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MileyRox1174
07-10-2007, 07:11 PM
.Love, Loss, and Forgiveness.
< My Fan Fiction >

Although The First Few Chapters Aren't, The Rest Of This FanFiction May Be Disturbing To Some.
If You Get Scared/Disturbed Easily, I Strongly Advise You Don't Read This FanFiction. But If You Really Want To, Feel Free To.
Psst -- This FanFiction Is Not Relating To Miley/Hannah or The HM Cast Until A Few Chapters In.

<< [WARNING: Includes Violence, Near-Death Situations, And Some Unexpected--Sometimes Inappropriate--Events.] >>



> Hannah [Not Montana] May Soon Be Famous, But That Doesn't Mean Life Stops There. <




< TABLE OF CONTENTS >
Main/Introduction. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1118370&postcount=1)
Chapters. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1118376&postcount=2)

MileyRox1174
07-10-2007, 07:12 PM
Chapters.
Chapter 1. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1118392&postcount=3)
Chapter 2. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1118569&postcount=10)
Chapter 3. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1118738&postcount=16)
Chapter 4. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1120306&postcount=24)
Chapter 5. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1130148&postcount=36)
Chapter 6. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1131267&postcount=46)
Chapter 7. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1133073&postcount=53)
Chapter 8. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1133239&postcount=59)
Chapter 9. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1133269&postcount=66)
Chapter 10. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1133296&postcount=74)
Chapter 11. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1133663&postcount=86)
Chapter 12. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1133879&postcount=95)
Chapter 13. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1134609&postcount=102)
Chapter 14. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1134609&postcount=102)
Chapter 15. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1137719&postcount=107)
Chapter 16. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1141463&postcount=117)
Chapter 17. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1151939&postcount=128)
Chapter 18. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1152194&postcount=137)
Chapter 19. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1155078&postcount=143)
Chapter 20. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1155451&postcount=151)
Chapter 21. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1161908&postcount=158)
Chapter 22. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1161908&postcount=158)
Chapter 23. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1161908&postcount=158)
Chapter 24. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1165446&postcount=167)
Chapter 25. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1165446&postcount=167)
Chapter 26. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1167925&postcount=174)
Chapter 27. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1167925&postcount=174)
Chapter 28. (http://www.mymostwanted.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1173972&postcount=186)

MileyRox1174
07-10-2007, 07:13 PM
Chapter 1

“Are you serious?! We’re moving to LA?! I got a part on the show Hannah Montana?!” Hannah screamed.
“Yes to all the questions. Now please, start packing. We’re leaving in 3 days.” Hannah’s mother answered.
Hannah ran upstairs and went on AIM [AOL Instant Messenger]. She rapidly typed a message to all her friends, saying:

OMG guess what?! I got a part on HM!!! We’re moving 2 LA Monday.

Let’s have one last GNO [girl’s night out] be4 I leave. Call me! Bye!

Then she signed off, and closed her laptop for a few minutes. Hannah ran over to her closet and started throwing things into her suitcase. She wanted to have her last GNO on Sunday, so she needed to be ready.
Hannah yawned. As she lied down and got ready to go to sleep, she suddenly remembered that Nick was on AIM. Hannah grabbed her laptop and signed on.
Nick was Hannah’s best guy friend. He had dirty blonde hair that went down to his eyes and flipped up, and he had a smile that warmed hearts. But most of all, he was always there for Hannah. That’s why they were best friends.

xohannahxo: Hey Nick! Sorry I’m late!
surferdude1234: Hey Hannah! Y r u late?
xohannahxo: Cause I had to pack. I’m moving!
surferdude1234: *dies*
xohannahxo: Lol, come on.
surferdude1234: *wakes up* ur moving?! y?!
xohannahxo: Cause I got a part on HM!! We r moving 2 LA Monday!
surferdude1234: What?! NO!!!
xohannahxo: Lol, YES.
surferdude1234: no no no no no no no no no no no no no no (…)!!!!!!!
xohannahxo: I know, I’m upset 2. But then again, not really.
surferdude1234: Y Monday?! That’s 2 early!
xohannahxo: well…wait, what do u mean by “2 early”? Is there something you wanted 2 say 2 me? If so, say it now.
surferdude1234 has entered a message.
surferdude1234 is typing.
xohannahxo: So? Anything u need 2 say 2 me?
surferdude1234 has signed off.


Like it? 4 comments = next chapter!

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-10-2007, 07:19 PM
Morez!

LotsaBigHearts
07-10-2007, 07:19 PM
omg awesome, more!!

MileyRox1174
07-10-2007, 07:21 PM
Thanks! 2 more comments = next chapter! :D

just_like_you_92
07-10-2007, 07:23 PM
oooh i love it! can't wait for more
♥♥♥

MileyRox1174
07-10-2007, 07:27 PM
Thanks! 1 more comment = next chapter ;)

vanessa*anne
07-10-2007, 07:32 PM
Its great

MileyRox1174
07-10-2007, 07:36 PM
Thanks! Here is the next chapter:

Chapter 2


Hm, that was weird, Hannah thought.
She signed off of AIM, and turned her laptop off. Hannah lied silently on her bed.
What was wrong with Nick? Was it something I said? Oh well, I guess I just have to let it go, Hannah thought.
But something wasn’t right. The air, bed, room—everything—was strangely cold. Not evil-cold, just…cold. Everything seemed to be saddened—in one way or another—by the news of moving. But what could be done? Nothing. Yet.


Sorry it's so short. 4 comments = next chapter [but I'm not posting it until tomorrow probably].

just_like_you_92
07-10-2007, 07:48 PM
ooooh i love it
♥♥♥

huskerrich
07-10-2007, 07:49 PM
interesting, i'll be curious when you write more

MileyRox1174
07-10-2007, 07:51 PM
Thanks, and thanks!

2 more comments = next chapter :D

LotsaBigHearts
07-10-2007, 07:54 PM
awesome, yeah curious people!!

PursePrincess4eva
07-10-2007, 07:59 PM
More!

MileyRox1174
07-10-2007, 08:15 PM
Thanks! Here is the next chapter:

Chapter 3


http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w156/Star_Struck1174/Signs/For%20FF/Love%20Loss%20and%20Forgiveness/To-DoListforFF.jpg


Hannah stared at the list. It was already Sunday afternoon. She had 3 things she needed to do today, and only 5½ hours to get them done. So Hannah got to work on managing her to-do list.
“Alright, I have only 5½ hours to get 3 things done. So I figure I’ll have 2½ hours to pack, ½ hour to say my goodbyes, and 2½ hours to have my last GNO. Man, am I going to miss Florida. Well, better get to work!” Hannah stated.
Hannah started packing, and 2½ hours later, she was finished. Then she rand to every house on her street to say goodbye. Along the way, she must have been given at least 7 going-away gifts. So as Hannah prepared to go to Nick’s house, she dropped everything off at her house.
Hannah slowly approached Nick’s house. She rang the doorbell.
Nick’s mother answered the door. “Why hello, Hannah! Um…I’m afraid Nick doesn’t want to see anyone right now.” She turns around and looks up at the top of the stairwell, where Nick is standing.
“Oh…alright. Can you just tell him I said ‘goodbye’?” Hannah asked.
“Sure.” Nick’s mother replied.
She closed to door and Hannah started to walk away slowly. She stopped, and turned to look at Nick’s house once more. But then she saw Nick in the window, with an upset expression. Hannah swallowed her tears as she turned around and walked home.


Now it's 6 comments = next chapter [but I'm posting it tomorrow] ;)

LotsaBigHearts
07-10-2007, 08:20 PM
cool to-do list font!! What is it??

okay, comment 1.. more, awesome job!

MileyRox1174
07-10-2007, 08:32 PM
^Thanks, it's called "Ashley" ;) [without the quotes]

Lol, thanks! Only 5 more comments = next chapter ;)

PursePrincess4eva
07-10-2007, 08:38 PM
Awesome!

hannahmontana_luver0320
07-10-2007, 08:44 PM
that is great

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-10-2007, 09:42 PM
Nyce, morez!

secretive_angel
07-10-2007, 10:13 PM
cool more

MileyRox1174
07-10-2007, 10:35 PM
1 more comment = next chapter :D

BUT I'm not posting it until tomorrow no matter what, so yeah :P

MileyRox1174
07-11-2007, 08:38 AM
Alright, fine. I'll post it. Here is the next chapter:

Chapter 4


http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w156/Star_Struck1174/Signs/For%20FF/Love%20Loss%20and%20Forgiveness/To-DoListforFFcopy.jpg

The last thing for that night was her very last GNO in Florida. So Hannah got ready to go and her mom picked up all her friends and dropped them and Hannah off at the mall.
The night rolled on, until it was finally time to go. Hannah called her mom to come pick them up. She soon arrived, and escorted Hannah’s friends to their houses. Then Hannah and her mom made the long trip back home.
So that was it. It all ended with solemn and tired “goodbyes” and some cool new stuff. In just a few hours, all of that will fade, and become just another day when Hannah was a non-famous person.


Sorry it was so short. 6 comments = next chapter. [i'm going to post it this afternoon, since I'll be gone all morning.]

LotsaBigHearts
07-11-2007, 08:48 AM
oh, more more!!

just_like_you_92
07-11-2007, 01:56 PM
i love it
♥♥♥

MileyRox1174
07-11-2007, 06:54 PM
4 more comments = next chapter!

Thanks guys :D

PursePrincess4eva
07-11-2007, 07:02 PM
Mores!

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-11-2007, 07:12 PM
moreeeee!!!!!!

MileyRox1174
07-11-2007, 07:49 PM
2 more comments = next chapter :D

Thanks!

megdolphinlover
07-12-2007, 01:21 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! PAWEEZ!!! i think kick likes hannah and wants to tell her...thats just a hunch tho

MileyRox1174
07-12-2007, 01:36 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! PAWEEZ!!! i think kick likes hannah and wants to tell her...thats just a hunch tho



Haha, good guess ;) Maybe ;)

1 more comment = next chapter!

m&jrule
07-12-2007, 04:16 PM
1 more comment=new chapter now
lol

tricia1228
07-12-2007, 05:05 PM
More!

megdolphinlover
07-12-2007, 07:42 PM
we gots 5 comments....= NEW CHAPTER!

MileyRox1174
07-13-2007, 02:32 PM
Okay, okay, sheesh :P Here is the next chapter:


Chapter 5


Hannah awoke the next morning, happy as ever. She was bright and bubbly, for today she was moving to Hollywood to star in the #1 tween TV show, Hannah Montana! But behind that smile was a bit of sadness. Why? Nick. But she had no time to talk to him now.
“Mom, when are we leaving?”
“In a ½ hour, Hannah. You have time. Don’t worry.” Hannah’s mother answered.
“I’m not worried, it’s just that…well, what is I don’t fit in? What if none of them like me? What is I can’t memorize my lines? What if I’m too young? What if I’m too tall? What if-“
Hannah’s mother put her hand over Hannah’s mouth. “None of that will happen if you think positive. Now, eat your pancakes.”
Hannah gulped her pancakes down and looked at the clock.
Only 10 more minutes?! I need to start getting ready! Hannah thought.
So she grabbed her things, and slipped her flip flops on. Ten minutes passed, and soon Hannah and the rest of her family were on their way to Hollywood—well, to the airport and then to Hollywood.



Sorry it was so short. 6 comments = next chapter :D

PursePrincess4eva
07-13-2007, 02:54 PM
Heres you six comments.

1.It was awesome!
2.I like the last part.
3.Coolio.
4.Write some more.
5.Almost time to write the next chapter.
6.Heres your 6 comments. ;)

MileyRox1174
07-13-2007, 03:11 PM
Heres you six comments.

1.It was awesome!
2.I like the last part.
3.Coolio.
4.Write some more.
5.Almost time to write the next chapter.
6.Heres your 6 comments. ;)



Haha that gave me a good laugh. But sorry, that only counts for 1 comment, since it's one post [PLEASE DON'T POST MULTIPLE TIMES IN A ROW THOUGH]. Thanks though :D

5 more comments = next chapter!

Oh snap, I have to finish it :P

m&jrule
07-13-2007, 03:25 PM
moreeee!

MileyRox1174
07-13-2007, 05:11 PM
4 comments = next chapter!

tricia1228
07-13-2007, 05:13 PM
More!

megdolphinlover
07-13-2007, 07:00 PM
MOR EMORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!! i order more!!!!

just_like_you_92
07-13-2007, 07:02 PM
omg. psot the next chapter
♥♥♥

123_abc
07-13-2007, 07:06 PM
puh-lease writee moree

flower1
07-13-2007, 07:22 PM
more

MileyRox1174
07-13-2007, 07:29 PM
Okay, here is the next chapter:


Chapter 6


Hannah stared out the car window, watching all the places she knew fade into the gas coming out the back of the car.
A tear slowly rolled down Hannah’s cheek. She quickly rubbed it off her face so no one could see. Hannah wanted to be famous, but…something still didn’t feel right. It was –
“We’re here!” Hannah’s mother interrupts.
“Okay. Let’s go!” Hannah says.
“Everybody get out and grab a suitcase.” Hannah’s mother added.
“Okay. Let’s go.”
“Hannah, dear, come on. Let’s get moving!”
“Okay. Let’s go.”
“Hannah Banana!” screamed Hannah’s younger brother, Jason.
“Huh? Oh, sorry. I’m just…overwhelmed.”
So they got out of the car, checked in, and found seats at their gate. Their gate number was 13.
A long time after they sat down, it was time to board the plane. As they did, Hannah tried to shake off the thought of their gate number.
The flight commenced shortly after. About an hour after that, a strange, scary man walked past Hannah’s seat and glared at her.
He was tall, and very muscular. He had dark brown, messy hair, and walked with a slight limp on his left side.
Hannah wasn’t too scared until he sat down in the seat across from her.
He must’ve been sitting there and I hadn’t noticed, Hannah thought.
But then she looked to the right and he wasn’t there.
Okay, okay. Shake it off, shake it off. He’s gone now, nothing to worry about, Hannah reminded herself .
Soon they landed in Los Angeles, where they collected their baggage. There was also a limo outside waiting for them, but they didn’t know who sent it. So they asked the driver.
“They wish to stay [I]Anonymous.”


Like it? 8 comments = next chapter! :D

LotsaBigHearts
07-13-2007, 07:31 PM
awesome job!!
7 more

megdolphinlover
07-13-2007, 07:59 PM
oh my gawd!!!! RITE MORE!

123_abc
07-13-2007, 08:02 PM
lesliee likeyy, lol, moreee

tricia1228
07-13-2007, 11:17 PM
More!

Mileyrocksforever101
07-13-2007, 11:39 PM
more mor more!!! That's great so far. I also like the idea.:D

just_like_you_92
07-14-2007, 01:18 AM
love the new chapter
♥♥♥

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 09:34 AM
Thanks everyone! I know we need one more comment, but here is the next chapter anyways:


Chapter 7



“O-o-o-okay. S-s-s-so Mom, should we t-t-t-take it?” Hannah stuttered. She thought that creepy guy on the plane had sent it, and if he did, she didn’t want to have anything to do with it.
“Where does this limo take us?” Hannah’s mother asked.
“To a set.” The driver answered solemnly.
“Well then, let’s take it! It could be the Hannah Montana set!” Hannah’s mother nudged her.
So they got into the mysterious limo, and the driver brought them to—you guessed it—the Hannah Montana set. Hannah let out a huge sigh of relief.
As they walked to the door, Hannah was freaking out inside. She was so nervous to meet everyone, and she didn’t want to make a bad impression.
The door opened, and there they were. The “it” cast. Oh. Em. Gee.
Everyone started introducing themselves, but Hannah was frozen.
“Why, hello there! You must be Hannah!” Mitchel Musso exclaimed.
“Mhm. Yes, I’m Hannah. Nice to meet you.”
“Well, come on! Let’s go meet the rest of the cast.”
So Mitchel helped Hannah relax and introduce herself to the cast and crew. After a while, Hannah only wanted to talk to Mitchel. Even when she looked away, her eyes kept going back to Mitchel. She didn’t know why, though.
The day rolled on and Hannah and her family soon headed home.
For the next few weeks, everything went perfectly. But just like in Hannah Montana’s song, nobody is perfect – or should I say – nothing is perfect.



Like it? 4 comments = next chapter [it gets good in the next few chapters!]

LotsaBigHearts
07-14-2007, 09:35 AM
awesome job!!
Cool set!!

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 10:35 AM
^Thanks!
And I changed my set now ;)

3 more comments = next chapter! It starts getting really good next chapter!

just_like_you_92
07-14-2007, 11:23 AM
omg i love it. post the next chapter! (i love your new set also)
♥♥♥

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 11:24 AM
^Thanks! I need 2 more comments!

[thanks!]

P.S. You guys, I'm already writing Chapter 16 in my notebook, so you should probably hurry up with the comments to get more :P

mileyfanforever101
07-14-2007, 11:26 AM
OMG i just read it and i have three things for you

ah-ma-zing


moreeeeeeeeeee

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 11:32 AM
^Thanks! And since we haven't talked in a while, I'll just post the next chapter:


Chapter 8



It was a calm Thursday afternoon. The phone rang suddenly at Hannah’s house.
“Hello?” Hannah said as she picked it up.
“Hey Hannah, it’s me, Mitchel.”
“So…what’s up?”
“Wanna go skydiving with me?” Mitchel knew how much Hannah loved to skydive, and so did he.
“Uh…sure, let me ask my mom! Hold on a sec, okay?”
Hannah ran upstairs and asked her mom if she could go.
“With who, again?
“Mitchel, mom. Please?”
“Alright, go have fun!”
“Thanks!”
Hannah rand downstairs, grabbed the phone, and said, “Mitchel? Yeah, I can go. You’re in my driveway? Alright, be out in a minute!”
Hannah slips on her sneakers and dashes outside. Mitchel was waiting in his car already.
“Ready?” He asked as she hopped in and buckled up.
“Ready as I’ll ever be.”
“Then let’s go!”
Mitchel starts driving down the road. The skydiving place is in the middle of nowhere, so that’s where they’re headed.
Soon, they arrive at the skydiving center, park, and go inside to register.
After they registered, they were sent up a flight of stairs to a small room with dozens of baggy skydiving suits and helmets hanging on the walls. Hannah and Mitchel were handed their suits and helmets, and they were instructed to put them on over their clothes. So they did, and then they got onto a private plane.
The plane took off, and within a few minutes, they were at their destination – the middle of nowhere.
Mitchel and Hannah grabbed each other’s hands so they wouldn’t get separated by the strong winds.
“1, 2, 3, GO!” Yelled the instructor.
Mitchel and Hannah dove off the plane. While still holding hands, they spread their arms and legs.
But then something went terribly wrong.


Like it? 3 comments = next chapter! :D

LotsaBigHearts
07-14-2007, 11:35 AM
like it?? love it!!
nice set (again)
more please!!

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 11:38 AM
^Thanks so much!

2 more comments! :D

mileyfanforever101
07-14-2007, 11:39 AM
OMG thansk for posting a new chappie[lol in ur old FF chappies]more please can i have a side of chapter with my meal lol

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 11:40 AM
Haha thanks! 1 more comment!

just_like_you_92
07-14-2007, 11:40 AM
oooh post the next chapter
♥♥♥

mileyfanforever101
07-14-2007, 11:41 AM
1.MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE


there's a comment

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 11:42 AM
Alright, here it is:


Chapter 9


Mitchel opened his parachute with ease at about 300 yards. Hannah pulled on the string, but nothing happened. She kept tugging, but it was no use. She was falling, and falling fast.
The speed that she was falling pulled her apart from Mitchel, who was coming down quite slowly.
Hannah tugged and tugged at the string, but still nothing happened. So she closed her eyes as her life flashed before them.
A loud thud was made as Hannah hit the ground. Mitchel landed and ran over to her as fast as he could.
“Oh my god. Hannah! Hannah! Wake up, please wake up!” Mitchel screamed.
But Hannah made no movements or sounds. Her chest wasn’t moving either. She wasn’t breathing.
Mitchel felt her pulse. There was only a very faint beat.
“Hannah! Please, I don’t want to lose you! If you can hear me, move your fingers!”
Suddenly, Hannah’s index finger moved. Then her other fingers started wiggling. Hannah was alive!
“Come on, Hannah, you can do it! Concentrate! Keep moving! Stay with me!” Mitchel yelled.
Hannah concentrated and started moving her arms, legs, and head. She was able to sit up after a few minutes. That’s when it hit her.
Hannah got up and ran into Mitchel’s arms. He held her tightly, like saying that he’ll always protect her.
She started crying. Then she jumped up and wrapped her legs around Mitchel in a front-wards-piggy-back-sort-of-thing. Mitchel didn’t let go of her for the whole time.
But there was one problem. They were stuck out here until someone came, or they walked. Hannah was in no shape to walk that far. So Mitchel sat down, with her still in his arms, to coax her.
“I thought I lost you, Hannah.” Mitchel squeezed tighter.
“It takes a lot…*sniff*…to kill me.”
“But now we’re stuck here. Do you have your cell phone handy?”
“Yes…in my jeans pocket.”
“Well, let’s get out of these baggy suits then.”
Mitchel put Hannah down and they both got out of the suits. Hannah reached into her jeans pocket and pulled out her cell phone. She handed it to Mitchel, and ran back into his arms.
Mitchel called the skydiving center, and they said someone was “going right now.” Then Mitchel requested an ambulance, because Hannah needed medical attention.
“Mitchel…why did you stay with me when I’m as good dead?” Hannah questioned.
“Well, why wouldn’t I? And you’re not as good dead. Plus, there was nowhere else to go. We would have been farther apart.”
Hannah looks up at Mitchel, and he strokes her cheek with his thumb. Suddenly, Hannah felt very safe in Mitchel’s arms. She liked that feeling. A lot.


4 comments = next chapter! :D

just_like_you_92
07-14-2007, 11:44 AM
love it
♥♥♥

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 11:44 AM
^Thanks! 3 comments = next chapter!

LotsaBigHearts
07-14-2007, 11:45 AM
aww how sweet, more please!!

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 11:46 AM
Lol, yeah. 2 more comments!

mileyfanforever101
07-14-2007, 11:46 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH moreeeeeeeeeeeee

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 11:48 AM
1 more comment!

mileyfanforever101
07-14-2007, 11:49 AM
1.moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 11:53 AM
Okay, here:


Chapter 10


Hannah lays her head on Mitchel’s shoulder. If she had to be stuck anywhere, with anyone, she’d definitely choose Mitchel.
Mitchel sat down, still embracing Hannah. He knew it was wimpy to cry, but he started crying. Hannah squeezed harder, to let him know she was there for him.
“Mitchel, what’s wrong?”
“N-nothing.”
“Something is wrong, and I want you to tell me what it is.”
“Fine…Well, it’s my fault we’re in this mess. It’s my fault you almost died. It’s my –“
Hannah put her hand over his mouth. “It’s nobody’s fault, Mitch. Stop putting yourself down. And I’m fine, aren’t I?”
“Yeah, I guess.”
“And you’re the one that kept encouraging me to move, right?”
“Yeah, you’re right! So…I guess I’m a wimp ‘cause I cried, huh?”
“No, that doesn’t make you a wimp, it makes you human.” Hannah squeezes Mitchel, and they just sit there in silence.


4 comments = next chapter!

mileyfanforever101
07-14-2007, 11:57 AM
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 12:01 PM
3 comments! :D

megdolphinlover
07-14-2007, 12:20 PM
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!!!!!!

just_like_you_92
07-14-2007, 12:22 PM
more
♥♥♥

megdolphinlover
07-14-2007, 12:24 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREM ORMEO RMOEM MORE MORE!!!!(i already posted but im dying for a new chapter!!!!!!)

mileyfanforever101
07-14-2007, 12:25 PM
post moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

megdolphinlover
07-14-2007, 12:31 PM
plz pzl plz!!!!!!! were all BEGGING you!!!!

mileyfanforever101
07-14-2007, 12:33 PM
pleaseeeeeeeeeeee

LotsaBigHearts
07-14-2007, 12:34 PM
more please!!

123_abc
07-14-2007, 01:27 PM
write moree..now

megdolphinlover
07-14-2007, 01:29 PM
k thats however namy we needed from different people!! its over too i think..but shes offline...so we gotta wait=(

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 01:42 PM
OMG sorry! I was off for about 2 hours I think...I'll post the next chapter now:


Chapter 11


Soon, Mitchel and Hannah lie down together, to get some sleep.
About 30 minutes after they lie down, an ambulance stops on a dirt path. The paramedics jump out and wake Mitchel and Hannah up. They put Hannah on a stretcher and place it in the back of the ambulance.
Hannah begs them to let Mitchel sit in the back with her. So they let him, and then they close the doors and start driving back to the hospital.
Mitchel squeezes Hannah’s hand. “Everything’s going to be alright, Hannah. I’ll stay with you through everything they need to do.”
Hannah smiles and closes her eyes, while Mitchel and a paramedic sit in silence.

Sorry it was so short. 6 comments = next chapter!

LotsaBigHearts
07-14-2007, 01:45 PM
that was short, lol more please

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 01:50 PM
^Lol, yeah, sorry. It's because I write them in a notebook and then type them..they look longer in the notebook :P

5 more comments!

just_like_you_92
07-14-2007, 02:08 PM
more
♥♥♥

LotsaBigHearts
07-14-2007, 02:14 PM
^Lol, yeah, sorry. It's because I write them in a notebook and then type them..they look longer in the notebook :P

5 more comments!
yeah lol, i did that with mine a couple of times..
i write kinda big, so it looked like it was long!!
:P

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 02:20 PM
3 more comments! [i'll count your second one as a comment, LotsaBigHearts]

megdolphinlover
07-14-2007, 02:22 PM
mor emore moremo more!!!

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 02:22 PM
2 more comments! :D

just_like_you_92
07-14-2007, 02:23 PM
more
♥♥♥

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 02:36 PM
You know what, I'll just post it now. Here:


Chapter 12


When they finally got to the hospital, Hannah was sound asleep.
They take her out of the ambulance carefully, and walk [with Mitchel] to an empty room. Once there, Mitchel carefully slips his hands underneath Hannah and lifts her off of the stretcher and onto the bed.
The paramedics take the stretcher and leave, leaving Mitchel alone with a sleeping Hannah.
After a little while, a nurse comes in to make sure Hannah is alright. She feels all her bones, looking for fractures or any kind of imperfections. She feels nothing wrong, so she tells Mitchel to “keep her in bed, and let her rest for a few hours.”
Hannah wakes up. She suddenly feels alone. But then she sees Mitchel and reaches out for his hand. He grabs her hand, and she feels a lot better.
“Mitchel, does my mom know what happened?”
“Not quite yet, Han. I was just about to call her.”
Mitchel grabs the hospital phone and dials Hannah’s home number. Her mother picks it up.
“Hello?”
“Hi, Mrs. Dresd, it’s Mitchel.”
“Mitchel? What in the world are you doing at the hospital?” She questions.
“Oh, it’s not me, Mrs. Dresd, it’s Hannah.”
“Hannah?! What’s wrong?!”
Mitchel tells her the long story.
“Oh my. My little Hannah is hurt?”
“No, not exactly. Maybe emotionally for a little while, but she’ll be back to normal in no time!”
“Alright, well thank you very much for letting me know. Does she need me down there with her?”
“No, Mrs. Dresd, she’s perfectly fine here with me. She’s calmed down quite a bit with me here. Can you just let my mom know for me? Thanks! Bye!”
Mitchel hangs up the phone and looks back at Hannah. She looks back and their eyes meet. They hold it for a few seconds then look away. Akward…But then they look at each other again and giggle.
A little while later they both fall asleep. But Mitchel is lying on the bed, sleeping next to Hannah.
But what they don’t know is that Miley, Emily and a ton more of Hannah and Mitchel’s friends come to visit them. But then they see them sleeping on the same bed and think it’s just the cutest thing. So they leave before they wake up.


4 comments = next chapter!

just_like_you_92
07-14-2007, 02:39 PM
more please lol
♥♥♥

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 02:40 PM
^Lol, 3 more comments! :D

smileymiley92
07-14-2007, 04:22 PM
awesome job!!
More please!!

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 04:50 PM
Thanks! 2 more comments!

PursePrincess4eva
07-14-2007, 04:52 PM
More please! =]

LotsaBigHearts
07-14-2007, 04:55 PM
great job!!
did i already comment??
oh well, sorry if i did..
more!!

MileyRox1174
07-14-2007, 06:06 PM
Alright, here is the next chapter. And I'm feeling VERY generous right now, so I'll post 2 chapters!


Chapter 13


The next afternoon, Mitchel and Hannah wake up, facing each other.
“Feeling better?” Mitchel asks.
“A lot better now.” Hannah smiles.
“Well, we better get up and get going, Hannah. The nurse said we could leave now.”
They got up and walked out. At the front desk, they signed out, and then walked home. Hannah’s house wasn’t too far from here, and neither was Mitchel’s.
Hannah didn’t want to hold Mitchel’s hand for fear of rumors spreading, but inside, she really didn’t care about rumors. She needed some support. So Hannah grabbed Mitchel’s hand, catching him by surprise. But now they both felt safer and happier.



Chapter 14


Paparazzi flashed their cameras, but neither Hannah nor Mitchel seemed to care.
They walked to Hannah’s house, and Mitchel hugged Hannah.
“So…um, how about Saturday? Are you free at 8?”
“Sure! But it’s not a date or anything, right?” Hannah replies.
“Uh, no, no, no, of course not! Just two friends…going out…yeah.”
“Okay, see you tomorrow at 8 then!”
Hannah walks inside, and Mitchel walks home.
“*sigh* Isn’t Mitchel amazing, Mom?”
“Sure, honey. But if he’s that amazing, why don’t you tell him?”
“Mom, it’s the 21st century! Duh, we don’t do that!”
“I never did get teenagers.” Hannah’s mom jokes.
So, by the fountain on Hollywood Boulevard. Alright, I can do that, Hannah thought.



3 comments = next chapter [tomorrow] :D

LotsaBigHearts
07-14-2007, 06:19 PM
lol tomorrow,
that was good!!

megdolphinlover
07-15-2007, 03:33 AM
MORE!!! 10 comments!! THATS A LOT!!!!!

tricia1228
07-15-2007, 08:50 AM
More!

MileyRox1174
07-15-2007, 09:06 AM
Yeah, 10 is a lot, but I posted 2 chapters!

EDIT: I changed it to 3. So yeah, I'll post the next chapter now :P

MileyRox1174
07-15-2007, 03:27 PM
Chapter 15


The next day, Hannah leaps out of bed and starts getting ready. Although she has a long time before Mitchel comes, she wants to be sure she’s got everything.
Mitchel was doing almost the same thing at his house. Except he was rehearsing something…but what?
“Okay, how should I say it? ‘Hannah, I don’t know how to say this, but-‘ Ugh this will be harder than I thought.”
As the day commences, more than one person was planning on bringing Hannah somewhere – in one way or another.
At 8 PM, Mitchel arrived, in his car [he went back to the skydiving center to get it back], to pick Hannah up. She sees him and runs outside and hops into the car.
Mitchel drives to Hollywood Boulevard and finds a place to park. Then he and Hannah get out, walk over to the fountain, and sit on the edge of it.
“So…Mitchel, why did you bring me here?”
“Because…I need to ask you something.”
“What do you need to ask me?”
“I –“
Suddenly, someone grabs Hannah from behind. They drag her deep into the woods surrounding the fountain.
Hannah struggles to break free of their grip, but the mystery person just tugs harder.
“W-w-who are you?” Hannah manages to ask.
“Oh, you know very well who I am.”


4 comments = next chapter!

[sorry for double posting]

x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-15-2007, 03:29 PM
more

LotsaBigHearts
07-15-2007, 07:31 PM
wow, is it nick??

just_like_you_92
07-15-2007, 09:36 PM
love it
♥♥♥

megdolphinlover
07-15-2007, 09:57 PM
i think its NICK!!!!! i hope its nick lolz
this is 4th comment!

fashionandstyle
07-15-2007, 10:57 PM
This is so good!

I love this fanfiction. Lately all the other ones I've been reading with sequels and threequels are getting SO repetitive, but if you made a sequel to this, you are way too creative to make it sound like the first. I repeat. I love this fan fiction! lol. I had one before but it's really hard to keep one up because i don't have much time, but your fanfic is really amazing. Keep up the good work!

So more!

I'll rap it for you.

M-m-m--m-m-m-more. Holla.

lol. I blew your minds didn't I? Thought so.

megdolphinlover
07-16-2007, 12:44 AM
lol..MORE MORE MORE!

tricia1228
07-16-2007, 11:40 AM
More!

m&jrule
07-16-2007, 02:47 PM
more!

MileyRox1174
07-16-2007, 06:59 PM
OMG I am SO sorry! I haven't been on in a day, and I still have to type the next chapter. I'll go type it right now!


This is so good!

I love this fanfiction. Lately all the other ones I've been reading with sequels and threequels are getting SO repetitive, but if you made a sequel to this, you are way too creative to make it sound like the first. I repeat. I love this fan fiction! lol. I had one before but it's really hard to keep one up because i don't have much time, but your fanfic is really amazing. Keep up the good work!

So more!

I'll rap it for you.

M-m-m--m-m-m-more. Holla.

lol. I blew your minds didn't I? Thought so.

Wow, thanks! I might make a sequel, I don't know :P

MileyRox1174
07-16-2007, 07:04 PM
Chapter 16


Hannah tried to put the pieces together.
Wait…slight limp on left side, very muscular, dark brown, messy hair, very tall, and that familiar glare! It’s the guy from the airplane! Hannah’s eyes widen.
“I see you’ve figured out who I am.” He laughs.
“Yeah, but…what do you want from me?”
“Oh, I don’t know. You’re just another girl I’ll hurt, scare…and dispose of one way or another.”
Hannah swallowed the knot in her throat. She was scared. Very scared.
The man walked away, leaving Hannah alone in the woods.


5 comments = next chapter!

[sorry for double posting]

megdolphinlover
07-18-2007, 12:32 AM
More Mor Emore More More!!!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-18-2007, 01:38 AM
More! :D

Miley's_3_lives
07-18-2007, 05:58 PM
moreeeeeeeeeee!!!!!

i will die if i dont get more!

MileyRox1174
07-18-2007, 07:26 PM
OMG I keep forgetting about this. Well, 2 more comments!

just_like_you_92
07-18-2007, 07:49 PM
more!
♥♥♥

LotsaBigHearts
07-18-2007, 07:56 PM
more!!

Lanae_M
07-18-2007, 08:50 PM
More! I just got caught up! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

megdolphinlover
07-19-2007, 01:28 AM
once again more!!!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-19-2007, 01:10 PM
More!

MileyRox1174
07-19-2007, 05:53 PM
Oh snap, I need to type it! I'll post it in a few minutes! :D

MileyRox1174
07-19-2007, 06:10 PM
Chapter 17


Mitchel was horrified. It seems that whenever he takes Hannah out to do something, she gets the short end of the stick. He needed to figure out how to make sure nothing like this happened again, and how to find her right now.
So he got up and tried to re-trace the man’s steps. It was harder than he thought though. The kidnapper covered his path well, and there were so many alternative paths leading to more and more paths. But Mitchel wasn’t giving up. So he tried a different method.
“Hannah! Hannah! Where are you, Hannah?” Mitchel yelled.
Hannah heard his voice echo through the trees. “Mitchel? Mitchel, is that you?” She yelled back.
“Hannah! Where are you? Keep yelling so I can follow your voice!”
Hannah was about to yell, but suddenly a tranquilizer was shot into her arm. She fell asleep, for quite a while.
When Mitchel stopped hearing her voice, he began to lose hope. He got so discouraged that he drove back to Hannah’s house to explain to Mrs. Dresd what happened.
“….And so, I couldn’t find her. She stopped yelling. I’m the worst friend she ever had.” Mitchel started walking away.
“Now, now, don’t say that. She actually really likes you.” Hannah’s mom winks.
“Really? She likes me?”
“You bet. She said you were amazing.”
“Wow. I guess I just never noticed. Now, we should probably go back to look for her.”
“Tomorrow, sweetie. Hannah will be fine, don’t you worry. Now, go home and get some sleep. You’re going to need it.”


6 comments = next chapter!

[sorry for double posting]

just_like_you_92
07-19-2007, 06:20 PM
i love it!
♥♥♥

MileyRox1174
07-19-2007, 06:37 PM
^Thanks!

5 more comments = next chapter! :D

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-19-2007, 06:38 PM
More!! :d

megdolphinlover
07-19-2007, 06:42 PM
More More More More More I Declare More More More More More!!!

MileyRox1174
07-19-2007, 07:15 PM
3 more comments! :D

megdolphinlover
07-19-2007, 07:21 PM
i want moe now!!! ha ha...but ill be pantient and wait.....like a normal person not obsseing over anything....

MileyRox1174
07-19-2007, 07:24 PM
Lol, 2 more comments!

megdolphinlover
07-19-2007, 07:27 PM
i forgot to say....BUT I AM OBSESSING OVE THIS SO I CAN FREAK OUT!!! ha ha...

MileyRox1174
07-19-2007, 07:42 PM
Oh, what the heck? Here's the next chapter:


Chapter 18


The next day, Mitchel went back to Hannah’s house. All he saw was a note from Hannah’s mom. It read:

http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w156/Star_Struck1174/Signs/For%20FF/Love%20Loss%20and%20Forgiveness/noteforFF.jpg

Hm, that’s weird. She said that yesterday. I guess I can look tomorrow. In the mean time, I’ll head over to the Hannah Montana set to see Miley and Emily.
He drives to the set, and Miley and Emily are inside – ahem – rehearsing.
Mitchel gets out and walks into the studio. But what he sees is quite unexpected.


6 comments = next chapter! [i'm probably posting it tomorrow though]

megdolphinlover
07-19-2007, 07:59 PM
i cant read the note..it says photobucket bandwith exceeded....soooo ya...thanks 4 posting tho

Lanae_M
07-19-2007, 08:44 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!

LotsaBigHearts
07-19-2007, 09:28 PM
awesome job!!
more more!!

megdolphinlover
07-19-2007, 09:38 PM
more more more more moer more more more more more more more more more more more more

babygirl35
07-20-2007, 03:32 PM
awsome! more!

MileyRox1174
07-20-2007, 03:46 PM
Now you should be able to read it ;) Here's the next chapter.
PLEASE NOTE: I know that things in this chapter probably won't EVER happen, so don't post a complaint about the 'un-realisticness'.


Chapter 19


Miley and Emily are wearing quite – ahem – skimpy outfits. They turn around and see Mitchel, automatically turning on their flirt.
“Hey Mitchel. What are you doing here?” Miley says flirtatiously.
“I was just coming to get my mind off Hannah. I see you two are, um, quite skimpy in those outfits. Why are you wearing them?”
“Oh, these are for you, Mitchel.” Emily says in her “sexy” voice.
“But, you both know I like Hannah!”
“Not anymore, you don’t.” Miley grabs Mitchel and starts making out with him. Then Emily does the same.
Mitchel manages to pull away from them after a few minutes. “You two aren’t Miley and Emily…you’re not acting like yourselves!”
As soon as that is said, Mitchel runs out, hops in his car, and drives away. He drives all the way to Hollywood Boulevard, parks, and runs into the woods.
“Hannah! Hannah!” He yells.
“Mitchel! Over here!”
Mitchel turns to his right and runs in a flat-out sprint. He soon sees Hannah, lying on the ground, shivering.
“Hannah? You look terrible! Are you alright?”
Hannah was dirty, messy, and had a bad cough. Worst of all, she was shivering like a scared puppy.
Mitchel took off his jacket, knelt down, and wrapped it around Hannah.
She sat up and leaned against Mitchel. He held her against his body to keep her warm.
Soon, Hannah was able to stand up without falling weak. But Mitchel still carried her [one hand holding legs, other hand holding back and neck] back to his car.
“I’m not finished with you yet, Hannah Dresd. Don’t think you’re too safe now,” The man said to himself as Mitchel drove back home.


5 comments = next chapter! :D

Lanae_M
07-20-2007, 03:46 PM
more

LotsaBigHearts
07-20-2007, 03:55 PM
PLEASE NOTE: I know that things in this chapter probably won't EVER happen, so don't post a complaint about the 'un-realisticness'.


lol, more more!!

LotsaBigHearts
07-20-2007, 03:56 PM
PLEASE NOTE: I know that things in this chapter probably won't EVER happen, so don't post a complaint about the 'un-realisticness'.


lol, more more!!

babygirl35
07-20-2007, 04:02 PM
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

secretive_angel
07-20-2007, 04:17 PM
more pleaz

MileyRox1174
07-20-2007, 04:38 PM
I'll post more when I get back onto MY computer, because it's only saved on there. [right now I'm on my parents' laptop]

Lanae_M
07-20-2007, 05:37 PM
Okay but please when you get a chance post!

MileyRox1174
07-20-2007, 05:42 PM
Alright, I'm on my computer again. Here is the next chapter:


Chapter 20


Mitchel stops at Hannah’s house, and Hannah runs inside without even saying “thank you” or “goodbye”. She also forgot to give Mitchel his jacket back.
A couple weeks later, Hannah is at the studio with Miley [the “real” Miley]. They are practicing their lines when Mitchel walks in.
Hannah walks up to him, holding his jacket. “Here,” She said as she handed it to him.
Mitchel takes it from her. “What’s wrong? I thought you liked me.”
“I…I can’t hand out with you anymore.”
“What do you mean?”
“It’s…personal,” Hannah says as she and Miley walk away. “You wouldn’t understand.”


Sorry it was so short. 6 comments = next chapter!

Lanae_M
07-20-2007, 06:05 PM
Moremoremoremoremore!

MileyRox1174
07-20-2007, 07:14 PM
5 more comments! :D

just_like_you_92
07-20-2007, 08:14 PM
more!
♥♥♥

MileyRox1174
07-21-2007, 10:33 AM
4 more comments! :D

tricia1228
07-21-2007, 11:20 AM
More!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-21-2007, 11:56 AM
More!

MileyRox1174
07-22-2007, 04:31 PM
Whatever, here's the next three chapters:



Chapter 21


That Thursday, the cast gets together to practice their lines one more time.
But the writers made a change to the script. They passed out the pink [final] script to each of the cast members.
Hannah flipped to the part that was added. She held her breath.





Chapter 22


“Hannah, Hannah. Breathe!” Miley whispered to Hannah.
She took a deep breath as she read it again. The lines were this [Hannah’s character is Jessie]:


OLIVER

Jessie…I need to talk to you.

JESSIE

What’s wrong?

OLIVER

(BRINGS JESSIE TO PRIVATE AREA) I…I…I…


OLIVER KISSES JESSIE.




Chapter 23


That’s when Hannah thought she couldn’t do the scene.
“S-s-so we have to…kiss?” Hannah asks slowly.
“Why, yes Hannah. Why would you ask such a silly question?” One of the writers replies.
Mitchel was also beginning to feel a little unsure of this scene. But they had to do it.
So as the cast rehearsed, Hannah and Mitchel “practiced” the new scene.
“Look, Mitchel…I don’t think I can do this scene.”
“Me neither. So, what should we do about it?”
“I guess we just have to play along, and pretend we are enjoying the scene.”
“Okay then…well, I’ll see you tomorrow at about 8 AM.”



Okay, the last chapter is the 28th chapter...so yeah, 6 comments = last 5 chapters!

just_like_you_92
07-22-2007, 04:46 PM
i love it!
♥♥♥

MileyRox1174
07-22-2007, 05:05 PM
Thanks!

Oh and there WILL be a Sequel to this ;)

5 more comments!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-22-2007, 05:19 PM
More! :D

LotsaBigHearts
07-22-2007, 06:02 PM
sorry i forgot to comment (had to get off for a minute)

Lanae_M
07-22-2007, 08:33 PM
More!

tricia1228
07-23-2007, 10:46 AM
More!

megdolphinlover
07-23-2007, 02:32 PM
MOE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! srry i was goe...i wasnt home on the eekend..and i just watched he nobodys perfect vid on tv and it was lke nbodys perfect ya live and you learn it it was weird ha ha hey edit it too much srry that was off topic

California_Drama
07-23-2007, 02:40 PM
moreee?!?!?!

MileyRox1174
07-23-2007, 05:02 PM
Alright, here's the next 2 chapters [yes, Chapter 24 is supposed to be like it is]:


Chapter 24


The next morning, Hannah slowly got out of her bed, and slowly completed her morning routine . Then, she and her mom slowly drove to the set, in a slow 40 minutes. They walked into the studio slowly, and slowly got settled with the rest of the cast. Slowly, everyone arrived, and the episode slowly began taping. Just a slow 2 hours later…


Something totally unexpected happened.


[I]Chapter 25


Someone burst through the doors of the studio.
“Oh my god,” Hannah whispered as she turned to hide her face.
“I’m looking for a Hannah Dresd. Is she here?” said the all-too-familiar voice.
“Uh…I don’t know. I think she’s still in her dressing room,” Miley lied.
“Look, I don’t want to cause any trouble, but if you don’t tell me where she is, I will.” The person grabbed the handle of a knife, which was sticking out of their pocket.
Hannah clears her throat and turns around. “I’m…I’m right here.”
The person turns around to look at Hannah. “Excellent. I’ve been waiting a long time to do this.”


4 comments = last 3 chapters!

megdolphinlover
07-23-2007, 09:42 PM
OMG OMG IS IT NICK!!???
MRE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!
i declare MORE!

miley_hannah_rox
07-23-2007, 10:05 PM
I like it, when I finish a chapter and realize that there aren't anymore yet, IDK, I just want to keep reading it. Good job.

megdolphinlover
07-23-2007, 11:36 PM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! plz plz plz plz plz

just_like_you_92
07-24-2007, 01:30 AM
omg post the rest of it!
♥♥♥

megdolphinlover
07-24-2007, 03:39 AM
i no she should ttly post it!!

tricia1228
07-24-2007, 08:49 AM
More!

MileyRox1174
07-24-2007, 09:05 AM
Okay, okay. Sheesh, people :P Here are the next 2 chapters:


Chapter 26


The person ran up to Hannah and….hugged her.
“Um…okay. So….What are you doing here, Nick?” Hannah asks.
“I never got to officially say goodbye. And-“
“Okay, well ‘bye’! I gotta go.”
“Wait, you didn’t hear the last part! I’m also here to…well, to…”
“To what?” Hannah asks impatiently.
“To do this.”
Nick stabs his knife through Hannah’s arm, and trips her. Then he grabs her ankle and snaps it like a twig.
“AHHHHH!” screams Hannah at the top of her lungs. “Why did you do that?! What happened to you, Nick?!”
“I’m just helping my dad.”
The creepy guy that left Hannah in the woods appears behind Nick.



Chapter 27


“So that’s why I never met your dad! Ow, OW!”
“Ding ding, we have a winner! I can’t believe you’re that oblivious!”
“But…why? Nick, you were my best – ow – friend!”
“Nope, it was all fake. I’ve always hated you.” Nick laughs.
“Yeah, and now it’s my turn to do some hurtin’!” Nick’s dad says as he grabs Hannah and pins her against the wall by her throat. He punches her [really hard] in the stomach.
Jason [Earles] sneaks behind the set and calls 911 and when he hangs up, Nick’s dad hears.
“What was that?” He asks Hannah.
“I don’t know – AHHHHH!”



6 comments = last chapter! :D

miley rocks
07-24-2007, 10:05 AM
more plz it toke me 2 days 2 read it but it was awseome n grt
more plz ur really good at this

tricia1228
07-24-2007, 11:29 AM
Omg more!

megdolphinlover
07-24-2007, 01:28 PM
omg omg og omg omg omg omg more more more!!!! i thought nick LIKED HER!!!!...but maybe hes doing that becuz hes mad she left then started likeing mitchell...idn but MORE MOREMORE!

MileyRox1174
07-24-2007, 05:02 PM
You'll have to find out ;)

3 more comments!

Miles Of Smiles Rock
07-24-2007, 05:21 PM
MORE :o

MileyRox1174
07-24-2007, 06:00 PM
2 more comments! :D

babygirl35
07-24-2007, 06:14 PM
ok you need 2 more comments
comment 1:
more!
comment 2:
i need more!
yeah i thought nick liked her as well

xXxMileyCyrusFan#1xXx
07-24-2007, 07:39 PM
more now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

just_like_you_92
07-24-2007, 08:43 PM
omgggggg! post more
♥♥♥

LotsaBigHearts
07-24-2007, 10:31 PM
that was awesome!!

megdolphinlover
07-24-2007, 10:36 PM
MORE MOre MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!

MileyRox1174
07-25-2007, 07:22 PM
EEK Sorry! Here is the LAST Chapter of this FF [then the sequel will be posted soon]:


Chapter 28


“Hannah. Wake up!” Mrs. Dresd says as she nudges Hannah.
She wakes up. “So…I was just…dreaming? That wasn’t real?”
“What wasn’t real? And yes, you were dreaming. Apparently a scary one, too.”
Hannah lets out a huge sigh of relief. She thought it was real. She looked at the clock. 4:30 AM.
“Ugh. I guess I could get up right now…okay, I will.” Hannah jumps out of bed.
She gets ready, but stays in her room, to think.
I’m really not happy that the writers put in a kissing scene between me and Mitchel. I don’t want to kiss him, much less be near him, Hannah thought.
So as the morning commenced, Hannah tried to think of a plan to get her out of the kiss, but it was no use. She was going to have to kiss Mitchel.


Unless…




THE END! Thanks for reading!

Okay, 6 comments and then I'll post the sequel :D

xXxMileyCyrusFan#1xXx
07-25-2007, 07:27 PM
please write the sequel now!!!!!

babygirl35
07-25-2007, 08:04 PM
more
more
more i need more
more!
more!
more!
please more!
there more than 6 comments

miley rocks
07-25-2007, 08:28 PM
plz more but dont take 2 long 2 post the sequel

miley_hannah_rox
07-26-2007, 04:51 PM
1 comment:more please
2 comment:it's really good, more please
3 comment:more please, it's really good, but please post more at a time

just_like_you_92
07-27-2007, 12:55 AM
post the sequel
♥♥♥

Mnkygrl957
07-27-2007, 02:58 AM
tht was great i loved it

megdolphinlover
07-27-2007, 03:04 AM
OMG THANKS 4 POSTING!! i luved the ending post the sequel NOW! he he

MileyRox1174
07-27-2007, 08:46 AM
I sort of already have posted the sequel ;) But I'm not finished editing it yet...so please don't post in it if you find it ;)

megdolphinlover
07-27-2007, 01:55 PM
ok ill go search sum stuff bi!