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smilez
07-10-2007, 02:05 PM
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1-We Meet Mr. Aplegusse
Hannah- *sings* Life's What you make it so lets make it rock. Life's What you make it so come on, come on. life is what you make it!
*talks* Good night everybody!! Drive Safely!!
-After the concert-
Miley- *pulls off wig* That was a great concert!!!
Lilly- That was great!! And im so happy that i got a backstage pass, not have to wear a wig. It's so itchy!!
Miley- You're tellin' me.
-Someone knocks on door-
Robby- *whispers* Miley, put your wig back on!
-Miley leaves room-
Robby- *answers door* Hello, sir, how may I help you?
Stranger- *British Accent* Yes, I woulld like to see, eh, Anna Montana?
Robby- One, It's Hannah, not Anna. And two, fans aren't alowed back here at this time.
Stranger- *glances at Lilly* Then what is she doing here?
Lilly- *looks, but then looks away*
Robby- She's a contest winner. She has special advantages. *Gives Lilly a act-like-you're-a-contest-winner-look*
Lilly- *Fake voice* Wow, I cannot beleive I'm in Hannah's dressing room.
Robby- See? A contest winner. By the way, what is your name?
Stranger- My name is Voovashlocababla Aplegusse. Call me Mr. Aplegusse.
Lilly- Apple Juice! Where?
Robby- Not now, Lil- mrs. contest winner.
-Miley walks back into room with wig on-
Hanah- So daddy, who's at the door?
Robby- Voovaboobaflaba what ever its called Aplegusse. Call him Mr. Aplegusse.
Hannah- Hello Mr. Aplegusse. I'm Hannah Montana. As youmay know.
Robby- So why are you here?
Mr. Aplegusse- Well, I'm here to-
-Someone screams in closet-
Mr. Aplegusse- *smiles*
Hannah and Lilly- What was that?
Mr. Aplegusse- *snickers*
To Be Continued...
2-4 comments b4 next ch.
Hope you liked it!!
smilez
07-10-2007, 04:20 PM
any comments?
jg099
07-10-2007, 04:25 PM
oooh i wanna know more! Good job!
mileycyrusisluv
07-10-2007, 04:40 PM
wow....
destiny hope cyrus fan
07-10-2007, 04:48 PM
More!
LotsaBigHearts
07-10-2007, 06:22 PM
wow holy cow, awesome.. is this your 1st??
m&jrule
07-10-2007, 06:55 PM
more!
~hannah~rocks
07-10-2007, 07:05 PM
More!!!!!!!
smilez
07-10-2007, 11:44 PM
wow holy cow, awesome.. is this your 1st??
um, let me think. *counts on fingers*
i think this is my third.
my first one flunked. my second one did good. and my third one...-this one-...i think is doing well so far.
And, i am writing ch. 2 rite nowz.
:))
secretive_angel
07-10-2007, 11:51 PM
yay can't wait
smilez
07-11-2007, 12:16 AM
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Ch. 2- Apples or NOT?
Mr. Aplegusse- Never thought I would say this to a ehm, "Teen pop-sensation" em but, I have to do this. Lady Artemis, you may proceed.
Artemis- mmmmmmmm mmm mm!!
Hannah- Why do you have her-
Artemis- MMMMMM!!!
Hannah- Sorry, Lady Artemis wrapped up?
Robby- That is super cruel!!! And why are you calling her, "Lady Artemis?"
Mr. Aplegusse- Lady Artemis is Goddess of the Wilderness of coarse. Don't you pay attention in class, my dears?
Lilly- I'm usually asleep in that class.
Artemis- MMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!
Lilly- But I'll try to not fall asleep again, Lady Artemis, Ma'am.
Hannah- How could you be so cruel and wrap a Goddess in chains?
Mr. Aplegusse- Well, for one, tis celestial bronze. This bronze material cannot be broken out of even by the Gods and Goddess' with their great powers. And two, for I did not wrap her up. My Apples of Doom did.
Hannah- Apples of Doom?
Mr. Aplegusse- Yes, I did say Apples of Doom. Isn't that right, My Lady?
Artemis- MMMM!
Robby- How could apples wrap up a Great and powerful Goddess?
Mr. Aplegusse- Tis only for me to know.*laughs evil laugh* *leaves, still laughing*
Lilly- Oh no, what should we do?
Artemis- M M MMM!!!
Hannah- How about unraveling the chains first from Lady Artemis?
-All help unravel chains-
Artemis- Oh how may I thank you for such kind hospitality?
Hannah- Help us stop Mr. Aplegusse and his Evil apples.
Lilly- But how would we do that? And, who is that wacky goon anyways?
To Be Continued.
I want to go on so bad, but it would be really long!!!
3 comments.
secretive_angel
07-11-2007, 12:22 AM
cool (I studied artemis in my class) and More
Xo_Disney_Princess_oX
07-11-2007, 12:22 AM
Quite strange.
smilez
07-11-2007, 12:25 AM
ya. it was made to be mysterious, strange, weird, and dramatic. well, thats what i plan it on being. :)
EmilyJordanOsment
07-11-2007, 12:27 AM
APPLES OF DOOM AAAAAAAAAH Mr.AppleBubbaDie i got a present for you ill kick u in a bigger shoe!*KICKS*BYE BYE APPLEBUBALABASTUPID!HAHA LOL Apple is weird and sounds stupid no effence the Artimis i looked too down and saw something didn't want to see with my lil sis.
smilez
07-11-2007, 12:28 AM
ooo. then i guesss ill delete the linky.
EmilyJordanOsment
07-11-2007, 12:35 AM
my sister is spyng on me so i kicked her butt out of the computer room.
smilez
07-11-2007, 12:44 AM
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Ch. 3- We attack Some Apples.
Artemis- *Turns into 14 year old form* First I needed to do that. I didn't feel like looking like thy Goddess Self.
Hannah- How did you do that?
Artemis- Well, I am a Goddess. I have the power to go from a 12 year old to a 15 foot tall Goddess.
Lilly- That is so cool!!
Artemis- Well, this Mr. Aplegusse is actually a son of Hades, the God of the Underworld. He tracks down Gods and Goddess' like me, and tries to kill thee by Wrapping thee up in celistial bronze chains. The most magic-effecient bronze there ever was. He also takes thee and lays you on the ground. Alas, you may stand up, unless thy would want to be killed faster.
Lilly- That's so harsh. Why would he do that?
Artemis- To try to get credit from his Father, Hades.
Robby- Now for one, I'm still in shock, because I didn't even know Gods and Goddess' exsited. And two, that goon is trying to chase us, because why?
Artemis- We are by far easy targets. I assure thee, you would not want to know why thee is trying to attack you.
Hannah- Why are we easy targets?
Lilly- Ya, is there any way we can defeat him?
Artemis- Yes, there is a way we can defeat Lord Vulvesis.
Lilly- I thought his name was Voovaluga-whatever.
Artemis- For that name is fake.
Hannah- Back to how we can defeat him?
Artemis- Well....
To Be continued...
3 comments porfavor.
smilez
07-11-2007, 12:46 AM
I'll post chapter 4 tomorrow guys.
For i have to go asleep.
Oh no why am I trying to sound so...proper? its scary...
xoxo Babii xoxo
07-11-2007, 10:37 AM
more!!
smilez
07-11-2007, 12:55 PM
2 more commentos.
smilez
07-11-2007, 02:37 PM
anybody?
miley_vanessal1816
07-11-2007, 02:57 PM
do more i want to kno more!!!!!!
smilez
07-11-2007, 03:02 PM
1 more comment, please.
Or maybe I'll just write it when I get home.
miley_vanessal1816
07-11-2007, 03:26 PM
u r really good at this stuff!!lol!!
smilez
07-11-2007, 03:40 PM
shankies. im going to write chapter 4 when i get to my house.
smilez
07-11-2007, 11:19 PM
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We make a plan
Artemis- *shifts from foot to foot* Well, what thee can do is listen.
Lilly- *iPod in ears* What? Green Day is jammin!!
Hannah- Lilly!!
Lilly- Okay okay!!
Artemis- As I was saying, I have been trying to hunt down Vulvesis for centuries. He has always gotten out of my way and always led me into a trap. But, I always could've gotten out easily. But, for some odd reason, he is striking back. A far from false rumor has been going around Olympus. The rumor states that he and the Underworld are falling to the other side, and joining the Titans. The Titans have been trying to take down Olympus for many centuries, but they have always failed. But they have gained in strength, and they are on the move. They will try to kill every single one of the Gods, and take over the Olympus empire. They will put the world in misery.
Robby- That sounds harsh.
Lilly- Ya. No pressure. None at all. *turns to Hannah* Oh boy.
Hannah- *uneasy* Don't worry. It's just a few evil immortal people...trying to torture human race.
Artemis- We will have to make up a plan. A swift plan, so that every single God and Goddess and Centaurs and other Mythical creatures on Olympus can go with it. We will be having pretty much every living thing on Olympus will be fighting.
Lilly- Don't forget mythical creatures!!
Artemis- Okay. You three will be fighting for your lives. This is the plan:
Each of you will be getting Celetial Bronze/Gold swords, because there will be mortals tricked into fighting. Celeestial Bronze will not hurt mortals. Okay, the plan is that, we go and sneak attack. But we will have to be swift, brave, quiet, and hard to defeat. We will be attacking the Mountain, at where Atlas, the Titan Lord of the Sky, is standing.
Lilly- He's the guy that holds the sky, right?
Artemis- Yes my dear. Atlas was once a good man. But Atlas has been tricked by many of the Titans, and now he is under their curse. He has joined the Titans.
Hannah- That's very assuring.
Jackson- *walks in with his girlfriend* What'd we miss?
Robby- Oh nothing. Except that the world could come to an end in about a couple of years. Or months. And that this Powerful Woman right here is a Goddess.
Artemis- Goddess of the Wilderness. I am Artemis. Nice to meet you, Jackson.
Jackson- How did you know my name?
Artemis- I am quite fond of you.
Hannah- By how?
Artemis- Your mother, *dramatic pause* was never your mother.
Jackson- What? That can't be true. She died two years ago.
Hannah- You're lying, aren't you. Can we even trust you?
Artemis- Yes, you must trust me, child. There is something I need to tell you.
Hannah- And what could that be? *rolls eyes*
Artemis- I am your mother.
x0sWiMmEr4LiFe0x
07-11-2007, 11:23 PM
whoa.confusing much?
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