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Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
07-11-2007, 01:07 AM
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Chapter 1: The news!
Miley's House
Robby Ray: 'Morning Bud!
Miley: 'Morning.
Jackson comes down the stairs.
Jackson: Hey dad-
Robby Ray: No.
Jackson: But you didn't even listen.
Robby Ray: You want money.
Jackson: Dangflabit!
Miley: Ohhh okay.
Robby Ray: Hey Miley I got some great Hannah news.
Miley: Please tell me that someone is giving Hannah more free clothes.
Robby Ray: Nope. Hannah's going on her first world tour.
Miley: *screams so loud that Jackson and Robby Ray have to cover their ears.*
Miley: No way!!! I so gotta tell Lilly. Bye!
Miley leaves.
Jackson: So dad...
Robby Ray: No money.
School
Miley: Lilly guess what!
Lilly: You decided you give me all your shoes!
Miley: No...why would I do that?
Lilly: It was a guess.
Miley: Whatever. Hannah Montana's going on her first world tour!
Lilly: OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!
Lilly: No way!
Miley: Way!
Oliver walks over.
Oliver: 'Sup?
Miley: Oliver guess whose going on their first world tour!
Oliver: Ne-Yo?
Miley: No you doughtnut! Hannah Montana!
Oliver: Seriously?
Miley: Yep.
Lilly: So we're coming too? Right?
Miley: I'll have to ask my dad.
Miley's House
The trio walks in.
Miley: Hey dad, um Lilly and Oliver are coming on the tour right.
Robby Ray: Well two people can come but one is Jackson.
Trio: What!
At least 5 comments for another chapter. Also this is my first fanfiction, so comments are great!
secretive_angel
07-11-2007, 01:14 AM
oooooooooooh more
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
07-11-2007, 04:36 AM
Well only 4 more comments.
Secretpopstar1
07-11-2007, 07:57 AM
more now!!!!!!
LotsaBigHearts
07-11-2007, 08:43 AM
awesome job!!
that's 3
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
07-11-2007, 01:33 PM
2 more.
m&jrule
07-11-2007, 01:40 PM
1 comment
2 comment
MORE
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-11-2007, 02:44 PM
here's a second comment:
more!
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
07-11-2007, 07:17 PM
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Chapter 2: Decision
Miley's House
Miley: What!
Lilly: I have an idea!
Oliver: Yeah.
Lilly: Take me!
Oliver: Yeah gre-Hey!
Lilly: So Miley who are you taking?
Miley: I need to think about it.
Oliver: Why?
Lilly: You don't understand because you don't think.
Oliver: Hey-Oh wait that's true.
Robby Ray: Miley, we need an answer.
Miley: Um...
Beach
Oliver sits and sighs.
Miley: Lilly, I think I might have made a mistake.
Lilly: Well, I don't.
Miley: You're saying that only because you're coming.
Lilly: Well, duh!
Miley: I wish there was some way Oliver could come too.
Radio Announcer: And you've just won the contest to meet Aly and Aj!
Miley: That's it!
Lilly: How is an Aly and Aj contest going to get Oliver on your tour?
Miley: An Aly and Aj contest isn't going to get Oliver on my tour, but a Hannah Montana concert will!
Lilly: Ohhh, now I get it!
Miley: Finally.
Miley: Now lets go talk to my dad come'on!
Grabs Lilly's hand and pulls her.
Lilly: Whoa!
Miley's House
Robby Ray: Great idea bud, but how is Oliver going to win?
Miley: Simple he'll use every phone he can get his hands on.
Robby Ray: You really think that's going to work.
Miley: It has to.
Lilly: And I wanted to be the only person on this tour.
Radio Station
Lola: Holy moly! This place is cool!
Hannah: Could you please act normal.
Lola: Whatevs.
Mark: Hi Hannah. I'm Mark Walhtin, the radio host.
Hannah: Hi.
Lola: 'Sup?
Mark: (points to Lola) Whose this?
Hannah: My friend Li-Lola.
Mark: Nice to meet you.
Lola: Ditto.
Mark: Well it's time to announce your contest.
Inside recording both
Mark: Hello Malibu! I'm here with Hannah Montana. Hannah would you like to tell Malibu why you're here on 65.8?
Hannah: I'm here telling ya'll that I'm having a contest for one luck caller to go on my first world tour!
Mark: Wow! Hannah can you do something for me?
Hannah: Yeah, I guess.
Mark: Pick a number.
Hannah: 14.
Mark: Okay, thanks. The lucky 14th caller will get to go on Hannah Montana's first world tour!
Hannah: I'm so excited!
Mark: The calls are pouring in!
Hannah: Do we have a winner?
Mark: Here is the winner. Hannah would you like to tell them?
Hannah: Sure...You are the lucky 14th caller.
Mark: Their name is...
5 comments!
LotsaBigHearts
07-11-2007, 07:21 PM
is it jake ryan??
jk, watching an episode he's in..
okay but is it oliver??
more!!
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-11-2007, 08:17 PM
plz be oliver!who is it?oliver?amber?ashley?jake?rico?becca?
i'm just randomly saying names
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
07-11-2007, 10:48 PM
Three more.
Secretpopstar1
07-12-2007, 07:24 AM
more~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 2 more~
smileymiley92
07-12-2007, 12:09 PM
more please!!
secretive_angel
07-12-2007, 12:29 PM
more
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
07-12-2007, 02:18 PM
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Inside Radio Booth
Mark: Amber Addison!
Hannah: Say what!
Hannah: I mean say what a surprise! (fake happiness)
Amber: Like OMG! I'm going with Hannah Montana!
Hannah: It's going to be a blast! (monotone.)
Amber: Don't you remember me from Singing with the Stars.
Hannah: Yep,yeah, sure do! (real fast.)
Mark: Well that's all the time we have for now. Bye Hannah. Bye Amber.
Hannah: Bye Mark...and...A...m...b...e...r.
Radio Station
Hannah: Sweet niblets!
Robby Ray: I'm guessing Oliver didn't win.
Hannah: Darn right he didn't. But you'll never guess you did.
Lola: Amber.
Hannah: How'd you know that?
Lola: I was listening.
Robby Ray: Why don't we go home to talk about this.
Miley's House
Robby Ray: You girls want anything?
Lilly: Pancakes!
Miley: A time machine.
Robby Ray: Pancakes I can do, time machine, only if they sell them close by.
Lilly: Hahaha!
Miley: How am I going to keep my secret from Amber?
Lilly: How are you going to sleep with your wig on?
Miley: That's the least of my problems.
Lilly: Well it's not like you can just dye your hair blonde.
Miley: OMG Lilly you're a genuis!
Lilly: How come our math doesn't see it.
Miley: Dad I need you to go-
Robby Ray: Are you sure you want to dye your hair blonde?
Miley: Yes.
Robby Ray: What if it doesn't come out by the end of the tour?
Miley: I'll wear a wig.
Oliver walks in.
Miley: 'Sup Oliver.
Oliver glares.
5 more comments.
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-12-2007, 02:36 PM
moreeeeee!!!!!!
Zac'sbabygirl
07-12-2007, 02:49 PM
more
secretive_angel
07-12-2007, 02:51 PM
more
graym01
07-20-2007, 12:47 AM
um Xo Disney Princess oX this is suppose to be nicole fairway's story thing
nicki1118
07-20-2007, 08:15 PM
Moreeeee Pleeez
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
07-20-2007, 11:53 PM
um Xo Disney Princess oX this is suppose to be nicole fairway's story thing
Who?
xoxo Babii xoxo
07-20-2007, 11:59 PM
more!
rock.star93
07-20-2007, 11:59 PM
More!
K-star7
07-21-2007, 12:13 AM
Please Write More!
cute_princess1114
07-21-2007, 12:29 AM
more!!!!!!!!
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
07-21-2007, 01:40 PM
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Miley's House
Oliver: You didn't tell me when the contest started, so when I turn on the radio they had annuonced Amber as the winner.
Miley: I didn't tell you what time the contest was?
Oliver: No.
Lilly: No wonder he didn't win.
Miley: Lilly not helping. Oliver I wish it was you who won. Now I'm stuck with Amber. (shivers)
Lilly: And so am I. Thanks a lot Oliver!
(Outside): Oliver get in this car!
Robby Ray: Your dad's callin' ya.
Oliver: Actually that's my mom.
Robby Ray:...
Oliver: Coming! See you guys later I guess.
Oliver leaves.
Miley: Hey dad did you get the dye?
Robby Ray: Yeah, are you going use it?
Miley: Yup! Tonight! With Lilly!
Miley and Lilly leave.
Robby Ray: This is not going to turn out good.
Miley's Room later that night
Miley: Finally! We just have to rinse it out and I'll be blonde!
Lilly: Like me!
Miley: Okay let me go wash it out.
Miley's Bathroom
Miley Screams
Lilly runs in
Lilly: What's wro-Oh my gosh!
5 more comments!
rock.star93
07-21-2007, 02:39 PM
1.MORE
2.I LOVE IT..
3. its rocks
4. more more more
5. this is such a great story.
there are your 5 more comments! more please
LotsaBigHearts
07-21-2007, 10:12 PM
this is awesome, i forgot about it!!
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
07-21-2007, 10:22 PM
1.MORE
2.I LOVE IT..
3. its rocks
4. more more more
5. this is such a great story.
there are your 5 more comments! more please
New rule! 1 comment per person! :D I'll write more in a minute. I need to think about the next chapter.
LotsaBigHearts
07-21-2007, 10:23 PM
say her hair was perfect, lol.
can't wait!!
secretive_angel
07-21-2007, 10:28 PM
more
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
07-21-2007, 11:16 PM
More! Omg What an Awesome fanfic!
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
07-22-2007, 12:33 AM
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Miley's Bathroom
Neither girl could speak. They were both looking at Miley's bright orange hair.
Miley: What did I do wrong?
Grabs box.
Miley: Sweet Niblets! I left it in an hour when I was only suppose to leave it in 30 minutes! (Screechs)
Lilly: Ow! Well now you have to wear the wig.
Miley: (points to Lilly) This is all your fault! You told me 30 minutes!
Lilly: Well I was reading a mag.
Miley: You better run or else!
Lilly: (runs) Mr Stewart your daughthers going to kill meeee!
Miley's Living Room
Lilly runs in
Robby Ray: Lilly whats the mat-.
Miley runs in.
Robby Ray: That hair stands out more than Uncle Earls red and yellow plaid shirt that he wore to the wedding.
Miley: And it's all Lilly's fault!
Robby Ray: (looks at Lilly) Lilly?
Lilly: I kinda told her the wrong time to leave it in. (weak smile)
Jackson walks in.
Jackson: And I thought Nina gave me bad hair days.
Miley: Jackson are you a lifeguard?
Jackson: Huh? No.
Miley: Then why are you all wet?
Jackson: I'm n-.
Miley pours water all over him.
Lilly: Haha!
Miley: (holds the water pitcher) You wanna be next?
Lilly: No thank you.
Robby Ray: Why don't you girls get some sleep? We're leaving in the morning.
Miley and Lilly: 'kay.
5 more comments. (1 per person.) Also I made the wet joke but it's origniality is by Lisi Harrison (author of the clique series.)
K-star7
07-22-2007, 12:58 AM
Please write more
smileyface93
07-22-2007, 01:16 AM
MORE!!!! plz
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
07-22-2007, 07:06 PM
More!! Omg I love this fan fic!
xxmileyluverxx1234xx
07-22-2007, 07:48 PM
More!!!
nicki1118
07-24-2007, 08:39 PM
MOre MOre I love it
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
07-24-2007, 08:44 PM
More!!
cute_princess1114
07-25-2007, 12:44 AM
more!!!!!!
LotsaBigHearts
07-25-2007, 08:04 AM
great job!!
xXxTinkerxXxBellxXx
07-25-2007, 05:43 PM
More!
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
08-14-2007, 12:19 AM
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I'm so sorry I haven been writing! I wrote this real long chapter and when I was posting it, my computer shut itself down. Well this isn't as long nor as good but I hope you like!
Airport
Hannah was dressed as a normal person, but with sunglasses and a hat.
Hannah: Where is she!
Lola: Making sure she looks perfect.
Robby Ray: She better be here soon or we are leaving her.
Hannah: I hope she doesn't make it.
Amber walked into sight.
Amber: HANNAH!
Hannah ran over.
Hannah: (whispers) I don't want anyone to know it's me, so ssshhh!
Amber: Okay, sorry.
Amber points to Lola.
Amber: Whose this?
Lola: Lola is my name and being Hannah's bff is my game.
Amber: Well you just lost, 'cause I'm Hannah's bff.
Hannah: Actually you're just a contest winner.
Lola: BAM!
"Flight 754, Los Angeles to New York is now boarding."
Robby Ray: That's us! Let's go!
Little girl walks up.
Little girl: Are you Hannah Montana?
Hannah: Yes.
Little girl: Can I have you're autograph?
Hannah: Sure (scribbes)
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Hannah: (to Little Girl) Bye! (to everyone else) Let's go!
Boarding
Amber: So Hannah, you're sitting with me...right!
Hannah: Actually-
Lola: She's sitting with me. She promised. And Hannah never breaks her promises.
Hannah: She's got me there, but I'll ride with you the next flight.
Amber: Whatever.
Secretpopstar1
08-14-2007, 06:09 PM
more! Its good!
gilmore1
08-15-2007, 06:10 PM
i totally love it!
hannah xo montana xo freak
08-25-2007, 10:50 PM
this is good
tricia1228
08-28-2007, 05:46 PM
More!
danadog75
08-28-2007, 10:57 PM
omg MORE!
sourcandyrules
08-28-2007, 11:09 PM
More! This is really good.
huskerrich
08-29-2007, 07:32 PM
not bad, but the odds of oliver being the caller, more of course
xoxdestinynightxox
09-13-2007, 12:23 PM
MORE MORE PLZ MORE
gilmore1
09-13-2007, 11:31 PM
more, but i think this might be an old ff i think she stoped wrting it
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