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HannahMandMileyCFan32406
07-08-2007, 02:54 AM
Chapter 1 -



Charcters-
Miley Stewart - 28 had Alyssa at the age o 15 father is Jake Ryan.Lives with Lily.
Alyssa Stewart - 13, likes Tyler Oken,best friends with Tyler and Emily. Dosen't know her dad is Jake Ryan. Has Brown wavy hair and emrald green eyes.Medium height.
Jackson Stewart - 30, Miley's Older Brother married to a girl named Marissa. Son is Jorden.Lives next door to Miley and Lily
Jorden Stewart- 13, Likes Emily Trescott, Dad is Jackson,cousin is Alyssa,Best friends with Tyler,Emily, and Alyssa.dosen't know jake ryan is uncle.Has blonde spike hair and Blue eyes.Short.(Sorry Jorden)
Lily Trescott- 28 had Emily at 15 father is unknon,lives with Miley.
Emily Trescot- 13,likes Jorden, Best Friends with Tyler,Jorden,and Alyssa.Dosen't know who her father is.Has Long Blonde hairr and navy blue eyes.Medium.
Oliver Oken- 28,married to Marissa, Father of Tyler, Lives down the street from Miley and Lily.
Marissa Oken- 29, married to Oliver,Mother of Tyler.
Tyler Oken - 13, Likes Alyssa,Bestfriends with Alyssa , Tyler, and Emily. Has medium brown hair, brown eyes, medium.
inally done with descriptions on with the story.XD

Chapter 1- The beginning.
" Alyssa Leslie Stewart and Emily Jordan Trescott get your buts up" Miley Stewart yelled from down stairs..
Both girls groaned( they share a room).
" Great another wnderful day at Seaview Middle" Emily groaned/said starcastically
" Oh come on you know you wanna see Jorden" Alyssa cooed. Emily threw a pillow at Alyssa.
" I don't like him for th last time" Emily exclaimed
"Sure you don't" Alyssa said playfully.
" I'll like Jorden when you like Tyler" Emily said in a deal tone.
Alyssa rolled her eyes and they got ready for school
School
" Hey Guys" Alyssa and Emily said to Tyler and Jorden when they got to their.
"Hey" They replied back.
"Guess what?!" Jorden said excitedly.
" Tyler actualy aced a test" Alyssa said starcastically.
" "actualy idi...hey!" Tyler said.
"No...My dad said thats for my birthday that some famous dude is coming" Jorden said.
" as in who" Emily asked.
" I don't know all i know is that there somthing big about him and Alyssa and I's family" Jorden replied back.
" Hmm... I wonder." Alyssa said.
" I thinking too" Tyler said.
Alyssa put her hand on his shoulder and said," Don't hurrt your self"
" I won't" Tyler said stupidly and realized what she said," Hey" He exclaimed. Alyssa just smile.
" You can be evil you know that" Tyler asked her.
" I know and thats why you love me" Alyssa said Jokingly.
"yeah" Tyler said seriously.
"awkward" They said toghther.
Ok sorry pretty short open for suggestion. I'll continue when i get 2 reviews .

secretive_angel
07-08-2007, 03:02 AM
I love it so far!

secretive_angel
07-09-2007, 01:26 AM
r u going to write more on it or not if so yay if not ok just bcuz i wanna see what happens bcuz it is really goood and sorry for double posting

HannahMandMileyCFan32406
07-09-2007, 03:06 AM
Chapter 2 - She..he..my..what..huh
Homeroom
" Hello class we are proudly to have the famous Cody Burk(random name) in our class" Mr.Galleger annouced.
"Thanks Mr.G" Cody Said," I just want" I want to just let you know I wanna be just like all of you" Cody said.
"Really" Tyler asked stupidly.
"well try" Cody said
Tyler just scoffed.
Alyssa leaned over to Tyler.
" Don't worry Ty he was joking" Alyssa told hi.
" WellLike I was saying it might be hard for me since I was Teens Newz magzine hottie of the year" Cody said cockily.
" I framed the cover" Emily said dreamily.
"Me too" Cody said
" I hung it my bathroom" Emily added
" Me too" Cody said again
" Wow we some much in common we both love you" Emily said.
" Ok Mr.Burk you can take a seat behind Mr.stewart" Mr.Gallger pointing to where Jordan is sitting.
"Ok on wih annoucments 70's dance is coming up in two weeks ge your dates befor it's too late and English test tomrrow" Mr.Galleger annoucedRing.Ring.
" Your excuse" he said.
" Hey Alyssa,right" Cody said coming up to Alyssa.
" Yes,how do you know my name" She asked.
" Jorden told me" he answered. Alyssa shot daggers att Jorden who was watting for her.He gulped.
"Oh" Alyssa said "what do you want" She asked.
" seeing if you want to go to the dance." Cody asked.
" umm. I'm going with someone" alyssa said quickly.
"Really who"Cody asked.
" Rex" Alyssa said(Dex's son)
"Oh ok,Bye"Cody said Leaving.
" So how are you gonna get Rex to ask you to the dance" Jorden asked her.
She took a breath like she was gonna say her answer." I don't know" she said

3 Reviews and I will continue

LotsaBigHearts
07-09-2007, 08:34 AM
that's really good!!
Awesome job!

secretive_angel
07-09-2007, 12:14 PM
awesome job and yay u wrote more

HannahMandMileyCFan32406
07-09-2007, 02:39 PM
ok i'll do another chapter after 1 more person comments

destiny hope cyrus fan
07-09-2007, 03:31 PM
Ummmm More!!!

HannahMandMileyCFan32406
07-09-2007, 03:35 PM
Chapter 3
" Come on Lyssa befor were late for Teen E! News" Jorden said guiding Alyssa out of the class room
" Ok" Aylssa said. And meet up with evryone.and headed to her and Emily's.
Alyssa's and Emily's House.
" Hey Mom,School great, be upstairs." Alyssa and Emily said in a usion and ran up stairs with Jorden and Tyler in Tow.
" Girls" Lily and Miley said in a usion
" Yes " they said back.
" We were wondering if you can clean out the attic tonight and tomrrow"Miley asked. The girls groaned.
" We'll pay you twenty each." Lily said back.
Alyssa and eily looked at each other." Ok" they replied and ran upstairs and in their room where Jorden and Tyler were in there with the tv on and Tenn E! news just staring
-TV-
"HEllo I'm Brian Winters Jr. Today we will find out Old tv Actor Jake Ryans Big secret, Jesse Mccartney where abouts, and Brittney Spears's 23rd baby" Brian said
And the theme came on.
-With the gang-
"Wow. I can' beilve Brittney had her 23rd baby" jorden said.
" Yeah, You know ,Alyssa, you look alot like Jake Ryan" Emily said
" Yeah, must be coincendence(sp)" Alyssa said
-Tv-
" Hello again just a few days ago Jake Ryan came out a few days ago that his real name isn't Jake that it is Leslie, he is now in hidding do to embarrasment, hopefully he comes back soon."Brian said and other news came on.
-Gang-
" Wow, thats Ironic Alyssa look alot like Jake Ryan and her middle name is her is his first name"Tyler stated.
" Yeah...well Emly and I better go work on the attic" Alyssa said rolling of her bed.
" Ok Later" Jorden and Tyler said and left.
" Ready" Alyssa asked.
"Ready" Mariah Replied.
Attic.
" Ok So where should we start?" Emily asked.
"How about go back in history" Alyssa suggested
"How?" Emily asked.
" Read old teen mags" Alyssa said pointing to the boxed marked magizines.They started reading the mags until...
"Oh my god...Alyssa you might want to read this" Emily said handing Alyssa the Magizine.

" I Can't beilve this..." Alyssa said ater reading the Article.
Cliffy finally..muhahaha

3 Comments i'll continue

secretive_angel
07-09-2007, 03:38 PM
more I LOVE it

elle
07-09-2007, 09:38 PM
omg is it about miley??!

HannahMandMileyCFan32406
07-11-2007, 02:47 AM
one more comment then i will update!!!! and there will be a emily actin like lily moment.

HannahMandMileyCFan32406
07-13-2007, 12:58 AM
I'll Just update..


Chapter 4 (Wow already!) Not the title)
" Omg I can't beilve my mom's Hannah Montna,we need to go talk to her about" Alyssa said getting up and grabbing Emily hand and running downstairs.
"Mom whats this about you being-" Alyssa said but stop short seeing Jake Ryan and Emily screaming and fainting.
" Hold on" Alyssa said getting on the loor by Emily." Wakey WAkey Emily"Alyssa cooed and shook Emily.But Emily didn't wake. Alyssa sighed." Omg is that Cody Burke in our house!" Alyssa shouted and backed up all the sudden Emily shoot up.
" Cody WHere!' She said looking around.
" Welcome back to earth." Alyssa said.
Emily stuck her tounge at Alyssa and Alyssa stuck back.
" Alyssa ,Emily this my old friend Jake Ryan." MIley said pointing Jake
" H" Alyssa siad.
"Oh yeah Lyssa I was suppose to deliver a message to you from Rex" Emily said.
" Ok,well lets go up to my room and you can tell me what you have to tell me" Alyssa said.
" Ok" Emily said.
" Bye Jake nice meeting you." Alyssa said.
" Yeah bye" Emily said dreamily.
" Sorry my friend can get very starstruck..dang flabit now I have deal with it evryday" Alyssa said and ran upstairs catching up.
Their Room.
"So what did Rex want you to tell me" Alyssa asked
" Oh to see if you wanted to go to the dance with him. I guess he was scarred to ask you himself" Emily told him.
" Tell him yes" Alyssa said.
"Really your not gonna wit for tyler to ask you" Emily asked Alyssa glared at her.
" Ok look Cody asked me and I told I was already going with Rex so thats why" Alyssa told her
"Oh..you said no" Emily Exclaimed.
"yes..now can we talk about another subject" Alyssa asked.
"Ok..Ok" Emily said.
" Alyssa someone's at the door for you" Miley shouted up the stairs.
" Coming!" She shouted . And left the room and down the stairs. and Saw Cody at the door.
" What the heck are you doing here' Alyssa asked Cody.
" Came here to see you" Cody said cockily/sweetly
" I have two Questions ,one,how did you ind my house and two,why are you here seriously." LAyssa asked
" Jorden and to see i you still want to go to the dance." He said.
" I'm gonna kill that boy." Alyssa exclaimed.
" You can't kill him." Mily shouted.
"aww man."Alyssa said, " Ok Cody Like I said early I'm going with Rex sorry Buh bye." alyssa said and pushed Cody out the door and closed and ran back upstairs.

secretive_angel
07-13-2007, 02:24 AM
more

LotsaBigHearts
07-13-2007, 08:55 AM
that's good, but jakes the dad right??

HannahMandMileyCFan32406
07-13-2007, 05:49 PM
that's good, but jakes the dad right??

Yes he is. I'll try to update. But this alson a fanfic or another website and this last chapter wrote there so yeah.

HannahMandMileyCFan32406
07-14-2007, 03:47 AM
Chapeter 5-
" Alyssa Stewart" The Drama teacher called
Alyssa walke up started playing her guitar and then started to sing:

Hello world, this is me, life should be¡­ fun for everyone
Every now and then I'm insecure, let me show you life can be so pure
Seize the day wear a big happy smile on your face
In every life a little rain will fall, that won't change my attitude at all
You are you, I am me, we'll be free
Refrain:
Hello world, this is me, life should be mm mm yeah, fun for everyone
Hello world come and see, life should be¡­ fun for everyone
Life is easy if you wear a smile, just be yourself don't ever change your style
I like you, You like me, let's have fun, be happy, look into my eyes and tell me straight
For you I'll make the whole world wait, let me know, if it's so, let it show
Refrain
Come on baby, don't be afraid. Come on baby it's not too late
Say you do, won't you open up the door and let me in? Dee dee dee yeah
Dee dee dee yeah yeah yeah open up the door, for me yeah yeah yeah
Mm mm yeah
Hello world this is me, life should be mm mm yeah fun for everyone
Hello world come and see life should be¡­ fun for everyone
Hello world this is me, life should be, fun for you just fun for me yeah, fun
For everyone¡­ fun for everyone.
Everyone in the room started clapping.
"Congrats your in" Drama teacher said handin Alyssa all the nfo.
At Home
"Alyssa how did it go" Emily said rushing down the stairs.
"I'm in" Alyssa said and both girls squaled.
"I guess the audtion went well"Miley said entering the kitchen.
"Yup" Alyssa said
"Well I'm going to doctor and Jake out so will you girl be okay alone." Miley said
" Yup" the girls said in a usion.
After goodbyes Miley left.
"Ok play what did" Emily said
Alyssa got her guitar and sang for Emily.
"Miley why are you singing" Jake said coming in. Both girl turn around and gasped who they saw wh was with jake----------------

LotsaBigHearts
07-14-2007, 08:57 AM
oh gosh, this is really good..
have she figured out that's her dad??

Hannah+Jake
07-14-2007, 12:53 PM
more

LotsaBigHearts
07-14-2007, 01:21 PM
what website is this on??
fanfiction.net??

secretive_angel
07-14-2007, 01:39 PM
more

HannahMandMileyCFan32406
07-16-2007, 09:05 PM
yup fanfiction.net and idk i still have to update agai and i'm blank.

LotsaBigHearts
07-16-2007, 09:08 PM
^ lol, hope she wrote more