Lilly.
"Hey..." said Oliver comming up behind Lilly. "Whose the new cheerleader?"
"Oh...Miley?" just then Miley looked behind, then noticed Lilly was talking to Oliver. "Oh well she's new." said Lilly to Oliver.
"She's cute." he said.
"Oh please, you are way out of your league. She does'nt date highschool boys..." said Lilly before leaving.
"I'm going to get her." Said Oliver, mostly to himself.
"What did he say?" asked Miley to Lilly when she caught up.
"He said you were cute..." she shrugged. Miley was only called cute when she was Hannah...but yet she was also called hot by the teen boys, but never has Miley.
"Really...should I go talk to him? No...oh..." Lilly pulled Miley into the girls bathroom, where Becca and Amber were.


Ok 5 comments to continue. I'm REALLY sorry this isn't different then the movie. PM me ideas to make it different. Right now I have the big Hannah thing comming up soon, but if you have ANY ideas, please pm me...I'll credit :)

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

moreeeeeeeee!

[tricia1228]

More!

[HannahMontanaX3]

please post more. sorry no ideas. i just sneezed so I must've sneezed them out. but I think its good anyway

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

i feel like commenting again!
More!
<3

[hannahmontanarulz55]

moreeeeeeeee!

ok

More!

ok

please post more. sorry no ideas. i just sneezed so I must've sneezed them out. but I think its good anyway

lol, thanks funny, and its ok

i feel like commenting again!
More!
<3

aww thanks, ok ill write more soon!

[HannahMontanaX3]

ummm can this comment count as #5 I NEED more. otherwise I'll ummm DIE!!!!! Yes! DIE!!!!!!!!!! You dont want me to die do you? I mean seriously...

[LotsaBigHearts]

Awesome i just read the whole entire thing!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

thanks! 1 more comment

[I_<3_Him_1020]

i'm the next comment! hehe. this is getting very good! although, i don't think i could imagine Oliver in the show as a player. lol ;)

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

ooo, MORE!!!! :P

[hannahmontanarulz55]

i'm the next comment! hehe. this is getting very good! although, i don't think i could imagine Oliver in the show as a player. lol ;)

lol, i cant either, but idk, who else would i use? jake ryan? i dont like that guy. lol. so ill stick with oliver. lol

ooo, MORE!!!! :P

lol, ok

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o time for more?

[flower1]

Break-up...what? Uh...uh...*speechless* I am under 12 and i read this...:15:

[hannahmontanarulz55]

Break-up...what? Uh...uh...*speechless* I am under 12 and i read this...:15:


what? where did i say break-up? also u shouldnt read this if you r under 12, its kinda not for children



also im writing the next chapter now

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

whoo

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

what? where did i say break-up? also u shouldnt read this if you r under 12, its kinda not for children



also im writing the next chapter now

I think she meant the break-up _ _ _ ;) :P

[secretive_angel]

awesome more pleaz

[hannahmontanarulz55]

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/4066/oliverokenmustdiechaptebk4.png
Made By Me!
Chapter 10: Bathroom Talk

Lilly banged on the bathroom stalls to get Amber and Becca's attention.
"What?" said Becca, comming out of the stall confused.
"Miley tell them what Oliver thought about you."
"Oh...he said I was cute...not that means anything...its probably an insult or something...um."
"Stop!" said Amber. "Have you ever dated an Oliver Oken?"
"Have you ever dated anyone?" asked Becca.
"Oh sweet nibilts, I'm way over my head!" said Miley, and she started freaking out.
"Thats why you have us!" said Lilly. "Ok...just calm down."
"Right..." just then others came into the bathroom, and the 4 girls left.

*****

In the hallway, Oliver came up next to Miley. "Hey." he said. Miley countied in her head to 3...just like the girls told her too. "Ok-" he contiued. "I'm the basketball captain, your the new cheerleader...how about we go out this weekend..."
"I can't." said Miley.
"Are you busy?" he called after her.
"Yea, busy, sure..." and she walked off to class.

*****

At chemisty, Rico and Miley were working on an experment. Then all of sudden a boy came into the room with an autograph cd of Hannah's signiture.
"What?" said Miley, taking the cd. "How in the world-" But then she remembered. A few nights ago, 10 kids came in a line and got the cd signed at her concert. Oliver must have paid the geeks to give her the cds.
"Here." Said a second geek. Then 8 others came into the room. All of a sudden Oliver Oken came over the loud speaker.
"Miley Stewart. I heard you like Hannah Montana. Maybe we can go to a concert together. My number is-" all of a sudden girls got there pens out. "666-398-8436" Then he hung up.


Ok 5 comments to continue. Sorry it took forever! You know school! lol

[numba1puppyluva]

lol
'All of a sudden the girls got their pens out'
haha
MORE!

[HannahMontanaX3]

more I love that. yeah. "Then all the girls got there pens out" ha ha

[tricia1228]

More!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahaha that will be an interesting concert

more!

[Loverya56]

:)More

[hannahmontanarulz55]

lol
'All of a sudden the girls got their pens out'
haha
MORE!

lol, i know, well if u watch the back ground in the movie, during this scean, u see everyone getting out pens/pencils! lol

more I love that. yeah. "Then all the girls got there pens out" ha ha

yup read above, lol

More!!

ok

hahaha that will be an interesting concert

more!

lol, yup...hehe :lol:

:)More

ok, ill make the blend tonight, but may not write till tommorow

[Mileyrocksmysox]

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE OR ILL DIE!!!!!!!!!

[I_<3_Him_1020]

MORE! lol. i think the next time i get a chance i should watch this. i haven't seen it in a LOONNNNGGG time.

[Ashley Marie 1992]

More!!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

More!!!!

ok!

MORE! lol. i think the next time i get a change i should watch this. i haven't seen it in a LOONNNNGGG time.

lol, me either!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE OR ILL DIE!!!!!!!!!

ok im writing now

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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Made By Me!Chapter 11: Oliver Oken Must Die


"I can't belive him! I never got Hannah Montana signiture before!" complained Amber.
"Here." said Miley, passing over one of the cds. The 4 girls were currently talking in the video lab during their study hall.
"Oh give me one!" said Lilly, taking a copy without getting Miley's permission.
"Yea sure...you all can take them, I don't need them..." she said.
"Why?" said Becca, Lilly, and Amber said all at once.
"Because..." Miley took a deep breath. "We are friends..right?" she asked, and the 3 girls laughed.
"Of course..." said Amber, "just secretly..."
"Ok." said Miley again. "The reason why I don't need autographs, and I can't go to a Hannah Montana concert with Oliver is because...I am Hannah Montana..." she looked at her 3 friends.
The three started to laugh.
"No, really, I am Hannah Montana...look come to my house after school today, I'll show you..."
"Ok.." said Becca still craking up. "Now, to get to busness..." she said trying to calm down. "For my video project..." she took out her camera.
"Oliver Oken..." said Lilly. "There's only one guy for me, and its not you." she said with tons of attitued.
"Great!" said Becca.
"Oliver Oken...." said Amber "You going down!" she said snapping her fingers.
"Oliver Oken Must DIE!" said Becca, Amber, and Lilly together.
"Miley, you say something!" said Becca pointing the camera at her.
"I don't know..."
"Come on."
"Ok...um, Oliver Oken, theres only one guy for me, and its not you." she said with NO additude.
"Miley, calm on...this is for all girls that dated an Oliver Oken.
"Right...ok...Oliver Oken...there's only one guy for me....and you are NOT him..." she said and snapped her fingers.
"Dang girl...." said Amber.
"Oh we are SO going to bring him down!" said Becca turning back to the computer.


Ok 5 comments to continue.

[HannahMontanaX3]

OMG more

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o mas!

[tricia1228]

More!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

moremoremoremore!!! :P

[Loverya56]

More:)

[I_<3_Him_1020]

LOVE IT! more please!

[brodway999]

Awesome

[Mileyrocksmysox]

More More More More More More More More Plz Or Ill Litterly Die!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

OMG more

ok

:o mas!

u got it!

More!

ok

moremoremoremore!!! :P

lol, ok

More:)

kk

LOVE IT! more please!

aww thanks!

Awesome

thanks

More More More More More More More More Plz Or Ill Litterly Die!

lol, dont do that, cause then u cant read any more!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

whoo!

[sweet_smile]

more plz!!!!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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Made By Me!
Chapter 12: I Did'nt Get a Call


After the free period was over, Miley headed out the door. Becca was already at her locker, video came in hand.
"Miley!" said Oliver, running up to catch up with her. "Did you get the cds?" he asked her.
"Yea." said Miley not paying any attention to him.
"So you got my number? Cause I did'nt get a call..."
"Yea...well I did'nt have a pen." and she walked away.
"That was brillent!" said Becca after they were out of ear shoot of Oliver.
"Thanks."

*****

Later that night, the school was having a HUGE basketball game. Miley was cheering with Lilly and the rest of the cheerleading squad.
"Lilly, I think I blew it, Oliver has'nt talked to be since I turned him down!!!"
"Its fine...look-" Miley turned around, and Oliver was write there dribbiling the ball.
"So Miley, I got two tickets for the Hannah Montana concert tommorow...want to go?"
"Oken!!!" snapped the coach. "Get your head in the game!!!!!" All of a suddent this (http://youtube.com/watch?v=9TspDkbq9WM)song started to play in the background.
"Sorry coach, I'm venting my feelings.."
"THEN PASS THE BALL!" Oliver did just that, but the ball came back to him.
"So what about the concert?" he asked again. Miley looked at the buzzer, they were down by 2, 5 seconds to go.
"If it makes you shoot, ok!" Oliver smiled, turned around, and shoot. He made it, they won.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" screamed Miley along with the rest of the cheerleaders.
"Wait a second..." said Miley, stopping jumping. She pulled Lilly over. "I can't go to that concert...since I'll be singing at it!"



Ok 5 comments to continue.

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o MAS!

[I_<3_Him_1020]

*GASP!!!!!!!* lol. very nice!!! more!

[Mileyrocksmysox]

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Or Ill Scream

[tricia1228]

More!

[gmv45]

OMG! More please!!!!:)

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

:o five comments... you know what that means
:D

[hannahmontanarulz55]

:o five comments... you know what that means
:D

lol, ok im making the banner now! i REALLY hope u guys r going to like the next chapter, i had LOTS of fun writing it!

OMG! More please!!!!:)

comming right up!

More!

kk

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Or Ill Scream

ekk dont do that! lol

*GASP!!!!!!!* lol. very nice!!! more!

thanks

:o MAS!

kk

[HannahMontanaX3]

anticipating it.

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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made by me

Chapter 13: The Date, the Lie, and Lilly Montana???


Later that night, the 4 girls went to Miley's house, to prove she WAS Hannah Montana. They were shocked, but once the shock was over, Becca, Lilly, and Amber started trying on her outfits.
"This is WAY cool." Said Amber.
"Yea...but we have a problem," said Miley. "I'm suppose to go on a date with Oliver Oken tommorow, to a Hannah concert...I can't go on a date with him, I'm going to be SINGING!"
"Unless..." said Becca. "You were'nt singing..."
"Yea...but then there were'nt be any concert..." said Miley.
"No, no, listen guys. Ok, Miley, you said you wear a wig. Well what if another person goes upstage in your place, so you can be on the date with Oliver?" she said.
"Um...who would do that though.."
"Um one of us!" suggested Becca.
"Ok, but no offence Amber, you can't, cause you know..." she points to her skin. "And Becca your WAY taller then me... no offence...and Lilly." She turned to Lilly, who was the same hight as her. "LILLY!" said Miley.
"Oh no...."

************
The next day, Becca, Lilly, and Amber were helping Miley get ready. Miley was helping Lilly.
"Here, put this on." said Beeca to Miley. "I call it my boob cam. We can see everything you see."
"Oh come on, he's going to find that it like to seconds." said Amber putting the small camera on Miley's bra. Everyone glared at her. "Or not..."
"Miley are you sure this is going to work???"
"Positive. You look just like me. " she said as Lilly put the wig on. "And I already talking to the crew. They will have the cd version of the songs playing, so all you will have to do is lype sinch. Ok?"
"Yea..."
"We will be there too. Miley gave us backstage passes, so Lilly if you need help we will be there...plus if theres a problem, with Miley we can see." said Becca tapping a screen where the boob camera was signaled too.
"Ready?" said Amber.
"Ready." said the 3, just as the door bell rang.

************

"And heres Hannah Montana!!!!!!!" screamed the annoncer of the speaker.
Lilly as Hannah Montana came out onto stage. Miley just sat down with Oliver in the stands. Lilly came out, looking very nervous.
"Oh I hope shes gonna be ok..." whispered Miley.
"Huh?" said Oliver, leaning into her to hear better.
"Oh nothing!" she said over the crowd. "GO HANNAH!!!" she said so she would'nt blow her cover.
Oliver put his arm around her shoulder. "I'm glad you came tonight."
"Yea this is so much fun..." Miley said biting her lip.
After the concert was finished, Oliver said, "Wow, Hannah seemed a little off tonight...oh well, can I take you home?"
"Sure...but I got to go to the bathroom first..."
"Yea me too, meet you by the car." He got up and left.
Miley looked down at the camera. "HELP!!!!!"

Ok 5 comments to continue. If your wonder what the lie is: its that Miley is lying to the the world, cause shes not hannah right now, and some impersonator is...lol

[HannahMontanaX3]

more I love it.

[Xo_Disney_Princess_oX]

♥ it!

[mileyboo897]

HAHA.


I like that chappie.


MORE.


PLEASE.


PLease?

[hannahmontanarulz55]

more I love it.

thanks!!!

♥ it!

thanks so much!

HAHA.


I like that chappie.


MORE.


PLEASE.


PLease?

lol, 2 more comments

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

mas!

[tricia1228]

More!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

mooooooooooree!!!!!!!!!! :)

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

more?
:bluesad:

[hannahmontanarulz55]

kk, im just finishing up a video for you tube then ill write more!

[HannahMontanaX3]

Yah!!!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/3633/oliverokenmustdiechapteaw0.png
Made by Me


Chapter 14: HELP!!!!

"Oh crap!!!!" said Becca. She started leaving the backstage, pulling Lilly, who was still in Miley's wig along with her.
"We did'nt prepair her for this!!!!" said Amber.
"What's happening?" said Lilly trying to catch her breath.
"Oliver's bringing Miley HOME!"
"OH NO! That means theres GOING to be kissing involoved!" Just then fans started screaming.
"HANNAH!!!!!!!"
Lilly looked around, then remeber she was playing as Hannah right now. "OH CRAP!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"
"Meet us by the car!" yelled Becca, trying to scream above the fans voices.
"Come on...we have got to go find Miley!" Just then they saw her going towards Oliver's car.
"COME ON" Said Becca. Amber raced outside.
"Miley!" she called from the window.
"HELP!" she said.
"Ok..." Amber got into the car. "Just breath. Oliver's going to try to kiss you...are you a good kisser?"
"Um..."
"Oh my gosh...ok...has guys every told you you were a good kisser?"
"Oh my gosh, I'm such a bad kisser!" said Miley.
"No...ok...when he leans into you, give him a quick peck, but make him wanting more...CRAP!" Amber rolled in the backseat, just as Oliver was rounding the corner from the bathroom. Amber quickly hid herself from view.
"So...great concert? Right?" said Oliver while getting into the car and turning it on.
"Yea...I guess, If your into that kind of stuff." she said with additude.
"Ok....um...so what other kinds of music are you into?"
"All kind...."
"I think I have that..." he put his hand in the backseat, while keeping his eyes on the road, thank goodness it was nighttime. Amber moved out of the way, and indoing so, she saw some underwear lying on the floor. She quickly reconized it as hers, and she stuffed them in her pocket.
When they got to Miley's house, Amber signaled Miley to have Oliver get out of the car.
"Walk me to the door." she said, not asked, and she got out along with Oliver.
"Look..." said Oliver reaching the sidewalk, just as Amber was slipping out the back of the car. "I don't want to walk you to your door, cause then I'll be temped to kiss you, and I don't want to rush into anything, cause I really like you...so goodbye." He was about to turn to leave, when Miley saw Amber had gotton her skirt stuck in the door. "Wait." Miley grabbed his head, and was about to kiss him, but they knocked heads. "OW! Sorry..." Then she grabed his face, and went in for a light kiss. She looked back over, and Amber was gone, but just then the water started to go off. "AHH!" Oliver and her went up to the porch. Oliver laughed, and leaned in for another kiss. Just then Miley got a spark of electirity from her boob camera getting wet. "I- got-to -go.." she said in between sparks. She went into her house.
Back with the girls. Amber opened the car door. "He's not even my date, and he still gets me out of my skirt. What happened to you?" she said noticing Lilly.
"I can't understand how Miley handles those fans!" she said. Her clothes were like half torn off her, and her wig was alittle off.

4 comments to continue.

[HannahMontanaX3]

1. Please more.
2. I NEED more.
3. Otherwise I will DIE!! you dont want that.
4. give me an M, give me an O, give me a R, give me an E, what does that spell? MORE!!!

thats 4 so please post more

[Loverya56]

More8-)

[tricia1228]

More!

[gmv45]

More!Please!!:)

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

haha, more!!!!!!! :P
I love that "He's not even my date, and he still gets me out of my skirt." :lol: :lol:

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

moreeeeee

[hannahmontanarulz55]

1. Please more.
2. I NEED more.
3. Otherwise I will DIE!! you dont want that.
4. give me an M, give me an O, give me a R, give me an E, what does that spell? MORE!!!

thats 4 so please post more

lol, i will soon

More8-)

I will, I promise!

More!

kk

More!Please!!:)

dont worry, i will!

haha, more!!!!!!! :P
I love that "He's not even my date, and he still gets me out of my skirt." :lol: :lol:

lol, thats my fave part in the movie, so i just HAD to add it! lol

moreeeeee

lol, kk


NOTE: I HAVE WORK TODAY, THEN HOMEWORK, SO I CAN'T ADD ANYTHING TILL TONIGHT!!!!

[HannahMontanaX3]

cmon and post more

[MileyWorld__Girl_05]

http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/1097/oliverokenmustdiechaptefb7.png
Made By Me! I know it lookes weird, please don't be mean!

Chapter 4: Detention

Miley could'nt believe her luck. First day at school, and she had detention, with a cheerleader, a super school-obessed girl, and a slut, she did'nt even do anything wrong! In detention, the girls kept fighting.
"Guys..." Miley said. "Don't get mad, get even..." The girls stopped what they were doing, and turned there attention to this girl.
"What's your name?" asked Amber.
"Miley...Miley Stewart..."
"Intresting." Said Becca, rolling her eyes.
"Look...this guy was cheating on all of you, and your beating the crap out of each other, when you should be trying to break down him." said Miley.
"Your right." said Lilly.
"We should humilate him!" Said Amber.
"Yea..but we are suppose to hate each other...remember." Lilly said while rolling her eyes.
"Yea but you guys can meet in secret!" said Miley.
"Great...Your house, tonight...we will come up with a plan, now where do you live?" Amber said.
"Oh, I don't know if thats a good idea...see my dad doe'snt like people over..." said Miley.
"Oh come on..." Said Becca. "Listen I'll bring my video camera. Now where do you live?" Miley wrote down her address for the 3 girls, and prayed her father was going out with Skip tonight.

******

Miley opened the door at 7 o'clock, and Skip was there, she shut the door, as her father came down the stairs. "I can't beleive your going out with Skip again..."
"Don't call her that, her name is Kate, and shes super nice...I'll be back later!" Robby Ray kissed his daughter and went out the door. An hour later, Becca, Lilly, and Amber arrived.
"Ok...lets go to your room." said Lilly, and Miley led the way to her room.
"Now what's the plan?" asked Amber, as Becca got a video camera out and started to record the conversation.

5 comments for the next chapter please.



Ok, one thing you need to learn, Miley wouldn't not be allowed to say crap, ok, so you should edit that!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

cmon and post more

yup, sry im gonna post more today, i promiss, im making the blend now

Ok, one thing you need to learn, Miley wouldn't not be allowed to say crap, ok, so you should edit that!

plz dont tell me what i should do or shouldnt do, i warned that this fan fic was for 12+ if u dont like it, please dont read it. and i could have made her say a curse word, but then that would be bad, so i said crap, she says crap to probably

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

umm yah you really dont have the right to tell her what to put in her fan FICTION!

cant wait for more!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

^^^thanks very much!!

Im BRAIN DEAD!!! I FORGET WHAT HAPPENES NEXT, UGH!!!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

uhhh i dont know :P

[hannahmontanarulz55]

lol, i know, i forget what happens....hmmm maybe ill skip to there second date...

[cutiepie7897]

make more

[HannahMontanaX3]

me forgot too. srry. More

[MileyWorld__Girl_05]

Hey, watch your tongue. I'm 16!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

you missed the part about being FICTION! its not real....

cant wait for more =]

[HannahMontanaX3]

you missed the part about being FICTION! its not real....

cant wait for more =]

yesh Allie is right.

BTW me loves your sig Allie. House rocks.

[hannahmontanarulz55]

im sry for not writing, i have LOADS of school work, tonight, i promise ill write more!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

ok yay!

oh course house rocks!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

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Made by Me


Chapter 15: The Halloween Party

"Ok." said Becca. "Now that he has taking you out on one date, we should totally have him take you to another." The 4 girls were in Miley's room, descusing the last nights events.
"I know the perfect place, you can suggest it to him." said Lilly. "Well my family always has a Halloween Party, and its alway's the hit of the year."
"It is, even I tried to get in last year..." said Amber, which obvessly ment that it was a social event of the year.
"Yea, well this year I'll make sure you get in." said Lilly with a smile, remember last year she had the police excort Amber out of the party. "Ok...its perfect, it's next Friday. Here..." she pulled out an invite. "Say to Oliver..."

*****

"Oliver..." said Miley, saying exactly what Lilly told her to say. " I want to go to this Halloween party. Were going right?" she made a puppy dog face.
"Yea sure, anything for you..." then he noticed Lilly's name. "Oh...yea..." he put on a fake smile.
"Good!"

*****

"Maybe this was'nt such a good idea..." said Oliver peering into Lilly's house.
"Sure it is!" Lilly answered the door, and Miley and Oliver walked inside. Oliver was dressed as Zoro, and Miley as Hannah Montana, with the boob camera pinned on her shirt out of Olivers eye vision. Inside they danced, and talked, and laughed, and had a close eye on by Lilly, Becca, and Amber.
"Come on...let's get out of here..." said Oliver in Miley's ear, and he lead the way out the door.
"Where are they going?" said Becca shaking the monitor.
"I don't know...its dark though...I can't leave my own party though!" said Lilly.
"Ok, you stay here, Amber and I'll go and investigate." They got up and left, and followed Oliver and Miley. Oliver brought Miley to a helicopter, so he could show Miley the town from above.
"We can't get signal!" said Amber from the ground. "UGH!!!!"

6 comments to continue.

[~hannah~rocks]

More!
OMG I NEED TO RENT THAT MOVIE ON DVD! lol

[Loverya56]

More,More,More.:)

[~hannah~rocks]

more
more
more
more
more
more
there ya go, 6 "mores"

:P

[tricia1228]

More!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

More!

i will soon



more
more
more
more
more
more
there ya go, 6 "mores"


:P


lol, nice try!


More,More,More.:)

2 more comments!

More!
OMG I NEED TO RENT THAT MOVIE ON DVD! lol

lol, well they did'nt go on a helicopter, i just added that in, but yea its an awome movie!!!!

[Number1MileyFan]

ohmygossh. i just read the whole thing, i LOVE it! MORE! :D

[HannahMontanaX3]

please post more. PLEASE?

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

masssssssssss

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ohmygossh. i just read the whole thing, i LOVE it! MORE! :D

aww thanks, and i will!

please post more. PLEASE?

ok, im making a new set and stuff first, so i might now write till tommorow ;)

masssssssssss

kk

[~hannah~rocks]

There's been like 10 mores.
Pwease,can ya,pwease write more?
:bluesad:

[Mileyrocksmysox]

Mmore More More More More More More More More More More Or Illl Scaream And Then Scream And Then Come To Your Hoiuse And Scream Lol

[hannahmontanarulz55]

ill write more, im just doing other stuff right now!lol

[MileyWorld__Girl_05]

MORE! Gosh, can't you read?! Just kiddin' ya! Love it so far!

[hannahmontanarulz55]

thanks, i swear in the next 10 minutes it will be up, im writing it wright now

[hannahmontanarulz55]

http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/1849/oliverokenmustdiechaptefw1.png
Made by Me


Chapter 16: TEll US EVERYTHING!!!

Miley entered the room they were meeting at the school. "Oh my gosh!" said Becca as soon she walked in. "Where were you...we told you to be here at 8!" she looked at her watch, it was a minute pass. "Now tell us EVERYTHING!!!!
"Ok...theres nothing really to tell..." said Miley.
"Oh come on....you totally left my party, and the girls said you went on a HELICOPTER!" said Lilly.
"Oh yea...." said Miley..."Nothing happened though...we just talked."
"Talked?" said Amber. "You mean, you got intemit, without getting intermit?" she said cocking her head.
"Yea..." said Miley. "I mean he's really nice when you get to know him-"
"Girls!" said Beeca in a serious tone. "He's got you under his spell!!!! This is a dating intervention.....I'm going where no other girl dares to go....the boys LOCKER ROOM!!!!! There you will see what the boys are thinking....oh yea your going to they hotel tonight...right?" After the big game, the high schoolers stay at a hotel.
"Yup..." said Miley a frown kinda on her face.

*****

Becca is in a locker and the boys are just comming in now. Becca has her video camera.
"Oh come on...PLEASE tell me you tapped that girl by now!!!!" said one of Oliver's team mates.
"No... not yet, I don't want to rush anything, I really like her..." said Oliver.
"WHIP!!!" yelled one of the boys, and all the boys start whipping him with his towles.
"STOP!!" yelled Oliver, jumping onto one of the benches. "I said I haven't tapped that yet.... let's just said, tonight at the big game, I'll be shooting more then baskets!!!" and he hopped down from the bench, and started to dance, along with the rest of the boys, and started to change.
"Got ya..." said Becca, closing the camera.


6 comments to continue, I know that this is ALL from the movie, but my favorit line is in this, so I just HAD to add it! LOL

[tricia1228]

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pleaz read my fanfic its called boyfriend breakup

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[crazy_in_a_good_way]

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Chapter 17: I Can't Believe Him!!!

It was after the big game, and the Seaview Pirates won!!! Becca, Lilly, Amber, and Miley were in the hotel room.
"Ok. Miley. SIT!" Lilly pushed her into a seat infront of Becca's laptop computer.
"Now. Look what I have to show you." said Becca. She clicked play.

"I said I haven't tapped that yet.... let's just said, tonight at the big game, I'll be shooting more then baskets!!!" came Oliver's voice from the computer.

Miley looked discusted. "I can't believe him!!!! What's your plan girls!" she said.
Amber had a grin of evil on her face. "First go put these on...." she handed her a bag, and Miley went into the other room to change.
"Yes." said Becca high fiving the other girls.
After about 5 minutes, Miley came back out, wearing just a bra, underware, and a little cover up.
"Now, to toy with his mind..." said Amber. Miley got back onto the computer, and requested a chat with Oliver, who was a few rooms down.

At Oliver's his friend was on the computer, when Miley's video chat popped up. "Requesting chat with Mr. Oliver Oken." he read aloud. Oliver ran over, and told his friend to leave.
"Hey!" said Oliver when he accepted.
"He Ollie." said Miley. "I'm loney, and oh so cold...." she said pouting.
"Maybe I can come over and fix that." he said getting up.
"No wait! The teachers out in the hallway....maybe you can climb your way over here....like out on the balcony..."
"No way." said Oliver flatly.
"Oh ok..." said Miley. "And I got so dressed up- or dressed down-" she uncovered her shoulder, to show him the bra she was wearing. "But I guess I'll just go to bed.." she said coving her shoulder back up.
"No wait!" said Oliver. "I'll be there."
"Great!" said Miley perking back up again. "It's 3 rooms down, I already counted." Oliver was about to go, when Miley yelled "WAIT!"
"Yea?"
"I got you a present. Look under your bed..." said Miley trying not to laugh.
"Oh is this a little preview?" asked Oliver looking at the thong that was in the bag.
"No...I want YOU to wear them..."
"I don't think so..."
"Oh ok..." said Miley. "Then just don't bother comming, because-" she faked yawned, "I'm really tired...and I should get to bed...."
"No! Give me 5 minutes."
"Great!"

5 comments to contiue. And if anyone is grossed out, I'm sry, I did warn you guys though...

also I'm writing a new fanfiction. It's going to be called. "Bigger Than Us...But It's NOT Love." keep and eye out for it!

[tricia1228]

I am not grossed out lol write more! and I will go read your other fanfic

[hannahmontanarulz55]

I am not grossed out lol write more! and I will go read your other fanfic


ok, lol, and thanks so much! i made a trailer for it too (its on the same page as the fan fiction)

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PS Hope our team isnt disqualified ZB!!

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ok, 1 more comment, and thanks! i hope not either, lol

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[hannahmontanarulz55]

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[Loverya56]

lmao what happens next
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[tricia1228]

Yeah what happens next is so funny!

[gmv45]

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[mileycyrusfan1]

I'm 11. But still reading. Keep going!

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Chapter 18: Oliver's Mistake

Oliver started to clime out the window, with the thong on, with a towle around him. He scooted over to three places. "Ok...three." he said. Oliver opened up the screen door, but did'nt see Miley. " She must be in the bathroom. He dropped the towel and hopped on the bed. He made him self comfortable. After a few minutes the bathroom light shone brightly, after the door was open. Miley was'nt the one who came out though. It was the teacher.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" she screamed.
"AHHHHHHHHHH!" screamed Oliver, and he rolled over off the bed, trying to reach his towel.
"UGH!!!! COME HERE MISTER!!!!" she grabbed him bye the ear and led him outside. She walked next door, to the coaches door, and banged loud. By now students filled the hallway and started to take pictures of the almost nude Oliver Oken.
Miley was laughing from inside her room, along with the other girls.
"I think this belongs to you!!!!" said the teacher to the coach. And she let him go.
"Gross." muttered the coach, just as Miley came outside the room.
"I guess it was 4 rooms down..." she said in a sad voice.
"IN!" said the coach, and Oliver went into the room, and Miley started craking up loud again.

*****

The next Monday, Oliver was the laughing stock of the school.
"I have your butt as my wallpaper!" said one girl. Oliver put hit hood up. He walked into a wall and fell down. When he opened his eyes, Miley was standing over him.
"Hey..." she said, and helped him up. "You ok?" she said as he rubbed his head.
"Yea...I have to get to basket ball practice..." he said, and he lightly kissed her goodby, and went to practice.

5 comments to contiue.and thanks to everyone who read my new fanfiction!

[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahaha mas!

[hmfhannahmontanafan]

more!!!!!!!!! :)

[tricia1228]

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[crazy_in_a_good_way]

more please!

[xoxdestinynightxox]

More plz And this is the 5th comment so u can now post more yay

[sweet_smile]

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[hannahmontanarulz55]

Mas!!!!!

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Chapter 19: At a Hannah Concert

When Oliver went into basketball practice, he suprised everyone by still wearing the thong. But he proved how usefull they were on the court. Everyone laughed, but the next day all the guys were wearing them.
"Ug, I'll run him over with my car, if he did'nt make a body cast a fashion statment!" she Amber on her cell to Miley.
"Yea...well I can't think about that right now..."
"What?"
"Meet me in the equipment room." said Miley.
"KK." Amber hung up, and gathered the other two, then went to the eqipment room.
"What's up?" asked Becca.
"My dad... he's going crazy, he says I should be focosing on my singing, then destroying...." said Miley.
"Ugh!" said Amber.
"I know...I have a Hannah thing tonight..." Miley said.
"Yea the concert right?" asked Lilly.
"Yea."
"Man I can't go!" said Amber and Becca at the same time.
"I CAN!!!!" said Lilly. "Can I come?"
"Sure....but what about Oliver?" asked Miley.
"No worries, its ok...just focos on tonight." said Lilly. "then we can have a sleepover at Miley's!"
"Great idea! I can be over by nine." said Becca.
"Me too." said Amber.
"Ok, so Lilly see you at 5 for the concert, and see you two at 9..." said Miley, and they left.

*****

At the concert, Miley was dressed as Hannah Montana, and Lilly was dressed as a girl named Lola.
Miley sung this (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G7w7kHRn1CM)song.
"Wow that was great!" said Lilly when she got off stage.
"THANKS!" said Miley. "Uh-oh..." she said pointing to the door. Oliver was comming in. "What's he doing here?" asked Miley.
"I don't know...but he's comming over here!"
"Hi..." said Oliver to Hannah.
"Hi..." said Miley in return.
"Um....I'm a huge fan, and there's this girl..." he said, then he added on quickly, "my sister" trying to cover up he almost had a girlfriend, "whose a major fan of yours, and it would be awsome if you could sign this..." he handed her a picture of herself.
"Sister...huh?" asked Hannah. "What's her name?"
"Miley..." he said.
"Oh...unsual name..."
"Yea. so Hannah, my names Oliver...and I think you and I should go out sometime..." he took the picture back, and slid a piece of paper with his phone number in her hand. "Call me..." he winked at her, and turned to leave.
"I CAN'T BELIEVE HIM!!!!" she said. "He totally just flirted with me, and I'm going out with him!!! Ok that sounds weird..."
"Yea...come on, one more song, then sleepover time!" said Lilly pushing her back on stage.

*****

At Miley's house, Miley just told the girls what happened.
"He's a jerk!!!!"
"Yup." replied Miley. Just then they heard a car pulling up to the house.
"It's Oliver!!!" said Becca. "Ok, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1-" and she pointed at the phone. It rang. "It's like clock work.
"Hello?" asked Miley in the phone, trying not to laugh.
"Hey babe..." came Oliver's voice.
"Oh hey..." said Miley, then the girls waved her over to the window to watch the car from inside the house.
"So what are you doing?" he asked.
"Oh nothing...just watching tv....oh crap!" said Miley.
"What?"
"There's some perve in a red jeep checkin out the house..." and the girls started laughing.
"Oh really?" said Oliver's voice in a high pitch.
"Yea..."
"Do you want me to come check it out?"
"No...its ok, I think I'm going to call the police...bye!" and Miley hung up.
"OH CRAP**" yelled Oliver in his car, and he drove away, leaving the girls laughing ALOT.




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[YouKnowYouLoveMe]

hahahahaha massssssssssssssssssssss

[HannahMontanaX3]

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[tricia1228]

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[xoxdestinynightxox]

More yay i am the 4th u can post more now yay plz plz more

[crazy_in_a_good_way]

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[hannahmontanarulz55]

hahahahaha massssssssssssssssssssss

i will later, i have some much today today, plus its premier week on abc, all my fave shows r back on!!! yea!!!!

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[hmfhannahmontanafan]

more!!!!!! (as always :P)

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Chapter 20: Wanna Be My Girlfriend?

The next Monday, Oliver came up to Miley. "Look what I got you!" he said, pulling out the poster he had Hannah sign.
"Oh thanks..." said Miley, not taking the picture.
"What's wrong?" Oliver asked.
"Nothing..." Miley started to walk past Oliver, after starting to think he liked her, he goes and hits on Hannah.
"Wait!" said Oliver. He pulled onto Miley's hand. "Look...I really like you..." he took off his favorite watch. "Attention people!!!!" he yelled out.
"What are you doing?" asked Miley.
"I, Oliver Oken, want to be you, Miley Stewarts, boyfriend....there I said it..." he put the watch on her wrist. At this moment, Miley forgot about the Hannah thing, forgot about the revenge, and forgot about the many people watching them.
"Ekk!" she smiled, and went in for a kiss.

*****

"I can't believe it!!!!" said Becca. Miley took her hand away. The three were admiring the watch.
"Oh...we are so gonna crush him now!" said Lilly.
"Little Olie Oken won't know what hit him..." said Amber.
"Yea...guys...about that..." said Miley. "I don't think its such a good idea anymore...."
"What?" the three ask.
"Like I don't know..."
"You either with us..or against us..." said Becca crossing her arms.
"Yea..." said Lilly.
"And besides your not really dating him...remember..." said Amber.
"Yea...if it was'nt for us...Oliver would'nt even noticed you..." said Becca.
"Whatever..." Miley picked up her bag.
"And don't bother showing up for cheerpractice today!" said Lilly.
"Well that's ok, since I'm not really a real cheerleader..." and Miley walked out.



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