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Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 01:21 AM
Thanks For The Memories
The prequel [or threequel] to the hit Fan Fiction "The Day You Slipped Away".
Please Read The Day You Slipped Away (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=48570), and The Sequel I Will Learn To Love Again (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=48973) Before You Read This So Youll Get It. [Click For FFs]
WARNING: Violence and Action, and Other Inappropriate Stuff.
Theme Song (http://youtube.com/watch?v=xWHf_vYZzQ8)
Tyler moved back to Malibu, and him and Miley are going out, and she couldnt be happier. Oliver returns to the Earth as a ghost, and sees Miley with a new boyfriend and everything. He thinks Miley has forgotten all about him, and hes mad. Oliver wants Miley to be with him so theyll have great times again. The only way to do that is too exterminate, or murder, her. And nothing will get in his way of bringing them back together.
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 01:54 AM
OMG! Please more! I LOVE murder stories!
K-star7
07-12-2007, 01:59 AM
Please write more!!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 12:45 PM
Chapter 1: All Alone
Well here was Miley sitting on the couch all alone.
Lilly was going to Mexico with her parents, and Jackson and Robbie were on a fishing trip, so she had the house to herself and no friends. And for some reason at what reoccurred she had been getting goosebumps. It wasnt chilly, it was summertime, but she still felt it.
What she didnt know was there was a ghost in her house.
What she also didnt know...that ghost was Oliver.
LotsaBigHearts
07-12-2007, 12:51 PM
oh my gosh!!
that's so good so far!!
Best_Of_Both_Worlds
07-12-2007, 12:51 PM
mooooore =] youre gewd!!!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 12:56 PM
Did you read the first and second? LOL
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 01:04 PM
Chapter 2: Calling Tyler
Miley was totally bored at her house. She hadnt called Tyler in a week. So she decided to call Tyler. She dialed Tylers number and the phone rang and rang. Finally, Tyler picked up. "Hey Tyler, do you wanna go somewhere special tonight?" "Like where?" Tyler said smiling. "Like--" "Huh. I cant hear you. Your phone line is crackling." Tyler said. The phone seemed perfectly fine to her, and she could hear Tyler, and they werent very far away from each other. She tryed talking again, but he still couldnt hear. As she drank a glass of water, suddenly, some force pulled the cell phone off her ear and into the water. The cell phone sparked like a firecracker as Miley ran to the back of the piano like a cat. She was scared. She didnt know what was going on.
Best_Of_Both_Worlds
07-12-2007, 01:05 PM
Did you read the first and second? LOL
cheeees.
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 01:09 PM
I wrote the 2nd chapter up there =] you like?
Best_Of_Both_Worlds
07-12-2007, 01:11 PM
I wrote the 2nd chapter up there =] you like?
yuppers. =] dat'd be FREAKY.
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 01:16 PM
Write more!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 01:25 PM
Chapter 3: Scary
Now Miley felt scared. She didnt know what was going on. She felt like she wasnt safe in her own home anymore. So she ran out of her own home and slammed the door, but wherever she went, Oliver had followed.
xx.LATER.xx
Miley was at the beach and saw Tyler. Tyler waved at Miley and they kissed. Oliver soon got jealous of that and made Tyler trip and fall. "Oh man..." Tyler said. "Here lemme help you up" Miley said, reaching down and helping him up, as he brushed himself off and went back to surfboarding. She sat at Ricos and ordered "Chili cheese dog with extra cheese" she said smiling. The new guy Kevin, who worked at Ricos came and gave her the new order. "Thanks" Miley said. Kevin never said anything. But she felt like something was wrong. She got up and she backed away as she saw a message written on the top of Ricos...and it was meant for Miley, in bloody letters. And it read this:
We will soon be together up there.
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 01:25 PM
OMG Courtney. You've got to write more!
Ok, CREEPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Best_Of_Both_Worlds
07-12-2007, 01:27 PM
OMG that's scary!
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 01:28 PM
More
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 01:33 PM
Omg more plz!!!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 01:38 PM
Chapter 4: Hannah Concert
Miley was at her concert, and singing her song Make Some Noise.
"Sing, Hey! Hey Yeah!" Miley finally finished her song and the audience cheered for her "Thanks everyone!" Miley\Hannah said. Miley started to sing her hit song "Bigger Than Us"
"We all wanna believe in love, we all wanna believe in something...bigger than just us"
Miley had that feeling again. She got the goosebumps. The huge speakers started crackling. Miley ran offstage with her dancers and band. Then suddenly she tripped and her shoe got caught in the ground. She had managed to untie her heels and run backstage barefooted. The audience was getting riled up...some had left. Miley plugged her ears and the speakers blew up.The crowd ducked...
Miley knew this wasnt ordinary.
"Okay, Im not safe anywhere I go...I dont know whats happening"
She said, frightened. She had to go home though.
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 01:39 PM
wow, now I'm getting goosebumps.:O
EDIT: and...it's in the middle of summer!:o Just like the story!:o EEKK!!!!!! DON'T KILL ME OLIVER!!!(:P)
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 01:46 PM
Chapter 5: ...
Miley walked through the door, and put up her wig and everything. She sniffed something smoking. "Is dad back home?" Miley said, confused. "He wasnt supposed to be back for a week." She went upstairs and followed her senses. There was some dark smoke, and Miley felt dizzy. She couldnt handle herself, she was going weak, like shed been hit in her pressure point. She bent down and collapsed to the ground unconscious, and nobody was there to help her.
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 01:46 PM
more!
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 01:51 PM
OMG! Where's Jackson when you need him?! Write more plz!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 01:55 PM
Chapter 6: Waking Up
Miley fluttered her eyes open and woke up and found herself tied up in a chair. "Where am I?" she asked sleepily. She heard a voice in front of her. "Youre here" the thing said. Miley was confused and scared. "What? What are you talking about?" she said. "This is your friend, the person you love" "OLIVER?" Miley said. How could this happen? He was dead! She thought. "I can read your thoughts" Oliver thought. I better not think then she thought. "Im here to kill, I came back" "If you kill Tyler I swear I will..." Miley said, but got cut off by the ghost of Oliver. "Dont you want to be with me?" "Youre dead!" Miley yelled at him. "But if we're both dead, then we'll be together." "I dont want that!" Miley yelled at him, struggling out of her chair. "What do you mean?" "I mean no!" Miley yelled again. "I know you want us to be together, every night I think of you and I still love you" Oliver said. "Itll be unexpected, but one night we'll be together" then the ghost of Oliver vanished. Miley panicked...she didnt know what to do.
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 01:57 PM
More Creepyness!!!....that's what I love about it.
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 02:05 PM
Ahh! More!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 02:11 PM
Chapter 7: :O
Miley couldnt sleep. She had to get out of the house. But no matter where she went, he would still find her. She couldnt do anything about it. She was going to die soon. She started to cry. She didnt want to leave, she wanted to stay. But she couldnt do anything about it. She went to the kitchen, crying, and grabbed some cookie dough to eat. And under the cookie dough box...was a phone number for...Ghostbusters 2000? She decided to try to call. Maybe she did have a chance to live.
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 02:16 PM
more!!!!
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 02:18 PM
wow, now we went from modern story to old cartoon.:P Jk, keep going!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 02:24 PM
Chapter 8: Call Em In
Somebody knocked on the door.
"Thats must be the exterminators or whatever." she said as she opened the door. She gasped and looked at the person who are supposed to be people to save her life. "You two?" Miley said. The person opened his hand for cash "No money, no ghost go gone". Miley put some cash in the persons hand. "Isnt there supposed to be another person with you?" Miley said. "No...she went out on last minute" the person said.
"This is going to be...fun" Miley said
destiny hope cyrus fan
07-12-2007, 02:27 PM
Morez!Lol I had to catch up!
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 02:27 PM
Oh, this is interesting.:P Write more plz!
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-12-2007, 02:31 PM
more!
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 02:34 PM
Awesome! MORE!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 02:41 PM
Actually its just going to be 1 person :P
K-star7
07-12-2007, 02:45 PM
Please write more!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 02:47 PM
Chapter 9: With YOU?
[[Reread the last chapter. Theres only one person here]]
That one person...was Rico.
"Rico?" Miley asked. "Thats my name, dont wear it out" Rico said. "Whats the problem?" "Okay, well the ghost of Oliver is going to kill me" Miley said. "Oh...kay" Rico said. "Ill try the best I can...we need...someone...a vision seeing...person" "Am I here fast enough?" Raven Baxter said, walking through the door. "Hey Raven! I needed a replacement." Rico said. "Aha, Rico, ya know Im here for ya!" Raven said. "Mmkay, well I saw the situation, take a step back Miley" Raven said "Why --" Miley said, getting cut off "Just do it" said Raven. The piano rose up and flew right past Miley, and landed on the TV...and the electricity went out.
"Great!" Rico said...in the dark.
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-12-2007, 02:50 PM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 03:04 PM
more. I see you down there!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 03:14 PM
Chapter 10: AAAHH
Mileys face was pale. "Told ya" Raven said. Rico nodded. She couldnt see anything. It was pitch black everywhere for Miley. She smelled that smoke again. Oliver was here. He was ready. Pots and pans had flown up sparked everywhere. Everyone ducked. Raven, Rico, and Miley ran up the stairs. "This was what I was talking about!!!!" Miley yelled. "I know!!" Rico yelled. "Snap!" Raven said. "Do you always have to say that?" Miley said. As they ran up the stairs something grabbed Mileys foot and dragged her down the stairs. She screamed and Rico reached out his hand, and struggled to pull her up. He finally did and there was yelling everywhere. And it wasnt Raven, Rico, or Miley. They opened the door to Mileys room and slammed the door.
They took a deep breath.
Suddenly, a match in Mileys room flew up and took fire of itself. It lighted all over the room. Mileys room was on fire and she could barely see. Oliver was in the room too, she could sense it. Oliver had locked the door, they couldnt get out. They all screamed.
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 03:15 PM
more!
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-12-2007, 03:23 PM
omg!thats so mean!more!
OMGOSH i just read all the chapters, Oliver is being sooooooo sad
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 03:49 PM
Chapter 11: Get out
They all screamed. Raven had a vision and came back. "What did you see?" Rico asked impatiently. "Just out the window" Raven said back impatiently. They all jumped out the window and Mileys whole room caught on fire. "Im okay!" Raven said. Miley started randomly yelling at Oliver and the fire started running down the house. Rico yelled "Run!" and they all ran to the beach. The fire had finally stopped when Miley got a bucket of water and splashed it on the fire. Rico had a frightened look on his face. "This is going to be harder than I thought." he said.
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 03:52 PM
more please
whitesoxfan
07-12-2007, 03:59 PM
nore come on courtney u can do it and is it okay if i call you courtney christie becuase your like the next agatha christie lol and who murdered olivewr
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 04:01 PM
nore come on courtney u can do it and is it okay if i call you courtney christie becuase your like the next agatha christie lol and who murdered olivewr
Uhm...who the heck is Agatha Christie? :P
Yeah, you can call me that, I guess :P
Oliver died in a car wreck
whitesoxfan
07-12-2007, 04:04 PM
Uhm...who the heck is Agatha Christie? :P
Yeah, you can call me that, I guess :P
Oliver died in a car wreck
someone shot oliver's tire lol
agatha christie-she was a mystery writer know everywhere around the world she wrote plays and novels and she regretfully died in 1976
K-star7
07-12-2007, 04:08 PM
Please write more...
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 04:11 PM
Chapter 12: What?!
Miley, Rico, and Raven took deep breaths. Tyler walked up too Miley with another blonde girl. "Uhm...hey Miley." Tyler said. "Hey!" Miley said, smiling. "I was...thinking...umm" Tyler said...he was stumbling. "This is not good" Raven whispered to Rico as Rico nodded. "I was thinking we could just be friends" Tyler said. "To hook up with some other girl? Well I dont care. Break up with me!" Miley ran off and cried. Raven and Rico followed.
"Take me away Oliver. You win"
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 04:15 PM
Oooh, it's good!
I like it!
whitesoxfan
07-12-2007, 04:36 PM
uh oh
K-star7
07-12-2007, 04:41 PM
Please write more!! poor miley...
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 04:42 PM
:o OMG!!!:O Do more, or I'll die!:P
Best_Of_Both_Worlds
07-12-2007, 04:42 PM
Mooooooore =[
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 04:52 PM
Chapter 13: Dont Give Up Yet
Raven and Rico ran to sit by Miley, as Miley wiped tears from her eyes. "Hes a jerk" Raven said. "Youre tellin me" Rico said. "Just dont give up yet" Raven said. "Olivers right. Its way better up there" "But everyone will miss you down here" Rico said. "Like me and Rico" Raven said. "You mean something here. Everyone likes you" Raven said. "Just please dont give up" Raven said. Raven had another vision. "Shes having something" Rico said. "Get away from the water. Way back" Raven said. They backed away from the water to behind Mileys house. The wave rolled higher and higher and rose up and crashed half of Miley house, and the other was still standing.
Rico bent down and picked up a wet blonde wig that had washed away to his feet from the other side of the house.
"Whats this?" he asked.
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 04:54 PM
:oOH NO!!! THE HANNAH WIG!!!:O Now you have to keep going.:P
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 04:57 PM
Keep talking!
[Or typing, whatevr!]
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 04:58 PM
Keep talking!
[Or typing, whatevr!]
lol:lol:
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 05:06 PM
Chapter 14: Im...
"Uhm...nothing" Miley snatched the wig from Rico and hid it behind her back. "No...really...what is it?" Rico asked suspiciously. "Yeah..." Raven also said suspiciously. "Its nothing. I like...to...have wigs. I collect" Miley laughed fakely. Rico and Raven were still suspicious. "Are you sure? It looks like a Hannah Montana wig" Rico said. "Yes...it does." Raven said. "Is there something you havent been telling us, Miley?" Raven asked. "Yeah?" Rico said. "Okay. Fine" She squeezed all the water out of the wig and put it on.
"Im Hannah Montana. Im sorry I didnt tell you before"
They stood with thier mouths wide open.
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 05:13 PM
Nobody? :(
Best_Of_Both_Worlds
07-12-2007, 05:17 PM
WOW. :O mooooooore
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 05:21 PM
wow:O....MORE MORE MORE!!!:P
destiny hope cyrus fan
07-12-2007, 05:27 PM
Morez!!!! Sorry when I logged of you must have posted like 8 chapters lol.
whitesoxfan
07-12-2007, 05:28 PM
i'm thirsty for more more more
more moore more of the more more more more more more
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 05:33 PM
More! I Tell You Morre!
HannahMontanaX3
07-12-2007, 05:34 PM
MORE! very exiting. It calms me down. No seriously. Its cause i am working on the new Nancy Drew game and its giving me troubles. (and no I dont mean the movie one. I mean #15, Creature of Kapu Cave)
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 05:41 PM
Chapter 15: :(
Miley waved her hand in front of thier faces. "Hello?" she said. Then they went back to regular mode. They crossed there arms and turned their backs to Miley. "Come on...dont act this way" "You lied to us. I thought we were friends" Raven said. "I dont care about it anymore. Lets just go Raven" Rico said, about to walk off "Guys, wait!" Miley tried to walk after them "No, Im tired of waiting. Who knows if this thing is even real?" Rico said. He and Raven walked off.
Miley sighed.
Great she thought.
HannahMontanaX3
07-12-2007, 05:42 PM
more tear tear.
destiny hope cyrus fan
07-12-2007, 05:44 PM
Morez!
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 05:47 PM
I need more, Courtz!
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 05:48 PM
I love it SO much that it's in my sig!@
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 05:49 PM
OMG! :o
Thanks everyone so much for thier support! I see links to my FFs everywhere and Im so happy!
Thanks everyone :)
HannahMontanaX3
07-12-2007, 05:51 PM
Cant wait for more.
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 05:55 PM
Chapter 16: :o
Miley went inside half of her house and sighed. She had nobody. She had just lied to her new friends, everyone was gone. Miley heard a gun shot somewhere. She started to panic where it was coming from. She had looked around and saw it on the kitchen counter and screamed. The gun was aiming around everywhere, trying to shoot Miley. Miley ran with the bullets on her heels. She ran and ran on the highway, dodging cars and everything She couldnt do this anymore, she tripped and fell into a ditch...she could see some light...and what she could also see was a hand...reaching out for her.
HannahMontanaX3
07-12-2007, 05:57 PM
more. Ooo is it gods hand? Did rico and raven's leaving cause her to die?
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 06:01 PM
Write more!
whitesoxfan
07-12-2007, 06:02 PM
more
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 06:07 PM
Chapter 17: Came Back!
That hand...was Ricos.
"Rico...you came back!" Miley said happily. "Of course I did, I couldnt let some maniac ghost kill you" he said, smiling. Miley felt a knot in her stomach. NO! She couldnt like Rico. Well, he was only one year younger than her. NO! she reminded herself. "How did you know I was in trouble?" she asked. Raven walked up beside Rico "I had a vision" she said while smiling. "Thanks guys" Miley said. "We couldnt let some dumb Hannah fight come between us" Rico said. "Now get in the car" Raven said. "To avoid Oliver we have to drive" she said. "Im driving, Miley youre in the front seat, Rico, In the back" She said as they got in the car "What --?" he said. "In the back!" they both said. Rico rolled his eyes and obeyed them.
destiny hope cyrus fan
07-12-2007, 06:11 PM
Morez!!!
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 06:11 PM
More!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 06:20 PM
Chapter 18: Im Gonna Drive
Raven was driving as fast as she could, trying not to get into a car wreck. "Keep going!" Miley yelled. "Im TRYING!" Raven yelled. "Sorry" Miley said. Raven twisted and turned everywhere. Suddenly, they felt a bump. "Not...good" Raven said. Rico, Raven, and Miley slowly looked back and a bullet shot through the car and barely missed them. "Oh snap!" Raven drove faster and faster and they all screamed.
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 06:24 PM
AHHHH! *screams with them*
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 06:34 PM
Nobody else wants to comment? :(
LotsaBigHearts
07-12-2007, 06:51 PM
Did you read the first and second? LOL
yeah, i did..
Nobody else wants to comment? :(
i will, i haven't been on in about 3 hours.. sorry
Best_Of_Both_Worlds
07-12-2007, 06:53 PM
Mooooore
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 07:08 PM
more
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 07:38 PM
Plz continue, this is great. :D
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-12-2007, 07:39 PM
moreeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 07:42 PM
uh-oh, Courtney went off!!!
K-star7
07-12-2007, 07:45 PM
Please write more!! And what happened to Lilly?
Mileyrocksforever101
07-12-2007, 07:47 PM
ya, where'd Lilly go? I don't remeber her dying...
HannahMontanaX3
07-12-2007, 07:48 PM
AHH more
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 07:53 PM
Chapter 19: Running, swimming...whatever!
Raven kept driving and felt a chill around her feet. "Olivers in the car...get out!" Miley yelled. They all got out of the car and ran. They finally reached a gas station and ran inside the building. As they ran through the aisles, all of the products started to fall down to the ground like they were chasing them. Then they went through a dangerous aisle...the outdoor supplies aisle. Knives, hammers, and other tools rose up and started to chase Miley and everyone. Rico thought this was crazy. They all started to run and saw a bridge. "Ghosts cant be in water" Rico said. "Ahh man!" Raven said. "We have to jump in there?" she said. "Yeah, to save our lives" Rico said. "Okay" Miley said. They all held hands as they jumped into the water...then Rico forgot...
He cant swim.
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 07:54 PM
Lillys on a trip to Mexico with her parents [its in the first chapter ;)]
K-star7
07-12-2007, 07:56 PM
Oh...Right sorry...I forgot...Oh and please write more!
destiny hope cyrus fan
07-12-2007, 08:06 PM
More!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 08:16 PM
Chapter 20: Rico! Miley!
Raven and Miley rose up from the water. "Where Rico?" Miley asked, panicking. "He cant swim" Raven said with wide eyes. Quickly they both swam down to find him. They saw him unconscious and Raven picked him up, and brought him to the surface. Miley was still in the water. They tried to feel some pulse but couldnt feel anything. Raven and Miley yelled at him too wake up but he didnt. They started to cry. And Rico opened his eyes. "Why are you guys crying?" he asked, puzzled. "We thought you were dead!" Raven said, and hugged him. Miley was about to come on the surface too, when she felt a pull. She started to panic that she couldnt get too the surface. She started to call out Rico and Ravens name. And they came rushing...but they were too late. Miley had been pulled under the water. Raven told Rico to wait at the surface and Raven swam under the water where Miley had gone under, and couldnt find her anywhere. She swam underwater for a long time, and had looked underwater everywhere, and realized she had vanished. Raven came up and gasped for air. "Well?" Rico said worriedly. "I cant find her...shes not here" Raven said worriedly. They started to panic. "Oliver took her" Rico said. "He...took her" he said. They just stared at each other with blank and sad looks on thier. "We tried" Raven shrugged and said sadly. "No...we didnt try hard enough!! Now shes gone and we cant do anything about it!!" Rico said, about to cry. "Did you...like her?" Raven asked. "No!! Why would you think that?? Okay yeah!! She was only a year older!! And now I guess I cant like her because shes gone!!" Raven ran up too the surface. Him and Raven sat beside each other, suddenly she had a vision. "What is it?" Rico said. "Shes at the beach. Come on" Raven said, as he helped up Rico and they ran too the beach.
LotsaBigHearts
07-12-2007, 08:20 PM
oh holy cow!!
This is intense, write more!!
Best_Of_Both_Worlds
07-12-2007, 09:01 PM
MOOOOORe
HannahMontanaX3
07-12-2007, 09:01 PM
more please. Now. oh and check out my fanfiction too. link in my siggy.
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 09:02 PM
Chapter 21: At The Beach
Miley was laying on the beach unconscious. Raven and Rico ran up to Miley and shook her. She didnt seem to be moving at all. Rico and Raven looked at each other and screamed. They started yelling at Miley too wake up...and they randomly just yelled. Miley opened her eyes. "What happened?" Miley said. Rico and Raven hugged her. "Choking...not...breathing." Miley said. "Sorry" they mumbled. A loud crack of thundering and lightening struck, the winds started becoming fierce and it started to hail. "Hes mad. Olivers mad." "How do we stop him for him to not be mad?" Rico yelled. "No...the thing is that we dont stop...then he wont take it anymore and leave Earth" Miley said. Rico, Raven, and Miley ran into what was half of the Stewarts house and hid behind the kitchen counter. What an adventure Miley thought. A knife from the kitchen flew up and almost hit Miley. Miley screamed and ducked...but the knife was still going towards her. "Grab the knife and stab it into the floor" Rico yelled. "What?" Raven yelled like he was crazy. "Just do it!" Rico yelled fiercely. Raven reached out and grabbed the knife, and stabbed it into the ground, and just like in Harry Potter, blood started to strike out of it, even though it didnt hit anyone. The thunder and lightning cracked louder and the wind starting becoming faster and lighter. "What do we do now?" Rico asked. "I dont know!" Miley said. Raven had a vision...but she couldnt see it clearly. "I cant see the vision well! I dont know whats going on in it!!" Raven yelled. They all screamed and thought. "I got it!" Miley yelled. "This ones easy..." Miley said. Miley stamped her foot twice and yelled "STOP IT!" to Oliver. The thunder cracked so loudly it hurt thier ears, as well as the lightening. She had only one more thing to do so the ghost of Oliver would leave.
She grabbed Rico and kissed him.
HannahMontanaX3
07-12-2007, 09:04 PM
More
Best_Of_Both_Worlds
07-12-2007, 09:08 PM
MOOOOOOOOOOOOre =]
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-12-2007, 09:14 PM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
destiny hope cyrus fan
07-12-2007, 09:15 PM
Morez!!!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 09:37 PM
Chapter 22: The End
Rico stared at Miley like WTH? and Miley just shrugged with a sorry kind of look, and he smiled. The thunder and lightning cracked so loudly, Miley felt like she was going to go deaf...then it stopped. It became sunny, and everything was so bright and clean. Everything was fixed, the house was clean and everything was in place. Miley smiled and finally found the world was bright again. "Hes gone...forever" Miley said. She was still a little sad that he had gone, but she was also happy he was gone because he wasnt going to kill her. "Well, I dont know about you guys, but I gotta get back to college...one crazy week, I tell ya" Raven said, laughing. "See ya later guys. KIT" she said as she walked out the door, and into the car and drove away. Miley waved and looked back at Rico. "I should go..." Rico said, walking out the door. Before he left, Miley kissed him. "You know, you only are a year younger" Miley said. Rico smiled and walked away.
Just then, Lilly walked thought the door and Robby and Jacksons car pulled up. They all waved and said hey to Miley. Everyone hugged each other and talked all about the trips and everything. But the Oliver thing would always be Rico, Raven, and Mileys little secret.
xx.LATER.xx
In her bed, Miley wrote a letter to Oliver. Yes, it sounds crazy, but she did. Here was the message:
Hey Oliver. Its Miley.
I really dont know why you tried to kill me! I wanted to always be here on this Earth and I thought you wanted that for me! I mean, I still love you, but you dont have to murder me to be together, we always will be together ♥♥♥
LOVE, Miley.
Miley opened her window and threw the paper out to the sky, and it dissapeared. Miley smiled. "He'll get it soon" she said to herself.
xx. 19 YEARS LATER .xx
Miley was now 35 [[she was 16 earlier]] and she was having a phone conversation with Lilly, Raven, and Rico when a note suddenly plopped into her lap. "I gotta go everyone see ya!" she said as she hung up the phone. She opened the note and it read:
Hey Miley. Its Oliver
This may have gotten to you late due to heaven mail traffic. Its really crazy up here lol. Im sorry, I got a little carried away thinking your life was mine and I couldnt take control. Ill always love you no matter what and I shouldnt have done that, because it showed no love for you at all. I hope you have a great life for the rest of your...life. And know that Ill be waiting for you in the end. ♥♥♥
Love Love Love, Oliver.
Miley read the note and smiled. She slipped it into her pocket, got up from the couch she was sitting on, smiled and walked away.
THE END. =]
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 09:45 PM
Nothing? :(
xoxohuggablemiley
07-12-2007, 09:54 PM
Nothing? More like...
AMAZING!
It's great! Especially the end, 'Heaven mail traffic' that's a good one.
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 09:57 PM
Thanks Polly! :D Youre So Nice :)
Unfortunately, This Is The End Of This Series.
But watch Out For My Other FFs!
eizy12306
07-12-2007, 09:59 PM
its really good! :]
K-star7
07-12-2007, 10:16 PM
That's a really good story...
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-12-2007, 11:05 PM
Thank yas! :D
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-13-2007, 12:26 AM
its awesome.y end it now?
OMGOSH THATS SOOOOOO AWESOME
i cant wait for your other FFs, i aint been so intrested in FFs before
awesome job court
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-13-2007, 11:35 AM
Thanks
&& I have to end it now because I just cant think of anything else :P
123_abc
07-13-2007, 11:49 AM
WOAH...moreee and don't end it pleaseee
Ashley Marie 1992
07-13-2007, 11:56 AM
Courtney 1 word. BOOKAGE! This should totally be a book!!!!!!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-13-2007, 12:05 PM
WOAH...moreee and don't end it pleaseee
But I cant think of anything :34:
And I was thinking of writing another FF...it includes something really good :D
Courtney 1 word. BOOKAGE! This should totally be a book!!!!!!
Aww thank yew! :D
You guys have been so supportive! :D
Ashley Marie 1992
07-13-2007, 12:06 PM
:) no prob!! WRITE MORE STORIES TO THIS SERIES!! PLZ??
Best_Of_Both_Worlds
07-13-2007, 12:08 PM
COURTNEEEEY!!!!
that was AMAZERING!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-13-2007, 12:12 PM
Mmm Thank you
If you want a sneak peek of my new FF Im making pm me :D
Mileyrocksforever101
07-13-2007, 12:14 PM
*crowd of everyone in the world stands up and cheers as loud as Oliver's thunder* WOAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-13-2007, 12:15 PM
Thanks to everyone! :D
Ahaha Angie :P
LotsaBigHearts
07-13-2007, 12:25 PM
that was amazing good!!
and you finished in 2 days!!
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-13-2007, 12:26 PM
Thanks and yep :)
Mileyrocksforever101
07-13-2007, 12:41 PM
Wow, you should go down in the record book for fastest awesome fanfic ever writen!:PI wonder if they even have that record...lol:P
Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-13-2007, 12:42 PM
http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showthread.php?t=49192
New FF.
Mileyrocksforever101
07-13-2007, 12:50 PM
yayness!!!:D
megdolphinlover
07-13-2007, 07:57 PM
wow...i read all threee and nows u got me hooked on fanfics!!!this is the best fanfic ive ever read!
123_abc
07-13-2007, 08:04 PM
gah it took mee about 20 minutes to read all of the chapterss..=)
Zanessa Fan1
07-13-2007, 08:35 PM
Thanks Polly! :D Youre So Nice :)
Unfortunately, This Is The End Of This Series.
But watch Out For My Other FFs!
no!!!
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